Beginner

Kantan

Futsuu

Muzukashii

Oni

Inner Oni

Akumu

JessiChan wrote:

Hi, sorry for the late, I'm studying and working. My english is poop, heh.

Beginner

1. 00:22:556 (15) - k it's a kick, putting kat makes no sense tbh
2. 00:48:156 (43) - Finisher, maybe. the note is the same as other instances, adding finish sound will make it seemingly random
3. 00:57:756 (55) - Here too song gets quieter
4. Move this note with 1/3 02:58:060 (128) - to here: 02:57:860 - they're two different parts, i decided against leaving a note at 177860 because it would be too hard.
5. 03:03:801 (131) - Finisher, maybe. only kick, there's no strong sound (bpm is getting low past 200 bpm)

Kantan

1. 00:22:056 (21) - Same, k. If you want. sound is the same as literally everything else
2. 00:38:156 (53) - d but it's actually a snare, as 29 and 45 are
3. 02:01:606 (100) - ^ it's a snare here as well
4. 02:36:160 (159,160) - ctrl + g (and the rest same) I thiiink... sound better. this and all subsequent occurences are mapped as: kat = bleeping sound, d = kick.
5. 02:58:060 (198) - Same as beginner diff, move this note. same reasoning

Futsuu

1. 00:10:056 (4) - I think the notes same as that, sound better here: 00:10:156 - it's not, the rhythm is fucky and the sound starts at 10056.
2. 00:40:456 (83) - Move to: 00:40:556 - And same the rest at least it nerfs the futsuu a bit
3. 01:33:018 (61) - d modified to have a unified structure

Muzukashii

1. 00:12:056 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - Can you vary a little? I think it's very repetitive and can get boring. As you do here: 00:22:856 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) -
2. You can variate change this: 00:10:056 (8) - and this: 00:14:056 (28) - to blue i took this suggestion
3. You can change this: 00:23:156 (73) - to blue and Same with similar ones but i'm afraid i will have to decline this one, as practically every note in this section is mapped to kicks.
4. Change to blue: 01:34:430 (328) - for more consistency with: 01:39:371 (351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358) - this section has varied rhythms
5. You can vary too here: 02:19:960 (544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571) - except if i do, i will make the map much harder than it already is
6. change this notes to k: 02:22:585 (556) - 02:26:335 (574) - 02:30:085 (592) - 02:33:835 (610) - same reason as for 23156, kicks are dons, adding kats is just varying for the sake of varying
7. Variate: 02:34:960 (615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642) - Changing to k: 02:37:060 (627) - 02:40:060 (645) - 02:43:060 (663) - 02:46:060 (681) - it would get insultingly hard at this point

Oni

1. 00:13:156 (27) - what happened here? change to k we call that a mistake
2. Variated: 00:10:056 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - It's oni, I do not think there's any problem if you vary Changing this notes to d: 00:12:256 (21) - 00:16:256 (43) - 00:20:256 (65) - i don't see what this has to do with the fact it's oni, and it's not really a good idea on this as you have a better cue with k rather than d
3. 01:38:577 (398,399) - Would sound better. i think you missed something
4. 02:34:960 (712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722,723,724,725,726,727,728,729,730,731,732,733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740,741,742) - Change to k: 02:36:910 (724) - 02:39:910 (744) - 02:42:910 (764) - 02:45:910 (784) - low kicks, so dons

Inner Oni

1. ctrl + g 00:40:856 (215,216,217,218) - and ctrl + g 00:41:456 (219,220) - Same with similar ones only 215-6 and same ones
2. 00:42:856 (228,229) - Change this to k If you do not like it then you can change only one of them. Same here: 00:52:456 (286,287) - i prefer it this way, they're filler rhythms rather than main, despite being layered corretrly to a sound.
3. 01:09:153 (340) - k, maybe. doesn't fit in my opinion
4. 01:15:653 (368) - 01:15:853 (370) - 01:16:653 (377) - d and 01:16:853 (379,380) - ctrl + g it's just the reversed colors version of the previous one, won't make sense changing rhythm structure
5. 01:33:371 (461) - Change to k for more consistency with: 01:31:253 (444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460) - Same here: 01:48:900 (588) - fuck
6. 01:51:195 (607,608) - k It goes very well along with this: 01:48:371 (583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599) - and 01:51:548 (610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627) - i've only put a k on 607 as you'd have A+B then B+A back to back
7. 02:39:910 (927) - 02:42:910 (951) - 02:45:910 (975) - Change to k reasoning similar to oni
8. 02:58:060 (1077,1078,1079,1080,1081,1082,1083,1084,1085,1086,1087,1088,1089,1090,1091,1092,1093) - This part in the Inner and Akumu, are different to the Oni. You could put them the same as all three are the highest difficulties.Oni is just a nerfed inner oni because i don't want it to be unrankable on 250 points :V

