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Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME !

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HeatKai
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, July 03, 2011 at 8:00:25 AM

Artist: Shoji Meguro
Title: It's SHOW TIME !
Source: Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 4
Tags: Atsushi Kitajoh Ryota Kazuka chie satonaka yukiko amagi kanji tatsumi naoto shirogane yosuke hanamura rise kujikawa teddie velvet room igor margaret smt p4 atlus perusona katsuro hashino Kurohacker
BPM: 110
Filesize: 3272kb
Play Time: 00:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.76 stars, 99 notes)
  2. kurohacker's Easy (1.36 stars, 38 notes)
  3. Normal (4.06 stars, 80 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME !
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Derekku persona beatmap project.
Little storyboard by me.

Persona skins ~
Thanks MLGnom because make numbers for the skin.
[27/5/2011] Taiko diff added
[28/5/2011] Kurohacker's easy added and Changed MP3&OFFSET , REDOWNLOAD !!!!!!!!

:3
Last edited by HeatKai , edited 34 times in total.
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Wee, first mod~
Nway, here you go:
kurohacker's mod (Warning!)
[General]
In the tags, change Ryuta Kazuka to Ryota Kozuka, that's the real spelling.

[Normal]
I suggest reducing the hitsound volume to 50%, it's a bit too loud for my liking.

0'01''635 - Add a whistle at the end.
0'02''453 - Try removing the whistle here, though you can leave it also.
0'06''408 - Add a whistle here, and...
0'06''817 - Remove the whistle at the and, and add one at the beginning instead, it'll sound better.
0'11''180 -> 0'15''270 - Try this hitsound pattern at the end of all sliders [1]-[8] : normal, clap, whistle, whistle, normal, clap, whistle, whistle.
0'19''361 - Move this to 0'19''497, to follow the piano. Also, add a whistle here.
0'22''633 - New combo here, and...
0'23''452 - Remove the new combo here. Also, add a whistle at the beginning.
0'28''633 -> 0'32''451 - Same advice as in 0'11''180.
0'36''950 - Maybe add a clap here?
0'40''086 - Start new combo here, and...
0'40''632 - Remove the one here.
0'41''314 - Maybe add a clap here, too?

Gosh, this is the first time I advised someone to add so many whistles in his map.
Placement of notes are nice and simple, so I focus more on the hitsounds. Nice map!

[Hard]

0'03''135 - New combo here.
0'04''226 - Remove the new combo here, and remove the whistle.
0'05''180 - New combo here.
0'07''632 - Maybe you should move the whistle hitsound from the end of the slider to the reverse instead?
0'08''453 - ^
0'09''544 - I highly recommend swapping places between [1] and [2] here, to suit the beat better. Also, if you choose to
do the above two mods, apply it at the slider here, too.
0'11''180 - Start new combo here, and..
0'11''998 - Remove the one here.
0'14''043 - The piano here actually plays 1/3 notes, so you need to remove this and add two notes 1/6 beats before and after this point.
i.e. Add a circle at 0'13''998 and 0'14''089.
0'19''906 - Remove new combo here, and...
0'20''588 - Add it here instead.
0'26''042 - I think it sounds better at 0'25''906 instead.
0'28''633 - Add new combo here, and..
0'29''724 - Remove the one here.
0'31''360 - Same case as in 0'14''043; change the slider to 1/6 beat long and reverse it two times.
0'35''450 - Maybe remove the whistle here.
0'39''814 - Remove the new combo here.
0'40''086 - Start here instead.

Sorry bout the wall of text, guess I went nazi on the hitsounds and combos =.=
Short, simple and sweet, and the different BGs are nice, so your first star~
All the best! :)

EDIT: Erm, are you planning to add an Easy diff? If so, can I make one for you? =3
HeatKai
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Topic Starter
HeatKai

kurohacker wrote:

Wee, first mod~
Nway, here you go:
kurohacker's mod (Warning!)
[General]
In the tags, change Ryuta Kazuka to Ryota Kozuka, that's the real spelling.

[Normal]
I suggest reducing the hitsound volume to 50%, it's a bit too loud for my liking.

