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Enon
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Enon wrote:

some
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SnowNiNo_
m
  • [Lively]
  1. 00:01:573 (4,1) - 00:05:323 (4,1) - need larger spacing for emphasis
  2. 00:18:917 (2) - 00:22:354 - spaced more since is a 1/1 gap here, using the same spacing with 1/2 would cause misread
  3. 00:35:479 (1) - flow is better if ctrl + g here
  4. 00:47:667 (1) - u should use larger spacing to emphasis every sound like this in kiai lol, the current spacing cant rly express the sound well
  • [Moa & Left's Extra]
  1. 00:01:729 (1) - same as Lively diff, should have larger spacing for emphasis
  2. 00:07:667 (1) - unnecessary NC
  3. 00:55:792 (3) - shape is kinda ugly lol, make it the same as 00:56:417 (2) - would be better, doesnt rly need to stack the sliderend with 4 here
  4. 01:24:918 (4,1) - stack these since it feel inconsistent with ur structure
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:18:604 (3,1) - stack or spaced out a bit, the structure rn would cause misread
  2. 00:46:104 (1) - dont need to NC here
  • [Hard]
  1. 01:07:823 (2) - curve here seems pretty weird lol
  2. 01:16:729 (1,2) - i feel this is a bit hard in a ard diff, just make a 1/2 slider here would be fine
  • [Advanced]
  1. a
  • [Moa's Normal]
  1. 01:43:575 (2) - why dont make it as same as 01:43:009 (1) - , would look better
:)
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SnowNiNo_ wrote:

m
  • [Lively]
  1. 00:01:573 (4,1) - 00:05:323 (4,1) - need larger spacing for emphasis based on melody, ok maybe
  2. 00:18:917 (2) - 00:22:354 - spaced more since is a 1/1 gap here, using the same spacing with 1/2 would cause misread antijump
  3. 00:35:479 (1) - flow is better if ctrl + g herenow also ok i think, but I can consider it if i need new pattern here
  4. 00:47:667 (1) - u should use larger spacing to emphasis every sound like this in kiai lol, the current spacing cant rly express the sound wellyeah also I didn't like this, so fixed here.
  • [Moa & Left's Extra]
  1. 01:24:918 (4,1) - stack these since it feel inconsistent with ur structure reduced spacing a bit instead
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:18:604 (3,1) - stack or spaced out a bit, the structure rn would cause misreadantijump pattern here
  2. 00:46:104 (1) - dont need to NC here fixed
  • [Hard]
  1. 01:07:823 (2) - curve here seems pretty weird lol true
  2. 01:16:729 (1,2) - i feel this is a bit hard in a ard diff, just make a 1/2 slider here would be finefixed
  • [Advanced]
  1. a
:)
thx for mod!
Ellyu
M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/552125

The circle colors is different between Lively and other diffs.

Lively
00:26:885 (6) - Place it at x:247 y:90(overlap with the bottom of the slider).
00:49:073 (2) - Too close to the last slider 00:48:604 (1) - .
00:54:229 (3) - I am not sure whether is this rankable.Overlap so much.
01:16:729 (5) - New combo
01:27:763 (1,2,3,4) - I think duplet at here works better.
01:59:566 There should be a triplet.
02:00:557 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
(Sometimes the jumping space killing me because some of them are too big and strange comparing to the others like this 00:18:604 (1) - .It's really cool but ahhhh,not as fun as it looks like.)
Loooool I am not good at playing and modding and mapping cs5 map.It looks like great but you need to find someone better than me to mod on it.

Moa & Left's Extra
00:31:260 (2) - To close to the next slider and the last slider.It really like a duplet.
01:07:354 (4) - New combo
01:11:104 (4) - ^
01:52:066 (1,2) - Ahhhh,this overlap is hard to get, it kickiiiing my ass looool. Anyway it's fine but it is really hard.
02:01:406 (1) - The spinner is too short comparing to the other diffs.

Insane
00:15:792 (1) - ctrl+g
00:57:042 (1) - This overlap killing me again. Why not using more overlaping pattern like this in 00:53:292 (1) - 00:57:979 (4) - ? They sounds really similar.

Hard
00:32:979 (2) - ctrl+g
00:52:667 (2) - ^
01:22:849 (9) - A circle works better.

There is nothing I can complain about in the rest diff.
Such nice map(though each diffs looks so harsh for the cs).And nice song too.
GL
:)
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handsome muscle wrote:

M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/552125

The circle colors is different between Lively and other diffs.

