MrDorian wrote:

owo/

EX

00:06:643 (6643|6,6741|0,6936|1,6936|5,7130|7,7228|6,7325|5,7423|4,7423|0,7520|1,7617|2,7715|3) - you might do it like this? Here goes the explanation:
00:06:643 (6643|6,6741|0,6936|5,6936|0) - this gives nice effect, is comfortable and is pitch correct
00:07:130 (7130|1,7228|2,7325|3,7423|4,7423|8,7520|7,7617|6,7715|5) - pitcchhhhhhh Hoo. Awesome idea! Thanks!

00:07:812 (7812|8,7812|7,8007|8,8007|7) - you might switch it to 12 if you accepted suggestion above Yup arranged here a bit
00:30:020 (30020|6,30020|5) - you could add one note to them, sound is pretty strong (even though you wanted to emphasize similiar part later, it's still good idea)https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=6&p=6086879#
00:32:358 (32358|3,32553|1) - ^ as well Done!
00:50:280 (50280|2,50475|2) - why is there a stack? the sounds aren't the same, second one is lower That's for the sake of playability.
Having a note on the right hand while having two pressed LNs sucks a bit that's why. But i keep this in eye.
00:59:241 (59241|1,59436|3,59630|5,59825|7,60020|0,60215|2,60410|4,60604|6) - I know what effect do you want to get, but trumped doesn't support it, it's 1/2 long (or even less I dunno)\ I know the trumpets are shorter but that's common mapping technique which i see often in LN heavy maps, that's why i wanted to try it too
It's pretty cool and i would like to keep it until someone clearly says "nope, not like this!". I mean, it plays pretty fine so far.
01:08:591 - this part feel so empty compared to other parts of kiai, you could add here some more notes and do some triplets or something Made the 2nd part of the kiai a bit more exciting!"
01:14:338 (74338|2,74436|3) - ctrl+j looks better to me tbh Applied

Hard

00:29:630 (29630|0,29630|2,29728|2,29728|0,30410|8,30410|6,30507|8,30507|6) - maybe make them 14 and 59? It will show the players that there's a jack and they will be prepared for next 24 69 jacks Changed
00:59:241 (59241|8,59436|6,59630|4,59825|2,60020|0,60215|7,60410|5,60604|3) - as in EX See above

Normal

00:44:825 (44825|0) - first collumn is hella empty, so you could 00:46:773 (46773|8,46968|5,47163|1,47358|4,47553|7) - ctrl+h, but it also makes ninth column empty, so :thinking2: Well it's not thaaat empty. I have several of such "short" unused parts. It's simply impossible to have every column well balanced AND good note balance that's why i leave it for now!

Todestrieb wrote:

Time to revive the A N T I - M E T A.

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9

Easy

00:06:643 (6643|8) - Maybe delete? It feels a bit odd to play this note considering the bell stopped. Mh.. for the bell you are right.. but it feels totally awkward to have here a break. That's why i keep it for the background piano
01:30:020 (90020|4,90215|5) - Move it to the same columns as 01:29:241 (89241|1,89436|2) - ? They are exactly the same sounds, It helps empathize the song, and this way you can apply the next suggestion :^).
01:31:968 (91968|7) - Move to 5, It's only difficulty where It is not (and It's funny to have it here c:).Both accepted! Also arranged the ending notes a bit to make it easier to hit

Hyper

00:06:643 (6643|2) - Like the Easy diff, It feels a bit odd to play this note considering the bells stopped already. Okay this one is 100% for the piano this time
00:07:033 (7033|5) - Same as stated above. But the 1/4 trumped starts exactly here D:
00:13:851 - You should add a note here, you did it for 00:10:345 (10345|5) - without having an extra kick in the music, which is the case here. I would help empathize the music a bit (suggesting in 7). I did. Also arranged notes a bit
00:14:436 (14436|6) - Maybe move this note to 2? Reduce a bit the left hand bias in this part (even more if you applied the previous suggestion in 7). // no need for this one anymore after arranging previous notes :3
00:32:553 - Maybe add a note in 5 to empathize the drum sound two times in a row? Done
00:37:812 - Kinda odd to have the missing clap here, I understand It is a bit trickier because of the LNs release, but It's still easier than some parts near the end, and It feels a bit inconsistant since you added them since the start. Okay Okay added a note here.
01:05:669 (65669|8,65669|0,66059|0,66059|8) - The right hand is a bit unconfortable with the LNs. If It's not intentional, you could CTRL+H these notes to make it more spaced and easier. Well that's a good suggestion. Done!

