CommandoBlack wrote:

04:11:449 (251449|1,251449|0) - this should be a triple
06:46:598 could use another note

Abraxos wrote:

4.66 stars seem a little too low for such a song :thinking:

is heart an appropriate diff name? seems a bit too soft to me tbh
heart png is 2 mb you might want to compress it a little the mapset is over 10mb

also please respond to mods more its weird to see someone post something and only one of the GDers respond idk

eyes

00:29:963 (29963|0,30014|1,30066|2,30170|3) - almost impossible to acc on such a low SV
00:13:631 (13631|2,13738|1,13845|2) - this is _almost alright but not really
raising the SV to about maybe .7 wouldnt hurt you would it okay changed

00:01:631 (1631|0,1631|3) - 00:02:916 (2916|1,2916|3) - i dont get why you merely doubled these but for other similar beats in the section 00:05:059 - like so dont have doubles - id suggest you just let everything be single notes because im sure youre going for the light and slow effect here and doubles dont really help with that yep

00:38:375 (38375|3,38375|2) - dont really get why people must restrict themselves with LNs so much
00:38:668 (38668|0,38961|1,39253|0,39546|1,39839|0,40132|1,40424|0) - these seeem so counter intuitive to hit given how the pitchs dont rotate between two somewhat similar tones - after all youve established that 00:37:790 (37790|1,37936|1) - is how you follow the violin so why change it here

00:41:375 (41375|3,41375|2) - no snare here - only a slightly light drum beat - prevailing snares start at 00:41:449 - (check on 25% without hitsounds)
fixed
00:42:107 - 00:42:327 - i think youre justified in putting notes here but eh up to you
okay..
00:42:546 (42546|2,42619|3,42692|2,42766|3,42839|2,42985|2) - not sure what this is supposed to be representing - the snares are pretty light so a one-handed trill seems over the top - im pretty sure you want to make a somewhat smooth stream here too but this isnt doing it
emphasizing the guitar
00:51:107 (51107|2,51253|2,51400|2) - you might wanna change the hand that deals with this - see 00:50:375 (50375|2,50522|2,50668|2) -
nope
00:52:229 (52229|2,52327|3) - think these are on 1/4 - blue and red tick respectively
00:52:351 - drum beat here
nope
00:54:180 - i think its misleading to not have a note here for the hihat - you can do a thing like [12]34 if you dont want a trill to be present - applies for similar sections
emphasizing the pause
00:55:351 (55351|2,55497|2) - maybe you could change this since 00:53:010 (53010|2,53156|2) - was on the same column
okay
00:56:961 (56961|3,57107|2,57107|3,57253|2) - not sure why this section is so right hand centric
fixed
00:59:595 - triple for crash?
triple is too much
01:00:107 (60107|1,60180|0,60253|1,60327|0) - maybe you can do something else to smoothen the streams - these trilly things are not hard to hit but meh i see no reason as to why you must make things uncomfortable here

img

you can do something like this - it sticks to the music better too

i wanna keep my own
01:00:717 (60717|1,60766|0,60814|2,60912|3,60985|1,61058|0,61132|3) - not sure why you placed these so sporadically - felt like a simple roll like 1234 couldve done the drums better
okay
01:02:375 (62375|0,62449|1,62522|0) - 01:02:961 (62961|0,63034|2,63107|0,63107|1) - 01:04:717 (64717|1,64790|3,64863|1) - 01:05:449 (65449|0,65522|3,65595|0) - im guessing now that these are somewhat intentional but eh still doesnt detract from the point that it kinda makes things slightly uncomfortable too - to no good reason imo

01:03:546 (63546|3,63692|3,63839|3) - is this intentional
fixed
01:06:034 (66034|1,66107|2,66180|0,66180|3) - maybe you should do the trill thing here too

01:06:473 - double?
single is enough
your streams seem so weird to hit - 01:07:424 (67424|0,67644|0,67863|0,68156|0,68375|0) - 01:07:205 (67205|3,67497|3,67790|3,68083|3) - theres these things here and 01:07:278 (67278|2,67351|1,67644|2,67717|1,67936|2,68010|1,68229|2,68302|1) - the middle roll always seems to face the same direction
changed
02:24:400 (144400|2) - idk man i feel like youve havent done this song justice here - it seems a tad bit underlayered. e.g. the highlighted note couldve been a double since these two drum beats are so close together they make this dual impact of sorts
current layering scheme seems really underwhelming

02:27:912 (147912|0,147985|1,148205|0,148278|1) - idk man can you vary these a little
yep
02:31:351 (151351|3,151424|2,151497|3) - one handed trill in this section?
02:37:205 (157205|3,157278|2,157351|3) - on the same hand too
fixed
02:38:229 (158229|3,158375|2,158522|3,158668|2,158814|3,158961|2,159107|3) - i feel like you couldve messed around more here
fixed
02:39:546 (159546|2) - move to 4 for the repeating drum thing effect to be more apparent
ok
02:41:083 (161083|2,161229|2,161375|2,161522|2,161668|2) - is this really necessary
emphasizing 02:41:449 (161449|1,161595|1) -
02:42:985 (162985|3,163058|2,163132|3,163205|2,163205|1,163278|0,163351|1,163424|0,163497|1) - it seems like these trills are the hallmark of this section yet i dont really see the similarities in effect for 02:43:205 (163205|1,163278|0,163351|1,163424|0,163497|1,163644|1) - one handed things like this and 02:43:790 (163790|3,163863|1,163936|3,164010|1,164083|3) - two handed things like this. the difference in intensities of this section make the stream quite a bumpy ride since the one handed trills come and go at seemingly random

