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Priority One & TwoThirds - Hunted (ft. Jonny Rose)

posted 2017-01-03T05:45:50+00:00

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Mun

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Mun 2017-01-03T05:45:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 25, 2017 at 1:50:00 AM

Artist: Priority One & TwoThirds
Title: Hunted (ft. Jonny Rose)
Tags: drum and bass priority one twothirds mir squirrelpascals happyrocket88 kujinn ultima fox
BPM: 175
Filesize: 5569kb
Play Time: 02:11
Difficulties Available:

Evolve (5.34 stars, 460 notes)
Kujinn's Hard (3.19 stars, 320 notes)
Mir's Insane (4.57 stars, 424 notes)
squirrelp's Normal (2.2 stars, 213 notes)
Ultima Fox's Extra (5.13 stars, 469 notes)

Download: Priority One & TwoThirds - Hunted (ft. Jonny Rose)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 for rank

top diff done + hitsounded, needs mods and playtests

squirrelp's Normal - Complete and hitsounded!
Kujinn's Hard - Complete and hitsounded!
Mir's Insane - Complete and hitsounded!
Ultima Fox's Extra - Complete and hitsounded!

GDs

Extra - Ultima Fox
Insane - Mir / Me
Hard - Kujinn
Normal - squirrelpascals
Easy - HappyRocket88

Last edited by Mun 2017-02-25T06:50:20+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-01-07T07:20:37+00:00

from discord mod reqs

00:21:320 (1,1) - this overlap looks pretty random to me, I think you can set it up in a neater way. Maybe try overlapping the sliderbody of 1 with the sliderbody of the red slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6995071 - What I like to do is pause on a tick (like 00:21:577) and overlap it under where the sliderball is

00:37:091 (1) - move this to x126 y217 for a better blanket

00:43:434 (4,5,6) - Would appreciate 3 being closer to the previous slider, so that you can emphasize 4,5,6 better. Maybe ctrl+g 3 and 5

01:00:405 (9) - NC

01:01:434 (1) - This shouldn't be a double reverse slider, you currently set it up to be in the same pattern visually as 01:01:777 (1,1,1,1) - but this particular slider is before the downbeat so its not really part of the pattern in the music. So it shouldn't be mapped the same.

Your NCing seems really inconsistent to me, not sure what pattern you're following. Some combos are like 2 objects long, then suddenly have you have a 2 measure combo and it's pretty confusing

01:12:063 (4,5) - Would space this a bit more, kinda looks like how youd space a 1/4 gap

01:14:120 (7) - NC

01:13:777 (6) - The flow switches direction on this slider, would probably make more sense for it to switch directions on the downbeat right after it. I would ctrl+g this slider. You'd probbaly have to move this 01:13:605 (5) - if you did this.

It is kinda weird that the flow switches directions almost right after on 01:14:805 (11) -

01:20:291 (4,5) - blanket

02:04:520 (5,1) - If you're gonna keep this make sure the overlap is good. Also its kinda of an out of place pattern in this map imo. You don't really do overlaps like this.

It's a nice pattern though, so I kinda want you to keep it, just consider doing something similar in other places too so its not so out of place.

This is a nice map, sorry for the short mod. Good luck!

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Mun 2017-01-07T08:01:26+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
from discord mod reqs

00:21:320 (1,1) - this overlap looks pretty random to me, I think you can set it up in a neater way. Maybe try overlapping the sliderbody of 1 with the sliderbody of the red slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6995071 - What I like to do is pause on a tick (like 00:21:577) and overlap it under where the sliderball is oh dang, I kept revising this and didn't realize it ended up looking so messy. Oops!

00:37:091 (1) - move this to x126 y217 for a better blanket agree

00:43:434 (4,5,6) - Would appreciate 3 being closer to the previous slider, so that you can emphasize 4,5,6 better. Maybe ctrl+g 3 and 5 meh, 3 is only about 2/7 of the distance of the 4, 5, and 6 jumps. The emphasis is also carried in hitsounds. Generally, I think this pattern works just fine.

01:00:405 (9) - NC

01:01:434 (1) - This shouldn't be a double reverse slider, you currently set it up to be in the same pattern visually as 01:01:777 (1,1,1,1) - but this particular slider is before the downbeat so its not really part of the pattern in the music. So it shouldn't be mapped the same. False. This last part of the buildup lasts 2 full measures, but they are offset by half of a measure. The drum roll starts at 01:01:091 (5) - and ends at 01:05:205 (1) - so I mapped it as such.

Your NCing seems really inconsistent to me, not sure what pattern you're following. Some combos are like 2 objects long, then suddenly have you have a 2 measure combo and it's pretty confusing Yeah, it was a bit rushed, lol

01:12:063 (4,5) - Would space this a bit more, kinda looks like how youd space a 1/4 gap Fixed.

01:14:120 (7) - NC I don't know what you're on, that was already NC'd

01:13:777 (6) - The flow switches direction on this slider, would probably make more sense for it to switch directions on the downbeat right after it. I would ctrl+g this slider. You'd probbaly have to move this 01:13:605 (5) - if you did this. These held sliders are used throughout the map as vehicles to change the direction of circular flow. This one may be particularly sharp in its directional change, but these are all built onto by what lies before and after them. The flow throughout the map relies upon the 3/4 sliders. It is consistently used this way, and therefore is predictable, and I see no problem with it.

It is kinda weird that the flow switches directions almost right after on 01:14:805 (11) - Agreed.

01:20:291 (4,5) - blanket

02:04:520 (5,1) - If you're gonna keep this make sure the overlap is good. Also its kinda of an out of place pattern in this map imo. You don't really do overlaps like this. If anyone else brings up that these seem out of place, I'll change them, but they seem to flow and read fine to me.