0'01''635 - Add a whistle at the end.
0'02''453 - Try removing the whistle here, though you can leave it also.
0'06''408 - Add a whistle here, and...
0'06''817 - Remove the whistle at the and, and add one at the beginning instead, it'll sound better.
0'11''180 -> 0'15''270 - Try this hitsound pattern at the end of all sliders [1]-[8] : normal, clap, whistle, whistle, normal, clap, whistle, whistle.
0'19''361 - Move this to 0'19''497, to follow the piano. Also, add a whistle here.
0'22''633 - New combo here, and...
0'23''452 - Remove the new combo here. Also, add a whistle at the beginning.
0'28''633 -> 0'32''451 - Same advice as in 0'11''180.
0'36''950 - Maybe add a clap here?
0'40''086 - Start new combo here, and...
0'40''632 - Remove the one here.
0'41''314 - Maybe add a clap here, too?

Gosh, this is the first time I advised someone to add so many whistles in his map.
Placement of notes are nice and simple, so I focus more on the hitsounds. Nice map!

[Hard]

0'03''135 - New combo here.
0'04''226 - Remove the new combo here, and remove the whistle.
0'05''180 - New combo here.
0'07''632 - Maybe you should move the whistle hitsound from the end of the slider to the reverse instead?
0'08''453 - ^
0'09''544 - I highly recommend swapping places between [1] and [2] here, to suit the beat better. Also, if you choose to
do the above two mods, apply it at the slider here, too.
0'11''180 - Start new combo here, and..
0'11''998 - Remove the one here.
0'14''043 - The piano here actually plays 1/3 notes, so you need to remove this and add two notes 1/6 beats before and after this point.
i.e. Add a circle at 0'13''998 and 0'14''089.
0'19''906 - Remove new combo here, and...
0'20''588 - Add it here instead.
0'26''042 - I think it sounds better at 0'25''906 instead.
0'28''633 - Add new combo here, and..
0'29''724 - Remove the one here.
0'31''360 - Same case as in 0'14''043; change the slider to 1/6 beat long and reverse it two times.
0'35''450 - Maybe remove the whistle here.
0'39''814 - Remove the new combo here.
0'40''086 - Start here instead.

Sorry bout the wall of text, guess I went nazi on the hitsounds and combos =.=
Short, simple and sweet, and the different BGs are nice, so your first star~
All the best! :)

EDIT: Erm, are you planning to add an Easy diff? If so, can I make one for you? =3
thanks for the mod , about the diff , I will talk to you when you online :3
Aleks719
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Aleks719
So, okay.
General
- Imo(!),timing.
BPM : 110
Offset : 535 + resnap all notes. I'm not timing pro, but this timing is better for me.
- Turn off countdown in all diffs. It's useless.
- Your preview point sounds as nothing. Try to choose funny place than now. In all diffs of course, preview must be similar etc

Normal
Slider tick rate 1
00:00:535 (1) - add finish
00:01:353 (3) - add whistle
00:01:625 (4) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end, add clap to the end
00:02:444 (5) - remove whis
00:08:989 (1) - imo, this spinner not fit the song, i suggest remove it and map this place by another patterns
00:18:262 (2) - add whistle
00:18:807 (3) - add sliderwhistle
00:18:807 (3,4) - spacing error
00:19:898 (5) - add whistle
00:19:898 (5,6) - too close
00:20:171 (6) - add finish
00:20:716 (1) - add clap
00:21:807 (3) - add clap
00:22:353 (4) - remove whistle, add finish
00:22:625 (1) - add whistle
00:23:171 (2) - ^
00:23:444 (3) - add clap to the end, add sliderwhistle
00:24:534 (1,1,1) - don't like this in Normals. I suggest remap this place
00:28:625 (1) - add whistles to the start and to the end
00:30:807 (5) - add finishes to the start and to the end
00:45:807 (1) - Not sure in this spinner. It's really necessary? If yes then remove finish

