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[Easy]

  1. 00:27:630 (3) - Clap instead of whistle on the tail to correspond with the drum?
  2. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle here seems like enough, the finish isn't accentuating anything significant
  3. 00:38:611 (1) - Same as above
  4. 00:54:297 (1) - Missing clap on the tail
  5. 00:55:865 (2) - Same as above

[Corinn's Normal]

  1. 00:24:493 (5) - Move this slider down a few grids so it can be more in line with distance snap
  2. 00:28:807 (7) - Clap here is more fitting with the drum
  3. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle sounds fine here as there is no cymbal for the finish to emphasize. Meanwhile you can use a finish on 00:33:709 (4)
  4. 00:57:434 (1) - Same here, finish seems like too much

[Misure's Hard]

  1. 00:34:297 (4,5,6) - This is strangely undermapped for a Hard difficulty. The drums play in triplets so consider mapping the red ticks. You could use a rhythm like this that would fit well for a Hard diff:
  2. 01:27:238 (1) - NC?

[Reflection]

  1. 00:08:218 (4,5,6) - The snap here is 1/6. You may want to use a slider to cover it.
  2. 00:41:356 (6) - Missed a clap for the drum
  3. 01:14:003 (2,3,4) - Add claps to these notes like you had at 01:24:885 (1,2,3,4) so your streams are consistent in hitsounding


gl
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-NanoRIPE- wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:728 (4,5) - ctrl g this for vocal
01:01:748 (1) - same as easy cymbals is enough here i guess

Trust wrote:

[Corinn's Normal]

  1. 00:24:493 (5) - Move this slider down a few grids so it can be more in line with distance snap
  2. 00:28:807 (7) - Clap here is more fitting with the drum
  3. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle sounds fine here as there is no cymbal for the finish to emphasize. Meanwhile you can use a finish on 00:33:709 (4)
  4. 00:57:434 (1) - Same here, finish seems like too much
no reply = fixed, thanks boiz

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posted
in hard, for 00:34:101 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd like to follow the strong drum, so keep it for now
others fixed

Thanks both for modding!

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posted

Trust wrote:

from queue

[Easy]

  1. 00:27:630 (3) - Clap instead of whistle on the tail to correspond with the drum? it'd ruin consistency
  2. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle here seems like enough, the finish isn't accentuating anything significant there is a strong cymbal here
  3. 00:38:611 (1) - Same as above ^
  4. 00:54:297 (1) - Missing clap on the tail fixed
  5. 00:55:865 (2) - Same as above fixed


[Reflection]

  1. 00:08:218 (4,5,6) - The snap here is 1/6. You may want to use a slider to cover it. doesn't sound like it :/
  2. 00:41:356 (6) - Missed a clap for the drum it sounds weird with a clap cuz it a softer drum sound than the rest
  3. 01:14:003 (2,3,4) - Add claps to these notes like you had at 01:24:885 (1,2,3,4) so your streams are consistent in hitsounding it'd sound bad because there's already claps on 01:13:513 (2,3,4) -


gl
thanks :)
posted

Agatsu wrote:

  1. 00:08:218 (4,5,6) - The snap here is 1/6. You may want to use a slider to cover it. doesn't sound like it :/
I wouldn't suggest it if I didn't know for a fact this is the case. Refer to this exact timestamp in Misure's diff and the Insane of sodarose's mapset and see for yourself.

Agatsu wrote:

  1. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle here seems like enough, the finish isn't accentuating anything significant there is a strong cymbal here
There isn't. That's just the finish you put there.
posted
fixed both!
posted
Hello! I am from mod queue.

  • [Corinn's Normal]
  1. 00:11:748 - Here would like once again to press. I would add here a circle or 00:11:552 (3) changed in the slider.

    [Misure's Hard]
  2. 00:21:650 (2) - I would add here a circle.

    [Reflection]
  3. 00:13:709 (2) - maybe better move to x=357 and y=330?

