Manaka Kataoka & Atsuko Asahi - Gozen 1-ji (Rain)

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polka

Hobbes2 wrote:

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Sinnoh
should add PolkaMocha to the tags
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polka

Sinnoh wrote:

should add PolkaMocha to the tags
Ah ur right Ill do that thanks!!
Plaudible
helo here to help u rank qt song qt set

General
  1. Check soft-hitwhistle.wav, seems it might have a small delay


Easy
  1. 01:03:407 (1) - feels a little on the short end, could you snap it to the 1/4 before for a little extra time?


Gero's Easy
  1. 00:18:183 (2) - Shape feels a little tight for this diff, could you unfold it a bit more?
  2. 01:02:959 (1) - Never did 2 measure NC's before this, imo you could un-NC this just fine


Novice
  1. 00:58:482 (5,6,1) - Rhythm variation here from 00:21:765 (3,4,1) - feels a bit weird, since it's a short and simple song just keeping this the same rhythmically would be more fitting imo


Normal
  1. 00:58:034 (6) - reverse like at 00:22:213 (7) - ?


Advanced
  1. 00:14:601 (3,1) - blanket pls


ezek's Hard
  1. 00:10:124 (2,3) - IMO spacing here is way too big, even following DS, compare to 00:53:109 (2,3) - something is off. http://puu.sh/z6MAh/d7329a169f.jpg


Hard
  1. 00:18:183 (4,5) - Feels weird to stack these given 00:16:392 (1,2) - aren't


Atsuro's Hyper
  1. 00:28:929 (5) - Curious, why go with a slowdown here? Missing all the 1/2 slider action you had before


Top diff looks good enough, though some combos drag on for a bit imo

As previously discussed it seems a lot of the lower diffs have odd 2/1 rhythms that cover a lot of the melody that I feel could be included more, so please take another look at that.
Call me bekbekbek
Topic Starter
polka
All fixed on my end. Waiting on Atsuro and ezek.

  1. As for the highest diff, I like the lengthy combos idk why adds to the aesthetic if that remotely makes any sense.
  2. As for the 2/1 rhythms in earlier difficulties, note the slider shapes that capture covered melodies via red anchors. I had to keep density low and include sliders. So it's natural certain things get covered up.
Atsuro

Plaudible wrote:

helo here to help u rank qt song qt set

Atsuro's Hyper
  1. 00:28:929 (5) - Curious, why go with a slowdown here? Missing all the 1/2 slider action you had before It's consistent with the other ones,
    or you're talking about spacing?
wthanks
Gero
Changed both things.

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ezek
k fixed

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milr_
=u=b
Topic Starter
polka

[ White Music ] wrote:

=u=b
<3
Topic Starter
polka
Okay so it's been updated everyone's responded basically everything's fixed PLAUD THE WORLD IS WAITING
ezek
za warudo is waiting
Plaudible

Janssen wrote:

Plaudible wrote:

helo here to help u rank qt song qt set

Atsuro's Hyper
  1. 00:28:929 (5) - Curious, why go with a slowdown here? Missing all the 1/2 slider action you had before It's consistent with the other ones,
    or you're talking about spacing?
wthanks
http://puu.sh/z9Lur/1750c8fa10.jpg vs http://puu.sh/z9LuJ/e2b64a3f0c.jpg cosntant 1/2 vs 1/1 gaps at times

@polka maybe add Janssen to tags?
Topic Starter
polka
Ill do that when Atsuro sends me his update.
Atsuro
Song has less notes starting there, it made sense to me at the time to use less stuff (and it still does)
Topic Starter
polka
tag added
Plaudible
all setty spaghettis :)
Topic Starter
polka

Plaudible wrote:

all setty spaghettis :)
i l o v e u .
Atsuro
yum
Noffy
yasss
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