EX

00:10:540 - Missing note? You have a 3 chords note at 00:09:760 (9760|8,9760|7,9760|0) - and 00:13:656 (13656|1,13656|7,13656|8) - , pretty sure there is the same amount of sounds shared here. You got me at this one. Added
00:32:553 (32553|1) - Move to 4 to help empathize the same drum sounds two times in a row? Since i accepted this previously i do it here too.
00:50:280 (50280|2) -Pretty sure this the only instance where there is the two times the in a row the same note on the same column with 1/2 in beetwin. Unless you have a particular reason, It wouldn't hurt to move it to 2. This is exactly the note i hated the most XD I actually was in doubt if its okay right before a LN but it seems theres no other way around it soooo done
01:12:975 (72975|8) - There is a missing drum sound here, I don't know if you left it out on purpose, but since you nearly charted them all the time I tought It was worth mentioning. This one is on purpose
01:20:572 (80572|7) - Missing clap sound here, I understand It would be a bit tricky if you just added the note without touching the pattern here with the short LNs, but It is still pretty easy if you move 01:20:669 (80669|1) - to 3 and add the missing note in 2.
01:20:864 (80864|5) - If you added the clap at the previous suggestion, I would also add a note here for the extra clap in comparison with the previous sections. Mh, i need to reject both. The 3 noted chords i used here only at the long LN parts. Remaining snares are mapped with two notes so this one too.

Asherz007 wrote:

Well I started moaning about this in #osumania, now here I am :3

Using defaults :thinking:
I wonder what the anime's about...

[General]
drum-hitclap is so loud is starts audio tearing. (indicated by red lines below) I mean it's fine, but the quality usually degrades at such high volumes since most speakers can't handle the volume very well.


why two hitnormals... D: It's kinda prevented you from consistently adding the soft-hitwhistle in the Easy and Normal difficulties, which would have been a nice touch. // i had it added first.. but on the SB and that's not that cool in the final result :/

Also tons of other hitsounding things seem to be not present in lower diffs. // Almost all are present even in the lower diffs. o:

I suggest moving offset to 1564 (-15ms), since everything seems to be fractionally late, mostly noticeable with the final note which is meant to be on a 1/1. // -15 is really too much, i set it to 1575

#NonLinearODHPftw

Uh... 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9 (this is way too many columns lol)

Easy

Help I'm modding 9k what am I doing

1. 00:26:514 - I suppose you're going for some kind of symmetry thing here. The issue I have is you neglect columns 3 and 7 in this. Perhaps move 00:27:682 (27682|5) to col 7 and 00:29:241 (29241|3) to col 3. The problem here. If i do so, the columns where i move these notes away from get empty for a very long time, that's what i wanted to avoid
2. 00:37:423 (37423|0,37812|5) - I get that this is meant to be a simplification of what happens in Normal, but I don't really think LNs work for this in my opinion since the vocals aren't particularly "held" per se. Perhaps SNs instead to continue the pattern like before.But it's consistent with 00:24:955 - and here you didn't say anything so i guess it's fine? :p I don't think two 1/1 LN's are too hard to hit
3. 01:01:189 (61189|1,61579|1,61968|1) - What about moving these to col 4 to mirror the movement of 00:59:630 (59630|7,60020|7,60410|7,60799|5)? But like this it's perfectly mirrored with the previous notes o.o. Did you meant maybe just the last note? If so i keep it on 1 for the playability.
4. 01:30:020 (90020|0,90215|3) - Might want to ctrl + h this since the last occurrence was in LH (Tode grr) I applied these changes with the last mod xD I think it's cool
5. 01:30:604 (90604|8,90897|2,91189|5) - Could potentially do some sort of PR thing left to right with these three notes to reflect the chord progression. I indeed tried it already but without moving the previous notes, which are in my eyes pretty good to PR, it's almost impossible