    Nothing else is found. Good luck!
posted
@Dron4ik_G: it's more consistent with this rhythm imo so keep it :P

thanks for your modding!
posted
from queue

Easy
01:17:042 (4,1) - this blanket can be improved
00:10:375 (2) - nc here?

other diffs are already 10/10 for me
gl xd
posted

Dron4ik_G wrote:

Hello! I am from mod queue.

  • [Reflection]
  1. 00:13:709 (2) - maybe better move to x=357 and y=330? nah

    Nothing else is found. Good luck!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

from queue

Easy
01:17:042 (4,1) - this blanket can be improved fixed
00:10:375 (2) - nc here? no cause the nc on 00:09:983 (1) - already covers it

other diffs are already 10/10 for me
gl xd
thanks!
posted
q

[Reflection]

00:15:081 (1,2) - space those more to emphasize (2)
00:25:081 (3,4) - blanket
00:44:689 (6,1) - ^
00:48:414 (2,3) - space those more
00:48:611 (3,4) - blanket
00:51:552 (2,3) - space more
00:51:748 (3,4) - blanket
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
01:03:316 (4,3,4,5) - stack those (disable stacking http://puu.sh/tZFtk/478dd3b591.png)
01:21:748 (4,1) - blanket

[Misure]

dang, solid

[Aki]

Nothing

[Easy]

gud

I hope I helped ^^
posted

A r M i N wrote:

q

[Reflection]

00:15:081 (1,2) - space those more to emphasize (2)
00:25:081 (3,4) - blanket
00:44:689 (6,1) - ^
00:48:414 (2,3) - space those more
00:48:611 (3,4) - blanket
00:51:552 (2,3) - space more
00:51:748 (3,4) - blanket
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
01:03:316 (4,3,4,5) - stack those (disable stacking http://puu.sh/tZFtk/478dd3b591.png)
01:21:748 (4,1) - blanket

I hope I helped ^^
fixed all thx :)
posted
Hello! From my queue! I modded it 3 days ago, when i was offline so many points can be fixed!
[General]
  1. In all diffs you have got a timing point and inherited points with other volume. I mean 00:00:964 this part. You have a inherited point you put 60% volume, but in the same point you put a timing point where you have 50% volume. You should to remove inherited point when there isn't any SV change.
  2. I think this green Combo4 colour really doesn't fit to all BGs which you used. To be honest something like 50,105,109 is really better, cause you haven't got any light green in all BGs. My colour have a girl from left in backgrounds you used on Easy and Insane diffs.

[Easy]
  1. You must remove some inherited points, because they are useless and aren't changing anything. This points are: 00:09:983 -, 00:10:375 -, 00:35:473 -.
  2. 00:39:395 (2,3) - To be honest i dont like transition you made here. In my opinion you can make it smoothier, like on screen which i put in box. I think i made flow more comfortable for newbies. Because I'm modding your map with no network I must write you where you should make a nodes in 00:40:179 (3) slider. First grey node make at 112/276, then make a red node at 128/228 and then a grey node at 152/180. Then you should to move 00:41:356 (4) to 188/76 to fix DS.
  3. 00:57:434 (1) - In my opinion you can make a curve here, because i personally don't like when you make a many straight sliders in one point, cause it can be too hard for newbies.
  4. Really nice diff

[Corinn's Normal]
  1. The same thing as Easy with inherited points, so I won't write the same thing two times.
  2. 00:14:689 (4) - I think you can make a circle here, because it's a little weird where you have 1/2 spam in similliar sounds, but you made two other rhythms. To avoid 1/2 spam i prefer you to make a circle against slider which i wrote.
  3. 00:27:238 (4) - Same as above,so won'twrite the same thing.
  4. 00:58:022 (2) - What do you think about made a Ctrl + J 00:57:434 (1) slider for make a natural movement here. It's a little suggestion, because it's only making a little better look, cause pattern now is still nice.
  5. 01:22:336 (4,5) - In my opinion you should to make a 1/1 slider here, because it's hard to follow this rhythm. I think it's better if you doesn't make a second object clickable.
  6. 01:24:885 (2) - It's really confusing why did you put a clap sound in end of slider when it's nothing to emphasize from that loud hitsound.

