Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur

posted
Total Posts
49
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月27日 at 15:14:07

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Secret Liqueur
Source: 働くオトナの恋愛事情
Tags: imoutosan Eggache0 Fushimi Rio opening galgame eroge visual novel full ver. version Hataraku Otona no Ren'ai Jijou GWAVE 2016 1st advance
BPM: 105
Filesize: 7853kb
Play Time: 05:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Last Order (6.66 stars, 1125 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FY6f_KykilI

240 bpm singletaps

old collab version with Flower and LunaSaika

MP3 is changed on 11/13/2017. Please redownload if you have downloaded this map before!
Last edited by Fia , edited 80 times in total.
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
如果有下次的话请自己做timing 前面这段好烦啊
Iolite
219 posts
Joined February 2014
Iolite
完整版出了？
我能不能做个gd呀
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

LunaSaika wrote:

完整版出了？
我能不能做个gd呀
已经出了 我订的盘子快送到了
主要问题是我不太有时间飞图 说不定就和上一张一样坟了
这张打算做个APP的 你要是不介意的话可以做个低难度……主难度难的不行估计没人打得动 可能有个容易一点的diff比较好

No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties.
啊对了 还得麻烦你留个几秒之类的扔给我做 不然我就尴尬了
Last edited by Fia , edited 2 times in total.
Iolite
219 posts
Joined February 2014
Iolite

PinkHeart wrote:

已经出了 我订的盘子快送到了
主要问题是我不太有时间飞图 说不定就和上一张一样坟了
这张打算做个APP的 你要是不介意的话可以做个低难度……主难度难的不行估计没人打得动 可能有个容易一点的diff比较好
我就是想做这歌，坟不坟无所谓啦
当然难度会做低点倒不如说不可能做到你那种难度w
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Love you and this map ♥
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Love you and this map ♥
Happy New Year CB <333 Long time no see! :)
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
惊了怎么做的这么难，看来是时候拿出点真正的太监本事了
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Mei wrote:

惊了怎么做的这么难，看来是时候拿出点真正的太监本事了
别啊 你看我kiai多善良
Left
2,162 posts
Joined October 2014
Left
full ver <3
can I see this map in ranked map category someday?
Net0
Beatmap Nominator
1,273 posts
Joined October 2014
Net0
I think Imoutosan and Pinkheart are soulmates. Their destiny is to fill osu! with quality eroge maps -w-
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio

Net0 wrote:

I think Imoutosan and Pinkheart are soulmates. Their destiny is to fill osu! with quality eroge maps -w-
No, nonono, never :? not soulmates at all
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
pinkheart and imoutosan are best ♥
Net0
Beatmap Nominator
1,273 posts
Joined October 2014
Net0

imoutosan wrote:

Net0 wrote:

I think Imoutosan and Pinkheart are soulmates. Their destiny is to fill osu! with quality eroge maps -w-
No, nonono, never :? not soulmates at all
I think you understood wrong when I said soulmates :3 , don't worry, just saying you guys are awesome.
I'll edit this to a mod later on when the map is finished.
nhule12345
132 posts
Joined January 2013
nhule12345
i cannot map , but can i contribute somethings as i want to show that i love your maps and your hard works ? :D

Lyric
一滲むネオンに溶けてゆく音は 秘密の逢引(ノクターン)一
一Nijimu neon ni tokete yuku oto ha himitsu no nokutaan

