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old song but never gets tired :d
2017-01-18 06:53 Underdogs: ey yo
2017-01-18 06:53 Underdogs: irc chat?
2017-01-18 06:53 Okinami: sure thing
2017-01-18 06:53 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1165053 ChouCho - Yasashisa no Riyuu [medium rare]]
2017-01-18 06:54 Okinami: yup
2017-01-18 06:54 Underdogs: nice structure
2017-01-18 06:54 Okinami: thanks
2017-01-18 06:54 Underdogs: 00:01:809 (1,2) - i think the 2 shouldnt be clickable
2017-01-18 06:55 Underdogs: so it'll be the same as 00:02:318 (3) -
2017-01-18 06:55 Underdogs: then again, the vocal after it is clickable soo xd
2017-01-18 06:55 Underdogs: 00:04:352 (2,3,4) - i wouldn't suggest a triplet on a calm part
2017-01-18 06:56 Underdogs: I didn't hear anything that justifies the triplet so removing it is the best option
2017-01-18 06:56 Okinami: done
2017-01-18 06:56 Underdogs: 00:06:555 (1) - if you're following vocal, I suggest making this a 1/2 repeat slider
2017-01-18 06:57 Underdogs: rhythm-wise it felt weird when the 'kao' vocal is ignored
2017-01-18 06:57 Underdogs: sounded like a slow drop in terms of pitching so having a sound would really help
2017-01-18 06:58 Underdogs: 00:09:267 (3) - remove this clap, replace with whistle
2017-01-18 06:58 Underdogs: 00:09:945 (4) - and this one, remove the clap, just that
2017-01-18 06:59 Underdogs: 00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - the jump is uncomfortable for the diff
2017-01-18 06:59 Okinami: aight
2017-01-18 07:00 Underdogs: although it's emphasizing, 00:14:352 (5,6) - is the one worth emphasizing, but not 00:14:013 (3,4) -
2017-01-18 07:00 Underdogs: 3 and 4 is only your everyday 1/2 beat xd
2017-01-18 07:01 Underdogs: 00:16:555 (1) - maybe make slider end clickable
2017-01-18 07:01 Underdogs: keeping it is also ok since the sound is there
2017-01-18 07:02 Underdogs: 00:28:928 (4,5,6) - looks bad
2017-01-18 07:03 Underdogs: i think you wanted to do something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7085350 this?]
2017-01-18 07:03 Okinami: yes
2017-01-18 07:03 Okinami: thank you
2017-01-18 07:03 Underdogs: 00:40:793 (7,1) - whoa big gap here. map the empty space tho
2017-01-18 07:04 Okinami: i cant think of a rhythm thatd flow too well there
2017-01-18 07:04 Underdogs: it's easy
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: just use 1/2
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: like you always did
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: maybe copy paste 00:41:809 (3) - and mirror
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: 00:40:962- has strong guitar so it should be clickable
2017-01-18 07:06 Underdogs: 00:44:521 (7,8) - big spacing for idk what reason, but it looks unconfortable i think
2017-01-18 07:06 Underdogs: 00:54:013 (1,2,3) - aesthetically looks bad
2017-01-18 07:07 Underdogs: 00:57:996 (1,2) - prolly move 1 tick behind and put a note for triplet. the piano is definitely triplet
2017-01-18 07:08 Underdogs: the kiai is ok
2017-01-18 07:08 Underdogs: but the back and forth flow is too much used if you ask me
2017-01-18 07:09 Underdogs: but that's just my pov so feel free to ignore
2017-01-18 07:10 Underdogs: imma go and post
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: aight
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: thanks for mod
2017-01-18 07:10 Underdogs: oh, also preview point
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: oh
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: shit i forgot
2017-01-18 07:10 Underdogs: under timing tab one line with the file, edit and shiz
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: yeye
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: thanks
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: set it on 00:59:267-
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: ill be busy applying what i can
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: sure
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: ecks dee
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: ecks dee
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: also if possible check my map?
