Deliverance00:08:563 (5,6,7) - move 00:08:642 (6,7) 1/4 later to be at 00:08:721 and 00:08:800 - fits the music there, and also the triplet would not be so isolated, and seem out of place
00:12:352 (1,2) - odd place to put 00:12:510 (2) - especially since you spaced them out more for 00:10:773 (1,2) and 00:11:721 (3,4) - 00:12:510 (2) is also behind the path of the slider, which affects movement. Why is it so much faster than the normal sv as well? Doesn't seem that impactful and that different from the music around it.
00:14:721 (3,1) - could give slightly more room between them
00:31:300 (8,9,1) - I think a neater flow here would be nicer, with the sliders moving directly to each other, polishing it up. Something like:
00:37:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing of this seems like it was taken up by 00:35:405 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - like a flip of each other. Except that it is at 00:37:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that is the peak of the music in that section, and while 00:35:405 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - is also starting to rise up, the increasing spacing should not trump over 00:37:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:40:458 (1,2,3) - straighten the section out? 00:40:931 (2) - higher than the previous slider while going straight and 00:41:089 (3) - placed lower than the slider, the direction is kinda shaky:
do take care of 00:41:247 (4,5,6,1) - position as well, could possibly work better more to the left
00:45:352 (3,1) - more sapcing between them? Emphasize that beat on 00:45:510
00:46:458 (1,2,3,4) - why extended sliders? The 1/2 sliders worked fine before this, there is no change in the rhythm in the music
00:48:826 (2,4,6) - tilt more to the right rather than downwards? Will not leave 00:49:458 (5) in an odd position where the subsequent circle is below its path when it's curved upwards
00:49:931 (1,2,3,4) - neater pattern?
01:19:300 (2) - NC?
02:06:274 (1) - keep its combo colour different from 02:06:899 (4,5)
02:19:823 (3) - x:4 y:104?
02:25:709 (2) - at most it ends at 02:25:856 - ?
02:27:988 (4) - nothing really in the music here
02:31:664 (2) - I'd say remove, there isn't anything there, and the triplet to slider gives a more distinct rhythm to the song, also more emphasis to it when it goes into that long slider, also others like 02:24:606 (5) - which are similar to it. In the kiai before and after this one
03:33:209 (6,7,8) - this is really low spacing though
03:42:179 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - could have some increasing spacing here already
03:54:826 (1,2,1) - have slider 2 on the right of the first slider, and not so extremely left to 03:55:120 (1) - like right now, the slider path is in the same direction from where you came from, have the direction change less extremely, could be something like:
03:58:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm here is more like:
the main points in the song is 03:58:356 - 03:58:650 - 03:58:870 - 03:58:944 and 03:59:164
04:17:914 (5) - the beat at 04:17:988 is stronger though; it follows the melody line
04:25:120 (1,1) - blanket?
stuff like 04:25:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - could polish things up movement and visual-wise. Note stuff like 04:28:061 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - and see if you can make them interact with each other better
04:40:414 (2,3,4) - spacing between them more constant please, they look sloppy at the moment
04:50:194 (1) - why not focus on the beat at 04:51:003 instead? Its a clear landmark in the song, currently its overlooked
04:52:179 (2,3,1) - 04:54:679 (5,1) - do something different from the rest to emphasize the 2 strong beats at places like 04:52:326 and 04:52:473 - ?
Could work on the overall tidiness of the map; the slider shapes, the spacing, the patterns used. I think there is more that you can do to match up more uniquely to the song, like those triplets and other rhythm parts.
Good Luck