Lively
00:26:885 (6) - Place it at x:247 y:90(overlap with the bottom of the slider). stacked
00:49:073 (2) - Too close to the last slider 00:48:604 (1) - . ehh same before
00:54:229 (3) - I am not sure whether is this rankable.Overlap so much. maybe?
01:16:729 (5) - New combo for beauty
01:27:763 (1,2,3,4) - I think duplet at here works better. too hard pattern considering tension here
01:59:566 There should be a triplet. I don't wanna give hard pattern here
02:00:557 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g not intended movement
(Sometimes the jumping space killing me because some of them are too big and strange comparing to the others like this 00:18:604 (1) - .It's really cool but ahhhh,not as fun as it looks like.) oh thats antijump pattern
Loooool I am not good at playing and modding and mapping cs5 map.It looks like great but you need to find someone better than me to mod on it.

Moa & Left's Extra
00:31:260 (2) - To close to the next slider and the last slider.It really like a duplet.
01:07:354 (4) - New combo fixed
01:11:104 (4) - ^fixed
01:52:066 (1,2) - Ahhhh,this overlap is hard to get, it kickiiiing my ass looool. Anyway it's fine but it is really hard.
02:01:406 (1) - The spinner is too short comparing to the other diffs.

Insane
00:15:792 (1) - ctrl+g yeah it's nice
00:57:042 (1) - This overlap killing me again. Why not using more overlaping pattern like this in 00:53:292 (1) - 00:57:979 (4) - ? They sounds really similar. hmm not feeling to see consistency here, but I'll consider it

Hard
00:32:979 (2) - ctrl+g too hard
00:52:667 (2) - ^too hard
01:22:849 (9) - A circle works better. want to make same distance between notes, but it's hard, so i can consider it

There is nothing I can complain about in the rest diff.
Such nice map(though each diffs looks so harsh for the cs).And nice song too.
GL
:)
thx for mod! i'll mod yours soon~ :)
Nostalgic
o/

m4m
[General]
  1. Artist name should be Nana Inoue. Surname is put behind the given name in English.

[Moa & Left's Extra]
  1. widescreen support off
  2. you stack notes in this map quite a lot, why not stack leniency 3?
  3. 00:08:292 don't you think vol. 65% is a bit too loud for this part?
  4. 00:29:854 (1) - move it further away from the previous slider as the rhythm progresses
  5. 00:53:135 (4,1) - this jump is slightly too much and unintuitive
  6. 01:05:167 (3) - ctrl g?
  7. 01:12:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't get why they space even closer than the previous stream. The music is intensifying so should the stream
  8. 01:52:066 (1,2) - I don't think stacking them is a good idea because that's a bit confusing. Also there is a sound in the middle of the gap so it shouldn't really be empty. I get you wanna emphasize the pause in lyric but it's still a bit awkward to play. How about make the first note into a slider and extend it to red tick?
  9. I honestly like this kind of 'old-style' map :)

[Lively]
  1. 00:29:229 (2,2) - wouldn't it be more interesting if you stack them all here 00:29:697 (2) ?
  2. 00:44:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not making them smoother? Maybe I just don't get your intention.
  3. 01:14:542 (5,6,7,8,1) - they are ugly and hard to read imo
  4. 01:20:263 (1,2) - people will get confused about this. They won't read it as a 1/3 snap because you stack the notes with the sliders before.
  5. 01:24:401 (2,3) - ^
  6. 01:25:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even if it's an anti-jump it doesn't play well. note 1 & 2 are 1/2 apart but suddenly 2 & 3 are 1/3. Players will probably think the gap is either 1/2 or 1/4. If you insist on keeping it at least make 01:25:435 (3) NC
  7. 01:27:073 (1) - could be a faster slider because 1.8 to 2.0 is no much difference.
  8. 01:44:849 (4,5) - don't stack?
  9. 01:53:906 (2,3,4) - I think you can turn them into something like you have done in the following iteration, instead of simply stacking them.

Quite a lovely song! Good luck with this set :)
Topic Starter
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Nostalgic wrote:

o/

m4m
[General]
  1. Artist name should be Nana Inoue. Surname is put behind the given name in English.

