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camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays [For Approval]

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Shino
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Shino
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 9월 8일 토요일 at 오전 7:44:04

Artist: camellia
Title: scarlet heaven of Delays
Source: Touhou
Tags: U.N. Owen was her Flandre Scarlet Underefined Dubstep OnosakiHito
BPM: 141.01
Filesize: 11166kb
Play Time: 04:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Heaven (5 stars, 729 notes)
  2. Ono's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 1376 notes)
Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Shino , edited 21 times in total.
Speedy Cat_old
Speedy Cat_old
'ㅅ'b
ElectricShock
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ElectricShock
he is nice guy
Soar
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Soar
star~~~
Kuzino
Former osu!catch Champion: 2014
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Kuzino
8-)
Ondrasen
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Ondrasen
>_<
KDS
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KDS
>w</~☆
[Easy]Artdikcen
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[Easy]Artdikcen
Star~ :)
SweetBloodyLove
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SweetBloodyLove
star~
SS_Kanzaki
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SS_Kanzaki
Star~

Good Beatmap :3
-v-
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-v-
++star
Nyan
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Nyan

Shino wrote:

*Waiting Guest Taiko.
레알요?
C R E A M
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C R E A M
별투척! 1/3 어려워서 못치겠음 ㅠㅠ
Blackiris
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Blackiris
Touhou and dubstep, huh? However strange it may sound, it actually sounds bloody good - catch a star. You'd better rank it, mate - it's well worth it.
Shino
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Shino

Nyan wrote:

Shino wrote:

*Waiting Guest Taiko.
레알요?
일절이랑 합작한다면 봐줄께.

Blackiris wrote:

Touhou and dubstep, huh? However strange it may sound, it actually sounds bloody good - catch a star. You'd better rank it, mate - it's well worth it.
Thx for the star, mate (-_-)b
woodrockman
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woodrockman
:D
Ayeen_old
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Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
First of all, your timing is not correct:

BPM: 141.013, offset 13666

Timing sample:
Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (Shino) [timing].osu

Attachment is for your referrence. Listen to it at 25% and you should hear the beat drop right where the notes placed.

After that you should resnap and fix some notes that was drop on blue ticks before the timing changed. I take a second check after you fix it :)
Not sure how long it will take to reccheck, I dont promise
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
지상최악의리듬난보면

Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (Shino) [31's Taiko].osu
Bye
31 posts
Joined May 2010
Bye
star >.<d

great map +_+
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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minyeob
읭 묻히다니
사실 군대 가신거 보고 모딩 하는거 아주 미뤘는데 이런 결과를 초래하게 되었네요 <(_ _)>
Shino
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Shino
Next update date - the end of March
Shino
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Shino
Decided to use Case 2. ("Remove Original" Update will be in March 24th)
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. I'll mod Heaven case 2 as you requested.

General:
besides the 2 diffs that are the same everything looks good.

Heaven(case 2):
Having a slidertick rate of .5 is unrankable. here's proof.
01:17:916 (4) - make this a curved slider to form a blanket around the next note.
01:18:980 (2) - ^ previous note.
01:35:361 (1) - it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to 50% so that it goes in sync with the cymbals.
01:44:720 (1) - remove the NC because the instrumental is still going.
01:45:571 (6) - make this a NC because of the new instrumental and it starts at the downbeat.
01:47:273 (1) - add a finish on the spinner? same reason as 01:35:361
02:41:738 (1) - ^
03:28:860 - add a circle to follow the piano?
03:56:091 - ^
04:03:432 (1) - same as 01:47:273
04:18:748 (1) - what the...why is this speeding up all of a sudden? i think u want this to slow down but for some reason this speeds up all of a sudden.
04:24:705 (7) - add a clap here? sounds nice IMO
04:25:131 - add a circle to follow instrumental.

