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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou

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Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna

BetaStar wrote:

Trynna wrote:

  1. 00:28:025 (2) - ^ same as above, slider tail stronger than head, put it on white tick and a circle on the red one, and it will destroy your pattern here 00:28:483 (3,4) -, but that's ok since you gave some pointless emphasis that you didn't here 01:55:277 (1,2) - for example lmao how is that a pointless emphasis? They are two distinctive sounding parts. Also not sure what you meant by destroying my pattern, so there arent any abomination going on from what I see.
ok, since you don't get it i'm trying to explain once more (not expecting a change or something tho, just to tell you what i thought)
the sound that you're putting some emphasis here 00:28:483 (3,4) - (00:28:483 -, 00:28:712 -) is exactly the same as 01:55:506 - 01:55:735 -, different sections, also different intensities ofc! but i thought "what's the real point on making it 00:28:483 (3,4) - a thing and bypass the piano while 01:55:277 (1,2) - doesn't? it actually fits the piano as 01:55:277 (1) - and the secondary sound is represented by the slider tail and the circle!

so what i tried to tell you?
while something like this is possible (refer to 00:28:025 (2,3,4) -), doing something like this would fit the piano in a better way and fit the weird emphasis you did as a mention to 01:55:277 (1,2) - making your mapping more consistent. Also, if fixing it is a thing, you would also need to put something to fit 00:28:941 - (such an important sound imo)

note: on weird emphasis i mean not only following a background sound instead of piano but also making it a bit overmap 00:28:598 -



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Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

Trynna wrote:

BetaStar wrote:

  1. 00:28:025 (2) - ^ same as above, slider tail stronger than head, put it on white tick and a circle on the red one, and it will destroy your pattern here 00:28:483 (3,4) -, but that's ok since you gave some pointless emphasis that you didn't here 01:55:277 (1,2) - for example lmao how is that a pointless emphasis? They are two distinctive sounding parts. Also not sure what you meant by destroying my pattern, so there arent any abomination going on from what I see.
ok, since you don't get it i'm trying to explain once more (not expecting a change or something tho, just to tell you what i thought)
the sound that you're putting some emphasis here 00:28:483 (3,4) - (00:28:483 -, 00:28:712 -) is exactly the same as 01:55:506 - 01:55:735 -, different sections, also different intensities ofc! but i thought "what's the real point on making it 00:28:483 (3,4) - a thing and bypass the piano while 01:55:277 (1,2) - doesn't? it actually fits the piano as 01:55:277 (1) - and the secondary sound is represented by the slider tail and the circle! The reason why both are different is due to BOTH drum and piano. Of course, I am hitsounding piano, but I want to map for drum as well. Second one does not have much apparent drum since it is located near dénouement.

so what i tried to tell you?
while something like this is possible (refer to 00:28:025 (2,3,4) -), doing something like this would fit the piano in a better way and fit the weird emphasis you did as a mention to 01:55:277 (1,2) - making your mapping more consistent. Also, if fixing it is a thing, you would also need to put something to fit 00:28:941 - (such an important sound imo) All right, modified the part you suggested, however 00:28:941 - would not be changing as I like it empty there.

note: on weird emphasis i mean not only following a background sound instead of piano but also making it a bit overmap 00:28:598 -



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I'll have a look soon! and thanks for star!
Cirno no Baka
130 posts
Joined May 2016
Cirno no Baka
Hi from my queue!!


[General]

Click!
1. that all your difficulties end in the same point and that they have the same dain time.
2. beware of the semi blanket, which at first glance by the publisher are not seen.


Map drain times:
Easy: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Normal: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Gaia: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:22:758 - 
SolarFox:  Index: 00:16:346 -  Final: 02:13:598 -


[Easy]

Click!
01:43:598 - an important sound, you should not pass this on
00:12:224 (2) - should make a perfect blanket with 00:12:682 (1) - it would look much better

[Normal]

Click!
00:28:941 - you feel the emptiness of space although the sound of the previous piano does not cover it at all
Good Diff

[Gaia]

Click!
Gaia i'm your fan >w<!!!

00:17:720 - here's an important sound that ending in a reverse, like it does not go well with the rhythm you had before ... if you did a correction more or less like this: http://puu.sh/tvVYe/c9c41894af.png would look and listen better: D just like you did at 00:24:590 (3,4,5) -
00:16:346 (1) - add a sound to the end of that slider, you'd better = w = b
00:20:926 (3,4,5) - there is not much consistency with 00:17:262 (3,4,5,6) - and in 00:28:254 (3,4) -
01:58:025 (9) - NC

[SolarFox]

Click!
01:00:773 (3,4) - blanket
01:01:002 (4,5) - the distance is too much between sounds and notes.
01:15:430 (2) - Ctrl + G
01:25:048 (1,2) - try that 2 moves more than 1 to fence with the rhythm and distance snap.
01:29:399 (8) - NC

[Musou]

Click!
01:07:644 (1) - it would look better if you moved this one is not above the slider start of 01:07:873 (2) -
01:52:987 (5) - above 01:52:300 (2) -
02:08:102 (1) - set this slider to be compatible with 02:07:644 (5) - and make it perfect blanket

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

-Sakurasaki wrote:

Hi from my queue!!


[General]
Click!
1. that all your difficulties end in the same point and that they have the same dain time. Should be fine regardless of gd or not for starting point and ending point being different.
2. beware of the semi blanket, which at first glance by the publisher are not seen.okay
Map drain times:
Easy: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Normal: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Gaia: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:22:758 - 
SolarFox:  Index: 00:16:346 -  Final: 02:13:598 -
[Easy]
Click!
01:43:598 - an important sound, you should not pass this on Actually, I fixed sound slightly after that! I emphasized tail of 01:44:056 (1) - more. Putting object there for easy would be bit weird due to rhythm and sounding overall x)
00:12:224 (2) - should make a perfect blanket with 00:12:682 (1) - it would look much better Good idea for aesthetics, but I would choose flow over aesthetics for easy ;w;
[Normal]
Click!
00:28:941 - you feel the emptiness of space although the sound of the previous piano does not cover it at all There was no substantial tone or important sound here, so i would leave it blank here
Good Diff[/box]
[Musou]
Click!
01:07:644 (1) - it would look better if you moved this one is not above the slider start of 01:07:873 (2) - moved slightly up
01:52:987 (5) - above 01:52:300 (2) - but that would ruin blanket with 01:53:445 (1) - ;w; Good idea though!
02:08:102 (1) - set this slider to be compatible with 02:07:644 (5) - and make it perfect blanket Ruins the shape of last jump! Ahh

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /
Thank you! Ill check over soon! Finally applied. Thanks again~
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

-Sakurasaki wrote:

Hi from my queue!!


[SolarFox]

Click!
01:00:773 (3,4) - blanket ok
01:01:002 (4,5) - the distance is too much between sounds and notes. it's hard to change it without hurting the pattern..i did..something?
01:15:430 (2) - Ctrl + G kk
01:25:048 (1,2) - try that 2 moves more than 1 to fence with the rhythm and distance snap. i changed the pattern.. hope it works

01:29:399 (8) - NC why


So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /
thank you!

LOL i forgot about this
osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Vidro Moyou
TitleUnicode:ビードロ模様
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags:waiting in the summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia
BeatmapID:1171509
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Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
(C u r i)

[C u r i] wrote:

[hard]
01:50:468 (5) - how about add some curve? i like it stright

Trynna

Trynna wrote:

Gaia


  1. 01:13:827 (1) - hm i'm not sure about this slider end, it isn't getting the vocal at 01:14:743 - and there's no sound basis tho?! it's mapped to the guitar so skipping the vocal is totally fine

great work, cute song

-Sakurasaki

-Sakurasaki wrote:

Hi from my queue!!