[Moa & Left's Extra]
  1. widescreen support off fixed
  2. you stack notes in this map quite a lot, why not stack leniency 3? yah
  3. 00:08:292 don't you think vol. 65% is a bit too loud for this part? it's ok
  4. 00:29:854 (1) - move it further away from the previous slider as the rhythm progresses
  5. 00:53:135 (4,1) - this jump is slightly too much and unintuitive
  6. 01:05:167 (3) - ctrl g? no
  7. 01:12:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't get why they space even closer than the previous stream. The music is intensifying so should the stream emphasis of stream after this
  8. 01:52:066 (1,2) - I don't think stacking them is a good idea because that's a bit confusing. Also there is a sound in the middle of the gap so it shouldn't really be empty. I get you wanna emphasize the pause in lyric but it's still a bit awkward to play. How about make the first note into a slider and extend it to red tick?
  9. I honestly like this kind of 'old-style' map :)

[Lively]
  1. 00:29:229 (2,2) - wouldn't it be more interesting if you stack them all here 00:29:697 (2) ? no I like now one
  2. 00:44:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not making them smoother? Maybe I just don't get your intention.no problem i think?
  3. 01:14:542 (5,6,7,8,1) - they are ugly and hard to read imo improved
  4. 01:20:263 (1,2) - people will get confused about this. They won't read it as a 1/3 snap because you stack the notes with the sliders before. me and my friend all read it
  5. 01:24:401 (2,3) - ^ ^
  6. 01:25:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even if it's an anti-jump it doesn't play well. note 1 & 2 are 1/2 apart but suddenly 2 & 3 are 1/3. Players will probably think the gap is either 1/2 or 1/4. If you insist on keeping it at least make 01:25:435 (3) NC that's intention
  7. 01:27:073 (1) - could be a faster slider because 1.8 to 2.0 is no much difference. rip no intention of drastic change of SV
  8. 01:44:849 (4,5) - don't stack? why
  9. 01:53:906 (2,3,4) - I think you can turn them into something like you have done in the following iteration, instead of simply stacking them.yeah fixed

Quite a lovely song! Good luck with this set :)
thx for mod~
Cellina

Insane

  1. 00:01:260 (2,5) - 님 2가 5 리버스 살짝 가리는데 안그래도 1/8 때문에 잘 안보이는 리버스애로우 완전 가려져서 언랭커블임
  2. 00:17:667 (1,2) - 뭐랄까 이거 보자마자 슬라 반스택한게 너무 어색하다 느꼈음.. 차라리 블랭킷으로 감싸는게
  3. 00:31:729 (2) - 뉴콤 어떰
  4. 01:28:797 (1) - 마지막 강조 처리되는 부분이고 슬라 끝이 피니시라는게 좀 위화감이 드는데 걍 3/4슬라랑 서클어떰
  5. 01:58:575 - 볼륨좀 낮추셈 좀 너무 시끄러운거같음 엄청 잔잔한곳인데

Banned one & Left's Extra

  1. 00:22:354 (1,1) - 보기 좋은 오버랩은 아닌거같음
  2. 00:52:354 (1,3) - ^ 마찬가지
  3. 01:24:918 (4,1) - 이거 1/3 박자에 왼쪽으로갔다가 바로 오른쪽으로 돌아와야해서 치기 개어려울거같음 차라리 스택으로 수정하는게

Prelude

  1. 00:07:979 (3) - 엑라에서도 심지어 인센에서도 00:08:135 - 음은 안무시했는데 3/4로 무시해버리는건 좀..
  2. 00:31:260 (3) - nc ㄱ?
  3. 01:04:854 - 부터 01:06:417 - 까지 힛사 왜 없어요
Mirash
m4m from your q
overall offset +9

Prelude
01:12:979 (1) - this jump felt really big. i missed here maybe i'm just bad but had an fc till here. make it a little bit closer like 1,36
01:45:840 (4,2,3) - maybe line this together
01:55:391 hm you can kick slider this
and the last 3 circles have different bpm lines
bpm: 198,000 offset: 120566
bpm: 188,000 offset: 120869
bpm: 191,000 offset: 121188

Moa & Left's Extra
00:36:963 (3) - move it to x:7 y:290 for perfect triangle now it looks too far and strange
00:52:042 (3,4) - i'd ctrl g this because feels bad right now

Insane
00:50:792 (2,3) - maybe stack this on next slider, jump here isn't necessary i think

Hard
02:00:557 (2) - so with red lines this must be replaced just pointing out

rest seems good
nice set, good streams
Nakano Itsuki
m4m
nice song :>

[General]
drum-hitfinish99 seems to be unused?