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: especially on normal/extra
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1121457 u's - Snow halation]
2017-01-18 07:12 Okinami: sure, ill take a look when i get a moment
2017-01-18 07:12 Underdogs: thanks xd
Topic Starter
accepted most of it, made changes where i couldUnderdogs wrote:
old song but never gets tired :d2017-01-18 06:53 Underdogs: ey yo
2017-01-18 06:53 Underdogs: irc chat?
2017-01-18 06:53 Okinami: sure thing
2017-01-18 06:53 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1165053 ChouCho - Yasashisa no Riyuu [medium rare]]
2017-01-18 06:54 Okinami: yup
2017-01-18 06:54 Underdogs: nice structure
2017-01-18 06:54 Okinami: thanks
2017-01-18 06:54 Underdogs: 00:01:809 (1,2) - i think the 2 shouldnt be clickable
2017-01-18 06:55 Underdogs: so it'll be the same as 00:02:318 (3) -
2017-01-18 06:55 Underdogs: then again, the vocal after it is clickable soo xd
2017-01-18 06:55 Underdogs: 00:04:352 (2,3,4) - i wouldn't suggest a triplet on a calm part
2017-01-18 06:56 Underdogs: I didn't hear anything that justifies the triplet so removing it is the best option
2017-01-18 06:56 Okinami: done
2017-01-18 06:56 Underdogs: 00:06:555 (1) - if you're following vocal, I suggest making this a 1/2 repeat slider
2017-01-18 06:57 Underdogs: rhythm-wise it felt weird when the 'kao' vocal is ignored
2017-01-18 06:57 Underdogs: sounded like a slow drop in terms of pitching so having a sound would really help
2017-01-18 06:58 Underdogs: 00:09:267 (3) - remove this clap, replace with whistle
2017-01-18 06:58 Underdogs: 00:09:945 (4) - and this one, remove the clap, just that
2017-01-18 06:59 Underdogs: 00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - the jump is uncomfortable for the diff
2017-01-18 06:59 Okinami: aight
2017-01-18 07:00 Underdogs: although it's emphasizing, 00:14:352 (5,6) - is the one worth emphasizing, but not 00:14:013 (3,4) -
2017-01-18 07:00 Underdogs: 3 and 4 is only your everyday 1/2 beat xd
2017-01-18 07:01 Underdogs: 00:16:555 (1) - maybe make slider end clickable
2017-01-18 07:01 Underdogs: keeping it is also ok since the sound is there
2017-01-18 07:02 Underdogs: 00:28:928 (4,5,6) - looks bad
2017-01-18 07:03 Underdogs: i think you wanted to do something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7085350 this?]
2017-01-18 07:03 Okinami: yes
2017-01-18 07:03 Okinami: thank you
2017-01-18 07:03 Underdogs: 00:40:793 (7,1) - whoa big gap here. map the empty space tho
2017-01-18 07:04 Okinami: i cant think of a rhythm thatd flow too well there
2017-01-18 07:04 Underdogs: it's easy
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: just use 1/2
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: like you always did
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: maybe copy paste 00:41:809 (3) - and mirror
2017-01-18 07:05 Underdogs: 00:40:962- has strong guitar so it should be clickable
2017-01-18 07:06 Underdogs: 00:44:521 (7,8) - big spacing for idk what reason, but it looks unconfortable i think
2017-01-18 07:06 Underdogs: 00:54:013 (1,2,3) - aesthetically looks bad
2017-01-18 07:07 Underdogs: 00:57:996 (1,2) - prolly move 1 tick behind and put a note for triplet. the piano is definitely triplet
2017-01-18 07:08 Underdogs: the kiai is ok
2017-01-18 07:08 Underdogs: but the back and forth flow is too much used if you ask me
2017-01-18 07:09 Underdogs: but that's just my pov so feel free to ignore
2017-01-18 07:10 Underdogs: imma go and post
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: aight
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: thanks for mod
2017-01-18 07:10 Underdogs: oh, also preview point
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: oh
2017-01-18 07:10 Okinami: shit i forgot
2017-01-18 07:10 Underdogs: under timing tab one line with the file, edit and shiz
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: yeye
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: thanks
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: set it on 00:59:267-
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: ill be busy applying what i can
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: sure
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: ecks dee
2017-01-18 07:11 Okinami: ecks dee
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: also if possible check my map?