It's a nice pattern though, so I kinda want you to keep it, just consider doing something similar in other places too so its not so out of place.

This is a nice map, sorry for the short mod. Good luck!

Appreciate the mod, thanks a ton! Applied most.

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-01-23T23:07:29+00:00

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osu file format v14

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Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Sulfur 2017-01-25T12:39:10+00:00

Hello there

click

[Ulltima Fox's meme]

Check AI mod, theres few unsnapped objects
00:16:520 (1) - I understand that you placed spinner here too avoid being like too repetitive with these note into 1/2 slider things but honestly i think this spinner is too long and its kinda boring to play, i would suggest make this spinner a little shorter, for example end it on 00:20:291 - and place four 1/2 sliders or something like that after it?
00:38:634 (2,1) - 00:40:005 (2,1) - 00:41:034 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these things?

[Evolve]

00:34:348 (1) - Maybe curve beginning of this slider a bit, for example like this?
01:09:320 (4,5) - I guess you wanted to do some kind of stop-and-go flow but spacing between these feels kinda awkward and in doesnt really emphasize anything, in my opinion flow would be more interesting if you ctrl+g 01:09:320 (4)
01:11:034 (3) - unnecessary NC
01:11:720 (2,3) - Maybe space these two a little bit more like you did it in 01:23:034 (3,4,1)
01:16:863 (1,4) - Maybe try something like this? (same reasoning as above)
01:32:977 (5) - Maybe ctrl+g this one to emphasize this strong beat a little bit more (might as well blanket 01:32:634 (3,5) )
01:47:377 (1) - 01:48:063 (1) - I dont think you need to indicate with NC such small SV changes

Sorry for short mod, gl with mapset!~

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Mun 2017-01-28T01:46:01+00:00

Su1fu7 wrote:
Hello there

click
[Ulltima Fox's meme]
Check AI mod, theres few unsnapped objects
00:16:520 (1) - I understand that you placed spinner here too avoid being like too repetitive with these note into 1/2 slider things but honestly i think this spinner is too long and its kinda boring to play, i would suggest make this spinner a little shorter, for example end it on 00:20:291 - and place four 1/2 sliders or something like that after it?
00:38:634 (2,1) - 00:40:005 (2,1) - 00:41:034 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these things?
[Evolve]
00:34:348 (1) - Maybe curve beginning of this slider a bit, for example like this? I'll try it for now, but that was originally supposed to parallel the bottom of the slider before it.
01:09:320 (4,5) - I guess you wanted to do some kind of stop-and-go flow but spacing between these feels kinda awkward and in doesnt really emphasize anything, in my opinion flow would be more interesting if you ctrl+g 01:09:320 (4) Thanks for letting me know! I didn't mean to make this awkward, it was actually just supposed to be flowing circularly. I tried reversing both, but if it feels inconsistent then I'll change it back.
01:11:034 (3) - unnecessary NC Nope. It separates the 2 1-2 jumps.
01:11:720 (2,3) - Maybe space these two a little bit more like you did it in 01:23:034 (3,4,1) I agree that this part has some problems. Changed the jump a bit.
01:16:863 (1,4) - Maybe try something like this? (same reasoning as above) That slider wasn't actually supposed to be 3/4 LOL
01:32:977 (5) - Maybe ctrl+g this one to emphasize this strong beat a little bit more (might as well blanket 01:32:634 (3,5) ) I really don't like what this does to the gameplay.
01:47:377 (1) - 01:48:063 (1) - I dont think you need to indicate with NC such small SV changes I'll take off the NCs and see how it fares.

Sorry for short mod, gl with mapset!~

Thank you! Applied most.

Halfslashed

Global Moderator

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2017-01-29T16:35:56+00:00

[Evolve]
00:05:548 (1,2) - Since the rhythm is consistent here, pattern variety will probably make this less boring without sacrificing much consistency. Perhaps instead of parallel sliders you could try mirrored sliders: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/60CI8HkF
00:11:034 (1,2) - If you took the above, another pattern suggestion I have would be straight pairing: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/ao6SjYHA
00:22:005 (1,1) - It'd be a pain to fix, but you could blanket this better (Ctrl+G'd previous slider to make it easier to see what needed to be blanketted): https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/PS5tBqGa
00:23:377 (1,1) - Spacing between these is a bit too tight for my tastes here. I'd probably try to keep even spacing between the end of the second slider and the first slider, as well as the loop of the second slider itself (for a rough idea - i know the blanket isn't perfect): https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/l5kdb0tw. The slider could be shaped around 00:26:463 (3) better, too.
00:24:748 (1,2) - Pls no overlap.
00:26:805 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing seems extreme for such a calm section.
00:27:491 - Honestly not too big of a fan of the SV increase, I don't feel like intensity has really increased much to support it.
00:34:348 (1,1) - You're so close, isn't there a way you could have the second slider end on the body of the first?
00:37:777 (2,3,4,5) - These aren't equal intensity, so there isn't a reason for them to have equal spacing.
00:39:491 (2) - No sound on the end of this slider, why not just do a circle or an extended slider instead?
00:39:834 (1) - With the object right before this, you switched to vocals, now you're switching back to the previous sounds you were following. Switching between these instruments this often in such a calm section doesn't make much sense. I'd just recommend a 1/2 circle here and starting the slider a red tick later.
00:43:948 (1,2,3,4,5) - Having a hard time understanding what you're following here. Here I hear two different rhythms: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/UiwjBP1S and https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/5oS7HDwP. I recommend you use your rhythm to place emphasis on the second of the two, since the other is just beat spam for the most part, with increases in emphasis towards the later part of the measure: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/LXLsMUc6
01:01:434 (1,1,1,1,1) - I mean, yeah - drums have started to come in, but when you focus them this much you're pretty much ignoring what else is going on here. The drums really don't seem to take over as the dominant instrument until 01:03:148 (1).
01:05:205 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps this big take away from the intense section right up ahead.
01:06:920 (5) - I don't really think these work with such strong beats on the red tick.
01:16:005 (4,7) - Too close for comfort. Make sure to keep your blanket, i'd recommend about the same distance as that: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/Nc7k4lk4
01:16:863 (9) - Forgot NC
01:17:205 (10,11) - Spacing is so high here it takes away emphasis from 01:17:377 (11,12).
01:20:291 (5) - Rotate 2 degrees counter clockwise to follow the curve with 01:19:605 (1).
01:18:577 (2,3,4) - Emphasis distribution isn't too great here since the stronger notes are on the white ticks.
01:26:463 (5,6,1,2,3) - This is the perfect place to go nuts with the spacing since it's the climax of an intense part, but it's pretty underwhelming considering previous spacings.
01:28:520 (3,4,5) - Overkill spacing considering the more intense section is over.
02:10:348 (1,2,3,4) - Previous iteration of this pattern at 01:15:491 (1,2,3,4) switched the directions of the second pair of 1/4 sliders, so i'd stay consistent here.