02:50:961 (170961|3,171034|1,171107|3,171180|0,171253|3) - then theres issue with the consistency here too - this part is trilled somewhat like a running men yet 02:51:327 (171327|1,171400|2,171473|0,171546|1,171619|2,171692|3,171766|0) - dont seem to bare the same sort of patterning even though the music seems to be almost the same for both parts
emphasizing 02:50:961 (170961|3,171107|3,171253|3) -
02:53:595 (173595|2,173668|3,173741|2,174473|3,174546|2,174619|3) - in the same columns? one handed too

02:56:522 (176522|3,176522|1,176668|1,176668|3) - why such stacking of the chords here?
02:51:839 (171839|2,171839|1,171985|0,171985|1) - or maybe its this thats the problem
changed
02:57:400 (177400|3,177546|3,177692|3) - intentional?
changed
03:00:034 - maybe you can do this

img

i keep my own
03:00:912 - i thought a note here to acknowledge the vocals seems pretty neat

03:22:571 (202571|2,202717|2,202863|2,202863|3,203010|3,203156|3) - 03:23:302 (203302|2,203449|2,203595|2) - only gripe with this section is these things - they fall on the same hand and gets straining and annoying.
changed a little bit
03:28:424 (208424|2,208497|1,208571|0) - pretty sure this should be a jumptrill - compare to 03:27:253 (207253|0,207253|2,207327|3,207327|1,207400|2,207400|0) -
fixed
03:30:766 (210766|0,210912|0,211058|0,211205|0) - 03:33:107 (213107|3,213253|3,213400|3,213546|3) - eh

03:38:375 (218375|0,218375|1,218449|1,218449|0) - im really iffy about this - i mean its not that hard to hit but still its a little out of place - maybe you could do a [12][34] thing probably
no
03:38:668 (218668|0) - are you serious LNs again
this part is pretty boring even on its own - and im disregarding the fact that such a staple has been used almost twice now
its not too hard to follow most of the guitar rifts here - they fall on 1/2s most of the time and for the others they are approximated to 1/4s and hence can be manipulated as either a double or a stream of notes
just try not to keep using the same rhetoric because you have to keep in mind that this chart is literally 8 minutes long and given how its such a low SR your audience might just fall asleep and die
maybe remap later
03:56:375 (236375|3,236449|2,236522|1) - i mean id suppose at least one of the beats here is significant enough for a double no?
03:56:814 (236814|0,236814|3) - like this beat seems to be way less intense than 03:56:961 (236961|2) - yet the representations seem to be otherwise

04:48:034 (288034|0) - 1/2 long LN here?

04:50:302 (290302|0) - 04:50:010 (290010|2) - 04:51:180 (291180|3) - 04:51:766 (291766|2) - theres no drum beat here
04:49:205 (289205|1,289205|0,289351|0) - i suppose you can do a stacking thing like the one i highlighted here for this section
fixed
04:52:424 - i think its better if you focused on the 1/2 guitar beats here because well theyre on 1/2s and is the instrument that pops out to me here - also it doesnt make snapping wonky. you can probably do a chord thing here with the 1/2s

07:13:379 (433379|2) - on blue tick after
fixed
07:11:037 (431037|0) - on 1/8 tick right after
fixed
07:15:976 - note here for the piano
i barely hear it
07:17:037 (437037|2) - one 1/8 tick after
07:16:927 - 07:17:147 - 07:17:220 - all on 1/8s, all are piano notes

07:18:519 (438519|1,438574|2,438629|1) - think this is supposed to be on 07:18:537 - 07:18:610 - 07:18:684 - all 1/8 ticks - respectively

07:19:525 - 07:19:598 - piano

at this point i think its better if you were to just follow the main piano tones and ditch the sub ones

07:28:452 (448452|0) - why is this just an LN? listen to the music

07:29:037 - i think itd be better for the snaps if you were to just follow the light snares in the music here

07:43:525 (463525|2) - id argue against the existence of the drum beat here

07:46:379 (466379|1) - on 1/6 tick right after

07:45:720 (465720|1,465818|1,465915|1) - 07:47:086 (467086|3,467184|3,467281|3) - the jacks here seem really out of place - maybe you can just keep the jacks in pairs so that every drum beat gets to be jacked

e.g.

08:06:501 - i dont get what youre doubling to here - sometimes its vocals and sometimes its the kick
id suggest if you want to vary the choruses here then have this one be the one that follows the vocals as doubles here
hm doubles on snare + vocal
08:23:769 (503769|2,503915|2,504062|2,504208|2,504354|2) - yeah dont do this

08:24:940 - same about the acknowledgment of the vocals here

DoNotMess wrote:

e y e s
00:29:963 (29963|0,30014|1,30066|2,30170|3) - too hard to time...maybe make the ln ending even and flat? eased a little bit
00:42:546 (42546|2,42692|2,42839|2,42985|2) - i dont know why you put it like this... emphasizing the guitar
03:41:010 (221010|1) - remove?? because no crash only kick yep
03:50:375 (230375|3) - ^
06:14:257 (374257|0) - ghost solo-guitar
07:29:037 (449037|1) - i think this starts 07:29:110 - here changed

cant find much problem here because it is ur style, good luck

Murumoo wrote:

halo

my opinion = suggest

00:40:717 - suggest
00:41:888 - suggest
01:03:546 - suggest
01:09:107 - suggest
02:10:863 - add 1 note [It is different from other places.]
02:39:107 - suggest

good luck

laughingcomet wrote:

Err forgot about my queue lol. Sorry for late mod
1 l 2 l 3 l 4

:Thinking:

00:43:351 (43351|2,43497|2,43644|0,43790|0,43936|3,44083|3,44229|1,44375|1,44522|2,44668|2,44814|3,44961|3) - Think these should be moved 1/8th up
00:45:692 (45692|0,45839|0,45985|3,46132|3,46278|2,46424|2,46571|1,46717|1,46863|0,47010|0,47156|1,47302|1) - ^
00:48:034 (48034|3,48180|3,48327|1,48473|1,48619|2,48766|2,48912|0,49058|0,49205|1,49351|1,49497|3,49644|3,49790|2,49936|2) - ^
00:51:741 (51741|3,51741|2) - sounds like it would be snapped to 1/8th
01:46:278 - ~ 02:23:741 - not too sure what you've mapped the Singles too
02:38:083 (158083|1) - why not double?
02:39:253 (159253|1) - ^
02:48:327 (168327|0,168327|2) - Why double?
02:50:668 (170668|3,170668|0) - ^
03:12:912 (192912|3) - maybe 2 for balance?
04:34:132 - shouldn't there be a note here?
05:33:533 (333533|3) - doesn't sound like it starts until 05:33:608 -
05:35:483 (335483|1) - i think this starts at 05:35:520 -
05:36:008 (336008|0) - starts at 05:35:933 -
05:40:133 (340133|1) - starts at 05:40:170 -
05:40:433 (340433|2) - starts at 05:40:470 -
05:42:533 (342533|2) - starts at 05:42:495 -
05:46:658 (346658|2,346658|3) - starts at 05:46:695 -
05:47:258 (347258|1) - starts at 05:47:295 -
05:48:758 (348758|3) - starts at 05:48:795 -
05:48:908 (348908|1) - starts at 05:48:945 (348945|1) -
05:49:058 (349058|3,349058|2) - starts at 05:49:095 -
05:49:808 (349808|1) - starts at 05:49:845 -
05:58:861 - LN?
would be cool if this was a 2, 3 trill 05:59:311 -
06:55:232 - make a LN here? end 06:54:940 (414940|0) - at 06:55:232 - and add a new LN there instead
07:12:427 - sounds like a SN here
07:12:501 - ^
07:12:354 (432354|1) - sounds 1/8th early
07:12:647 (432647|2) - sounds 1/16th early
07:13:708 - sounds like note here
07:13:818 (433818|1) - 16th early
07:14:696 (434696|0) - 8th early
07:14:988 (434988|1) - ^
07:15:940 - SN here
07:15:867 (435867|3) - sounds like 3 6ths (07:16:013 (436013|1) - remove that if applied)
07:16:159 (436159|0) - 16th early
07:16:598 (436598|1) - ^
07:17:330 (437330|3) - ^
07:17:769 (437769|0) - ^
07:18:208 (438208|2) - ^
07:19:086 (439086|1) - ^
07:19:379 (439379|2) - ^
07:19:543 - Single note
07:19:671 (439671|3) - 8th early
07:20:110 (440110|0) - ^
07:20:403 (440403|1) - ^
07:20:549 (440549|3) - 16th early
07:20:842 (440842|2) - ^
07:21:427 (441427|1) - ^
07:21:720 (441720|0) - ^
07:22:452 (442452|2) - ^
07:22:891 (442891|3) - ^
07:23:184 (443184|2) - 8th early
07:24:062 (444062|0) - ^
07:24:354 (444354|1) - 16th early
07:24:793 (444793|3) - ^
07:25:232 (445232|0) - ^
07:25:818 (445818|2) - ^
07:26:110 (446110|1) - 8th early
07:26:403 (446403|0) - 16th early
07:27:135 (447135|2) - ^
07:27:867 (447867|0) - ^
07:28:159 (448159|1) - ^
07:28:745 (448745|3) - ^
07:28:452 (448452|0,448452|2) - ^
07:33:427 (453427|2) - 8th early
07:34:598 (454598|2) - ^
07:34:745 (454745|1) - missed vocals?
07:36:501 (456501|0) - starts at 07:36:574 -
07:38:001 - LN the "S" sound?
07:40:159 (460159|0) - 8th early
07:40:488 (460488|1) - ^

Good luck

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Империал Цирк Мертвый Декаденс - Юта

Кровавое саке

00:29:963 (29963|0,30014|1,30066|2,30170|3) - закончи все лнки на красном тике, не приятно как-то ну ладно
00:38:375 - 00:40:717 - на счет этого момента, можно удалить лн в 3 колонке и расставить ноты более интересным образом чем в 1 и 2 колонке, это скучно ок
00:42:766 (42766|0,42839|2) - ctrl + h, 00:42:327 (42327|3,42546|3,42766|3,42985|3) - хорошо подчеркнешь ударные выделяю гитару 00:42:619 (42619|0,42766|0,42912|0) -
00:56:961 (56961|0,57107|1) - ctrl + g и балансировка ок
01:01:717 (61717|3) - во вторую и 01:01:790 (61790|1) - в 4 ок
01:02:375 (62375|0,62449|1) - сдвинь вправо на одну колонку ака 2 3 трилл
02:28:424 - 02:39:546 - андермаппинг чистой воды выделяю вокал, хотя может потом совмещу все звуки и эти джеки
02:51:766 (171766|0,171839|1) - ctrl + g ок
мод позже дополню