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: especially on normal/extra
2017-01-18 07:11 Underdogs: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1121457 u's - Snow halation]
2017-01-18 07:12 Okinami: sure, ill take a look when i get a moment
2017-01-18 07:12 Underdogs: thanks xd
thnx xd
From #modreq
If you want to get it ranked, you need to have a complete set. Which includes a good diff spread of at least Normal, Hard, and Insane.
Didn't check metadata, sorry.
[medium rare]
Generally I recommend something related to be the diff name lol. If you don't want to use default ones.
No need to set the OD as 8.7, it's just too high for these kinnd of diff. 8 will serve your need well.
Please disable the countdown.
00:01:132 - volume set of the two timing points are not the same here.
Another thing generally a bit unsatisfying is the hitsound system. First of all, claps are not used as whistles. They are usually used for metronome. Here it's also not suitable for this kind of music. Try to apply similar hitsound to the notes to show which track you are following, or it will seem to be a bit random to use a lot of different kinds of hitsounds in different places.
00:07:233 (3) - Here you can actually make the slider similar shape as the previous one, 00:06:555 (1) . The curve is a bit different and it's not another kind of slider.
00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - I believe you can make a better star here. This is acceptable, but you may need to move some other things too:
00:28:250 (1,2,3) - This flow can be better used if more expanded. Slider 3 can be moved to somewhere else.
00:29:945 (6) - If you are aiming at making this pattern, just move it a bit to get a better outcome.
00:29:945 (6,1) - The long slider is right after the slider 6, you may want to use another kind of slider to express the long slider to avoid monotonous pattern.
00:35:369 (2) - Lean it a bit to make a better slider pattern will be a good express of the music.
00:38:250 (4,5) - You can actually make a triplet here to cover the music. pattern may need some changes in order to do so. Compared to this, 00:38:843 (6,7) - may be some excessive triplets not shown in music.
00:53:674 (1,1,1,1) - No need to spam NC here.
00:55:030 (1) - Here if it is excessive for the slider symmetry pattern, make it another type of slider will help.
00:55:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I like your rhythm design, but the pattern is not well designed. You can make some better patterns like this:
Kiai part is a bit messy, but generally the flow is well designed.
GL. Good map for a new mapper.
If you want to get it ranked, you need to have a complete set. Which includes a good diff spread of at least Normal, Hard, and Insane.
Didn't check metadata, sorry.
[medium rare]
Generally I recommend something related to be the diff name lol. If you don't want to use default ones.
No need to set the OD as 8.7, it's just too high for these kinnd of diff. 8 will serve your need well.
Please disable the countdown.
00:01:132 - volume set of the two timing points are not the same here.
Another thing generally a bit unsatisfying is the hitsound system. First of all, claps are not used as whistles. They are usually used for metronome. Here it's also not suitable for this kind of music. Try to apply similar hitsound to the notes to show which track you are following, or it will seem to be a bit random to use a lot of different kinds of hitsounds in different places.
00:07:233 (3) - Here you can actually make the slider similar shape as the previous one, 00:06:555 (1) . The curve is a bit different and it's not another kind of slider.
00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - I believe you can make a better star here. This is acceptable, but you may need to move some other things too:
00:28:250 (1,2,3) - This flow can be better used if more expanded. Slider 3 can be moved to somewhere else.
00:29:945 (6) - If you are aiming at making this pattern, just move it a bit to get a better outcome.
00:29:945 (6,1) - The long slider is right after the slider 6, you may want to use another kind of slider to express the long slider to avoid monotonous pattern.
00:35:369 (2) - Lean it a bit to make a better slider pattern will be a good express of the music.
