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Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2017-01-25T16:28:55+00:00

到现在我还是没完全搞清楚，歪爱抚的摸图工具是按什么标准给各个难度排序的。

kiryu's Another

00:59:010 (2,3) - 01:00:010 (5,6) - 用圈遮挡折返的箭头unrankable。
老实说我觉得1.0直升1.5再直升2.0太陡了，有点过分。硬要这么玩sv的话，再循序渐进一点吧。感觉从00:53:344 - 开始就可以逐渐升了
01:15:177 (3) - 建议拆成单点，3可以离上一根滑条比较近，4拉远。
01:22:177 (4) - 放到3的头附近呗，类似1到2这样的flow。这样3-4-5的flow会连续折两下，过渡会爽些吧

krt's Insane

00:23:677 (2,1) - 建议换成折返。
00:25:844 - 最好加个圈。这里没别的可以跟了，跟主旋律的话没这个圈挺违和的。
00:30:510 (2,3) - 建议把2换成折返，3的头位置顺延一下。这样感觉合曲了不少。
最后那段复制粘贴= = 原来还可以这么玩的

Hard

01:02:844 (1,2) - 建议叠起来。
01:13:344 (1,2) - 想办法处理成折返吧。现在这个hard打起来，结合后边，左手挺不好按的。
如果是这样排的一个hard，感觉sv不用这么高吧。降低个0.2-0.4这样好一些的。

Blossom

00:43:010 (2,3) - 要不把这儿换成1/2滑条。然后把00:43:344 (4,5) - 换成四个单点吧。感觉1和23用不同的节奏不太好。
00:54:010 (3,4) - 这两个单点放在这里感觉不对劲，还是1/2滑条比较对。
01:26:344 (4,5,1,2) - 01:47:677 (4,5,1) - 这两个梗太难了吧。。果然还是我打图技术太瓜皮了吗。。
01:54:344 (4) - 为了钢琴，感觉用原地单点好一些
02:10:677 (1) - 推荐把音效声音降到最轻。
00:53:677 (2) - 把finish移动到滑条尾上

感觉有点厉害

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-26T05:04:32+00:00

reply to Adol Christin's mod

Adol Christin wrote:
到现在我还是没完全搞清楚，歪爱抚的摸图工具是按什么标准给各个难度排序的。

Hard
01:02:844 (1,2) - 建议叠起来。好
01:13:344 (1,2) - 想办法处理成折返吧。现在这个hard打起来，结合后边，左手挺不好按的。感觉现在这样还可以啊，而且改起来很麻烦，不改了
如果是这样排的一个hard，感觉sv不用这么高吧。降低个0.2-0.4这样好一些的。不能再降了，否则就和adv一样了
Blossom
00:43:010 (2,3) - 要不把这儿换成1/2滑条。然后把00:43:344 (4,5) - 换成四个单点吧。感觉1和23用不同的节奏不太好。先保留意见，这里的音本来该是下滑条的，不过介于之前的滑条太多了的缘故我才加了两个圈来平衡一下，之后如果还有modder说这里有问题的话我就改。
00:54:010 (3,4) - 这两个单点放在这里感觉不对劲，还是1/2滑条比较对。改了
01:26:344 (4,5,1,2) - 01:47:677 (4,5,1) - 这两个梗太难了吧。。果然还是我打图技术太瓜皮了吗。。的确很难，但是影响不大，毕竟spread撑着呢
01:54:344 (4) - 为了钢琴，感觉用原地单点好一些改了
02:10:677 (1) - 推荐把音效声音降到最轻。 20%
00:53:677 (2) - 把finish移动到滑条尾上 ok

感觉有点厉害

谢摸~

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_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-26T05:05:30+00:00

edit：double posted because of lag

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-01-26T07:03:02+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
到现在我还是没完全搞清楚，歪爱抚的摸图工具是按什么标准给各个难度排序的。
krt's Insane
00:23:677 (2,1) - 建议换成折返。其實我想盡量都打到小提琴，折返的話感覺很像掩蓋了 00:23:844 (1) - 頭的小提琴聲
00:25:844 - 最好加个圈。这里没别的可以跟了，跟主旋律的话没这个圈挺违和的。 嗯，的確這裡有明顯的鋼琴聲可以加圈，加了
00:30:510 (2,3) - 建议把2换成折返，3的头位置顺延一下。这样感觉合曲了不少。 與 00:23:677 (2,1) - 的原理一樣
最后那段复制粘贴= = 原来还可以这么玩的 ~~我懶23333333333~~
感觉有点厉害

謝摸～

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@_Yiiiii 至少加回combo color啊

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-01-26T17:30:25+00:00

m4m from q

[general]

disable widescreen support on every diff
No combo colours? Recommend you to add a few

[Blossom]
Consider doing 00:30:677 (5,6) - this overlap similar as 00:29:344 (1,2) - in terms of spacing.
00:41:010 (4,5,6,7) - this spacing feels very random to me, like it doesn't have a solid structure D: I think you can manage this better.
00:44:344 (7) - doiing something like this would give better flow and aesthetics imo http://puu.sh/tBbuw/ab62210866.jpg
01:15:927 (6,1) - This distance feels very high imo. consider doing something like http://puu.sh/tBbUX/64a327a39d.jpg Same applies for the others similar part you make next
01:16:010 (1,2,1,2,1) - No need to NC spam imo.
01:32:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk but the pattern you use here is different from what you were doing before. (01:10:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - & 01:21:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) Recommend you to keep consistent.
01:41:344 (1,2) - I'd recommend you to do something similar like this for better flow -> http://puu.sh/tBciK/cee0ab618b.jpg

[kiryu's]
00:21:010 - volume of green line is too low, consider raising it a bit.. jking xd why is this not mapped? well whatevery is your choice xd
00:50:010 (9,10) - The distance here is way too high, 00:51:011 (2,3) - comparing with that, it just doesn't fit at all.
00:59:010 (2,3) - This is unrankeable as far as I know since you are covering the reverse arrow with a circle and you don't let players realize the reverse. you have to fix this
01:38:510 (8,1) - I do believe you can emphasize the transition here better since 01:38:677 - this sound is a bit stronger so yeah...

not bad diff, I really liked the kiai part. However I think you can improve the strucutre of the part before the kiai, try to polish it a bit more.

[krt's]
00:23:677 (2,1) - ctrl+g'ing the rhythm of those would be better imo cause I think 00:24:010 - is worth to be clickable.
01:04:010 (1,1) - a bit nazi but stack those a bit better?? you slight detail tho xd
01:26:677 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - make perfect hexagon?

[hard]
01:17:344 (1,2,3) - This flow feels a bit awkward imo mainly because the movement you're making here doesn't feel natural.. maybe do something like this? http://puu.sh/tBeaC/fa72bafc10.jpg
01:41:844 (2,3) - similar as before. maybe 01:42:010 (3) - ctrl+g this and move a bit to the left? Would fit better imo
01:55:844 - 01:56:510 - here you don't place notes but after that you don't stop spamming 1/2 slider which feels a bit... crowded? Idk that was my feeling.

Okay that's all from me since the drain time seems to be fair enough.

Hope this helps. GL with the set!

