[Kamiya] wrote:

00:00:625 (1) - 这里开始，如果是按照人声(声优吐字的节奏）的话。那么00:01:413 - 到00:01:698 - 是一段，00:01:841 - 到00:02:127 - 这里应该算另一段。00:02:613 - 到00:02:935 - 一段，00:03:096 - 这里自分一段（这里做成单点或者跟后面00:03:258 - 00:03:419 - 组成滑条或者折返都星） 会有跨红线滑条 我很懒
00:13:306 (2,3,4) - 这里虽然看着没问题。但节奏突然太快可能不会太适应。有点像sotarks新rank的那首Outside of Melancholy的开头 感觉很不友好。 跟short版保持一致吧 差不多的开头
00:15:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里能理解跟后面节奏呼应 但是bgm里并没特别凸显出这种节奏 希望简单点。（滑条）o
00:24:556 (11,1) - 没包好 换了别的pattern
00:27:306 (2,3) - 3没包好2的尾巴 我看着没问题啊

就这些吧 以上个人意见（除了最后两个。。）

牛逼牛逼牛逼

Pata-Mon wrote:

req by 妹桑
然后摸不动
但是
00:19:931 (4,1) - stack
00:21:056 (1,5) - 既然要用这种梗的话那么堆叠系数最好调一下．看了一眼后面有影响的地方还蛮多的
00:21:972 (7,8) - stack
glgl
都改了

Vert wrote:

m4m from imoduo

[general]
图全长不够05:00:056 - 00:00:625 - 差了半秒 做了一些技术性调整
没sb关widescreen support o

[一抹多]
00:01:984 - 这里这个tick音不能想办法消掉吗，感觉很难受 o
00:25:555 (5) - 其实为什么不和前面的89叠起来呢 换了pattern

[粉心]
04:28:306 (2,2) - 没叠好吧 调整了一下
04:31:806 (3,2) - 调一下这俩应该能叠上 隔太远了 看不到
04:40:306 (2,1) - ^ ^
04:45:722 (4,5,6) - 二连啊，喂一波屎，就像开头一抹多那样 是的
04:53:722 (3,4,5) - ^ 这就算了

blueloniess wrote:

既然是4个part 圈的，感觉没有必要分开了。
有图片说明，图源是imgur，估计要挂代理才能看到


00:01:413 (1,1) - 这里的节奏我是觉得挺怪的,这样应该舒服一点 后来改了红线 这样摆会跨红线放滑条 我很懒

00:04:503 (3,1) - 啊，虽然不影响，但是我有点强迫症...叠一下把... 不好看啊pong友
00:15:722 (3,4) - 这个我有点想换成1/6滑条，当然，不换也不影响，只是换了之后好打一点而已. 差不太多 算了吧
00:22:556 (9) - 根据音乐节奏，这里应该NC 按小节下的
00:26:556 (9) - 同↑
00:30:556 (9) -

papapa213 wrote:

水摸来啦

01:30:081 (1) - 或许应该在01:29:956 - click？ 这不太好 人声很突出
02:51:956 - ^
01:46:456 (2) - 03:08:456 (2) - ^ 不 这俩一样

Imouto koko wrote:

from irc req

[Last order]

1. 00:47:956 (3,4,5) - 太近了，不如往右一点正好和00:47:581 (2) - 包齐。那边没位置 这是blanket位
2. 00:57:081 - 音效存在感低了点，换个有鼓的可能好一些？比如Sampleset Drum + Additions Soft. 挺明显的啊我听着
3. 04:04:956 (2,1) - 折返箭头再露出来一点可能比较好？ 正三角形露不出来了

排列真漂亮
GL
写完po了才发现本来就在群里说了要摸这图

Lasse wrote:

why is imoutosan in tags? He mapped the intro and 2nd kiai
could add "version" to tags for full version, since you only have ver. ok
also romanized name of the game in tags would be good, seems like it is "Hataraku Otona no Ren'ai Jijou" added
maybe "結び音リボン ～Daichi no Oto～" since the song was released on that album
referring to http://gwave.surpara.com/#161, this song is first released on "GWAVE 2016 1st advance" (yeah I bought this album for this song). Added it to tags.

captalizing the difficulty name like "Last Order" would look nicer in this case imo ok

01:09:081 - 02:31:081 - i think they way you nc'd the first one was nicer, but either way it would make sense to decide for one of them and use it for both used first one
02:46:081 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/H5iTRFU.jpg seems like autostacking breaks your intended pattern fixed
03:46:706 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:49:331 (2,1) - noticeable broken stack fixed
02:55:206 - 04:17:206 - remove drum sampleset from tail? ok
03:01:081 (1) - missing finish oops
03:52:081 (1,2) - transition seems a bit awkward tapping rhythm wise, something like https://i.imgur.com/IFSs5r8.jpg might work well
03:52:206 - should be emphasized imo. changed 2,3 to a slider.

04:26:956 - can you tone down normal finish usage in this part a bit? they seem a bit too much like that. mainly 04:28:956 (2,3,4,5,1) -
just changing 04:29:581 - to soft finish would be much nicer already imo ok
04:58:456 (2) - now here i think normal finish would sound better than soft
current soft finish is organized in a group of 04:58:081 (5,2) - (normal+short finishes). and normal finish is too long for the sudden ending of the song here.

05:00:706 - use your muted hitnormal here? ok

don't really have much to say about the map, great as expected
let me know when you replied


technically there is still really quiet audio until around 5:01 so I guess the ending spinner is fine
https://i.imgur.com/zauW3Ar.png

Mir wrote:

hi this is mine now

- 02:17:081 (4,5) - this sounds a little weird to me personally as it is since the sounds end on the blue tick here and there's nothing on the white, if you want to change it I feel end on blue tick is a little over-emphasized...

nothing else just a random thing i found - call me back in 24 hours!

Garden wrote:

社会人品酒百科 人品不太行啊

some extra points i noticed::
combo colour 4&1 are kinda too similar and in some cases could affect reading imo made a little change
02:00:331 (8) - 02:08:331 (8) - 02:12:331 (8) - should be 1/4 snapping to be consistent with the rest? yes
03:59:581 (1) - sounds more like 1/3 snapping to me if i get what you are following with that reversed slider yes
04:25:956 (3) - nc? oops
04:51:956 (1) - 1/6 yes
01:56:331 (2) - 03:18:331 (2) - 04:40:331 (2) - the overmapped notes sound a bit forced to me same to me, reduced sv then
btw Songs with mature lyrics must be marked with a label such as 18+ in the map's thread. lol 多健康啊