00:38:250 (4,5) - You can actually make a triplet here to cover the music. pattern may need some changes in order to do so. Compared to this, 00:38:843 (6,7) - may be some excessive triplets not shown in music.
00:53:674 (1,1,1,1) - No need to spam NC here.
00:55:030 (1) - Here if it is excessive for the slider symmetry pattern, make it another type of slider will help.
00:55:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I like your rhythm design, but the pattern is not well designed. You can make some better patterns like this:
Kiai part is a bit messy, but generally the flow is well designed.
GL. Good map for a new mapper.
Topic Starter
wowzer
Atrue wrote:
From #modreq
If you want to get it ranked, you need to have a complete set. Which includes a good diff spread of at least Normal, Hard, and Insane.
Didn't check metadata, sorry.
[medium rare]
Generally I recommend something related to be the diff name lol. If you don't want to use default ones.
No need to set the OD as 8.7, it's just too high for these kinnd of diff. 8 will serve your need well.
Please disable the countdown.
00:01:132 - volume set of the two timing points are not the same here.
Another thing generally a bit unsatisfying is the hitsound system. First of all, claps are not used as whistles. They are usually used for metronome. Here it's also not suitable for this kind of music. Try to apply similar hitsound to the notes to show which track you are following, or it will seem to be a bit random to use a lot of different kinds of hitsounds in different places.
00:07:233 (3) - Here you can actually make the slider similar shape as the previous one, 00:06:555 (1) . The curve is a bit different and it's not another kind of slider.
00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - I believe you can make a better star here. This is acceptable, but you may need to move some other things too:
00:28:250 (1,2,3) - This flow can be better used if more expanded. Slider 3 can be moved to somewhere else.
00:29:945 (6) - If you are aiming at making this pattern, just move it a bit to get a better outcome.
00:29:945 (6,1) - The long slider is right after the slider 6, you may want to use another kind of slider to express the long slider to avoid monotonous pattern.
00:35:369 (2) - Lean it a bit to make a better slider pattern will be a good express of the music.
00:38:250 (4,5) - You can actually make a triplet here to cover the music. pattern may need some changes in order to do so. Compared to this, 00:38:843 (6,7) - may be some excessive triplets not shown in music.
00:53:674 (1,1,1,1) - No need to spam NC here.
00:55:030 (1) - Here if it is excessive for the slider symmetry pattern, make it another type of slider will help.
00:55:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I like your rhythm design, but the pattern is not well designed. You can make some better patterns like this:
Kiai part is a bit messy, but generally the flow is well designed.
GL. Good map for a new mapper.
pretty much accepted all of this, thank you
Insane
General: I'm not a big fan of some of the jumps in this song you tend to use a lot of very big jumps during the slow parts of the song (for example: 00:26:386 (5,6,7,1,2,3) and 00:32:996 (2,3,4,5).
00:11:979 (1,2,3) - These sliders flow a bit awkwardly.
01:01:979 (1,2) - More Awkward Flow.
01:05:877 (6,1) - This jump is really out of place for this section of the music. Rhythmically its correct, but its a really unnecessary jump. Something like this fits that part of the song more appropriately.
00:11:979 (1,2,3) - These sliders flow a bit awkwardly.
01:01:979 (1,2) - More Awkward Flow.
01:05:877 (6,1) - This jump is really out of place for this section of the music. Rhythmically its correct, but its a really unnecessary jump. Something like this fits that part of the song more appropriately.
Super Fun Map
Topic Starter
thanks for mod, appreciate itPastaCats wrote:
Mod InsaneGeneral: I'm not a big fan of some of the jumps in this song you tend to use a lot of very big jumps during the slow parts of the song (for example: 00:26:386 (5,6,7,1,2,3) thank
and 00:32:996 (2,3,4,5) this spacing is fine because of how the intensity of the guitar picks up, not mentioning the sudden addition of bass
00:11:979 (1,2,3) - These sliders flow a bit awkwardly. lowered 3 for added intensity aswell
01:01:979 (1,2) - More Awkward Flow. denied because its a decent place-holder for now until i get a better idea
01:05:877 (6,1) - This jump is really out of place for this section of the music. Rhythmically its correct, but its a really unnecessary jump. Something like this fits that part of the song more appropriately. no, i used the back and forth rhythm consistently throughout the map. the jump is quite big, ill give you that, but the flow is odd because of the sudden intensity.
