Inner Oni
00:05:172 (14) - k ? because it's the same sound than 00:05:334 (15)
00:12:469 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - On the first measure, the 4 notes have the same sound but after this measure, the notes still have the same sound except that it's different from the first. So I think it's more pleasant to separate them with :
I added a d at 00:13:037 (63) because the stream ends here
00:13:929 (70) - k because it's the same sound as before
00:19:280 (120) - same
00:17:010 (98,99,100,101,102) - ddkkd?
00:17:658 it's weird, try something like this because "On the first measure [...] it's more pleasant to separate them..." :
00:22:848 (154) - same
00:20:172 remove because the stream starts at 00:20:253 (128)
00:20:253 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - kkddkkddk ?
00:21:713 (143) - k because same sound than the next
00:25:118 (165) - k seems better
00:25:280 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - You should remap this stream
I would have done something like ddkdddkdddkdddkddd
and at 00:29:334 (216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) :
nice kiai ~
I would have done k for highlight sound and d for Zzzz them :
00:47:821 - d
00:47:983 - d
00:48:145 - k
00:48:794 (396,397) - ctrl g
00:54:145 (407,408,409) - ddk?
00:58:523 (416,417,418,419) - d d d k ?
01:01:604 (438,439) - ctrl g
01:05:496 (458) - k
01:06:307 (460) - d
01:07:442 (462,463,464) - ddk?
01:08:902 (467) - k
01:09:226 (468) - d
01:10:037 (471) - k
01:10:523 (473) - k
01:10:848 (474,475,476) - kkd
01:11:983 (477) - k
etc until 01:19:929 (492)
You should kkddkk etc
01:22:118 (510) - d?
01:22:523 (512) - k?
01:23:172 (513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525) - kkddkkddkkdkk ?
You make hard streams but you should make them simpler and more repetitive
01:24:307 (526,527) - ctrl g
01:27:550 (534) - d
01:29:658 to 01:50:415 please remap this part and follow the rhythm
nice kiai ~
00:12:469 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - On the first measure, the 4 notes have the same sound but after this measure, the notes still have the same sound except that it's different from the first. So I think it's more pleasant to separate them with :
I added a d at 00:13:037 (63) because the stream ends here
00:13:929 (70) - k because it's the same sound as before
00:19:280 (120) - same
00:17:010 (98,99,100,101,102) - ddkkd?
00:17:658 it's weird, try something like this because "On the first measure [...] it's more pleasant to separate them..." :
00:22:848 (154) - same
00:20:172 remove because the stream starts at 00:20:253 (128)
00:20:253 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - kkddkkddk ?
00:21:713 (143) - k because same sound than the next
00:25:118 (165) - k seems better
00:25:280 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - You should remap this stream
I would have done something like ddkdddkdddkdddkddd
and at 00:29:334 (216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) :
nice kiai ~
I would have done k for highlight sound and d for Zzzz them :
00:47:821 - d
00:47:983 - d
00:48:145 - k
00:48:794 (396,397) - ctrl g
00:54:145 (407,408,409) - ddk?
00:58:523 (416,417,418,419) - d d d k ?
01:01:604 (438,439) - ctrl g
01:05:496 (458) - k
01:06:307 (460) - d
01:07:442 (462,463,464) - ddk?
01:08:902 (467) - k
01:09:226 (468) - d
01:10:037 (471) - k
01:10:523 (473) - k
01:10:848 (474,475,476) - kkd
01:11:983 (477) - k
etc until 01:19:929 (492)
You should kkddkk etc
01:22:118 (510) - d?
01:22:523 (512) - k?
01:23:172 (513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525) - kkddkkddkkdkk ?
You make hard streams but you should make them simpler and more repetitive
01:24:307 (526,527) - ctrl g
01:27:550 (534) - d
01:29:658 to 01:50:415 please remap this part and follow the rhythm
nice kiai ~
edit : you forgot some "boom boom" (k) in the 2 kiais
I would mod the oni later