thanks Aloda <3Aloda wrote:
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You have 'Smash' and 'BGM' in the tags twice. ups
I'm just gonna assume the rest of the tags are good, there's a lot to check through XD
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I get what you're mapping to with the finisher on 00:20:806 (3) - but really it's way more intuitive to play as a normal note. its fine for me since the bpm is low
00:41:487 (86,87,1) - The sv here makes this pattern pretty awkward to read, try toning it down a little. I also think kkD fits better here, if only because it makes the finisher a little easier to hit. right, 00:41:374 - added 1.05 and change that as kat to fit the similar sound around here such voice effect or rhythm
01:33:445 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Maybe I'm just bad at 1/6 but this pattern feels pretty awkward to play to me. Maybe try changing 01:33:637 (31,32,33,34) - to kkdk or kkkd but idk maybe it's fine as is. its fine for me, it also 01:33:637 (31,34) - emphasized the impact voice then 01:33:701 (32,33) - these for low voice
04:05:560 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - Try k ddk d k, just fits better imo. I'd like to keep the current structure colors and also the emphasis of kkd pattern seems interesting at high percussion
06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - The gaps you've left in this section are pretty inconsistent, and the way they break up the rhythm honestly feels pretty weird. Try making them more regular and in line with the music. 06:38:300 - made the structures as K d K d K d K ddkkd K and the others i dont see problem with it,
since I intended to map some vocals and impact sounds with the gaps for variation
That's all for now. Let me know when you've applied this and I'll take another look.
Changed BG, please redownload.