Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME !

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The notes after the spinners come very quickly, which will be a pretty big issue for newer players as spinner recovery is one of the trickiest skills for newbies to pick up on. I would try have at least 1.5 beats between the ends of the spinners and the notes directly after them - you can accomplish this either by making the spinners shorter or removing notes afterward.

Hard
00:03:125 (1) - Move back to the red tick, where it is now doesn't fit the music that well.
00:04:216 (3) - ^
00:20:580 (1,3) - ^
00:24:262 (4) - It's a little difficult to tell this is a slider until too late, maybe move some notes around so it's more visible?

Could probably use an easy diff, but I see you may have a guest one on the way? Have a star anyhow.
aquabluu
IRC mod for Taiko diff. Star.
SapphireGhost
[General]
- Too many spinners in the map. Try to cut down on the number of spinners you have.

[Normal ~]
00:11:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It feels like you could do this in a more creative way than all those sliders. It needs a new combo too.
00:28:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

[Hard ~]
00:05:171 (1) - Awkward spacing.
00:46:216 (1) - Have the spinner start at the same time it does on [Normal].

The map felt a bit messy to me, but I'll give you a star for support.
KanaRin
Ok.
Some Taiko mod here.

[Taiko]

00:02:716 (10) - Kat?
00:05:171 (21) - ^
00:06:535 (27) - ^
00:08:989 (39,40,41,42) - it doesn't fit for 1/6 i guess. Try to do that ? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/92843 OOO OOO.
00:13:353 (59) - Don
00:13:625 (60) - Kat
00:20:444 (89) - Remove Finish.
00:20:716 (90) - Kat
00:25:080 (106,107,108,109) - DK KD
00:26:171 (111,112,113,114) - KD DK
00:27:262 (116) - Kat
00:31:353 (132,133,134,135) - dkdk?

Ok~ That's it.
My Rating : 7 / 10

Not bad. Keep it go & Good luck.
Star~
Dotsu
Hi~

Some suggestions:

[General]


  • 224kbps mp3 file? Convert it between 128kbps and 192kbps
    soft-slidertick2.wav seems unused
    The end of the music sounds strange…
    Offset seems about +10


[Normal]


  • 00:07:080-00:08:989 : Add something here? You can add circles every beat
    00:08:989 (1): Remove the whistle and end the spinner at 00:10:898
    00:23:989 (3): Use clap here instead of finish
    00:24:535 (1): Remove whistle
    00:33:262 (10): Add finish
    00:33:262-00:35:171 : Add something such as circles every beat
    00:37:625 (7): Add finish
    00:45:807 (1): This spinner doesn’t fit the song in my opinion. You can add two circles at 00:45:807 and 00:46:353 instead of it


[Hard]


  • 00:15:807-00:17:716 : Add something such as circles every beat
    00:20:171 (6): Add Finish here
    00:35:444 (3): Finish
    00:46:353 (1): It doesn’t fit the song. Add circles at 00:46:080 and 00:46:353 instead of it


Cool~
Kurowolfe
Huh, finally done the Easy diff. Have a try first to see whether you like it or not =P

Download: Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME ! (HeatKai) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
-99
Hi^^

General:
Change the preview point to 00:18:125

Normal:
00:08:999(1)- remove the spinner and insert time break at 00:07:090
00:30:272(4,5,6)- move to axis x:192 so it fits the slider at 00:11:181
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128 ^

Hard:
00:36:272(5)-weird slider? need fix?

All seems ok in ctb mode.
Topic Starter
HeatKai

-99 wrote:

Hi^^

General:
Change the preview point to 00:18:125

Normal:
00:08:999(1)- remove the spinner and insert time break at 00:07:090
00:30:272(4,5,6)- move to axis x:192 so it fits the slider at 00:11:181
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128 ^

Hard:
00:36:272(5)-weird slider? need fix?

