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Remus wrote:

Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
    ok
  2. 00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
    When putting the notes there will be uncomfortable at the beginning of the spinner.
  3. 00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).

    It is best to start a notes from here
  4. 00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
    I think kddk is better.
  5. 00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
  6. 00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
    ok
  7. 01:29:623 - as i said before
    no



In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.
thank you for modding :3

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: PRESENTER.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58531
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:PRESENTER (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:PRESENTER (TV Size)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:Sanawieck
Version:yzrin's Muzukashii
Source:DOG DAYS
Tags:elements garden nakamura kanata ending yuzu__rinrin
BeatmapID:1225754
BeatmapSetID:550643

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG_.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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posted

Remus wrote:

Hello.



[Oni]
  1. 00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
    - No change
  2. 00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
    - ok
  3. 01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
    - ok
  4. 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
    - umm... keep...
  5. 01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
    - No change
  6. 01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.
    - No change



In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.
Thank you for modding :)
posted
00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか?
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです!
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: >w<b
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここkにした! 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた!
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにw
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…www
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます!
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるw
00:37 Sanawieck: ww
00:40 Tomoka Rin:  01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどw
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い!!ww
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにw
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*゚▽゚)ノ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー!!!
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい>ω<
posted

Tomoka Rin wrote:

00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか?
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです!
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: >w<b
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここkにした! 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた!
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにw
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…www
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます!
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるw
00:37 Sanawieck: ww
00:40 Tomoka Rin:  01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどw
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い!!ww
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにw
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*゚▽゚)ノ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー!!!
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい>ω<
IRCありがとう!!!!!

update !
posted
Sorry, I can't mod your because i don't mod graveyard beatmap
posted
Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
01:15:517: Add Drum
posted

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
- No change
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
- No change
01:15:517: Add Drum
- No change
Thanks for modding
posted
( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD


[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat



[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.



[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^



[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀`)



[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?



sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~
posted

404 AccNotFound wrote:

( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^

no change,
I tried it variously. However, I decided that the shape of the current form is a form that the rhythm and the break are moderately taken.

I thought that Futsuu players should do the one-step difficult rhythm as well.




[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀`)
( ˘ω˘ )thank you( ˘ω˘ )



sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~
thank you for modding ~ :)
posted

404 AccNotFound wrote:

( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD


[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat



[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.

- All changed :3

[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?
- No change

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3
- umm... keep

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.
- ok

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?
- changed d K



sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~
Thank you for modding !! :)
posted
Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me


[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?


[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
01:27:339 - Could add a note


Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it ;)
Best of Luck!
posted

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey!
From my queue.

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
I think kk is better.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
ok
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me
I would like to make the map even simple according to vocal.


[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
I erased it a little.
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
k
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?
I use a different color scheme to avoid duplication. 01:12:637 (2,3,4,5) -


Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it ;)
Best of Luck!
thank you for modding~ :3

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posted

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
- changed k d D k
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
- ok
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan
- ok


[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
- ok
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
- umm... keep
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
- No change
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
- No change
01:27:339 - Could add a note
- ok


Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it ;)
Best of Luck!
Thank you for modding !! :)
posted
Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget
posted

Arrival wrote:

Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.
- ok

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours
- Add finisher to 00:50:683 (23) -

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.
- ok

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too
- ok

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget
Thank you for modding :)
posted
Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .

[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.

01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than d k k d.

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.

00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) - .

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
-> 00:55:054 - I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.

00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?

That's all for now, call me back.
posted

Arrival wrote:

Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
fixed.


[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.
ok, changed~


01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than k d d k.
ok, changed kd-dk

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.
ok, deleted.


00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

Certainly break is necessary.
But I think that I do not need a 1/1 interval break.
deleted 00:50:385 (71) -

For 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - , no change as a pattern of consistency. 00:45:517 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) -


01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) -
ok
01:05:385 - add d
01:05:584 - add k

You should hear a high sound. I picked it up.
01:07:173 -
01:08:763 -


That's all for now, call me back.
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posted

Arrival wrote:

Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
- ok

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.
- ok

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.
- ok

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?
- added finisher

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !
- 00:15:021 added d 00:15:815 added k

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.
- added little notes

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?
- changed ddk

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
- it's difficult to 00:56:345 add note. no change
-> 00:55:054 - I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.
- change it


00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.
- it's unnatural to me. so deleted 00:58:829 (75,76,77,78)

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.
- ok changed

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .
- ok

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?
- it's unnatural to delete these notes. no change

That's all for now, call me back.
Thank you Arrival !!!! :):)
posted
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good


Do it and call meDone.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !
posted

Arrival wrote:

2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good


Do it and call meDone.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !
Arrival <3 Thank you !!
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