Most of the stuff repeats in the second kiai. Lots of stuff needs to be polished that isn't really worth pointing out (like blankets) so you should probably polish those up. Spacing varies pretty wildly, I pointed out the ones that I noticed the most though. It's got some good potential in it's structure though.

[Ultima Fox's Wanna-be Tengaku]
Change the diff name to something that isn't a giant meme.
AR is really high for basically no reason, it just produces an unnecessarily low density without really having patterns to justify this. Please lower this AR.
OD is really low in comparison to the rest of the spread, makes it look like this difficulty really doesn't belong. Raise the OD.
00:16:520 (1) - The background sound could be used as justification to vary the spacing on previous rhythms, but this spinner just looks like "I didn't feel like mapping the same rhythm for this time period."
00:22:005 (1,2,1) - Since there aren't beats on the end of half of these, they should all have the same timeline gap to the next. Shorten 00:22:005 (1) to the white tick.
00:26:120 (1) - This repeat doesn't even start on the drums. Try using a circle + 1/2 slider here to switch from the previous beats to the drums more smoothly.
00:28:863 (2,1) - These don't interact well visually. You might want to use a narrower slider or rotate it better.
00:37:091 (1,2,1,2) - No real representation of the increasing drum intensity here other than moving upwards on the screen, which doesn't really do the drums justice. I suggest incorporating more 1/2 circles here and perhaps spacing changes.
00:38:634 (2,1) - Literally copy pasted multiple times. This song does repeat, yes, but you could represent in more creative ways. An example would be building different sliders that overlap the same spot, or offsetting it with rotation and slight overlap, or even just moving this around the playfield.
01:01:777 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again not a fan of ignoring the other rhythm here completely, similar to Mun's diff. I also don't like how this stream has a sharp turn on a weaker beat when there's a way better turning spot on 01:02:463 (1).
01:04:177 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing decrease doesn't make sense since the song is building up.
01:05:205 (1,2,1,2) - Emphasis is reversed here, the stronger beats are the second two, but you're putting way more emphasis on the first two when they don't deserve it.
01:06:405 (3,4,5) - Whole section uses stacked triples, and these aren't exactly stronger, so I don't see a reason for this spacing.
01:13:605 (6) - Slider end on strong beat, you should make that clickable.
01:14:977 (5,6) - Uncomfortable angle and lack of emphasis here. I suggest Ctrl+G on 01:14:805 (4,5), but you might want a different method of fixing this.
01:17:377 (3,4,5) - From here you start using more spaced triples, but they're still pretty meaningless since all of the triples are mapping the same sounds. If you're going to do a difficulty increase for the second half of the kiai, then you should be doing it consistently (like with all triples), but I would just recommend you make these stacked.
01:27:148 (1,2,3) - Why not just continue the rhythm you were following for 01:26:463 (1,2,3,4)? Your clicks still end up on vocals, which is what it looks like you switched to, but you also stick with your previous rhythm.
01:27:834 - General note - do something to make it seem like the kiai is over. Whether you decrease overall spacing in this section, make rhythms less dense, it doesn't matter. Right now, the absence of triples isn't enough.
01:28:520 (3,4,5,6,1) - Seems like equal spacing to me, which means you're not emphasizing anything in particular. Please, add some contrast in spacing so that the jumps at least have some meaning.

Most of your emphasis problems repeat. I pointed out enough instances that you should be able to figure out what need to do to improve this difficulty. Also, see Mun about making the rhythm more consistent overall.

