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Sidetail

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-04T01:15:08+00:00

HM02CauseImFly wrote:
From Q. Modding because why not?
Matsu
00:05:354 (1) - The blanket is off fixed!
00:06:041 (2) - Same^ fixed!
00:09:018 (1) - The could be moved forwards to blanket in order to enhance aesthetics fixed!
00:23:674 (1) - The Slider before should flow into the head of this slider imo. I think this would improve flow ?
00:24:361 (2) - The previous should flow into this as well.?
00:27:338 (1,2,3) - Why the big change of spacing? fixed!
01:55:277 (1) - I think this should be moved to increase flow of the jumps current one seems okay!
02:13:598 (1) - That's a damn cool slider thanks ^^!

Easy
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think new players will be able to play this properly. Maybe change to a full beat slider? should be fine since is simple enough to be hit with ease and there is plenty of time between next note.
00:21:384 (2) - Same^
00:25:048 (2) - Same^
01:07:644 (1) - Perhaps have the slider before flow into this? i would but it will make it more complex for easy diff haha
01:44:056 (1) - Same as before fixed
02:09:934 (1) - Maybe change the shape of the slider? It's not the nicest looking ever tbh, I would've used the slider from insane but that would be too confusing for easy diff players, so i stuck with simple shape. I'll polly change it to something that looks nice if it bothers me later one xD

Thanks for mod!

oop not sure why it easy dif mod reply is in green colour, hopefully you can use highlight!

Boruma

90 posts

Joined August 2014

Boruma 2017-04-08T00:38:36+00:00

Easy

Length of beatmap is 4 seconds less than your other difficulties.

Normal

Your normal difficulty appears rather particularly cluttered with close notes.
Maybe increase the distance spacing to 1.0x?
It gets rather repetitive fast with all the close notes and it appears you're just going in very wide circles in the beginning part of 00:12:682 (1) - 00:31:002 (1) .
I recommend at least making paths in which differ in course from the original circle motions ie. sliders that are perpendicular to the previous slider.
It's not particularly fun to play in my opinion compared to your easy difficulty.
Other than that, no real problems.
It's more so an optional suggestion.

Gaia's Hard

There seems to be a spinner that extends the beatmap far further than your other difficulties.
Maybe remove it, so it can match all your other difficulties' lengths.

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-04-08T01:09:04+00:00

m4m from roastin q

[Easy]
00:12:682 (1,1) - The first slider is a bit curved wider (less curved) than the 2nd one. Minor aesthetic, but it would be better if u copy pasta and rotated/flip to make it look more even.
00:17:720 (2) - Try to avoid 1/2 sliders on easies, especial when the difficulty is only 1.2ish. You maybe be trying to map to that loud piano sound, but mapping to the beat is a lot more simple for beginners to play. The piano melody in this case adds quite a bit of complexity to the rhythm (which is why we wouldn't want to continue mapping to the piano at 00:18:865 - ). That also means that that 1/2 slider is the only one that's mapped to the piano while the rest of the pianos are ignored. which makes it kinda weird. Applies to other occurrences as well.
00:17:720 (2,1,2) - Not a big fan of 3/2 rhythms and missing big white ticks on easies. They are sometimes okay if the music have obvious distinct sounds that support it, but imo, that's not the case with this portion of the song. possibly make the rhythm simple like this (Applies to other occurrences): https://i.gyazo.com/545243037bea856c7d9 ... 9d5136.jpg
00:25:964 (1) - slider doesn't look too good imo. If you want to make a curvy slider like that, try to make it as symmetrical as possible. And even if you make it symmetrical, you should keep it horizontal or vertical instead of trying to angle it, cause imo if you angle it, it would lose it's symmetrical look. https://i.gyazo.com/b47f90ea72bca459bc9 ... 85a49b.jpg
00:57:796 (2) - not sure if this slider is ok on easy. I haven't come across an easy with 1/2 repeating slider. might wanna check on that.
01:01:002 (2,1) - copy (2) and paste + rotate 180 degrees (and then make it repeat). Just more symmetrical patterns that could help on the aesthetics
01:26:422 (1) - delete NC
01:51:613 (1,1) - same, althought not really noticeable, it's a good habit to make these perfectly symmetrical by copy pasting and rotating.
01:55:277 (1) - Might want to curve this side of the pentagon to make all the sides curved (and minor blanket to that next slider): https://i.gyazo.com/5234c5e5ff56870a6fa ... 568ae8.jpg

[Normal]
00:09:934 (2) - random red anchored slider. Should just be curve like the rest.
I think the map could use some more 2/1 breaks, so it's not a long chain of overlapping objects.
i suk at mapping and modding normals sowwy

[Hard]
00:09:705 (2) - Could move to x216 y174 so that both the sliderhead and the sliderend and the sliderend of 00:09:018 (1) - make a equaliteral triangle. If you think the spacing is too big, you could move it closer to maybe like x218 y191 so it's at least an isosceles triangle.
00:33:522 (6,7) - Possible way to improve this aestheitcally: https://i.gyazo.com/1b44747535e784dfea4 ... ea156d.jpg The red lines indicate that they should be equal spaced and the green lines indicate that they should be parallel.
01:00:315 - not too big of a problem, but the slowdown of the SV felt kinda too much at first look. Maybe up the SV just a bit.
01:11:308 (1,2,3) - fix spacing, should be equal (at 1.3x)
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - the angles between the notes are kinda inconsistent. it would look nicer if the angles are consistent
02:12:682 (1,2) - Kinda weird to how there are 1/2 drum beats on this section and its mapped to 1/2 sliders, while 02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are repeating sliders, yet they are only 1/1 drum beats on that section. Just something to point out cause i thought that was weird. I know the repeating sliders are mapped to those 1/4 clap sounds, but it just felt underwhelming for 02:12:682 (1,2) - to be sliders. Maybe make them circles to emphasize the drums rather than the claps.

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Light Insane is only 3.34*

Why not map starting 00:01:690 - ? Even though it's a GD, even the easy difficulty starts at this part, so I don't think it would be a problem mapping starting from the very beginning.
00:26:422 (3,4) - make it symmetrical. copy+paste+rotate180
00:26:880 (4,1) - bad flow, even though there's a loud sound. Combined with 00:26:422 (3) - , the player has to move back and forth a lot which is very uncomfortable to play.
00:40:163 (1,2) - could make symmetrical
00:48:407 (4,5) - slightly off from being symmetrical, although unnoticeable during gameplay. This is happening in some other similar patterns, idk if it's intentional.
01:06:499 (2,3) - too big spacing, and 01:07:186 (3,1) - should be bigger spacing to emphasize the loud sound there

[Matsu]
00:36:041 (3,1,2) - looks like a pattern, but I don't think (3) should be included with (1) and (2) in a pattern since they are in different combos.
00:17:491 (3,4,1) - could make into a equilateral triangle
00:18:865 (2,3) - I feel like it should be circle slider, not slider circle. The white ticks just feels stronger there so it should be clickable. Applies to all instances.
01:21:384 (3,4,5) - ^
01:47:033 (4,5,6,7) - Could make a cleaner shape pattern (parallelogram or rhombus)
02:13:598 (1) - :O
dun see too many problems here.

gl

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-08T02:03:55+00:00

Boruma wrote:
Easy
Length of beatmap is 4 seconds less than your other difficulties. thats fine

Normal
Your normal difficulty appears rather particularly cluttered with close notes.
Maybe increase the distance spacing to 1.0x?
It gets rather repetitive fast with all the close notes and it appears you're just going in very wide circles in the beginning part of 00:12:682 (1) - 00:31:002 (1) .
I recommend at least making paths in which differ in course from the original circle motions ie. sliders that are perpendicular to the previous slider.
It's not particularly fun to play in my opinion compared to your easy difficulty.
Other than that, no real problems.
It's more so an optional suggestion. I have been thinking to get a GD to do normal for this map. So yeah thanks for having a look regardless