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-01-26T18:08:31+00:00

All fixed

Thanks for the mod~

[img]osu file format v14

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DistanceSpacing: 2.2
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Title:Daisy
TitleUnicode:Daisy
Artist:Lifetheory
ArtistUnicode:Lifetheory
Creator:_Yiiiii
Version:krt's Insane
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512,241,94844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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141,313,96844,1,4,0:0:0:0:
303,211,97010,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,82,97177,1,4,0:0:0:0:
188,82,97260,1,4,0:0:0:0:
188,82,97344,5,8,1:3:0:0:
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324,82,97844,5,8,1:3:0:0:
204,293,98010,2,0,B|153:289|128:227,1,99.0000030212403,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,98344,1,8,1:3:0:0:
209,211,98510,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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363,19,99344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
454,121,99511,1,4,0:0:0:0:
357,270,99677,1,0,1:0:0:0:
274,169,99844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
147,335,100011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
273,253,100177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,174,100344,2,0,L|35:182,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,257,100677,5,2,0:0:0:0:
274,169,100843,1,4,0:0:0:0:
142,90,101010,2,0,L|31:98,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,102,101344,5,4,0:0:0:0:
372,13,101510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,143,101677,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,92,101844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,62,102010,1,2,0:0:0:0:
479,223,102177,1,4,0:0:0:0:
325,264,102344,2,0,B|337:153,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,309,102677,5,4,0:0:0:0:
350,356,102844,2,0,P|311:357|255:330,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
131,261,103177,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,151,103344,2,0,P|246:202|233:257,1,99.0000030212403,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,323,103677,2,0,P|51:272|64:217,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,68,104011,6,0,P|205:143|68:145,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,29,104511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,15,104677,2,0,L|280:19,1,99.0000030212403,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,166,105011,2,0,L|296:169,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,30,105344,5,4,0:0:0:0:
512,143,105511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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317,152,106011,5,0,0:0:0:0:
465,212,106178,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,332,106344,2,0,L|245:335,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,191,106677,6,0,P|115:156|209:230,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
42,289,107177,2,0,L|47:168,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,71,107511,1,6,0:0:0:0:
289,186,107677,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,302,107844,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,302,107927,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,302,108011,5,12,1:3:0:0:
213,136,108177,1,8,1:3:0:0:
277,273,108344,1,8,1:3:0:0:
120,253,108510,1,8,1:3:0:0:
289,186,108677,5,8,1:3:0:0:
188,302,108844,1,8,1:3:0:0:
136,167,109010,1,8,1:3:0:0:
258,359,109177,1,8,1:3:0:0:
446,233,109344,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109510,12,0,113177,0:0:0:0:
422,218,113344,5,2,0:0:0:0:
422,218,114344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,295,114510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,200,114677,6,0,L|348:190,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,115177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,287,115344,2,0,L|217:297,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,186,116010,6,0,L|356:175,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,116510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,301,116677,2,0,L|226:311,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,171,117344,6,0,L|365:160,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,117844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-01-26T18:46:47+00:00

m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m from your q (If you don't accept it take this as a free Mod lol)

[Normal]
00:36:010 (3) This Slider ends a bit Offscreen you should fix this
00:26:677 (1) I really like this Slider :3
00:43:010 (2) do the Slider like this for better Flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7157297
00:52:510 (3) IMO this Slider hears/play a bit awkward fix this
00:54:677 (4) ^ but move the Slider here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7157322
00:58:344 (5,1,2,3,4) This Section is a bit messy would stack the 3 with 00:57:344 (4) so it don't touch 00:58:344 (5)
01:01:010 (6) move the Circle to x:45 y:212 it's close to touch the Slider
01:20:844 (2,3) Blanket lol
01:35:677 (5,1) ^
01:49:510 (1) the Spinner End is not snapped
02:04:677 (5) Move the Slider to x:162 y:155 and make the Slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7157395
Gud Map <3

[Another]
01:16:677 (4) Move the Circle a bit down Touches the Slider (a little bit messy)
I know you Mod first but I wanted to lol
Good luck~!

Last edited by nextplay 2017-01-26T20:52:58+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-01-26T18:49:50+00:00

啊，忘記了關掉widescreen support，幫我關

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-27T06:27:59+00:00

reply to iYiyo's mod

iYiyo wrote:
m4m from q

[general]
disable widescreen support on every diff done
No combo colours? Recommend you to add a few that's not necessary and I don't know what colour could fit the song XD

[Blossom]
Consider doing 00:30:677 (5,6) - this overlap similar as 00:29:344 (1,2) - in terms of spacing. melody falls, so less space for the second pattern
00:41:010 (4,5,6,7) - this spacing feels very random to me, like it doesn't have a solid structure D: I think you can manage this better. added NC to should the structure
00:44:344 (7) - doiing something like this would give better flow and aesthetics imo http://puu.sh/tBbuw/ab62210866.jpg fixed
01:15:927 (6,1) - This distance feels very high imo. consider doing something like http://puu.sh/tBbUX/64a327a39d.jpg Same applies for the others similar part you make next this could emphasise the sound at (1)
01:16:010 (1,2,1,2,1) - No need to NC spam imo. I just want to show the pattern clearer
01:32:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk but the pattern you use here is different from what you were doing before. (01:10:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - & 01:21:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) Recommend you to keep consistent. fixed
01:41:344 (1,2) - I'd recommend you to do something similar like this for better flow -> http://puu.sh/tBciK/cee0ab618b.jpg fixed

[hard]
01:17:344 (1,2,3) - This flow feels a bit awkward imo mainly because the movement you're making here doesn't feel natural.. maybe do something like this? http://puu.sh/tBeaC/fa72bafc10.jpg it's good imo
01:41:844 (2,3) - similar as before. maybe 01:42:010 (3) - ctrl+g this and move a bit to the left? Would fit better imo ^
01:55:844 - 01:56:510 - here you don't place notes but after that you don't stop spamming 1/2 slider which feels a bit... crowded? Idk that was my feeling. the sounds are different

Okay that's all from me since the drain time seems to be fair enough.

Hope this helps. GL with the set!

reply to nextplay's mod

nextplay wrote:
m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m from your q (If you don't accept it take this as a free Mod lol)

[Normal]
00:36:010 (3) This Slider ends a bit Offscreen you should fix this it doesn't
00:26:677 (1) I really like this Slider :3 :3
00:43:010 (2) do the Slider like this for better Flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7157297 change
00:52:510 (3) IMO this Slider hears/play a bit awkward fix this why? i can't get you meaning
00:54:677 (4) ^ but move the Slider here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7157322 ^
00:58:344 (5,1,2,3,4) This Section is a bit messy would stack the 3 with 00:57:344 (4) so it don't touch 00:58:344 (5) it's hard to change and it really doesn't matter
01:01:010 (6) move the Circle to x:45 y:212 it's close to touch the Slider fixed
01:20:844 (2,3) Blanket lol fixed
01:35:677 (5,1) ^ ^
01:49:510 (1) the Spinner End is not snapped fixed
02:04:677 (5) Move the Slider to x:162 y:155 and make the Slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7157395 what's the difference? though fixed
Gud Map <3

Good luck~!

Thanks guys for modding this!

@krt 我给你开了

Hectic

511 posts

Joined August 2015

Hectic 2017-01-27T09:38:01+00:00

Hello there, random mod from me. Hope something may be helpful

green - just a suggestion
yellow? - not sure
orange - this could be better, i think
red - i totally don't like it

Blossom

00:28:677 (6,8) - blanket is not perfect
01:16:510 (1,1) - no nc?
01:23:677 (6,2) - blanket maybe?
01:32:010 - changing flow from anticlockwise to clockwise here and not changing it at 01:33:344 - why?
01:34:010 (3) - make ctrl+g of 01:34:344 (4) instead, would look better

kiryu's Another

00:53:344 (1,2) - this blanket and all next ones in this segment are not perfect
00:58:677 - such high SV doesn't fit music
01:14:344 (7,1) - not perfect (try to orientate on approach circle)
01:18:177 (7,8) - blanket maybe?
01:25:010 (7,1) - not perfect

krt's Insane

00:26:677 (1,2) - not perfect blanket
00:34:677 (1,2) - ^
00:36:010 (2,1) - ^
00:41:344 (4,5,6) - i think something like this would look nicer
00:45:677 (2,3) - blanket
00:47:010 (2,3) - ^
00:55:344 (1,1) - no nc
00:56:010 (3) - nc
01:03:677 (2,1) - not perfect blanket (from this point i stopped checking them)
01:05:177 - this high SV doesn't fit here and this slider should start here 01:05:344 -
01:21:344 (1,2) - align?
01:27:344 (1) - no nc
01:30:010 (1) - no nc (i think you got the point)
01:35:344 (1) - ^
01:37:844 (1) - no nc (why is it even here while 01:38:344 (3) - there is no nc)
01:44:511 (2,3) - align
01:58:677 - piano pattern changes here so i think it should be represented
02:02:677 - ^
02:04:010 - ^

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-01-27T10:34:59+00:00

Sorry, All no change

Thanks for the mod

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-27T10:58:52+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
Sorry, All no change

Thanks for the mod

不改摸必须要回复解释的，你稍微说一下原因。

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-01-27T11:24:38+00:00

算了

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
krt's Insane
00:26:677 (1,2) - not perfect blanket I don't want to check all of them perfectly and they don't effect the gameplay, no change, applies to all blanket problems
00:34:677 (1,2) - ^
00:36:010 (2,1) - ^
00:41:344 (4,5,6) - i think something like this would look nicer Both works properly though, can you explain why i should change this?
00:45:677 (2,3) - blanket
00:47:010 (2,3) - ^
00:55:344 (1,1) - no nc I used another way to make the nc consistent, all nc no change
00:56:010 (3) - nc
01:03:677 (2,1) - not perfect blanket (from this point i stopped checking them)
01:05:177 - this high SV doesn't fit here and this slider should start here 01:05:344 - I like the high speed slider goes for the build up, and the sound is clearly starts here imo
01:21:344 (1,2) - align? to what? The overlap is intentional
01:27:344 (1) - no nc
01:30:010 (1) - no nc (i think you got the point)
01:35:344 (1) - ^
01:37:844 (1) - no nc (why is it even here while 01:38:344 (3) - there is no nc)
01:44:511 (2,3) - align
01:58:677 - piano pattern changes here so i think it should be represented Can you give me some examples?
02:02:677 - ^
02:04:010 - ^