Честно, я думал карта будет куда веселее и сложнее, поработай над ней еще и да, это просто критика, не гори.
Выдели больше гитару, ноты отсутствующие верни, нету того челленджа который может предоставить этот сонг.
не знаю как еще усложнить

genkicho wrote:

M4M From My Mod Que

Col : 1 2 3 4

Here

I suggest start mapping from here 00:33:693 and delete notes before it umm.. why?
00:39:327 (39327|0,39583|0) - they both have different sound, i suggest different column ye literally they are different but they are very close to same so I keep it +variety
00:41:302 (41302|0) - i think this should be double yeee didn't notice this, will change to triple
00:50:961 i suggest mirror and change it like dis drums sound quiet here so I keep easier pattern
01:25:790 (85790|3) - extend it to 01:26:083 fixed
02:22:644 (142644|1,142790|1,142936|1,143083|1,143229|1) - maybe rearrange like dis ok accepted
02:25:936 (145936|0,145936|1) - LN at red line, but 02:30:766 (150766|1) - you have at white line too... 02:35:302 (155302|2) - here too red only fixed
02:42:473 this part im sure are doubles 02:43:351 (163351|3,163351|2,163644|1,163644|3) - vocals ? i suggest map it like here 08:06:501 yes, doubles are for vocal, I won't map it like last kiai because I want to keep the difficult increasing
02:58:863 (178863|3,179010|3,179156|3,179302|3,179449|3) - maybe 5 are too many >.> no
03:49:497 (229497|1,229644|0,229790|0) - these hav same guitar, and 03:49:936 (229936|0,230083|0) - these hav different sound, i suggest dont make 03:49:644 (229644|0,229790|0,229936|0,230083|0) - them at same column ok changed
04:16:424 (256424|2,256571|2,256717|2) - i suggest avoid 3 cuz looks weird, and they dont fit with the sound >.> oh fixed
04:27:546 (267546|3) - move to 2 yep
04:38:522 (278522|2,278522|1) - why double : changed
05:19:644 blue line singlenotes missing? >.> was intended to emphasize the toms, will change it if more modders will say about it
05:22:571 (322571|2,322644|1,322717|3,322717|2) - mirror it cuz it's same like before 05:21:985 (321985|2,322058|1,322132|2,322132|3) - changed
06:26:257 (386257|3) - move to 1 fixed
07:15:025 (435025|1) - move to 3 cuz same like 07:14:421 (434421|2) - ^
07:15:427 (435427|2) - move to 2 ^
07:15:940 (435940|1) - move to 3 ^
07:29:037 i suggest dont map the vocal, map the other sound (idk what it called), but seems like i cant find the right beat snap >.> (i think 1/3 but when i tried to map it something feels wrong) I want to keep vocal
08:06:330 (486330|1) - move to 3 cuz 08:06:501 (486501|1,486574|1) - yees
08:15:867 (495867|1,496013|1,496159|1,496306|1,496452|1,496598|1,496745|1,496891|1,497037|1,497184|1,497330|1) - rearrange (?) ROFL, shifted some of these
08:16:598 (496598|2) - vocal start at blue line changed
08:22:598 (502598|2,502745|2,502891|2,503037|2,503184|2,503330|2,503476|2,503623|2) - maybe rearrange this too a little bit
05:08:229 i think the LN should change column like before I don't get what you mean
07:36:574 (456574|0,456940|0,457232|1) - i suggest dis, cuz same col doesnt fit the with the imo I use jack for emphasizing the same syllable "MA-MA"

SV
03:26:375 i suggest change value to 1.25 and 0.75 or 1.2 and 0.8 ( 03:35:741 here too) why?
07:28:452 feels so sudden, i suggest change value to 0.7, then 07:28:745 add 0.8 value changed
07:47:769 - 07:48:354 - 07:48:940 - 1.1 value feels like something's wrong imo, cuz youre multiplying high bpm song, i suggest change to 1.05 changed to 1,65
08:04:549 (484549|2,484549|0,484549|1,484647|3,484647|0,484745|2,484745|1,484745|3) - the snap seems weird while playing cuz of the sv, i suggest change -> 08:04:549 change value to 1.1 - 08:04:647 delete the 0.8 value - 08:04:745 change to 1.1 changed
08:05:525 (485525|1) - same like before , but -> 08:05:818 delete the 0.8 - 08:05:915 (485915|2) - change to 0.8
08:06:135 (486135|3) - add 1.2 I want to keep clear reading before hard SV 08:06:427
08:06:232 add 0.8 ^
08:06:330 change to 1.2 ^
08:06:403 add 0.8 ^
08:06:427 move SV to 08:06:452 , and i suggest change value to 1.7 wrong copy? difference is 2 ms heh

