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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, May 17, 2017 at 9:05:32 PM

Artist: CINDERELLA PROJECT
Title: Shine!! (DJ Ramakun FUNKOT REMIX)
Source: アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ
Tags: THE iDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS im@s idolmaster 2nd opening Starlight Stage 滝澤俊輔 Shunsuke Takizawa TRYTONELABO 森由里子 Yuriko Mori funky kota tv size ayomikasa
BPM: 180
Filesize: 2897kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ayo's Muzukashii!! (2.81 stars, 449 notes)
  2. Futsuu!! (2.2 stars, 301 notes)
  3. Inner Oni!! (4.95 stars, 759 notes)
  4. Kantan!! (1.48 stars, 173 notes)
  5. Oni!! (3.97 stars, 615 notes)


Download: CINDERELLA PROJECT - Shine!! (DJ Ramakun FUNKOT REMIX)
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Ayo's Muzukashii!! by ayomikasa

thanks a lot
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  8. Hitsu (mod)
  9. Nyan (mod)
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  17. Nardoxyribonucleic ()
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>:DDDD
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Annadine wrote:

im@s ampaz


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FUNKOT ADDICTED
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Hi!

Request from
Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
  • [ Kantan]

  1. You have the same pattern here 00:24:682 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - , 00:30:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I recommend you change and move somes notes to keep variation, so I suggest you Change to d or k 00:31:016 (3) - and move to 00:31:682 - Then change to k 00:32:016 (5) - Ctrl G here 00:32:682 (6,7) - and change to k here 00:33:682 (8) - With this can you have a flow with the voice and manifest a bit more the rhythm.

  2. Excelent Diff! The patterns and the drums are very good. Nice work!, Just a recommendation is follow more the similar rhythm "Clap" changing to k, for example 00:28:349 (23) - , 00:37:016 (5) - , 00:33:682 (8) - , 00:40:349 (11) - , 01:03:682 (6) - , 01:33:016 (37) - , 01:35:682 (42) - and other similar parts because a d in those parts sounds weird...a k is better in that's parts but in some can be a exepcion, but is recommendable put in those parts.
  • [ Futsuu]

  1. 00:36:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can I give you a idea to density a bit with the rhythm and to keep a coordination with the voice, also to follow more the rhythm and the voice , so Ctrl G here 00:36:349 (2,3) - , change to k those notes 00:37:016 (4,5) - and Ctrl G here 00:37:682 (7,8) - It's sound very good, the drums and the voice are more coordinated. I hope you like it.
  2. 01:11:682 (7) - Change to k, sounds very good.
  3. 01:24:849 (2,4) - Change to k to keep a nice combination with the rhythm with 01:25:682 (5,6,7) -
  4. 01:28:682 (13) - Change to k to keep a sequence k d k d k d 01:29:349 (15,16,17,18,19) -
  5. 01:39:349 (1) - Change to k If you apply the previous suggestion to keep a consistency with 01:40:016 (3,5,6,7,8) -
  • [ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:21:183 (36,37,38) - Personally I don't like the ddk in Muzukashii, Is better a kkk.
  2. 00:23:849 (48,49,50) - Same, change to ddd.
  3. 00:28:349 (70) - Change to k to keep ma bit more rhythm and the voice tt manifests itself better with 00:28:516 (71,72,73,74) -
  4. 00:33:682 (95) - Change to k to the rhythm and the voice can have sense and can flow with the sound.
  5. 00:34:849 (101,102,103) - Change to kkk.
  6. This is disrupting the flow and the emphasis of finish D 00:35:516 (105) - I suggest you move to 00:35:182 -
  7. 00:45:849 (152,153,154) - Change to kkk.
  8. 00:48:182 (163) - Change to k to agree with the rhythm 00:48:349 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) -
  9. 01:12:599 (60,61) - Change to k.
  10. 01:02:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Apply this here please 01:13:016 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - to keep conssitency in both parts.
  11. 01:22:182 (108,109,110) - Change to ddd.
  12. 01:23:682 (118) - Change to k to make kkk.
  13. 01:25:849 (129,130,131) - Change to ddd.