[Gaia]
Gaia i'm your fan >w<!!! thanks w

00:17:720 - here's an important sound that ending in a reverse, like it does not go well with the rhythm you had before ... if you did a correction more or less like this: http://puu.sh/tvVYe/c9c41894af.png would look and listen better: D just like you did at 00:24:590 (3,4,5) - i think the reverse is fine, i did change some rhythms around though
00:16:346 (1) - add a sound to the end of that slider, you'd better = w = b what do you mean? i dont think im lacking any hitsounds
00:20:926 (3,4,5) - there is not much consistency with 00:17:262 (3,4,5,6) - and in 00:28:254 (3,4) - did something
01:58:025 (9) - NC for consistency i'd like to keep this

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /

thanks for your mods everyone!

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Hokichi
825 posts
Joined June 2015
Hokichi
Hi, mod as I promised

[General]
Difficulties Spread:
  1. You need to raise the SR of Normal difficulty to about 1.92* for a better spread. You can increase the DS of the map
Hitsound:
  1. I don't get the point of using both thump sound and skin's default sound. IMO, you should use the thump sound throughout the map.
  2. Please do keysounding for the GDs. You can use hitsound copier
  3. 00:01:690 - Since you use skin's soft finish hitsound here, you can just star the drum set there, then add an additional soft finish sound to it.
  4. In the Easy diff, you can use soft-hitclap50.wav as soft-slidertick50.wav too. Since you did use drum.hitnormal50.wav as a slider tick sound, you should do this too
[Easy]
00:02:148 - You should put the slider tick sound here
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think 1/2 sliders are allowed in an Easy diff
00:18:178 - 00:21:842 - 00:25:506 - You missed a sound here. This sound is pretty dominant, and missing this also make the part inconsistent. Do it like 00:27:338 (1,2) -
00:45:659 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here?
00:59:399 (1) - Shorten this to a 1 beat slider, then add a circle at the big white tick
01:23:216 (1) - Rotate this by 25 degree, then move it up a bit for a better flow
01:33:293 (1) - What's the point of adding a finish hitsound at the end of this slider?
01:44:056 (1) - Remove this, the place a circle at the big white tick please
01:44:743 - You should add slider tick sound here, like you did at 00:03:522 - Add claps too
02:09:476 (2,1) - Don't overlap these

[Normal]
01:07:186 (3) - This may confused new players
01:19:323 (2) - Extend this to the next white tick, remove 01:20:010 (3) - , then add a circle at the red tick to emphasize the vocal
01:36:728 (1) - Turn this into a circle and a 1/2 slider
01:38:560 (1) - Same

[Gaia's Hard]
CS is a bit too small. Use 3.5 then?
No kiai?
-------------------------------
00:16:231 - Do we need a clap sound here?
00:28:712 (4) - I don't think you should end a slider on the big white tick like this.
00:49:323 (1,2) - Add a blanket here?
01:02:148 (4,5) - Bad overlap imo uwu
01:17:491 (6,7) - Blanket?
01:07:186 (6) - Can you add a cirlce at the red tick and remove the reverse?
01:28:941 (9,1) - Stack these perharps?
01:58:025 (9,10,11,12,13) - Make these symmetric please

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Kiai?
-------------------------------
00:45:201 (6) - NC for SV change
01:28:941 (6,8) - Switch the places of these for a better flow
01:44:285 - Add a circle here please, thanks

[Matsu]
01:10:850 (3) - Just... use drum normal sound and soft additional clap sound
01:36:842 (7,3) - Mirror these
02:13:598 (1) - Holy...

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That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

Hokichi wrote:

Hi, mod as I promised

[General]
Difficulties Spread:
  1. You need to raise the SR of Normal difficulty to about 1.92* for a better spread. You can increase the DS of the map
Hitsound:
  1. I don't get the point of using both thump sound and skin's default sound. IMO, you should use the thump sound throughout the map. I like the clap from skin default and i dont think i really needed to deplicate .wav files. So i get went back and forth. I also controlled the vol to make sure it sounds right
  2. Please do keysounding for the GDs. You can use hitsound copier it's upto my GDers. Tho their hitsound is good enough
  3. 00:01:690 - Since you use skin's soft finish hitsound here, you can just star the drum set there, then add an additional soft finish sound to it. There was unrankable issue there (unneeded greenline over redline which can be solved by just using red, fixed.
  4. In the Easy diff, you can use soft-hitclap50.wav as soft-slidertick50.wav too. Since you did use drum.hitnormal50.wav as a slider tick sound, you should do this too ? I am using soft-slidertick2 for slider kicks
[Easy]
00:02:148 - You should put the slider tick sound here oops, thanks
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think 1/2 sliders are allowed in an Easy diff its allowed. depending on how it fits with song and clarity.
00:18:178 - 00:21:842 - 00:25:506 - You missed a sound here. This sound is pretty dominant, and missing this also make the part inconsistent. Do it like 00:27:338 (1,2) - I was planning to remove the keysounding all together for easy diff, but I'll see about that later
00:45:659 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here? Added
00:59:399 (1) - Shorten this to a 1 beat slider, then add a circle at the big white tick Fixed
01:23:216 (1) - Rotate this by 25 degree, then move it up a bit for a better flow Fixed
01:33:293 (1) - What's the point of adding a finish hitsound at the end of this slider? There is a finish just after that slider, but there is no note. So I put the finish there instead of compensate for late finish
01:44:056 (1) - Remove this, the place a circle at the big white tick please Fixed
01:44:743 - You should add slider tick sound here, like you did at 00:03:522 - Add claps too Current one seems to follow more to song. Beginning part was only kicks and later part is both kicks and snare. Also laer part's kick is less pronounced.
02:09:476 (2,1) - Don't overlap these I dont think that ever mattered.. but okay fixed

[Normal]
01:07:186 (3) - This may confused new players it's fine
01:19:323 (2) - Extend this to the next white tick, remove 01:20:010 (3) - , then add a circle at the red tick to emphasize the vocal want snare to be clickable there.
01:36:728 (1) - Turn this into a circle and a 1/2 slider Makes rhythm more complex than it already is
01:38:560 (1) - Same

[Matsu]
01:10:850 (3) - Just... use drum normal sound and soft additional clap sound I prefer current one more :l
01:36:842 (7,3) - Mirror these Okay
02:13:598 (1) - Holy... B)

That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set
Thanks~
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

Hokichi wrote:

Hi, mod as I promised


[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Kiai? is not compulsory
-------------------------------
00:45:201 (6) - NC for SV change another mod pointed out to un-NC this some weeks ago, im not sure to re-NC it back tbh..I'll leave it for now
01:28:941 (6,8) - Switch the places of these for a better flow did something else :x
01:44:285 - Add a circle here please, thanks noooooooooooooooooooooooooo

[]

That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set
Thanks for the mod!
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Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
Hokichi

Hokichi wrote:

Hi, mod as I promised

[General]
Difficulties Spread:
  1. You need to raise the SR of Normal difficulty to about 1.92* for a better spread. You can increase the DS of the map you can't judge spread based on SR, the normal is hard enough and should be toned down if anything lol

[Gaia's Hard]
CS is a bit too small. Use 3.5 then? cs 4 is very standard for hard cs..
No kiai? nah not for calm songs like these
-------------------------------
00:16:231 - Do we need a clap sound here? yeah i hear it
00:28:712 (4) - I don't think you should end a slider on the big white tick like this. that upbeat barely emphasized anything so it's fine
00:49:323 (1,2) - Add a blanket here? nah doesnt fit imo
01:02:148 (4,5) - Bad overlap imo uwu i like this though
01:17:491 (6,7) - Blanket?
01:07:186 (6) - Can you add a cirlce at the red tick and remove the reverse? why? it just makes it play poorly
01:28:941 (9,1) - Stack these perharps? offset for readability
01:58:025 (9,10,11,12,13) - Make these symmetric please

[]

That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set

ty 4 mod, no reply are fixed
also made few changes on my own

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Chirony
390 posts
Joined June 2012
Chirony
Hi~, sorry for late.....