aw your map so good srry for my crappy mod >.>

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi eyes

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. There's so many missing skin file, make sure you add element (image) in your folder map or delete from your program .skin
   skin files in [ManiaStage] set: mania-stage-left.png, mania-stage-right.png, mania-stage-bottom.png, mania-stage-light.png, mania-stage-hint.png, lightingL.png and lightingN.png
   skin files in [Pause Screen] set : pause-back.png, pause-continue.png and pause-retry.png I don't want to make full custom skin, I just want to add some details to map
2. Unused hitsounds: 0.9xaudio.mp3, i don't know what a purpose you're placed this mp3 file from your folder map, make sure you delete it Forgot to delete, fixed
3. drum_jbell.wav and drum_bd.wav possible delay >5ms, ask BN to fixed that oh nice catch, I will do it myself later
4. 06:08:558 - incorrect green line timing, please move to 06:08:561 - with 1/6 snap ok
5. From 07:47:769 - to 07:57:135 - there's messed up kaia section, my suggestion :
   Turn off/untick kiai section on green line here 07:47:769 - 07:52:452 - 07:57:135 - sorry keep mine
6. There's so many incorrect normalization SV change green line timing with main BPM is 205
   00:01:631 - should be 1,46x (205/140)
   00:23:916 - and 00:24:832 - should be 1,56x (205/131)
   00:25:767 - should be 1,71x (205/120)
   00:27:767 - should be 1,86x (205/110)
   00:28:857 - should be 1,90x (205/108)
   00:29:963 - should be 1,06x (205/193)
   05:31:058 - and 05:50:311 - should be 1,03x (205/200) yes and all these are intended

-love with dead eyes

OD : 8,5
HP : 8,6 will reduce OD to 8.2 because of LNs, HP no change, I want to challenge player's stamina

1. 01:44:229 - Не понял, почему одна, why suddenly here 2 note, i think there's no high pitch, how about here 01:45:692 - and 01:45:985 - hmm there is a snare sound
2. 01:55:278 (115278|3,115351|0,115351|2,115497|3,115497|1) - Ctrl+H для баланса keeping the trill 01:55:058 (115058|2,115132|3,115205|2,115278|3,115351|2)
3. 02:18:473 - remove 1 note, inconsistency with kick sound yes
4. 02:22:644 (142644|1,142790|1,142936|1,143083|1,143229|1) - considering rearrange this anchor 1/2 changed in previous mod
5. 02:38:668 - not really high picth like previous pattern, remove 1 note for consistency it's for cymbal, no change
6. 03:01:205 - 03:04:571 - seem legit here XD ye I know it can be unrankable xD But I really want to keep it, I wait to BNs/QATs reaction
7. 03:36:034 - it isn't suit as chord 3 note, there's no snare like 03:35:741 - just low tom drum, remove a note please~ yes you're right
8. 03:55:058 - missing consistency cymbal here like 03:53:888 - yep
9. 04:15:546 - 04:15:839 - add a note for impact drum, wait.. i feel de ja vu here XD okay
10. 04:32:522 - remove 1 note, since it's same pitch like 04:23:156 - no but I will add a note to last chord
11. 04:44:778 (284778|0) - wrong place hitsounds, finish should be in white tick 04:44:814 - same as like :
    04:45:400 - 04:45:985 - 04:46:571 - fixed
12. From 08:15:867 - until 08:17:330 - look at anchor on collum |2|, please rearraged to avoid uncomfortable pattern fixed in previous mod

Notes : Solid mapset, good job

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

81,75

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~
Это всё,удачи с картой

imtdb1 wrote:

M4M req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
i swear if you reject everything I will kill myself lol