    You need to follow the rhythm from here so, I suggest you this:

  14. 01:30:682 (154) - Change to k.
  15. 01:32:516 (163) - Same ^
  16. 01:32:849 (164) - Same ^
  17. 01:34:016 (169,172) - Same ^
  18. 01:36:016 (179,180,181) - Change to k these notes.
  19. 01:36:516 (182,183,184) - change to ddd.
  20. 01:37:182 (186,188) - Change to k.
  21. 01:38:349 (192) - Change to k.
  22. 01:39:849 (200) - Move to 01:40:016 -
  23. 01:41:349 (207) - Change to k.
  24. 01:43:182 (216) - Same ^
    01:45:182 (225,226,227) - Change to kkk.
    01:46:016 (229) - Change to k.
    01:46:682 (233,234,235) - Change to kkk.
  • [ Oni]

  1. 00:44:349 (211) - Change to k, sounds very good here with 00:43:682 (207,208,209,210) - , 00:44:682 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223) -
  2. 01:14:682 - You need a note here to flow this pattern 01:12:932 (381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - please change to k 01:14:848 (394) - and move 01:14:682 -
  3. 01:45:515 (598,599) - Change those notes to k, sounds very nice.
  • [ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:22:349 (81) - Change to k, sounds very good with 00:22:516 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) -
  2. 00:34:516 (171) - Change to k and Ctrl G 00:34:599 (172,173) - to best the streams, here is a image -->
  3. 01:03:682 (20) - Change to k to keep the sequence and the keep the rhythm you're doing 01:02:349 (9,11,15,17) -
  4. 01:14:349 (110) - Change to k to keep consistency with the previous suggestion.


I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
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game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from
Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
  • [ Kantan]

  1. You have the same pattern here 00:24:682 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - , 00:30:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I recommend you change and move somes notes to keep variation, so I suggest you Change to d or k 00:31:016 (3) - and move to 00:31:682 - Then change to k 00:32:016 (5) - Ctrl G here 00:32:682 (6,7) - and change to k here 00:33:682 (8) - With this can you have a flow with the voice and manifest a bit more the rhythm. i'm sure, i wanna make lower diffs without variation. low diffs needs more consistency even for the beginner. i did it on all of my lower diffs

  2. Excelent Diff! The patterns and the drums are very good. Nice work!, Just a recommendation is follow more the similar rhythm "Clap" changing to k, for example 00:28:349 (23) - , 00:37:016 (5) - , 00:33:682 (8) - , 00:40:349 (11) - , 01:03:682 (6) - , 01:33:016 (37) - , 01:35:682 (42) - and other similar parts because a d in those parts sounds weird...a k is better in that's parts but in some can be a exepcion, but is recommendable put in those parts. pay more attention to structure than the sound on lower diffs
  • [ Futsuu]

  1. 00:36:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can I give you a idea to density a bit with the rhythm and to keep a coordination with the voice, also to follow more the rhythm and the voice , so Ctrl G here 00:36:349 (2,3) - , change to k those notes 00:37:016 (4,5) - and Ctrl G here 00:37:682 (7,8) - It's sound very good, the drums and the voice are more coordinated. I hope you like it. changed some color of these notes by myself
  2. 01:11:682 (7) - Change to k, sounds very good. changed to k on (6) instead of (7)
  3. 01:24:849 (2,4) - Change to k to keep a nice combination with the rhythm with 01:25:682 (5,6,7) - nope, i prefer to make basic pattern here (like ddk kkd or something else)
  4. 01:28:682 (13) - Change to k to keep a sequence k d k d k d 01:29:349 (15,16,17,18,19) - it will ruin the consistency
  5. 01:39:349 (1) - Change to k If you apply the previous suggestion to keep a consistency with 01:40:016 (3,5,6,7,8) - similar as above
  • [ Oni]

  1. 00:44:349 (211) - Change to k, sounds very good here with 00:43:682 (207,208,209,210) - , 00:44:682 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223) - yes
  2. 01:14:682 - You need a note here to flow this pattern 01:12:932 (381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - please change to k 01:14:848 (394) - and move 01:14:682 - no, it would ruin the consistency
  3. 01:45:515 (598,599) - Change those notes to k, sounds very nice. 01:45:599 - moved 01:45:432 - instead of making kkd on there
  • [ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:22:349 (81) - Change to k, sounds very good with 00:22:516 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - ups, changed
  2. 00:34:516 (171) - Change to k and Ctrl G 00:34:599 (172,173) - to best the streams, here is a image looks bad flows for me, even (173) has to be kat for cohere with (174)-->
  3. 01:03:682 (20) - Change to k to keep the sequence and the keep the rhythm you're doing 01:02:349 (9,11,15,17) - i intended to make a variation without using d k d k d k d k continuously on 1/2 snap. but..well, let's try
  4. 01:14:349 (110) - Change to k to keep consistency with the previous suggestion. sure


I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!