[Matsu]
  1. 00:28:941 - add circle? Since patterns are made with the piano sounds so far, you should do that in here too. Same sound as 00:27:109 -
  2. 00:38:102 (6) - how about this? move to x:296 y:276 Could be better pattern parallel with 00:37:415 (3,4) than a lozenge.
  3. 01:44:285 (1,2) - These distances are close. Because of that AIM speed may suddenly slow down.
  4. 00:28:254 (3) - It have sliderslide. Do you intend?
  5. 01:01:919 - use D:C50 sound?
  6. 01:17:720 - , 01:38:789 - Why not use tick sound?
  7. 01:27:109 (6) - add clap and move green line of on 01:27:338 to here, 01:27:338 (7) - remove clap
  8. 02:13:598 (1) - add finish sound?
[Hard]
  1. 01:00:773 (2,3) - , 01:04:438 (2,3) - How is this pattern?
    SPOILER
  2. 01:07:415 - Hmm.. I think not need finish.
  3. 01:13:827 (1) - I felt tail of a slider is incongruous. You should be have to match vocal, so I recommend in 01:14:743
  4. 01:33:293 (1) - How about changing the reverse slider?
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:170 (1) - move to 00:28:941 - The piano and drum sound is confused so it becomes the source of confusion.
Other diffs looks fine!
good luck!
blobdash
912 posts
Joined April 2016
blobdash
Hey
From my modding queue.
IMO = In my opinion
I'm not going to mod your map, i'm just gonna give some feedback since I think it would say it all.
readme plz
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable.
Source : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing
You're using the hitsound to add sounds to the music. It's not how you're supposed to map.
Sometimes, you add circles that follow the rythm BUT doesn't follow the music. Since you're based on the music to play, for example on Hidden mod, how can you play?
Right now i'm talking about BetaStar's diff'. I'll mod Gaia's and SolarFox's diff after this.
Also, the custom hitsounds are unplayable, they're just covering the music. The voice is too low compared to the rest, so when you need to click with the voice rythm it's clearly impossible if you don't know the song. It's weird because :
- You use the SAME sounds as in the original music
- You use weird ways to change hitsound sets. So weird that it seems random when you first play the song.

Anyway...
I don't say that you need to remap everything, but just try something : Backup the map, try to hear without the custom hitsounding. You'll see it fits, but sometimes there's NO sound but you get a hitsound.

Back to modding Gaia's and SolarFox's diff.
Gaia's Hard :
- 2,6* seems a little bit low IMO
02:13:598 (3) - Would be better to finish with the spinner instead, there's not really a end sound except for the reversed uplifter.
00:29:399 (5,6) - Since we're not in the kiai i don't think this needs to be here.

SolarFox's Light Insane :
- The diff starts way further than the others. If it's WIP ok but if it's not consider mapping the start, like the other diffs.
01:14:056 (2) - Do like at 01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , it's what I would expect from this part
- AR seems a little bit low for a Light Insane, i would put it to 7,5 IMO

I know mapping is really hard, and hitsounding is a pain in the *** but really this is unplayable when you first play the song.
Hope it helped.
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

FruityEnLoops wrote:

Hey
From my modding queue.
IMO = In my opinion
I'm not going to mod your map, i'm just gonna give some feedback since I think it would say it all.
readme plz
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable . unacceptable when both sliderticks and sliderslide is both silent. all of head/tail of object is making a sound :d
Source : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing
You're using the hitsound to add sounds to the music. keysounding? It's not how you're supposed to map. why are you dissing maps that arent ideal for you?
Sometimes, you add circles that follow the rythm BUT doesn't follow the music. why dont you provide example timestamps to show validity of your claim? Since you're based on the music to play, for example on Hidden mod, how can you play? what does thgat even mean lmao
Right now i'm talking about BetaStar's diff'. I'll mod Gaia's and SolarFox's diff after this.
Also, the custom hitsounds are unplayable, they're just covering the music. The voice is too low compared to the rest, so when you need to click with the voice rythm it's clearly impossible if you don't know the song. It's weird because :
- You use the SAME sounds as in the original music

- You use weird ways to change hitsound sets. So weird that it seems random when you first play the song.

why is that a problem since i am making a piano from music more pronounced

Anyway...
I don't say that you need to remap everything, but just try something : Backup the map, try to hear without the custom hitsounding. You'll see it fits, but sometimes there's NO sound but you get a hitsound. pretty cool eh? :3

I know mapping is really hard, and hitsounding is a pain in the *** but really this is unplayable when you first play the song.
Hope it helped.
Thanks, but you should go through osu forums about hitsounding/keysounding and feel free to come back to me with more mod ;)

note: i only keysounded set of ~7 notes for few parts. so ya. that shouldnt be a problem since i didnt keysoud entire thing


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Chirony wrote:

Hi~, sorry for late.....

[Matsu]
  1. 00:28:941 - add circle? Since patterns are made with the piano sounds so far, you should do that in here too. Same sound as 00:27:109 - Fixed
  2. 00:38:102 (6) - how about this? move to x:296 y:276 Could be better pattern parallel with 00:37:415 (3,4) than a lozenge. moved to (275,275) instead
  3. 01:44:285 (1,2) - These distances are close. Because of that AIM speed may suddenly slow down. err fixed slighly.
  4. 00:28:254 (3) - It have sliderslide. Do you intend? yeah, i dont want to make all the keysound hitsound sets to have muted slider since that just seems slightly unnecessary
  5. 01:01:919 - use D:C50 sound? ohhh nice catch!
  6. 01:17:720 - , 01:38:789 - Why not use tick sound? changed slidertick50 sound so should be ok now
  7. 01:27:109 (6) - add clap and move green line of on 01:27:338 to here, 01:27:338 (7) - remove clap fixed.
  8. 02:13:598 (1) - add finish sound?
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:170 (1) - move to 00:28:941 - The piano and drum sound is confused so it becomes the source of confusion. err fixed?
Other diffs looks fine!
good luck!
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

FruityEnLoops wrote:

Hey
From my modding queue.

SolarFox's Light Insane :
- The diff starts way further than the others. If it's WIP ok but if it's not consider mapping the start, like the other diffs. will think about it
01:14:056 (2) - Do like at 01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , it's what I would expect from this part doesnt seem to fit imo
- AR seems a little bit low for a Light Insane, i would put it to 7,5 IMO ok

Hope it helped.
thanksssssssssssssss

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Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags:waiting in the summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia
BeatmapID:1171509
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OverallDifficulty:6
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Catt
69 posts
Joined August 2015
Catt
From Q. Modding because why not?
Matsu
00:05:354 (1) - The blanket is off
00:06:041 (2) - Same^
00:09:018 (1) - The could be moved forwards to blanket in order to enhance aesthetics
00:23:674 (1) - The Slider before should flow into the head of this slider imo. I think this would improve flow
00:24:361 (2) - The previous should flow into this as well.
00:27:338 (1,2,3) - Why the big change of spacing?
01:55:277 (1) - I think this should be moved to increase flow of the jumps
02:13:598 (1) - That's a damn cool slider

Easy
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think new players will be able to play this properly. Maybe change to a full beat slider?
00:21:384 (2) - Same^
00:25:048 (2) - Same^
01:07:644 (1) - Perhaps have the slider before flow into this?
01:44:056 (1) - Same as before
02:09:934 (1) - Maybe change the shape of the slider? It's not the nicest looking ever :(
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

HM02CauseImFly wrote:

From Q. Modding because why not?
Matsu
00:05:354 (1) - The blanket is off fixed!
00:06:041 (2) - Same^ fixed!
00:09:018 (1) - The could be moved forwards to blanket in order to enhance aesthetics fixed!
00:23:674 (1) - The Slider before should flow into the head of this slider imo. I think this would improve flow ?
00:24:361 (2) - The previous should flow into this as well.?
00:27:338 (1,2,3) - Why the big change of spacing? fixed!
01:55:277 (1) - I think this should be moved to increase flow of the jumps current one seems okay!
02:13:598 (1) - That's a damn cool slider thanks ^^!