[Misure's Hard]
  1. 00:08:218 (4) - I think this slider can be a bit complicated. 1/6 beats in Hard diff are a bit too hard. You cna make two circles on red and white tick what will be much more readable than this 1/6 double-repeated slider.
  2. 00:29:591 (2) - What do you think about move this to 31/96 to improve flow a bit? I think a circle what will make 00:29:199 (1,2,3) is more comfortable to aim.
  3. The best diff in map imo.

[Reflection]
  1. 00:21:944 (4) - To be honest this 1/8 slider is overmapped. I can only hear here 1/4 sound, so you should to make here 1/4 double-repeated slider. Altrough it's less funnier to play, but better for read.
  2. 00:38:611 (1,4) - This overlap doesn't looks good, i think it's a bit random. My suggestion is make in this slider a little to up for avoid this a bit ugly overlap.
  3. Also good diff.

END!
I really like your mapping style! Also GDs are fine. It was really hard to catch something, so you should to get BN :)
GOOD LUCK!
posted

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! From my queue! I modded it 3 days ago, when i was offline so many points can be fixed!
[General]
  1. In all diffs you have got a timing point and inherited points with other volume. I mean 00:00:964 this part. You have a inherited point you put 60% volume, but in the same point you put a timing point where you have 50% volume. You should to remove inherited point when there isn't any SV change. fixed
  2. I think this green Combo4 colour really doesn't fit to all BGs which you used. To be honest something like 50,105,109 is really better, cause you haven't got any light green in all BGs. My colour have a girl from left in backgrounds you used on Easy and Insane diffs. the combo colours relate to the video and there's a light green colour shown frequently

[Easy]
  1. You must remove some inherited points, because they are useless and aren't changing anything. This points are: 00:09:983 -, 00:10:375 -, 00:35:473 -. fixed
  2. 00:39:395 (2,3) - To be honest i dont like transition you made here. In my opinion you can make it smoothier, like on screen which i put in box. I think i made flow more comfortable for newbies. Because I'm modding your map with no network I must write you where you should make a nodes in 00:40:179 (3) slider. First grey node make at 112/276, then make a red node at 128/228 and then a grey node at 152/180. Then you should to move 00:41:356 (4) to 188/76 to fix DS. did something similiar
  3. 00:57:434 (1) - In my opinion you can make a curve here, because i personally don't like when you make a many straight sliders in one point, cause it can be too hard for newbies. fixed
  4. Really nice diff


[Reflection]
  1. 00:21:944 (4) - To be honest this 1/8 slider is overmapped. I can only hear here 1/4 sound, so you should to make here 1/4 double-repeated slider. Altrough it's less funnier to play, but better for read. sure
  2. 00:38:611 (1,4) - This overlap doesn't looks good, i think it's a bit random. My suggestion is make in this slider a little to up for avoid this a bit ugly overlap. i really like them overlapped
  3. Also good diff.

END!
I really like your mapping style! Also GDs are fine. It was really hard to catch something, so you should to get BN :)
[color=99aa99]GOOD LUCK![/color]
thanks chalwa!
posted

Dron4ik_G wrote:

  • [Corinn's Normal]
  1. 00:11:748 - Here would like once again to press. I would add here a circle or 00:11:552 (3) changed in the slider. too much already

Chalwa wrote:

[Corinn's Normal]
  1. The same thing as Easy with inherited points, so I won't write the same thing two times. not really an issue but k
  2. 00:14:689 (4) - I think you can make a circle here, because it's a little weird where you have 1/2 spam in similliar sounds, but you made two other rhythms. To avoid 1/2 spam i prefer you to make a circle against slider which i wrote. current one is fine as the bpm is low enough to catch up the player with few 1/2 spams.
  3. 00:27:238 (4) - Same as above,so won'twrite the same thing. ^
  4. 00:58:022 (2) - What do you think about made a Ctrl + J 00:57:434 (1) slider for make a natural movement here. It's a little suggestion, because it's only making a little better look, cause pattern now is still nice. i still prefer the counterflow w
  5. 01:22:336 (4,5) - In my opinion you should to make a 1/1 slider here, because it's hard to follow this rhythm. I think it's better if you doesn't make a second object clickable. vocals, since 01:20:963 (1,2,3) - is following vocals too
  6. 01:24:885 (2) - It's really confusing why did you put a clap sound in end of slider when it's nothing to emphasize from that loud hitsound. there's a drum, trust me
i added some hitsounds i guess
thanks

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posted

Chalwa wrote:

[Misure's Hard]
  1. 00:08:218 (4) - I think this slider can be a bit complicated. 1/6 beats in Hard diff are a bit too hard. You cna make two circles on red and white tick what will be much more readable than this 1/6 double-repeated slider.
    :arrow:will take more advice from others about this :P
  2. 00:29:591 (2) - What do you think about move this to 31/96 to improve flow a bit? I think a circle what will make 00:29:199 (1,2,3) is more comfortable to aim.
    :arrow:kk fixed
  3. The best diff in map imo.
    thanks www
thanks for your modding!

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posted
Hi, as requested :3

[General]
  1. AiMod said:
    1. Tags Conflict with another diffs.
    2. Audio file conflicts with Corinn's Normal
    3. Don't forget to put spacing at the Romanized Title "Colorful. (AnimeVer.)"
[Reflection]
  1. 00:03:905 (7,8) - I think those two ticks here has a same instrument with 00:03:316 (4,5) - without anything added in it? I recommend making a kick slider like 00:03:316 (4,5) - as they sound pretty much the same each other.
  2. 00:04:689 (2) - This has no right to be emphasized or spaced more than 00:04:689 (2,3) - since it's pretty weird that the strong sound is spaced less than a weaker sound. How about emphasizing 00:04:885 (3) - , by making the spacing from 00:04:101 (1,2) - smaller but 00:04:689 (2,3) - bigger. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7337896 Suggesting this as it is similar to the current one.
  3. 00:10:277 - How about nerfing the volume here to about 20%-30% so it gives more impact to the cymbals at 00:10:375 - ? And the sound at 00:10:277 - isn't really important too.
  4. 00:11:356 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Personally, I don't really like the 1/2 rhythm spams as the part is pretty calm and 1/2 rhythm just feels too dense. As you're following the vocals more here than the instruments, I recommend making 00:12:532 (4) - a 1/1 slider like you did at 00:15:669 (3) - and 00:10:964 (3,4) - which has 1/1 rhythm gaps. And also, take a look at 00:25:081 (3) - they're similar each other.
  5. 00:15:081 (1,2) - How about a CTRL+G on rhythm here? It will follow the vocals more if the 1/2 slider is on 00:15:277 - imo.
  6. 00:17:042 (2) - The emphasis given here doesn't give enough impact to the drums as they're similarly spaced, and it's also lower than the others at 00:19:395 (4) - and 00:18:611 (2) - in terms of spacing.
  7. 00:21:748 (2) - If this is a single note to make players that it's a drum, then 00:21:356 (1) - this should be divided into two kick sliders for the drums at 00:21:552 - .
  8. 00:24:885 (2) - Miss emphasis here? You did an emphasis to 00:12:336 (3) - which has a similar section. I suggest emphasizing for consistency.
  9. 00:32:728 (2) - Should've been spaced more for emphasis. Look at 00:33:513 (4) - for instance.
  10. 00:59:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are pretty questionable, because it's spaced so large when the music isn't as intense as the kiai. Not even the kiai has a large spacing like this, or isn't as hard as this as the kiai is filled with sliders.