Ohwow wrote:
m4m from roastin q

[Easy]
00:12:682 (1,1) - The first slider is a bit curved wider (less curved) than the 2nd one. Minor aesthetic, but it would be better if u copy pasta and rotated/flip to make it look more even. err ok
00:17:720 (2) - Try to avoid 1/2 sliders on easies, especial when the difficulty is only 1.2ish. You maybe be trying to map to that loud piano sound, but mapping to the beat is a lot more simple for beginners to play. The piano melody in this case adds quite a bit of complexity to the rhythm (which is why we wouldn't want to continue mapping to the piano at 00:18:865 - ). That also means that that 1/2 slider is the only one that's mapped to the piano while the rest of the pianos are ignored. which makes it kinda weird. Applies to other occurrences as well. remapped that part. Easy used to have piano keysounding that is why it has those short sliders.
00:17:720 (2,1,2) - Not a big fan of 3/2 rhythms and missing big white ticks on easies. They are sometimes okay if the music have obvious distinct sounds that support it, but imo, that's not the case with this portion of the song. possibly make the rhythm simple like this (Applies to other occurrences): https://i.gyazo.com/545243037bea856c7d9 ... 9d5136.jpg ^
00:25:964 (1) - slider doesn't look too good imo. If you want to make a curvy slider like that, try to make it as symmetrical as possible. And even if you make it symmetrical, you should keep it horizontal or vertical instead of trying to angle it, cause imo if you angle it, it would lose it's symmetrical look. https://i.gyazo.com/b47f90ea72bca459bc9 ... 85a49b.jpg errr ok
00:57:796 (2) - not sure if this slider is ok on easy. I haven't come across an easy with 1/2 repeating slider. might wanna check on that. ill leave it for now and polly ask someone later on
01:01:002 (2,1) - copy (2) and paste + rotate 180 degrees (and then make it repeat). Just more symmetrical patterns that could help on the aesthetics err ok
01:26:422 (1) - delete NC that is following nc pattern. NCing every object that hits major downbeat.
01:51:613 (1,1) - same, althought not really noticeable, it's a good habit to make these perfectly symmetrical by copy pasting and rotating. its really really negligible...
01:55:277 (1) - Might want to curve this side of the pentagon to make all the sides curved (and minor blanket to that next slider): https://i.gyazo.com/5234c5e5ff56870a6fa ... 568ae8.jpg er ok

[Normal]
00:09:934 (2) - random red anchored slider. Should just be curve like the rest.
I think the map could use some more 2/1 breaks, so it's not a long chain of overlapping objects.
i suk at mapping and modding normals sowwy
its fine since remap coming.

[Matsu]
00:36:041 (3,1,2) - looks like a pattern, but I don't think (3) should be included with (1) and (2) in a pattern since they are in different combos. its fine
00:17:491 (3,4,1) - could make into a equilateral triangle all right
00:18:865 (2,3) - I feel like it should be circle slider, not slider circle. The white ticks just feels stronger there so it should be clickable. Applies to all instances. fixed
01:21:384 (3,4,5) - ^ current is ok
01:47:033 (4,5,6,7) - Could make a cleaner shape pattern (parallelogram or rhombus) fxied
02:13:598 (1) - :O :O
dun see too many problems here. Thanks for mod!

gl

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-04-08T16:58:14+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
m4m from roastin q

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Light Insane is only 3.34* :(
Why not map starting 00:01:690 - ? Even though it's a GD, even the easy difficulty starts at this part, so I don't think it would be a problem mapping starting from the very beginning. alright, mapped!
00:26:422 (3,4) - make it symmetrical. copy+paste+rotate180 sure
00:26:880 (4,1) - bad flow, even though there's a loud sound. Combined with 00:26:422 (3) - , the player has to move back and forth a lot which is very uncomfortable to play. mm i did something
00:40:163 (1,2) - could make symmetrical k
00:48:407 (4,5) - slightly off from being symmetrical, although unnoticeable during gameplay. This is happening in some other similar patterns, idk if it's intentional. lol im just lazy
01:06:499 (2,3) - too big spacing, and 01:07:186 (3,1) - should be bigger spacing to emphasize the loud sound there kk

gl

thank you for modding! I'll consider buffing if I ever need to.

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Hectic

511 posts

Joined August 2015

Hectic 2017-04-13T19:14:54+00:00

Hello there. From queue

Matsu

00:03:064 (3) - would put nc here, not next circle (00:06:728 (3) - same)
00:26:193 (2,1) - stack maybe? If no, then why 00:26:193 (2,1) - are stacked?
00:50:697 (3) - making this bent would be nicer
00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy
02:00:773 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't look nice
02:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this accurate

Rhythm seems fine, hitsounds are great, but object placement feels awkward sometimes. Also check blankets, some of them are not perfect

SolarFox's Light Insane

00:05:354 (1,2) - hnnnnnng (blanket)
00:15:659 - maybe make snare sound clickable?
00:30:086 (3,4) - move them closer to each other (you did so there 00:45:201 (6,1) - )
01:57:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow there can be improved

Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-14T11:33:36+00:00

Metadata check - done.

IamKwaN wrote:
looks cool to me

References:
+ http://yanaginagi.net/disco/?paged=5
+ http://yanaginagi.net/profile/
+ http://www.ichika-ichika.com/goods.html
+ http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/30300/303 ... 730373.jpg
+ http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/30300/303 ... 730034.jpg
+ https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vidro

good luck!

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-04-15T07:29:12+00:00

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hello there. From queue
SolarFox's Light Insane
00:05:354 (1,2) - hnnnnnng (blanket) barely noticeable lol, fixed slightly idk if its good
00:15:659 - maybe make snare sound clickable? sure
00:30:086 (3,4) - move them closer to each other (you did so there 00:45:201 (6,1) - ) kk
01:57:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow there can be improved stacked (3) on (1), I want to keep 01:58:712 (7,1) -
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!

thanksss

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TitleUnicode:ビードロ模様
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags:waiting in the summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia
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392,119,80926,2,0,P|399:84|397:38,1,80,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
327,176,81384,2,0,B|354:265|303:256|327:340,1,160,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,295,82071,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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274,164,84132,5,0,3:0:0:0:
341,349,84361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,184,84590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,240,84819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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243,332,85277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,164,85506,1,10,0:0:0:0:
341,349,85735,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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241,229,87338,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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295,115,88025,1,0,3:0:0:0:
295,115,88140,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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317,238,91690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,279,91919,2,0,P|411:245|400:203,1,80,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
317,238,92377,2,0,P|278:233|238:233,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,201,92835,2,0,P|122:199|158:190,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,119,93293,5,0,3:0:0:0:
404,95,93522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,208,93751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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101,301,98331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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259,330,103827,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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325,300,105201,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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468,213,117338,2,0,L|512:221,2,35.9999989013672,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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314,176,118025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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208,136,118712,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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198,148,120086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-15T08:58:15+00:00

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hello there. From queue

Matsu
00:03:064 (3) - would put nc here, not next circle (00:06:728 (3) - same) Strictly following NC pattern B(
00:26:193 (2,1) - stack maybe? If no, then why 00:26:193 (2,1) - are stacked? fixed to your suggestion but these are the problems that will probably go forever like 00:27:338 (1,5) - after applying your fix xD
00:50:697 (3) - making this bent would be nicer okay fixed.
00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy Those are okay :l
02:00:773 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't look nice fixed.
02:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this accurate ?? if you're talking about shape. i think you missed out on shape:
02:08:560 (2,3,4) - triangle, 02:09:247 (5,6,7) - another triangle

Rhythm seems fine, hitsounds are great, but object placement feels awkward sometimes. Also check blankets, some of them are not perfect xD Thanks!
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-04-26T13:40:47+00:00

M4M

[Easy]

CS2.5 is better
I am using too much NC
00:03:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC
00:18:636 (2) - Ctrl+J is better
00:20:010 (4) - Add NC 00:21:384 (1) - remove NC
00:25:048 (1) - remove NC
00:43:827 (1) - It is up to you to fix it
suggesthttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925745 Distance is no problem
00:52:987 (1) - ^
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925752
00:57:796 (2) - Let's refrain from 1/2 in Easy
00:58:483 - Will you pick up the sound?
01:26:422 (1) - remove NC
01:31:460 (1) -
02:03:980 (2) - bad flow
X:312 Y:196 is better
02:06:270 (1) - stack X:312 Y:196
02:09:476 (2,1) - overlap

[Matsu]

00:10:277 - You can add a circle here
00:15:659 (4,5) - Ctrl+G is better
00:18:865 (2) - Bad position
suggest X:128 Y:276
01:29:628 (1,3) - symmetrical is better
01:33:293 (1,2) - ^
01:47:949 (1) - Ctrl+G is better
01:57:796 (3,5) - Add NC
02:13:598 (1) - Good!