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-27T12:37:40+00:00

reply to h4d0uk3n1's mod

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hello there, random mod from me. Hope something may be helpful

green - just a suggestion
yellow? - not sure
orange - this could be better, i think
red - i totally don't like it

Blossom
00:28:677 (6,8) - blanket is not perfect fixed
01:16:510 (1,1) - no nc? NC can show the structure clearer
01:23:677 (6,2) - blanket maybe? No, it may mess up the DS
01:32:010 - changing flow from anticlockwise to clockwise here and not changing it at 01:33:344 - why? 01:33:344 (1) - The head of the slider emphasise the sound and have the same effect as changing flow
01:34:010 (3) - make ctrl+g of 01:34:344 (4) instead, would look better 01:33:344 (1,3,4) - too much straight sliders are not good, so a curly one here

Thanks for the NM!

Otosaka-Yu

1,117 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-01-28T02:01:03+00:00

我好像没有摸过贼一的，我来摸一下
NO KDS

贼一的其他

贼一啊，既然00:42:677 (31,1) - 没有东西了要不要建议把绿线删掉
01:49:344 (1) - 结尾^
00:59:010 (2,3) - 你这个梗很好，可惜可见的滑条遮挡，unrankable
01:00:010 (5,6) - ^
01:38:927 (2) - 试着靠近01:39:010 (3) -

很可惜，这是非常水的摸
@红云顺便把，如果你想给我摸图就摸Rising Rainbow这张吧。另一张暂且不说，但我先发来让你看一看
Misokkasu - Rising Rainbow (TV Size)
Vocaloid Remake by YZYX (feat.Hatusne Miku, VY1V4, GUMI) - ME!ME!ME!
edit：顺便新年快乐，祝你鸡年大吉吧

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2017-01-28T05:22:02+00:00

M4M

[Easy]
01:12:010 (1,2,3) - 这个flow...

01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - 连续的圈太多了，上次我N里这样放都被飞秋说不好..可能会被挑

01:49:344 (5,1) - 间隔还是1/2吧，现在看起来感觉像是圈还没点下去转盘就已经出来了；而且你N里也是1/2

01:54:344 (1) - 时间上是不是离转盘太近了...

[Normal]
哎？怎么觉得你一开始的部分的节奏更适合放在E里面...你的E里不是还有一些圈吗

00:53:344 (1,2,3) - 00:56:010 (1,2,3) - 这些都怪怪的，按 - 00:58:677 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 - 00:48:010 (1,2) - 的节奏就不错

02:01:177 (4) - 有点塞太满的感觉

[Hard]
01:17:344 (1) - 这个flow感觉不是很好...

[krt's Insane]
一开始的部分NC有点问题

01:17:344 - 请remap这附近，ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+h太明显了。至少调整一下位置吧
http://puu.sh/tDsqv/404acf4c46.jpg

后面还有一段复制粘贴

[kiryu's Another]
自查AImod，双红线

00:59:010 (2,3) - 毫无疑问的unrankable
01:00:010 (5,6) - ^

01:06:510 (4) - 这个圈是做什么用的

带着这个GD就等着进坟吧...我也不接着摸了

[Blossom]
一下子挑不出毛病...感觉挺好

01:27:844 (8) - 这个位置可以调整一下

gl

Astarte

303 posts

Joined December 2014

Astarte 2017-01-28T05:56:19+00:00

clearing my m4m debt
~~hope im modding the correct map~~ nvm i am

Easy

00:41:344 (2,1) - overlaps in easy = no fun. either make a clearer overlap, or don't overlap at all
00:46:677 (3) - there's nothing significant to make a repeat slider. i suggest you keep it consistent with 00:44:010 (3) - since music is kinda the same
00:48:010 - starting from here you make 3/2 gaps. i guess you're following the bg snare? 00:49:344 - white tick kick is much clearer imo, maybe you should follow it instead. otherwise maybe use syncopation so that it turns to 1/1 gaps and not 3/2
01:10:677 (3,4) - combine these 2 together since there's not really a special sound any where in between to make it clickable
01:12:010 (1,2) - same, absolutely nothing on (2), 01:14:010 (5,1) - is basically same music but you mapped it differently?
01:12:010 (1,2,3,4) - probably use a different flow than linear in easy
01:17:344 (1,2) - weird rhythm. (1) should be 2/1 since there nothing on (2) and 01:18:344 - should be clickable
01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - too much clicking in easy :<

that's all. i guess you should map what the music suggests cuz, you have too many clickables that are mapped to unimportant sounds, and many important notes are skipped or at sliderends. also, from what i see, easy has relatively the same intensity as normal at the intro :/

Normal

00:54:677 - again, why you skipped these notes?
00:55:844 (5,1) - stack them, cuz it's kinda hard to read
01:00:177 (4,5) - ugly overlap
02:01:844 (6) - too dense rhythm for a relatively calm part. i suggest you remove this

Maybe use ds 1.1, cuz you have many ugly overlaps, but nothing else really

Advanced

00:39:844 (4,5) - wouldn't make a triplet here tho, remove 00:39:927 (5) - since it's a calm part. also it's violin so it's not as clear as piano here 02:07:844 (4,5) -
01:08:677 - missing a note here. make the slider start from here and add a stacked circle on a red tick before

nice diff

Hard

any reason for your nc inconsistency? before kiai it's nc every measure, in kiai it's nc every downbeat?
01:10:177 (3,4) - there's nothing really here to break away from ds is it?
01:24:844 (4,5) - ^ (this looks really weird tbh)
01:06:677 (1,2) - and 01:28:010 (1,2) - are the only 2 places in the kiai where you don't have a 1/1 slider at the start of a measure. make them 1/1 sliders so that it stress the downbeat better and keep your consistency
01:08:177 (2,3) - again, this and 01:29:510 (2,3) - are the only two 1/1 gap stack. why? feels weird to play and nothing really suggest stacking

that's all i have. maybe you should go look again where you randomly use spacing emphasis when there's nothing really to emphasize. Feels really weird to play tbh

Good luck with your map o/

Happy New Year

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-28T07:47:29+00:00

Lily

Lily Bread wrote:
M4M

[Easy]
01:12:010 (1,2,3) - 这个flow... ~~直的在easy应该比较常见吧？~~玛德被之后的摸又揪出来了，改了

01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - 连续的圈太多了，上次我N里这样放都被飞秋说不好..可能会被挑改掉了

01:49:344 (5,1) - 间隔还是1/2吧，现在看起来感觉像是圈还没点下去转盘就已经出来了；而且你N里也是1/2 改了

01:54:344 (1) - 时间上是不是离转盘太近了... 没问题，easy空两拍即可

[Normal]
哎？怎么觉得你一开始的部分的节奏更适合放在E里面...你的E里不是还有一些圈吗我是这么想的：easy节奏整体分布比较均匀，这样不会出现突然变难这种事，而normal开始却要刻意简单一点以显出之后比较难

00:53:344 (1,2,3) - 00:56:010 (1,2,3) - 这些都怪怪的，按 - 00:58:677 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 - 00:48:010 (1,2) - 的节奏就不错这里是改跟提琴的音了，你给的例子都是跟的鼓声