Super Fun Map
hi from modreqs
- add combo colours
00:01:809 (1) - remove new combo
00:03:165 (1,2,3,4) - spacing should be the same for 1,2 and 3,4
00:03:843 - remove new combo
00:05:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same here, it's the same sound but the spacing between 2,3 is different
00:11:132 i think you can empathize the lyrics better this way http://i.imgur.com/EmjIkAK.png
00:13:843 - you can make a better star here
00:16:555 (3) - remove new combo
00:24:860 - there isn't a triple sound here, overmap
00:26:047 - ^
00:28:928 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:284 (1) - remove nc
00:31:555 (3) - no sound for placing this note, delete
00:40:793 (7) - remove newcombo
00:42:996 (1) - remove newcombo
00:43:165 (2) - add newcombo
00:47:233 (4) - add newcombo (because of downbeat and the song changes)
00:47:911 (1) - remove newcombo
00:48:589 (1) - add newcombo (try to add combos on downbeats, unless you change slider velocity or the song changes or something)
00:49:267 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:623 (1) - add new combo (as you can notice, the song music here, also it is a downbeat so new combo)
00:50:623 - a slider would fit here, since there's a sound on the red tick
00:52:487 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:657 (2) - add new combo
00:57:911 - no need to put a triple here, try this http://i.imgur.com/nggiO47.png
01:00:623 (1) - clap; be consistent with hitsounding, the second part of the kiai has a different hitsounding as the first
01:00:623 - pointing this out: dont avoid strong beats if there's a sound there. pay attention and you can listen a music change on the following white tick
01:01:979 - ^ the same
01:01:979 (1) - clap
01:03:165 - clap
01:03:335 - clap
01:11:470 - same as 01:00:623 - 01:01:979
01:16:894 - here you skipped that strongbeat, since there isn't a sound there. thats okay
01:18:420 - unnecesary kiai
01:21:132 (3) - clap
01:22:487 - same as 01:16:894
01:23:165 (1) - remove nc
01:23:843 - unnecesary kiai
hope this can help you
also i'm a newbie modder so don't kill me x.x
- add combo colours
00:01:809 (1) - remove new combo
00:03:165 (1,2,3,4) - spacing should be the same for 1,2 and 3,4
00:03:843 - remove new combo
00:05:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same here, it's the same sound but the spacing between 2,3 is different
00:11:132 i think you can empathize the lyrics better this way http://i.imgur.com/EmjIkAK.png
00:13:843 - you can make a better star here
00:16:555 (3) - remove new combo
00:24:860 - there isn't a triple sound here, overmap
00:26:047 - ^
00:28:928 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:284 (1) - remove nc
00:31:555 (3) - no sound for placing this note, delete
00:40:793 (7) - remove newcombo
00:42:996 (1) - remove newcombo
00:43:165 (2) - add newcombo
00:47:233 (4) - add newcombo (because of downbeat and the song changes)
00:47:911 (1) - remove newcombo
00:48:589 (1) - add newcombo (try to add combos on downbeats, unless you change slider velocity or the song changes or something)
00:49:267 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:623 (1) - add new combo (as you can notice, the song music here, also it is a downbeat so new combo)
00:50:623 - a slider would fit here, since there's a sound on the red tick
00:52:487 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:657 (2) - add new combo
00:57:911 - no need to put a triple here, try this http://i.imgur.com/nggiO47.png
01:00:623 (1) - clap; be consistent with hitsounding, the second part of the kiai has a different hitsounding as the first
01:00:623 - pointing this out: dont avoid strong beats if there's a sound there. pay attention and you can listen a music change on the following white tick
01:01:979 - ^ the same
01:01:979 (1) - clap
01:03:165 - clap
01:03:335 - clap