Akumu

1. 01:43:695 (624) - k don't think a kat would fit nice and snuggly here
2. You can change to k: 01:38:048 (572) - 01:38:224 (573,574) - and 01:38:489 (575,576) - ctrl + g 572 follows ^, 573 done, and 575 works even better as kdkkd after a dk in my opinion
3. 01:48:900 (673) - k but if you change that, change: 01:49:077 (674) - to d 01:49:959 (682) - k applied except i've changed 681 to don to have a better rhythm flow
4. Variate: 02:36:685 (1034,1035,1036,1037,1038) - Change to k: 02:36:910 (1035) - 02:39:910 (1059) - 02:42:910 (1083) - 02:45:910 (1107) - same reasoning as ever before :V

GL aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lordy good thing i didn't map get fucked

Nifty wrote:

this map is still on v1. nice!

Kantan

◾ Yo, this whole map is like 7-9ms too early. timing check by fruko incoming soon
◽ 01:30:901 - You don't have one 4/1 break for this whole timing section, maybe delete 01:41:136 (58,59,60) - to add one. took the break suggestion but deleted at 01:31:606 - and 01:42:900 - , better candidates
◾ the rest is just really.. boring. But it's ok i guess. less boring than 99.5% of kantans that wouldn't even dare put shit on 1/4 and thus be pretty much as bad as the old beginner was

Futsuu

◾ 01:50:842 (117) - idk what made you decide to make this triple different from every other pattern, but you should probably move this 1 bar later to make it not like that. you mean 1 beat because 1 bar is a lot
◽ 02:01:960 - I would imagine the pattern you used here doesn't need to be exactly the same as the last time the pattern was on the map. remains of the old version, but having variety here won't hurt (and considering the pace picks up (despite the song slowing down by 10), it's better to tell the player OSHIT ITS LIT)

Muzukashii

◾ 01:10:053 (251) - it would be nice for this triple to be like, 01:09:253 - here, where the song actually has music that represents it. This happens multiple times. basically, all 4 times

Oni

◾ it's ok i guess
◽ 03:05:340 (886) - nvm what the heck is this what the heck happened lmao

Inner Oni

◾ 00:24:456 - you could add a k here every time, it's worth it. 95+% of dons follow kats, if they don't they're fillings
◽ dkkkd is garbage but you don't have to take them out eat my ass
◾ 02:36:160 - why though hittable and fuck dt
◽ 03:05:340 (1097) - why slider tho? i think spinner does the job better at least it's not super slow sv like in akumu.

time to take a fat schleep yeah 3 hours later you have to take a shower smh

MMzz wrote:

The way you mapped the intro reminds me of Doom Noiz lmao

[Akumu]
00:26:056 (154,155,156,157,158,159) - You could do something more interesting with this pattern honestly. kkdkkd gives a nice feel for the high hat sounds. Or you can do kdkkkd if you want a more beat oriented pattern. This applies to every pattern like this except for 00:30:056 (185,186,187,188,189,190) - because of those heavy kicks. chose kkdkkd for this one, and stuff @ 00:30:056 (185,186,187,188,189,190) - was changed to kddkkd.
00:45:156 - Add a note here? There isn't much of a reason to skip out on the rhythm at this point. The breaks ahead are more justified by the music. After adding the note changing the whole quad to something different would flow better too. Like kdkd to bring out those high hats. done, and the similar notes are fixed the same way
01:33:900 (533,534,535) - Making this pattern kkk would help with the overall flow and make this stream a little less complex. It doesn't really make sense to have this stream harder than the upcoming ones that resemble the same part of the music. yeah
02:08:147 - Same thing applies here that I pointed out at 00:45:156 -. applied
02:17:147 - Here too. applied

[Inner Oni]
The only complaint I have about this diff is near the end at 02:34:960 (889) - where you start using only mono colored 1/6 for some reason? Tbh the mono color gets boring really quick. Adding in some variation like you have prior with the kddkddk dkkdkkd type stuff was much more interesting and song accurate. the reason being it's 200 bpm (as opposed as 160 earlier), trying patterns like kddkddk is a risk i'm willing to take though

[Muzukashii]
Overall tone down the density a little? It feels pretty similar to the Oni rhythm wise most of the map. This isn't really helping the spread. done