Easy
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think new players will be able to play this properly. Maybe change to a full beat slider? should be fine since is simple enough to be hit with ease and there is plenty of time between next note.
00:21:384 (2) - Same^
00:25:048 (2) - Same^
01:07:644 (1) - Perhaps have the slider before flow into this? i would but it will make it more complex for easy diff haha
01:44:056 (1) - Same as before fixed
02:09:934 (1) - Maybe change the shape of the slider? It's not the nicest looking ever :(tbh, I would've used the slider from insane but that would be too confusing for easy diff players, so i stuck with simple shape. I'll polly change it to something that looks nice if it bothers me later one xD
Thanks for mod!

oop not sure why it easy dif mod reply is in green colour, hopefully you can use highlight!
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Boruma
Easy
Length of beatmap is 4 seconds less than your other difficulties.

Normal
Your normal difficulty appears rather particularly cluttered with close notes.
Maybe increase the distance spacing to 1.0x?
It gets rather repetitive fast with all the close notes and it appears you're just going in very wide circles in the beginning part of 00:12:682 (1) - 00:31:002 (1) .
I recommend at least making paths in which differ in course from the original circle motions ie. sliders that are perpendicular to the previous slider.
It's not particularly fun to play in my opinion compared to your easy difficulty.
Other than that, no real problems.
It's more so an optional suggestion.

Gaia's Hard
There seems to be a spinner that extends the beatmap far further than your other difficulties.
Maybe remove it, so it can match all your other difficulties' lengths.
Ohwow
1,193 posts
Joined July 2013
Ohwow
m4m from roastin q

[Easy]
00:12:682 (1,1) - The first slider is a bit curved wider (less curved) than the 2nd one. Minor aesthetic, but it would be better if u copy pasta and rotated/flip to make it look more even.
00:17:720 (2) - Try to avoid 1/2 sliders on easies, especial when the difficulty is only 1.2ish. You maybe be trying to map to that loud piano sound, but mapping to the beat is a lot more simple for beginners to play. The piano melody in this case adds quite a bit of complexity to the rhythm (which is why we wouldn't want to continue mapping to the piano at 00:18:865 - ). That also means that that 1/2 slider is the only one that's mapped to the piano while the rest of the pianos are ignored. which makes it kinda weird. Applies to other occurrences as well.
00:17:720 (2,1,2) - Not a big fan of 3/2 rhythms and missing big white ticks on easies. They are sometimes okay if the music have obvious distinct sounds that support it, but imo, that's not the case with this portion of the song. possibly make the rhythm simple like this (Applies to other occurrences): https://i.gyazo.com/545243037bea856c7d9 ... 9d5136.jpg
00:25:964 (1) - slider doesn't look too good imo. If you want to make a curvy slider like that, try to make it as symmetrical as possible. And even if you make it symmetrical, you should keep it horizontal or vertical instead of trying to angle it, cause imo if you angle it, it would lose it's symmetrical look. https://i.gyazo.com/b47f90ea72bca459bc9 ... 85a49b.jpg
00:57:796 (2) - not sure if this slider is ok on easy. I haven't come across an easy with 1/2 repeating slider. might wanna check on that.
01:01:002 (2,1) - copy (2) and paste + rotate 180 degrees (and then make it repeat). Just more symmetrical patterns that could help on the aesthetics
01:26:422 (1) - delete NC
01:51:613 (1,1) - same, althought not really noticeable, it's a good habit to make these perfectly symmetrical by copy pasting and rotating.
01:55:277 (1) - Might want to curve this side of the pentagon to make all the sides curved (and minor blanket to that next slider): https://i.gyazo.com/5234c5e5ff56870a6fa ... 568ae8.jpg

[Normal]
00:09:934 (2) - random red anchored slider. Should just be curve like the rest.
I think the map could use some more 2/1 breaks, so it's not a long chain of overlapping objects.
i suk at mapping and modding normals sowwy

[Hard]
00:09:705 (2) - Could move to x216 y174 so that both the sliderhead and the sliderend and the sliderend of 00:09:018 (1) - make a equaliteral triangle. If you think the spacing is too big, you could move it closer to maybe like x218 y191 so it's at least an isosceles triangle.
00:33:522 (6,7) - Possible way to improve this aestheitcally: https://i.gyazo.com/1b44747535e784dfea4 ... ea156d.jpg The red lines indicate that they should be equal spaced and the green lines indicate that they should be parallel.
01:00:315 - not too big of a problem, but the slowdown of the SV felt kinda too much at first look. Maybe up the SV just a bit.
01:11:308 (1,2,3) - fix spacing, should be equal (at 1.3x)
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - the angles between the notes are kinda inconsistent. it would look nicer if the angles are consistent
02:12:682 (1,2) - Kinda weird to how there are 1/2 drum beats on this section and its mapped to 1/2 sliders, while 02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are repeating sliders, yet they are only 1/1 drum beats on that section. Just something to point out cause i thought that was weird. I know the repeating sliders are mapped to those 1/4 clap sounds, but it just felt underwhelming for 02:12:682 (1,2) - to be sliders. Maybe make them circles to emphasize the drums rather than the claps.

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Light Insane is only 3.34* :(
Why not map starting 00:01:690 - ? Even though it's a GD, even the easy difficulty starts at this part, so I don't think it would be a problem mapping starting from the very beginning.
00:26:422 (3,4) - make it symmetrical. copy+paste+rotate180
00:26:880 (4,1) - bad flow, even though there's a loud sound. Combined with 00:26:422 (3) - , the player has to move back and forth a lot which is very uncomfortable to play.
00:40:163 (1,2) - could make symmetrical
00:48:407 (4,5) - slightly off from being symmetrical, although unnoticeable during gameplay. This is happening in some other similar patterns, idk if it's intentional.
01:06:499 (2,3) - too big spacing, and 01:07:186 (3,1) - should be bigger spacing to emphasize the loud sound there

[Matsu]
00:36:041 (3,1,2) - looks like a pattern, but I don't think (3) should be included with (1) and (2) in a pattern since they are in different combos.
00:17:491 (3,4,1) - could make into a equilateral triangle
00:18:865 (2,3) - I feel like it should be circle slider, not slider circle. The white ticks just feels stronger there so it should be clickable. Applies to all instances.
01:21:384 (3,4,5) - ^
01:47:033 (4,5,6,7) - Could make a cleaner shape pattern (parallelogram or rhombus)
02:13:598 (1) - :O
dun see too many problems here.


gl
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

Boruma wrote:

Easy
Length of beatmap is 4 seconds less than your other difficulties. thats fine

