Test played this a few weeks ago and just couldn't resist from modding it.
[General]*Add Kirby's name to the tags on all difficulties.
[Timing]*I disagree with Lily about the offset;
*Still not sure about the timing... It almost feels like one uninherited section would work (but possibly with a -5), but I'll need to test more.
[Storyboard]*I expected another w-gradient pulse here like at 18361.
*Same as above for 48740.
*w-thai seems to disappear from 79500 to 79880. Is this intended, or is it a layering issue?
*Same as above for 84816 to 85562.
*s-1.jpg: Why not fade this out at 116701 instead of 117080?
*k-gradient.png doesn't seem to be changing color like it's supposed to in Kirby's diff...
[Easy]*I suggest using the largest circle size for this diff.
*It's a bit strange to have the OD higher than the AR (especially on an Easy); I suggest lowering the OD by one tick.
00:11:905 (4,5,1) - spacing (nazi)
00:15:702 (1,2) - How about switching the order of these so that 00:14:943 (4,1) doesn't look like 1/2 notes
00:26:335 (3,1,2) - spacing
00:57:095 (4) - off-center (nazi)
01:04:690 (2,4) - might as well try and center these as well under the top row of notes
01:29:359 (1,2) - spacing (they look more like 1/2 notes than 1/1)
01:38:663 (3,4,5) - This blue-tick pattern threw me off; perhaps change it to a single repeating slider?
01:48:726 (4) - I think this 5-note pattern would look nicer if you moved this note down a bit, but that's just my two cents :p
02:10:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to keep the 1/2 spacing more consistent, especially on an Easy
02:21:785 (3,1,2) - spacing
[Normal]*Like Lily said: You have unsnapped notes.
00:32:221 (4) - Sounds strange ending on the blue tick.. maybe change this to two notes like
http://puu.sh/3w1J or even
http://puu.sh/3w1L00:35:259 (4) - ^ (and other similar sliders that follow the same pattern after this)
00:43:044 (3) - Expected this to be a new combo and unstacked from 1/2
00:50:639 (3) - Could be a bit more symmetrical (nazi)
00:53:677 (3) - ^
01:04:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like Lily said, this rhythm is a bit confusing (especially if you're sightreading the song for the first time). If you want to keep the blue tick notes, then at least use some sliders!
01:25:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, the blue ticks notes are a bit confusing.
01:31:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you used sliders or something to show the rhythm for 01:25:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), then these notes would be a bit more intuitive.
01:37:713 (1) - Threw me off because I thought it was only 1/2 after the last note. How about unstacking and placing somewhere else?
01:47:017 (1,2) - Stacking threw me off again
02:02:798 (3,4) - These touch each other but 02:05:836 (4,5) don't.
02:05:836 (4,5,6,7) - Also, this spacing is really inconsistent
02:08:494 (2,3) - Try spacing these a bit closer (or overlap them)
02:10:963 (1,2,3,4) - Again, the blue ticks are confusing (and the spacing between 3 and 4 is too large)
02:14:190 (1,2,3) - I didn't expect these to be stacked under (6).
02:33:178 (2,3) - Would look nicer if it was something like this:
http://puu.sh/3w3F02:36:216 (2,3) - ^ but it's fine if you don't change them, since the above pattern is consistent with this one
[Hard]*Again, I don't see why the OD is higher than the AR, especially since this is only a Hard and not an Insane. Thus, lower the OD by one tick (and possibly raise the drain 1 tick but that's up to you).
*This difficulty is fine overall, but I think that some of the spacings could be a bit more consistent (not talking about the jumps; they're fine).
[KIRBY Mix]01:27:460 (1,2,3,4) - If you want these to by symmetrical about the x-axis with 01:27:460 (1,2,3,4), then move this row up one grid.
01:33:535 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:28:431 (7) - Expected two more repeats since the vocals end on the blue tick
*02:34:887 - Expected a note here after the stream
July 23 EDIT: Done modding (except for the timing).
