Kantan wrote:

FIRST ! xd

Since the song is super long and repetitively. I think it need vary of patterns to make it more fun!

These sections should be less complex (sth like oooooooooooo , oooooooooooo)

1. 00:03:716 - ~ 00:25:144 - : cuz only melody, synth here should be mapped with very simple pattern to reflect how clear the music is.
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:03:716 - :v ez whole stream with kkddkkddkkdd... Done~!
   2. 00:09:430 - I think this work Instead of having kdddkdddkdddk, changed it to have a bit of variety (kdddkdddkkddk.. etc)
   3. 00:15:144 - kkddkkddkkdd... please \:3/ Changed :3
   4. 00:20:858 - kdddkdddkdddk.. like 00:09:430 - Again, changed to the pattern above
   5. 00:26:573 - repeat the same actions! Instead of doing kkddkkddk again, I've decided to do kkddkdddk to reflect the loud snare sound
2. 01:35:144 - ~ 01:50:144 - : this part rather soft than kiai part and It would be nice to lower pressure from hard part.
   
   SPOILER

   01:35:144 - kkddkkddkkdd... only maybe ? Yup, changed
   01:40:858 - kdddkdddkdddk..xD Again, done this a little different
   01:46:573 - kkddkkddkkdd... \:D/ Done (:
   01:52:287 - looks nice already no change!
3. 05:35:144 - ~ 05:54:966 - : like the first part of the song. Fixed

This section can be harder

1. 03:40:858 - ~ 04:26:573 - : Because it has unique beat and climax like. Should fully cover melody with k, I think this part need to be less complex than 2nd kiai. (oooooooooo , ooooooooooooooo)
   SPOILER

   What i mean i like
   
   and if you agree to my mod these mod below will help
   You can move thing like 03:42:644 - to 03:42:733 - to cover beat !
   03:44:073 - same
   03:45:501 -
   03:45:591 -
   03:49:787 -
   03:51:216 - to 03:51:305 - !
   03:54:073 -
   03:55:501 -
   03:56:216 -
   03:59:787 -
   04:01:216 -
   04:01:930 -
   04:05:501 -
   04:07:644 -
   04:14:073 -
   04:16:930 -
   04:18:358 -
   
   04:22:019 - better add note to this this part have 1/4drum? in background cover behind.
   Agreed with all and tried to make it a bit easier than the second kiai
2. 04:26:751 - ~ 05:06:573 - : 1/16 please ..? QAQ

I think the first kiai part can be map with only double and 4plets ? Done qq

[R] wrote:

yo

[Ice Oni]
00:06:483 - can delete here, 8/1 end beat from 00:03:716 -
01:44:698 (131,132) - invert, to give variety with this part 01:45:318 -
03:27:823 - change don, to give a variety
03:52:019 - change kat
03:53:448 - add note ?
05:08:805 - change don

well not much, maybe just that
good luck

myckoll wrote:

Hi, from Vulkin's queue.
[General]

- Move the background down

code

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"b9c56dccadef892b27d92e7517bc03beb3c4aeef.jpg",0,100
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Done 0,0,"b9c56dccadef892b27d92e7517bc03beb3c4aeef.jpg",0,75 instead

[Ice Oni]

- 00:21:662 (75) - k Changed
- 00:23:091 (91) - ^ ^
- 00:24:519 (107) - ^ ^
- 00:40:144 (259,260) - ctrl+g Whoops, changed
- 00:45:233 (314) - d Changed
- 00:47:287 (337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,1) - ddkkddkdk feels better :3 Sounds much better, changed
- 01:00:501 (101,102,103,104,105) - ddkdk Changed
- 01:23:358 (290,291,292,293,294) - ^ ^
- 02:09:073 (5,6,7,8,9) - ddddk Done ddkdk to match the patterns above
- 02:19:608 (14) - K Changed this part to be D D K K as the pitch goes lower then higher
- 03:34:787 (36,37,38,39,40) - ddkdk Changed
- 04:31:394 (119,122) - ctrl+g Changed
- 04:34:787 (156,158) - ^ ^
- 04:35:233 (161,162) - ^ (if you accept this change this notes for a don 04:35:412 (163,165) - and this note for a kat 04:35:501 (164) -) This sound much better, changed
- 04:55:323 - Remake this stream please. After this note 04:56:841 (399) - the stream sounds weird ;w; Remade it, hopefully it sounds better now qq
- 05:23:358 (5,6,7,8,9) - ddkdk Changed

Good Luck! Thanks :3

Fantazy wrote:

hihi~~

Ice Oni

00:07:287 (39,40,41,1,2) - kdddk? Changed, also changed the kdkkd at 00:19:430 to kdddk instead.
00:13:805 (58) - k
00:18:894 (49) - d Ended up removing the don on 00:18:805, and changing the next note along to a don instead.
00:19:251 (51) - 00:19:966 (57) - d Yup, changed them both.
00:19:430 (52,53,54,55,56) - kkddk? I'd like to keep consistency so I've done kdddk instead.

00:32:108 (179,180) - kk Since I've done this later this should be okay but I would have liked to have kk there on it's own to emphasise the strong sound. Anyway, changed.
00:32:287 - 00:32:823 - 00:33:358 - one k , 00:33:894 - kk and 00:34:073 (201) - d ? 05:52:287 - too I like the way I have already set it up here so no change.
00:34:430 (205,206,207,208,209) - kkdkd Sounds good, changed.

