Manaka Kataoka & Atsuko Asahi - Gozen 1-ji (Rain) · forum

polka

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

polka 2017-05-16T03:50:41+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
hey as requested
Gonna start from the top cuz jesus christ this set is so fckin big lel
and also this will be nazi cuz what else can i do lmao all good

[General]
maybe it's just me but soft-hitwhistle hitsound pierces my ears and thus don't fit with this relaxing piece. Imo reducing its volume by like 2 db might be better. dropped by 2b
you probably cut it by yourself, but either case, try adding the fade-in effect at the beginning of the song. a bit too abrupt rn imo Ill wait for a second opinion

[Rainy]
00:07:437 (12) - imo removing the kick sound from the head and the 'pok' sound from the tail is better. ya ya I do notice the almost inaudible pok in the background but o well doing as I suggested emphasizes the silent transition between the melody better. Something like you did here 00:21:765 (12,2) - xd
^ applies to all similar spots
00:14:601 (10) - and similar stuff like 00:28:930 (10) - : remove the kick. The reason is pretty much the same with the points above. I disagree. I want to keep the clock tick through the whole song as a sense of beat.
00:21:765 (12) - the distance is very short when compared with 00:19:974 (8,10) - . It kinda stands out in a bad way imo fixed.
00:23:556 (1) - rotate this counterclockwise by a bit. Players tend to move a bit circularly and because of that, doing so makes it flow better. ok
00:55:795 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - this is sad orz cuz the emphasis on 00:58:034 (1,2,3) - is kinda weak. Imo instead of keeping the DS constant all the way on 00:55:795 (7,8,9,10,11) - try gradually reducing it like the xylophone volume in the background, then instantly increasing it on 00:58:034 (1,2,3) - Its the largest spacing in the whole difficulty. even if theres a spread before it, I think this gets plenty of emphasis.

[Hard]
00:27:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know if these DS variations are for the aesthetic thing or are mistakes on your part lmao Its not DS variation its angle variation and ya it was aesth
00:07:437 (5) - not tasty enuf <<< tbh not very tasty either lol but eh you get the point. Try making the circular thing near the end more delicious. Ok I think I did it
01:02:959 (1) - hello flow break lol. prolly because you ran out of space. Something like this is okay too imo
tru.. Okay fixed someway else.

K that's all o/ GL

Thanks crystal!

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polka

1,070 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

polka 2017-05-16T04:04:54+00:00

Set is on hold until everyone catches up with mod responses

Okie dokie! We're back in business!

Last edited by polka 2017-06-22T06:11:17+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Atsuro

1,279 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2017-05-24T20:56:56+00:00

MadHypnofrog wrote:
hey! m4m thing
1:40
00:03:855 (3,4) - ehhh this is really subjective but I don't really like the jump, a pattern like 00:05:646 (1,2,3,4) - would fit better imo I make a jump here on all instances of this note
00:08:780 (6,1) - y u stack those? 1 gets almost no emphasis, plus you're using a different pattern at 00:15:945 (4,1) - which I like more yes
00:17:288 (2,3) - blanket looks a bit off cleaned
00:20:870 (3,4,5) - making this a triangle doesn't make much sense to me since 5 is clearly a different sound which you've emphasized more earlier um no i always use low spacing for that note
00:32:959 (4,5) - plz blanket this, looks messy no

CrystilonZ wrote:
[Atsuro's Hyper]
okay tbh I don't agree much with the SV manipulation here but at least you're pretty constant i guess. Tried something different, didn't want this to be the same as polka's. I think it's decent enough
Jump choices that are a bit weird imo like
00:07:437 (5) - why did you put a jump here? Well the ending emphasis reason is not gonna work cuz this is objectively the weakest sound in the 00:05:646 (1,2,3,4,5) - set here. this was an error
00:14:601 (3) - ^ with a flow reverse lmao This one's fine, the flow is rather circular considering how slow this is
00:18:631 (4) - also here. This particular sound is not a start of a new xylophone set or anything, and also is not even a strong one. Jump on 00:19:527 (6) - which is not good either but still makes more sense than jump on (4) lol what's a xylophone? Well, i always make a jump after a strong sound, it felt more appropiate for this slow song and how i mapped it.
00:20:870 (3) - can't think of any reason you may have here xd i liked this pattern but yea fixd
00:34:751 (2) - also this ^ not this
etc etc etc