Normal

Help I'm still modding 9k and I still don't know what I am doing

1. 00:01:579 (1579|7,3137|8,4695|2,6254|8) - Could include the piano note on the 1/2 after each time just to differentiate from Easy a little more and to bring it a little closer to Hyper. Good point, changed
2. 00:12:877 (12877|0) - I can't really find anything that's held throughout the entire duration of this LN; mind explaining what it is exactly? 00:12:877 - The trumpet makes here another .. uhh.. sound.. hit.. how to explain..
3. 00:14:630 - Not entirely sure why the final 1/4 drum was deliberately omitted each time. Progression-wise it still makes sense since Hyper has the LN as well. It's more "Normal" Friendly that's it. Nothing big behind.
4. 00:29:630 - Personally I reckon there could be some progression issues here, considering that Hyper has 1/4 double minijacks whilst this remains at 1/1. Perhaps include the 1/4 notes, though not necessarily as minijacks. Same at 00:42:098. I really don't think that's a big problem here. How should i map it differently? It has a nice spread from Easy to Normal and Hyper get's 1/4 jacks. While it may sound harsh, i think it's totally playable. It's not like i change it from 1/1 to 1/4 dense js haha
5. 00:44:436 (44436|0,44825|8) - Make SNs; no other diff in the spread has these, so it makes little sense to me to have these here.The other diffs may not have it but i would like to keep them in the Normal.
6. 01:11:708 - Might want to include the hitwhistle notes in Hyper for this burst, since the gap between this and Hyper at this is fairly large whereas with Easy it's next to non-existent. It's not possible to make the perfekt spread. Here i would have to add 1/4 notes and this would make the gap between Easy and Normal really evil, beside the fact that i didn't use 1/4 notes at all in the Normal, right? ;D

Ha- er, Hyper

Might want to nerf odhp to 7.5/7.5 to be a little more linear? Besides, you said that the LNs in this diff were easy. They aren't that easy, so I feel 8 might be a tad too much. mimimi it's too hard changed to 7.5 both

1. 00:08:202 (8202|1,8299|7,8494|1,8591|7,8786|1,8884|7,9079|1,9176|7) - I feel like this pattern just does its own thing and follows everything whilst following nothing in particular. Same with 00:11:319 (11319|8,11416|1,11611|8,11708|1,11903|8,12001|1,12195|8,12293|1). What exactly are these for? help me out pls bc I have no idea The Background Piano? It's the same like at the beginning. It continues here.
2. 00:12:488 (12488|4) - I'm thinking this LN should be half as long, since the trumpet (I think you're following this?) plays another note at 00:12:877 which isn't held. For me it looks fine
3. 00:16:968 (16968|6,17066|5) - You 1/4'd over a 1/6 drum roll :c I made a simplification here for spread. I don't want to jump from 1/2 notes to 1/4 roll with transition to 1/6 roll. That's just cancer Fixed after IRC with kawawa
4. 01:00:799 - Spread issue with EX, may need buffing a little bit, considering it's more or less identical to Normal. I don't see this as problem, considering that i have here an extra LN hold and the EX doesn't have it
5. 01:26:514 - Spread issue with EX maybe? Needs a buff in any case because I reckon it's a little too close to Normal. Added 1/6 single roll here

EX

I'm drowning in confusion send help (I can't understand the layering and I'm too tired qwq)

EX from the naming system that I have no idea about I guess.
Still grr about odhp, how about 7.8/8.7?

1. 00:12:488 (12488|4) - Like in Hard. See above
2. 00:16:773 (16773|0,16773|8,16838|7,16838|1,16903|6,16903|2) - You 1/6'd over a 1/4 drum roll :c No it's 1/6
3. 00:49:890 (49890|5) - I reckon this needs to be 1/2 shorter, since the vocals aren't held for that long.// will think about this one because a 1/2 LN here is so bad
4. 01:30:215 (90215|1,90215|7,90215|4) - What about a [456] chord here instead for a little variety? But the vocal and melody is 1:1 same like 01:29:436 - . I like these pattern :/

Hope this helps
I suck at modding large keycounts :c

Maxus wrote:

Hee-ya Fee-nya, a little suggestion :3

[EX]
00:05:860 (5860|2,6250|3,6445|3) - How about move to the left 1 time? this way you will have 00:06:250 - mirroring the pattern at 00:04:691 - . I think the mirror structure is what you intended seeing how you made 00:01:575 - and 00:03:133 - Done
00:12:484 (12484|4) - also for hyper diff too, the LN should stop at 00:12:873 - because i'm quite sure the sound ended here, well, there's another 1/2 LN sound at 00:12:873 - , but i just don't think extended this space LN for this long would work seeing that you seem you aim to be accurate with your LN tail like you did at 00:26:510 - , so it's kinda a bit confusing imo. I changed to two 1/2 LN's. That's actually pretty cool
00:23:880 (23880|5,24172|4) - Try switch column here? it will make the overall flow going to the right direction, instead of having 00:23:782 (23782|6,23880|5) - that flow to the left, and suddenly 00:23:977 - goes to the right. Accepted this one
00:35:471 (35471|4,35665|0) - Also switch column here? the whole structure will be neater as you place the double at col 1-9 which suit well with 00:35:081 - For me personally these pattern i have now are a bit better so i want to keep em
00:45:211 (45211|1,45406|3,45600|2) - Try make this col 1-3-4? similar reason with 00:23:880 - , to make it goes to right direction instead of having anti-flow like 00:45:406 (45406|3,45600|2) - Sure, why not!
01:01:185 (61185|8) - placing this at col 8 will mirror this with 01:00:795 (60795|2,60990|3) - which overall give neater structure. Well,
it didn't mirror by only move the one note but i moved the previous one too!
01:03:717 (63717|8) - move this to col 4? so that the stairs at 01:03:912 (63912|7,63912|1,64107|2,64107|6,64302|3,64302|5) - will have special emphasizement instead of having the right stair being longer with 01:03:717 - . Changed!
01:07:613 (67613|2,67711|7) - try move to col 9 and col 7? Since it seems you aim the flow to the left at 01:07:029 - , make those 2 notes at those column will flow with the previous double much better. yup
01:07:808 (67808|0) - This LN kinda makes me unsure since this seem intended to map secondary vocal but there isn't any secondary vocal here like 01:04:691 - , so pressing that LN makes it felt pressing "invisible vocal" on what is being pressed there. my suggestion is to turn that into ordinary note to get the hang of secondary vocal more effectively. same goes to other diff. These LN's are for the trumpet in the background!
01:20:276 - also the same as above. Same as above. These LN's are for the trumpet :3
01:23:003 - Although I know you left this on purpose for vocal, this just felt wrong with this big sound for hyper and EX .. I really like these pattern and adding here for the snare would ruin it, really. The snare isn't even that loud compared to the vocals. That's why i want to keep em :3

[Hyper]
00:16:769 - Well , for my opinion, this stream is too hard for this diff due to you using long space stream (9-7-5-3-1) which occupied really large field with 1/6 snap which is fast combined with coordination needed to hit those space stream. My suggestion is to use stream similar with EX diff like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9042293 I actually really liked this stream, but okay, changed. It might be a bit toooo hard.
00:37:419 - Should add note here? since you did add one at 00:24:951 - You got me.
00:38:977 (38977|6,39269|5) - Switch column here? so that the LN at 00:38:977 - can mirroring 00:40:536 (40536|2,40828|8) - which also be better in term of structure. Done
00:48:717 (48717|3,49107|4) - Try move to col 3 and col 2? by doing that you will have mirror pattern between 00:48:717 - and 00:49:107 - and it will isolate the space column until 00:49:886 - where the LN occurs which give flow to the current song mood more coherent. Arranged a bit different
01:18:523 (78523|5,78717|3) - try switch column here will form the short stair which give slightly straight pattern instead of minitrill there. I arranged it differently to keep the style i had with the previous 1/2 LNs too

[Normal]
00:02:354 (2354|4,4302|3,5471|4) - I will make this 4-5-4 here due to left index finger somehow being more empty compared with others. The space column may become the more empty here, but because space note is generally an odd one to press, it will provide overall more balance. Oki
00:16:964 - this should be at col 7 to connect it with the pattern at 00:16:964 - Moved
01:02:159 (62159|4,62354|2) - move to col 4 and col 6? 1/2 space stream will follow structure at 01:00:795 (60795|4,60990|2,61185|0) - and overall it will fit the transition mood towards the kiai. Dooone

[Easy]
00:07:029 (7029|0,7808|2) - Personally for me pressing 1-3 is really harder compared with 9-6, so try move 00:07:808 (7808|2,8587|1) - to col 4 and col 3? Sure, why not!
01:09:367 - Felt the pattern is a bit too left dominant here, how bout try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9042568

Overall is really solid here, great job!
Call me back

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

gratz Feerum san! (｡◕ˇдˇ​◕｡)/

and
why Source: pop'n music ラピストリア？
As the opening of "てーきゅう", why Source is not "てーきゅう" ?

Arzenvald wrote:

kinda confused whether you mimick PnM style or using a simple 9K style, because.. not sure if easy 'easy' enough in term of PnM playfield (you know combining 13579 pattern with 2468 etc etc making it tricky with PnM key config etc etc, LN + Note Combination etc etc)

either way woah nice