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00:29:963 (29963|0,30014|1,30066|2,30170|3) - almost impossible to acc on such a low SV
00:13:631 (13631|2,13738|1,13845|2) - this is _almost alright but not really
raising the SV to about maybe .7 wouldnt hurt you would it
okay changed00:01:631 (1631|0,1631|3) - 00:02:916 (2916|1,2916|3) - i dont get why you merely doubled these but for other similar beats in the section 00:05:059 - like so dont have doubles - id suggest you just let everything be single notes because im sure youre going for the light and slow effect here and doubles dont really help with that
yep00:38:375 (38375|3,38375|2) - dont really get why people must restrict themselves with LNs so much
00:38:668 (38668|0,38961|1,39253|0,39546|1,39839|0,40132|1,40424|0) - these seeem so counter intuitive to hit given how the pitchs dont rotate between two somewhat similar tones - after all youve established that 00:37:790 (37790|1,37936|1) - is how you follow the violin so why change it here
00:41:375 (41375|3,41375|2) - no snare here - only a slightly light drum beat - prevailing snares start at 00:41:449 - (check on 25% without hitsounds)
fixed00:42:107 - 00:42:327 - i think youre justified in putting notes here but eh up to you
okay..00:42:546 (42546|2,42619|3,42692|2,42766|3,42839|2,42985|2) - not sure what this is supposed to be representing - the snares are pretty light so a one-handed trill seems over the top - im pretty sure you want to make a somewhat smooth stream here too but this isnt doing it
emphasizing the guitar00:51:107 (51107|2,51253|2,51400|2) - you might wanna change the hand that deals with this - see 00:50:375 (50375|2,50522|2,50668|2) -
nope00:52:229 (52229|2,52327|3) - think these are on 1/4 - blue and red tick respectively
00:52:351 - drum beat here
nope00:54:180 - i think its misleading to not have a note here for the hihat - you can do a thing like [12]34 if you dont want a trill to be present - applies for similar sections
emphasizing the pause00:55:351 (55351|2,55497|2) - maybe you could change this since 00:53:010 (53010|2,53156|2) - was on the same column
okay00:56:961 (56961|3,57107|2,57107|3,57253|2) - not sure why this section is so right hand centric
fixed00:59:595 - triple for crash?
triple is too much01:00:107 (60107|1,60180|0,60253|1,60327|0) - maybe you can do something else to smoothen the streams - these trilly things are not hard to hit but meh i see no reason as to why you must make things uncomfortable here
imgyou can do something like this - it sticks to the music better too
i wanna keep my own01:00:717 (60717|1,60766|0,60814|2,60912|3,60985|1,61058|0,61132|3) - not sure why you placed these so sporadically - felt like a simple roll like 1234 couldve done the drums better
okay01:02:375 (62375|0,62449|1,62522|0) - 01:02:961 (62961|0,63034|2,63107|0,63107|1) - 01:04:717 (64717|1,64790|3,64863|1) - 01:05:449 (65449|0,65522|3,65595|0) - im guessing now that these are somewhat intentional but eh still doesnt detract from the point that it kinda makes things slightly uncomfortable too - to no good reason imo
01:03:546 (63546|3,63692|3,63839|3) - is this intentional
fixed01:06:034 (66034|1,66107|2,66180|0,66180|3) - maybe you should do the trill thing here too
01:06:473 - double?
single is enoughyour streams seem so weird to hit - 01:07:424 (67424|0,67644|0,67863|0,68156|0,68375|0) - 01:07:205 (67205|3,67497|3,67790|3,68083|3) - theres these things here and 01:07:278 (67278|2,67351|1,67644|2,67717|1,67936|2,68010|1,68229|2,68302|1) - the middle roll always seems to face the same direction
changed02:24:400 (144400|2) - idk man i feel like youve havent done this song justice here - it seems a tad bit underlayered. e.g. the highlighted note couldve been a double since these two drum beats are so close together they make this dual impact of sorts
current layering scheme seems really underwhelming
02:27:912 (147912|0,147985|1,148205|0,148278|1) - idk man can you vary these a little
yep02:31:351 (151351|3,151424|2,151497|3) - one handed trill in this section?