The jumps are very very large and random in this diff and do not have the sounds to justify them in most cases.
sry to be kindof rude but don't take this personally okay xd
Try to be more specific about where to jump and this diff is fine.

-Harpuia- wrote:
I'll try my best.
[Atsuro's Hyper]
H... Hitsounds? Stolen from polka's diff
00:03:631 - + ... - Would be nice to have these 3/4 slider-ends at very low volumes. Having it at the same volume as the others sound a bit jarring. YES
00:02:959 (2) - + ... - Also, I think these should be NC-ed. Taking into consideration that they look similar with the 1/2 variants. Especially 00:28:930 (3) - , as it might be mistaken as another 00:28:034 (2) - for their same length. But that's the fun part

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Zekeyache

3,274 posts

Joined October 2009

Zekeyache 2017-06-21T20:47:25+00:00

Ametrin wrote:
00:20:870 (2) - recommend not a reverse slider here as this is not an end of the part. slider+note this rhythm feels like a set of 3 sounds besides not exactly ending in the metronome, that's why I decided to map it as a repeat slider
00:58:481 (4) - the sound of sliderslide? only appear here in your diff fixed

MadHypnofrog wrote:
1:30
00:02:959 (2,3) - why is this the only stacked pattern lol later you always space them k, I made them consistent
00:14:153 (2) - pls consider splitting this into two circles, the sliderend is a pretty strong sound
or, if you don't want to, use a pattern like this 00:19:974 (1,2) - fits better imo used the other patter for consistency
00:55:795 (1,2) - ^ same

JeirYagtama wrote:
IT'S ezek, NOT Ezek
00:18:183 (3,4) - fix blanket the imperfection was so small I had to squint my eyes, but fixed
00:50:422 (5) - fix it its almost symmetrical but just move this a little bit more upward it's rotated, not meant to be symmetrical in that way

RyShiroku wrote:
ezek's Hard:
maybe you should place 00:08:780 (4) - between 00:07:437 (3) - and 00:09:228 (1) - because the distance between 3 and 4 is a bit far but since there is follow point between them it should be fine. that would be award, at least for me

-Harpuia- wrote:
[ezek's Hard]
01:02:959 - imo, spinner should've started here, like in the other diffs. I prefer to start spinners right after a strong sound getting hit in a note

Thanks fur the mods! 🐾

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Gero

4,415 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-06-22T01:36:24+00:00

Fixed almost everything, thanks a lot for modding it.

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polka

1,070 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

polka 2017-06-22T06:36:12+00:00

THANK YOU GERO

Everything has been updated! I'll start looking for some teir 1s now, as everything now meets bubbling requirements ou o

EDIT 6/23: I've contacted a handful of nominators to see if they'd be interested in modding. Did a m4m with Nozhomi! So we shall wait

Nozhomi

Beatmap Nominator

4,366 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2017-06-28T22:59:06+00:00

I want to die tbh

I think having a dark green border with that violet color makes elements really hard to read, especially on lower diffs. Would be nice to change for smth more readable.

[12:46 AM (Renumi's Beginner)]

People really want to play AR0 ? AR1 no ?
00:09:228 (1) - I just wonder why you skip beats like 00:11:019 - on your diff when on 12:45 AM this one is played. It's quite weird for a harder diff to skip it no ? Ofc that's a recurent problem on the map, 3/1 sliders are not adapted for that and make the diff more "boring" imo.

[1:00 AM (Easy)]

Imo that diff have no reason to be on that set at all. It's not that different from Renumi's diff, rhythm is even a bit more simple at some points, and the fact than you killed some strong beats like 00:55:795 - with sliders end is just a really bad idea.