Normal
Your normal difficulty appears rather particularly cluttered with close notes.
Maybe increase the distance spacing to 1.0x?
It gets rather repetitive fast with all the close notes and it appears you're just going in very wide circles in the beginning part of 00:12:682 (1) - 00:31:002 (1) .
I recommend at least making paths in which differ in course from the original circle motions ie. sliders that are perpendicular to the previous slider.
It's not particularly fun to play in my opinion compared to your easy difficulty.
Other than that, no real problems.
It's more so an optional suggestion. I have been thinking to get a GD to do normal for this map. So yeah thanks for having a look regardless

Ohwow wrote:

m4m from roastin q

[Easy]
00:12:682 (1,1) - The first slider is a bit curved wider (less curved) than the 2nd one. Minor aesthetic, but it would be better if u copy pasta and rotated/flip to make it look more even. err ok
00:17:720 (2) - Try to avoid 1/2 sliders on easies, especial when the difficulty is only 1.2ish. You maybe be trying to map to that loud piano sound, but mapping to the beat is a lot more simple for beginners to play. The piano melody in this case adds quite a bit of complexity to the rhythm (which is why we wouldn't want to continue mapping to the piano at 00:18:865 - ). That also means that that 1/2 slider is the only one that's mapped to the piano while the rest of the pianos are ignored. which makes it kinda weird. Applies to other occurrences as well. remapped that part. Easy used to have piano keysounding that is why it has those short sliders.
00:17:720 (2,1,2) - Not a big fan of 3/2 rhythms and missing big white ticks on easies. They are sometimes okay if the music have obvious distinct sounds that support it, but imo, that's not the case with this portion of the song. possibly make the rhythm simple like this (Applies to other occurrences): https://i.gyazo.com/545243037bea856c7d9 ... 9d5136.jpg ^
00:25:964 (1) - slider doesn't look too good imo. If you want to make a curvy slider like that, try to make it as symmetrical as possible. And even if you make it symmetrical, you should keep it horizontal or vertical instead of trying to angle it, cause imo if you angle it, it would lose it's symmetrical look. https://i.gyazo.com/b47f90ea72bca459bc9 ... 85a49b.jpg errr ok
00:57:796 (2) - not sure if this slider is ok on easy. I haven't come across an easy with 1/2 repeating slider. might wanna check on that. ill leave it for now and polly ask someone later on
01:01:002 (2,1) - copy (2) and paste + rotate 180 degrees (and then make it repeat). Just more symmetrical patterns that could help on the aesthetics err ok
01:26:422 (1) - delete NC that is following nc pattern. NCing every object that hits major downbeat.
01:51:613 (1,1) - same, althought not really noticeable, it's a good habit to make these perfectly symmetrical by copy pasting and rotating. its really really negligible...
01:55:277 (1) - Might want to curve this side of the pentagon to make all the sides curved (and minor blanket to that next slider): https://i.gyazo.com/5234c5e5ff56870a6fa ... 568ae8.jpg er ok

[Normal]
00:09:934 (2) - random red anchored slider. Should just be curve like the rest.
I think the map could use some more 2/1 breaks, so it's not a long chain of overlapping objects.
i suk at mapping and modding normals sowwy
its fine since remap coming.

[Matsu]
00:36:041 (3,1,2) - looks like a pattern, but I don't think (3) should be included with (1) and (2) in a pattern since they are in different combos. its fine
00:17:491 (3,4,1) - could make into a equilateral triangle all right
00:18:865 (2,3) - I feel like it should be circle slider, not slider circle. The white ticks just feels stronger there so it should be clickable. Applies to all instances. fixed
01:21:384 (3,4,5) - ^ current is ok
01:47:033 (4,5,6,7) - Could make a cleaner shape pattern (parallelogram or rhombus) fxied
02:13:598 (1) - :O :O
dun see too many problems here. Thanks for mod!


gl
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

Ohwow wrote:

m4m from roastin q

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Light Insane is only 3.34* :( :(
Why not map starting 00:01:690 - ? Even though it's a GD, even the easy difficulty starts at this part, so I don't think it would be a problem mapping starting from the very beginning. alright, mapped!
00:26:422 (3,4) - make it symmetrical. copy+paste+rotate180 sure
00:26:880 (4,1) - bad flow, even though there's a loud sound. Combined with 00:26:422 (3) - , the player has to move back and forth a lot which is very uncomfortable to play. mm i did something
00:40:163 (1,2) - could make symmetrical k
00:48:407 (4,5) - slightly off from being symmetrical, although unnoticeable during gameplay. This is happening in some other similar patterns, idk if it's intentional. lol im just lazy
01:06:499 (2,3) - too big spacing, and 01:07:186 (3,1) - should be bigger spacing to emphasize the loud sound there kk

gl
thank you for modding! I'll consider buffing if I ever need to.

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Hectic
511 posts
Joined August 2015
Hectic
Hello there. From queue

Matsu
  1. 00:03:064 (3) - would put nc here, not next circle (00:06:728 (3) - same)
  2. 00:26:193 (2,1) - stack maybe? If no, then why 00:26:193 (2,1) - are stacked?
  3. 00:50:697 (3) - making this bent would be nicer
  4. 00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy
  5. 02:00:773 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't look nice
  6. 02:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this accurate

    Rhythm seems fine, hitsounds are great, but object placement feels awkward sometimes. Also check blankets, some of them are not perfect
SolarFox's Light Insane
  1. 00:05:354 (1,2) - hnnnnnng (blanket)
  2. 00:15:659 - maybe make snare sound clickable?
  3. 00:30:086 (3,4) - move them closer to each other (you did so there 00:45:201 (6,1) - )
  4. 01:57:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow there can be improved
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail
Metadata check - done.

IamKwaN wrote:

looks cool to me

References:
+ http://yanaginagi.net/disco/?paged=5
+ http://yanaginagi.net/profile/
+ http://www.ichika-ichika.com/goods.html
+ http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/30300/303 ... 730373.jpg
+ http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/30300/303 ... 730034.jpg
+ https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vidro

good luck!
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello there. From queue
SolarFox's Light Insane
  1. 00:05:354 (1,2) - hnnnnnng (blanket) barely noticeable lol, fixed slightly idk if its good
  2. 00:15:659 - maybe make snare sound clickable? sure
  3. 00:30:086 (3,4) - move them closer to each other (you did so there 00:45:201 (6,1) - ) kk
  4. 01:57:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow there can be improved stacked (3) on (1), I want to keep 01:58:712 (7,1) -
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!
thanksss

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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Vidro Moyou
TitleUnicode:ビードロ模様
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags:waiting in the summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia
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Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello there. From queue

Matsu
  1. 00:03:064 (3) - would put nc here, not next circle (00:06:728 (3) - same) Strictly following NC pattern B(
  2. 00:26:193 (2,1) - stack maybe? If no, then why 00:26:193 (2,1) - are stacked? fixed to your suggestion but these are the problems that will probably go forever like 00:27:338 (1,5) - after applying your fix xD
  3. 00:50:697 (3) - making this bent would be nicer okay fixed.
  4. 00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy Those are okay :l
  5. 02:00:773 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't look nice fixed.
  6. 02:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this accurate ?? if you're talking about shape. i think you missed out on shape:
    02:08:560 (2,3,4) - triangle, 02:09:247 (5,6,7) - another triangle

    Rhythm seems fine, hitsounds are great, but object placement feels awkward sometimes. Also check blankets, some of them are not perfect xD Thanks!
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!
DeletedUser_423548
DeletedUser_423548
M4M