02:01:177 (4) - 有点塞太满的感觉改了

[Hard]
01:17:344 (1) - 这个flow感觉不是很好... 又被挑了orz，改了

[Blossom]
一下子挑不出毛病...感觉挺好

01:27:844 (8) - 这个位置可以调整一下 01:27:344 (5,6,7,8) - 完美的四方，不好咩？

gl

Astarte

Astarte wrote:
clearing my m4m debt
~~hope im modding the correct map~~ nvm i am
Easy
00:41:344 (2,1) - overlaps in easy = no fun. either make a clearer overlap, or don't overlap at all It's already very clear and acceptable in public opinion I think, I have seen that in ranked maps for times
00:46:677 (3) - there's nothing significant to make a repeat slider. i suggest you keep it consistent with 00:44:010 (3) - since music is kinda the same fixed
00:48:010 - starting from here you make 3/2 gaps. i guess you're following the bg snare? 00:49:344 - white tick kick is much clearer imo, maybe you should follow it instead. otherwise maybe use syncopation so that it turns to 1/1 gaps and not 3/2 We should always follow the most clear sound or players could get confused.
01:10:677 (3,4) - combine these 2 together since there's not really a special sound any where in between to make it clickable There is a sound, listen carefully
01:12:010 (1,2) - same, absolutely nothing on (2), 01:14:010 (5,1) - is basically same music but you mapped it differently? The circle can emphasise the piano sound
01:12:010 (1,2,3,4) - probably use a different flow than linear in easy fixed
01:17:344 (1,2) - weird rhythm. (1) should be 2/1 since there nothing on (2) and 01:18:344 - should be clickable There are sounds. You may say I am following rhythm randomly, or I could say it's better to make the map clear than to make only the rhythm clear in Easy diff. It's a repeating pattern as you can discover, it's acceptable to have a concept like this.
01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - too much clicking in easy :< Fixed in Lily's mod :>
that's all. i guess you should map what the music suggests cuz, you have too many clickables that are mapped to unimportant sounds, and many important notes are skipped or at sliderends. also, from what i see, easy has relatively the same intensity as normal at the intro :/ 我是这么想的：easy节奏整体分布比较均匀，这样不会出现突然变难这种事，而normal开始却要刻意简单一点以显出之后比较难 ←quote from the reply to Lily's mod, too lazy to translate it XD
Normal
00:54:677 - again, why you skipped these notes? following piano
00:55:844 (5,1) - stack them, cuz it's kinda hard to read Stack means 1/1 gap in this diff so I can't
01:00:177 (4,5) - ugly overlap fixed
02:01:844 (6) - too dense rhythm for a relatively calm part. i suggest you remove this removed another circle instead
Maybe use ds 1.1, cuz you have many ugly overlaps, but nothing else really not gonna remap this orz so no change
Hard
any reason for your nc inconsistency? before kiai it's nc every measure, in kiai it's nc every downbeat? first, there is nothing wrong with this NC placement, then, the frequency of melody style changing is different in those two parts
01:10:177 (3,4) - there's nothing really here to break away from ds is it? 01:10:344 snare
01:24:844 (4,5) - ^ (this looks really weird tbh) ^
01:06:677 (1,2) - and 01:28:010 (1,2) - are the only 2 places in the kiai where you don't have a 1/1 slider at the start of a measure. make them 1/1 sliders so that it stress the downbeat better and keep your consistency That's the start of a new kiai section so I just want to make the atomosphere more intense by using 1/2 sliders
01:08:177 (2,3) - again, this and 01:29:510 (2,3) - are the only two 1/1 gap stack. why? feels weird to play and nothing really suggest stacking melody suggests
that's all i have. maybe you should go look again where you randomly use spacing emphasis when there's nothing really to emphasize. Feels really weird to play tbh
Good luck with your map o/ o/

Happy New Year Thank you!

Thanks guys for modding this!

Kilabarus

999 posts

Joined May 2015

Kilabarus 2017-01-28T11:22:49+00:00

M4M back, sry for delay

General
ComboColours?

Maybe use 1920x1080 BG since its allowed? http://s017.radikal.ru/i442/1211/19/a20c30880043.jpg

Easy

00:41:344 (2,1) - Maybe do blanket here? Overlap in this case would be okay

00:46:677 (3) - Why no wistle on head like on previous sliders?

00:58:010 (3,1) - Blanket here too?

02:06:677 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Very boring and unbeautiful imo, maybe do something more creative?

Normal

00:32:010 (1,2) - bad overlap

01:08:677 (4,5,1) - Patterns like this with stacking may be difficult for Normal players

02:07:344 (5,1) - blanket?

Abhor's Advanced

SV for part from 00:21:010 - to 00:42:677 - is big for me, I'd decrease it to 0,8-0,9. Since this is Advanced you can do SV changes here

00:22:677 (1,2,3) - 00:34:677 (1,2) - 00:41:677 (2,3,4) - 00:47:010 (2,3) - 00:57:677 (2,3) - 01:22:677 (1,2) - 01:27:677 (4,1) - Fix blankets

00:39:844 (4,5,1) - Don't know for sure, but maybe it's too hard for 2,6 advanced

01:08:010 (1) - There is strong sound on the tail, you should map it as clickable object like tap, not as tail of slider

01:59:344 (3) - Ugly slider imo

02:10:677 (5) - Space 5 for emphasize

Hard

00:31:677 (8,1) - Fix blanket

01:41:344 (1) - No finish in other diffs

Your soacing in KIAI is really inconsistent, I now that it's Hard and you can change spacing, but not like you do I think, it's too random for me

krt's Insane

00:24:677 (1) - NC

00:26:677 (1,2) - 00:29:177 (3,1) - 00:29:344 (1,2) - Fix blankets

01:05:177 (1) - Are you sure? It has too high SV on it imo

Blossom

00:24:344 (2,3) - 00:49:510 (7,8) - Fix blankets

00:50:510 (10,11,1) - 00:53:177 (11,12,1) - Super uncomfortable to play imo

01:09:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - There is tiny sound on 2 and you break flow 2 times, its not good

01:11:344 (5,6) - 01:19:344 (5,6) - 4 taps here for emphasizing sounds?

01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 6 is really weird

01:26:344 (4,5,1) - Same for 5

Your flow in this diff is really something hard, but maybe its your style

Anyway
Good map, GL with ranking!

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-01-28T15:36:46+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
[krt's Insane]
一开始的部分NC有点问题

01:17:344 - 请remap这附近，ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+h太明显了。至少调整一下位置吧 。。。不，我只是已經是盡力了 orz
http://puu.sh/tDsqv/404acf4c46.jpg

后面还有一段复制粘贴

gl

MashaSG wrote:
krt's Insane

00:24:677 (1) - NC NC'd 00:24:010 (1) - Instead

00:26:677 (1,2) - 00:29:177 (3,1) - 00:29:344 (1,2) - Fix blankets I don't want to, but ok

01:05:177 (1) - Are you sure? It has too high SV on it imo I really liked it, but since many people hatred it, changed

@_Yiiiii 我自己加了一些combo colors，您可以複製到其他難度吧

Thanks for mod orz

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raririn

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

raririn 2017-01-28T16:03:07+00:00

水4咕

[Easy]

00:24:010 (1) - 感觉节奏好像有点..难按？我局的这样比较好一点但是这样E的滑条头不在整1/2拍上了.. 不过后面还有00:49:510 (2) - 应该还行？
SPOILER
00:28:677 (2) - 感觉这里好像是硬放的圈诶... 这里都留空了嘛→(00:23:344 - 00:23:677 - )

[Normal]

....怎么开头的节奏比Easy还散啊滑条是很好看啦要不E也再散一点
02:07:344 (5) - 不好看啊可以再顺时针转个40°

01:41:344 - 这个点我觉得E/N也用normal-hitfinish吧 drum这个finish都听不出来啥

[Hard]

01:29:177 (5) - 这好不hard啊...
01:46:344 (5,1) - 这里flow突然好奇怪啊我局的还是把5再逆时针转一下

最高难度也写不出什么但是像上面那个hard提的一样的flow似乎有不少...
我是觉得打起来不太顺手但是也没什么毛病就是了

kiryu's Another这个...呃...挺有想法的

很惭愧很水的摸

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-01-29T02:38:13+00:00

MashaSG

MashaSG wrote:
M4M back, sry for delay

General
ComboColours? copied from krt's

Maybe use 1920x1080 BG since its allowed? http://s017.radikal.ru/i442/1211/19/a20c30880043.jpg applied

Easy

00:41:344 (2,1) - Maybe do blanket here? Overlap in this case would be okay Too hard to get (2) into the blanket position XD

00:46:677 (3) - Why no wistle on head like on previous sliders? Nice catch, added

00:58:010 (3,1) - Blanket here too? will off screen if do so

02:06:677 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Very boring and unbeautiful imo, maybe do something more creative? Sorry i can't rotating patterns are the best from me for this rhythm

Normal

00:32:010 (1,2) - bad overlap But nowhere else to put it, sad

01:08:677 (4,5,1) - Patterns like this with stacking may be difficult for Normal players It's recognisable so it isn't

