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Like maps and song, star^^
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thank you star~! ^^
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:)
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thank you star~! :)
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star ;)
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thank you star! ;)
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> Muya

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Well

General
  1. Video file : Remove 2 audio tracks from this file and make full submit :
  2. Tags: use "spaces" between tags. Your tag "Lump_of_Sugar" works like 1 tag, it must be "Lump of Sugar". Fix it for all diffs. Also add "opening" to the tags in all diffs.
  3. Stack Leniency 2 is unrankable. Set Stack Leniency 4 at least.


Insane
00:31:836 (1) - *nazi* not stacked perfect with 00:30:825 (1)
00:32:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe in another direction? (1)-(2) reads bad
01:36:724 (1) - finish here sounds strange

Hard
00:56:106 (3) - clap sounds bad
00:58:128 (1,2,3) - add 3 finishes?
00:59:645 (1) - add finish to the start
01:15:825 (3) - add finish
01:23:915 (1) - not sure in this finish

Normal
00:21:050 (2) - add whistle?
00:29:645 (4) - finish sounds bad here. remove it?
00:52:904 (1) - remove finish
00:54:252 (1) - add finish instead of clap
also recheck you claps from here till 01:03:690. Rhythm is not constant
01:53:915 (1) - remove finish

Easy
AR+1
00:28:297 (7) - finish sounds bad here. remove it?
00:38:915 (1) - remove nc
00:41:612 (1) - ^
00:51:555 (6) - add finish + nc
00:52:567 (8) - add finish to the start instead of clap
01:02:342 (1) - add nc
01:11:443 (2,3,4,5) - you missed rhythm here again
01:22:567 (3,4,1) - spacing : It happened becauce you use 0.75x. AI says "spacing is fine", but it's not a true

01:25:263 (3) - add whistle to the end?
01:36:724 (3) - remove finish
01:37:398 (1) - add finish to the start
01:50:207 (5) - remove finish?

Pretty nice mapset without huge mistakes. Star!
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Aleks719 wrote:

Well

General
  1. Video file : Remove 2 audio tracks from this file and make full submit :
  2. Tags: use "spaces" between tags. Your tag "Lump_of_Sugar" works like 1 tag, it must be "Lump of Sugar". Fix it for all diffs. Also add "opening" to the tags in all diffs.
  3. Stack Leniency 2 is unrankable. Set Stack Leniency 4 at least.


Insane
00:31:836 (1) - *nazi* not stacked perfect with 00:30:825 (1)
00:32:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe in another direction? (1)-(2) reads bad
01:36:724 (1) - finish here sounds strange

Hard
00:56:106 (3) - clap sounds bad
00:58:128 (1,2,3) - add 3 finishes?
00:59:645 (1) - add finish to the start
01:15:825 (3) - add finish
01:23:915 (1) - not sure in this finish

Normal
00:21:050 (2) - add whistle?
00:29:645 (4) - finish sounds bad here. remove it?
00:52:904 (1) - remove finish
00:54:252 (1) - add finish instead of clap
also recheck you claps from here till 01:03:690. Rhythm is not constant
01:53:915 (1) - remove finish

Easy
AR+1
00:28:297 (7) - finish sounds bad here. remove it?
00:38:915 (1) - remove nc
00:41:612 (1) - ^
00:51:555 (6) - add finish + nc
00:52:567 (8) - add finish to the start instead of clap
01:02:342 (1) - add nc
01:11:443 (2,3,4,5) - you missed rhythm here again
01:22:567 (3,4,1) - spacing : It happened becauce you use 0.75x. AI says "spacing is fine", but it's not a true

01:25:263 (3) - add whistle to the end?
01:36:724 (3) - remove finish
01:37:398 (1) - add finish to the start
01:50:207 (5) - remove finish?

Pretty nice mapset without huge mistakes. Star!
thank you play and star! :D

thank you MOD!
all your MOD fixed :3
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here are some suggestions :P

-Overall-
the "Papapa" claps sounds bad :< how about using normal-hitnormal instead?
maybe you need disable the letterbox.

-Easy-
01:50:544 (1) - let this spinner start at 01:50:881?
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Normal-
00:08:072 (1) - let this spinner start at 00:08:409?
01:05:376 (1) - new combo here.
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Hard-
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Insane-
00:05:039 (1) - maybe you need new combo here :3
00:29:645 (7,8,9) - add clap? (oh I mean normal-hitnormal)
01:35:544 (1) - why new combo?
01:35:881 (2) - don't like this jump.
01:35:966 (3) - how about remove this note and let the stream start at 01:36:050 (4)?
01:43:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - emm.. a 9-notes stream here... what about remove (2) and (8)? the 5-notes stream seems much better here.
01:44:898 - add a circle here?
01:45:067 - ^
01:53:746 (1) - let this spinner end at 01:55:600?
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xierbaliti wrote:

here are some suggestions :P

-Overall-
the "Papapa" claps sounds bad :< how about using normal-hitnormal instead?
maybe you need disable the letterbox.

-Easy-
01:50:544 (1) - let this spinner start at 01:50:881?
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Normal-
00:08:072 (1) - let this spinner start at 00:08:409?
01:05:376 (1) - new combo here.
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Hard-
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Insane-
00:05:039 (1) - maybe you need new combo here :3
00:29:645 (7,8,9) - add clap? (oh I mean normal-hitnormal)
01:35:544 (1) - why new combo?
01:35:881 (2) - don't like this jump.
01:35:966 (3) - how about remove this note and let the stream start at 01:36:050 (4)?
01:43:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - emm.. a 9-notes stream here... what about remove (2) and (8)? the 5-notes stream seems much better here.
01:44:898 - add a circle here?
01:45:067 - ^
01:53:746 (1) - let this spinner end at 01:55:600?
thank you modding~ :3
all done~
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