Good luck

Sidetail

1,268 posts

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Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-26T23:38:46+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
M4M

[Easy]
CS2.5 is better Current is fine
I am using too much NC
00:03:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC I redone entire NC
00:18:636 (2) - Ctrl+J is better ok
00:20:010 (4) - Add NC 00:21:384 (1) - remove NC
00:25:048 (1) - remove NC
00:43:827 (1) - It is up to you to fix it I like current one
suggesthttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925745 Distance is no problem
00:52:987 (1) - ^ fixed.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925752
00:57:796 (2) - Let's refrain from 1/2 in Easy fixed
00:58:483 - Will you pick up the sound? I like current version
01:26:422 (1) - remove NC
01:31:460 (1) -
02:03:980 (2) - bad flowfixed but i didnt use that
X:312 Y:196 is better
02:06:270 (1) - stack X:312 Y:196i wouldnt overlap anything in easy even though it is allowed
02:09:476 (2,1) - overlap fixed

[Matsu]
00:10:277 - You can add a circle here I want to keep it simple :l
00:15:659 (4,5) - Ctrl+G is better i like current
00:18:865 (2) - Bad position
suggest X:128 Y:276 i like current
01:29:628 (1,3) - symmetrical is better fixed
01:33:293 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:47:949 (1) - Ctrl+G is better if I do that, next set of notes dont follow very well
01:57:796 (3,5) - Add NC keeping NC pattern
02:13:598 (1) - Good! Thanks xD
Good luck

thanks a lot!

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-04-29T19:03:57+00:00

Hi~
I asked me to do mod for you)
So i do

I notice some things that is too prominent.

Easy

01:40:621 (1) - if u do such slider than do it symmetrically;
01:55:277 (3) - here also;
01:44:285 (2) - new combo;
01:46:117 (1) - continue combo;
01:47:949 (1) - new combo;
01:49:781 (1) - continue combo;
01:51:613 (4) - new combo;
01:53:445 (1) - continue combo.

Akitoshi's Normal

01:27:567 (4) - add circle with clap.

Gaia's Hard

Why is there no kiai?
00:19:552 (8,1) - do this sliders parallel to each other;
01:13:827 (1,2,1) - i think it would be better

SolarFox's Light Insane

Why there is also no kiai?
Good diff!
I can't notice something wrong)

Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - correct this slider, a little move dot, so that it will be ideal)

00:43:369 (4,1) - the same;
01:19:323 (2,3) - the same;
01:20:468 (1,2,3) - the same;
01:24:132 (1,2) - the same;
01:47:949 (1,2) - the same;
01:51:613 (1,2) - the same;
02:13:598 (1) - this slider is so awesome!!!

Good luck to rank it!

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Mun 2017-04-30T01:18:33+00:00

here we go

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-30T23:13:48+00:00

Mun-key Business

Sidetail

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-30T23:14:37+00:00

elena2705 wrote:
Easy

01:40:621 (1) - if u do such slider than do it symmetrically; fixed
01:55:277 (3) - here also; looks ok
01:44:285 (2) - new combo; for NC things, i usually strongly stick with nc rhythm unless reading is hard (then I would break the rhythm)
01:46:117 (1) - continue combo;
01:47:949 (1) - new combo;
01:49:781 (1) - continue combo;
01:51:613 (4) - new combo;
01:53:445 (1) - continue combo.

Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - correct this slider, a little move dot, so that it will be ideal) thanks i'll fix some sliders that doesnt look nice.

00:43:369 (4,1) - the same;
01:19:323 (2,3) - the same;
01:20:468 (1,2,3) - the same;
01:24:132 (1,2) - the same;
01:47:949 (1,2) - the same;
01:51:613 (1,2) - the same;
02:13:598 (1) - this slider is so awesome!!! thanks~

Good luck to rank it!

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-05-01T00:57:09+00:00

from q

Matsu

00:23:674 (1) - this slider doesnt really look fit, look at 00:21:613 (1) - and 00:25:277 (1) - , they are all perfect curved sliders
00:30:086 (4) - i think this could be a little misleading, since 00:29:399 (2) - is repeating less (just pointing out)
01:16:575 (6) - nc should start here since it is a part of triplet slider
01:36:728 (6) - ^
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4) - why isnt this 8 combo like 01:41:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Gaia's Hard

00:38:331 (1) - i think if the slider shape was like 00:39:018 (2) - it'd look better
01:58:712 (1) - nc here instead

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-05-01T03:53:11+00:00

(日本語でいいとのことだったのでmapperの難易度は日本語で書きます。　わからないとこあったら言ってください（google翻訳します。）)

im not good at english
i use google translation

General
kiaiがないdiffがあります。確認してください。

Easy
01:28:712 (4) - hpbar
01:35:125 (3) - ^
01:44:285 (2) - 規則的にいくとここがNCだと思うんですが、どうでしょう？
そうなるとこれ以降がずれてます。

LightInsane
00:31:002 (1,2,3) - keep ds
https://i.gyazo.com/b6019d607804ab4239f ... ef2c94.png
00:35:583 (3) - crtl+g?
00:48:865 (5) - I think that it is better to follow DS as it is a calm part.
01:32:377 (4) - https://i.gyazo.com/433386966f5339a775e ... 00bbfc.png
01:41:537 (3) - NC

Matsu
01:18:636 (1,2) - ここの流れが少し気になります。
(2)は(1)より上に置くといいかもしれません。（ここはkiaiの中なので飛ばしても問題ないと思います。）
https://i.gyazo.com/f50a9062eb77708839d ... 41c0e7.png

01:31:919 (3,4) - (4)が強いボーカルなので、ここは01:31:690 (2,3) -より飛ばすべきです。
加えて01:31:919 (3,4) - を強調させたいので、あえて01:31:460 (1,2) - のDSを狭めてもいいかもしれません。。
https://gyazo.com/79b5ead4bad65913a07c8515efea11a5

連打パート（01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ）のNCが4-8-4で置かれてるんですが、意図的でしょうか？

02:13:598 (1) - すごいｗｗ

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SolarFox

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SolarFox 2017-05-01T16:48:47+00:00

elena2705 wrote:
Hi~
I asked me to do mod for you)
So i do
I notice some things that is too prominent.

SolarFox's Light Insane

Why there is also no kiai? i'm a gaia fanboiiii (it's rankable without it c:)
Good diff!
I can't notice something wrong) thanks

Good luck to rank it!

Asuka_- wrote:
(日本語でいいとのことだったのでmapperの難易度は日本語で書きます。　わからないとこあったら言ってください（google翻訳します。）)

im not good at english
i use google translation

General
kiaiがないdiffがあります。確認してください

LightInsane
00:31:002 (1,2,3) - keep ds ok
https://i.gyazo.com/b6019d607804ab4239f ... ef2c94.png
00:35:583 (3) - crtl+g? ok
00:48:865 (5) - I think that it is better to follow DS as it is a calm part. sure
01:32:377 (4) - https://i.gyazo.com/433386966f5339a775e ... 00bbfc.png https://puu.sh/vCdg4/04da5c21ed.jpg これならどうでしょう
01:41:537 (3) - NC sure

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Thank you

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Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2017-05-03T13:08:35+00:00

Small post from a random forum post I (and Yoshimaro) saw of the map:

The top diff has an unrankable green line on 00:01:690 - , since the sample set is different from the timing line. I would remove the green line and add a S:C50 sampleset on the timing line instead, since it has the same effect.

Also, the keysounding doesn't have clap feedback, which it should imo. This can even be done with a very quiet clap, it doesn't have to be that strong. (I would expect BN's to have a very strong opinion regarding that) (this is both in regards to the first and the second half)

01:33:980 - This note has a finish on all diffs, and it's oddly inconsistent, so I'd remove that on all diffs.

02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.)

Unused hitsounds: soft-hitwhistle44 and 48, so either use those or remove them

Also, sexy sliderart :^)

On the easy:
the only thing I found to be quite odd in terms of rhythm is 00:17:720 (2,3,4) - and the next patterns too (for ~10-15 seconds), where the downbeat on 00:18:178 - is ignored while still being strong. I would start a single tap from 00:17:720 - and then add the next two sliders afterwards, since that follows the song better imo.