02:07:344 (5,1) - blanket? ok

Hard

00:31:677 (8,1) - Fix blanket ???? what to fix? It's perfect now

01:41:344 (1) - No finish in other diffs removed, that was added by mistake

Your soacing in KIAI is really inconsistent, I now that it's Hard and you can change spacing, but not like you do I think, it's too random for me snare/bass = 1.6x DS, 1.3x the else, it's clear

Blossom

00:24:344 (2,3) - 00:49:510 (7,8) - Fix blankets fixed

00:50:510 (10,11,1) - 00:53:177 (11,12,1) - Super uncomfortable to play imo Super cool to play imo

01:09:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - There is tiny sound on 2 and you break flow 2 times, its not good 01:10:010 (3,4,5) - This is what really breaks the flow

01:11:344 (5,6) - 01:19:344 (5,6) - 4 taps here for emphasizing sounds? It's not that strong and these two sliders are trandition

01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 6 is really weird 01:16:010 (1) - just for emphasising this

01:26:344 (4,5,1) - Same for 5

Your flow in this diff is really something hard, but maybe its your style

Anyway
Good map, GL with ranking!

raririn

raririn wrote:
水4咕

[Easy]
00:24:010 (1) - 感觉节奏好像有点..难按？我局的这样比较好一点但是这样E的滑条头不在整1/2拍上了.. 不过后面还有00:49:510 (2) - 应该还行？低难度简化一下节奏而已
SPOILER
00:28:677 (2) - 感觉这里好像是硬放的圈诶... 这里都留空了嘛→(00:23:344 - 00:23:677 - ) 去掉了
[Normal]
....怎么开头的节奏比Easy还散啊滑条是很好看啦要不E也再散一点你看给Lily的回摸
02:07:344 (5) - 不好看啊可以再顺时针转个40° 没地方摆了...而且想做blanket
01:41:344 - 这个点我觉得E/N也用normal-hitfinish吧 drum这个finish都听不出来啥这图里finish是用来打拍子的...

[Hard]
01:29:177 (5) - 这好不hard啊... 这种玩意挺常见的吧？
01:46:344 (5,1) - 这里flow突然好奇怪啊我局的还是把5再逆时针转一下 01:46:677 (1) - 还好吧，毕竟这个滑条头有缓冲作用
最高难度也写不出什么但是像上面那个hard提的一样的flow似乎有不少...
我是觉得打起来不太顺手但是也没什么毛病就是了

kiryu's Another这个...呃...挺有想法的

很惭愧很水的摸

Thanks for modding!

@ahbor @z1 改摸先update，我加了combo color

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2017-01-29T09:59:32+00:00

垃圾小霸王服务器!!!卡的亲妈不认识

Astarte wrote:
Advanced
00:39:844 (4,5) - wouldn't make a triplet here tho, remove 00:39:927 (5) - since it's a calm part. also it's violin so it's not as clear as piano here 02:07:844 (4,5) - QAQ,i think triplet here sounds better..
01:08:677 - missing a note here. make the slider start from here and add a stacked circle on a red tick beforenot following the drum
nice diff

MashaSG wrote:
Abhor's Advanced

SV for part from 00:21:010 - to 00:42:677 - is big for me, I'd decrease it to 0,8-0,9. Since this is Advanced you can do SV changes hereno...i use the same disantce snap all the time

00:22:677 (1,2,3) - 00:34:677 (1,2) - 00:41:677 (2,3,4) - 00:47:010 (2,3) - 00:57:677 (2,3) - 01:22:677 (1,2) - 01:27:677 (4,1) - Fix blanketsok

00:39:844 (4,5,1) - Don't know for sure, but maybe it's too hard for 2,6 advancedqwq,i think it's not really hard

01:08:010 (1) - There is strong sound on the tail, you should map it as clickable object like tap, not as tail of slider not following the drum

01:59:344 (3) - Ugly slider imook

02:10:677 (5) - Space 5 for emphasize ok

fixed

osu file format v14

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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
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ArtistUnicode:Lifetheory
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Danii

250 posts

Joined September 2015

Danii 2017-02-01T19:00:54+00:00

hi there, m4m from your queue (sorry for delay)

Blossom

00:24:677 (3) - ctrl+g? imo flow between 00:24:677 (3,4,5,6) - will be better

00:30:677 (5,6) - not very good overlap, move slider right, closer to note

00:34:344 (9,1) - fix blanket, move (1) right

00:50:510 (10,2) - stack it better, for good readable

00:53:010 (10,11,12,1) - a bit werid flow due slider's location, move it right

00:55:677 (9,3) - overlap

00:59:177 (3) - move to 460 207

01:01:177 (11,12) - ctrl+g?

01:04:010 (7) - put nc

01:15:677 (5) - ctrl+j?

01:16:844 (2) - 01:17:677 (2) - almost overlap, spread them out

01:22:677 (1) - make something like this to symmetry with 01:22:344 (6) -

01:26:344 (4,5,1,2) - this is really bad for playing, i don't think that this special increase of difficulty is needed, and also i don't see reason for kickslider due there are no sounds. Make something like this

01:39:177 (2,1) - overlap

01:39:677 (4,5) - ^

01:44:677 (3,1) - ^

01:45:010 (6) - curve this slider up for good flow to the next slider

01:47:677 (4,5,1) - i told you about it

01:55:177 (2,1) - almost overlap

02:06:344 (5) - maybe make here two notes to emphasise strng piano and also to combined with another two notes 02:05:344 (1,2) - ?

krt's insane

00:26:010 (9) - this the only 1/1 pause in all part looks weird, or make here two 1/2 sliders, or remove note 00:31:844 (5) -

00:36:010 (2,1) - wrong blanket, move (1) right

01:03:344 (1,2) - maybe make here two cross jumps like this? Just i don't know why you use jumps in less intensive part than this, and here you did'nt it

good diff

Hard

00:39:177 - put note here and make instead 00:40:677 (2,3) - this. Imo, with it rhythm would be better

00:52:844 (9,10,11,1) - too hard for read: stacked 1/2 and stacked 1/4. Or unstack 1/2, or unstack 1/4 and also in this case unstack 00:58:344 (9,10,1) - and 01:03:177 (3,4,5) -

01:09:844 (2) - don't like that strong sound ends on the slider's tale. Make this sound clickable

01:11:177 (2,2) - too close

01:24:510 (3) - same as 01:09:844 (2) -

01:49:010 (4) - sound at 01:48:010 (1,2,3,4) - are same, but you emphasise last two sounds using curve slider. I don't see reason for it so make this slider direct

02:02:677 (1,2) - make here 1/1 slider + note

02:08:010 (1,2) - ^

gl

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-02-02T02:43:23+00:00

Danii wrote:
hi there, m4m from your queue (sorry for delay)

krt's insane
00:26:010 (9) - this the only 1/1 pause in all part looks weird, or make here two 1/2 sliders, or remove note 00:31:844 (5) - Added a note on 00:26:510 - instead as there's also a piano sound too

00:36:010 (2,1) - wrong blanket, move (1) right I don't think it's a major issue imo

01:03:344 (1,2) - maybe make here two cross jumps like this? Just i don't know why you use jumps in less intensive part than this, and here you did'nt it Did it in other way
good diff

Thanks for the mod~

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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_Yiiiii

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Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-02-02T05:25:52+00:00

Danii

Danii wrote:
hi there, m4m from your queue (sorry for delay)

Blossom
00:24:677 (3) - ctrl+g? imo flow between 00:24:677 (3,4,5,6) - will be better ok

00:30:677 (5,6) - not very good overlap, move slider right, closer to note ok

00:34:344 (9,1) - fix blanket, move (1) right fixed, it should be down

00:50:510 (10,2) - stack it better, for good readable fixed

00:53:010 (10,11,12,1) - a bit werid flow due slider's location, move it right weird flow is just good for the situation imo

00:55:677 (9,3) - overlap the slider comes almost one second later than the circle so it doesn't matter, and the overlap will mess up the flow

00:59:177 (3) - move to 460 207 ok, lined up

01:01:177 (11,12) - ctrl+g? no, it's just spacing emphasis

01:04:010 (7) - put nc added

01:15:677 (5) - ctrl+j? can't get the reason for that

01:16:844 (2) - 01:17:677 (2) - almost overlap, spread them out fixed

01:22:677 (1) - make something like this to symmetry with 01:22:344 (6) - I don't like the slider shape tbh

01:26:344 (4,5,1,2) - this is really bad for playing, i don't think that this special increase of difficulty is needed, and also i don't see reason for kickslider due there are no sounds. Make something like this changed, but not a pattern like that

