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  • Turtle's easy
  1. 00:03:255 (1) - this sharper angle slider doesn't appear anywhere else in the story, maybe change shape?
    Normal, hard looks good

    Real's insane
  2. 00:13:088 (3,4) - overlap more with 2 a little more, i think it looks a little better that way
  3. 00:28:922 (3) - why is 3 stacked with 4? it should continue like 1 and 2
  4. 01:41:922 (1) - should be a slider, extended to the "tai" part, its a a beat you should emphasize with some sort of feed back, (slider tail in this case)
  5. 01:44:588 (1) - as well
posted

[Jenn] wrote:

Real's insane
  1. 00:13:088 (3,4) - overlap more with 2 a little more, i think it looks a little better that way i don't know what you meant there, this pattern is arranged this way because 1 and 3 follow the same vocals, but i also stack 3's tail and 4 because they're the same kicks while 5 is on a stronger sound, so the pause gives more emphasis on 5
  2. 00:28:922 (3) - why is 3 stacked with 4? it should continue like 1 and 2 it's stacked on 4 because it's a stronger sound than 1 and 2 which calls for a jump here, but since 3 and 4 are pretty similar due to vocals, i chose to stack them
  3. 01:41:922 (1) - should be a slider, extended to the "tai" part, its a a beat you should emphasize with some sort of feed back, (slider tail in this case) not in this case, since it's a really slow part i chose to only emphasize the synth(i think?) sounds, if i were to follow the vocals then it wouldn't show how different this section is
  4. 01:44:588 (1) - as well same reasoning
no fixes, but thank you for the input!
posted

- Frontier - wrote:

#modreqs
Tick out widescreen support on every diffs your map has no sb.
GL~
Not necessary as it won't hurt the map, no need to fix this

Also @[Jenn] fixed that, I didn't like the slider shape anyway

Thanks for modding!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 101755
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16588
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yuima-ru*World
TitleUnicode:ゆいまーる☆わーるど
Artist:Ayase Rie
ArtistUnicode:綾瀬 理恵
Creator:Linada
Version:Turtle's Easy
Source:はいたい七葉
Tags:full haitai nanafa yuimaru _DT3 yaleufeu Kyuukai Akitoshi Corinn Realazy
BeatmapID:1205778
BeatmapSetID:555132

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999998
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"haitai.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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posted
random mod passing by, from modreqs xd
01:48:588 (1) - why is this different spacing? maybe change it to same spacing? or bigger spacing? to emphasize the finishes on that note
01:49:588 (6,7,8,9,1) - imo, use the same ds with 01:48:256 (5,6,7,8,1) - will be better here, since both of them have same rhythm, i dont see why they should be space differently :P
00:21:588 (2,3,4,5,1) - , 01:04:255 (2,3,4,5,1) - imo, the different spacing for (1) is kinda triggering, maybe use same adjust it to looks the same? xd
00:58:922 (3,1) - 00:16:255 (2,1) - 1 of them u use stack and of them u spaced it out, maybe use the same pattern only? :roll: , i like stack more tho (my opinion :P)
01:41:255 (1) - the end of this slider feels clickable, maybe use the combination of slider + circle here? ;)
01:47:755 (3) - imo, bigger spacing works better here, since the beat was quite strong, need more emphasization for it :P
01:35:255 (1) - the stack on the slider tail looks off :P
00:49:255 (3,4) - the blanket can be improve for a bit here xD


good luck with the mapset , it looks good :D
posted

walaowey wrote:

random mod passing by, from modreqs xd
01:48:588 (1) - why is this different spacing? maybe change it to same spacing? or bigger spacing? to emphasize the finishes on that note
01:49:588 (6,7,8,9,1) - imo, use the same ds with 01:48:256 (5,6,7,8,1) - will be better here, since both of them have same rhythm, i dont see why they should be space differently :P
00:21:588 (2,3,4,5,1) - , 01:04:255 (2,3,4,5,1) - imo, the different spacing for (1) is kinda triggering, maybe use same adjust it to looks the same? xd
00:58:922 (3,1) - 00:16:255 (2,1) - 1 of them u use stack and of them u spaced it out, maybe use the same pattern only? :roll: , i like stack more tho (my opinion :P)
01:41:255 (1) - the end of this slider feels clickable, maybe use the combination of slider + circle here? ;)i could but i feel that snapping the slider 1/4 or 1/2 before the actual beat sound quite weird so i prefer let it that way
01:47:755 (3) - imo, bigger spacing works better here, since the beat was quite strong, need more emphasization for it :P
01:35:255 (1) - the stack on the slider tail looks off :P
00:49:255 (3,4) - the blanket can be improve for a bit here xD


