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gmtn. (witch's slave) - disperagioia

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Tar Curunir
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 3. Oktober 2017 at 22:29:53

Artist: gmtn. (witch's slave)
Title: disperagioia
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5485kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. demo (7.35 stars, 968 notes)
Download: gmtn. (witch's slave) - disperagioia
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4th submitted beatmap.
DeviousPanda
here's a mod

00:07:296 (1) - this is kinda unreadable
00:14:296 (1) - end this on either the red tick before or the white tick after
00:41:963 (10,11,1) - hard to read, space the sliders out like you did here (00:43:296 (5,6,7,8,9))
00:45:796 (9) - hiding this behind the previous slider makes it hard to read
00:53:463 (11,12,13,14,15,1) - change this pattern to something like this so it flows better:
00:54:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - unnecessary spaced tripples
00:56:963 (1,2) - never make repeat sliders this short, this applies to all use of them throughout the map
01:00:796 (4) - hard to read, better to place it slightly to the bottom of the overlapping circle
01:03:630 (1) - unreadable SV change
01:08:796 (4) - same as 01:00:796 (4)
01:13:963 (2) - same as 00:56:963 (1,2)
01:20:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - unexpected spaced stream is unexpected
01:23:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hard to read, change it to something like this so it flows better
01:31:296 (1,2) - space these out a bit more
01:33:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - spaced out too much
01:34:296 (10) - put a new combo here
01:35:296 (1,2) - same as 01:31:296 (1,2)

most of these problems repeat throughout the entire map so im not going to list every instance, but i hope this is good enough :) :) :)
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