[1:05 AM (Gero's Easy)]

Meh I would like to see you make 01:02:064 - and 01:02:959 - clickable instead of continue your reverse. They're quite important and I think you should make it playable.

[1:10 AM (Novice)]

An other diff where purpose of it is questionable. Your 2/1 sliders like 00:09:228 (1) - make your diff inconsistent because you skip 00:10:123 - , and rhythm is close to the diff of Gero once again. Also overlaps like 00:15:945 (4,1) - make it look a bit less good in an aesthetical way.
00:27:139 (3) - And that slider is meh, a vertical curved slider would be really better.

[1:15 AM (Normal)]

00:22:213 - Rip sliderslide sound here. Check if eventually it's not present on other diffs.

[1:20 AM (Advanced)]

I just have concern about your stacks (aka. 00:05:198 (5,1) - for example) who just block the movement of the player for any real reason. That sound don't call for a stack, it makes you just want to continue your movement as before. So I don't think that's a good idea to use them.

[1:30 AM (ezek's Hard)]

Since you're the lowest Hard, maybe AR5 ?

[1:32 AM (Hard)]

00:07:437 (5,2) - That stack is probably done on purpose but I prefer ask.

[1:40 AM (Atsuro's Hyper)]

So the diff have a nice composition and good use of symmetric patterns, but you totally sacrifice music emphasis and spacing coherence with it, plus you create some inconsistencies across the diff due to that. Some example 00:19:527 (6,1) - and 00:20:422 (2,3) - use big spacing to mark the strong beat,
but you totally miss 00:21:317 (4,5) - who is exactly the same. 00:58:034 (6,7,8) - is totally different from 00:22:213 (6,7,8) - when they're the same, 00:34:303 (1,2) - is giant when 00:34:751 (2,3) - / 00:35:646 (4,5) - are ridiculous, etc...I think there's a lot to do here working on these points.

[1:45 AM (Rainy)]

00:58:930 (3) - Move it to 200:272 to adjust spacing like the previous one who is at 2.40x.

I'm going to bed zzz
Mukyu~

hewwo

768 posts

Joined July 2012

hewwo 2017-07-01T03:43:44+00:00

i accentuated the rhythm through curves in the slider and i don't think it's complemety earth shattering when you compare it to the easy

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polka

1,070 posts

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Topic Starter

polka 2017-07-01T03:47:49+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
I want to die tbh

I think having a dark green border with that violet color makes elements really hard to read, especially on lower diffs. Would be nice to change for smth more readable. ...Have any suggestions .-.

[12:46 AM (Renumi's Beginner)]
People really want to play AR0 ? AR1 no ?
00:09:228 (1) - I just wonder why you skip beats like 00:11:019 - on your diff when on 12:45 AM this one is played. It's quite weird for a harder diff to skip it no ? Ofc that's a recurent problem on the map, 3/1 sliders are not adapted for that and make the diff more "boring" imo.

[1:00 AM (Easy)]
Imo that diff have no reason to be on that set at all. It's not that different from Renumi's diff, rhythm is even a bit more simple at some points, and the fact than you killed some strong beats like 00:55:795 - with sliders end is just a really bad idea. I wanted to make an entire set myself. The GDs are just a bonus. Also, fixed.

[1:05 AM (Gero's Easy)]
Meh I would like to see you make 01:02:064 - and 01:02:959 - clickable instead of continue your reverse. They're quite important and I think you should make it playable.

[1:10 AM (Novice)]
An other diff where purpose of it is questionable. Your 2/1 sliders like 00:09:228 (1) - make your diff inconsistent because you skip 00:10:123 - , and rhythm is close to the diff of Gero once again. Also overlaps like 00:15:945 (4,1) - make it look a bit less good in an aesthetical way. While the undermapping Im keeping, I fixed that overlap to look better.
00:27:139 (3) - And that slider is meh, a vertical curved slider would be really better. Think I fixed it.