[Prelude]
00:18:917 (2) - small suggestion to stack this with 00:18:604 (1) -
00:22:354 (1,2,3,4) - distance between 00:22:354 (1,2) - which is of 1/1 rhythm has the same spacing for 00:22:979 (3,4) - , which kinda makes it intuitive and confusing to read
00:58:448 (2,3) - could space these 2 out, atm they seem too close together
01:25:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - this one is very confusing to read, with 1/2 and 1/6 spacing being almost identical to each other

Nice diff though the entire stream section seems kinda overdone to me :s

[Moa x Left]
00:13:604 (4,5) - ctrl g these makes for smoother flow imo

interesting diff, plus i prefer the streams on this diff more

quit a solid set actually, i cant really find much in the other diffs
gl!
Topic Starter
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Cellina wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:01:260 (2,5) - 님 2가 5 리버스 살짝 가리는데 안그래도 1/8 때문에 잘 안보이는 리버스애로우 완전 가려져서 언랭커블임 시간차 있어서 ㄱㅊ
  2. 00:17:667 (1,2) - 뭐랄까 이거 보자마자 슬라 반스택한게 너무 어색하다 느꼈음.. 차라리 블랭킷으로 감싸는게 fix
  3. 00:31:729 (2) - 뉴콤 어떰 dd
  4. 01:28:797 (1) - 마지막 강조 처리되는 부분이고 슬라 끝이 피니시라는게 좀 위화감이 드는데 걍 3/4슬라랑 서클어떰 dd
  5. 01:58:575 - 볼륨좀 낮추셈 좀 너무 시끄러운거같음 엄청 잔잔한곳인데30

Banned one & Left's Extra

  1. 00:22:354 (1,1) - 보기 좋은 오버랩은 아닌거같음
  2. 00:52:354 (1,3) - ^ 마찬가지
  3. 01:24:918 (4,1) - 이거 1/3 박자에 왼쪽으로갔다가 바로 오른쪽으로 돌아와야해서 치기 개어려울거같음 차라리 스택으로 수정하는게벌써 세번째라 걍 고침

Prelude

  1. 00:07:979 (3) - 엑라에서도 심지어 인센에서도 00:08:135 - 음은 안무시했는데 3/4로 무시해버리는건 좀.. 이건 고려해보겟음..
  2. 00:31:260 (3) - nc ㄱ? ㅇㅇ
  3. 01:04:854 - 부터 01:06:417 - 까지 힛사 왜 없어요리맵해서

Mirash wrote:

m4m from your q
overall offset +9

Prelude
01:12:979 (1) - this jump felt really big. i missed here maybe i'm just bad but had an fc till here. make it a little bit closer like 1,36 k
01:45:840 (4,2,3) - maybe line this together nice
01:55:391 hm you can kick slider this clean pattern map
and the last 3 circles have different bpm lines oh man I'll recheck it thx
bpm: 198,000 offset: 120566
bpm: 188,000 offset: 120869
bpm: 191,000 offset: 121188

Moa & Left's Extra
00:36:963 (3) - move it to x:7 y:290 for perfect triangle now it looks too far and strange
00:52:042 (3,4) - i'd ctrl g this because feels bad right now

Insane
00:50:792 (2,3) - maybe stack this on next slider, jump here isn't necessary i think maybe vocal change

Hard
02:00:557 (2) - so with red lines this must be replaced just pointing out k

rest seems good
nice set, good streams

StarrStyx wrote:

m4m
nice song :>

[General]
drum-hitfinish99 seems to be unused? omg i'll check it thx

[Prelude]
00:18:917 (2) - small suggestion to stack this with 00:18:604 (1) - antijump pattern
00:22:354 (1,2,3,4) - distance between 00:22:354 (1,2) - which is of 1/1 rhythm has the same spacing for 00:22:979 (3,4) - , which kinda makes it intuitive and confusing to read can see dailycare's map
00:58:448 (2,3) - could space these 2 out, atm they seem too close together changed pattern instead
01:25:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - this one is very confusing to read, with 1/2 and 1/6 spacing being almost identical to each other same

Nice diff though the entire stream section seems kinda overdone to me :s

[Moa x Left]
00:13:604 (4,5) - ctrl g these makes for smoother flow imo

interesting diff, plus i prefer the streams on this diff more

quit a solid set actually, i cant really find much in the other diffs
gl!
thanks for mod! :)
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