[Mir's Insane]
More of a general point, this intro section seems really overmapped. Your slider ends suggest that there is a constant 1/2 rhythm in this calm section, but that isn't the case for a lot of them. I get you wanted to express vocals but using some more circles, or perhaps switching between keyboard and vocals would probably make this work better. I'm not going to get too specific with this.
00:00:405 (2,3) - If you're going to use a reverse for the vocal you were following, you should use movement to make the player recognize that they're moving to the vocal: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/M0h2jk5l. This movement will make it so that the player clicks the first vocal, and has to move to hit the reverse for the second vocal, while not really putting much emphasis on the slider tail, which is I think what you intended. Right now it's really too subtle to be considered following the vocals imo.
00:21:663 (4,5,1) - Don't really understand the spacing increase here, and I think 5 could be blanketed by the next slider. Also note that at this spacing you're creating an uncomfortable angle, which may not be what you want.
00:26:805 (4,5,7,1) - Overlap consistency pls.
00:31:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Cute, but same as above.
00:34:348 (1,1) - Not bad, just make sure the slider border of the first slider overlaps properly with the second slider.
00:39:663 (3) - This note doesn't seem to be mapped to anything.
00:39:834 (1,2) - If you stacked these, it'd make it look more obvious that you're following vocals, since the first note isn't a vocal, but rather a different kind of strong beat.
00:56:291 (1) - No real reason to map a reverse like this since you're following drums and ignoring the keyboard rhythm until the last two notes of each measure.
01:03:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Makes no sense how map drums up to this point then completely ignore the 1/4 when they're even stronger than in the previous measure. Use some 1/4 sliders or map some streams, just don't ignore the other part of what you're following.
01:05:377 (2,3) - A direction change would be nice here to put emphasis on the even stronger drums.
01:33:834 (3,4,5,7) - Looks a lot better with consistent overlaps.
01:37:434 (1,2,3) - A bit close for comfort, don't you think?
01:38:805 (1,4) - Unintentional overlap.
01:40:520 (2,3) - Some even spacing would be nice.
01:47:377 (2,4,5) - 2 and 4 are too close for comfort and the entry angle between 4 and 5 doesn't look too good.
01:58:863 (5,2) - Another unintentional overlap.
02:00:063 (5,7) - Did you have a bad day or something? Here's another overlap.

[Kujinn's Hard]
00:04:005 (5,6) - I like how you're adding contrast to the previous rhythms for this, but this is a simpler rhythm than the previous, so it may not provide the emphasis you're looking for. At least, it doesn't in my opinion. One solution would be to just make 3 stacked 1/2 circles, or use the 1/2 circle + 1/2 slider rhythm here and map reverses to the rest. The former solution is the one I would do - less work and more fun.
00:21:491 (7) - If you're going to commit to switching to vocals at 00:20:634 (6), you shouldn't map this, since it confuses what you're following.
00:22:005 (1,1) - Not a fan of how the end of the first slider interacts with the second. It doesn't seem to flow into the next one or connect with it in any sort of way, so I recommend a different design for one of these. I do however, like the interaction between. 00:23:377 (1,1).
00:27:148 (3,1) - Similar situation as the above here, but it's a much simpler fix - just move the second slider down, or the first slider up.
00:32:977 (1,1) - This interaction isn't great either. If the first slider made a neater triangle and was blanketed by the second slider, better, it would be nicer: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/8SpJTB1V. Tbh, the mini "wave" in the second slider is kind of ruining things...
00:41:205 (1,2) - Please, just stack these.
00:55:605 (1) - Looks like an accidental NC.
01:01:348 (7) - There's no sound on this tick, but there is on 01:01:691.
01:03:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Makes no real sense to ignore the other 1/4 ticks when you're following drums, and mapped them the last measure. I'd just map reverses here and increase the SV to visually represent the higher intensity. Honestly, getting more opinions on this would also be nice.
01:26:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped triples here, there are no sounds on the blue ticks. Just use a spacing increase to represent the higher intensity.
01:58:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spamming for no real reason. If these beats are actually important, make them clickable so that the player can actually tell.
02:03:491 (1,2,3) - Really tight spacing and bad visuals here. I'd arrange the slider end of 1, head of 3, and 2 into an equilateral triangle.
02:11:120 (4) - Overmapped.

Good luck!

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-01-29T19:56:20+00:00

Halfslashed wrote:
[Mir's Insane]
More of a general point, this intro section seems really overmapped. Your slider ends suggest that there is a constant 1/2 rhythm in this calm section, but that isn't the case for a lot of them. I get you wanted to express vocals but using some more circles, or perhaps switching between keyboard and vocals would probably make this work better. I'm not going to get too specific with this. - I'll see what I can do.
00:00:405 (2,3) - If you're going to use a reverse for the vocal you were following, you should use movement to make the player recognize that they're moving to the vocal: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/M0h2jk5l. This movement will make it so that the player clicks the first vocal, and has to move to hit the reverse for the second vocal, while not really putting much emphasis on the slider tail, which is I think what you intended. Right now it's really too subtle to be considered following the vocals imo. - Changing as above.
00:21:663 (4,5,1) - Don't really understand the spacing increase here, and I think 5 could be blanketed by the next slider. Also note that at this spacing you're creating an uncomfortable angle, which may not be what you want. - I want the uncomfortable angle, but I moved it around a bit.
00:26:805 (4,5,7,1) - Overlap consistency pls. - Not really sure what you mean, but if you mean same distance overlap, then fixed.
00:31:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Cute, but same as above. - ^
00:34:348 (1,1) - Not bad, just make sure the slider border of the first slider overlaps properly with the second slider. - Fixed.
00:39:663 (3) - This note doesn't seem to be mapped to anything. - "Hun"-ted. It is mapped to something.
00:39:834 (1,2) - If you stacked these, it'd make it look more obvious that you're following vocals, since the first note isn't a vocal, but rather a different kind of strong beat. - Changed around.
00:56:291 (1) - No real reason to map a reverse like this since you're following drums and ignoring the keyboard rhythm until the last two notes of each measure. - Changed.
01:03:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Makes no sense how map drums up to this point then completely ignore the 1/4 when they're even stronger than in the previous measure. Use some 1/4 sliders or map some streams, just don't ignore the other part of what you're following. - Remapped.
01:05:377 (2,3) - A direction change would be nice here to put emphasis on the even stronger drums. - Null point due to remap.
01:33:834 (3,4,5,7) - Looks a lot better with consistent overlaps. - Fixed.
01:37:434 (1,2,3) - A bit close for comfort, don't you think? - Fixed.
01:38:805 (1,4) - Unintentional overlap. - Fixed.
01:40:520 (2,3) - Some even spacing would be nice. - Fixed this too.
01:47:377 (2,4,5) - 2 and 4 are too close for comfort and the entry angle between 4 and 5 doesn't look too good. - Cleaned up a bit.
01:58:863 (5,2) - Another unintentional overlap.
02:00:063 (5,7) - Did you have a bad day or something? Here's another overlap. - ^ Both fixed.
Good luck!