02:37:205 (157205|3,157278|2,157351|3) - on the same hand too
fixed02:38:229 (158229|3,158375|2,158522|3,158668|2,158814|3,158961|2,159107|3) - i feel like you couldve messed around more here
fixed02:39:546 (159546|2) - move to 4 for the repeating drum thing effect to be more apparent
ok02:41:083 (161083|2,161229|2,161375|2,161522|2,161668|2) - is this really necessary
emphasizing 02:41:449 (161449|1,161595|1) - 02:42:985 (162985|3,163058|2,163132|3,163205|2,163205|1,163278|0,163351|1,163424|0,163497|1) - it seems like these trills are the hallmark of this section yet i dont really see the similarities in effect for 02:43:205 (163205|1,163278|0,163351|1,163424|0,163497|1,163644|1) - one handed things like this and 02:43:790 (163790|3,163863|1,163936|3,164010|1,164083|3) - two handed things like this. the difference in intensities of this section make the stream quite a bumpy ride since the one handed trills come and go at seemingly random
02:50:961 (170961|3,171034|1,171107|3,171180|0,171253|3) - then theres issue with the consistency here too - this part is trilled somewhat like a running men yet 02:51:327 (171327|1,171400|2,171473|0,171546|1,171619|2,171692|3,171766|0) - dont seem to bare the same sort of patterning even though the music seems to be almost the same for both parts
emphasizing 02:50:961 (170961|3,171107|3,171253|3) - 02:53:595 (173595|2,173668|3,173741|2,174473|3,174546|2,174619|3) - in the same columns? one handed too
02:56:522 (176522|3,176522|1,176668|1,176668|3) - why such stacking of the chords here?
02:51:839 (171839|2,171839|1,171985|0,171985|1) - or maybe its this thats the problem
changed02:57:400 (177400|3,177546|3,177692|3) - intentional?
changed03:00:034 - maybe you can do this
i keep my own03:00:912 - i thought a note here to acknowledge the vocals seems pretty neat
03:22:571 (202571|2,202717|2,202863|2,202863|3,203010|3,203156|3) - 03:23:302 (203302|2,203449|2,203595|2) - only gripe with this section is these things - they fall on the same hand and gets straining and annoying.
changed a little bit03:28:424 (208424|2,208497|1,208571|0) - pretty sure this should be a jumptrill - compare to 03:27:253 (207253|0,207253|2,207327|3,207327|1,207400|2,207400|0) -
fixed03:30:766 (210766|0,210912|0,211058|0,211205|0) - 03:33:107 (213107|3,213253|3,213400|3,213546|3) - eh
03:38:375 (218375|0,218375|1,218449|1,218449|0) - im really iffy about this - i mean its not that hard to hit but still its a little out of place - maybe you could do a [12][34] thing probably
no03:38:668 (218668|0) - are you serious LNs again
this part is pretty boring even on its own - and im disregarding the fact that such a staple has been used almost twice now
its not too hard to follow most of the guitar rifts here - they fall on 1/2s most of the time and for the others they are approximated to 1/4s and hence can be manipulated as either a double or a stream of notes
just try not to keep using the same rhetoric because you have to keep in mind that this chart is literally 8 minutes long and given how its such a low SR your audience might just fall asleep and die
maybe remap later03:56:375 (236375|3,236449|2,236522|1) - i mean id suppose at least one of the beats here is significant enough for a double no?
03:56:814 (236814|0,236814|3) - like this beat seems to be way less intense than 03:56:961 (236961|2) - yet the representations seem to be otherwise
04:48:034 (288034|0) - 1/2 long LN here?
04:50:302 (290302|0) - 04:50:010 (290010|2) - 04:51:180 (291180|3) - 04:51:766 (291766|2) - theres no drum beat here
04:49:205 (289205|1,289205|0,289351|0) - i suppose you can do a stacking thing like the one i highlighted here for this section
fixed04:52:424 - i think its better if you focused on the 1/2 guitar beats here because well theyre on 1/2s and is the instrument that pops out to me here - also it doesnt make snapping wonky. you can probably do a chord thing here with the 1/2s
07:13:379 (433379|2) - on blue tick after
fixed07:11:037 (431037|0) - on 1/8 tick right after
fixed07:15:976 - note here for the piano
i barely hear it07:17:037 (437037|2) - one 1/8 tick after
07:16:927 - 07:17:147 - 07:17:220 - all on 1/8s, all are piano notes
07:18:519 (438519|1,438574|2,438629|1) - think this is supposed to be on 07:18:537 - 07:18:610 - 07:18:684 - all 1/8 ticks - respectively
07:19:525 - 07:19:598 - piano
at this point i think its better if you were to just follow the main piano tones and ditch the sub ones
07:28:452 (448452|0) - why is this just an LN? listen to the music
07:29:037 - i think itd be better for the snaps if you were to just follow the light snares in the music here
07:43:525 (463525|2) - id argue against the existence of the drum beat here
07:46:379 (466379|1) - on 1/6 tick right after
07:45:720 (465720|1,465818|1,465915|1) - 07:47:086 (467086|3,467184|3,467281|3) - the jacks here seem really out of place - maybe you can just keep the jacks in pairs so that every drum beat gets to be jacked
08:06:501 - i dont get what youre doubling to here - sometimes its vocals and sometimes its the kick
id suggest if you want to vary the choruses here then have this one be the one that follows the vocals as doubles here
hm doubles on snare + vocal08:23:769 (503769|2,503915|2,504062|2,504208|2,504354|2) - yeah dont do this
08:24:940 - same about the acknowledgment of the vocals here