good luck with the mapset , it looks good :D
fixed all except the red one ! thanks for the mod !!!
posted
Small little mod
Tho idk if you meant to do any of it, or if you meant to do it all.
The map is perfect btw, imma just point out streams, cuz that is what bugged me.
00:21:588 (2,3,4,5,1) - Why is 1 just a tad bit more spaced out than the rest of the stream? I mean, it wont really make a difference, its just me lol.
00:33:588 (6,7,8,9,1) - Same with this one.
01:04:255 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:46:922 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think this one was more intentional, just tell me if it was.
All I saw were the streams, how the 1 was more farther spaced than the rest, I don't know if you did it intentionally, or if it was by accident, and I'm sorry if I wasted your time with this mod

This is the haitai map that needs to be ranked btw.
posted

Bacwux wrote:

Small little mod
Tho idk if you meant to do any of it, or if you meant to do it all.
The map is perfect btw, imma just point out streams, cuz that is what bugged me.
00:21:588 (2,3,4,5,1) - Why is 1 just a tad bit more spaced out than the rest of the stream? I mean, it wont really make a difference, its just me lol.
00:33:588 (6,7,8,9,1) - Same with this one.
01:04:255 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:46:922 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think this one was more intentional, just tell me if it was.
All I saw were the streams, how the 1 was more farther spaced than the rest, I don't know if you did it intentionally, or if it was by accident, and I'm sorry if I wasted your time with this mod yeah they were all intentionnal, but i made them more obvious, it's to emphasize the next beat properly :D

This is the haitai map that needs to be ranked btw.
still thanks for the check :D
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HI! im here because i want kudos :vvvvv (?)

seriously, im here since you requested mods in #modreqs, so i will try to see if i can help you with your map!
lets see what you have:

Turtle Easy:

1. 00:24:755 (1) - This spinner is too short for just an easy, remember that the easy diff is for the newbies, and knowing the newbies, they dont really spin fast enough. In this part, i recommend stretching the spinner until 00:26:588.

2. 01:07:422 (1) - same as #1, stretch it up until 01:09:255.

3. 01:39:255 (1) - same as #1 again, stretch it until 01:41:255 -

4. 01:41:922 (1,2,3) - this objects should have an equal spacing, since the spacing at 01:43:255 (2,3) is different that the spacing at 01:41:922 (1,2)


Kyuukai Normal:

1. 01:47:755 (3,4,5,6) - move circle "4" to x:160-y:92 (or a similar location), it will spice up the normal, and it will make a triangle with the sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8266429


Akitoshi Hard:

1. Looks good for me :o


Real Insane:

1. why not making 00:45:922 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:28:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) look like 02:00:588 (1,2,3,4,5)? im saying this because 02:00:588 (1,2,3,4,5) sounds and flows better that the other two parts.


MemeTai:

1. 00:21:588 (2,3,4,5,1) - the circles should go a bit down (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8266574) it could make it flow better? uwu

2. 01:04:255 (2,3,4,5,1) - same reason as #1

I think this mod will not help at all, but i hope it does x.x
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Joe Castle wrote:

Real Insane:
1. why not making 00:45:922 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:28:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) look like 02:00:588 (1,2,3,4,5)? im saying this because 02:00:588 (1,2,3,4,5) sounds and flows better that the other two parts. flow is pretty much similar in all 3 patterns since it's pretty much circular flow, i wanna have some variety in rhythms especially when the end of the second chorus is different
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Joe Castle wrote:

HI! im here because i want kudos :vvvvv (?)

MemeTai:

1. 00:21:588 (2,3,4,5,1) - the circles should go a bit down (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8266574) it could make it flow better? uwu

2. 01:04:255 (2,3,4,5,1) - same reason as #1
thoses 2 last circles are placed a bit away to emphasize the new sections :*


I think this mod will not help at all, but i hope it does x.x it's ok :p
thanks for the mod !
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Haitai

Everything looks perfect with this mapset. I love the hitsounds on each difficulty but Akitoshi's Hard wins it for me.



