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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 12 June 2017 at 2:38:38 PM

Artist: EBICO
Title: Persephone
Source: Dynamix
Tags: hachi zyon slit isabella olivia quiterie hard renaissance zpm electronic
BPM: 185
Filesize: 4153kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.22 stars, 292 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (5.6 stars, 889 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.82 stars, 141 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.04 stars, 428 notes)
  5. Oni (4.52 stars, 651 notes)


Download: EBICO - Persephone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please mod lol (for rank)

Kantan 4★
Futsuu 6★
Muzukashii 7★
Oni 9★
Inner Oni 10★

Applied Yonakr's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Semi-nerfed the Oni
Applied Raphalge's SV mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied lilligant's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied 404's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied Pro's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied both SEE's and Nepuri's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied Karee's mod,thanks for modding! :)
Applied Nishizumi's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied Ron's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied Endaris' mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied Ulqui and kygyubh's mods, thanks for modding! :)
Applied xfraczynho's mod, thanks for modding! :)
Applied Nifty's mod, thanks for modding! :)
posted
00:05:172 (14) - k ? because it's the same sound than 00:05:334 (15)

00:12:469 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - On the first measure, the 4 notes have the same sound but after this measure, the notes still have the same sound except that it's different from the first. So I think it's more pleasant to separate them with :

I added a d at 00:13:037 (63) because the stream ends here

00:13:929 (70) - k because it's the same sound as before
00:19:280 (120) - same

00:17:010 (98,99,100,101,102) - ddkkd?
00:17:658 it's weird, try something like this because "On the first measure [...] it's more pleasant to separate them..." :

00:22:848 (154) - same

00:20:172 remove because the stream starts at 00:20:253 (128)
00:20:253 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - kkddkkddk ?
00:21:713 (143) - k because same sound than the next
00:25:118 (165) - k seems better

00:25:280 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - You should remap this stream
I would have done something like ddkdddkdddkdddkddd
and at 00:29:334 (216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) :


nice kiai ~

I would have done k for highlight sound and d for Zzzz them :
00:47:821 - d
00:47:983 - d
00:48:145 - k
00:48:794 (396,397) - ctrl g
00:54:145 (407,408,409) - ddk?
00:58:523 (416,417,418,419) - d d d k ?
01:01:604 (438,439) - ctrl g
01:05:496 (458) - k
01:06:307 (460) - d
01:07:442 (462,463,464) - ddk?
01:08:902 (467) - k
01:09:226 (468) - d
01:10:037 (471) - k
01:10:523 (473) - k
01:10:848 (474,475,476) - kkd
01:11:983 (477) - k
etc until 01:19:929 (492)

You should kkddkk etc
01:22:118 (510) - d?
01:22:523 (512) - k?
01:23:172 (513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525) - kkddkkddkkdkk ?

You make hard streams but you should make them simpler and more repetitive

01:24:307 (526,527) - ctrl g
01:27:550 (534) - d

01:29:658 to 01:50:415 please remap this part and follow the rhythm

nice kiai ~


edit : you forgot some "boom boom" (k) in the 2 kiais
I would mod the oni later
posted

Yonakr wrote:

00:05:172 (14) - k ? because it's the same sound than 00:05:334 (15) ok

00:12:469 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - On the first measure, the 4 notes have the same sound but after this measure, the notes still have the same sound except that it's different from the first. So I think it's more pleasant to separate them with :

I added a d at 00:13:037 (63) because the stream ends here didnt put a k there because of the big note, but whatever, will make it small, accepted

00:13:929 (70) - k because it's the same sound as before ok
00:19:280 (120) - same ^

00:17:010 (98,99,100,101,102) - ddkkd? made it dkkkd
00:17:658 it's weird, try something like this because "On the first measure [...] it's more pleasant to separate them..." :

00:22:848 (154) - same applied both

00:20:172 remove because the stream starts at 00:20:253 (128) thanks, applied
00:20:253 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - kkddkkddk ? made it kkdkkkddk
00:21:713 (143) - k because same sound than the next
00:25:118 (165) - k seems better