Hard
00:01:363 (2) - add whistle to the start, add sliderwhistle
00:02:453 (4) - remove whistle from last reverse
00:05:726 (2) - add whistle to the start, add sliderwhistle
00:09:816 (2) - add whistle to the start
00:11:725 (2) - remove whistle
00:11:998 (3) - add whistle to the start
00:12:543 (4) - remove whistle from the start
00:13:089 (5) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end
00:13:907 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:44:041 (5,6) - remove whistles
00:44:177 (6) - add finish
00:46:086 (1) - remove finish
HeatKai
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HeatKai

Aleks719 wrote:

So, okay.
General
- Imo(!),timing.
BPM : 110
Offset : 535 + resnap all notes. I'm not timing pro, but this timing is better for me.
- Turn off countdown in all diffs. It's useless.
- Your preview point sounds as nothing. Try to choose funny place than now. In all diffs of course, preview must be similar etc

Normal
Slider tick rate 1
00:00:535 (1) - add finish
00:01:353 (3) - add whistle
00:01:625 (4) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end, add clap to the end
00:02:444 (5) - remove whis
00:08:989 (1) - imo, this spinner not fit the song, i suggest remove it and map this place by another patterns
00:18:262 (2) - add whistle
00:18:807 (3) - add sliderwhistle
00:18:807 (3,4) - spacing error
00:19:898 (5) - add whistle
00:19:898 (5,6) - too close
00:20:171 (6) - add finish
00:20:716 (1) - add clap
00:21:807 (3) - add clap
00:22:353 (4) - remove whistle, add finish
00:22:625 (1) - add whistle
00:23:171 (2) - ^
00:23:444 (3) - add clap to the end, add sliderwhistle
00:24:534 (1,1,1) - don't like this in Normals. I suggest remap this place
00:28:625 (1) - add whistles to the start and to the end
00:30:807 (5) - add finishes to the start and to the end
00:45:807 (1) - Not sure in this spinner. It's really necessary? If yes then remove finish

Hard
00:01:363 (2) - add whistle to the start, add sliderwhistle
00:02:453 (4) - remove whistle from last reverse
00:05:726 (2) - add whistle to the start, add sliderwhistle
00:09:816 (2) - add whistle to the start
00:11:725 (2) - remove whistle
00:11:998 (3) - add whistle to the start
00:12:543 (4) - remove whistle from the start
00:13:089 (5) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end
00:13:907 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:44:041 (5,6) - remove whistles
00:44:177 (6) - add finish
00:46:086 (1) - remove finish

mostly FIX , some not ~
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Normal
The notes after the spinners come very quickly, which will be a pretty big issue for newer players as spinner recovery is one of the trickiest skills for newbies to pick up on. I would try have at least 1.5 beats between the ends of the spinners and the notes directly after them - you can accomplish this either by making the spinners shorter or removing notes afterward.

Hard
00:03:125 (1) - Move back to the red tick, where it is now doesn't fit the music that well.
00:04:216 (3) - ^
00:20:580 (1,3) - ^
00:24:262 (4) - It's a little difficult to tell this is a slider until too late, maybe move some notes around so it's more visible?

Could probably use an easy diff, but I see you may have a guest one on the way? Have a star anyhow.
aquabluu
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aquabluu
IRC mod for Taiko diff. Star.
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
[General]
- Too many spinners in the map. Try to cut down on the number of spinners you have.

[Normal ~]
00:11:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It feels like you could do this in a more creative way than all those sliders. It needs a new combo too.
00:28:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

[Hard ~]
00:05:171 (1) - Awkward spacing.
00:46:216 (1) - Have the spinner start at the same time it does on [Normal].

The map felt a bit messy to me, but I'll give you a star for support.
KanaRin
1,886 posts
Joined April 2010
KanaRin
Ok.
Some Taiko mod here.

[Taiko]

00:02:716 (10) - Kat?
00:05:171 (21) - ^
00:06:535 (27) - ^
00:08:989 (39,40,41,42) - it doesn't fit for 1/6 i guess. Try to do that ? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/92843 OOO OOO.
00:13:353 (59) - Don
00:13:625 (60) - Kat
00:20:444 (89) - Remove Finish.
00:20:716 (90) - Kat
00:25:080 (106,107,108,109) - DK KD
00:26:171 (111,112,113,114) - KD DK
00:27:262 (116) - Kat
00:31:353 (132,133,134,135) - dkdk?