  • [Easy]
  1. CS2.5 is better
  2. I am using too much NC
    00:03:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC
  3. 00:18:636 (2) - Ctrl+J is better
  4. 00:20:010 (4) - Add NC 00:21:384 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:25:048 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:827 (1) - It is up to you to fix it
    suggesthttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925745 Distance is no problem
  7. 00:52:987 (1) - ^
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925752
  8. 00:57:796 (2) - Let's refrain from 1/2 in Easy
  9. 00:58:483 - Will you pick up the sound?
  10. 01:26:422 (1) - remove NC
    01:31:460 (1) -
  11. 02:03:980 (2) - bad flow
    X:312 Y:196 is better
  12. 02:06:270 (1) - stack X:312 Y:196
  13. 02:09:476 (2,1) - overlap

  • [Matsu]
  1. 00:10:277 - You can add a circle here
  2. 00:15:659 (4,5) - Ctrl+G is better
  3. 00:18:865 (2) - Bad position
    suggest X:128 Y:276
  4. 01:29:628 (1,3) - symmetrical is better
  5. 01:33:293 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:47:949 (1) - Ctrl+G is better
  7. 01:57:796 (3,5) - Add NC
  8. 02:13:598 (1) - Good!
Good luck :)
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
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Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M


  • [Easy]
  1. CS2.5 is better Current is fine
  2. I am using too much NC
    00:03:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC I redone entire NC
  3. 00:18:636 (2) - Ctrl+J is better ok
  4. 00:20:010 (4) - Add NC 00:21:384 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:25:048 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:827 (1) - It is up to you to fix it I like current one
    suggesthttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925745 Distance is no problem
  7. 00:52:987 (1) - ^ fixed.
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925752
  8. 00:57:796 (2) - Let's refrain from 1/2 in Easy fixed
  9. 00:58:483 - Will you pick up the sound? I like current version
  10. 01:26:422 (1) - remove NC
    01:31:460 (1) -
  11. 02:03:980 (2) - bad flowfixed but i didnt use that
    X:312 Y:196 is better
  12. 02:06:270 (1) - stack X:312 Y:196i wouldnt overlap anything in easy even though it is allowed
  13. 02:09:476 (2,1) - overlap fixed

  • [Matsu]
  1. 00:10:277 - You can add a circle here I want to keep it simple :l
  2. 00:15:659 (4,5) - Ctrl+G is better i like current
  3. 00:18:865 (2) - Bad position
    suggest X:128 Y:276 i like current
  4. 01:29:628 (1,3) - symmetrical is better fixed
  5. 01:33:293 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  6. 01:47:949 (1) - Ctrl+G is better if I do that, next set of notes dont follow very well
  7. 01:57:796 (3,5) - Add NC keeping NC pattern
  8. 02:13:598 (1) - Good! Thanks xD
Good luck :)
thanks a lot!
elena2705
530 posts
Joined May 2012
elena2705
Hi~
I asked me to do mod for you)
So i do ;) ;) ;)
I notice some things that is too prominent.

Easy

01:40:621 (1) - if u do such slider than do it symmetrically;
01:55:277 (3) - here also;
01:44:285 (2) - new combo;
01:46:117 (1) - continue combo;
01:47:949 (1) - new combo;
01:49:781 (1) - continue combo;
01:51:613 (4) - new combo;
01:53:445 (1) - continue combo.

Akitoshi's Normal

01:27:567 (4) - add circle with clap.

Gaia's Hard

Why is there no kiai?
00:19:552 (8,1) - do this sliders parallel to each other;
01:13:827 (1,2,1) - i think it would be better :)

SolarFox's Light Insane

Why there is also no kiai?
Good diff!
I can't notice something wrong)

Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - correct this slider, a little move dot, so that it will be ideal)

00:43:369 (4,1) - the same;
01:19:323 (2,3) - the same;
01:20:468 (1,2,3) - the same;
01:24:132 (1,2) - the same;
01:47:949 (1,2) - the same;
01:51:613 (1,2) - the same;
02:13:598 (1) - this slider is so awesome!!! :oops: :oops: :oops:

Good luck to rank it!
Mun
468 posts
Joined July 2015
Mun
here we go
Sidetail
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Topic Starter
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Mun-key Business
Sidetail
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elena2705 wrote:

Easy

01:40:621 (1) - if u do such slider than do it symmetrically; fixed
01:55:277 (3) - here also; looks ok
01:44:285 (2) - new combo; for NC things, i usually strongly stick with nc rhythm unless reading is hard (then I would break the rhythm)
01:46:117 (1) - continue combo;
01:47:949 (1) - new combo;
01:49:781 (1) - continue combo;
01:51:613 (4) - new combo;
01:53:445 (1) - continue combo.

Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - correct this slider, a little move dot, so that it will be ideal) thanks i'll fix some sliders that doesnt look nice.

00:43:369 (4,1) - the same;
01:19:323 (2,3) - the same;
01:20:468 (1,2,3) - the same;
01:24:132 (1,2) - the same;
01:47:949 (1,2) - the same;
01:51:613 (1,2) - the same;
02:13:598 (1) - this slider is so awesome!!! :oops: :oops: :oops: thanks~

Good luck to rank it!
Jennifer
349 posts
Joined July 2015
Jennifer
from q

Matsu

00:23:674 (1) - this slider doesnt really look fit, look at 00:21:613 (1) - and 00:25:277 (1) - , they are all perfect curved sliders
00:30:086 (4) - i think this could be a little misleading, since 00:29:399 (2) - is repeating less (just pointing out)
01:16:575 (6) - nc should start here since it is a part of triplet slider
01:36:728 (6) - ^
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4) - why isnt this 8 combo like 01:41:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - :x

Gaia's Hard

00:38:331 (1) - i think if the slider shape was like 00:39:018 (2) - it'd look better
01:58:712 (1) - nc here instead
Asuka_-
1,459 posts
Joined February 2016
Asuka_-
(日本語でいいとのことだったのでmapperの難易度は日本語で書きます。　わからないとこあったら言ってください（google翻訳します。）)

im not good at english
i use google translation

General
kiaiがないdiffがあります。確認してください。

Easy
01:28:712 (4) - hpbar
01:35:125 (3) - ^
01:44:285 (2) - 規則的にいくとここがNCだと思うんですが、どうでしょう？
そうなるとこれ以降がずれてます。

LightInsane
00:31:002 (1,2,3) - keep ds
https://i.gyazo.com/b6019d607804ab4239f ... ef2c94.png
00:35:583 (3) - crtl+g?
00:48:865 (5) - I think that it is better to follow DS as it is a calm part.
01:32:377 (4) - https://i.gyazo.com/433386966f5339a775e ... 00bbfc.png
01:41:537 (3) - NC


Matsu
01:18:636 (1,2) - ここの流れが少し気になります。
(2)は(1)より上に置くといいかもしれません。（ここはkiaiの中なので飛ばしても問題ないと思います。）
https://i.gyazo.com/f50a9062eb77708839d ... 41c0e7.png

01:31:919 (3,4) - (4)が強いボーカルなので、ここは01:31:690 (2,3) -より飛ばすべきです。
加えて01:31:919 (3,4) - を強調させたいので、あえて01:31:460 (1,2) - のDSを狭めてもいいかもしれません。。
https://gyazo.com/79b5ead4bad65913a07c8515efea11a5

連打パート（01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ）のNCが4-8-4で置かれてるんですが、意図的でしょうか？

02:13:598 (1) - すごいｗｗ

返信は英語でも大丈夫ですｗ（頑張って翻訳します！）
GL~(^^♪
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~
I asked me to do mod for you)
So i do ;) ;) ;)
I notice some things that is too prominent.

SolarFox's Light Insane

Why there is also no kiai? i'm a gaia fanboiiii (it's rankable without it c:)
Good diff!
I can't notice something wrong) thanks :)

Good luck to rank it!