All seems ok in ctb mode.
THANKS , at the HARD its okay :D
It's normal for someone to make like that :D ~
Here your first kudo ~
-99
Normal
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128

^not yet fix
Topic Starter
HeatKai

-99 wrote:

Normal
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128

^not yet fix
DONE
indyinyou
:arrow: hi : ~ :

[easy]
00:20:232 : fin
00:37:686 : ^

[normal]
00:01:959 : whistle
00:35:505 : fin
00:37:686 : new combo
00:38:232 : remove new combo
00:17:505 : clap
00:17:777 : note is kind of close to the end of a spinner make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/93839
^
00:18:050 : fin
00:18:323 : whistle
00:20:232 : new combo
00:20:777 : remove new combo
00:28:414 : clap

[Hard]
00:03:050 : whistle
00:03:596 : ^
00:03:868 : ^
00:04:141 : ^
00:04:686 : ^
00:04:959 : ^
00:13:686 : remove fin
00:14:777 : ^
00:15:868 : fin
00:16:414 : whistle
00:17:505 : ^
00:18:050 : fin
00:20:232 : ^
00:20:505 : whistle
00:21:050 : ^
00:21:323 : ^
00:21:596 : ^
00:22:686 : remove clap
00:24:596 : fin
00:28:959 : ^
00:31:686 : whistle
00:34:959 : clap
00:37:686 : fin
00:38:232 : whistle
00:39:323 : ^
:roll:
Topic Starter
HeatKai

indyinyou wrote:

:arrow: hi : ~ :

[easy]
00:20:232 : fin
00:37:686 : ^

[normal]
00:01:959 : whistle
00:35:505 : fin
00:37:686 : new combo
00:38:232 : remove new combo
00:17:505 : clap
00:17:777 : note is kind of close to the end of a spinner make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/93839
^
00:18:050 : fin
00:18:323 : whistle
00:20:232 : new combo
00:20:777 : remove new combo
00:28:414 : clap

[Hard]
00:03:050 : whistle
00:03:596 : ^
00:03:868 : ^
00:04:141 : ^
00:04:686 : ^
00:04:959 : ^
00:13:686 : remove fin
00:14:777 : ^
00:15:868 : fin
00:16:414 : whistle
00:17:505 : ^
00:18:050 : fin
00:20:232 : ^
00:20:505 : whistle
00:21:050 : ^
00:21:323 : ^
00:21:596 : ^
00:22:686 : remove clap
00:24:596 : fin
00:28:959 : ^
00:31:686 : whistle
00:34:959 : clap
00:37:686 : fin
00:38:232 : whistle
00:39:323 : ^
:roll:
THANKS :D
Kurai
Normal
00:11:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This 1/2 stream is too long and can be hard to pass for inexperienced players, I suggest you to remove (5) and to add a circle at 00:13:686 (Add a new combo to this circle). And try to make this pattern prettier by making curvilinear sliders, etc ...
00:28:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The same for this pattern, remove (5) and add a circle at 00:31:141 with a new combo mark. And try to make it prettier too :)
00:28:686 (1) - This note is just 1/2 later from the previous spinner, it's not enough to be playable in a normal difficulty. So, reduce the previous spinner by 1/2
00:35:232 (1) - 1/4 is really a bad idea in this kind of difficulties even if it's a slider, it will surprise new players, so make this slider 1/2 long and without repeat (or make two circle at 00:35:232 and 00:35:505)
00:43:959 (1) - The same for this slider, make a 1/2 long slider here or two circle. ; This slider is just 1/2 later from the previous spinner, it's not enough to be playable, so reduce the spinner by 1/2
00:45:868 (4) - Add a clap to this circle to keep the rhythm, (It sounds weird without a clap here)

Hard
- AR6 is not enough for a hard difficulty, The notes appear too slowly and it's not very agreable to play. AR7 fits better for this map.
00:08:232 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is kinda unreadable because of (5) who is hided by the slider shape of (4). So flip (4) horizontaly (ctrl + H) and replace it at the spot it was, it will look nicer and more readable.
00:23:777 (3) - Use 1/6 is fine for this slider, nevertheless it's hardly hearable compared to the sound there are on the blue tick (00:23:914) who is clearly hearable. That's why it would be nicer if you make this slider onto the blue tick. And moreover it would make a nice contrast with 00:24:323 (4) who is snapped on 1/6s ticks.
00:42:596 (2,4) - Add a whistle onto the beginning of these sliders, If you stop suddenly to add hitsounds, the rhythm will be broken and it's kinda confusing :/

