from q c:
- Turtle's easy
- 00:03:255 (1) - this sharper angle slider doesn't appear anywhere else in the story, maybe change shape?
Normal, hard looks good
- 00:13:088 (3,4) - overlap more with 2 a little more, i think it looks a little better that way
- 00:28:922 (3) - why is 3 stacked with 4? it should continue like 1 and 2
- 01:41:922 (1) - should be a slider, extended to the "tai" part, its a a beat you should emphasize with some sort of feed back, (slider tail in this case)
- 01:44:588 (1) - as well