Visually, 00:49:323 (1,3) - compared to 00:54:819 (3,1) - is a little unpolished, and I would either put the second pattern closer, or the other further away.

01:55:277 (3) - a new guideline suggests that all overlaps on easier diffs on sliders should have a very clear path, and starting out with an overlap can be very deceiving for new players. same applies to 02:09:934 (1) - this slider.

on light insane, 01:58:712 (7,1) - I would ctrl+J this due to having a clean transition, the currently is quite wonky https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7988360

but yeah, not really supposed to be a mod, but I just wanted to mention the important things I found ^^ GL

))

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-05-03T14:12:24+00:00

[Jenn] wrote:
from q

Matsu

00:23:674 (1) - this slider doesnt really look fit, look at 00:21:613 (1) - and 00:25:277 (1) - , they are all perfect curved sliders Just like those two curved sliders, there is another sliders that improves variety. As you pointed 00:21:613 (1) - , this is paired with 00:20:010 (1) - and 00:25:277 (1) - is paired with 00:23:674 (1) - . I do think consistency is good thing, but consistency with shapes at this level is insignificant in terms of play-ability.
00:30:086 (4) - i think this could be a little misleading, since 00:29:399 (2) - is repeating less (just pointing out) Yes, I thought about this as well, but it seems fine after numourous of testplays by different people. I would've changed it by now if this didn't play nicely.
01:16:575 (6) - nc should start here since it is a part of triplet slider Strictly following my NC pattern which is NCing every downbeat.
01:36:728 (6) - ^
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4) - why isnt this 8 combo like 01:41:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ~~If I strictly follow my NC pattern I mentioned earlier, the combos would get pretty high. I thought changing NC for every snare hit would be nice.~~ look below for further explanation!
Thanks~

Asuka_- wrote:
(日本語でいいとのことだったのでmapperの難易度は日本語で書きます。　わからないとこあったら言ってください（google翻訳します。）)

im not good at english
i use google translation 大丈夫ですよ～

General
kiaiがないdiffがあります。確認してください。もう分かっています。Kiaiはランキングクライティアリアで「オプショナル」と言っています。

Easy
01:28:712 (4) - hpbar　はい
01:35:125 (3) - ^　はい
01:44:285 (2) - 規則的にいくとここがNCだと思うんですが、どうでしょう？
そうなるとこれ以降がずれてます。あっ、わすれました。

Matsu
01:18:636 (1,2) - ここの流れが少し気になります。
(2)は(1)より上に置くといいかもしれません。（ここはkiaiの中なので飛ばしても問題ないと思います。）
https://i.gyazo.com/f50a9062eb77708839d ... 41c0e7.png　大丈夫だと思います。

01:31:919 (3,4) - (4)が強いボーカルなので、ここは01:31:690 (2,3) -より飛ばすべきです。
加えて01:31:919 (3,4) - を強調させたいので、あえて01:31:460 (1,2) - のDSを狭めてもいいかもしれません。。
https://gyazo.com/79b5ead4bad65913a07c8515efea11a5　（２，３）は大丈夫だと思いますけど、（３，４）のパトを直しました。

連打パート（01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ）のNCが4-8-4で置かれてるんですが、意図的でしょうか？~~はい、意図的です。毎スネア　ドラムにNCしました。~~ たくさんModの後で、直するのを決めました。下のModに理由があります。

02:13:598 (1) - すごいｗｗ　３９！

返信は英語でも大丈夫ですｗ（頑張って翻訳します！）ぼくは日本語を勉強していますから、練習のために日本語で書きました！ありがとうございます！
GL~(^^♪

Spork Lover wrote:
Small post from a random forum post I (and Yoshimaro) saw of the map:

The top diff has an unrankable green line on 00:01:690 - , since the sample set is different from the timing line. I would remove the green line and add a S:C50 sampleset on the timing line instead, since it has the same effect. oops, thanks for pointing that out.

Also, the keysounding doesn't have clap feedback, which it should imo. This can even be done with a very quiet clap, it doesn't have to be that strong. (I would expect BN's to have a very strong opinion regarding that) (this is both in regards to the first and the second half) I will probably get back to this since this is sort of a major change!

01:33:980 - This note has a finish on all diffs, and it's oddly inconsistent, so I'd remove that on all diffs. all right. removed.

02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.) After few mods pointing this out, I'll apply it. My reasoning for that NCing was using it in tasteful way (NC every snare drum), but I guess it didn't turn out very well.

Unused hitsounds: soft-hitwhistle44 and 48, so either use those or remove them　fixed.

Also, sexy sliderart :^) :^)

On the easy:
the only thing I found to be quite odd in terms of rhythm is 00:17:720 (2,3,4) - and the next patterns too (for ~10-15 seconds), where the downbeat on 00:18:178 - is ignored while still being strong. I would start a single tap from 00:17:720 - and then add the next two sliders afterwards, since that follows the song better imo. changed all the rhythm

Visually, 00:49:323 (1,3) - compared to 00:54:819 (3,1) - is a little unpolished, and I would either put the second pattern closer, or the other further away. hopefully it's better now

01:55:277 (3) - a new guideline suggests that all overlaps on easier diffs on sliders should have a very clear path, and starting out with an overlap can be very deceiving for new players. same applies to 02:09:934 (1) - this slider. fixed both!

but yeah, not really supposed to be a mod, but I just wanted to mention the important things I found ^^ GL )) hey, thanks a lot!

Last edited by Sidetail 2017-05-03T15:50:13+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2017-05-03T15:07:57+00:00

BetaStar wrote:
02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.) After few mods pointing this out, I'll apply it. My reasoning for that NCing was using it in tasteful way (NC every snare drum), but I guess it didn't turn out very well.

If you wanted to keep the NC'ing, you could've done some kicksliders on the 1,2,3,4 sections, and then added 2x 1 --> 8 streams instead

that could've probably worked too, as long as there's audible emphasis from the song to do it ^^

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-05-03T15:31:14+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
BetaStar wrote:
02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.) After few mods pointing this out, I'll apply it. My reasoning for that NCing was using it in tasteful way (NC every snare drum), but I guess it didn't turn out very well.
If you wanted to keep the NC'ing, you could've done some kicksliders on the 1,2,3,4 sections, and then added 2x 1 --> 8 streams instead that could've probably worked too, as long as there's audible emphasis from the song to do it ^^

Thanks for further explanation!

Mun

468 posts

Joined July 2015

Mun 2017-05-04T04:06:11+00:00

heil there
as promised

[Matsu]
00:01:690 (1,2,3) - The distance between all these objects is pretty much the same, but the timing gap between 1 and 2 is 2/4 of a beat, while 2-3 is a full beat. This discrepancy not being reflected in visual distance is bound to cause misreadings.
00:09:934 (3,4) - It's pretty subjective and nitpicky, but generic semi-straight sliders like this often look best when they are close to being vertical or horizontal, rather than diagonal.
00:15:659 (4,5) - Both of these notes are the same intensity (strong), and yet 00:14:972 (2,3) - (weaker sound) is a greater spacing than 00:15:430 (3,4) - making your spacing emphasis rather backwards here. I would decrease spacing to 3 and increase spacing to 4.
00:16:346 (1,2,3) - sorry for nitpick ;-; this is a very cool pattern, but the circle is actually not in the middle, nor does it blanket to either slider around it. It'd be a bit more solid if you actually blanketed it.
00:19:094 (3,4,1) - The entire section is almost bereft of straight sliders, why do you start and stop using them within this one short pattern?
00:27:338 (1,3) - You remember that pattern 2 mods up where I nitpicked a blanket? That's a really cool combination of a long slider and a short slider to imply a full circle, I'd suggest using that here.
00:29:399 (2,4) - There is no visual indication of any difference in the length of repeats on these. Since 4 is twice the length of 2, why not split 4 up into two repeat sliders instead?
00:37:415 (3,4,5,6) - The combination of zig-zag, high spacing, and sharp corners here creates a stark contrast to the smoothly circular-flowing, calm map surrounding this. Why does this pattern so strongly break that movement?
00:42:911 (3,4,1) - creates a relatively tight circular motion. By making another pattern that implies tight circular motion directly afterwards (00:43:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) and separating those, you are not breaking flow, but bending it in the perfect way to feel heavily uncomfortable. Is this intentional? If so, what is your rationale behind it?
00:57:109 (2) - I've pointed out straight sliders that seem out of place in a section of curved sliders, but this one seems especially notable.
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I have quite a few issues with this stream.
In the first part, the curve starts out slight, but tightens to make a 180 degree turn. Considering how short the distance is from the start to that curve, I'd recommend making it a consistent curve from the start to 01:41:995 (1) -
Second, the stream is just so incredibly bland.
2a) the strong notes are emphasized by nothing but hitsounds. Generally, the most common ways beats are emphasized is through sharp corners, in which the note on the corner is emphasized.
Third, and most importantly, this is a really, really heavy diffspike. This is a massive deathstream toward the end of a map with one other stream not even half of its size. This is totally unmerited and is going to kill a huge number of players. Break this stream up!!
02:00:086 (4,5,6) - This triple doesn't exist in the music
02:09:934 - ANGERY

im sort of running out of time to be sane and awake at the same time as it's past midnight so i think i'll just stop it here. Might try modding other diffs later