This is the best i can do. GL :D
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
Okay, I finnaly converted the Taiko map and have expand it.
I'm really sorry that you have need to wait so long, but I had much to do these days. orz

I really like the SB and it fit's to taiko as well, so I leaved it how it is and added one more thing you will see as attachment.
Please add my name into the TAG's so I can check out your newest updates.
I could fc it~

Nice osu! diff and SB, so I will leave a star here!☆



Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (Shino) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Shino
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Shino

OnosakiHito wrote:

Nice osu! diff and SB, so I will leave a star here!☆
Thanks a lot, Ono! *hi5*


Edit for Baykugan249's mod wrote:

Heaven:
Having a slidertick rate of .5 is unrankable. here's proof. < changed to 1.
01:17:916 (4) - make this a curved slider to form a blanket around the next note. < nope.
01:18:980 (2) - ^ previous note. < also no.
01:35:361 (1) - it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to 50% so that it goes in sync with the cymbals. < yup. but I don't think it have to reduce volume.

01:44:720 (1) - remove the NC because the instrumental is still going. < nope.
01:45:571 (6) - make this a NC because of the new instrumental and it starts at the downbeat. < sorry. this doesn't make sense for me.
01:47:273 (1) - add a finish on the spinner? same reason as 01:35:361 < yes.
02:41:738 (1) - ^ < yes.
03:28:860 - add a circle to follow the piano? < if I do, that part would be more difficult, and that was a concept.
03:56:091 - ^ < ^.
04:03:432 (1) - same as 01:47:273 < done.
04:18:748 (1) - what the...why is this speeding up all of a sudden? i think u want this to slow down but for some reason this speeds up all of a sudden. < I planned this part as most difficult part from the beginning. can't accept about speed issue.
04:24:705 (7) - add a clap here? sounds nice IMO < no.
04:25:131 - add a circle to follow instrumental. < that wouldn't connect with next combo, so nope.
Stefan
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Stefan
I'm not sure, but I heard the spinner-background must have a Size of 666x666. Ignore this if it's false.
It feels unconfortable without Lead-In Time. Set at least the time at 500.
00:47:279 (10) - Remove Clap, set Whistle.
00:50:684 (5) - Set Whistle at Start Point.
01:14:937 (1,2,3) - They don't fit with the Music IMO.
01:35:360 - 01:48:976 - Why no Kiai Time?
02:03:016 (2) - Set Clap at Start Point. (I know there's no Clap Hit at the Music on this time, but it would also fit there)
02:04:718 (2) - ^
04:24:705 (7) - Set Clap.

Besides of the original and the Metal Version by Len it is the only good mix version of U.N Owen was her? ! Starred this.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
special queue

[General]
The image "pastel"(1.1MB) and "light" (800KB) is comparatively too large. Try to compress the quality like others (~400KB or below)
spinner-approachcircle.png is missing.

[Heaven]
00:50:683 (5) - This slider slow down is unexpected. NC this one
02:07:271 (4,2) - sliders covered each other
04:23:003 (3) - remove clap at the beginning [in such quiet section excess hitsounds may sound very odd]
04:28:109 (5) - ^
04:29:811 (3) - ^
technically ok but tbh it may not reach the approvable quality [for me] in terms of arrangement and variations (e.g. 01:28:552 - you can put sth other than simple trplet without any movement)

[Taiko]
00:09:968 - as a progression I think you can use 1/3 x x x instead of 1/6
00:25:287 - ^ in this quiet section I don't prefer 1/6
01:17:698 - use 1/6 duplet like before
01:47:273 - broken sliders, and no sliders on 1/3 tick because you use it on 1/4 ticks before
~

good luck >_<
LKs
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LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]
  1. try to decline the size by changing pictures form
  2. Missing Skin Files spinner-approachcircle.png
  3. red timing section isn't the same
  4. Warning: [Heaven] 01:21:744 useless section
    Warning: [Heaven] 02:16:207
    Warning: [Ono's Taiko Oni] 00:03:762
    Warning: [Ono's Taiko Oni] 00:54:507
[Heaven]

00:47:279 (10) - move the clap to the end or remove
01:07:704 (10) - moce the clap to 13 or remove
02:31:206 (4) - clap?

this map has a sense of abstraction, and the SB improves the sense too

have a star
Mercurial
Mercurial
Approval :D

General
Since you have that storyboard, I suggest to you put an "Epilepsy Warning" on Heaven.
spinner-approachcircle.png isn't used.
Why Taiko and Standard diffs have a different BPM?

Heaven
Soft Hitsounds at 100% and I can't hear anything.Only conceptual things like...
01:16:638 (1) This slider this touching the Hp-bar

No SS-able map, but nicely mapped.