[Real's Insane]
01:30:255 (2) - I think moving this to X:132 Y:200 [Grid Level 4] will match with the distance on 00:47:588 (2).
02:02:255 (2) - Same with this except move it to X:260 Y:140 [Grid Level 4].
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hello, quick mod

00:03:922 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if there's a change in the song, though if there's none, consider keeping it consistent similar to the previous objects

00:08:588 (1,2) - This is too dense, I'd say. You're following the vocals so, consider making the distance smaller since there isn't any huge changes to the vocals.

small thing to point out, 00:10:255 (2) - has vocals in middle of it

00:45:588 (6,7,8,9,1) - overlaps 00:44:755 (2)

01:01:588 (4) - not sure what this is following and why it's a circle

01:28:255 (6,7,8,9,1) - overlaps 01:28:922 (3) -


gl!
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Flake wrote:

hello, quick mod

00:03:922 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if there's a change in the song, though if there's none, consider keeping it consistent similar to the previous objects but 00:04:255 (3,4) - is getting higher pitch

00:08:588 (1,2) - This is too dense, I'd say. You're following the vocals so, consider making the distance smaller since there isn't any huge changes to the vocals. and what about the 2 super strong beats behind ? sure i'm following mainly vocal but it isn't a reason to ignore beats

small thing to point out, 00:10:255 (2) - has vocals in middle of it done on purpose to emphasize 00:10:588 (1,2,3) - better

00:45:588 (6,7,8,9,1) - overlaps 00:44:755 (2) well it's not really visible since 2 has already faded away

01:01:588 (4) - not sure what this is following and why it's a circle clap ?

01:28:255 (6,7,8,9,1) - overlaps 01:28:922 (3) - fixed


gl!
thanks for mod !
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-BlastTheKidd- wrote:

01:30:255 (2) - I think moving this to X:132 Y:200 [Grid Level 4] will match with the distance on 00:47:588 (2).
02:02:255 (2) - Same with this except move it to X:260 Y:140 [Grid Level 4].
they're really not that noticeable though... especially the second one since you have to take in account that the kiai has 1.2x sv so the DS values you may see aren't the same as the other kiais

thanks for looking though
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Heyo! In game chat lolol.

TBH everything looks fine, Have a kudos star! :)

HYPERGOD APPROVES!
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aaa

[Haitai]
  1. Essaye de placer un p'tit spinner quelque part ?
  2. 00:10:255 (2) - Explique moi pourquoi avoir utilisé du 1/4 ici alors que le "mhh" est sur le tick rouge.
  3. 00:14:255 (3,4,5) - Ce random pattern linéaire ici est vraiment très moche car 1. il se fond pas visuellement avec le reste de la map; 2. Il est cloîtré en haut à droite de l'écran chevauchant d'autres notes comme 00:14:922 (6) - et étant empilé sur d'autres notes. Si j'étais claustrophobe, je serais en panique tellement l'ensemble de ce pattern est étroit.
  4. 01:14:922 (5,6,7,1) - XDDD juste c'est quoi ça ? Ce jump 1/4 est juste un peu trop soudain et surtout pas vraiment justifié je trouve. Surtout que tu n'utilises ce pattern que 2 fois dans la map et la première fois qu'il arrive c'est à plus de 50% de la map. Vraiment, je te conseil fortement de virer ça et de faire un pattern plus évident à jouer et moins inattendu/déconcertant.
  5. 01:25:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Bien évidemment pareil ici.
  6. 01:56:922 (3) - Stack le avec 01:57:588 (5) - , ça me t r i g g e r un peu sinon xp.


[Real's Insane]
  1. Essaye de placer un p'tit spinner quelque part ?
  2. 00:28:755 (2,3) - Jump un peu inattendu et surtout je trouve carrément injustifié ici.
  3. C'est quand même dommage que tu te focus trop sur les vocals alors que tu pourrais faire des trucs cool en suivant aussi les drums comme pour 00:52:588 - .


[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:03:255 (3) - NC
  2. 00:04:422 (1) - delete NC
  3. 00:04:922 (2) - NC
  4. 00:32:255 (3) - Having a kick slider here is not a good idea since you are ignoring all the similar 1/4 that are following (00:33:422 - 00:34:755 - etc).
  5. 01:14:922 (3) - ^
  6. 01:57:588 (3) - ^


[Kyuukai's Normal]
  1. Pk t'es le seul hipster à utiliser des couleurs différentes pour tes combos ?
  2. Essaye de placer un p'tit spinner quelque part ?
  3. 00:06:922 (2,3,4,5) - Pour éviter d'avoir des 1/1 ultra répétitifs et ennuyants, pour ne mapperais-tu pas le TUM-TUM d'arrière plan ? (00:07:088 - 00:07:422 - ). Ça donnerait plus de variété à tes patterns. Bien sûr ça vaut sur toute la map.
  4. 00:49:755 - ^
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Kurai wrote:

[Kyuukai's Normal]
  1. Pk t'es le seul hipster à utiliser des couleurs différentes pour tes combos ?
  2. Essaye de placer un p'tit spinner quelque part ?
  3. 00:06:922 (2,3,4,5) - Pour éviter d'avoir des 1/1 ultra répétitifs et ennuyants, pour ne mapperais-tu pas le TUM-TUM d'arrière plan ? (00:07:088 - 00:07:422 - ). Ça donnerait plus de variété à tes patterns. Bien sûr ça vaut sur toute la map.
  4. 00:49:755 - ^
g toufix

