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Camellia & DJ Genki - Feelin Sky

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Willy
105 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Willy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, June 9, 2017 at 1:16:15 PM

Artist: Camellia & DJ Genki
Title: Feelin Sky
Tags: dnb drum and & bass drumstep marathon starry orange sketch up! rec recordings
BPM: 174
Filesize: 9237kb
Play Time: 05:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Starlit Sky (5.87 stars, 1770 notes)
Download: Camellia & DJ Genki - Feelin Sky
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finished mapping, have fun.
Last edited by Willy , edited 4 times in total.
Clarity
50 posts
Joined October 2013
Clarity
mod

Fionna
00:08:620 (2) - move this more to the left
00:09:310 (6) - ^^
00:22:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - curve this stream a bit more, just doesn't seem right
00:27:413 (9) - bring this up a bit
00:54:310 (3,4,5,6,7) - make this more curvy
01:19:654 (8) - bring this up slightly
01:23:792 (4,5,6,7,1) - this is curved weirdly, fix it
01:24:654 (3,4,5,6,7) - bring this down more to the right
01:53:965 (5) - bring this up to the right
02:24:827 (1,2) - bring up the sv for these 2 sliders, just doesn't feel right
02:30:344 (1,2) - ^^
02:56:551 (1) - make this more reptilian
03:08:620 (4,5,6,7) - bring this closer to 03:08:275 (3)
03:11:723 (1) - move this slightly to the left
04:56:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a really good stream
05:41:206 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - make this curve more
05:42:240 (3) - make this note curve w/ the stream

there
Willy
105 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Willy
Response to Clarity's mod:
Done!

Clarity wrote:

00:08:620 (2) - move this more to the left
00:09:310 (6) - ^^
00:22:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - curve this stream a bit more, just doesn't seem right
00:27:413 (9) - bring this up a bit
00:54:310 (3,4,5,6,7) - make this more curvy
01:19:654 (8) - bring this up slightly
01:23:792 (4,5,6,7,1) - this is curved weirdly, fix it
01:24:654 (3,4,5,6,7) - bring this down more to the right
01:53:965 (5) - bring this up to the right
02:56:551 (1) - make this more snaky
03:11:723 (1) - move this slightly to the left
Not Done

Clarity wrote:

02:24:827 (1,2) - bring up the sv for these 2 sliders, just doesn't feel right
02:30:344 (1,2) - ^^
I think it's fine the way it is but I might change in the future.

Clarity wrote:

03:08:620 (4,5,6,7) - bring this closer to 03:08:275 (3)
^

Clarity wrote:

05:41:206 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - make this curve more
05:42:240 (3) - make this note curve w/ the stream
^^
Axaptice
166 posts
Joined May 2014
Axaptice
hi i mod

Starlit Sky

00:54:137 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this particular section, everything but this stream and slider are curved or straight. I don't understand what you're trying to emphasize with this.

04:17:758 (6) - This slider is really weird. You could pretty easily turn it into a more circular shape if you wanted by doing something like this.

04:30:344 - Add a new combo here (cause you use a NC on ever big white tick and you missed it here).

04:37:241 (1) - What are your thoughts on deleting this slider, replacing it with a circle, and then adding a jump when the song picks up again? Imo it creates much better emphasis than just having a slider go through it.

00:41:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The notes here spread outwards while the vocals get lower (ik the harmony gets higher, but that's not the music being emphasized here). This is just a minor thing and it still plays decently imo, but I still think it's something to consider.

I really like how this plays, especially the drop @ 2 mins in.
Good stuff my dude!
Willy
105 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Willy
Oh uhh, I wish I had checked the forums because I didn't even know I got a mod. It won't let me give kudos but hey at least I fixed some stuff.


"Response to UnNVus' mod"
00:54:137 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this particular section, everything but this stream and slider are curved or straight. I don't understand what you're trying to emphasize with this.
Fixed!


04:17:758 (6) - This slider is really weird. You could pretty easily turn it into a more circular shape if you wanted by doing something like this.
Done!


04:30:344 - Add a new combo here (cause you use a NC on ever big white tick and you missed it here).
Fixed!


04:37:241 (1) - What are your thoughts on deleting this slider, replacing it with a circle, and then adding a jump when the song picks up again? Imo it creates much better emphasis than just having a slider go through it.
I might remove it in the future but I feel like the slow velocity hold sound really suits it for just before the drop. Keeping for now


00:41:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The notes here spread outwards while the vocals get lower (ik the harmony gets higher, but that's not the music being emphasized here). This is just a minor thing and it still plays decently imo, but I still think it's something to consider.
Will consider in the future.


I really like how this plays, especially the drop @ 2 mins in.
Good stuff my dude!
Thanks.
Jesus Christ
44 posts
Joined February 2013
Jesus Christ
mods

00:26:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - this burst feels like it should be flipped to me


02:56:551 (1) - this might be cool as jumps instead of long slider


02:08:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
03:37:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:31:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ok this is pretty subjective, but i feel like the jump patterns could use more variation - but i'm probably just saying that because i suck at this pattern

honestly i don't have much else, i LOVE this map! :)
Axaptice
166 posts
Joined May 2014
Axaptice

Willy wrote:

Oh uhh, I wish I had checked the forums because I didn't even know I got a mod. It won't let me give kudos but hey at least I fixed some stuff.


"Response to UnNVus' mod"
00:54:137 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this particular section, everything but this stream and slider are curved or straight. I don't understand what you're trying to emphasize with this.
Fixed!


04:17:758 (6) - This slider is really weird. You could pretty easily turn it into a more circular shape if you wanted by doing something like this.
Done!


04:30:344 - Add a new combo here (cause you use a NC on ever big white tick and you missed it here).
Fixed!


04:37:241 (1) - What are your thoughts on deleting this slider, replacing it with a circle, and then adding a jump when the song picks up again? Imo it creates much better emphasis than just having a slider go through it.
I might remove it in the future but I feel like the slow velocity hold sound really suits it for just before the drop. Keeping for now


00:41:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The notes here spread outwards while the vocals get lower (ik the harmony gets higher, but that's not the music being emphasized here). This is just a minor thing and it still plays decently imo, but I still think it's something to consider.
Will consider in the future.


I really like how this plays, especially the drop @ 2 mins in.
Good stuff my dude!
Thanks.
It's fine, I don't really care all too much about kds anyways. Gl on map! :D
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