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-05-04T05:58:39+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
Small post from a random forum post I (and Yoshimaro) saw of the map:

on light insane, 01:58:712 (7,1) - I would ctrl+J this due to having a clean transition, the currently is quite wonky https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7988360 alright

but yeah, not really supposed to be a mod, but I just wanted to mention the important things I found ^^ GL ))

cod

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394,359,70621,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,310,70850,1,0,3:0:0:0:
238,310,70964,1,0,3:0:0:0:
238,310,71079,1,0,3:0:0:0:
97,371,71308,6,0,P|107:319|92:257,1,111.999996582031,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,192,71995,1,2,0:0:0:0:
141,127,72224,2,0,P|134:153|132:181,1,55.9999982910157,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,178,72682,2,0,P|228:204|230:232,1,55.9999982910157,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,195,73140,6,0,B|364:174|406:223|459:196,1,143.999995605469
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422,82,74972,6,0,P|384:76|338:76,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,85,75430,2,0,P|206:88|167:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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69,130,76117,1,0,3:0:0:0:
158,185,76346,2,0,P|197:176|245:175,1,80,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
391,121,76804,6,0,L|379:210,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,297,77262,2,0,P|411:288|364:290,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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174,269,77949,1,0,3:0:0:0:
245,185,78178,2,0,L|335:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,116,79781,1,2,0:0:0:0:
282,174,80010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,116,80239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,80468,6,0,L|306:66,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,295,82071,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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3,277,82987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
5,172,83216,2,0,P|6:129|1:91,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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274,164,84132,5,0,3:0:0:0:
341,349,84361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,184,84590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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404,276,85048,1,0,3:0:0:0:
243,332,85277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,164,85506,1,10,0:0:0:0:
341,349,85735,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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241,229,87338,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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248,304,87796,5,0,3:0:0:0:
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306,302,88941,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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356,356,89399,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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24,141,90315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,89,90544,2,0,L|113:168,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,164,91002,2,0,L|227:85,1,80,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
342,137,91460,5,0,3:0:0:0:
317,238,91690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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317,238,92377,2,0,P|278:233|238:233,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,95,93522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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316,237,93980,2,0,P|275:230|222:236,1,80,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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242,211,96499,2,0,L|253:131,1,80,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,305,97644,2,0,P|312:298|351:298,1,80,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
196,254,98102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,301,98331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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105,199,98789,6,0,P|117:125|191:117,1,160,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,155,99476,2,0,P|285:111|278:68,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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330,236,100392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,312,102453,6,0,L|206:356,3,40,0|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,269,102911,2,0,L|125:319,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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223,139,103598,1,0,1:0:0:0:
259,330,103827,1,0,1:0:0:0:
180,232,104056,2,0,L|135:215,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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325,300,105201,1,0,3:0:0:0:
396,267,105430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,290,105659,2,0,P|476:255|476:219,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
334,221,106117,6,0,P|322:159|330:78,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,146,106804,2,0,P|432:139|397:141,1,71.9999978027344,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,164,107262,1,0,3:0:0:0:
174,211,107491,2,0,P|166:175|165:139,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
305,86,107949,6,0,P|324:159|316:234,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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105,213,109094,1,0,3:0:0:0:
139,297,109323,2,0,P|166:274|189:237,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,294,109781,6,0,P|326:277|401:287,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,247,110468,2,0,P|486:287|483:327,1,71.9999978027344,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,196,110926,1,0,3:0:0:0:
475,156,111155,2,0,P|468:120|472:68,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
325,146,111613,6,0,P|255:141|199:182,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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227,93,112987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
295,133,113216,1,0,3:0:0:0:
334,205,113445,6,0,L|318:359,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,348,114132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,206,114361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,273,114590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,307,114819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,185,115048,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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468,213,117338,2,0,L|512:221,2,35.9999989013672,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,118,117796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,176,118025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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171,242,118483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,136,118712,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,164,118941,6,0,P|28:142|10:73,2,143.999995605469,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
198,148,120086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,224,120315,2,0,P|301:226|336:224,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,154,120773,6,0,P|427:225|402:290,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,347,121460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,339,121690,2,0,P|220:306|220:255,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
142,266,122148,2,0,P|149:231|166:196,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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392,114,123293,2,0,P|314:129|307:59,1,143.999995605469,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,116,123980,2,0,P|189:109|145:109,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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341,210,125583,1,0,3:0:0:0:
426,257,125812,2,0,P|434:223|432:178,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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22,214,127644,2,0,L|15:142,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,96,128102,6,0,L|96:243,1,143.999995605469,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,249,129705,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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Joined October 2014

Left 2017-05-04T09:53:03+00:00

기습모딩

[General]
consider put end spinner in Easy, SolarFox's one. 최소한 본인난이도의 일관성은 유지해야 하므로 이지는 강권함
왜 SB가 없죠??????
와이드스크린 체크

[Easy]
01:33:293 (1) - 여기 01:33:980 - 이 포인트에 있던 피니시를 옮겨온 듯 싶은데. 차라리 지우는게 낫다고 생각해요

[Akitoshi]
why there's so many notes with no hitsound? 00:05:354 (1,2,3) - . can talk with Betastar, and put some HS.
01:00:086 (7,1) - looks like not stacking is better, cuz 01:00:315 (1) - has strong finish

[Gaia]
Sagiri is mine
00:37:186 (6,7) - i didn't think here has sth suitable to high DS.
01:13:827 (1) - how about tail mute
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - can u make this flow more circlular?

[SolorFox]
00:24:361 (2,3,4,5,1) - give a bit more DS here to make consistent with 00:22:300 (2,3,4) - this kind
00:29:857 (2,3) - DS same with 00:28:025 (2,3) - this kind, if no reason to give big DS
00:34:667 (1,2,3) - pls make all kind of this slight DS error consistent. i felt really uncomfortable checking this.
00:43:827 (1,2) - of course it's light insane, but considering your DS use before, too big DS. u need some buildup or sth to use this big DS.
-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7995491 this degree would be ok
01:15:888 (3) - also put drumnormal pls

[Betastar]
피아노 개쩐다.....
00:03:064 (3,1,2,3) - 얘의 DS랑 00:06:728 (3,1,2,3) - 를 일정하게 맞춰주면 더 좋을거같아요. 어렵지 않게 고칠수 있으니까..
00:17:033 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/vFbQq/83f301e5f5.jpg 맵 전반의 이야기인데, 이렇게 둥근 것들간의 간격을 일정하게 맞춰주면, 구조적 안정감을 유발할 수 있어요. 베타스타님 패턴에서 좀만 더 신경쓰면 가져갈 수 있는 거라서 제안해봅니다.. 이거만 잘지키면 손닉님한테 맵 잘찍는다는 소리 들을수있음ㅋㅋ
01:29:628 (1) - 노래상으로 나름 임팩트가 있어야 하는 노트인데, DS상으로도 오히려 줄어들어버렸고, 01:29:399 (7) - 에 피니시가 있는 반면에 01:29:628 (1) - 에는 피니시가 없어서 심각하게 강조가 안되고 있어요. 피니시를 연속으로 넣으면 지저분해서 안넣으셨을거라 생각하는데, 저는 앞쪽에 좀더 약한 소리나 기본휘슬같은거를 쓰고, 뒤쪽에 강한 크래시사운드를 넣으면 해결될거라 생각해요.
01:34:438 (3,4,5) - 상당히 불규칙하게 높은 DS의 점프가 들가있네요. 노래가 받쳐주지 않습니다. 01:36:041 (3,4,5) - 최소 이거정도로는 낮춰야할듯
02:13:598 (1) - 갓

전난이도 공통, 00:01:690 (1) - 이구간에 킥사운드만 계속 사용하는데, 거기다 피니시의 사용도 소극적이다 보니 되게 심심했던거같아요. 이지에서는 노트마저 심심하다보니 그게 더 부각되는 느낌이었구.. 기본 휘슬로 보컬위치마다 넣어주거나 하면 좋을거같아요.