thanks for the mod gemu :3
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game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from
Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
  • [ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:21:183 (36,37,38) - Personally I don't like the ddk in Muzukashii, Is better a kkk. i will change it to ddd instead of kkk
  2. 00:23:849 (48,49,50) - Same, change to ddd. This time i will use kkk
  3. 00:28:349 (70) - Change to k to keep ma bit more rhythm and the voice tt manifests itself better with 00:28:516 (71,72,73,74) - Fixed
  4. 00:33:682 (95) - Change to k to the rhythm and the voice can have sense and can flow with the sound. Ok.
  5. 00:34:849 (101,102,103) - Change to kkk. kkk seems weird. I will keep this.
  6. This is disrupting the flow and the emphasis of finish D 00:35:516 (105) - I suggest you move to 00:35:182 - Okay
  7. 00:45:849 (152,153,154) - Change to kkk. Again, kkk seems weird. Keep.
  8. 00:48:182 (163) - Change to k to agree with the rhythm 00:48:349 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - Fixed
  9. 01:12:599 (60,61) - Change to k. Fixed
  10. 01:02:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Apply this here please 01:13:016 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - to keep conssitency in both parts. Okay
  11. 01:22:182 (108,109,110) - Change to ddd. Fixed.
  12. 01:23:682 (118) - Change to k to make kkk. Fixed.
  13. 01:25:849 (129,130,131) - Change to ddd. Fixed.


    You need to follow the rhythm from here so, I suggest you this:

  14. 01:30:682 (154) - Change to k. Okay
  15. 01:32:516 (163) - Same ^ Low sound here. Keep.
  16. 01:32:849 (164) - Same ^ Okay
  17. 01:34:016 (169,172) - Same ^ ^
  18. 01:36:016 (179,180,181) - Change to k these notes. No, because low sound and they're fit with don except Note 181, so keep.
  19. 01:36:516 (182,183,184) - change to ddd. Okay
  20. 01:37:182 (186,188) - Change to k. Low sounds.
  21. 01:38:349 (192) - Change to k. Okay
  22. 01:39:849 (200) - Move to 01:40:016 - Okay
  23. 01:41:349 (207) - Change to k. Okay
  24. 01:43:182 (216) - Same ^ Low sound.
    01:45:182 (225,226,227) - Change to kkk. kkk seems weird (3)
    01:46:016 (229) - Change to k. Okay
    01:46:682 (233,234,235) - Change to kkk. Okay


I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!


Thanks for the mod! :D
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Hello, mod from my queue (Sorry for late :3)
[General]
Nothing wrong >3<
[Ayo's Muzukashii!!]
00:08:516 |Add k Because only 00:08:683 (24) is very strange, and do this can keep consistency maybe
00:06:016 - 00:08:516 | or you can do this It also follow vocal, but it less strange I think

00:09:683 (25,26) - Ctrl+G to Follow pitch

00:22:349 - Add k Here has very loudly drum

00:22:683 (43) - d Because here no high pitch like 00:22:349 or 00:23:016

00:23:349 - Add d or k (I like k) Because here has very loudly piano :3

00:58:849 (213) - k Because I think (213) = (214) (Sound pitch)
[Oni!!]
01:24:182 - Add d ? Here has drum, but I think keep this pattern is also fine x_x

01:24:516 (460) - Remove this because here no sound
[Inner Oni!!]
00:33:932 (164) - Nice stream, but I think don't need this note because no sound here

01:05:432 - Add d or k I don't know I just think that will be better :3
Because 01:04:682 - 01:06:349 - You use ddk*3. This is Inner Oni, I think harder is Ok

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well I think those are too less, but I cant find another mistake :3
sorry and good luck!
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Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue (Sorry for late :3)
[General]
Nothing wrong >3< >3<

[Oni!!]
01:24:182 - Add d ? Here has drum, but I think keep this pattern is also fine x_x yep, i want to give a bit break here

01:24:516 (460) - Remove this because here no sound there is a sound, but sounds faint
[Inner Oni!!]
00:33:932 (164) - Nice stream, but I think don't need this note because no sound here there is synth sound, similar as (163)

01:05:432 - Add d or k I don't know I just think that will be better :3
Because 01:04:682 - 01:06:349 - You use ddk*3. This is Inner Oni, I think harder is Ok nope, repetitive pattern is better here, since synth sound says the same

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well I think those are too less, but I cant find another mistake :3
sorry and good luck!


thanks for the mod smallwu :D
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Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue (Sorry for late :3)

[Ayo's Muzukashii!!]

00:08:516 |Add k Because only 00:08:683 (24) is very strange, and do this can keep consistency maybe
00:06:016 - 00:08:516 | or you can do this It also follow vocal, but it less strange I think Okay, that patterns are really good for me

00:09:683 (25,26) - Ctrl+G to Follow pitch Fixed.