Thanks Halfy.~

Update: https://mir.s-ul.eu/SFo8Tg96

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Mun 2017-02-01T02:29:57+00:00

Halfslashed wrote:
[Evolve]
00:05:548 (1,2) - Since the rhythm is consistent here, pattern variety will probably make this less boring without sacrificing much consistency. Perhaps instead of parallel sliders you could try mirrored sliders: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/60CI8HkF Doing much pattern variation like this has gotten me the feedback of it being 'random.' I'll try a few things, but it'll probably only go as far as straight pairing.
00:11:034 (1,2) - If you took the above, another pattern suggestion I have would be straight pairing: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/ao6SjYHA
00:22:005 (1,1) - It'd be a pain to fix, but you could blanket this better (Ctrl+G'd previous slider to make it easier to see what needed to be blanketted): https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/PS5tBqGa i tried, ok
00:23:377 (1,1) - Spacing between these is a bit too tight for my tastes here. I'd probably try to keep even spacing between the end of the second slider and the first slider, as well as the loop of the second slider itself (for a rough idea - i know the blanket isn't perfect): https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/l5kdb0tw. The slider could be shaped around 00:26:463 (3) better, too. fuk this slider im getting rid of it (and replacing it with a worse slider)
00:24:748 (1,2) - Pls no overlap. ^
00:26:805 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing seems extreme for such a calm section. i guess i'm sotarks now, fixed
00:27:491 - Honestly not too big of a fan of the SV increase, I don't feel like intensity has really increased much to support it. I think this is less that this is too fast and more that the previous part is slow. This is placed as a bit of a proxy for later in the song, when I drop SV down to 0.5 at the end of this buildup. I want the change to be more dramatic, and 0.2x SV drop seems a bit boring.
00:34:348 (1,1) - You're so close, isn't there a way you could have the second slider end on the body of the first? It took me like 20 minutes but i made a shitty slider even worse
00:37:777 (2,3,4,5) - These aren't equal intensity, so there isn't a reason for them to have equal spacing. You should be familiar with emphasis other than spacing. The way I emphasize the 3rd and 4th note are by making the entrance to that jump a challenging angle to play, followed by another challenging angle. If I emphasize everything with jumps, it's a pp map, but if I emphasize it like this, it's cancer instead. Keeping it.
00:39:491 (2) - No sound on the end of this slider, why not just do a circle or an extended slider instead? vocals m8
00:39:834 (1) - With the object right before this, you switched to vocals, now you're switching back to the previous sounds you were following. Switching between these instruments this often in such a calm section doesn't make much sense. I'd just recommend a 1/2 circle here and starting the slider a red tick later. This is done because I want to accent the mapping of the held sounds with the mapping of the most important vocals (please don't make me do more sliderart i'm dead inside). I think it's readable, playable, and represents the music. If it's conceptually wrong, I'll change it, but for now I see no reason to.
00:43:948 (1,2,3,4,5) - Having a hard time understanding what you're following here. Here I hear two different rhythms: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/UiwjBP1S and https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/5oS7HDwP. I recommend you use your rhythm to place emphasis on the second of the two, since the other is just beat spam for the most part, with increases in emphasis towards the later part of the measure: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/LXLsMUc6 See above. This is using the vocals (since these are some of the only accurately timed vocals in the song) while also mapping every other part of the descending beats of whatever instrument you call that. Again, the vocals and ascending tones are mapped with passive emphasis rather than active emphasis, and the most active is on every other 3 note descending beat thing 00:52:005 (5,1,2,5,6,1) - like these since i can't explain it accurately. On the descending beat things that aren't actively emphasized, only their strongest beat is. This provides more variety and a rhythm that manages to follow everything the song provides in an accurate order of priority and emphasis. The vocals are a very important part of the way this rhythm is structured, though. I will consider remapping this part if other people find it to be strange or wrong, but personally I think it's fine.
01:01:434 (1,1,1,1,1) - I mean, yeah - drums have started to come in, but when you focus them this much you're pretty much ignoring what else is going on here. The drums really don't seem to take over as the dominant instrument until 01:03:148 (1). The only part of the song that I have disregarded in this part is a single vocal part that I deemed unimportant. Again, I will change it if it seems odd to anyone else, but this was indeed mapped with consideration given to every part of the song.
01:05:205 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps this big take away from the intense section right up ahead. Changed somewhat.
01:06:920 (5) - I don't really think these work with such strong beats on the red tick. Though I was paying attention to vocals earlier on, I begin to disregard them here in favor of the wubs. The longer bass sound is part of the melody and it is the part the player hears the most and hears first.
01:16:005 (4,7) - Too close for comfort. Make sure to keep your blanket, i'd recommend about the same distance as that: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/Nc7k4lk4 I concur. Fixed.
01:16:863 (9) - Forgot NC Forgot "forgot NC."
01:17:205 (10,11) - Spacing is so high here it takes away emphasis from 01:17:377 (11,12). Changed. I still want to emphasize the drum, but you aren't wrong.
01:20:291 (5) - Rotate 2 degrees counter clockwise to follow the curve with 01:19:605 (1). aight
01:18:577 (2,3,4) - Emphasis distribution isn't too great here since the stronger notes are on the white ticks. I don't understand.
01:26:463 (5,6,1,2,3) - This is the perfect place to go nuts with the spacing since it's the climax of an intense part, but it's pretty underwhelming considering previous spacings. I have huge spacing here and get told to edit it down. I edit it down, and get told to edit it up. I just can't win. Changed.
01:28:520 (3,4,5) - Overkill spacing considering the more intense section is over. This is the remnant of a previous edit, where i only changed the place of one object. Thanks for pointing it out.
02:10:348 (1,2,3,4) - Previous iteration of this pattern at 01:15:491 (1,2,3,4) switched the directions of the second pair of 1/4 sliders, so i'd stay consistent here. For sure.