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SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-05-04T16:28:26+00:00

Left wrote:
기습모딩

[General]
consider put end spinner in Easy, SolarFox's one. 최소한 본인난이도의 일관성은 유지해야 하므로 이지는 강권함
왜 SB가 없죠??????
와이드스크린 체크

[SolorFox] my name T.T
00:24:361 (2,3,4,5,1) - give a bit more DS here to make consistent with 00:22:300 (2,3,4) - this kind ok
00:29:857 (2,3) - DS same with 00:28:025 (2,3) - this kind, if no reason to give big DS ok
00:34:667 (1,2,3) - pls make all kind of this slight DS error consistent. i felt really uncomfortable checking this. i'm pretty unsure if i fixed everything
00:43:827 (1,2) - of course it's light insane, but considering your DS use before, too big DS. u need some buildup or sth to use this big DS.
-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7995491 this degree would be ok ok
01:15:888 (3) - also put drumnormal pls alright

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480,224,88712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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317,238,91690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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317,238,92377,2,0,P|278:233|238:233,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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101,301,98331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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325,300,105201,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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Sidetail

1,268 posts

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Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-05-05T01:47:07+00:00

Mun wrote:
heil there
as promised

~~(Ran out of time for Mun's mod, be back later)~~ Applied now!

[Matsu]
00:01:690 (1,2,3) - The distance between all these objects is pretty much the same, but the timing gap between 1 and 2 is 2/4 of a beat, while 2-3 is a full beat. This discrepancy not being reflected in visual distance is bound to cause misreadings. fixed
00:09:934 (3,4) - It's pretty subjective and nitpicky, but generic semi-straight sliders like this often look best when they are close to being vertical or horizontal, rather than diagonal. err I like the current one :s
00:15:659 (4,5) - Both of these notes are the same intensity (strong), and yet 00:14:972 (2,3) - (weaker sound) is a greater spacing than 00:15:430 (3,4) - making your spacing emphasis rather backwards here. I would decrease spacing to 3 and increase spacing to 4. I think I prefer the current one :l, I dont really want to increase spacing there.
00:16:346 (1,2,3) - sorry for nitpick ;-; this is a very cool pattern, but the circle is actually not in the middle, nor does it blanket to either slider around it. It'd be a bit more solid if you actually blanketed it. Fixed from Left's mod, thanks for pointing that out!
00:19:094 (3,4,1) - The entire section is almost bereft of straight sliders, why do you start and stop using them within this one short pattern? whether they are curved or not, i think they are good addition to this map (I don't particularly have preference for slider shapes in my style)
00:27:338 (1,3) - You remember that pattern 2 mods up where I nitpicked a blanket? That's a really cool combination of a long slider and a short slider to imply a full circle, I'd suggest using that here.
00:29:399 (2,4) - There is no visual indication of any difference in the length of repeats on these. Since 4 is twice the length of 2, why not split 4 up into two repeat sliders instead? This has been pointed out by one of other mods too. After numerous of testplays by different players, this seems fine for reading portion
00:37:415 (3,4,5,6) - The combination of zig-zag, high spacing, and sharp corners here creates a stark contrast to the smoothly circular-flowing, calm map surrounding this. Why does this pattern so strongly break that movement? tru, fixed.
00:42:911 (3,4,1) - creates a relatively tight circular motion. By making another pattern that implies tight circular motion directly afterwards (00:43:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) and separating those, you are not breaking flow, but bending it in the perfect way to feel heavily uncomfortable. Is this intentional? If so, what is your rationale behind it? It's just my style of mapping, it looks fine from my perspective. (I also tried your suggestion and though it works as well, I sort of prefer original :l
00:57:109 (2) - I've pointed out straight sliders that seem out of place in a section of curved sliders, but this one seems especially notable. for my style, I always prefer using straight or something near straight after something like 00:56:651 (1) - and flow goes the other way.
For examples like this 01:09:476 (1,2) - and 01:14:972 (1,2) -
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I have quite a few issues with this stream.
In the first part, the curve starts out slight, but tightens to make a 180 degree turn. Considering how short the distance is from the start to that curve, I'd recommend making it a consistent curve from the start to 01:41:995 (1) - I tried refixing it
Second, the stream is just so incredibly bland. I sort of like this stream to be bland
2a) the strong notes are emphasized by nothing but hitsounds. Generally, the most common ways beats are emphasized is through sharp corners, in which the note on the corner is emphasized.
Third, and most importantly, this is a really, really heavy diffspike. This is a massive deathstream toward the end of a map with one other stream not even half of its size. This is totally unmerited and is going to kill a huge number of players. Break this stream up!! As much as i want to make this easy, I really really prefer current ( follows well with the song
02:00:086 (4,5,6) - This triple doesn't exist in the music want to be consistent with 02:01:919 (4,5,6) -
02:09:934 - ANGERY ???

im sort of running out of time to be sane and awake at the same time as it's past midnight so i think i'll just stop it here. Might try modding other diffs later

Thanks a lot Mun!

Left wrote:
기습모딩 혹시 BN되실 ㄷㄷ

[General]
consider put end spinner in Easy, SolarFox's one. 최소한 본인난이도의 일관성은 유지해야 하므로 이지는 강권함
왜 SB가 없죠?????? 시간이 없어서;; ㅠㅜ
와이드스크린 체크

[Easy]
01:33:293 (1) - 여기 01:33:980 - 이 포인트에 있던 피니시를 옮겨온 듯 싶은데. 차라리 지우는게 낫다고 생각해요 고침

[Betastar]
피아노 개쩐다..... ㄷㄷ
00:03:064 (3,1,2,3) - 얘의 DS랑 00:06:728 (3,1,2,3) - 를 일정하게 맞춰주면 더 좋을거같아요. 어렵지 않게 고칠수 있으니까.. 고침
00:17:033 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/vFbQq/83f301e5f5.jpg 맵 전반의 이야기인데, 이렇게 둥근 것들간의 간격을 일정하게 맞춰주면, 구조적 안정감을 유발할 수 있어요. 베타스타님 패턴에서 좀만 더 신경쓰면 가져갈 수 있는 거라서 제안해봅니다.. 이거만 잘지키면 손닉님한테 맵 잘찍는다는 소리 들을수있음ㅋㅋ 고침ㅋㅋ
01:29:628 (1) - 노래상으로 나름 임팩트가 있어야 하는 노트인데, DS상으로도 오히려 줄어들어버렸고, 01:29:399 (7) - 에 피니시가 있는 반면에 01:29:628 (1) - 에는 피니시가 없어서 심각하게 강조가 안되고 있어요. 피니시를 연속으로 넣으면 지저분해서 안넣으셨을거라 생각하는데, 저는 앞쪽에 좀더 약한 소리나 기본휘슬같은거를 쓰고, 뒤쪽에 강한 크래시사운드를 넣으면 해결될거라 생각해요. 그냥 넣었음
01:34:438 (3,4,5) - 상당히 불규칙하게 높은 DS의 점프가 들가있네요. 노래가 받쳐주지 않습니다. 01:36:041 (3,4,5) - 최소 이거정도로는 낮춰야할듯 키아이라 괜찮을듯;
02:13:598 (1) - 갓 ㅎ

전난이도 공통, 00:01:690 (1) - 이구간에 킥사운드만 계속 사용하는데, 거기다 피니시의 사용도 소극적이다 보니 되게 심심했던거같아요. 이지에서는 노트마저 심심하다보니 그게 더 부각되는 느낌이었구.. 기본 휘슬로 보컬위치마다 넣어주거나 하면 좋을거같아요. 음.. 생각을 해볼께요. 또 힛사 손이가면 노가다 해야하는 맵이라 보류..