夜を照らす街灯が紅く頬を染めてった
Yoru wo terasu gaitou ga akaku hoo wo sometetta

寄り掛かるその先 伝うあなたの体温
Yori kakaru sono saki tsutau anata no taion


飲み込んでくリキュ―ルは 二人きりの夢―夜(ユートピア)
Nomikon de ku rikyuuru ha futari kiri no yuutopia


塗られてく濁った 白と紅が交わる
Nurareteku nigotta shiro to akaga majiwaru


粉雪が舞う裏側
Konayuki ga mau uragawa


口付けの音だけ 響く小さな部屋で
Kuchidzuke no oto dake hibiku chiisana heya de


「大好き」と呟いた
「Daisuki」to tsubuyaita


ねぇ、もっと強く私を揺さぶってよ
Nee motto tsuyoku watashi wo yusabutteyo

首筋にキスをして
Kubisuji ni kisu wo shite


速くなる二人の鼓動は、甘い快楽(セレナーデ)だから
Hayaku naru futari no kodou ha amai serenaade dakara

背徳的(インモラル)な夜はまだ終わらないから
Inmoraru na yoru ha mada owaranai kara


その指で愛してと
Sono yubi de aishite to

零れた”何か”で潤んだ
Koboreta ”nani ka”de urun da

ねぇ、もっともっと 抱き締めて―
Nee 、motto motto dakishimete―

肩で息をしたまま
Kata de iki wo shita mama

重なる二つの影は
Kasanaru futatsu no kage ha

夜の中紛れて 何度もキスを交わす
Yoru no naka de magirete nando mo kisu wo kawasu

織りあう夜　美しく
Ori au yori utsukushiku

香る２つ巴
Kaoru futatsu tomoe

いつまでもこのままで
Itsumademo konomama de

二人きり 願うだけ
Futarikiri negau dake

ねぇ　もっと強く私を悶えさせて
Nee motto tsuyoku watashi wo modaesasete

ただ白く溺れたい
Tada shiroku oboretai

伝わるその体温さえ
Tsutawaru sono taion sae

今はただ愛しくて
Ima ha tada itoshikute

口移しで飲ませた
Kuchi utsushide nomaseta

リキュ―ルの味は
Rikyuuru no aji ha

あなたのキスと同じ
Anata no kisu to onaji

意識が飛んでしまうくらい
Ishiki ga tonde shimau kurai

甘い快楽(セレナーデ)に溺れるの
Amai serenaade ni oboreru no

ねぇ　もっと強く私を揺さぶってよ
Nee motto tsuyoku watashi wo yusabutte yo

首筋にキスをして
Kubisuji ni kisu wo shite

速くなる二人の鼓動は
Hayaku naru futari no kodou ha

甘い快楽(セレナーデ)だから
Amai serenaade dakara

小さな部屋に
Chiisana heya ni

滲む口付けの音に
Nijimu kuchidzuke no oto ni

まだ溺れていたいから
Mada oboreteitai kara

終わらない秘密の逢引(ノクターン)
Owaranai himitsu no nokutaan

ねぇ　もっともっと愛してよ―
Nee motto motto aishiteyo―
Misure
952 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
soulmates
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
是这样的 扶老二说你滑条太tm快了 让你把跳再搞大一点 现在最难的一段反而是一堆小跳 显得很不aim 很不pp 建议把kiai中间全换成大跳算了
hehe
1,971 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
soulmates
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

imoutosan wrote:

是这样的 扶老二说你滑条太tm快了 让你把跳再搞大一点 现在最难的一段反而是一堆小跳 显得很不aim 很不pp 建议把kiai中间全换成大跳算了
made some big jumps
anna apple
1,256 posts
Joined March 2014
anna apple
I have some thoughts for flower

00:40:806 (6,7) - I think if you are going to map this sound, you should also map 00:40:681 -

00:45:931 (3,4) - extending 3 like this doesn't make sense to me because for 00:43:931 (5) - you made the slider end to strong beat, though for 00:46:222 - there is no beat, at least you should snap it to the 1/4 like 00:45:056 (1) -

00:55:056 (1) - this should be 1/4 because of vocal sound 00:55:431 - , you do similar for 00:54:306 (2) -

01:00:056 (1,2,3,4) - I think this should have more circles, and be more specific to the sounds. similar to 00:52:431 (4,1,2,3,4) - and 00:44:431 (6,1,2,3,4) -

01:01:806 (3) - 01:02:806 (4) - 01:03:806 (3) - I think this should be 1/4 since the drum beat on 01:01:931 - 01:02:931 - 01:03:931 -

01:06:806 - I don't think you should skip this beat

01:21:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this rhythm works well with song, since its more held out notes than lots of 1/4 ones. Which in my mind takes away from the importance of 01:24:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -

01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this should be more specific to the drums, they don't repeat like this
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
摸摸妹桑的

00:00:625 (1) - 这里开始，如果是按照人声(声优吐字的节奏）的话。那么00:01:413 - 到00:01:698 - 是一段，00:01:841 - 到00:02:127 - 这里应该算另一段。00:02:613 - 到00:02:935 - 一段，00:03:096 - 这里自分一段（这里做成单点或者跟后面00:03:258 - 00:03:419 - 组成滑条或者折返都星）
00:13:306 (2,3,4) - 这里虽然看着没问题。但节奏突然太快可能不会太适应。有点像sotarks新rank的那首Outside of Melancholy的开头 感觉很不友好。
00:15:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里能理解跟后面节奏呼应 但是bgm里并没特别凸显出这种节奏 希望简单点。（滑条）
00:24:556 (11,1) - 没包好
00:27:306 (2,3) - 3没包好2的尾巴

就这些吧 以上个人意见（除了最后两个。。）

牛逼牛逼牛逼
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
req by 妹桑
然后摸不动
但是
00:19:931 (4,1) - stack
00:21:056 (1,5) - 既然要用这种梗的话那么堆叠系数最好调一下．看了一眼后面有影响的地方还蛮多的
00:21:972 (7,8) - stack
glgl
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
大声告诉大家谁是最菜的
是我
Saki
437 posts
Joined October 2013
Saki
m4m from imoduo

[general]
图全长不够05:00:056 - 00:00:625 - 差了半秒
没sb关widescreen support

[一抹多]
00:01:984 - 这里这个tick音不能想办法消掉吗，感觉很难受
00:25:555 (5) - 其实为什么不和前面的89叠起来呢
[扶老二]
00:44:431 (6,1) - 这个nc没问题吗
01:24:806 (5,6) - 换个滑条吧
01:30:556 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉不好看啊，我提个建议比如3放现在6,4包2,5放右下，6丢在左边
01:46:556 (3,4,5,6) - 类似，345这个钝角肯定吃屎，而且和前面比01:46:306 (2,3) - 这间距大太多了
01:53:056 (1) - 这一串能玩？
[Dxxxxxxxx]
02:07:931 (1,2) - blanket better?
02:57:931 (4,1) - ^
03:17:806 (2) - nc here
[粉心]
04:28:306 (2,2) - 没叠好吧
04:31:806 (3,2) - 调一下这俩应该能叠上
04:40:306 (2,1) - ^
04:45:722 (4,5,6) - 二连啊，喂一波屎，就像开头一抹多那样
04:53:722 (3,4,5) - ^
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
shuang
blueloniess
364 posts
Joined February 2014
blueloniess
既然是4个part 圈的，感觉没有必要分开了。
有图片说明，图源是imgur，估计要挂代理才能看到


00:01:413 (1,1) - 这里的节奏我是觉得挺怪的,这样应该舒服一点


00:04:503 (3,1) - 啊，虽然不影响，但是我有点强迫症...叠一下把...
00:15:722 (3,4) - 这个我有点想换成1/6滑条，当然，不换也不影响，只是换了之后好打一点而已.
00:22:556 (9) - 根据音乐节奏，这里应该NC
00:26:556 (9) - 同↑
00:30:556 (9) -
00:34:556 -

=================================================

00:44:556 (1,2,3,4) - 这么放成三角形感觉更加好看一点也更加pp一点 ;d



01:08:556 (2) - 理由同↑


01:22:056 (1,4,5) - 这里的5不建议跟1把，歌曲这里没有重音啥的，这里突然变距没看出想强调什么。建议跟歌曲走，跟前面一样DS就行.
01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 爷爷...做成一个渐渐变大的跳如何，至少好打一点点吖...