Taiko
- The SB don't the fits for the taiko mod (We only see legs xD) So make a Taiko BG (I know you're good for that) and disable the SB in this difficulty.
- You have 22 unsnapped notes, All are 1/6 notes. Check the AImod (ctrl + shift +A).

That's all ;)
Kurowolfe
Sorry bout the late reply, I can't connect to Bancho now coz I accidentally went over my monthly broadband limit and can only use the campus's LAN connection ATM (means no Bancho for me T_T).

Thanx to HeatKai for the help with the offset and the mods, but I added one tiny detail to fit the mod better, and resnapped the timing sections.
So here you go!

Download: Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME ! (HeatKai) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
HeatKai

kurohacker wrote:

Sorry bout the late reply, I can't connect to Bancho now coz I accidentally went over my monthly broadband limit and can only use the campus's LAN connection ATM (means no Bancho for me T_T).

Thanx to HeatKai for the help with the offset and the mods, but I added one tiny detail to fit the mod better, and resnapped the timing sections.
So here you go!
Never mind , I fix for you already.
Its just a snapping and offset only xD
not a prob ~
Kenezz
Heat-kun! <3
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General
-Align the timing section in all diffs
-Really is need use all these Tags?

Easy
-The combo colours are different in this diff, keep them consistent with the others diffs
-00:02:777 (5) - New combo and finish or whistle at the begin?

Normal
-00:07:141 ~ 00:11:232- Add something? I think that for a very short song such it's as this, wouldn't be break time
--00:11:232 (1,2) - o.ó Fix the spacing
-00:11:505 (x) - Add a note here?
-00:30:868 (x) - ^
-00:33:323 (6,1) - Ninja Spacing~ Fix this?

Hard
-00:18:050 (3) - Finish at the begin?
-00:19:959 (6) - Finish at the end?

nothing more to add~
Go Go My Zombie Hero!
Starred~
Topic Starter
HeatKai

Kenezz wrote:

Heat-kun! <3
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General
-Align the timing section in all diffs
-Really is need use all these Tags?

Easy
-The combo colours are different in this diff, keep them consistent with the others diffs
-00:02:777 (5) - New combo and finish or whistle at the begin?

Normal
-00:07:141 ~ 00:11:232- Add something? I think that for a very short song such it's as this, wouldn't be break time
--00:11:232 (1,2) - o.ó Fix the spacing
-00:11:505 (x) - Add a note here?
-00:30:868 (x) - ^
-00:33:323 (6,1) - Ninja Spacing~ Fix this?

Hard
-00:18:050 (3) - Finish at the begin?
-00:19:959 (6) - Finish at the end?

nothing more to add~
Go Go My Zombie Hero!
Starred~
fix~
I didn't do anything at hard.
because got people say that cannot finish at 1/4
i love you zombie-chan ftw
Sleep Powder
[Easy]

Looks clean.

[Normal]

00:35:232 (1) - Add a Finish hitsound at the end?
Needs more clap hitsounds.

[Hard]

00:37:414 (7) - Add a Finish hitsound at the end?
Needs more clap hitsounds. You've only used them about 2 times in the entire map.

[Taiko]

I don't think you should map the last few seconds (in the fade out).

I'm mostly concerned about how you've used very few clap hitsounds in your difficulties.
Other than that, this map seems pretty good already.

Starr'd
Kyonko Hizara
:)
YGOkid8
wow, short map :U

Hard:
00:46:414 (5) - Place this in middle of screen

um that's it. i think it's still too early to bubble though. (8 days :o)
get, let's say, two more proper mods and i'll come back and recheck
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