굳럭 감사합니다!

Last edited by Sidetail 2017-05-09T16:27:55+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Left

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Left 2017-05-07T04:02:19+00:00

omg sorry Sol'a'rFox

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-05-10T00:53:56+00:00

hi

[Matsu]
00:01:690 (1) - why this one snapped into 1/8 ?
01:29:628 (1) - unsnapped slider
00:09:934 (3,4) - tbh this looks better if you adjust them like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8047631
00:44:972 (7) - the sound played here is more like snare one which similiar like 00:44:285 (3) - , it deserves same hitsound
00:49:209 - would be good if you can cover the drum here as its quite noticeable during gameplay
00:55:735 (4) - try other shape ? i recommend straight slider though, imo this one looks bad along with 00:55:277 (3) -
01:22:300 - there's cymbal played however no soft finish was there..
01:33:980 - ^
01:29:399 (7) - the usage of finish here kinda reducing the impact of 01:29:628 - which actually a strong beat representing the start of chorus, try reducing the volume of 01:29:399 - or use a different kind of finish here 01:29:628 - (like normal finish or the default soft finish)
01:55:735 (2,3) - this stop plays awkwardly as you usually doing continous note and this was the only one which get a 1/1 stack on the whole similiar part

[Light Insane]
the volume on the first part is way too strong that the whistle sounds soo disturbing, reduce it pls
01:01:690 (5,6) - swap their position ? i think you need some movement before getting to the downbeat
01:36:041 - missing drum sample

[Hard]
00:03:064 (3,4) - this 1/2 whistle kinda noisy, better to set this one just like you did at 00:06:957 (4,5,6) - as it sounds better imo, just remove whist from (3)
00:36:041 (3,4) - idk i think you should follow vocal here by 1/1 as the others on this part also does that ( 00:32:835 (5,6) - 00:38:331 (1,2) - and 00:41:995 (1,2) - )
01:34:667 (3,4) - i expecting a better flow here tbh, compared to the other pattern that flows smoothly this one is kinda off

[Normal]
00:14:514 (3,4) - i dont know what the exact sound you're emphasizing with 00:14:743 (4) - , keeping the 1/1 gap that you've build from the start until now seems to be better idea
00:17:949 - tbh this worth more emphasizing by 1/2 pattern rather than 00:17:033 (2,3) - xDD

[Easy]
apart from the super large cs, it looks fine

gl

Sidetail

1,268 posts

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Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-05-10T10:28:21+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hi

[Matsu]
00:01:690 (1) - why this one snapped into 1/8 ? lmao wtf, fixed
01:29:628 (1) - unsnapped slider fixed
00:09:934 (3,4) - tbh this looks better if you adjust them like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8047631 err okay
00:44:972 (7) - the sound played here is more like snare one which similiar like 00:44:285 (3) - , it deserves same hitsound as is
00:49:209 - would be good if you can cover the drum here as its quite noticeable during gameplay as is, i like consistency of that jump
00:55:735 (4) - try other shape ? i recommend straight slider though, imo this one looks bad along with 00:55:277 (3) - as is sincr i like the current one and doesnt not heavy impact on reading :/
01:22:300 - there's cymbal played however no soft finish was there.. added
01:33:980 - ^ forgot to add this one
01:29:399 (7) - the usage of finish here kinda reducing the impact of 01:29:628 - which actually a strong beat representing the start of chorus, try reducing the volume of 01:29:399 - or use a different kind of finish here 01:29:628 - (like normal finish or the default soft finish) sure, fixed
01:55:735 (2,3) - this stop plays awkwardly as you usually doing continous note and this was the only one which get a 1/1 stack on the whole similiar part as is

[Easy]
apart from the super large cs, it looks fine what's wrong with that size uwu, i usually use cs2 for easy diffs

gl

Thanks~

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-05-13T14:56:06+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hi
[Light Insane]
the volume on the first part is way too strong that the whistle sounds soo disturbing, reduce it pls alright, adjusted
01:01:690 (5,6) - swap their position ? i think you need some movement before getting to the downbeat ok
01:36:041 - missing drum sample wew

thank you

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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2017-05-17T17:41:59+00:00

sorry the tags are bugged and made double posts =3=

Last edited by Chaoslitz 2017-05-17T17:48:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2017-05-17T17:42:22+00:00

m4m from queue~

[Easy]

00:50:697 (2,3) - Move down this two a bit, so that 00:49:323 (1,3) won't be too close
01:17:262 - I think clap is missing here (since there is drum)
01:20:926 - ^, don't know if you are intended, but it sounds weird when claps are missing (and so on)
01:46:117 (1) - Delete nc since you added ncs every two downbeats, adjust the ncs behind as well
01:57:109 - The piano note is pretty significant and should not be ignored, you can shorten 01:55:277 (3) to 01:56:651 and start a 1/1 slider on the downbeat

[Akitoshi's Normal]

Fine

[Anna's Hard]

00:37:186 (6,7,1) - The jump in 00:37:186 (6,7) seems unnecessary when there is nothing strong for emphasize
01:01:002 - 01:04:667 - etc leaving these empty sound weird when you are only skipping vocals in this section :thinking:
01:13:827 (1) - it doesn't make sense to snap the slider end on blue tick but no red for vocal ;_;

[SolarFox's Light Insane]

00:06:957 (1,2,3,4) - would be nice to place 00:08:560 (4) - more to the left to form a triangular pattern
00:31:002 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, also you can move 00:31:919 (3,4) away from 00:31:002 (1) so that they wouldn't be that close
01:11:079 - should use soft sampleset clap instead of drum
01:25:964 (1) - Try move up the last anchor? which looks more tidy to make 01:25:964 (1,2) parallel
01:27:338 (4,1) - Same reason as 00:31:002 (1,2,3,4)
01:29:170 (7,8) - ^, yea, it looks untidy when they are placed too close to each other
01:43:827 (3,1) - ^
01:46:804 (2,3,4) - 01:47:262 (3,4) - should have more emphasize then 01:46:804 (2,3) due to the drum, you can stack 01:47:262 (3) on 01:46:117 (1)'s head
02:03:293 (2,3) - Same as above. 02:03:293 (2,3) needs higher ds

[Matsu]

00:46:346 (2,3,4) - The flow is kinda weird and 00:46:575 (3) doesn't look good with this angel, try to rotate this anti clockwise?
00:51:613 (3,6) - Similar issue as light insane, 00:51:613 (3,6) looks untidy when only the edges are overlapping, so try to adjust the placement
00:57:109 (2,3) - I understand 00:57:796 needs emphasize but it seems emphasized too much, especially when the different in spacing is too much among 00:56:651 (1,2,3), so try to reduce the ds between 00:57:109 (2,3)
01:28:254 - Missing clap
01:36:957 - Missing finish?
01:46:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar as 00:46:346 (2,3,4), the flow here isn't good to play with, you may want to rework this pattern
01:48:636 (2) - 01:52:300 (2) - blanket : p
01:49:323 (5) - same as 00:51:613 (3,6), try move 01:49:323 (5) - away to form a triangular pattern

Keysounds
00:17:720 - 00:21:384 - 00:25:048 - Both c# and g# notes exist in bgm, but in my opinion c# (S:C44) fits more, the pitch of g# seems too high for this

dunno why but i was expected there is storyboard x(
nice mapset, call me back for bubble or i will qualify this when another bn bubbled it :3

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-05-17T17:49:12+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
dunno why but i was expected there is storyboard x(
nice mapset, call me back for bubble or i will qualify this when another bn bubbled it :3

I had half-assed SB and deleted since I wasnt motivated to finish it

Thank you! I will try to work on this map again!