Ok~ That's it.
My Rating : 7 / 10

Not bad. Keep it go & Good luck.
Star~
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi~

Some suggestions:

[General]


  • 224kbps mp3 file? Convert it between 128kbps and 192kbps
    soft-slidertick2.wav seems unused
    The end of the music sounds strange…
    Offset seems about +10
[Normal]


  • 00:07:080-00:08:989 : Add something here? You can add circles every beat
    00:08:989 (1): Remove the whistle and end the spinner at 00:10:898
    00:23:989 (3): Use clap here instead of finish
    00:24:535 (1): Remove whistle
    00:33:262 (10): Add finish
    00:33:262-00:35:171 : Add something such as circles every beat
    00:37:625 (7): Add finish
    00:45:807 (1): This spinner doesn’t fit the song in my opinion. You can add two circles at 00:45:807 and 00:46:353 instead of it
[Hard]


  • 00:15:807-00:17:716 : Add something such as circles every beat
    00:20:171 (6): Add Finish here
    00:35:444 (3): Finish
    00:46:353 (1): It doesn’t fit the song. Add circles at 00:46:080 and 00:46:353 instead of it
Cool~
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Huh, finally done the Easy diff. Have a try first to see whether you like it or not =P

Download: Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME ! (HeatKai) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
-99
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-99
Hi^^

General:
Change the preview point to 00:18:125

Normal:
00:08:999(1)- remove the spinner and insert time break at 00:07:090
00:30:272(4,5,6)- move to axis x:192 so it fits the slider at 00:11:181
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128 ^

Hard:
00:36:272(5)-weird slider? need fix?

All seems ok in ctb mode.
HeatKai
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Topic Starter
HeatKai

-99 wrote:

Hi^^

General:
Change the preview point to 00:18:125

Normal:
00:08:999(1)- remove the spinner and insert time break at 00:07:090
00:30:272(4,5,6)- move to axis x:192 so it fits the slider at 00:11:181
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128 ^

Hard:
00:36:272(5)-weird slider? need fix?

All seems ok in ctb mode.
THANKS , at the HARD its okay :D
It's normal for someone to make like that :D ~
Here your first kudo ~
-99
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-99
Normal
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128

^not yet fix
HeatKai
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-99 wrote:

Normal
00:31:908(7,8,9,10)- move to axis x:128

^not yet fix
DONE
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
:arrow: hi : ~ :

SPOILER
[easy]
00:20:232 : fin
00:37:686 : ^

[normal]
00:01:959 : whistle
00:35:505 : fin
00:37:686 : new combo
00:38:232 : remove new combo
00:17:505 : clap
00:17:777 : note is kind of close to the end of a spinner make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/93839
^
00:18:050 : fin
00:18:323 : whistle
00:20:232 : new combo
00:20:777 : remove new combo
00:28:414 : clap

[Hard]
00:03:050 : whistle
00:03:596 : ^
00:03:868 : ^
00:04:141 : ^
00:04:686 : ^
00:04:959 : ^
00:13:686 : remove fin
00:14:777 : ^
00:15:868 : fin
00:16:414 : whistle
00:17:505 : ^
00:18:050 : fin
00:20:232 : ^
00:20:505 : whistle
00:21:050 : ^
00:21:323 : ^
00:21:596 : ^
00:22:686 : remove clap
00:24:596 : fin
00:28:959 : ^
00:31:686 : whistle
00:34:959 : clap
00:37:686 : fin
00:38:232 : whistle
00:39:323 : ^
:roll:
HeatKai
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HeatKai

indyinyou wrote:

:arrow: hi : ~ :