Asuka_- wrote:

(日本語でいいとのことだったのでmapperの難易度は日本語で書きます。　わからないとこあったら言ってください（google翻訳します。）)

im not good at english
i use google translation

General
kiaiがないdiffがあります。確認してください

LightInsane
00:31:002 (1,2,3) - keep ds ok
https://i.gyazo.com/b6019d607804ab4239f ... ef2c94.png
00:35:583 (3) - crtl+g? ok
00:48:865 (5) - I think that it is better to follow DS as it is a calm part. sure
01:32:377 (4) - https://i.gyazo.com/433386966f5339a775e ... 00bbfc.png https://puu.sh/vCdg4/04da5c21ed.jpg これならどうでしょう
01:41:537 (3) - NC sure

返信は英語でも大丈夫ですｗ（頑張って翻訳します！）
GL~(^^♪

Thank you :)
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Spork Lover
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Spork Lover
Small post from a random forum post I (and Yoshimaro) saw of the map:

The top diff has an unrankable green line on 00:01:690 - , since the sample set is different from the timing line. I would remove the green line and add a S:C50 sampleset on the timing line instead, since it has the same effect.

Also, the keysounding doesn't have clap feedback, which it should imo. This can even be done with a very quiet clap, it doesn't have to be that strong. (I would expect BN's to have a very strong opinion regarding that) (this is both in regards to the first and the second half)

01:33:980 - This note has a finish on all diffs, and it's oddly inconsistent, so I'd remove that on all diffs.


02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.)

Unused hitsounds: soft-hitwhistle44 and 48, so either use those or remove them

Also, sexy sliderart :^)


On the easy:
the only thing I found to be quite odd in terms of rhythm is 00:17:720 (2,3,4) - and the next patterns too (for ~10-15 seconds), where the downbeat on 00:18:178 - is ignored while still being strong. I would start a single tap from 00:17:720 - and then add the next two sliders afterwards, since that follows the song better imo.

Visually, 00:49:323 (1,3) - compared to 00:54:819 (3,1) - is a little unpolished, and I would either put the second pattern closer, or the other further away.

01:55:277 (3) - a new guideline suggests that all overlaps on easier diffs on sliders should have a very clear path, and starting out with an overlap can be very deceiving for new players. same applies to 02:09:934 (1) - this slider.

on light insane, 01:58:712 (7,1) - I would ctrl+J this due to having a clean transition, the currently is quite wonky https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7988360

but yeah, not really supposed to be a mod, but I just wanted to mention the important things I found ^^ GL :)))
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

[Jenn] wrote:

from q

Matsu

00:23:674 (1) - this slider doesnt really look fit, look at 00:21:613 (1) - and 00:25:277 (1) - , they are all perfect curved sliders Just like those two curved sliders, there is another sliders that improves variety. As you pointed 00:21:613 (1) - , this is paired with 00:20:010 (1) - and 00:25:277 (1) - is paired with 00:23:674 (1) - . I do think consistency is good thing, but consistency with shapes at this level is insignificant in terms of play-ability.
00:30:086 (4) - i think this could be a little misleading, since 00:29:399 (2) - is repeating less (just pointing out) Yes, I thought about this as well, but it seems fine after numourous of testplays by different people. I would've changed it by now if this didn't play nicely.
01:16:575 (6) - nc should start here since it is a part of triplet slider Strictly following my NC pattern which is NCing every downbeat.
01:36:728 (6) - ^
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4) - why isnt this 8 combo like 01:41:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - :x If I strictly follow my NC pattern I mentioned earlier, the combos would get pretty high. I thought changing NC for every snare hit would be nice. look below for further explanation!
Thanks~

Asuka_- wrote:

(日本語でいいとのことだったのでmapperの難易度は日本語で書きます。　わからないとこあったら言ってください（google翻訳します。）)

im not good at english
i use google translation 大丈夫ですよ～

General
kiaiがないdiffがあります。確認してください。もう分かっています。Kiaiはランキング クライティアリアで「オプショナル」と言っています。

Easy
01:28:712 (4) - hpbar　はい
01:35:125 (3) - ^　はい
01:44:285 (2) - 規則的にいくとここがNCだと思うんですが、どうでしょう？
そうなるとこれ以降がずれてます。あっ、わすれました。

Matsu
01:18:636 (1,2) - ここの流れが少し気になります。
(2)は(1)より上に置くといいかもしれません。（ここはkiaiの中なので飛ばしても問題ないと思います。）
https://i.gyazo.com/f50a9062eb77708839d ... 41c0e7.png　大丈夫だと思います。

01:31:919 (3,4) - (4)が強いボーカルなので、ここは01:31:690 (2,3) -より飛ばすべきです。
加えて01:31:919 (3,4) - を強調させたいので、あえて01:31:460 (1,2) - のDSを狭めてもいいかもしれません。。
https://gyazo.com/79b5ead4bad65913a07c8515efea11a5　（２，３）は大丈夫だと思いますけど、（３，４）のパトを直しました。

連打パート（01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ）のNCが4-8-4で置かれてるんですが、意図的でしょうか？はい、意図的です。毎スネア　ドラムにNCしました。 たくさんModの後で、直するのを決めました。下のModに理由があります。

02:13:598 (1) - すごいｗｗ　３９！

返信は英語でも大丈夫ですｗ（頑張って翻訳します！）ぼくは日本語を勉強していますから、練習のために日本語で書きました！ありがとうございます！
GL~(^^♪

Spork Lover wrote:

Small post from a random forum post I (and Yoshimaro) saw of the map:

The top diff has an unrankable green line on 00:01:690 - , since the sample set is different from the timing line. I would remove the green line and add a S:C50 sampleset on the timing line instead, since it has the same effect. oops, thanks for pointing that out.

Also, the keysounding doesn't have clap feedback, which it should imo. This can even be done with a very quiet clap, it doesn't have to be that strong. (I would expect BN's to have a very strong opinion regarding that) (this is both in regards to the first and the second half) I will probably get back to this since this is sort of a major change!

01:33:980 - This note has a finish on all diffs, and it's oddly inconsistent, so I'd remove that on all diffs. all right. removed.


02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.) After few mods pointing this out, I'll apply it. My reasoning for that NCing was using it in tasteful way (NC every snare drum), but I guess it didn't turn out very well.

Unused hitsounds: soft-hitwhistle44 and 48, so either use those or remove them　fixed.

Also, sexy sliderart :^) :^)


On the easy:
the only thing I found to be quite odd in terms of rhythm is 00:17:720 (2,3,4) - and the next patterns too (for ~10-15 seconds), where the downbeat on 00:18:178 - is ignored while still being strong. I would start a single tap from 00:17:720 - and then add the next two sliders afterwards, since that follows the song better imo. changed all the rhythm

Visually, 00:49:323 (1,3) - compared to 00:54:819 (3,1) - is a little unpolished, and I would either put the second pattern closer, or the other further away. hopefully it's better now

01:55:277 (3) - a new guideline suggests that all overlaps on easier diffs on sliders should have a very clear path, and starting out with an overlap can be very deceiving for new players. same applies to 02:09:934 (1) - this slider. fixed both!

but yeah, not really supposed to be a mod, but I just wanted to mention the important things I found ^^ GL :))) hey, thanks a lot!
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Spork Lover
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Spork Lover

BetaStar wrote:

02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.) After few mods pointing this out, I'll apply it. My reasoning for that NCing was using it in tasteful way (NC every snare drum), but I guess it didn't turn out very well.
If you wanted to keep the NC'ing, you could've done some kicksliders on the 1,2,3,4 sections, and then added 2x 1 --> 8 streams instead :) that could've probably worked too, as long as there's audible emphasis from the song to do it ^^
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Sidetail