02:04:306 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 摆个正五角星如何
02:17:306 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+shift+D 做一个正三角形pls~
02:18:056 (6,7) - 这个flow有点怪，7拿开一点把


02:42:556 (6,7,8,2,3,4) - 这里，6的尾巴，7，8，后面的2，3，4的开头可以做个五角星


03:05:306 (2) - Ctrl+G 后成一个比较顺的flow把

04:15:306 (1,2,3) - 放成一个正三角型如何

04:16:056 (1) - 这个不好看,捏成这种躺着的感觉好一点








我还是太菜了，这种图根本摸不动。

感觉就是简单的水了一下而已.
:o :o
太神
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
2017-05-13 00:51 Delis: henlo
2017-05-13 00:51 imoutosan: hi
2017-05-13 00:51 Delis: do you mod O.O
2017-05-13 00:52 imoutosan: umm, yes
2017-05-13 00:52 Delis: o mind me asking you for a mod then?
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: send a pm would be fine
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: I always forget request
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: s
2017-05-13 00:53 Delis: do you mean in forum pm
2017-05-13 00:53 Delis: =.=
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: yesh
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: yes*
2017-05-13 00:53 Delis: okie!
2017-05-13 00:55 imoutosan: by the way can you do quick mods?
2017-05-13 00:55 imoutosan: I have a map need some mod too
2017-05-13 00:55 Delis: o
2017-05-13 00:55 Delis: a m4m thing would be great
2017-05-13 00:55 Delis: which one?
2017-05-13 00:55 imoutosan: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1169586 Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur [Last order]]
2017-05-13 00:56 Delis: dl'ing
2017-05-13 00:57 Delis: is this a collab
2017-05-13 00:57 imoutosan: yes
2017-05-13 00:57 imoutosan: other diffs are just mappers' parts
2017-05-13 00:58 Delis: o I was hopefully going to do an irc mod lol
2017-05-13 00:58 imoutosan: I guess it's fine for my part...
2017-05-13 00:59 Delis: 03:04:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this should be 1/3 D:
2017-05-13 00:59 Delis: oh alright..
2017-05-13 01:00 imoutosan: because I can't fix other's parts :(
2017-05-13 01:00 Delis: prolly just tell the mapper who made there lol
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: um
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: 00:37:056 - until here is mine
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: then no more my parts
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: ._.
2017-05-13 01:02 Delis: 00:01:413 (1) - the bpm is suspicious
2017-05-13 01:02 Delis: like, the vocal at 00:01:841 - isn't exactly there
2017-05-13 01:02 imoutosan: I see
2017-05-13 01:03 Delis: did you try bpm 93, and snap it in 1/6?
2017-05-13 01:03 Delis: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8067891
2017-05-13 01:03 Delis: this feels much right
2017-05-13 01:04 imoutosan: let me see
2017-05-13 01:04 Delis: though I'm not a timing person, not really sure with this lol
2017-05-13 01:04 imoutosan: seems much better
2017-05-13 01:05 imoutosan: I'll ask for some other people about it
2017-05-13 01:05 Delis: yea
2017-05-13 01:05 Delis: wow this song has really complicated rhythm
2017-05-13 01:06 imoutosan: I copied snapping from the ranked version
2017-05-13 01:06 imoutosan: I guess most rhythms would be fine...?
2017-05-13 01:07 Delis: 00:15:722 (3) - isn't this on the blue tick in 1/4?
2017-05-13 01:07 Delis: in the case there's the sax (or idk name) and the circle is following something else
2017-05-13 01:08 imoutosan: yeah i think so