[1:15 AM (Normal)]
00:22:213 - Rip sliderslide sound here. Check if eventually it's not present on other diffs. Fixed.

[1:20 AM (Advanced)]
I just have concern about your stacks (aka. 00:05:198 (5,1) - for example) who just block the movement of the player for any real reason. That sound don't call for a stack, it makes you just want to continue your movement as before. So I don't think that's a good idea to use them. I think it's fine. They match the vibraphone's playing perfectly.

[1:30 AM (ezek's Hard)]
Since you're the lowest Hard, maybe AR5 ? Changed with ezek's permission

[1:32 AM (Hard)]
00:07:437 (5,2) - That stack is probably done on purpose but I prefer ask. Ew fixed.

[1:40 AM (Atsuro's Hyper)]
So the diff have a nice composition and good use of symmetric patterns, but you totally sacrifice music emphasis and spacing coherence with it, plus you create some inconsistencies across the diff due to that. Some example 00:19:527 (6,1) - and 00:20:422 (2,3) - use big spacing to mark the strong beat,
but you totally miss 00:21:317 (4,5) - who is exactly the same. 00:58:034 (6,7,8) - is totally different from 00:22:213 (6,7,8) - when they're the same, 00:34:303 (1,2) - is giant when 00:34:751 (2,3) - / 00:35:646 (4,5) - are ridiculous, etc...I think there's a lot to do here working on these points.

[1:45 AM (Rainy)]
00:58:930 (3) - Move it to 200:272 to adjust spacing like the previous one who is at 2.40x. Fixed.

I'm going to bed zzz Sarry
Mukyu~

Last edited by polka 2017-07-02T21:35:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

polka

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Topic Starter

polka 2017-07-01T06:59:29+00:00

Updated! Waiting on~~Gero~~ and ~~Atsuro!~~

Last edited by polka 2017-08-02T03:20:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gero

4,415 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-08-02T01:32:38+00:00

I've fixed the rhythm that Nozhomi pointed out.

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polka

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Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

polka 2017-08-02T03:20:22+00:00

Perfect! Show is back on the road!

Got a bn to look at it on Wednesday more like Thursday more like this weekend more like Sunday more like Tuesday "or I can shoot him"! Thanks Hobbes!

Nao Tomori

2,731 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-08-22T14:30:46+00:00

is hobbes doing this or should i

polka

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Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

polka 2017-08-22T16:43:46+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
is hobbes doing this or should i

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8909438

Hobbes2

Beatmap Nominator

2,217 posts

Joined March 2016

Hobbes2 2017-08-22T18:15:36+00:00

[Beginner]

great for 3 year olds

00:37:884 (1) - This slider is perfect

[Renumi Beginner]

ok

[Easy]

00:10:124 (1,2) - blanket lol
00:22:661 - these bell sounds only happen here so you could do this to make it stand out!! - http://puu.sh/xgJPV/2bdc1beed0.jpg (basically split up 00:21:765 (3) - to circle + 1/1 slider)
00:57:586 (4) - this slider is perfect

[Gero Easy]

ok

[Novice]

00:07:437 (3,4,1) - clean up spacing a .05 difference is noticeably visually
00:08:332 - so noisy

quieter hitsound pls?
00:22:213 - I don't think a slider bounce is enough for this. I'd map it out.
00:58:034 - Again, pls map. You do red tick rhythm earlier so why not here?

[Normal]

00:10:124 (2,3) - This particular overlap looks kinda ugly to me, cos its only overlapping the sliderborder which is (puke)

[Advanced]

ok

[ezek hard]

ok

[Noffy Hard]

00:08:332 - noisy hitsound

[Hard]

00:14:601 (3) - This shape is kinda ugly to me lol, guess its alright tho

[Atsuro hyper]

The slowdown thing is cool.

Spacing overall feels a bit weird to me. Please see Nozhomi's mod and respond to him because I agree with his points.