Chaoslitz wrote:
m4m from queue~

[Easy]
00:50:697 (2,3) - Move down this two a bit, so that 00:49:323 (1,3) won't be too close fixed
01:17:262 - I think clap is missing here (since there is drum) fixed
01:20:926 - ^, don't know if you are intended, but it sounds weird when claps are missing (and so on) fixed for all
01:46:117 (1) - Delete nc since you added ncs every two downbeats, adjust the ncs behind as well oop fixed
01:57:109 - The piano note is pretty significant and should not be ignored, you can shorten 01:55:277 (3) to 01:56:651 and start a 1/1 slider on the downbeat err okay fixed.
[Matsu]
00:46:346 (2,3,4) - The flow is kinda weird and 00:46:575 (3) doesn't look good with this angel, try to rotate this anti clockwise? fixed
00:51:613 (3,6) - Similar issue as light insane, 00:51:613 (3,6) looks untidy when only the edges are overlapping, so try to adjust the placement moved.
00:57:109 (2,3) - I understand 00:57:796 needs emphasize but it seems emphasized too much, especially when the different in spacing is too much among 00:56:651 (1,2,3), so try to reduce the ds between 00:57:109 (2,3) I sort of nerfed. (nerfed around 0.2x ds)
01:28:254 - Missing clap fixed
01:36:957 - Missing finish? there is no finish in the song o.o
01:46:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar as 00:46:346 (2,3,4), the flow here isn't good to play with, you may want to rework this pattern curved.
01:48:636 (2) - 01:52:300 (2) - blanket : p :p
01:49:323 (5) - same as 00:51:613 (3,6), try move 01:49:323 (5) - away to form a triangular pattern ? okay

Keysounds
00:17:720 - 00:21:384 - 00:25:048 - Both c# and g# notes exist in bgm, but in my opinion c# (S:C44) fits more, the pitch of g# seems too high for this I tried that on all three and not sure if i like it. reverted back to original :l

Thanks, ill tell you when i am ready XD

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-05-18T06:07:32+00:00

Boruma

Boruma wrote:
There seems to be a spinner that extends the beatmap far further than your other difficulties.
Maybe remove it, so it can match all your other difficulties' lengths. seems consistent to me lol

Ohwow

Ohwow wrote:
m4m from roastin q

[Hard]
00:09:705 (2) - Could move to x216 y174 so that both the sliderhead and the sliderend and the sliderend of 00:09:018 (1) - make a equaliteral triangle. If you think the spacing is too big, you could move it closer to maybe like x218 y191 so it's at least an isosceles triangle.
00:33:522 (6,7) - Possible way to improve this aestheitcally: https://i.gyazo.com/1b44747535e784dfea4 ... ea156d.jpg The red lines indicate that they should be equal spaced and the green lines indicate that they should be parallel.
01:00:315 - not too big of a problem, but the slowdown of the SV felt kinda too much at first look. Maybe up the SV just a bit. think it's alright
01:11:308 (1,2,3) - fix spacing, should be equal (at 1.3x)
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - the angles between the notes are kinda inconsistent. it would look nicer if the angles are consistent
02:12:682 (1,2) - Kinda weird to how there are 1/2 drum beats on this section and its mapped to 1/2 sliders, while 02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are repeating sliders, yet they are only 1/1 drum beats on that section. Just something to point out cause i thought that was weird. I know the repeating sliders are mapped to those 1/4 clap sounds, but it just felt underwhelming for 02:12:682 (1,2) - to be sliders. Maybe make them circles to emphasize the drums rather than the claps. it'd get too hard imo if i made them circles so i chose sliders

gl

elena2705

elena2705 wrote:
Hi~
I asked me to do mod for you)
So i do
I notice some things that is too prominent.

Gaia's Hard

Why is there no kiai? i dont like kiai + calm song so ya
00:19:552 (8,1) - do this sliders parallel to each other;
01:13:827 (1,2,1) - i think it would be better aa i like it like dis more ;;

Good luck to rank it!

(Jenn)

[Jenn] wrote:
from q
Gaia's Hard

00:38:331 (1) - i think if the slider shape was like 00:39:018 (2) - it'd look better doesn't really matter
01:58:712 (1) - nc here instead just preference

Left

Left wrote:
기습모딩

[General]
consider put end spinner in Easy, SolarFox's one. 최소한 본인난이도의 일관성은 유지해야 하므로 이지는 강권함
왜 SB가 없죠??????
와이드스크린 체크

[Gaia]
Sagiri is mine okey
00:37:186 (6,7) - i didn't think here has sth suitable to high DS.
01:13:827 (1) - how about tail mute i don;t like mute
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - can u make this flow more circlular?

굳럭

Momokun

Momochikun wrote:
hi

[Hard]
00:03:064 (3,4) - this 1/2 whistle kinda noisy, better to set this one just like you did at 00:06:957 (4,5,6) - as it sounds better imo, just remove whist from (3)
00:36:041 (3,4) - idk i think you should follow vocal here by 1/1 as the others on this part also does that ( 00:32:835 (5,6) - 00:38:331 (1,2) - and 00:41:995 (1,2) - ) hmm i quite like the bg instruments tho
01:34:667 (3,4) - i expecting a better flow here tbh, compared to the other pattern that flows smoothly this one is kinda off flow is ok imo xD

gl

Kajo

Chaoslitz wrote:
m4m from queue~

[Anna's Hard]
00:37:186 (6,7,1) - The jump in 00:37:186 (6,7) seems unnecessary when there is nothing strong for emphasize
01:01:002 - 01:04:667 - etc leaving these empty sound weird when you are only skipping vocals in this section :thinking: hmm i wanted to be different and i think it puts some cool emphasis on the instruments which i value higher than vocals :geeking:
01:13:827 (1) - it doesn't make sense to snap the slider end on blue tick but no red for vocal ;_; well since it's not following vocal i wanted to emphasize this note as much as possible ;~;
dunno why but i was expected there is storyboard x( agree!!
nice mapset, call me back for bubble or i will qualify this when another bn bubbled it :3

Thanks everyone for modding!!!!!!! no reply are fixed

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Title:Vidro Moyou
TitleUnicode:ビードロ模様
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:あの夏で待ってる
Tags:Ano Natsu de Matteru Waiting in the Summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia Akitoshi Corinn
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Last edited by Gaia 2017-05-18T06:10:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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Sidetail 2017-05-18T06:09:57+00:00

Fixing behalf of SolarFox
[SolarFox's Light Insane]

00:06:957 (1,2,3,4) - would be nice to place 00:08:560 (4) - more to the left to form a triangular pattern fixed
00:31:002 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, also you can move 00:31:919 (3,4) away from 00:31:002 (1) so that they wouldn't be that close fixed
01:11:079 - should use soft sampleset clap instead of drum fixed
01:25:964 (1) - Try move up the last anchor? which looks more tidy to make 01:25:964 (1,2) parallel fixed
01:27:338 (4,1) - Same reason as 00:31:002 (1,2,3,4) fixed
01:29:170 (7,8) - ^, yea, it looks untidy when they are placed too close to each other fixed
01:43:827 (3,1) - ^ fixed
01:46:804 (2,3,4) - 01:47:262 (3,4) - should have more emphasize then 01:46:804 (2,3) due to the drum, you can stack 01:47:262 (3) on 01:46:117 (1)'s head fixed
02:03:293 (2,3) - Same as above. 02:03:293 (2,3) needs higher ds fixed

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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2017-05-18T14:08:38+00:00

recheck

[Easy]

00:51:155 (3) - holy the whistle on slider body D:
01:55:277 (5) - NC

[SolarFox's Light Insane]

00:08:560 (4) - uh sorry i wanna say right instead =w=, place it around x:433|y:163
01:27:796 (1) - Still doesnt look good, x:245|y:313 would fit

well about the keysound because I didn't notice the g# note until modding this map, so for me c# feels more natural x( but it is okay

call me back again

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-05-18T14:38:35+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
recheck

[Easy]
00:51:155 (3) - holy the whistle on slider body D: oops
01:55:277 (5) - NC oop

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
00:08:560 (4) - uh sorry i wanna say right instead =w=, place it around x:433|y:163 applied
01:27:796 (1) - Still doesnt look good, x:245|y:313 would fit applied

well about the keysound because I didn't notice the g# note until modding this map, so for me c# feels more natural x( but it is okay ;w;

call me back again

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-05-18T14:38:50+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
recheck

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
00:08:560 (4) - uh sorry i wanna say right instead =w=, place it around x:433|y:163
01:27:796 (1) - Still doesnt look good, x:245|y:313 would fit
[/notice]

well about the keysound because I didn't notice the g# note until modding this map, so for me c# feels more natural x( but it is okay

call me back again

all fixed i guess

:)

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