2017-05-13 01:08 Delis: and the guitar is at 00:15:764 - lol
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: hmm
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: there's similar rhythms
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: on 00:23:722 -
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: maybe snapping to 1/6 is more consistent?
2017-05-13 01:11 Delis: but this still doesn't fit to the instrumentals properly?
2017-05-13 01:11 Delis: more like the timing is idk anything lol
2017-05-13 01:12 imoutosan: I don't know if players could notice the guitar
2017-05-13 01:12 Delis: well prob ask someone decent at timing i guess
2017-05-13 01:12 imoutosan: I guess so
2017-05-13 01:13 Delis: 00:28:431 (7) - a 1/4 slider here? the sax (i hope it is) plays to 00:28:556 - so to make a difference with the gaps you made around here
2017-05-13 01:13 Delis: such as 00:27:181 -
2017-05-13 01:15 Delis: 00:36:306 (1,2) - this is confusing in some aspect since it's overlapped with high-bpm single taps
2017-05-13 01:15 imoutosan: I see
2017-05-13 01:15 imoutosan: yea, so move it away from the slider?
2017-05-13 01:16 Delis: yep
2017-05-13 01:16 Delis: it's good to make a different pattern here because the song is much different from 00:35:806 (1,2,3) -
2017-05-13 01:17 Delis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8068020
2017-05-13 01:17 imoutosan: I see, fixed
2017-05-13 01:17 Delis: this ruins your pattern so take it as an example
2017-05-13 01:17 Delis: :d
2017-05-13 01:18 imoutosan: I understand the idea
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: 00:08:823 - the inherited line is unsnapping
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: by 3ms
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: I'd rather remove it
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: because it doesn't change SV o
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: yea i think you forgot to remove it lol
2017-05-13 01:19 imoutosan: I guess so
2017-05-13 01:19 Delis: um that's it you basically done cool patterns there
2017-05-13 01:19 Delis: and it's hard to mod only 30s!!
2017-05-13 01:20 imoutosan: ummmm actually I thought flower's part needs mod
2017-05-13 01:20 imoutosan: but irc happened before I could say this
2017-05-13 01:20 Delis: o I'd love to leave a mod for his part as well
2017-05-13 01:20 imoutosan: anyway it still helps a lot because I suck at timing lol
2017-05-13 01:20 Delis: "Flower‘s part"
2017-05-13 01:20 Delis: it's
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: Flower's part
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: XD
2017-05-13 01:21 imoutosan: oops
2017-05-13 01:21 imoutosan: ._.
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: o
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: flower takes longer part than you?
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: it's unrankable iirc
2017-05-13 01:21 imoutosan: and everyone
2017-05-13 01:22 imoutosan: and I'm not the one who submit the map so it's fine ._.
2017-05-13 01:22 Delis: o
2017-05-13 01:22 Delis: fuck
2017-05-13 01:22 Delis: didn't really see that
2017-05-13 01:23 Delis: XD
2017-05-13 01:23 imoutosan: :D
2017-05-13 01:41 Delis: o so
2017-05-13 01:41 Delis: should probably post the mod with this log :D?
2017-05-13 01:41 imoutosan: I think so
2017-05-13 01:41 imoutosan: maybe just say irc modded with imoutosan could work too

