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VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [OsuMania]

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Fresh Chicken
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 4월 2일 일요일 at 오전 12:48:37

Artist: VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki
Title: HEAVENLY SMILE
Source: SOUND VOLTEX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN
Tags: R_e_m_u_r_i_n_g leqek SDVX4 opening theme KONAMI BEMANI Rasis Grace
BPM: 184
Filesize: 4743kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. leqek's EXHAUST - 4Key (3.63 stars, 1259 notes)
  2. MAXIMUM - 4Key (4.44 stars, 1572 notes)
  3. NOVICE - 4Key (1.51 stars, 384 notes)
  4. Rem's ADVANCED - 4Key (2.15 stars, 764 notes)


Download: VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE
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キミの音色で輝ける世界を!!!

はわっはわのふわっふわ! 爽快感1600%なのデス~!
leqek
4볼츙
Ortlinde
whoa
may i? #slapped
SpectorDG
IV

marked
SoYeon
00:18:644 (18644|1) - 00:21:253 (21253|3) - 01:55:166 (115166|3) - 노트 하나씩 추가하시는게 어떨까요
00:36:334 (36334|0) - ~ 00:36:905 (36905|3) - 요 부분이 수정이 필요할 거 같기도 하고 KEEP해도 될거 같기도 하고.. 2 134 2 134 2 134 트릴로 가는것도 좋지 않을까 생각해요 한번 고려해주셨으면 합니다
00:36:905 (36905|3,45709|1,45709|0,45709|2) - 하나 빼시는 게 키음상 더 자연스럽지 않을까..싶네요

수고하세요!
Red Velvet
Hi

아따 BG 참한 처자들이네

[Rem's ADVANCED]

00:20:274 - 여기 이거 어떰? 박수(?) 소리 나는데

00:25:492 - 2 에 숏놋 추가하고 그 뒤에 00:25:818 (25818|1) - 이 노트는 1로 이동 시키는게 어때

00:45:872 - 요부분 음이 좀 커서 2놋 해도될거같은데? 3에 숏놋 추가 해도 될듯

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:22:883 - ~ 00:23:861 - 00:20:274 (20274|0,20600|1,20927|3) - 여기랑 저기랑 보컬(?)이 같은데 롱놋이 달라. 통일시키쇼

00:47:340 (47340|1) - 3 로 이동, 이동하는게 더 자연스러울거 같아

01:27:774 (87774|2) - 4 로 이동, 치기 더 편하게!

[MAXIMUM]

00:27:774 (27774|3) - 이거 롱놋으로 바꾸는게 어떰

이런식으로, 또는 00:27:937 - 이 부분에 노트 하나 추가 (첫번째 방안은 딴 부분 롱놋이 아니라서 어색할까봐 두가지 방안을 들고왔뜨 ㅠㅠ)



막난은 능력안되서 못건들것솤ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

노래 조아따 GL :D ~~~~
Wonki


00:06:905 (6905|1) - 이거왜 00:08:046 - 여기까지가아니냐 저까지가 더좋은거같어

01:36:905 - 여기는 1놋추가해도 무난할듯 심볼
00:19:296 (19296|1) - 3으로 옮기쇼 이부분보면 너무 12에집중되있음

00:36:416 (36416|1,36579|1,36742|1) - 2성에서 3연타는 좀그렇지않을까요 00:36:579 (36579|1) - 4이동추천

00:45:220 - 음빠짐

00:47:014 (47014|1) - 위와같음 3이동

01:01:524 (61524|0,61524|1,61687|3,61687|2) - 이거보단 http://puu.sh/tiskP/b43fe37b98.jpg 이게 나을듯

01:05:274 (65274|0) - 심볼없기때문에 4스냅이있을경우 2노트는 자제하는게 좋다고봄

01:14:568 - 심볼있음

01:17:177 - ^

01:22:883 (82883|2,82883|1) - 롱놋에선 2노트는 좀무리인듯
00:36:579 (36579|0,36579|1,36660|2,36742|3,36742|0) - http://puu.sh/tistM/5634a71ef1.jpg