-Love with dead eyes

00:30:196 (30196|3) - This LN starts around 00:30:157 - Changed
00:38:375 - why not use LNs to follow vocals like you did at 00:36:034 - ? variety and emphasizing 00:38:375 (38375|3)
00:42:619 (42619|0,42766|0,42912|0) - no idea what you followed with that LNs. I'd suggest you to remove them but if you want to keep them meybe space them out a bit more obviously I'n emphasizing the guitars and no change here
00:57:253 - I think this needs to be single note I think you need to get a reason
00:59:302 - ^
01:06:473 - meybe make this double ye ok
01:15:692 (75692|2) - move to 2
01:15:839 (75839|1) - to 3
01:15:912 (75912|2) - to 4 or 2 I want to keep the jacks
01:26:522 (86522|2) - I dont think that LN is that long. Meybe end it at 01:26:668 - I'm not following absolutly technical correctness, it will not make the map better, I want to keep pattern idea
01:29:449 - missing LN it's not audible at all, I place LNs on strong guitar parts
01:31:644 - ^
01:34:424 (94424|1,94424|0) - why double here? as you can see this moment includes snare+guitar. for snare I use 2 notes (you can see it if you turn on hitsound vision)
01:42:327 (102327|1) - move to 3
01:42:473 (102473|2) - to 2 I will keep jacking~
01:42:473 (102473|2) - I think double fits better here rather than 01:42:912 - idk even what to think
01:43:497 (103497|0) - imo you should move that from column 1 emphasizing guitar
01:46:717 (106717|3) - move to 3 because at 01:47:156 - and 01:47:888 - they didn't have jacks it's intended, in this case guitar sounds more stronger so I use jacks
01:54:619 (114619|0,114766|0,114912|0) - is this supposed to be like this? absolutely
02:00:619 (120619|1) - move to 3 btw I dont think finish hitsoud needs to be there02:15:400 reason?
02:15:400 (135400|2) - move to 2 decline as before
02:25:058 - why not add a LN here since you alredy followed vocals at that part with LNs I don't understand it
02:25:497 - double sure
02:35:302 (155302|2) - imo that LN would work better at 02:35:449 - because the vocals did a exhale lol this LN is not for vocal
02:50:961 (170961|3,171107|3,171253|3) - whyyy Toms.
03:05:595 (185595|0) - remove this and continue to follow the guitar sound wtf
03:10:424 (190424|1,190424|0) - I think singles work better I think no
03:12:180 (192180|2,192180|1) - single
03:12:327 - double
03:12:327 - LN's at this part are very weird. Imo you shouldn't map them
03:15:253 (195253|2) - just move it to 03:15:400 - so it does not have that weird snap yok
03:27:985 - imo triple works better because sound is not that strong for a four note chord
03:30:034 (210034|0,210034|1,210180|0,210180|1,210327|0,210327|1,210473|0,210473|1,210619|1,210619|0,210766|1,210766|0,210912|1,210912|0) - why so many notes in the 1 and 2????
03:32:375 (212375|2,212375|3,212522|2,212522|3,212668|3,212668|2,212814|2,212814|3,212961|3,212961|2,213107|3,213107|2,213253|2,213253|3) - ^ same here, unbalanced this all is intended and I made it for emphasizing the MUSIC, it plays as well
03:41:668 (221668|1) - ghost note guitar
03:48:766 (228766|1) - move to 3 emphasizing the guitar
04:01:497 - missing LN
04:03:546 - same here
04:07:351 - ^
04:07:497 - ^ same as previous same part
04:13:863 (253863|0,254010|0,254156|0,254302|0,254449|0,254595|0,254814|0,255107|0,255253|0,255400|0,255546|0,255839|0,255985|0,256132|0) - wow so many notes in first column, why not spread those a bit? shifted some
04:17:010 - triple, same sound here so idk why you didnt add a triple there 04:16:132 - not same
04:24:327 (264327|1) - move to other column ok
04:26:668 - why not place a Ln here like you did at 04:27:107 - maybe because these are absolutely different structured sounds?
05:12:327 - why did you follow vocals here but not at 02:42:473 - ????? You should remove the LN's at the 2nd kiai since they are litearlly the same part of the song. Or just add LN's at the first kiai I'm just laughing. Man, this song lasts almost 9 munutes, do you really think that I will use one single style all over the map? No.
05:12:839 (312839|0,312985|0,313132|0,313278|0,313424|0,313571|0) - why because it's 4k.
05:17:229 (317229|0,317375|0,317522|0,317668|0) - ^
06:10:598 - add a note reason?
06:11:769 (371769|2) - move to 1 I don't think it will change anything
06:17:623 - add a note
06:27:793 (387793|0,387793|1) - why double here? emphasizing the vocal, also there is a tom sound, maybe will delete it if more people will dislike this
06:33:281 (393281|2) - move to 4 please intended because vocal
06:37:525 (397525|0) - what did you follow with this? guitar
06:38:696 (398696|2) - ^
06:39:867 (399867|1) - end it at 06:40:306 - reason?
06:41:037 (401037|2) - I dont really see what you followed with those LN's because there are no vocals that long guitar
06:46:891 (406891|1) - and at 06:48:354 - and start a new LN there stopped focusing on vocal by this point
06:51:281 (411281|1) - meybe move to other column nope
06:55:671 - add a note here yes
07:05:915 (425915|3) - move to 1 emphasizing guitar 07:05:915 (425915|3,426208|3,426793|3)
07:15:427 (435427|1) - to 3 07:15:025 (435025|1,435427|1) - these are the same sound so I keep them in the same column
07:43:745 - double yes
07:45:427 (465427|0) - move to 2 reason?
07:45:720 (465720|1,465818|1,465915|1) - why just add doubles on 12 and 34 what
07:53:623 - add a note ok
08:06:501 (486501|0,486501|3,486647|0,486647|3,486793|0,486793|3,486940|0,486940|3,487086|0,487159|3,487232|0,487306|3,487379|0,487525|0,487525|3,487671|3,487671|0,487818|3,487818|0,487964|0,487964|3,488110|0,488110|3,488257|3,488257|0,488403|3,488403|0,488549|3,488549|0,488696|3,488696|0,488842|3,488842|0,488988|0,488988|3,489135|0,489135|3) - wow, dont use tripels every 1/2 there aren't any strong sounds on every triple, thats just dumpstreaming imo this chorus is REALLY impacting the song so I'd like to map it maximum epic so I did some overmapping here
08:13:818 (493818|3,493964|2,494110|1) - I would not reccomend to have short LNs like that because they litearlly act like a normal note so just remove those emphasizing the toms
08:13:818 (493818|3,493964|2,494110|1) - this should not be triple wrong copy
08:28:745 (508745|2) - what does this follow if you will listen more closely then you will here the sound that I follow
08:39:354 (519354|3,519501|3,519647|3,519793|3,519940|3) - spread them out intended for making map harder

Good Luck!