so imouto3 asked me to take a look over flower's part, let's see what I can find out.
00:40:222 (4) - I would remove this note since this doesn't really play nice in terms of overmapping. compared to patterns that are similar to this one they're mostly covered by sliders not a single circle (00:45:931 (3) like this one), thus following it with a slider from 00:40:056 possibly could work better in playing wise.
00:59:056 (1,2) - this should be mapped on the vocals instead of nothing. 00:58:056 (1,2,3,4) is at least mapped to both the vocals and drums but the slider ends, though 00:59:056 (1,2) has literally no drums that can be mixed with 1/3 sliders nicely imo. a 1/2 slider and a circle at 00:59:431 could be enough and this still can accelerate the flow to the 1/3 slider at 00:59:556 (3)
01:02:556 (3) - isn't this supposed to be snapped in 1/4 for the guitar because you did the same for previous slider 01:02:306 (2) ?
01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol this is too much for me .-.
hope I understand your mapping okay here lol.

03:04:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - besides flower's part, this should be snapped in 1/3 according to how the drums play. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8068236 actually this is the way to map the music properly if you care.
i have rabies
18 posts
Joined October 2016
i have rabies
Very great map! I would suggest one thing though:

-Maybe add a short break between 3.9% through 4.8% of the song, I'm a pretty bad osu player, and I find myself failing at that point easily. If you wanna know where those '%'s are, then go to the editor and look at the bottom left corner. (Just in case you didn't know)

I hope you get your map ranked very soon! Good luck to you!
7ambda
2,590 posts
Joined January 2015
7ambda
where's the hp 8

  1. 02:59:368 (3,4) - Ctrl+g (seems like your intention)



  2. 02:59:493 (4,1) - 10/10 blanket
  3. 02:02:493 (6,7,1) - So I noticed this is 1/8, but 04:46:118 (1,2,1,2) is 1/4. I compared both parts, and they sound musically the same. Can you explain why you made the first pattern 1/8 when there's no sound on yellow tick?
  4. 02:05:345 (4,5,6) - 04:49:220 (1,2,1,2) - ^
  5. 05:00:118 (1) - The music fades completely fades out at the end of the measure, so continuing the spinner past that doesn't make sense imo.

can't find much cus i'm bad at modding
Last edited by 7ambda , edited 7 times in total.
7ambda
2,590 posts
Joined January 2015
7ambda
damn, didn't know you were already looking at the thread

added another point to my mod since you gave kudos
[Meo]
17 posts
Joined December 2015
[Meo]
Not sure if this map is still being worked on but the map and music are out of sync, is there a reason for this at the moment?
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia
MP3 is changed on 11/13/2017. Maybe you need to redownload.
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

[Kamiya] wrote:

00:00:625 (1) - 这里开始，如果是按照人声(声优吐字的节奏）的话。那么00:01:413 - 到00:01:698 - 是一段，00:01:841 - 到00:02:127 - 这里应该算另一段。00:02:613 - 到00:02:935 - 一段，00:03:096 - 这里自分一段（这里做成单点或者跟后面00:03:258 - 00:03:419 - 组成滑条或者折返都星） 会有跨红线滑条 我很懒
00:13:306 (2,3,4) - 这里虽然看着没问题。但节奏突然太快可能不会太适应。有点像sotarks新rank的那首Outside of Melancholy的开头 感觉很不友好。 跟short版保持一致吧 差不多的开头
00:15:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里能理解跟后面节奏呼应 但是bgm里并没特别凸显出这种节奏 希望简单点。（滑条）o
00:24:556 (11,1) - 没包好 换了别的pattern
00:27:306 (2,3) - 3没包好2的尾巴 我看着没问题啊

就这些吧 以上个人意见（除了最后两个。。）

牛逼牛逼牛逼

Pata-Mon wrote:

req by 妹桑
然后摸不动
但是
00:19:931 (4,1) - stack
00:21:056 (1,5) - 既然要用这种梗的话那么堆叠系数最好调一下．看了一眼后面有影响的地方还蛮多的
00:21:972 (7,8) - stack
glgl
都改了

Vert wrote:

m4m from imoduo

[general]
图全长不够05:00:056 - 00:00:625 - 差了半秒 做了一些技术性调整
没sb关widescreen support o

[一抹多]
00:01:984 - 这里这个tick音不能想办法消掉吗，感觉很难受 o
00:25:555 (5) - 其实为什么不和前面的89叠起来呢 换了pattern

[粉心]
04:28:306 (2,2) - 没叠好吧 调整了一下
04:31:806 (3,2) - 调一下这俩应该能叠上 隔太远了 看不到
04:40:306 (2,1) - ^ ^
04:45:722 (4,5,6) - 二连啊，喂一波屎，就像开头一抹多那样 是的
04:53:722 (3,4,5) - ^ 这就算了

blueloniess wrote:

既然是4个part 圈的，感觉没有必要分开了。
有图片说明，图源是imgur，估计要挂代理才能看到


00:01:413 (1,1) - 这里的节奏我是觉得挺怪的,这样应该舒服一点 后来改了红线 这样摆会跨红线放滑条 我很懒

00:04:503 (3,1) - 啊，虽然不影响，但是我有点强迫症...叠一下把... 不好看啊pong友
00:15:722 (3,4) - 这个我有点想换成1/6滑条，当然，不换也不影响，只是换了之后好打一点而已. 差不太多 算了吧
00:22:556 (9) - 根据音乐节奏，这里应该NC 按小节下的
00:26:556 (9) - 同↑
00:30:556 (9) -
Others were referring to remapped parts so I didn't reply them. Thanks for mods!
papapa213
152 posts
Joined November 2014
papapa213
水摸来啦