[]
Emphasis from 00:35:473 - to 00:48:022 - are questionable on some parts like for example, you emphasized the drums at 00:37:826 (4) - by enlarging the spacing but at 00:36:258 (3) - you gave a default spacing you used. And also at 00:39:199 (2) - too, you gave a large spacing for this note and you gave a default spacing for 00:39:395 (3) - even though 00:39:395 (3) - is stronger than the note before. I recommend checking this part as you've been emphasizing drums from the start of the difficulty.
[Hitsounding]
  1. 00:03:218 (3) - Miss clap?
  2. 00:03:709 - Miss clap too.
  3. 00:40:964 - Miss clap too.
  4. 00:16:356 (5) - Miss clap?
  5. 00:21:552 - Miss clap.
That's all, I guess. GL!
posted

William K wrote:

Hi, as requested :3

[General]
  1. AiMod said:
    1. Tags Conflict with another diffs.
    2. Audio file conflicts with Corinn's Normal
    3. Don't forget to put spacing at the Romanized Title "Colorful. (AnimeVer.)"
[Reflection]
  1. 00:03:905 (7,8) - I think those two ticks here has a same instrument with 00:03:316 (4,5) - without anything added in it? I recommend making a kick slider like 00:03:316 (4,5) - as they sound pretty much the same each other.
  2. 00:04:689 (2) - This has no right to be emphasized or spaced more than 00:04:689 (2,3) - since it's pretty weird that the strong sound is spaced less than a weaker sound. How about emphasizing 00:04:885 (3) - , by making the spacing from 00:04:101 (1,2) - smaller but 00:04:689 (2,3) - bigger. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7337896 Suggesting this as it is similar to the current one.
  3. 00:10:277 - How about nerfing the volume here to about 20%-30% so it gives more impact to the cymbals at 00:10:375 - ? And the sound at 00:10:277 - isn't really important too.
  4. 00:11:356 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Personally, I don't really like the 1/2 rhythm spams as the part is pretty calm and 1/2 rhythm just feels too dense. As you're following the vocals more here than the instruments, I recommend making 00:12:532 (4) - a 1/1 slider like you did at 00:15:669 (3) - and 00:10:964 (3,4) - which has 1/1 rhythm gaps. And also, take a look at 00:25:081 (3) - they're similar each other.
  5. 00:15:081 (1,2) - How about a CTRL+G on rhythm here? It will follow the vocals more if the 1/2 slider is on 00:15:277 - imo.
  6. 00:17:042 (2) - The emphasis given here doesn't give enough impact to the drums as they're similarly spaced, and it's also lower than the others at 00:19:395 (4) - and 00:18:611 (2) - in terms of spacing.
  7. 00:21:748 (2) - If this is a single note to make players that it's a drum, then 00:21:356 (1) - this should be divided into two kick sliders for the drums at 00:21:552 - .
  8. 00:24:885 (2) - Miss emphasis here? You did an emphasis to 00:12:336 (3) - which has a similar section. I suggest emphasizing for consistency.
  9. 00:32:728 (2) - Should've been spaced more for emphasis. Look at 00:33:513 (4) - for instance.
  10. 00:59:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are pretty questionable, because it's spaced so large when the music isn't as intense as the kiai. Not even the kiai has a large spacing like this, or isn't as hard as this as the kiai is filled with sliders.

[]
Emphasis from 00:35:473 - to 00:48:022 - are questionable on some parts like for example, you emphasized the drums at 00:37:826 (4) - by enlarging the spacing but at 00:36:258 (3) - you gave a default spacing you used. And also at 00:39:199 (2) - too, you gave a large spacing for this note and you gave a default spacing for 00:39:395 (3) - even though 00:39:395 (3) - is stronger than the note before. I recommend checking this part as you've been emphasizing drums from the start of the difficulty.
[Hitsounding]
  1. 00:03:218 (3) - Miss clap?
  2. 00:03:709 - Miss clap too.
  3. 00:40:964 - Miss clap too.
  4. 00:16:356 (5) - Miss clap?
  5. 00:21:552 - Miss clap.
That's all, I guess. GL!
fixed all thx :)
posted
NM from queue ^-^