SPOILER
[easy]
00:20:232 : fin
00:37:686 : ^

[normal]
00:01:959 : whistle
00:35:505 : fin
00:37:686 : new combo
00:38:232 : remove new combo
00:17:505 : clap
00:17:777 : note is kind of close to the end of a spinner make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/93839
^
00:18:050 : fin
00:18:323 : whistle
00:20:232 : new combo
00:20:777 : remove new combo
00:28:414 : clap

[Hard]
00:03:050 : whistle
00:03:596 : ^
00:03:868 : ^
00:04:141 : ^
00:04:686 : ^
00:04:959 : ^
00:13:686 : remove fin
00:14:777 : ^
00:15:868 : fin
00:16:414 : whistle
00:17:505 : ^
00:18:050 : fin
00:20:232 : ^
00:20:505 : whistle
00:21:050 : ^
00:21:323 : ^
00:21:596 : ^
00:22:686 : remove clap
00:24:596 : fin
00:28:959 : ^
00:31:686 : whistle
00:34:959 : clap
00:37:686 : fin
00:38:232 : whistle
00:39:323 : ^
:roll:
THANKS :D
Kurai
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Kurai
Normal
00:11:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This 1/2 stream is too long and can be hard to pass for inexperienced players, I suggest you to remove (5) and to add a circle at 00:13:686 (Add a new combo to this circle). And try to make this pattern prettier by making curvilinear sliders, etc ...
00:28:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The same for this pattern, remove (5) and add a circle at 00:31:141 with a new combo mark. And try to make it prettier too :)
00:28:686 (1) - This note is just 1/2 later from the previous spinner, it's not enough to be playable in a normal difficulty. So, reduce the previous spinner by 1/2
00:35:232 (1) - 1/4 is really a bad idea in this kind of difficulties even if it's a slider, it will surprise new players, so make this slider 1/2 long and without repeat (or make two circle at 00:35:232 and 00:35:505)
00:43:959 (1) - The same for this slider, make a 1/2 long slider here or two circle. ; This slider is just 1/2 later from the previous spinner, it's not enough to be playable, so reduce the spinner by 1/2
00:45:868 (4) - Add a clap to this circle to keep the rhythm, (It sounds weird without a clap here)

Hard
- AR6 is not enough for a hard difficulty, The notes appear too slowly and it's not very agreable to play. AR7 fits better for this map.
00:08:232 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is kinda unreadable because of (5) who is hided by the slider shape of (4). So flip (4) horizontaly (ctrl + H) and replace it at the spot it was, it will look nicer and more readable.
00:23:777 (3) - Use 1/6 is fine for this slider, nevertheless it's hardly hearable compared to the sound there are on the blue tick (00:23:914) who is clearly hearable. That's why it would be nicer if you make this slider onto the blue tick. And moreover it would make a nice contrast with 00:24:323 (4) who is snapped on 1/6s ticks.
SPOILER
00:42:596 (2,4) - Add a whistle onto the beginning of these sliders, If you stop suddenly to add hitsounds, the rhythm will be broken and it's kinda confusing :/

Taiko
- The SB don't the fits for the taiko mod (We only see legs xD) So make a Taiko BG (I know you're good for that) and disable the SB in this difficulty.
- You have 22 unsnapped notes, All are 1/6 notes. Check the AImod (ctrl + shift +A).

That's all ;)
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Sorry bout the late reply, I can't connect to Bancho now coz I accidentally went over my monthly broadband limit and can only use the campus's LAN connection ATM (means no Bancho for me T_T).

Thanx to HeatKai for the help with the offset and the mods, but I added one tiny detail to fit the mod better, and resnapped the timing sections.
So here you go!

Download: Shoji Meguro - It's SHOW TIME ! (HeatKai) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
HeatKai
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Topic Starter
HeatKai

kurohacker wrote:

Sorry bout the late reply, I can't connect to Bancho now coz I accidentally went over my monthly broadband limit and can only use the campus's LAN connection ATM (means no Bancho for me T_T).

Thanx to HeatKai for the help with the offset and the mods, but I added one tiny detail to fit the mod better, and resnapped the timing sections.
So here you go!
Never mind , I fix for you already.
Its just a snapping and offset only xD
not a prob ~
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