01:30:081 (1) - 或许应该在01:29:956 - click？
02:51:956 - ^
01:50:581 (1) - 03:12:581 (2) - NC不一样
01:56:581 (2) - 03:18:581 (2) - 音效不一样
01:42:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:04:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:45:581 (3) - 03:07:581 (3) - ^
01:46:456 (2) - 03:08:456 (2) - ^
01:47:581 (3) - 03:09:581 (3) - 滑条尾音效
01:49:456 (2) - 03:11:456 (2) - ^
01:53:081 (1) - 03:15:081 (1) - 滑条尾音效
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Imouto koko
from irc req
[Last order]
  1. 00:22:331 (8,9) - blanket，很近所以提一下。
  2. 00:47:956 (3,4,5) - 太近了，不如往右一点正好和00:47:581 (2) - 包齐。
  3. 00:57:081 - 音效存在感低了点，换个有鼓的可能好一些？比如Sampleset Drum + Additions Soft.
  4. 03:39:331 (2,3) - 没叠好。
  5. 04:04:956 (2,1) - 折返箭头再露出来一点可能比较好？

排列真漂亮 :)
GL
写完po了才发现本来就在群里说了要摸这图
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

papapa213 wrote:

水摸来啦

01:30:081 (1) - 或许应该在01:29:956 - click？ 这不太好 人声很突出
02:51:956 - ^
01:46:456 (2) - 03:08:456 (2) - ^ 不 这俩一样

Imouto koko wrote:

from irc req
[Last order]
  1. 00:47:956 (3,4,5) - 太近了，不如往右一点正好和00:47:581 (2) - 包齐。那边没位置 这是blanket位
  2. 00:57:081 - 音效存在感低了点，换个有鼓的可能好一些？比如Sampleset Drum + Additions Soft. 挺明显的啊我听着
  3. 04:04:956 (2,1) - 折返箭头再露出来一点可能比较好？ 正三角形露不出来了

排列真漂亮 :)
GL
写完po了才发现本来就在群里说了要摸这图
Thanks for modding!
Lasse
osu! Alumni
3,644 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
why is imoutosan in tags?
could add "version" to tags for full version, since you only have ver.
also romanized name of the game in tags would be good, seems like it is "Hataraku Otona no Ren'ai Jijou"
maybe "結び音リボン ～Daichi no Oto～" since the song was released on that album

captalizing the difficulty name like "Last Order" would look nicer in this case imo

01:09:081 - 02:31:081 - i think they way you nc'd the first one was nicer, but either way it would make sense to decide for one of them and use it for both
02:46:081 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/H5iTRFU.jpg seems like autostacking breaks your intended pattern
03:46:706 (2,3) - ^
02:49:331 (2,1) - noticeable broken stack
02:55:206 - 04:17:206 - remove drum sampleset from tail?
03:01:081 (1) - missing finish
03:52:081 (1,2) - transition seems a bit awkward tapping rhythm wise, something like https://i.imgur.com/IFSs5r8.jpg might work well

04:26:956 - can you tone down normal finish usage in this part a bit? they seem a bit too much like that. mainly 04:28:956 (2,3,4,5,1) -
just changing 04:29:581 - to soft finish would be much nicer already imo
04:58:456 (2) - now here i think normal finish would sound better than soft

05:00:706 - use your muted hitnormal here?

don't really have much to say about the map, great as expected
let me know when you replied


technically there is still really quiet audio until around 5:01 so I guess the ending spinner is fine
https://i.imgur.com/zauW3Ar.png
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Lasse wrote:

why is imoutosan in tags? He mapped the intro and 2nd kiai
could add "version" to tags for full version, since you only have ver. ok
also romanized name of the game in tags would be good, seems like it is "Hataraku Otona no Ren'ai Jijou" added
maybe "結び音リボン ～Daichi no Oto～" since the song was released on that album
referring to http://gwave.surpara.com/#161, this song is first released on "GWAVE 2016 1st advance" (yeah I bought this album for this song). Added it to tags.