Spork Lover wrote:

BetaStar wrote:

02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - on some of the streams (like this one), there's some obvious NC issues that I would look into ( 02:10:850 (5,5) - these for example), with then removing 02:10:392 (1,1) - these. (Basically, the pattern is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 3 times instead of 1,2,3,4 and then 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 twice (and 1,2,3,4 again lol) (horrible wording but yeah, since it's less deceiving this way.) After few mods pointing this out, I'll apply it. My reasoning for that NCing was using it in tasteful way (NC every snare drum), but I guess it didn't turn out very well.
If you wanted to keep the NC'ing, you could've done some kicksliders on the 1,2,3,4 sections, and then added 2x 1 --> 8 streams instead :) that could've probably worked too, as long as there's audible emphasis from the song to do it ^^
Thanks for further explanation!
Mun
468 posts
Joined July 2015
Mun
heil there
as promised

[Matsu]
00:01:690 (1,2,3) - The distance between all these objects is pretty much the same, but the timing gap between 1 and 2 is 2/4 of a beat, while 2-3 is a full beat. This discrepancy not being reflected in visual distance is bound to cause misreadings.
00:09:934 (3,4) - It's pretty subjective and nitpicky, but generic semi-straight sliders like this often look best when they are close to being vertical or horizontal, rather than diagonal.
00:15:659 (4,5) - Both of these notes are the same intensity (strong), and yet 00:14:972 (2,3) - (weaker sound) is a greater spacing than 00:15:430 (3,4) - making your spacing emphasis rather backwards here. I would decrease spacing to 3 and increase spacing to 4.
00:16:346 (1,2,3) - sorry for nitpick ;-; this is a very cool pattern, but the circle is actually not in the middle, nor does it blanket to either slider around it. It'd be a bit more solid if you actually blanketed it.
00:19:094 (3,4,1) - The entire section is almost bereft of straight sliders, why do you start and stop using them within this one short pattern?
00:27:338 (1,3) - You remember that pattern 2 mods up where I nitpicked a blanket? That's a really cool combination of a long slider and a short slider to imply a full circle, I'd suggest using that here.
00:29:399 (2,4) - There is no visual indication of any difference in the length of repeats on these. Since 4 is twice the length of 2, why not split 4 up into two repeat sliders instead?
00:37:415 (3,4,5,6) - The combination of zig-zag, high spacing, and sharp corners here creates a stark contrast to the smoothly circular-flowing, calm map surrounding this. Why does this pattern so strongly break that movement?
00:42:911 (3,4,1) - creates a relatively tight circular motion. By making another pattern that implies tight circular motion directly afterwards (00:43:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) and separating those, you are not breaking flow, but bending it in the perfect way to feel heavily uncomfortable. Is this intentional? If so, what is your rationale behind it?
00:57:109 (2) - I've pointed out straight sliders that seem out of place in a section of curved sliders, but this one seems especially notable.
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I have quite a few issues with this stream.
In the first part, the curve starts out slight, but tightens to make a 180 degree turn. Considering how short the distance is from the start to that curve, I'd recommend making it a consistent curve from the start to 01:41:995 (1) -
Second, the stream is just so incredibly bland.
2a) the strong notes are emphasized by nothing but hitsounds. Generally, the most common ways beats are emphasized is through sharp corners, in which the note on the corner is emphasized.
Third, and most importantly, this is a really, really heavy diffspike. This is a massive deathstream toward the end of a map with one other stream not even half of its size. This is totally unmerited and is going to kill a huge number of players. Break this stream up!!
02:00:086 (4,5,6) - This triple doesn't exist in the music
02:09:934 - ANGERY

im sort of running out of time to be sane and awake at the same time as it's past midnight so i think i'll just stop it here. Might try modding other diffs later
SolarFox
366 posts
Joined February 2012
SolarFox

Spork Lover wrote:

Small post from a random forum post I (and Yoshimaro) saw of the map:

on light insane, 01:58:712 (7,1) - I would ctrl+J this due to having a clean transition, the currently is quite wonky https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7988360 alright

but yeah, not really supposed to be a mod, but I just wanted to mention the important things I found ^^ GL :)))
cod
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[General]
consider put end spinner in Easy, SolarFox's one. 최소한 본인난이도의 일관성은 유지해야 하므로 이지는 강권함
왜 SB가 없죠??????
와이드스크린 체크

[Easy]
01:33:293 (1) - 여기 01:33:980 - 이 포인트에 있던 피니시를 옮겨온 듯 싶은데. 차라리 지우는게 낫다고 생각해요

[Akitoshi]
why there's so many notes with no hitsound? 00:05:354 (1,2,3) - . can talk with Betastar, and put some HS.
01:00:086 (7,1) - looks like not stacking is better, cuz 01:00:315 (1) - has strong finish

[Gaia]
Sagiri is mine
00:37:186 (6,7) - i didn't think here has sth suitable to high DS.
01:13:827 (1) - how about tail mute
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - can u make this flow more circlular?

[SolorFox]
00:24:361 (2,3,4,5,1) - give a bit more DS here to make consistent with 00:22:300 (2,3,4) - this kind
00:29:857 (2,3) - DS same with 00:28:025 (2,3) - this kind, if no reason to give big DS
00:34:667 (1,2,3) - pls make all kind of this slight DS error consistent. i felt really uncomfortable checking this.
00:43:827 (1,2) - of course it's light insane, but considering your DS use before, too big DS. u need some buildup or sth to use this big DS.
-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7995491 this degree would be ok
01:15:888 (3) - also put drumnormal pls

[Betastar]
피아노 개쩐다.....
00:03:064 (3,1,2,3) - 얘의 DS랑 00:06:728 (3,1,2,3) - 를 일정하게 맞춰주면 더 좋을거같아요. 어렵지 않게 고칠수 있으니까..
00:17:033 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/vFbQq/83f301e5f5.jpg 맵 전반의 이야기인데, 이렇게 둥근 것들간의 간격을 일정하게 맞춰주면, 구조적 안정감을 유발할 수 있어요. 베타스타님 패턴에서 좀만 더 신경쓰면 가져갈 수 있는 거라서 제안해봅니다.. 이거만 잘지키면 손닉님한테 맵 잘찍는다는 소리 들을수있음ㅋㅋ
01:29:628 (1) - 노래상으로 나름 임팩트가 있어야 하는 노트인데, DS상으로도 오히려 줄어들어버렸고, 01:29:399 (7) - 에 피니시가 있는 반면에 01:29:628 (1) - 에는 피니시가 없어서 심각하게 강조가 안되고 있어요. 피니시를 연속으로 넣으면 지저분해서 안넣으셨을거라 생각하는데, 저는 앞쪽에 좀더 약한 소리나 기본휘슬같은거를 쓰고, 뒤쪽에 강한 크래시사운드를 넣으면 해결될거라 생각해요.
01:34:438 (3,4,5) - 상당히 불규칙하게 높은 DS의 점프가 들가있네요. 노래가 받쳐주지 않습니다. 01:36:041 (3,4,5) - 최소 이거정도로는 낮춰야할듯
02:13:598 (1) - 갓

전난이도 공통, 00:01:690 (1) - 이구간에 킥사운드만 계속 사용하는데, 거기다 피니시의 사용도 소극적이다 보니 되게 심심했던거같아요. 이지에서는 노트마저 심심하다보니 그게 더 부각되는 느낌이었구.. 기본 휘슬로 보컬위치마다 넣어주거나 하면 좋을거같아요.

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