00:22:349 - Add k Here has very loudly drum Okay

00:22:683 (43) - d Because here no high pitch like 00:22:349 or 00:23:016 Fixed.

00:23:349 - Add d or k (I like k) Because here has very loudly piano :3 I like the kat too :3

00:58:849 (213) - k Because I think (213) = (214) (Sound pitch) Yeah, fixed.

well I think those are too less, but I cant find another mistake :3
sorry and good luck!


This mod is really helpful, Thanks! :D

For my babu : http://puu.sh/tgwZG/bbeee7957d.rar
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Hi, from my mod queue (sorry for delay, I've been lazy).

mod
Nice set.
Nothing to note in Kantan or Futsuu.

Ayo's Muzukashii!!
00:04:849 (9,10) - Ctrl+g? Given that there's no change in the sustained vocal, I think it'd be better to keep the d's consistent with the drum sounds. The first note isn't really needed either, given that there's no other audible sound.
00:33:849 (97) - Move to 00:34:682 or delete? Makes a break for emphasis on the vocals. Moving to 00:34:682 just fills in the gap because there's a drumroll sound, but it's not necessary if you want a break before the 1/4.
01:06:182 (29) - Move to 01:06:016? For consistency with 01:16:682, the note seems more fitting on the drum sound while the vocal sound isn't changing.
01:23:349 (115) - Add a finisher here?
01:25:682 (128,129,130,131) - Maybe change to a xxx_x rhythm like kkk D? So you can add a finisher to the end of the kiai/start of the next section.

Oni!!
00:56:182 (284) - Delete? For emphasis on the vocal sound.
00:57:682 (293) - Change to k? Maintain alternating k and K on the white ticks.

Inner Oni!!
01:28:182 (26) - Change to d? Matches with the 1/2 kd_dk drum sound that occurs every bar.
01:34:349 (71,72) - If you change the above, ctrl+g these notes (following the same idea for consistency), and change 01:34:849 (75) to d.
01:35:349 (79,80,81) - Change from kkd to ddk? imo it matches with the drum sounds better.
01:38:848 (112) - Change to d? Same idea as 01:28:182 (26).


Hope it helps :D
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Invective wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue (sorry for delay, I've been lazy).

mod
Nice set. Thanks :D
Nothing to note in Kantan or Futsuu.

Oni!!
00:56:182 (284) - Delete? For emphasis on the vocal sound. i'll focus on the synth
00:57:682 (293) - Change to k? Maintain alternating k and K on the white ticks. but...it sounds similar as (292)

Inner Oni!!
01:28:182 (26) - Change to d? Matches with the 1/2 kd_dk drum sound that occurs every bar. hmm, actually for consistent to 01:04:182
01:34:349 (71,72) - If you change the above, ctrl+g these notes (following the same idea for consistency), and change 01:34:849 (75) to d. same as above, but consistent to 01:10:349 - since d k d k d k on 1/2 snap continuously looks bored
01:35:349 (79,80,81) - Change from kkd to ddk? imo it matches with the drum sounds better. 01:35:516 (81, 82, 83) - should be ddk (low to high pitch) that's why i did kkd
01:38:848 (112) - Change to d? Same idea as 01:28:182 (26). same :/


Hope it helps :D


thanks for the mod :D
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Invective wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue (sorry for delay, I've been lazy).

mod
Ayo's Muzukashii!!

00:04:849 (9,10) - Ctrl+g? Given that there's no change in the sustained vocal, I think it'd be better to keep the d's consistent with the drum sounds. The first note isn't really needed either, given that there's no other audible sound. Ah, okay.
00:33:849 (97) - Move to 00:34:682 or delete? Makes a break for emphasis on the vocals. Moving to 00:34:682 just fills in the gap because there's a drumroll sound, but it's not necessary if you want a break before the 1/4. Deleted.
01:06:182 (29) - Move to 01:06:016? For consistency with 01:16:682, the note seems more fitting on the drum sound while the vocal sound isn't changing. Okay.
01:23:349 (115) - Add a finisher here? I like normal don better than finisher don in this part.
01:25:682 (128,129,130,131) - Maybe change to a xxx_x rhythm like kkk D? So you can add a finisher to the end of the kiai/start of the next section. Added with ddd K[/color]