Most of the stuff repeats in the second kiai. Lots of stuff needs to be polished that isn't really worth pointing out (like blankets) so you should probably polish those up. Spacing varies pretty wildly, I pointed out the ones that I noticed the most though. It's got some good potential in it's structure though.

Good luck!

Thank you! I applied a lot of stuff, denied a bit of Halcyon-related stuff. Looking at this mod and map makes me realize I've gotten 10 times better at mapping since this was uploaded a month ago what the hell

Also, you put a huge amount of effort into this mod, thanks a ton. I really appreciate it, and it's very helpful.

ALL NO CHANGE

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2017-02-02T17:14:15+00:00

Really nice song : o, if you would like a extra i could do one, ofc i do understand you have a set already so just asking :p I asked mir like 1 month ago to ask you but he's lazy af

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-02-02T17:30:58+00:00

C00L wrote:
Really nice song : o, if you would like a extra i could do one, ofc i do understand you have a set already so just asking :p I asked mir like 1 month ago to ask you but he's lazy af

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Shadren

Featured Artist

531 posts

Joined March 2011

Shadren 2017-02-04T21:00:38+00:00

Hi there mod from me and NeilPerry

General: I think you need Easy diff cuz of spred(too much insane diffs)
Mir's insane got unconsistency OD

Evolve:
First of all let me show you some sliaderartts at the beginning which should be aesthetically improved:
00:32:977 (1) - (white points and red not perfect you can make smthing that http://puu.sh/tOlhB/387adbb901.jpg)
00:35:720 (1) - the end of art a bit strange http://puu.sh/tOlmS/8e61fac105.jpg try this
00:38:463 (1) - this
00:55:263 (3) - 00:55:434 (4) - bad idea to mute sliderends here. i hear music. you can degrese slider end on 50-60% rate, but not 5% it's sounds weird
00:56:634 (3,4) - same
00:56:977 (5,6,7) - this tripple inconsistence
01:01:434 (1,1) - rly BIG volume gap. hope you netf it like 95% to 80 or smthing likt this 😨
01:08:291 (6) - dont like angle of this slider. he is out of structure a bit
01:14:805 (5,6) - same about angles. in this situateion angle give bad flow to 6
01:27:834 - this part have rly low sv. but overall dynamic not changed a bit. it looks unconsistency
01:43:948 (5,1) - looks bad
01:49:091 (2) - guess you need nc here to emphaze pattern jump
02:10:005 (7) - this shape not good for this pattering

Sooo. this diff need some improvements. First of all visual improvements. The main problem it's sv changing between parts. This should be more consistency.

Ultima fox:

00:34:348 (2) - offscreen (unranked)
00:26:120 (1) - this reverse not emphaze well (better do smthing like these http://puu.sh/tOo2u/fe09c7ab60.jpg but it's my own opinion and im gya)
00:38:463 (1,2) - sounds weird (cuz of rythmic)
00:38:463 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you should recheck this part. you trying to emphaze vocal but you emphaze sound as well too. try to chenge rythmic structure to emphaze both(sound and vocal)
00:59:720 (5,6,7) - sounds unconstitence
01:01:605 (8,1) - same problems like in last diff. BIG volume gap
01:44:291 (1) - make this shape more perfect
Other looks okaysh.

Mir's insane:
00:04:005 (1,2) - there is 1\1 rythmic but you spaced it like previously 1\2 sliders
Same for further
00:38:634 (2) - rly strange shape 😨
01:01:605 (5,1) - strange volume gap as i told in other diffs
01:26:805 (3,4) - this overlapped not good. make space them a bit
Sooo. this diff gots basic structure, basic rythm. It's okaysh, but wanna see smthing more creative. And need some visual improvments in sliderart part.

Insane:
00:27:491 (1,1) - blanket not perfect
00:38:463 (1) - this wave should be more perfect
00:38:463 (1,1) - same about blanketing
00:58:863 (9,10) - rly hard flow angle
01:01:777 (1) - VOLUME xd
Diff didn't ended.

Kuijin's hard:

Nice diff, cool rythmic, dont find smthing unrankable

Normal:
00:43:263 (2,1) - dont think that this overlapping is good
01:22:863 (2,3) - same
So this diff have some visual and structure problems. like different no reason shapes etc. but it's my own opinion. im dont wanna change your conception of mapping.

Best of luck~

squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2017-02-04T22:09:03+00:00

Shadren wrote:
Normal:
00:43:263 (2,1) - dont think that this overlapping is good Changed
01:22:863 (2,3) - same This one is fine
So this diff have some visual and structure problems. like different no reason shapes etc. but it's my own opinion. im dont wanna change your conception of mapping. I see what you're saying, I usually make little changes to these things as the set gets modded.