00:25:280 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - You should remap this stream remapped but didnt follow suggestion
I would have done something like ddkdddkdddkdddkddd
and at 00:29:334 (216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) :
applied

nice kiai ~

the following things i would just reply with "ok" or "no"
I would have done k for highlight sound and d for Zzzz them :
00:47:821 - d ok
00:47:983 - d ok
00:48:145 - k ok
00:48:794 (396,397) - ctrl g ok
00:54:145 (407,408,409) - ddk? no
00:58:523 (416,417,418,419) - d d d k ? no
01:01:604 (438,439) - ctrl g no because similar to the above rhythm and want to keep the flow well
01:05:496 (458) - k ok
01:06:307 (460) - d no because same as 01:06:307 (462) -
01:07:442 (462,463,464) - ddk? no
01:08:902 (467) - k ok
01:09:226 (468) - d ok
01:10:037 (471) - k ok
01:10:523 (473) - k ok
01:10:848 (474,475,476) - kkd no
01:11:983 (477) - k
etc until 01:19:929 (492)

You should kkddkk etc
01:22:118 (510) - d? no
01:22:523 (512) - k? no
01:23:172 (513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525) - kkddkkddkkdkk ?

You make hard streams but you should make them simpler and more repetitive

01:24:307 (526,527) - ctrl g nah
01:27:550 (534) - d nah

01:29:658 to 01:50:415 please remap this part and follow the rhythm not sure what you mean, will remain unchanged for now

nice kiai ~


edit : you forgot some "boom boom" (k) in the 2 kiais
I would mod the oni later thanks
posted
hi! just an SV mod to avoid overlaps for now, will do a proper mod later

[Inner Oni]
00:47:821 - add 0.90x sv
00:47:983 - add 0.85x sv
^repeat in Oni and Muzukashii

00:59:821 - add 1x sv? feels unnecessarily hard to read
01:01:361 - back to 0.8x sv
01:02:415 - 1x again?
01:04:199 - back to 0.8x sv

01:08:577 - add 0.85x sv
01:08:740 - add 0.90x sv
^repeat in Oni and Muzukashii

01:08:740 - change to 0.92x sv
01:19:523 - add 0.95x sv
01:19:767 - add 0.97x sv
01:19:929 - add 1x sv
^to make this part smoother

01:29:658 - unused green line? remove if yes
^repeat in Oni and Muzukashii

01:51:713 - change to 1.1x to make it more intense?
^repeat in Oni

Futsuu and Oni should have only 1x since this a pretty rhythmically advanced song.

SV is also bugged in all diffs remember to change SliderMultiplier to 1.4!
posted

Raphalge wrote:

hi! just an SV mod to avoid overlaps for now, will do a proper mod later

[Inner Oni]
00:47:821 - add 0.90x sv
00:47:983 - add 0.85x sv
^repeat in Oni and Muzukashii

00:59:821 - add 1x sv? feels unnecessarily hard to read
01:01:361 - back to 0.8x sv
01:02:415 - 1x again?
01:04:199 - back to 0.8x sv

01:08:577 - add 0.85x sv
01:08:740 - add 0.90x sv
^repeat in Oni and Muzukashii

01:08:740 - change to 0.92x sv
01:19:523 - add 0.95x sv
01:19:767 - add 0.97x sv
01:19:929 - add 1x sv
^to make this part smoother

01:29:658 - unused green line? remove if yes
^repeat in Oni and Muzukashii

01:51:713 - change to 1.1x to make it more intense?
^repeat in Oni

Futsuu and Oni should have only 1x since this a pretty rhythmically advanced song.

SV is also bugged in all diffs remember to change SliderMultiplier to 1.4!
All applied, thanks! (except the 0.92 part, changed the time to 01:19:280
posted
thanks for m4m

[futsuu]
00:09:226 (28,29,30,31,32) - these rhythms are kind of hard for a futsuu
00:21:713 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - this especially ^
00:29:334 (22,23,24,25,26) - big K after this rhythm is hard to play for futsuu
00:49:604 (96,97) - switch from dk to kd
01:10:361 (18) - switch to k
01:27:550 (10) - should be a spinner after this note, leaving the section blank makes no sense
01:48:307 (10) - ^

[muzukashii]
00:12:469 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - kind of hard to transition from big Ks to a triplet
01:32:253 (25,26,27,28,29) - same as above
01:33:550 (34,35,36,37,38) - ^
01:37:442 (49,50,51,52,53) - ^
01:38:740 (58,59,60,61,62) - ^
01:27:550 (10) - should be a spinner after this note, leaving the section blank makes no sense
01:48:307 (10) - ^
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