Hope it helps :D


Thanks for the mod! :D

Babu gw mana?
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Shine!! (DJ Ramakun Remix)
TitleUnicode:Shine!! (DJ Ramakun Remix)
Artist:CINDERELLA PROJECT
ArtistUnicode:CINDERELLA PROJECT
Creator:Nishizumi
Version:Ayo's Muzukashii!!
Source:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ
Tags:THE iDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS im@s idolmaster 2nd opening funkot funky kota tv size ayomikasa
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224,192,97349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,97516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,97682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,98016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,98349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,98516,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,98682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,99016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,99182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,99349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,99682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,100016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,100182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,100349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,100516,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,100682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,101016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,101349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,101516,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,101682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,101849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,102182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,102349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,102682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,103016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,103182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,103682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,104016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,104182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,104349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,104682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,105016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,105182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,224,106849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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posted
Hi via m4m

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note


[ General]


  • Looks Good.



[ Kantan]


  • 00:21:349 - change to k.I think high sound.

    00:30:682 - change to d.I think little low.

    00:37:016 - remove.00:35:349 - 00:40:682 - This part have two 1/1-quintuplets.I prefer one quintuplets for consistency

    01:03:016 - del. & 01:11:016 - del. & 01:13:682 - del. & 01:20:016 - del. & 01:21:682 - del. 01:45:682 - del.I think 1/1-quintuplets is too many.I think hard to Kantan player.



[ Futsuu]


  • Looks Good.but,I think 1/2-quintuplets is hard to Futsuu player...



[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:22:516 - del.

    00:23:183 (45,46) - swap & 00:23:516 - add don. 00:23:683 - change to k & 00:24:182 - add don.I think more goog pattern.

    01:01:516 - del.for emphasized to next 01:01:682 (5,6,7) -



[ Oni]


  • Looks Good.



[ Inner Oni]


  • 01:12:016 (88,89,90,91) - I prefer ddkd.



Nice mapset :) Shoooot☆ Good luck
posted

Charlotte wrote:

Hi via m4m

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note


[ General]


  • Looks Good.



[ Kantan]


  • 00:21:349 - change to k.I think high sound. i know, but i prefer drum here

    00:30:682 - change to d.I think little low. for consistent to previous pattern, also current pattern is better flow i guess


    00:37:016 - remove.00:35:349 - 00:40:682 - This part have two 1/1-quintuplets.I prefer one quintuplets for consistency oh yea .-. changed to own variation

    01:03:016 - del. & 01:11:016 - del. & 01:13:682 - del. & 01:20:016 - del. & 01:21:682 - del. 01:45:682 - del.I think 1/1-quintuplets is too many.I think hard to Kantan player. i think it's not a problem since the bpm isn't fast enough



[ Futsuu]


  • Looks Good.but,I think 1/2-quintuplets is hard to Futsuu player... reason same as kantan



[ Oni]


  • Looks Good. :D



[ Inner Oni]


  • 01:12:016 (88,89,90,91) - I prefer ddkd. no, (88) should be kat for the drum



Nice mapset :) Shoooot☆ Good luck


thank you for the mod :D
posted
NM on my queue. Sorry for being late, I've been a bit sick recently.

[Inner Oni!!]
  1. 00:20:683 (71) - Should be removed due to consistency with 00:17:516 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54)
  2. 00:24:016 - There isn't a reason for this uninheriting section to be here. Just keep the one at 00:24:683
  3. 01:01:682 (5,6) - You're skipping vocal, and it'd sound nicer if you changed it to k k d k d


That's all. This is a fairly polished map as it is.

Gl w/ rank
posted

Taikocracy wrote:

NM on my queue. Sorry for being late, I've been a bit sick recently.

[Inner Oni!!]
  1. 00:20:683 (71) - Should be removed due to consistency with 00:17:516 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54) yes, deleted
  2. 00:24:016 - There isn't a reason for this uninheriting section to be here. Just keep the one at 00:24:683 nope, i put it because...barline should only at 00:24:682 -. checklist omit barline at 00:24:016 - for removing this barline
  3. 01:01:682 (5,6) - You're skipping vocal, and it'd sound nicer if you changed it to k k d k d i prefer to focusing on the synth


That's all. This is a fairly polished map as it is.

Gl w/ rank


thanks for the mod :D
posted

Charlotte wrote:

Hi via m4m

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note


[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:22:516 - del. Deleted.

    00:23:183 (45,46) - swap & 00:23:516 - add don. 00:23:683 - change to k & 00:24:182 - add don.I think more goog pattern. Most of them fixed.

    01:01:516 - del.for emphasized to next 01:01:682 (5,6,7) - Keep. I like this part.



Nice mapset :) Shoooot☆ Good luck


Thanks! :D
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