General
-the background is the same as an already ranked map, you could change it for more differentiation :Phttps://osu.ppy.sh/s/529594 (but flipped wait what)

Corinn's Normal
00:09:983 (5) - add drum-finish here?
00:35:081 - ^
00:47:630 - ^
01:00:179 - ^
01:25:277 (3) - ^ both head and tail
00:44:101 (4) - how about moving the red anchor here 00:44:395 - to emphasize drum?
00:53:121 (5) - change to 1/2 reverse slider to catch the drum here 00:53:316
01:04:493 - could change up the rhythm a bit here to emphasize the "mawaru mawaru" suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7354927 (if you dont like the NC pattern you could also try a slider-circle variation)
01:17:042 - ^ "meguru meguru"
01:22:728 (5) - change to 1/2 slider for the drum here 01:22:924

Reflection
00:03:709 (5,1) - the DS here is too big imo, make it similar to 00:00:767 (3,1) ?
00:05:865 (2,3) - i think you can space this out more for emphasis on guitar and drum
00:08:414 - add drum-finish hitsound?
00:09:983 - ^
00:16:454 - ^
00:21:846 - ^
00:21:944 - ^
00:22:140 (3,4,1) - ^ ok i wont point out more of that, but if you do add extra drum stuff then apply to all diffs
00:23:513 (3,4) - this pattern is weird imo because the 1/1 spaced stack never occurs anywhere else in the map. also, theres a sound here (guitar i think?) 00:23:316 - 00:23:905 which also occurs at 00:24:885 - 00:25:473. i think you should use the same rhythm as here 00:24:885 (2,3)
00:49:983 (2,3) - space out more for emphasis on the melody and clap
00:53:513 (4,5) - space out for vocals and clap
00:53:120 (2,3) - ^
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
00:57:238 (6,1) - ^ for vocals and finish hitsound
00:51:748 (3,2) - stack?
00:54:101 (6,7) - add claps
01:14:689 (1,2,3) - 1-2 should have lower or same DS as 2-3 imo because 2 only has vocals, while 3 has vocals and a kick drum
01:23:513 (4,5) - space out more for emphasis on vocals + clap. suggestion: stack 5 on tail of 01:22:728 (2)

Good luck~
posted

Yahuri wrote:

NM from queue ^-^

General
-the background is the same as an already ranked map, you could change it for more differentiation :Phttps://osu.ppy.sh/s/529594 (but flipped wait what) i like my flipped bg (= v =)

Reflection
00:03:709 (5,1) - the DS here is too big imo, make it similar to 00:00:767 (3,1) ?
00:05:865 (2,3) - i think you can space this out more for emphasis on guitar and drum
00:08:414 - add drum-finish hitsound?
00:09:983 - ^
00:16:454 - ^
00:21:846 - ^
00:21:944 - ^
00:22:140 (3,4,1) - ^ ok i wont point out more of that, but if you do add extra drum stuff then apply to all diffs not a big fan of drum-finish
00:23:513 (3,4) - this pattern is weird imo because the 1/1 spaced stack never occurs anywhere else in the map. also, theres a sound here (guitar i think?) 00:23:316 - 00:23:905 which also occurs at 00:24:885 - 00:25:473. i think you should use the same rhythm as here 00:24:885 (2,3)
00:49:983 (2,3) - space out more for emphasis on the melody and clap
00:53:513 (4,5) - space out for vocals and clap
00:53:120 (2,3) - ^
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
00:57:238 (6,1) - ^ for vocals and finish hitsound
00:51:748 (3,2) - stack?
00:54:101 (6,7) - add claps
01:14:689 (1,2,3) - 1-2 should have lower or same DS as 2-3 imo because 2 only has vocals, while 3 has vocals and a kick drum
01:23:513 (4,5) - space out more for emphasis on vocals + clap. suggestion: stack 5 on tail of 01:22:728 (2)

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