Best of luck~

afddfa

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Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-02-05T14:20:05+00:00

Shadren wrote:
00:04:005 (1,2) - there is 1\1 rythmic but you spaced it like previously 1\2 sliders
Same for further - Mun didn't update. It was changed already.
00:38:634 (2) - rly strange shape 😨 - eh
01:01:605 (5,1) - strange volume gap as i told in other diffs
01:26:805 (3,4) - this overlapped not good. make space them a bit
Sooo. this diff gots basic structure, basic rythm. It's okaysh, but wanna see smthing more creative. And need some visual improvments in sliderart part. - I think my slider art is fine.

Thanks.

Also Ultima Fox needs to up his OD or something. I changed mine to 8.5 so he can put his to 8.7. OD 7.2 for a 5* is pretty low.

Update: https://puu.sh/tPrXd/6015a1376a.osu

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Mun 2017-02-12T16:02:55+00:00

Shadren wrote:
Hi there mod from me and NeilPerry

General: I think you need Easy diff cuz of spred(too much insane diffs)
Mir's insane got unconsistency OD

Evolve:
First of all let me show you some sliaderartts at the beginning which should be aesthetically improved:
00:32:977 (1) - (white points and red not perfect you can make smthing that http://puu.sh/tOlhB/387adbb901.jpg) aight
00:35:720 (1) - the end of art a bit strange http://puu.sh/tOlmS/8e61fac105.jpg try this sure.
00:38:463 (1) - this ?
00:55:263 (3) - 00:55:434 (4) - bad idea to mute sliderends here. i hear music. you can degrese slider end on 50-60% rate, but not 5% it's sounds weird There's nothing wrong here. I want these to be silenced completely in a way that the player notices.
00:56:634 (3,4) - same ^
00:56:977 (5,6,7) - this tripple inconsistence This follows the music. The sound this triple follows is not played anywhere else in this section, so it makes sense that you wouldn't hear any more triples in this section.
01:01:434 (1,1) - rly BIG volume gap. hope you netf it like 95% to 80 or smthing likt this 😨 On this part, I changed normal-hitnormal. Instead of just looking at the numbers, listen to it - the drum roll is far quieter than the normal hitsound here, so the volume is raised more so that it is audible for the entirety of the section.
01:08:291 (6) - dont like angle of this slider. he is out of structure a bit A tip for future modding: when you are making a mod, try to explain your thought process. Don't just say "this might be better," say "this might be better, here's why." This particular response also uses the buzzword "structure." That word has 0 definition. You can say that the angles is inconsistent with other sliders' angles in this section, but "i don't like this, it's out of structure" says quite literally nothing.
01:14:805 (5,6) - same about angles. in this situateion angle give bad flow to 6 Entirely subjective. Playing this, it feels comfortable, and nobody who I've asked to playtest this has had any problem on this jump.
01:27:834 - this part have rly low sv. but overall dynamic not changed a bit. it looks unconsistency The SV reflects the intensity of the song. It's not inconsistent as you claim, it just doesn't follow your vision of what the song should be.
01:43:948 (5,1) - looks bad This just may be the most counterproductive suggestion I've ever received in a mod. When you're giving someone a mod, you don't just say 'looks bad,' you tell them what makes something seem abrasive and give a suggestion on how to fix it. This is both deconstructing and lazy.
01:49:091 (2) - guess you need nc here to emphaze pattern jump k
02:10:005 (7) - this shape not good for this pattering huh? It does everything I want it to. It blankets around 02:10:348 (1) - doesn't provide bad flow, and generally is non-problematic.

Sooo. this diff need some improvements. First of all visual improvements. The main problem it's sv changing between parts. This should be more consistency.

Best of luck~

Thanks for trying, but you may want to work on your perception of modding. This is just "the diff doesn't do what I personally want it to. I don't care what the mapper says, this is bad because I disagree with it."

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-02-12T17:13:01+00:00

Su1fu7 wrote:
click
[notice][Ulltima Fox's meme]
Check AI mod, theres few unsnapped objects Fixed
00:16:520 (1) - I understand that you placed spinner here too avoid being like too repetitive with these note into 1/2 slider things but honestly i think this spinner is too long and its kinda boring to play, i would suggest make this spinner a little shorter, for example end it on 00:20:291 - and place four 1/2 sliders or something like that after it? I think it's fine as it is
00:38:634 (2,1) - 00:40:005 (2,1) - 00:41:034 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these things? Fixed