[Rainy]

00:02:288 - these slider tails are super noisy to me. I think you should reduce the volume for them. TBH whatever hitsound 00:06:542 (10)'s tail has just use that lol

Call me when everyone is respond

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,492 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-08-22T19:00:53+00:00

polka did hitsounds but that was randomly the only slidertail going into silence with that hitsound in my difficulty for some reason so i went ahead and removed it/ fixed it.
thanko

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polka

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polka 2017-08-22T21:36:37+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
[Beginner]

great for 3 year olds Meow

00:37:884 (1) - This slider is perfect ur perfect

[Renumi Beginner]

ok

[Easy]

00:10:124 (1,2) - blanket lol k
00:22:661 - these bell sounds only happen here so you could do this to make it stand out!! - http://puu.sh/xgJPV/2bdc1beed0.jpg (basically split up 00:21:765 (3) - to circle + 1/1 slider) Good idea but idk Ima just keep main rhythm here.
00:57:586 (4) - this slider is perfect ur perfect

[Gero Easy]

ok

[Novice]

00:07:437 (3,4,1) - clean up spacing a .05 difference is noticeably visually u right
00:08:332 - so noisy quieter hitsound pls? Nop because quiet hitsounds are laaaaAAme
00:22:213 - I don't think a slider bounce is enough for this. I'd map it out. Mapping the main rhythm so I figured I'd include this at least.
00:58:034 - Again, pls map. You do red tick rhythm earlier so why not here? Done

[Normal]

00:10:124 (2,3) - This particular overlap looks kinda ugly to me, cos its only overlapping the sliderborder which is (puke) Looks fine to me not sure what else to do

[Advanced]

ok

[ezek hard]

ok

[Noffy Hard]

00:08:332 - noisy hitsound See above. Im keeping the tick tock consistent throughout the whole song.

[Hard]

00:14:601 (3) - This shape is kinda ugly to me lol, guess its alright tho Changed.

[Atsuro hyper]

The slowdown thing is cool.

Spacing overall feels a bit weird to me. Please see Nozhomi's mod and respond to him because I agree with his points.

[Rainy]

00:02:288 - these slider tails are super noisy to me. I think you should reduce the volume for them. TBH whatever hitsound 00:06:542 (10)'s tail has just use that lol muted alllllll the slider tails

Call me when everyone is respond

God bless you.

Waiting on Atsuro!! ouo b

Atsuro

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Atsuro 2017-08-23T00:23:23+00:00

Oh i didnt answer to nozhomi's mod, i literally remade the map in answer to that, making it more consistent (with the same concept and ideas)

Hobbes2

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Hobbes2 2017-08-23T03:20:12+00:00

@Atsuro Alright, fair enough.

Generally I feel like patterns could do more with what the music provides. ex: 00:07:437 - is clearly a more pronounced sound than 00:06:989 - but the spacing is the same due to the geometric pattern.

Also this diff feels inconsistent in parts with similar music having big changes in the patterns, like 00:11:019 (4,5,6,7) - has a spaicng increase to 5 when 00:27:138 (1,2,3,4) - has it to 3 when the music doesn't really justify such a change.

A neat diff in terms of its construction but I think these issues warrant further discussion. All of this being said it's not THAT bad so I may be fine with bubbling given a good response.

Atsuro

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Atsuro 2017-08-24T03:11:13+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
@Atsuro Alright, fair enough.

Generally I feel like patterns could do more with what the music provides. ex: 00:07:437 - is clearly a more pronounced sound than 00:06:989 - but the spacing is the same due to the geometric pattern. Having an increase in spacing just doesnt feel right to me because, while it's more pronounced, it's not really a strong note that warrants a big change (contrary to this one 00:08:780 (6) - ). Having the slow slider i think is enough to represent this properly i think

Also this diff feels inconsistent in parts with similar music having big changes in the patterns, like 00:11:019 (4,5,6,7) - has a spaicng increase to 5 when 00:27:138 (1,2,3,4) - has it to 3 when the music doesn't really justify such a change. It's not the same part exactly, this 00:27:138 - would be the same notes as 00:12:810 - and, while those are sliders, it gives the same notes the most emphasis. 00:11:019 (4,5,6,7) - These are the same as 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - which are placed in a similar way (jump on the second note and same spacing on last three). All said i did find some inconsistencies that i ended up fixing (00:18:183 (4,5,6,7) - this aa)

A neat diff in terms of its construction but I think these issues warrant further discussion. All of this being said it's not THAT bad so I may be fine with bubbling given a good response.