captalizing the difficulty name like "Last Order" would look nicer in this case imo ok

01:09:081 - 02:31:081 - i think they way you nc'd the first one was nicer, but either way it would make sense to decide for one of them and use it for both used first one
02:46:081 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/H5iTRFU.jpg seems like autostacking breaks your intended pattern fixed
03:46:706 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:49:331 (2,1) - noticeable broken stack fixed
02:55:206 - 04:17:206 - remove drum sampleset from tail? ok
03:01:081 (1) - missing finish oops
03:52:081 (1,2) - transition seems a bit awkward tapping rhythm wise, something like https://i.imgur.com/IFSs5r8.jpg might work well
03:52:206 - should be emphasized imo. changed 2,3 to a slider.

04:26:956 - can you tone down normal finish usage in this part a bit? they seem a bit too much like that. mainly 04:28:956 (2,3,4,5,1) -
just changing 04:29:581 - to soft finish would be much nicer already imo ok
04:58:456 (2) - now here i think normal finish would sound better than soft
current soft finish is organized in a group of 04:58:081 (5,2) - (normal+short finishes). and normal finish is too long for the sudden ending of the song here.

05:00:706 - use your muted hitnormal here? ok

don't really have much to say about the map, great as expected
let me know when you replied


technically there is still really quiet audio until around 5:01 so I guess the ending spinner is fine
https://i.imgur.com/zauW3Ar.png
Thanks for modding!
Lasse
osu! Alumni
3,644 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
bubbled!
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,152 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
hi this is mine now

- 02:17:081 (4,5) - this sounds a little weird to me personally as it is since the sounds end on the blue tick here and there's nothing on the white, if you want to change it

nothing else just a random thing i found - call me back in 24 hours!
Garden
osu! Alumni
1,345 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
社会人品酒百科

some extra points i noticed::
combo colour 4&1 are kinda too similar and in some cases could affect reading imo
02:00:331 (8) - 02:08:331 (8) - 02:12:331 (8) - should be 1/4 snapping to be consistent with the rest?
03:59:581 (1) - sounds more like 1/3 snapping to me if i get what you are following with that reversed slider
04:25:956 (3) - nc?
04:51:956 (1) - 1/6
01:56:331 (2) - 03:18:331 (2) - 04:40:331 (2) - the overmapped notes sound a bit forced to me
btw Songs with mature lyrics must be marked with a label such as 18+ in the map's thread. lol
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Mir wrote:

hi this is mine now

- 02:17:081 (4,5) - this sounds a little weird to me personally as it is since the sounds end on the blue tick here and there's nothing on the white, if you want to change it I feel end on blue tick is a little over-emphasized...

nothing else just a random thing i found - call me back in 24 hours!

Garden wrote:

社会人品酒百科 人品不太行啊

some extra points i noticed::
combo colour 4&1 are kinda too similar and in some cases could affect reading imo made a little change
02:00:331 (8) - 02:08:331 (8) - 02:12:331 (8) - should be 1/4 snapping to be consistent with the rest? yes
03:59:581 (1) - sounds more like 1/3 snapping to me if i get what you are following with that reversed slider yes
04:25:956 (3) - nc? oops
04:51:956 (1) - 1/6 yes
01:56:331 (2) - 03:18:331 (2) - 04:40:331 (2) - the overmapped notes sound a bit forced to me same to me, reduced sv then
btw Songs with mature lyrics must be marked with a label such as 18+ in the map's thread. lol 多健康啊
Thanks for modding!
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,152 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
seems all is fine now. Confirmed things with Lasse quickly, qualified!
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia
Thanks everyone!!!
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
虽然我是最菜的 但是我活下来了
Misure
952 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
惊了 神速
Saki
437 posts
Joined October 2013
Saki
惊了，你们一个曲子是怎么做两张图的
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia
靠换人咯
Caput Mortuum
1,854 posts
Joined March 2016
Caput Mortuum
nice song nice map
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 49