MrDorian wrote:

Hi owo/

dead eyes

01:00:985 (60985|0,61058|3) - in my opinion this would better work if these notes were in 3 and 2 for trills
01:47:010 (107010|0) - missing note I think? yep, fixed
01:48:473 (108473|0,108473|3) - 01:53:156 (113156|0,113156|3) - I don't understand why these doubles are here. You mapped drums with 2 notes and I'm sure there are no drums. Guitar here isn't strong enough too. deleted note in second case, in ferst case guitar is strong enough
02:03:107 (123107|1,123107|3,123253|0,123253|2) - ^
02:33:253 (153253|3) - ORARORAORAORAORAOARORAORA flies away shot
03:03:253 (183253|2) - I would move it to first column, there is the only one 3-notes ln anchor thing, it would be pitch correct more tbh ok
02:33:253 (153253|3,185522|3,185595|0) - ctrl+h for pitch maybe? ;w; wrong copy?
03:29:156 (209156|0,209302|0,209449|0,209595|0,209741|0,209888|0,210034|0,210180|0,210327|0,210473|0,210619|0,210766|0,210912|0,211058|0) - this hurts me even though it was intended yes
04:13:863 (253863|0) - you could add note on every blue tick, you mapped these with 2 notes :3
04:17:449 (257449|1,257449|0) - it should be one note though, there are many of these, to lazy to link them :v fro emphasizing the guirar I guess
05:25:790 (325790|0,325863|2,325936|1,325936|0) - please change this to 3 1 23, this anchor on 1 hurts r e a l l y okay
05:45:233 (345233|1) - would be nice if you extended it to 05:45:345 (345345|0) - end of this ok
07:02:110 (422110|1,422257|2,422403|3) - you could make it 3 2 1 to break that one-sided flow and pitch stuff ok
08:25:818 (505818|2,505891|1,505964|2) - ctrl+h pls, anchor on 3 ok
08:28:159 (508159|2,508232|3,508306|2) - here ctrl+h might work, but rearrange would be better, same reason as ^ok

owo lovely map

Protastic101 wrote:

i started this mod like 5 days ago so some stuff doesnt make sense

[General]

1. Diff name feels unnecessarily long tbh. It's literally longer than the song's name lol. Maybe you could call it "Amor Mortis" or something instead no!
2. If the above isn't accepted, was the dash before the diff name a mistake or on purpose? purpose
3. Sure, 1/6 of the song is LNs, but I think OD 7.4 is still too low. I'd set the minimum at 7.7 and the max at 8.2 probs, so anywhere between that is probs fine yes
4. HP 9.3 is going to wreck everyone cause it's way too cruel and makes it near impossible to recover HP. At the most, I'd set it to 9 as that's already very anti mash. hmm ye, i want challenge stamina so no change

[-Love with dead eyes]
00:01:631 - Base BPM is 205. The normalizing SV here would be 1.46x to make the scroll still be the same. But no. Instead of just choosing a value slightly below that for a slowjam, you decided to make it an SV value below 1x, and so the entire section literally reads as 0.43x. Please. no, music is calm here so i want to express it

00:13:818 (13818|2) - Pretty sure this should be on the 1/4 at 00:13:845 - ok

00:29:412 (29412|0) - Shouldn't this also be a 1/8 LN for consistency with 00:27:767 (27767|3,28312|2,28857|1) - ? sounds more quiet than previous 3

00:29:963 (29963|0,30014|1,30066|2,30170|3) - Also think this is only three sounds on the 1/3 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570059 hmm??? idk, i can clearly hear 4 notes . Also, I'd end the LNs off at 00:31:206 - just so it ends on a clear downbeat since the sound isn't really held out to begin with. Might actually be better to make them short notes for that reason actually. ok

00:39:327 (39327|0,39583|0) - Different pitch so I wouldn't actually stack these. almost same pitch, not audible while playing so i keep this

00:42:766 (42766|0) - This is a different pitch from 00:42:619 (42619|0,42912|0) - , so I'd move them differently like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570074 not emphasizing pitch here

00:51:741 (51741|2,51741|3) - I think it'd be better to just simplify this down to 00:51:692 - cause that's where the sound actually starts. i don't think so

00:59:449 (59449|3,59449|1) - This is just a kick, so it should only be a single shouldn't it? kick+guitar+voice

01:00:107 (60107|1,60180|2,60180|0,60253|1) - I kind of dislike these patterns with all my heart because of the uneven weighting on both hands. I'd consider making the roll more linear like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570099 I keep the trills for making it harder

01:24:619 (84619|3,84717|3) - Bit awkward to suddenly introduce a 1/3 jack in the middle of the stream, so I'd try to bring the weight off col 4 and arrange it more evenly like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570110 actually it is almost end of the stream and i think it perfectly maches the music

01:27:692 - 01:28:278 - vs 01:27:985 - 01:28:571 - and so on. I'd decide on whether you're going to use doubles or triples for the snares in this section as using both is kind of confusing because the player won't be able to get a sense of the chord layering within the section if it's constantly changing on them like this hmm.. I use triples for snare+guitar, i don't understand how bad it is, I will change if more people will talk about it

01:44:229 (104229|3) - I would move this to col 2 to avoid the OH minitrill at 01:44:156 (104156|2,104229|3,104302|2) - which kind of breaks the even weighting of the trills within this measure. ok

01:43:936 - I just wanna comment here though that some of the stacks like 01:44:522 (104522|1,104668|1,104814|1,104961|1) - and 01:44:595 (104595|3,104741|3,104888|3,105034|3) - are a bit awkward to hit imo because of the sudden OH minitrill at 01:44:741 (104741|3,104814|2,104888|3) - :thinking: . Might make the [23] jump [12] instead to make it easier I guess.

