lakexiu16 wrote:

好吧,第一个想说的就是过场的图有些地方还有白色的擦漏了,在左下角和正下方.然后把三个难度都玩了以后,觉得hard有些短滑条的节奏很奇怪...可是开了自动看着打又觉得很正常= =,所以除了抠图有问题,其他暂时找不出问题了

o0cannian0o wrote:

lakexiu16 wrote:

好吧,第一个想说的就是过场的图有些地方还有白色的擦漏了,在左下角和正下方.然后把三个难度都玩了以后,觉得hard有些短滑条的节奏很奇怪...可是开了自动看着打又觉得很正常= =,所以除了抠图有问题,其他暂时找不出问题了

-.-其实我本来是故意没擦掉的，不过后来还是擦了。。谢谢O(∩_∩)O哈！

fliness wrote:

00:06:691 (3) - 感觉这个短了, 到00:07:291
00:07:891 (1) - 同上 到00:08:491
上两个可以改为
00:07:891 (1) - 的样式..
01:39:391 (3) - 这个貌似多余了？
01:47:491 (1) - 移动到01:48:091 (1) -
01:59:341 (2) - 少一个
02:00:091 (6) - 02:00:391 (8) - 换成滑条
02:00:541 (？) - 这个多余了。
02:01:291 () - 这加个NOTE。。
不错的4星半难度
...尾巴突然断了的感觉.歌曲是自己剪的?音源有问题，我用播放器打开放不了后半部分的，换个音源吧，最好是192kbps。

_Kiva wrote:

catch me in game if you need help

ax_pokl wrote:

不错啊。
星数加的也蛮快的。
star。

_Kiva wrote:

have a try these hit sounds ,
and i can assist for hisound.[attachment=0:5dd4b]New Folder.zip[/attachment:5dd4b]

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[General]
you submitted 2 maps , but they are the same , maybe you need to ask BAT how to do 0.0
and I suggest to make an Easy diff

[Skin]
you need a approachcircle.png , section-fail.png , sliderb.png(maybe sliderb0 to slider5/6/7/8/9) , spinner-approachcircle.png , spinner-clear.png , spinner-osu.png , spinner-spin.png

[Normal]
AR - 1/2
HD - 1
00:15:391 (1,2,3,4,5) - very confusing to a Normal
00:23:791 (1,2) - spacing
01:00:091 (6,7) - 1 gird up
02:03:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - symmetrical ?
02:09:691 (6) - repeat ?
02:30:991 (5,1) - spacing
02:36:091 (1) - symmetrical ?
02:40:591 (5,6) - 1 gird left
02:45:691 (1) - symmetrical ?
03:23:191 (7) - 1 gird right
03:23:491 (8,9,10,11,12) - 2 gird right
03:55:591 (5,6) - circle at 03:55:591 , slider from 03:55:891 to 03:56:491
04:00:091 (6) - 1 gird right
04:08:491 (2,3) - stack better

[jump-] ← rename to Jump
OD - 1
00:31:891 - add circle
03:45:841 (5) - move to 03:45:691
04:12:391 (1) - end at 04:14:491
nice random jump

[Hard]
00:09:391 (3,4) - stack better
00:46:591 (3) - slider to 00:47:291 ?
02:09:991 (1) - end at 02:13:291 ?

that's all
good luck

piratesof wrote:

[Hard]
00:43:891 = the slider is not the same shape as the one before, i match them up. Minor change

attached the .osu file here

1. Title: Narcissu
2. Source: Narcissu -Side 2nd- CD Edition Disc B (Sound Track)
3. Tags: STAGE NANA Setsumi Kataoka Tomo
4. Pls set PreviewTime in all difficulties.

1. All fine

1. The diff exsits too many long combos. It doesnt look nice with the stuff like this. Sometimes it could be be disrupted while playing and multiplaying.
2. For example: 00:48:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
3. Apart from the one mentioned above, I can not pick up any issues.

1. No hitsound? Is this diff still be in progress?
2. 00:06:091 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo(Doesnt look nice imo).
3. 00:17:491 (7) - New combo
4. 00:26:191 (9) - New combo?(It's not good to have the long combo)
5. 00:30:991 (9) - ^
6. 00:36:691 (7) - ^
7. 00:51:091 (6) - ^
8. 01:08:191 (5) - ^
9. 02:07:891 (5) - ^
10. 03:22:891 (6) - ^
11. 03:49:291 (1) - Remove new combo

1. 03:38:491 (5) - Add custom finish on the slider tail.
2. 03:54:091 (1) - Remove new combo?
3. 03:55:591 (2) - Switch combo and remove new combo at 03:55:891 (1)
4. 04:12:091 (1) - Add Custom finish.

gdeath wrote:

[General]:

1. Title: Narcissu
2. Source: Narcissu -Side 2nd- CD Edition Disc B (Sound Track)
3. Tags: STAGE NANA Setsumi Kataoka Tomo
4. Pls set PreviewTime in all difficulties.

[Easy]:

1. All fine

[Normal]:

1. The diff exsits too many long combos. It doesnt look nice with the stuff like this. Sometimes it could be be disrupted while playing and multiplaying.
2. For example: 00:48:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
3. Apart from the one mentioned above, I can not pick up any issues.

[Jump-]:

1. No hitsound? Is this diff still be in progress?
2. 00:06:091 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo(Doesnt look nice imo).
3. 00:17:491 (7) - New combo
4. 00:26:191 (9) - New combo?(It's not good to have the long combo)
5. 00:30:991 (9) - ^
6. 00:36:691 (7) - ^
7. 00:51:091 (6) - ^
8. 01:08:191 (5) - ^
9. 02:07:891 (5) - ^
10. 03:22:891 (6) - ^
11. 03:49:291 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]:

1. 03:38:491 (5) - Add custom finish on the slider tail.
2. 03:54:091 (1) - Remove new combo?
3. 03:55:591 (2) - Switch combo and remove new combo at 03:55:891 (1)
4. 04:12:091 (1) - Add Custom finish.

作为处女图感觉还不错。继续加油:3

piratesof wrote:

after some time, I think the scores on easy are too low
using hard rock, double time, and flashlight only nett me 43k
at least make it a little below 100k, i think it's fine
as example this map

oh, don't have to kudosu this one, take it as an edit on my post :/

lakexiu16 wrote:

:? 已经修改成这样了为什么还没rank...