00:42:287 (282) - i think no need to space? or it sould be space here 00:39:341 - 00:40:769 - 00:42:198 - I agree this sounds better, changed.
00:46:573 - try kkdkkdkdkkdkkdkdk I'be re-mapped this whole stream a little differently.

make the lower part different
00:52:733 (36,37) - dd
00:54:162 (48,49) - ^
00:56:037 (65,66) - ^
00:58:448 (84,85) - ^
after also
01:08:716 (169) - k
Accepted all and changed.

01:32:287 - kdkkkdkkkddkddkdk or kkdkkdkdkddkddkdk Changed this stream around a bit.

02:56:483 - don't note all k here Okay ;w;
03:27:823 (5) - k Originally had it like this and it sounds much better to me, changed.

04:08:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - dddk k ? (1/6 1/4) I think it sounds better the way it is currently as the melody goes down with the 1/6.
04:09:341 (7,8) - dk Changed

feel hard to make this map ?_?_?_?_? all samesame ;w;w;w;w;

gooooood luck~~~~~~~~~~~and EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hitsu wrote:

Hi! M4M request from topic t/551902
Your mod helped me a lot. hope I'll help you too!

General

As long as i will be obsessed with "all should be according to the music!!11" mapper, such maps as yours will receive a round of applause from me. You did a great job, map is consistent and accurate, joyful to play and very useful to learn how to do easy and so easy streams (that's good for me, bcz I am noobie at it). I couldn't pass it by myself because of stamina but I'm sure I will practice a lot to do that. And ofc I will show this to my friends
Also I'll give this map kudosu as soon as I'll receive more~ Aaa this honestly made my day to read this, thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback c:

Ice Oni

I can't say much about your map because I like it as it is but some suggestions will be useful to think about anyway.
So.

03:10:858 (80) - think of d maybe? This one has lower pitch than others. I agree, this does have a lower pitch then the other notes surrounding it, changed.
03:32:108 (23,24,29,30) - maybe triplets instead of lonely notes, according to music. Yeah, listening on 50% playback rate you can hear there is a sound here, added.
04:14:519 (2,3) - maybe make these two d, here's lower pitch acc to the music. And pattern kddkdkddk will fit better here i guess. I slightly disagree on this, as the song has high sounds on 04:14:430 (1,3) so I would rather those be kats instead. If I were to change this stream, I would probably change it to kdkkdkddk as this highlights the high sounds and the drum sounds as well. But for now, I'll keep it as it is.
04:43:269 (250,251) - i guess here should be 1/6 according to the music?. I don't think there are 1/6 here but, I have added 1/6 at 04:31:751, 04:43:180, 04:54:608 and 05:06:037. This made it significantly harder ;w;.
04:54:698 (376,377) - ^. ^
04:54:608 (375) and 04:43:269 (250) - better be with k. Haven't done either of these as I don't think it fits properly. (And I have added 1/6 here too :p
05:06:037 (501,502,503) - ^ sane as those. ^

That's pretty much it. Maybe not so much but still.. ^^

Thanks for the mod~!! Helped me realise that some notes in the longer streams were a bit wrong, so I had to fix most of them ;w;.

Raphalge wrote:

fucking 6 minute nm request god damnit dude xD

just skimming through in the editor cause im exhausted

i strongly recommend lowering the HP drain a bit, 6.5 is really high for a 6 minute stream map. Changed to HP 6.

00:24:787 (109) - k? No.. I'm emphasising the 3 drum notes that follow one after the other here.
00:24:966 (110) - ^ ^
00:52:198 (32,33,34,35) - think you could ctrl g these
00:52:823 (37) - k here if you do the ctrl g thing
00:54:162 (48) - k to contrast with 00:53:537 (43) - ?
00:57:912 (80,81) - could do a cheeky ctrl g again
00:58:448 (84) - k if you do that ctrl g thang
00:59:876 (95) - k here?
00:58:448 (84) - cheeky k?
01:03:448 (125,126) - ctrl g?
01:05:591 (142) - another k?
01:05:948 (145) - change this to a k so it's a bit different from the last time you used it?
01:10:591 (182,183) - ctrl g?
01:13:448 (207,208) - ^?
01:14:876 (218,219) - again^
01:17:019 (235) - k?
01:17:376 (238) - add a k here if you do it on the last one
01:19:876 (260,261) - ctrl g?
01:22:733 (284) - k?
01:24:876 (303,304) - ctrl g?
01:31:394 (353) - k here me thinks
02:00:055 (35,36,37,38) - ctrl g? looks pretty cool I think Changed all the above suggestions, I didn't know of ways I could change it to make it less repetitive.. thanks for the help.
maybe you can also change some of the dkddk's to dkkdk, cause it feels a little repetitive to play. Yes, I agree. Changed a few of the dkddk's to dkkdk instead.

02:19:251 (12) - k Also changed (11) to a don.
03:23:358 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - hi satan Lol..
03:42:733 (20,21) - kd
03:44:876 (39,40) - kd
03:50:055 (39,40) - dkkd
03:58:448 (11,12) - kd
04:01:305 (36,37) - kd
04:07:733 (46,47) - ^
04:11:305 (23,24) - ^
04:17:019 (24,25) - ^
04:22:733 (22,23) - ^ Changed all suggestions above.
ok I give up, can't listen to whistle hitsounds anymore

map is pretty good but some parts just feel copy pasted, might be because im really tired though. Hope the mod wasn't too bad.