01:45:546 (105546|3,105619|0,105692|3,105692|1,105766|0,105839|2,105912|0) - Can't really tell what kind of trill you're going for here, but I'd arrange it like this to make it a bit more clear cut like the previous measure https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570138 kk

01:55:058 (115058|2,115132|3,115205|2,115278|3,115351|2) - Rip uneven strain. I mean, cool that the previous beat had a lot of left hand strain to balance out the strain overall within the measure, but it's still unevenly spread. Instead, I'd do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570146 cause s y m m e t r y

02:02:668 - 01:48:619 - Pretty sure these should be quads cause they're crashes just like 01:50:961 - 01:52:132 - or 01:53:302 - to name a few. ok

02:22:497 (142497|3) - Move this to col 3 to allow a bit of rest for col 4 and to avoid the stack at 02:22:351 (142351|3,142497|3) - when I don't think it's necessary because nothing in the music suggests it ok

02:23:302 (143302|2,143375|3,143449|2,143449|0) - #banthis

02:24:546 (144546|2,144619|1,144692|2) - I'd control H this to avoid the OH minitrill at 02:24:400 (144400|2,144473|3,144546|2) - which puts a lot more strain on the right hand than it does the left. ok
02:24:839 (144839|1,144912|2,145058|1) - If above is accepted, control H this too

02:39:327 (159327|1,159473|1,159619|1) - stack which wouldn't be so bad if it weren't for the fact that it creates a bit of a nasty direction turn. Though I don't really mind it too much. What I do mind is 02:39:546 (159546|0,159692|0,159839|0,159985|0,160132|0,160278|0) - which is I dont think is necessary at all. If you wanted, you could do [12] and have the right hand just handle the blue ticks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8607194 changed

02:44:595 (164595|1,164741|1,164888|1,165034|1,165180|1,165327|1,165473|1,165619|1,165766|1,165912|1) - Lord help me.

02:59:010 (179010|3) - Would move this to col 3 to finish the trill at 02:58:936 (178936|1,179083|1,179156|2) - k

03:00:107 (180107|1,180180|0,180180|2,180253|1) - #banthispattern. Would suggest switching columns in 03:00:034 (180034|3,180107|1) - instead ok

03:11:497 (191497|0) - If you're going to use 1/6 shields, please use them consistently and apply it in for LNs such as 03:11:595 (191595|2,191790|0) - or don't use them at all because the sound is so fast that you can't make out if the pitch between the LN and the shield are the same or not. removed shield

03:17:229 (197229|1,197302|2,197302|0,197375|1) - Ban diamond LOL shaped patterns pls. I'd also try to keep the direction linear to make it a bit easier to execute, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8611284 changed

03:22:132 - Average your SVs (use 1.6x here to average to 1x) and I guess apply it wherever else is occurs /me fly away /me does nothing

03:29:302 - Would be better to try and make the weight a bit more even here by making the jumps at 03:30:473 - [34] instead or something so that the right hand isn't empty

03:57:839 (237839|0,237839|3,237839|1) - 03:58:424 (238424|3,238424|1,238424|2) - vs 03:58:132 (238132|3,238132|1) - 03:58:717 (238717|2,238717|1) - Think I mentioned something earlier about being consistent with how you map the snares here, so either stick with jumps or hands for them and don't use them interchangeably.

04:14:961 (254961|1,254961|3,255034|2,255107|3,255107|1,255180|2) - cries

04:42:912 - Seems a bit flow breaking to suddenly leave a 1/1 space here, so I'd add another LN here to finish off the whole 1/2 LN inverse like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8611305 ok

05:19:351 (319351|2) - I'd probs just leave this LN out since that'd mean you end the vocals on a clear downbeat in a new measure, so it's a bit easier to adjust to, and you're given all four columns for your trills and stuff which is fun. And also kind of better than trying to hold an LN in col 2 with the index and hit 1/2 stacks with the middle :/

05:30:253 (330253|2,330327|1,330327|3,330400|2) - crying intensifies

05:59:311 (359311|1,359386|2,359461|0,359536|2,359611|1,359686|3,359761|0,359836|1) - Might be cool to just use a trill here since the sound alternates really quickly i don't want it because of the slowjam

06:20:842 - Tfw this is the same exact sound as 06:02:011 - but the snaps are different (1/4 vs 1/6). I'd decide on whether or not you're going to use 1/4 or 1/6 for all sounds similar to this because you kind of gotta decide since you can't really pick and choose with stuff like this. i don't think they are the same

07:10:306 - Literally no mercy on this slowjam. I'd make it consistent with the beginning which I remember was something like 0.7x or whatever. Anyways yeah, that's the minimum I'd use, otherwise you're making players read at scrolls of around 18 with fixed (assuming 28 is the average) changed to 0.75

08:06:330 - This SV also makes me cri cause it's unaveraged. 7 units and you simply halved them which doesn't work cause (0.4 x 4) + (1.6 x 3) = 6.4 / 7 total units makes it a .91x slowjam which comes as a surprise in a section which had been using a 1x overall. changed

08:23:623 - Dont really understand the point of this speed up. It exists solely for 7/4 a beat which is kind of an odd place to end it too and stops in the middle at 08:23:988 - with 1.1x which is kind of forcing the player to suddenly change their reading position to accommodate a faster than normal scroll. This is redundant though as by the time they've done that, you'd have switched back into 1x averages at 08:24:940 - deleted

Would make sure to check over some of those SV values as I was too lazy to look through them all. Some of the stacks need a bit of work on too, but otherwise, good luck o/