01:11:470 - same as 01:00:623 - 01:01:979
01:16:894 - here you skipped that strongbeat, since there isn't a sound there. thats okay
01:18:420 - unnecesary kiai
01:21:132 (3) - clap
01:22:487 - same as 01:16:894
01:23:165 (1) - remove nc
01:23:843 - unnecesary kiai
hope this can help you
also i'm a newbie modder so don't kill me x.x
hi
- nazi: 00:01:640 (3,3) - blanket
00:03:335 (2,3) - avoid overlapping these with the other circles so I recommmend moving them to the right like this http://prntscr.com/dyx1k5 (you dont reaaally need to change it this way but you know what I mean) like this look less messy, but maybe the spacing is too much from a start so you can fix it :p
00:06:555 (1,3) - make them equal, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127153 so it looks better :p
00:13:843 (2,1) - these 2 kinda ruin the star, maybe move them both to 364/268
00:15:030 (2) - move this up a bit so it plays better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127177
00:15:877 (5,2,2) - these overlaps looks kinda.. akward tbh, try stacking them or using the same overlap. how? like this 1- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127207 < see how 5 is overlapping 2, 2- http://prntscr.com/dyx4gj see how 2 is overlapping 2, the same way as 2-5 so it doesnt look akward or messy, u got me?
00:16:047 (1) - move to 320/324?
00:19:267 (3) - try avoiding the overlap of this with the next stream, maybe stack this 3 with 00:18:081 (3,3) - end, or make a star pattern with these like this.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127239 anyways, your choise.
nazi: 00:23:504 (3) - blanket
00:25:538 (1) - move this a bit to the right to fix the star pattern, + if youre stacking it with 00:24:182 (1,1) - then move 00:24:521 (2,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:26:132 (3) - should delete this, feels overmapped here, but you can add a triplet betwen 00:26:216 (3,4) - OR 00:27:064 (2,3) -
00:26:894 (1,2,3) - these doesnt play really well with the previous pattern. so I recomend doing ctrl+g on 00:26:894 (1,3) -
00:27:233 (3,1) - stack these and 00:26:555 (6,1) - ? and make the both patterns fit each other.
nazi: 00:28:250 (1,3) - blanket
00:28:928 (1,1) - this is on porpuse? or maybe you tried to make a perfect blanket? in case you did this totally on porpuse just ignore this. if not, make a perfect blanket :p
00:28:928 (1,2) - too much spacing. I recommend stacking these 00:28:420 (2,2) - and then, stack 00:28:589 (3) - with 00:29:437 (2) - end
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127306
00:30:284 (2) - this sould not be a 1/1 slider. you got some guitar sounds right here so I think you can make emphasis on them by changing the slider into 3 circles.
00:32:996 (2,3,4,5) - more spaing here? also the pattern. its a star? doesnt look the best.. I mean.. why not make something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127327 so it looks better and plays exactly the same as before :p
00:36:047 (4,5) - these doesnt flow well with the preovous slider. theyre part of the same combo.. so you should not break the flow here. maybe move these into the middle of the slider-pattern? 00:36:047 (4,5) - like this. AND if you do that make a good blanket with 00:36:386 (1) - (you can change it another way tho, I just give a recomendation. but consider not breaking the flow there)
00:36:386 (1) - move these 3 so 4 OR 1 stacks on 00:36:386 (1) - http://prntscr.com/dyxcis
00:40:962 (2) - make this a reverse? so the next circle flows better (well, its the same, but with a reverse it feels better)
00:45:030 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - make something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7127364 ?? I think it looks better and is.. almost the same
01:05:877 (6) - this doesnt flow good.. maybe just ctrl+g on it?