Thanks!
Update: https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0B1A_nVu ... jZJcFlLMVE

polka

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polka 2017-08-25T01:34:39+00:00

so apparently qats dont like this

this should be fun.

Hobbes2

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Hobbes2 2017-08-25T02:32:40+00:00

Summary of discussion I had with most of the qats

1) There's an issue brought up that the lower diffs are redundant; as in, the design of the lower diffs don't differ enough to warrant their existence.

2) I believe nobody said that it isn't inherently unrankable as is, but most agreed it didn't seem very reasonable.

Thoughts? Obviously given my star I think the spread should be fine but I can see the arguments against it.

polka

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polka 2017-08-25T02:35:43+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
Summary of discussion I had with most of the qats

1) There's an issue brought up that the lower diffs are redundant; as in, the design of the lower diffs don't differ enough to warrant their existence. I'd be more than happy to vary my pattern choice separate my diffs by making them more original, but the process of remodding I think is just so extra. As No Title has the same extra at least more than twice.

2) I believe nobody said that it isn't inherently unrankable as is, but most agreed it didn't seem very reasonable. With the huge growth of million gd spreads I can see why this is getting annoying. But I made this before those were popular sheerly because I wanted to give people as many ways to enjoy the song, as it is my absolute favorite from this whole series.

Thoughts? Obviously given my star I think the spread should be fine but I can see the arguments against it.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2017-08-29T12:32:09+00:00

My point of view on that is like... is it really necessary? It does seem really redundant in most of the cases. Obviously, there can be the argument as to "why do you need so many extras?" But imo that's something else, because people most of the times have different styles, which is actually hard to say in those easy diffs.

You could deifnitely ditch some of the very first diffs, because I do not see too much benefit of having so many similar diffs.
Beginner really does not offer a lot, apart from the sliders which follow the music in an interesting way, but this can be found in Easy as well, for example.

If you could elaborate on what exactly makes each diff unique, then please go ahead and I might be able to see your point of view!

polka

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polka 2017-08-30T00:21:24+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
My point of view on that is like... is it really necessary? It does seem really redundant in most of the cases. Obviously, there can be the argument as to "why do you need so many extras?" But imo that's something else, because people most of the times have different styles, which is actually hard to say in those easy diffs.

You could deifnitely ditch some of the very first diffs, because I do not see too much benefit of having so many similar diffs.
Beginner really does not offer a lot, apart from the sliders which follow the music in an interesting way, but this can be found in Easy as well, for example.

If you could elaborate on what exactly makes each diff unique, then please go ahead and I might be able to see your point of view!

Hi! Personally I can understand the whole can get a bit redundant thing but when you mention the sliders, the siders in beginner do follow the rhythm the same way the sliders in easy do, but the difference is that easy is more dense than beginner, so they're theoretically, while alike, not the same. Additionally in Maps like reols no title there are several Difficulties that follow the exact same rhythm, and if not the exact same, very close. But if you would like me to add some more rhythmic variation in my personal difficulties so that way the guesy difficulties can stand out a bit more I can definitely do that so let me know what you'd like.

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Irreversible 2017-09-01T23:57:28+00:00

The more we can agree on a compromise, the better. So if you could do things to fix the problem as good as possible, then that's the best solution!

I advise against comparing to other mapsets though, cuz we look at this mapset how it is right now, and not how 300 other mapsets were or currently are (at which you should state your opinion immediately, if you find something).

polka

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polka 2017-09-04T20:16:30+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
The more we can agree on a compromise, the better. So if you could do things to fix the problem as good as possible, then that's the best solution!