01:39:177 (2,1) - overlap fixed

01:39:677 (4,5) - ^

01:44:677 (3,1) - ^

01:45:010 (6) - curve this slider up for good flow to the next slider 01:45:344 - a strong beat so I don't want a good flow

01:47:677 (4,5,1) - i told you about it ^

01:55:177 (2,1) - almost overlap fixed

02:06:344 (5) - maybe make here two notes to emphasise strng piano and also to combined with another two notes 02:05:344 (1,2) - ? fixed

Hard
00:39:177 - put note here and make instead 00:40:677 (2,3) - this. Imo, with it rhythm would be better but there is no sound

00:52:844 (9,10,11,1) - too hard for read: stacked 1/2 and stacked 1/4. Or unstack 1/2, or unstack 1/4 and also in this case unstack 00:58:344 (9,10,1) - and 01:03:177 (3,4,5) - fixed

01:09:844 (2) - don't like that strong sound ends on the slider's tale. Make this sound clickable fixed

01:11:177 (2,2) - too close 1.4s between so it doesn't matter

01:24:510 (3) - same as 01:09:844 (2) - fixed

01:49:010 (4) - sound at 01:48:010 (1,2,3,4) - are same, but you emphasise last two sounds using curve slider. I don't see reason for it so make this slider direct actually slider shape consistency doesn't matter the emphasis when it isn't very obvious

02:02:677 (1,2) - make here 1/1 slider + note fixed

02:08:010 (1,2) - ^

gl

Thanks for modding!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-02-03T17:26:32+00:00

from m4m

Easy :
- 00:30:677 (2) - the curve can be better for flow http://puu.sh/tMGWO/e48c2f57be.jpg
- 01:04:010 (1) - soft finish only sounds better here due cymbal
- 01:06:677 - 01:09:344 - 01:12:010 - 01:14:677 - 01:17:344 - and other cymbal musics because they are too many ^
- 01:54:344 (1) - remove, recovery time after spin requires 1 full measure time

Normal :
- HP 3,5?
- 00:34:677 (2) - better move to 112,192 for avoid overlap. if u agree then move (3) to fix spacing
- 00:48:010 (1,2) - copy from (1) and flip it so u make a symmetrical pattern instead?
- 00:59:677 (3) - 292,72 for avoid overlap with 00:58:344 (5) -
- 01:09:010 (5,1) - stacking 1/1 makes confusing for newbie so pls unstack
- 01:19:677 (5,1) - 01:30:344 (5,1) - 01:41:010 (5,1) - ^
- 01:49:344 (5) - 140,264 for make triangle instead? for keep pattern from 1,2,3

Advanced :
- 01:03:010 (2) - why not rotating curve slider here for make a pattern with 01:03:344 (3,4) - ?
- :thumbs up:

Hard :
- 00:28:677 (7) - 32,216 for better flow
- 00:32:677 (3,4) - copy paste from (3) and flip it pls so they will be a symmetrical pattern ><
- 00:33:344 (5) - 492,84 for better flow?
- 00:54:177 (4,5,6) - would be nice if they had straight flow
- 01:25:010 (5) - use 1,6x spacing for consistency

Insane :
- corrupt lel cant load the diff

Blossom:
- OD 8,5 looks better i think
- 00:28:010 (4,5) - try copy paste for better design http://puu.sh/tMKtO/aad946f3ea.jpg ?
- 00:41:010 (4) - 192,244 for consistent spacing? it doesnt make sense to make higher jump in here and normal spacing for next when pianos are weak
- 00:44:844 (9,10,11) - i prefer you give anti jump instead of stack on weak pianos here. i mean like http://puu.sh/tMKPM/fd434a6f2a.jpg
- 00:46:010 (3,4,5) - same as above if u agree
- 00:47:510 (10,11,12) - ^ (and for others)
- 00:50:510 (10,11,1) - oh my no pls.. u have to keep use consistent spacing because you dont use 1/4 slider here :C
- 00:53:177 (11,12,1) - ^ and for others
- 01:14:344 (6,1) - seems the parallel could be better

good luck ~

edit :
krt :

and i asked a friend to dl and he got same problem

Last edited by Xinely 2017-02-03T17:36:47+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

-Atri-

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Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-02-03T17:27:39+00:00

wtf redownload plz XDDDD

_Yiiiii

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Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-02-04T03:47:51+00:00

Xinely

Xinely wrote:
from m4m

Easy :
- 00:30:677 (2) - the curve can be better for flow http://puu.sh/tMGWO/e48c2f57be.jpg what's the difference?
- 01:04:010 (1) - soft finish only sounds better here due cymbal changed
- 01:06:677 - 01:09:344 - 01:12:010 - 01:14:677 - 01:17:344 - and other cymbal musics because they are too many ^ These are too weak so no soft finish
- 01:54:344 (1) - remove, recovery time after spin requires 1 full measure time ok

Normal :
- HP 3,5? ok
- 00:34:677 (2) - better move to 112,192 for avoid overlap. if u agree then move (3) to fix spacing I prefer overlap
- 00:48:010 (1,2) - copy from (1) and flip it so u make a symmetrical pattern instead? The second part of (1) and (2) is parallel
- 00:59:677 (3) - 292,72 for avoid overlap with 00:58:344 (5) - fixed
- 01:09:010 (5,1) - stacking 1/1 makes confusing for newbie so pls unstack Since all the stacks are 1/1, newbies could recognise it
- 01:19:677 (5,1) - 01:30:344 (5,1) - 01:41:010 (5,1) - ^
- 01:49:344 (5) - 140,264 for make triangle instead? for keep pattern from 1,2,3 don't want a triangle in normal

Hard :
- 00:28:677 (7) - 32,216 for better flow ok
- 00:32:677 (3,4) - copy paste from (3) and flip it pls so they will be a symmetrical pattern >< they are rotating pattern already
- 00:33:344 (5) - 492,84 for better flow? It's good to have it like this imo
- 00:54:177 (4,5,6) - would be nice if they had straight flow it was, but many modder said it is not good
- 01:25:010 (5) - use 1,6x spacing for consistency fixed

Blossom:
- OD 8,5 looks better i think not gonna increase anymore, because the song is a bit unsnap
- 00:28:010 (4,5) - try copy paste for better design http://puu.sh/tMKtO/aad946f3ea.jpg ? It's will mess up DS
- 00:41:010 (4) - 192,244 for consistent spacing? it doesnt make sense to make higher jump in here and normal spacing for next when pianos are weak Ctrl+G to 00:41:344 (1) - already
- 00:44:844 (9,10,11) - i prefer you give anti jump instead of stack on weak pianos here. i mean like http://puu.sh/tMKPM/fd434a6f2a.jpg The melody of violin are the same so stack
- 00:46:010 (3,4,5) - same as above if u agree
- 00:47:510 (10,11,12) - ^ (and for others)
- 00:50:510 (10,11,1) - oh my no pls.. u have to keep use consistent spacing because you dont use 1/4 slider here :C It has a good emphasis to the slider so no change
- 00:53:177 (11,12,1) - ^ and for others
- 01:14:344 (6,1) - seems the parallel could be better I want to emphasise the sound at 01:14:677 so no parallel pattern

good luck ~

edit :
krt :
and i asked a friend to dl and he got same problem

Thanks for modding!