Halfslashed wrote:
[Ultima Fox's Wanna-be Tengaku] racist
Change the diff name to something that isn't a giant meme. d
AR is really high for basically no reason, it just produces an unnecessarily low density without really having patterns to justify this. Please lower this AR. fixed
OD is really low in comparison to the rest of the spread, makes it look like this difficulty really doesn't belong. Raise the OD. fixed
00:16:520 (1) - The background sound could be used as justification to vary the spacing on previous rhythms, but this spinner just looks like "I didn't feel like mapping the same rhythm for this time period." its because of the bg, and the fact that continuing that would be super repetetive
00:22:005 (1,2,1) - Since there aren't beats on the end of half of these, they should all have the same timeline gap to the next. Shorten 00:22:005 (1) to the white tick. fixed
00:26:120 (1) - This repeat doesn't even start on the drums. Try using a circle + 1/2 slider here to switch from the previous beats to the drums more smoothly. fixed
00:28:863 (2,1) - These don't interact well visually. You might want to use a narrower slider or rotate it better. i think its fine
00:37:091 (1,2,1,2) - No real representation of the increasing drum intensity here other than moving upwards on the screen, which doesn't really do the drums justice. I suggest incorporating more 1/2 circles here and perhaps spacing changes.fixed
00:38:634 (2,1) - Literally copy pasted multiple times. This song does repeat, yes, but you could represent in more creative ways. An example would be building different sliders that overlap the same spot, or offsetting it with rotation and slight overlap, or even just moving this around the playfield. fixed
01:01:777 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again not a fan of ignoring the other rhythm here completely, similar to Mun's diff. I also don't like how this stream has a sharp turn on a weaker beat when there's a way better turning spot on 01:02:463 (1). ill fix it when i can find a solution to compensate for all the notes around it
01:04:177 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing decrease doesn't make sense since the song is building up. fixed
01:05:205 (1,2,1,2) - Emphasis is reversed here, the stronger beats are the second two, but you're putting way more emphasis on the first two when they don't deserve it. fixed
01:06:405 (3,4,5) - Whole section uses stacked triples, and these aren't exactly stronger, so I don't see a reason for this spacing.
01:13:605 (6) - Slider end on strong beat, you should make that clickable. fixed
01:14:977 (5,6) - Uncomfortable angle and lack of emphasis here. I suggest Ctrl+G on 01:14:805 (4,5), but you might want a different method of fixing this. its not uncomfortable tho
01:17:377 (3,4,5) - From here you start using more spaced triples, but they're still pretty meaningless since all of the triples are mapping the same sounds. If you're going to do a difficulty increase for the second half of the kiai, then you should be doing it consistently (like with all triples), but I would just recommend you make these stacked.
01:27:148 (1,2,3) - Why not just continue the rhythm you were following for 01:26:463 (1,2,3,4)? Your clicks still end up on vocals, which is what it looks like you switched to, but you also stick with your previous rhythm. theres a slight change in the sound from the song, and also to follow the vocals
01:27:834 - General note - do something to make it seem like the kiai is over. Whether you decrease overall spacing in this section, make rhythms less dense, it doesn't matter. Right now, the absence of triples isn't enough. theres a noticable decrease in sv here to distinguish that the kiai is over
01:28:520 (3,4,5,6,1) - Seems like equal spacing to me, which means you're not emphasizing anything in particular. Please, add some contrast in spacing so that the jumps at least have some meaning.~~not every pattern has to have tons of emphasis thrown in, which in turn seems like adding emphasis for the sake of adding emphasis and not for the actual song~~

Most of your emphasis problems repeat. I pointed out enough instances that you should be able to figure out what need to do to improve this difficulty. Also, see Mun about making the rhythm more consistent overall.d
il se e whta can do about the triples

Shadren wrote:
Ultima fox:

00:34:348 (2) - offscreen (unranked) moved up a bit
00:26:120 (1) - this reverse not emphaze well (better do smthing like these http://puu.sh/tOo2u/fe09c7ab60.jpg but it's my own opinion and im gya) fixed in previous mod dddd
00:38:463 (1,2) - sounds weird (cuz of rythmic) waht
00:38:463 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you should recheck this part. you trying to emphaze vocal but you emphaze sound as well too. try to chenge rythmic structure to emphaze both(sound and vocal) i think i fixed it
00:59:720 (5,6,7) - sounds unconstitence i think it sound fine?
01:01:605 (8,1) - same problems like in last diff. BIG volume gap i didnt do hitsoundS LOL
01:44:291 (1) - make this shape more perfect ok dad
Other looks okaysh.

daddy

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Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-02-12T18:02:04+00:00

Halfslashed wrote:
[Kujinn's Hard]
00:04:005 (5,6) - I like how you're adding contrast to the previous rhythms for this, but this is a simpler rhythm than the previous, so it may not provide the emphasis you're looking for. At least, it doesn't in my opinion. One solution would be to just make 3 stacked 1/2 circles, or use the 1/2 circle + 1/2 slider rhythm here and map reverses to the rest. The former solution is the one I would do - less work and more fun. emphasis wasn't the point of adding the repeat sliders. Its purpose was to remove the boring consistency of circle 1/2 slider rhythm where appropriate. But more I get more mods similar I will consider change.
00:21:491 (7) - If you're going to commit to switching to vocals at 00:20:634 (6), you shouldn't map this, since it confuses what you're following.
00:22:005 (1,1) - Not a fan of how the end of the first slider interacts with the second. It doesn't seem to flow into the next one or connect with it in any sort of way, so I recommend a different design for one of these. I do however, like the interaction between. 00:23:377 (1,1).
00:27:148 (3,1) - Similar situation as the above here, but it's a much simpler fix - just move the second slider down, or the first slider up.
00:32:977 (1,1) - This interaction isn't great either. If the first slider made a neater triangle and was blanketed by the second slider, better, it would be nicer: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/8SpJTB1V. Tbh, the mini "wave" in the second slider is kind of ruining things...
00:41:205 (1,2) - Please, just stack these.
00:55:605 (1) - Looks like an accidental NC.
01:01:348 (7) - There's no sound on this tick, but there is on 01:01:691. removed both triples
01:03:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Makes no real sense to ignore the other 1/4 ticks when you're following drums, and mapped them the last measure. I'd just map reverses here and increase the SV to visually represent the higher intensity. Honestly, getting more opinions on this would also be nice. increased sv, didnt add reversed sliders. I think the 1/2 slider rhythm I used here works better.
01:26:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped triples here, there are no sounds on the blue ticks. Just use a spacing increase to represent the higher intensity.
01:58:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spamming for no real reason. If these beats are actually important, make them clickable so that the player can actually tell.
02:03:491 (1,2,3) - Really tight spacing and bad visuals here. I'd arrange the slider end of 1, head of 3, and 2 into an equilateral triangle.
02:11:120 (4) - Overmapped.

Good luck!

Shadren wrote:
Kuijin's hard:

Nice diff, cool rythmic, dont find smthing unrankable thanks dud!

Best of luck~

thanks for mods!

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