00:48:644 (48644|3,48807|1,48970|3) - 2,4,2가나을듯

01:57:448 - ~01:57:774 - 여기사이 동탁이는 일부러 비운거?
HP 8.5 자비좀

00:10:655 (10655|1,10736|0,10818|1) - 1,2,1 이더좋을듯

00:12:611 (12611|2,12611|0,12693|3,12693|1,12774|0,12774|2,12937|1,12937|3,13100|0,13100|2,13264|1,13264|2,13427|1,13427|3,13427|0) - 컨트롤 h가어떠냐 00:12:122 (12122|0,12285|0,12448|0,12611|0,12774|0) - 이거땜시 바꿔주면 좋을거같다

00:25:818 (25818|3,25818|2,26144|2,26144|1,26144|3,26144|0) - 롱놋 어떰 보컬음 따라가서

01:06:742 (66742|1,66742|3,66742|2,66742|0,67231|2,67231|0,67231|1,67231|3) - 롱놋괜찮을듯

01:37:231 (97231|0,97231|3,97231|1,97883|1,97883|0,97883|2,98046|1,98046|0,98046|2) - 이짧은롱놋 가뜩이나 어려울텐데 3놋까지 넣어야겠니

01:59:731 (119731|3,119731|2,120057|2,120057|1,120057|3,120057|0) - 보컬롱놋 어떰
Soul Evans
Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

General


  1. BPM: Okay
  2. Offset: Okay
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Okay
  5. BG: Okay
  6. Kiai: Okay
  7. Metadata: Okay
  8. Folder’s problem: None
  9. Hitsound: you should probably hurry finishing hitsounds and removing the hitsound diff
  10. Timing: Okay
  11. Other: Okay
    [MAXIMUM]
  12. 00:12:611 - I see you're following the anchor thing for the sounds to emphasize it in here 00:10:818 (10818|3,10981|3,11144|3,11307|3,11470|3,11633|3,11796|3,11959|3) - So maybe you can make the pattern like this so that the second anchors on the left can be consistent : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7073294
  13. 00:15:383 - Pattern is kinda dull so i'd advise making it like this or changing it to something else :
  14. 00:15:872 - maybe add a note there on column 1, it suits the anchor thing with 00:15:383 - and the pattern i suggested
  15. 00:16:035 - This is weird, it has a three note chord while the rest of the sections similar to this has regular chords such as 00:16:687 - 00:17:340 - 00:17:992 - etc.
  16. 00:18:644 - i can't seem to understand what's so special about this section to have it not include a chord/keeping it consistent with the rest
  17. 00:21:253 - same here, i don't know if this is intentional or you're missing a chord
  18. 00:22:720 - This and 00:23:046 - has too loud beats to be a single note, maybe you should make them chords and make some pattern using them
  19. 00:28:753 (28753|1,28916|2) - Fun to play on Ctrl+H instead of that pattern
  20. 00:44:731 (44731|0,44894|0,45057|0,45220|0,45383|0) - Maybe try avoid anchors
  21. 00:50:600 - Make these a 3-note chord so that it can act well with 00:50:274 - since it's a similar beat
  22. 00:56:796 (56796|3,56959|3,57122|3,57285|3,57448|3) - Don't know if this is intentional or not
  23. 01:13:753 (73753|1,73916|1,74079|1,74242|1,74405|1,74568|1,74731|1,74894|1,75057|1,75220|1) - Anchors wheeee
  24. 01:36:905 - These LNs are kinda not optimized and doesn't play well, you might need to change that with self modding, or ask Juan for suggestions
  25. 01:39:840 - my advise would kinda ask to make the jacks more combo-able, basically try and make them in index focused kinda
  26. 01:48:644 - Idk man, i kinda feel like this could be re-patterned to play out better and more interesting
Goodluck <3
leqek

Ramuchi wrote:

Hi

아따 BG 참한 처자들이네

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:22:883 - ~ 00:23:861 - 00:20:274 (20274|0,20600|1,20927|3) - 여기랑 저기랑 보컬(?)이 같은데 롱놋이 달라. 통일시키쇼
이해 안간다

00:47:340 (47340|1) - 3 로 이동, 이동하는게 더 자연스러울거 같아 첵스

01:27:774 (87774|2) - 4 로 이동, 치기 더 편하게! 첵스


막난은 능력안되서 못건들것솤ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

노래 조아따 GL :D ~~~~

Wonki wrote:



00:36:579 (36579|0,36579|1,36660|2,36742|3,36742|0) - http://puu.sh/tistM/5634a71ef1.jpg 첵스

00:48:644 (48644|3,48807|1,48970|3) - 2,4,2가나을듯 첵스

01:57:448 - ~01:57:774 - 여기사이 동탁이는 일부러 비운거? 추가함
Topic Starter
Fresh Chicken
Thanks for SoYeon, Ramuchi, Wonki, Soul Evans for mod! sorry for non replying cuz I forgot what I changed ;_; thanks!
Kuo Kyoka
Rasis my waifu
Grace also sexy and I want them both la
Topic Starter
Fresh Chicken

Raymond wrote:

Rasis my waifu
Grace also sexy and I want them both la
Ho Ray Kyoka
Critical_Star
Gaymond
Kyousuke-

Critical_Star wrote:

Gaymond
riunosk

1 2 3 4
01:17:014 (77014|3) - maybe move to 3? 3 seems sliiiiightly empty
01:22:231 (82231|0,82720|1) - maybe flip so 1 doesnt look too empty
not exactly good at easy diffs - w-
01:01:361 (61361|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability?
01:01:524 (61524|1,61606|2,61687|3) - flip if ^ is applied
01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - maybe rearrange it into a troll for playability? preferably 432 (if applied might need to rearrange following notes)
01:04:459 - o _o? missing note? maybe error?
01:34:296 (94296|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability
01:36:986 - maybe add a note here so the stream start has more flow and sounds like it has the stream sound here anyway
01:39:840 (99840|0,99840|2,99921|3,99921|1) - what are the jumptrills here for? i only hear the snare, only a single jump is needed on the white line
01:42:611 - continue stream? maybe do the same for the whole section?
01:51:742 (111742|1) - maybe move to 1 for less focus on 2
00:18:644 - wad happened to the 1/2 minijack thingy pattern
00:47:992 (47992|0,48155|0,48318|0,48481|0) - is this intended?
00:48:481 - col 3 seems to have quite a bit of focus here..
00:53:209 (53209|3,53372|3,53535|3,53698|3) - ^^
01:43:345 (103345|2,103427|2) - why the minijack?
01:52:557 - continue 1/2 minijack pattern?
LEFT GIRL IS IMPOSSIBLY CUTE LET ME HUG AND/OR PET THANKS
Topic Starter
Fresh Chicken

riunosk wrote:


1 2 3 4
01:17:014 (77014|3) - maybe move to 3? 3 seems sliiiiightly empty
01:22:231 (82231|0,82720|1) - maybe flip so 1 doesnt look too empty
not exactly good at easy diffs - w-
01:01:361 (61361|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability?
01:01:524 (61524|1,61606|2,61687|3) - flip if ^ is applied
01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - maybe rearrange it into a troll for playability? preferably 432 (if applied might need to rearrange following notes)
01:04:459 - o _o? missing note? maybe error?
01:34:296 (94296|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability
01:36:986 - maybe add a note here so the stream start has more flow and sounds like it has the stream sound here anyway
01:39:840 (99840|0,99840|2,99921|3,99921|1) - what are the jumptrills here for? i only hear the snare, only a single jump is needed on the white line
01:42:611 - continue stream? maybe do the same for the whole section?
01:51:742 (111742|1) - maybe move to 1 for less focus on 2
00:18:644 - wad happened to the 1/2 minijack thingy pattern
00:47:992 (47992|0,48155|0,48318|0,48481|0) - is this intended?
00:48:481 - col 3 seems to have quite a bit of focus here..
00:53:209 (53209|3,53372|3,53535|3,53698|3) - ^^
01:43:345 (103345|2,103427|2) - why the minijack?
01:52:557 - continue 1/2 minijack pattern?
LEFT GIRL IS IMPOSSIBLY CUTE LET ME HUG AND/OR PET THANKS
NOVICE all accepted and MAXMUM has fixed few thingg, thanks!
leqek