01:10:623 (6) - avoid the small overlap with 1 xDD ok I feel like hittler. sorry :<
01:11:132 (1,2,3) - dont.. please, dont end sliders on white ticks. since the beat at the end of the slider its stronger than the beat of the start, it doesnt sound good. doesnt follow the rythm correctly. if you want to keep sliders here. start them on 01:10:962 (8) -
01:11:809 (3) - move to 212/336 so it looks good with 01:12:657 (6) -
01:15:030 (3,4,5,6) - hmm why not just make a perfect start pattern here xD? hmm don't change if you really don't want.
Topic Starter
long mod
Daanit wrote:
hi from modreqs
- add combo colours
00:01:809 (1) - remove new combo ✓
00:03:165 (1,2,3,4) - spacing should be the same for 1,2 and 3,4 kinda, didnt want to ruin aesthetic
00:03:843 - remove new combo the slider is on the end of a measure, its appropriate
00:05:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same here, it's the same sound but the spacing between 2,3 is different consistent spacing here would bore the player, the three strums have different pitches, so they need unique spacing
00:11:132 i think you can empathize the lyrics better this way http://i.imgur.com/EmjIkAK.png i wasnt trying to map to the lyrics, mostly to the strong beats of the instruments
00:13:843 - you can make a better star here ✓
00:16:555 (3) - remove new combo ✓
00:24:860 - there isn't a triple sound here, overmap overmapped for emphasis
00:26:047 - ^ ^
00:28:928 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:284 (1) - remove nc
00:31:555 (3) - no sound for placing this note, delete overmapped for emphasis
00:40:793 (7) - remove newcombo
00:42:996 (1) - remove newcombo no, the previous combo was long enough. this new combo lands on the downbeat of a drastic change in intensity
00:43:165 (2) - add newcombo ^
00:47:233 (4) - add newcombo (because of downbeat and the song changes) i feel like the current combo is appropriate enough
00:47:911 (1) - remove newcombo 1/1 slider on emphasized sound
00:48:589 (1) - add newcombo (try to add combos on downbeats, unless you change slider velocity or the song changes or something) no change in the song, and the previous combo isnt lng enough to be consistent
00:49:267 (1) - remove new combo intensity of the lyrics change, emphasized note
00:50:623 (1) - add new combo (as you can notice, the song music here, also it is a downbeat so new combo) an NC right before a rest would be ugly, not enough of a change in music
00:50:623 - a slider would fit here, since there's a sound on the red tick that would invalidate the entire reasoning for the pattern. i put it there to make the way all the vocals cut out seem to stand out
00:52:487 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:657 (2) - add new combo
00:57:911 - no need to put a triple here, try this http://i.imgur.com/nggiO47.png i think the triple fits the piano well, any denser of a rhythm would feel inappropriate in my opinion
01:00:623 (1) - clap; be consistent with hitsounding, the second part of the kiai has a different hitsounding as the first second kiai is more intense than the first, i dont really understand what you mean when you tell me to put a clap on the red tick
01:00:623 - pointing this out: dont avoid strong beats if there's a sound there. pay attention and you can listen a music change on the following white tick i know these exist, and it pains me physically to put the sliders on the red ticks, but i cant just ignore the vocals which become dominant as hell so suddenly. it stays for now
01:01:979 - ^ the same
01:01:979 (1) - clap inconsistent, claps are used on the instrumental beats during the kiai
01:03:165 - clap thank
01:03:335 - clap inconsistent, putting a clap on a red tick would make it sound ugly and put off the player
01:11:470 - same as 01:00:623 - 01:01:979 agree, but doesnt have the same emphasized sounds as the other half
01:16:894 - here you skipped that strongbeat, since there isn't a sound there. thats okay
01:18:420 - unnecesary kiai yes
01:21:132 (3) - clap clap too intense for the come down of the kiai, the whistle is more appropriate
01:22:487 - same as 01:16:894 unsure as to how that pattern would fit here
01:23:165 (1) - remove nc i put an NC over every 1/1 rest
01:23:843 - unnecesary kiai thank
hope this can help you
also i'm a newbie modder so don't kill me x.x
thanks for the mod, either way