I advise against comparing to other mapsets though, cuz we look at this mapset how it is right now, and not how 300 other mapsets were or currently are (at which you should state your opinion immediately, if you find something).

Okay, so would you say it would be better to have more unique patterns on my diffs to help the gds feel more different/unique?

polka

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polka 2017-12-05T23:04:02+00:00

waiting on hobbes!

Hobbes2

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Hobbes2 2017-12-06T00:22:36+00:00

remove me from tags

00:07:437 (12) - and shouldnt the tail of this be silenced, noisy hitsound on nothing is kinda meh (topdiff)

polka

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polka 2017-12-06T13:47:53+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
remove me from tags

00:07:437 (12) - and shouldnt the tail of this be silenced, noisy hitsound on nothing is kinda meh (topdiff)

the clock sound is designed to play through the whole song. Sorry for the confusion.

Removed you from tags haha

Hobbes2

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Hobbes2 2017-12-07T00:01:10+00:00

b

polka

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polka 2017-12-07T00:06:46+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
b

THANK YOU

Sinnoh

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Sinnoh 2017-12-08T06:03:25+00:00

should add PolkaMocha to the tags

polka

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polka 2017-12-08T23:06:18+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
should add PolkaMocha to the tags

Ah ur right Ill do that thanks!!

Plaudible

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Plaudible 2018-01-22T01:18:36+00:00

helo here to help u rank qt song qt set

General

Check soft-hitwhistle.wav, seems it might have a small delay

Easy

01:03:407 (1) - feels a little on the short end, could you snap it to the 1/4 before for a little extra time?

Gero's Easy

00:18:183 (2) - Shape feels a little tight for this diff, could you unfold it a bit more?
01:02:959 (1) - Never did 2 measure NC's before this, imo you could un-NC this just fine

Novice

00:58:482 (5,6,1) - Rhythm variation here from 00:21:765 (3,4,1) - feels a bit weird, since it's a short and simple song just keeping this the same rhythmically would be more fitting imo

Normal

00:58:034 (6) - reverse like at 00:22:213 (7) - ?

Advanced

00:14:601 (3,1) - blanket pls

ezek's Hard

00:10:124 (2,3) - IMO spacing here is way too big, even following DS, compare to 00:53:109 (2,3) - something is off. http://puu.sh/z6MAh/d7329a169f.jpg

Hard

00:18:183 (4,5) - Feels weird to stack these given 00:16:392 (1,2) - aren't

Atsuro's Hyper

00:28:929 (5) - Curious, why go with a slowdown here? Missing all the 1/2 slider action you had before

Top diff looks good enough, though some combos drag on for a bit imo

As previously discussed it seems a lot of the lower diffs have odd 2/1 rhythms that cover a lot of the melody that I feel could be included more, so please take another look at that.
Call me bekbekbek

polka

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polka 2018-01-22T02:29:06+00:00

All fixed on my end. Waiting on Atsuro and ezek.

As for the highest diff, I like the lengthy combos idk why adds to the aesthetic if that remotely makes any sense.
As for the 2/1 rhythms in earlier difficulties, note the slider shapes that capture covered melodies via red anchors. I had to keep density low and include sliders. So it's natural certain things get covered up.

Atsuro

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Atsuro 2018-01-22T02:58:29+00:00

Plaudible wrote:
helo here to help u rank qt song qt set

Atsuro's Hyper
00:28:929 (5) - Curious, why go with a slowdown here? Missing all the 1/2 slider action you had before It's consistent with the other ones,
or you're talking about spacing?

wthanks

Gero

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Gero 2018-01-23T04:08:04+00:00

Changed both things.

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Zekeyache

3,274 posts

Joined October 2009

Zekeyache 2018-01-23T06:12:41+00:00

k fixed

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milr_

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milr_ 2018-01-23T06:28:05+00:00

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