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-02-10T14:48:41+00:00

sry for being emotional lol

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2017-02-10T15:57:03+00:00

[blossom]
00:21:344 (1,2,3) - 这里为什么要切flow，而且只切了一次，所以感觉和前后不太搭
00:27:677 (3) - 我记得滑条点应该不能出界吧，这里快要出界了，像00:26:677 (1) - 一样保持平行不好么，这么看起来感觉挺乱的
00:28:344 (5) - 感觉ctrl+G更舒服，不懂这里为什么突然逆一下flow，00:35:344 (3,4) - 这里你就没有逆
00:28:344 (5) - 虽然不要求一定要包住但是我觉得弧度还可以再美观点，尽量再调整一下吧，这么看起来像随手摆的
00:33:844 (7) - 移到（336，32）试试？不然还是不太懂这里为什么要切一下flow
00:38:010 (3) - 可能我会更倾向ctrl+G,这样打起来更舒服，后面的可能也会跟着一起改
00:40:010 (1,2,3) - 这个flow也太怪了吧.....把3反选，把2叠在3上试试？
00:40:677 (3,4,1) - 为什么3和4，4和1是一个节奏，这里的DS却区别那么大，可能需要一定的理由
00:44:010 (6,7) - 如果要放对称的话，建议把7移到（257，72）
00:46:677 (7,8) - 前面两个同样的地方你用的都是顺flow，这里不太明白为什么要切一下
00:50:510 (10,11,1) - 你看你在kiai都老老实实地DS三连为什么在这里要这么放.....感觉难度有点脱节
01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 整个diff里这个梗是最失败的，完全打乱你原本的布局，这种梗diff前面是1/2，在后面却变成了1/4，让player会难以区分，难度上也是陡然暴增
总体的感觉就是结构上还有提升的空间，有点乱乱的
其他的diff没什么特别想说的
GL啦

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-02-14T04:16:24+00:00

kanor

kanor wrote:
[blossom]
00:21:344 (1,2,3) - 这里为什么要切flow，而且只切了一次，所以感觉和前后不太搭
00:27:677 (3) - 我记得滑条点应该不能出界吧，这里快要出界了，像00:26:677 (1) - 一样保持平行不好么，这么看起来感觉挺乱的现在这样是ctrl+h 然后缩一下得来的，我个人觉得不乱，顺便x=0，没出界
00:28:344 (5) - 感觉ctrl+G更舒服，不懂这里为什么突然逆一下flow，00:35:344 (3,4) - 这里你就没有逆根据这一段的小提琴的音调感觉不应该是小间距的
00:28:344 (5) - 虽然不要求一定要包住但是我觉得弧度还可以再美观点，尽量再调整一下吧，这么看起来像随手摆的 00:28:010 (4,5) - 这俩是转出来的，现在这个位置也不会有人在意blanket吧？
00:33:844 (7) - 移到（336，32）试试？不然还是不太懂这里为什么要切一下flow 实际切flow是在这里00:34:010 (8) -
00:38:010 (3) - 可能我会更倾向ctrl+G,这样打起来更舒服，后面的可能也会跟着一起改
00:40:010 (1,2,3) - 这个flow也太怪了吧.....把3反选，把2叠在3上试试？这个flow很常见啊，如果无视滑条1的话那这个就是一个顺时针转圈圈啊
00:40:677 (3,4,1) - 为什么3和4，4和1是一个节奏，这里的DS却区别那么大，可能需要一定的理由
00:44:010 (6,7) - 如果要放对称的话，建议把7移到（257，72）
00:46:677 (7,8) - 前面两个同样的地方你用的都是顺flow，这里不太明白为什么要切一下
00:50:510 (10,11,1) - 你看你在kiai都老老实实地DS三连为什么在这里要这么放.....感觉难度有点脱节在kiai段的重音并没有这么多，所以这里的重音需要强调而kiai的不需要，就是这样
01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 整个diff里这个梗是最失败的，完全打乱你原本的布局，这种梗diff前面是1/2，在后面却变成了1/4，让player会难以区分，难度上也是陡然暴增 01:15:677 (5,6) - 这间距如果放在1/2是0.76x，而之前并没用过低于1.2x的ds，所以这两个之间的DS没问题。当玩家知道了这里的6是在蓝线上之后1肯定就是大白线了，所以这个梗在我看来完全没有问题，很成功的为这一堆排列01:16:010 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - 所在的重音部分起了个头。你觉得不合适可能是因为你还打不动这个，等打动了那就是很爽的了。同时，这种梗在spread上也解释的过去，这个图有krt的那个insane之后主难度摆这种东西不是问题的。
总体的感觉就是结构上还有提升的空间，有点乱乱的
其他的diff没什么特别想说的
GL啦

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谢谢~

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2017-02-14T15:02:31+00:00

kanor

kanor wrote:
[blossom]
00:28:344 (5) - 感觉ctrl+G更舒服，不懂这里为什么突然逆一下flow，00:35:344 (3,4) - 这里你就没有逆根据这一段的小提琴的音调感觉不应该是小间距的但是这小提琴只是一个长音啊，为什么一个长音中需要用逆flow去加强打击感呢，这不是更成问题了么
00:28:010 (4,5) - 这俩是转出来的，现在这个位置也不会有人在意blanket吧？如果只是因为会不会有人在意的话当我没说
00:50:510 (10,11,1) - 你看你在kiai都老老实实地DS三连为什么在这里要这么放.....感觉难度有点脱节在kiai段的重音并没有这么多，所以这里的重音需要强调而kiai的不需要，就是这样
跟kiai比这里的重音显然要少啊，突出了这里却不突出kiai我觉得说不过去。我的意思是毫无疑问kiai是这个曲子激昂的部分，那么相对的，mapping的时候我会更倾向于用难度和特殊的梗去区分和突出kiai，从这个diff看，最突出的莫过于这里的拆连打，哪怕后面的大间距三连都没有这样的梗抢眼，但是这里是曲子的什么部分呢？一个从安静到激昂的过度部分，在过度的地方用这种梗，在kiai却没有，这样我觉得在难度分配方面会有些失衡，就算要拆，你在前面逐渐昂扬起来时都拆了，01:03:177 (3,4,5) -这里却又不拆，反而感觉很突兀
01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 整个diff里这个梗是最失败的，完全打乱你原本的布局，这种梗diff前面是1/2，在后面却变成了1/4，让player会难以区分，难度上也是陡然暴增 01:15:677 (5,6) - 这间距如果放在1/2是0.76x，而之前并没用过低于1.2x的ds，所以这两个之间的DS没问题。当玩家知道了这里的6是在蓝线上之后1肯定就是大白线了，所以这个梗在我看来完全没有问题，很成功的为这一堆排列01:16:010 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - 所在的重音部分起了个头。你觉得不合适可能是因为你还打不动这个，等打动了那就是很爽的了。同时，这种梗在spread上也解释的过去，这个图有krt的那个insane之后主难度摆这种东西不是问题的。
既然你也知道你的diff里没有过低于1.2x的ds，那么为什么你就能想当然的认为“当玩家知道了这里的6是在蓝线上之后1肯定就是大白线了”？作为玩家来说，他们首先质疑的是这里为什么1/2放的那么小而不是1/4放的那么大，除非你在前面有无数次类似的排列去提醒他，但你其他的1/4除了拆连打那里都没有那么做，甚至到拆连打那里初见就开始坑了。
说到拆连打这又会回到上一个问题：这样的梗单独放当然没问题，但是它放在你的diff里是否与其他的部分的难度相合适？我感觉就像是Insane里面被塞了几个Extra的梗还有最后的大跳硬撑起来的难度，至少给我的感觉是这样的，次难度相对来说就要均衡得多，结构也要好一点
如果你真觉得这样的梗没问题，我会建议干脆把剩下的排列也弄难一点免得看起来突兀
GL啦