riunosk wrote:


1 2 3 4

01:04:459 - o _o? missing note? maybe error? check
01:34:296 (94296|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability check
01:36:986 - maybe add a note here so the stream start has more flow and sounds like it has the stream sound here anyway change LN
01:39:840 (99840|0,99840|2,99921|3,99921|1) - what are the jumptrills here for? i only hear the snare, only a single jump is needed on the white line Put note for guitar
01:42:611 - continue stream? maybe do the same for the whole section? check
01:51:742 (111742|1) - maybe move to 1 for less focus on 2 guitar jack

LEFT GIRL IS IMPOSSIBLY CUTE LET ME HUG AND/OR PET THANKS
Critical_Star
meow

General

HS of NOVICE is using drum while other difficulty is using soft so u should make it consistent

remember to remove Hitsound difficulty

MAXIMUM

00:06:579 (6579|0) - This LN should finish 00:06:742 - here as refer 00:05:601 (5601|0,5927|2) - this LNs

00:07:394 (7394|0) - It should finish 00:07:720 - here if you followed vocal

00:31:850 (31850|0) - maybe move it 2 ? for prevent this
00:31:687 (31687|0,31850|0,32014|0,32177|0) - jack?

01:01:606 - I think you will need a note in here like you added drum HS.

01:37:068 - https://puu.sh/tFj9r/08d97e8fc3.jpg this is right snapping for me, what do you think?

01:48:644 - idk this one is good to play...it's pretty awkward for me, maybe use a single note is the best I think

01:57:448 - Same as 01:01:606 -here~

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:25:818 - You can add one more note for drum and finish of this section~

01:01:606 - Missing note I think? there's a drum HS so it's pretty awkward to skip

01:37:068 - ~ 01:39:187 - Please refer MAXIMUM difficulty

[Rem's ADVANCED]

00:41:959 (41959|2) - I think it doesn't need a note here, like harder difficultes there is no note in here too

01:05:274 (65274|3,65356|2,65437|1) - Could be more balance if it becomes 1-2-3 stairs!

01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - Wrong snapping like I pointed put in MAXIMUM, but it's fine to go if you use just 1/2, using 1/6 on normal is overed I think

01:43:264 - Cymbal missing?

01:54:187 - Should be double like you did on 01:52:231 - 01:52:883 - 01:53:535 -

[NOVICE]

00:36:416 (36416|2,36579|1,36742|0) - like 4-1-2-3? these are drum and 00:36:253 (36253|3) - this is bass only so make some difference?
Remuring

Critical_Star wrote:

meow

General

HS of NOVICE is using drum while other difficulty is using soft so u should make it consistent

remember to remove Hitsound difficulty

[Rem's ADVANCED]

00:41:959 (41959|2) - I think it doesn't need a note here, like harder difficultes there is no note in here too ok

01:05:274 (65274|3,65356|2,65437|1) - Could be more balance if it becomes 1-2-3 stairs! ok

01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - Wrong snapping like I pointed put in MAXIMUM, but it's fine to go if you use just 1/2, using 1/6 on normal is overed I think ok

01:43:264 - Cymbal missing? ok

01:54:187 - Should be double like you did on 01:52:231 - 01:52:883 - 01:53:535 - ok
All fixed owo
Topic Starter
Fresh Chicken
All fixed meow thanks MOE ET CS 'W'

(Waiting leqek)
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