Good Luck.
Shino
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Topic Starter
Shino
Great. Now I have to consider with five mods. Yay. Take your kudosu, you modders!
[Notice] Sadly, update date will be May 5th or 6th, not now.
B-1B
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B-1B
[Heaven]
02:08:122 (2) - 여기 슬라이더 수평 유지하시던게 어긋났네요.

하나만 모딩하고 가서 죄송합니다 :(
KRZY
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KRZY
[Heaven]
*키아이 부분에서 곡을 너무 살리지 못한 느낌이 납니다. 야심차게 SV까지 높아져서 기대했는데 '에이 이게 뭐야' 하고 실망할듯한 패턴. 난이도를 조금 높이더라도 U.N.Owen 특유의 1/6박자를 살리는 게 더 낫지 않나 생각합니다.

뉴콤보로 표현하면 좋을 듯한 변속 슬라이더들
00:37:069 (5)
00:50:684 (5)
01:17:916 (5)
01:20:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이렇게 변경
SPOILER
02:17:591 (1) - 뉴콤보
04:30:663 (1) - 04:35:981에서 끝내는게 나아보이네요.
minyeob
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minyeob
위에서도 나왔지만 타이코/스탠 BPM이 다른 이유가...?

[Heaven]
01:36:956 (6) - 주관적으로 이 노트가 굳이 필요없다고 생각됩니다
00:47:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 박자 읽기 좀 어렵네요

제가 찾은 건 대충 이러한데
모딩 안 한지 오래여서 버블같은건 자신없네요 ㅜㅜ
Shino
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Shino

minyeob wrote:

위에서도 나왔지만 타이코/스탠 BPM이 다른 이유가...?
태고 bpm이 원래 내가 설정하던 거였는데 ayeen이 지적들어가서 스탠 바꿨지.
근데 오노사키는 원 bpm 141으로 매핑했더군.
휴가 나가면 바로 고칠 예정.
Shino
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Shino
---General---
  1. Spinner-approachcircle added.
  2. Less BG effect file size.
  3. Removed useless sections.
  4. Epilepsy Warning On.
---Heaven---
  1. New combo setting (for x0.5 sliders) arranged. - KRZY
  2. Shape of the slider in 01:16:639 changed. - iMercurial
  3. Edited hitsound of last quiet section. - wmfchris
  4. Adjusted stream shape a little to look better. - Self-mod
  5. Made new pattern for kiai time. - KRZY
  6. And *stuff*
--Taiko Oni--
  1. BPM adjusted.
All changes are in Newtype Diffs. If you mod this mapset, please do mod only Newtype version.
Shino
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Shino
Shino used Revival Potion to a Dead map!
That was super-effective!

...ah, no. Just "effective".
I'm planning to make a new taiko diff called "sc4r1et".
This revival is just a step before that.
pieguyn
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pieguyn
hi there~

General:

-perhaps change spinner-circle.png so the center is visible? it makes it easier to play :P

Heaven:

01:18:660 (1,2) - spacing seems like a 1/2 note...perhaps space it farther?
01:28:765 (4) - add whistle?
01:29:616 (10) - ^
01:30:467 (2) - ^
01:31:318 (8), 01:32:169 (2), 01:33:020 (8) - ^
01:35:147 - add note?
01:45:571 (6) - add NC?
04:20:450 (3,5) - make it blanket (4) better? http://puu.sh/Bf8O
04:27:258 (3,5) - ^

Ono's Taiko Oni: fine

good luck~
Shino
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Shino
Changed Newtype diffs name as Original one.

Green Color - Accepted
Strike - No

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-perhaps change spinner-circle.png so the center is visible? it makes it easier to play :P

Heaven:

01:18:660 (1,2) - spacing seems like a 1/2 note...perhaps space it farther?
01:28:765 (4) - add whistle?
01:29:616 (10) - ^
01:30:467 (2) - ^
01:31:318 (8), 01:32:169 (2), 01:33:020 (8) - ^
01:35:147 - add note?
01:45:571 (6) - add NC?
04:20:450 (3,5) - make it blanket (4) better? http://puu.sh/Bf8O
04:27:258 (3,5) - ^

Ono's Taiko Oni: fine
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
Allright, I will check everything today. Sorry =w=
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