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谢谢~[/quote]
只是再解释一下

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

_Yiiiii 2017-02-17T06:18:08+00:00

kanor wrote:
kanor
kanor wrote:
[blossom]
00:28:344 (5) - 感觉ctrl+G更舒服，不懂这里为什么突然逆一下flow，00:35:344 (3,4) - 这里你就没有逆根据这一段的小提琴的音调感觉不应该是小间距的但是这小提琴只是一个长音啊，为什么一个长音中需要用逆flow去加强打击感呢，这不是更成问题了么这么说吧，00:28:010 (4,5) - 这俩的音明显不同，在这一段里就只有这里有旋律的变化，所以flow不同。而你指出的那部分是旋律一直在变，所以没什么好强调的。
00:28:010 (4,5) - 这俩是转出来的，现在这个位置也不会有人在意blanket吧？如果只是因为会不会有人在意的话当我没说
00:50:510 (10,11,1) - 你看你在kiai都老老实实地DS三连为什么在这里要这么放.....感觉难度有点脱节在kiai段的重音并没有这么多，所以这里的重音需要强调而kiai的不需要，就是这样
跟kiai比这里的重音显然要少啊，突出了这里却不突出kiai我觉得说不过去。我的意思是毫无疑问kiai是这个曲子激昂的部分，那么相对的，mapping的时候我会更倾向于用难度和特殊的梗去区分和突出kiai，从这个diff看，最突出的莫过于这里的拆连打，哪怕后面的大间距三连都没有这样的梗抢眼，但是这里是曲子的什么部分呢？一个从安静到激昂的过度部分，在过度的地方用这种梗，在kiai却没有，这样我觉得在难度分配方面会有些失衡，就算要拆，你在前面逐渐昂扬起来时都拆了，01:03:177 (3,4,5) -这里却又不拆，反而感觉很突兀之所以强调，是因为音特殊。00:53:177 (11,12,1) - 这种梗的出现是因为在滑条头上有个特殊的重音，而这种重音在kiai段满地都是，于是它就不是特殊的了，于是就不强调了。这种变化很常见的，https://osu.ppy.sh/b/502676 在这张图中，一开始那段用加速滑条强调了少有的电吉他音，而之后电吉他音一直都有，而滑条速度并没有像之前强调时的那样快，也是同样的原因，希望通过我的这个例子你接受这种解释
01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 整个diff里这个梗是最失败的，完全打乱你原本的布局，这种梗diff前面是1/2，在后面却变成了1/4，让player会难以区分，难度上也是陡然暴增 01:15:677 (5,6) - 这间距如果放在1/2是0.76x，而之前并没用过低于1.2x的ds，所以这两个之间的DS没问题。当玩家知道了这里的6是在蓝线上之后1肯定就是大白线了，所以这个梗在我看来完全没有问题，很成功的为这一堆排列01:16:010 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - 所在的重音部分起了个头。你觉得不合适可能是因为你还打不动这个，等打动了那就是很爽的了。同时，这种梗在spread上也解释的过去，这个图有krt的那个insane之后主难度摆这种东西不是问题的。
既然你也知道你的diff里没有过低于1.2x的ds，那么为什么你就能想当然的认为“当玩家知道了这里的6是在蓝线上之后1肯定就是大白线了”？作为玩家来说，他们首先质疑的是这里为什么1/2放的那么小而不是1/4放的那么大，除非你在前面有无数次类似的排列去提醒他，但你其他的1/4除了拆连打那里都没有那么做，甚至到拆连打那里初见就开始坑了。 首先，你要知道不能什么都靠提醒才是能读的，你把这个梗当做有读图难度的梗的话，在spread上是完全没问题的。
说到拆连打这又会回到上一个问题：这样的梗单独放当然没问题，但是它放在你的diff里是否与其他的部分的难度相合适？我感觉就像是Insane里面被塞了几个Extra的梗还有最后的大跳硬撑起来的难度，至少给我的感觉是这样的，次难度相对来说就要均衡得多，结构也要好一点这么说吧，7星图的梗有的很难，不是所有玩家都能打，但是能rank的原因是因为它得spread没问题，而且playable。这里你就把这张图当成一个ex，那么有了底下的完整的spread，这里就不是不能rank的了。你那么想只是因为这个星低，实际上还是因为你打不动。
如果你真觉得这样的梗没问题，我会建议干脆把剩下的排列也弄难一点免得看起来突兀 该强调的已经适当的强调了，没必要了
GL啦

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谢谢~
只是再解释一下

red+b = my word

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-02-17T06:42:03+00:00

請小心不要作了一篇萬字天書

謝

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2017-02-17T11:45:38+00:00

[General]

之前研究了星數算法，如果把offset換成1200ms可以整體提高星數，不過這要看你想不想改mp3了，也可以找我幫你改
Combo color裡面的深黃色可以改成像木頭一樣的橙色，大概是R240 G176 96的顏色，這樣看起來比較鮮明點 http://puu.sh/u7a4N/3f1a020393.jpg

[Easy]

01:12:010 (1) - DS大了

[Hard]

01:49:010 (4) - 在用梗上來說的話，我建議繼續用直滑條並且換角度和移到3的下面，像前面的三個滑條一樣，當然這樣改之後後面的物件要稍微移一下

[krt's Insane]

00:46:010 (3) - 加whistle
01:03:844 (2) - 強迫症的話移到x51 y88
01:11:177 (3,5) - Blanket
Flow還不錯，不過複製貼上有點多啊，特別是01:08:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這樣的梗可能太多了，你可以試試換個pattern，比如像01:30:010 (1,2,3) - 和01:40:677 (1,2,3) - 可以換成 http://puu.sh/u79DG/83a29628ae.jpg 這樣的

[Blossom]

00:46:010 (3) - 我覺得應該加上whistle，其實這個位置和00:44:677 (8) - 還有00:47:344 (9) - 是一樣的，所以你梗也應該像00:44:677 (8) - 和00:47:344 (9) - 一樣比較好
01:01:260 (12) - 稍微放上一點，保持01:01:260 (12,1) - 之間的間距是2.0x吧
01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 建議弄成等距的，然後梗可以這樣放比較順 https://puu.sh/u77FD/9e3cc88e1a.jpg
01:27:177 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個打起來真卡手，特別是四方形沒星數而且難打，這裡給你個跳的意見 http://puu.sh/u77Y8/d8b4faa92e.png
01:37:010 (4,5,1) - 和我01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 說的一樣，你可以試試這樣放 http://puu.sh/u782n/a7c66b16ae.jpg
01:48:177 (2) - 往右放一點，大概x417 y180的位置，就是和01:46:677 (1) - 包一下
01:48:677 (5) - 放到x310 y14的地方，01:49:177 (8) - 放到x140 y76的地方，相信我會更好打
這樣下來再加上改offset應該就能在不改實際難度的情況下到X標了

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-02-17T12:20:56+00:00

全改，謝摸～

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_Yiiiii

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_Yiiiii 2017-02-17T12:49:53+00:00

@gders update再改摸，这次改了combo color

Kencho

Kencho wrote:
[General]
之前研究了星數算法，如果把offset換成1200ms可以整體提高星數，不過這要看你想不想改mp3了，也可以找我幫你改感觉还是不要改的好，毕竟要尊重原曲，而且这也不是送分set
Combo color裡面的深黃色可以改成像木頭一樣的橙色，大概是R240 G176 96的顏色，這樣看起來比較鮮明點 http://puu.sh/u7a4N/3f1a020393.jpg 改了

[Easy]
01:12:010 (1) - DS大了改了

[Hard]
01:49:010 (4) - 在用梗上來說的話，我建議繼續用直滑條並且換角度和移到3的下面，像前面的三個滑條一樣，當然這樣改之後後面的物件要稍微移一下改了

[Blossom]
00:46:010 (3) - 我覺得應該加上whistle，其實這個位置和00:44:677 (8) - 還有00:47:344 (9) - 是一樣的，所以你梗也應該像00:44:677 (8) - 和00:47:344 (9) - 一樣比較好 whistle加了这里的梗是把音调一样的叠在一起，这四下00:46:010 (3,4,5,6) - 的音调一样，所以全都叠了
01:01:260 (12) - 稍微放上一點，保持01:01:260 (12,1) - 之間的間距是2.0x吧每一个这个梗的间距都是在逐渐增大的，这里就该是这个间距
01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 建議弄成等距的，然後梗可以這樣放比較順 https://puu.sh/u77FD/9e3cc88e1a.jpg 那样打击感很弱，特别容易miss，现在采用了这样别手的flow就是要让01:15:927 (6,1) - 形成折返的感觉防miss的
01:27:177 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個打起來真卡手，特別是四方形沒星數而且難打，這裡給你個跳的意見 http://puu.sh/u77Y8/d8b4faa92e.png 改掉了4的位置，四方这种大夹角跳是用来强调这种突然出现的重音的，因为大角跳需要特殊的单拆读图嘛
01:37:010 (4,5,1) - 和我01:15:677 (5,6,1) - 說的一樣，你可以試試這樣放 http://puu.sh/u782n/a7c66b16ae.jpg 额，和之前的解释一样，之前还跟kanor扯了扯这个梗的事，你如果有兴趣可以看看上上楼
01:48:177 (2) - 往右放一點，大概x417 y180的位置，就是和01:46:677 (1) - 包一下包了
01:48:677 (5) - 放到x310 y14的地方，01:49:177 (8) - 放到x140 y76的地方，相信我會更好打这里和之前一样也是要的突然加速的效果
這樣下來再加上改offset應該就能在不改實際難度的情況下到X標了不想要x标XD

我觉得我在作大死... bn摸一篇红
Anyways, thanks for modding this!

krt之前的那两楼发生了什么？...我怎么没看懂？

edit: added a box to the reply to the mod

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Kencho

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Kencho 2017-02-17T13:58:19+00:00

krt's Insane
01:11:344 (4,5) - what happen

Blossom
看了你的解釋也算有道理的，不過1/4單拆對於很多玩家都比較難，所以搞得這圖星數虛高，如果你要保留也無所謂。
另外我忘了建議靜音sliderslide，最後那段琴音的部分sliderslide太不合曲了
至於有兩個diff沒寫摸因為沒東西摸

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-Atri- 2017-02-17T14:04:36+00:00

@_Yiiiii 幫我將 01:11:344 (5) - 移後一個紅線，不小心orz

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