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posted

Kurai wrote:

[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:03:255 (3) - NC
  2. 00:04:422 (1) - delete NC actually i want to keep as this, since strong cymbals starts right here
  3. 00:04:922 (2) - NC yh^
  4. 00:32:255 (3) - Having a kick slider here is not a good idea since you are ignoring all the similar 1/4 that are following (00:33:422 - 00:34:755 - etc).
  5. 01:14:922 (3) - ^
  6. 01:57:588 (3) - ^
no comment = applied, thank you!

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215,37,113755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,79,113922,6,0,P|346:65|372:66,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,128,114422,2,0,B|168:132|168:132|126:121|126:121|57:125,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,194,114922,2,0,P|18:234|27:267,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,317,115255,6,0,L|254:310,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,303,115755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,227,115922,2,0,P|255:163|297:91,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,169,116422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,83,116588,6,0,L|456:80,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,100,117088,2,0,P|234:114|138:83,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,31,117588,2,0,P|63:73|61:103,1,70
75,200,117922,6,0,L|68:278,1,70,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,332,118255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,254,118422,2,0,B|251:249|251:249|300:269|300:269|362:261,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,189,118922,2,0,P|388:149|386:113,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,116,119255,6,0,P|495:156|497:192,1,70,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,266,119588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,264,119755,2,0,P|283:252|198:287,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,348,120255,2,0,L|78:345,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,262,120588,6,0,P|0:223|5:189,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,165,120922,2,0,P|96:188|81:219,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,147,121255,2,0,P|174:97|79:91,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,194,121755,6,0,P|72:207|125:163,1,140,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,58,122255,1,12,0:0:0:0:
296,124,122422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,124,122505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,124,122588,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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Kurai wrote:

aaa

[Haitai]
  1. Essaye de placer un p'tit spinner quelque part ? j'avais déja tenté et le meilleur endroit pour en mettre un c'est ici 01:41:255 (1) - mais c'est beaucoup trop court, et les ninja spinners c'est cancer, en plus l'auto arrive a peine a faire 1000 dessus
  2. 00:10:255 (2) - Explique moi pourquoi avoir utilisé du 1/4 ici alors que le "mhh" est sur le tick rouge. j'ai fait ça pour emphasize 00:10:588 (1,2,3) -
  3. 00:14:255 (3,4,5) - Ce random pattern linéaire ici est vraiment très moche car 1. il se fond pas visuellement avec le reste de la map; 2. Il est cloîtré en haut à droite de l'écran chevauchant d'autres notes comme 00:14:922 (6) - et étant empilé sur d'autres notes. Si j'étais claustrophobe, je serais en panique tellement l'ensemble de ce pattern est étroit. fixééee
  4. 01:14:922 (5,6,7,1) - XDDD juste c'est quoi ça ? Ce jump 1/4 est juste un peu trop soudain et surtout pas vraiment justifié je trouve. Surtout que tu n'utilises ce pattern que 2 fois dans la map et la première fois qu'il arrive c'est à plus de 50% de la map. Vraiment, je te conseil fortement de virer ça et de faire un pattern plus évident à jouer et moins inattendu/déconcertant. fixaté aussi
  5. 01:25:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Bien évidemment pareil ici.
  6. 01:56:922 (3) - Stack le avec 01:57:588 (5) - , ça me t r i g g e r un peu sinon xp. fixd
edit: j'ai fais des petit minor changes, genre
00:24:588 (1) - 01:07:255 (1) - ces part, ça flow mieux
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Kurai wrote:

[Real's Insane]
  1. Essaye de placer un p'tit spinner quelque part ? euh j'aimerais bien mais y'a pas d'endroit où le mettre imo
  2. 00:28:755 (2,3) - Jump un peu inattendu et surtout je trouve carrément injustifié ici. retiré
  3. C'est quand même dommage que tu te focus trop sur les vocals alors que tu pourrais faire des trucs cool en suivant aussi les drums comme pour 00:52:588 - .je suis pas forcément d'accord avec toi, je pense que t'es d'accord pour dire que les vocals sont ce qui ressortent le plus dans la musique, et je trouve ça plus naturel de les suivre avant tout, surtout pour une insane où je peux pas encore me permettre de faire de changer d'instrument à chaque cercle/slider ou de faire un spam de 1/2 sachant que j'ai déjà pas mal de 1/4 dans la map
https://real.s-ul.eu/Mebf8ZPk.osu
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