Ponchiwi wrote:

Cup

1. 00:08:996 (2) - Tal vez seria mejor que movieras este slider a la izquierda en x=56 debido a que las notas anteriores por un lapso de tiempo se concentran en el area de la derecha , podrias intentar esto para aprovechar mas el espacio Estoy confuso con esto, quizás lo más apto para darle fin a esto, sería cambiar la forma del slider, ya que en el mod previo, Xinely me comentó que era mejor en esta posición/color]
2. 00:13:802 (1) - alejar solo un poco este slider para dar enfasis en el cambio de ritmo
3. 00:19:106 (1) - Lo mismo aca Lo mismo aplica para esta sugerencia ^.
4. 00:32:366 (1) - igual podrías alejar un poco mas para enfasis en el cambio de ritmo Fue cambiada a 1,50x en una sugerencia del mod de Xinely, por lo tanto creo que está bien por ahora.

Salad

1. 00:10:819 (4) - Slider a contra-flujo algo difícil para mantener el control y agarrar las proximas notas , por la cuestion de que son notas continuas y como el jugador apenas esta aprendiendo, no podra notar la presencia de un dash ahí, sugeriria cambiar de posicion y mantener la distancia, por sonido fuerte en 00:11:150 (1) - para que se sienta mas cómodo el movimiento. Debido a la cantidad de comentarios sobre este patrón decidí cambiarlo, para que sea más fácil y más cómodo, hecho.
2. 00:31:040 (1) - Porque no eliminar el NC ? esta seccion tiene el mismo patron en las 4 notas,porque no dejarlo hasta el sonido fuerte en 00:32:366 (1) - No sé tanto al respecto sobre NC, pero quizás considere agregar uno donde tu lo menciones, pero para ello pediré más opiniones al respecto.
3. 00:32:366 (1) - Alejar un poco mas el slider para que sea mas notorio hacer un jump aqui Siento que no es necesario un jump allí, debido a que el sonido va en decadencia, por lo tanto es preferible dejarlo tal y como esta.
4. Debido a pones un slider para remplazar un slider/nota final , no debo porque poner tan alejado 00:37:007 (2) - tanto que necesite un dash, seria bueno reducir la distancia Es lo contrario a tu previa sugerencia, si te das cuenta el sonido es más prominente que el anterior, aparte es un final denso para el kiai time.
6. 00:36:344 (1) - Igual aqui en el NC Preguntaré si es apto agregar un NC ahí, ya que no tengo conocimiento amplio sobre eso.

Platter

1. 00:04:520 (5) - x64 Alejar para dar un efecto de finish En el mod previo de Xinely me sugirió que lo moviera hacia la derecha, debido al mal flow que tiene hacia la siguiente nota, por lo tanto veré que puedo hacer.

Gracias por el check, fue de gran ayuda.

Short mod, from my que~

Ponchiwi wrote:

• Rain

1. 00:29:714 (1) - Como que no me gusta este slider casi vertical para dar comienzo al kiai, debido a que el ryuuta se detiene , podrias considerar ponerlo horizontal/inclinado para darle un efecto mas comodo al hyperdash

help what is this

Xinely wrote:

Ponchiwi wrote:

• Rain

1. 00:29:714 (1) - Como que no me gusta este slider casi vertical para dar comienzo al kiai, debido a que el ryuuta se detiene , podrias considerar ponerlo horizontal/inclinado para darle un efecto mas comodo al hyperdash

help what is this

00: 29: 714 (1) - Since I don't like this slider almost vertical to start kiai, because the ryuuta stops, you could consider putting it horizontal / inclined to give a more comfortable effect to the hyperdash

LiousPL wrote:

Short mod, from my que~

• 
  General

1. Colors blend with the background, you must to change this (only 1, and 2) Seems ok for me,but i'll ask for some colors.
2. Maybe add some custom hitsounds? For better play of course~ Yeah, take in count.
   
   
   
   Platter
   
   
3. 00:24:907 (2) - This slider was end at 00:25:570 It ends there because there is a sound 00:25:404 - here, there is a space to increase the distance with the next note.
   
   Salad
   
   
4. 00:03:692 (2) - Maybe add some curve for this slider? A little would be nice.
5. 00:05:018 (2) - Why not make a 1/4 stream here? I know this is salad, but 1/4 patterns are still rankable~ I want to keep my variety of patterns, I'd rather leave it that way.
6. 00:08:498 (1,2) - Add some curve here, for diversify this diff I feel that it flows better horizontally with a curve, because both sliders are together.
7. 00:23:084 (1,2) - Add a curve again, in this diff are only simple sliders~ Same here.
8. 00:24:410 (1) - Again make a 1/4 stream, becouse why not? heh I added a 1/2 stream, if that's what you meant.
   
   Cup
   
   Didn't see anything wrong, but there are too many simple patterns, like in salad owo

Thanks for the mod, you're helpful.

mod req
Clean and simple, but I'd like to see something innovative.

Kyuare wrote:

mod req

Platter

1. 00:26:233 (3,4) - This one seems too far, I advise you to keep 2.00x spacing scaling, so try to move it to x~96 please.I feel the distances well, really emphasize the sounds that are presented.
2. 00:27:891 (2,3) - I'd like to see more spacing here, to empathize the new santza, something like 2.00x here would work. Done, thanks.

Salad
Don't see anything major to point.

Cup
Same.

Clean and simple, but I'd like to see something innovative.

Thanks for the mod, you're helpful.

M4M from queue (sorry for late)

Maybe this is a bit nitpicky but I feel like offset 520 sounds better

Nely's Rain
00:12:808 (3) - x236 so its a part of the stream. this beat doesn't sound heavy enough for emphasize.
00:14:631 (4) - x36 for consistent ds (unless you were emphasizing the snare?)
00:15:957 (3) - x184 ^ (dont forget to trigger hyperdash 00:15:957 (3,4) - )
00:45:460 (6,7) - x396? looks better imo
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ?

Platter
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ?

Salad
00:24:741 (3) - these beats sound pretty important, so if you moved this to x322, it would help compliment the intensity.
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ?

Cup
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ?

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Couldn't find much. All difficulties look polished and well made. Well done!

Whoops I was supposed to check this a whileeeee agooooo





Call me back once you have replied to these two and we can try pushing the set forwards.

Good luck! (:

DavidEd wrote:

M4M from queue (sorry for late)

Maybe this is a bit nitpicky but I feel like offset 520 sounds better (Done)



Platter
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ? (I feel it is fine without a spinner, it really is not necessary.)

Salad
00:24:741 (3) - these beats sound pretty important, so if you moved this to x322, it would help compliment the intensity. (I like the shape I have now, it gives a good direction to the next slider, so I prefer to leave it that way.)
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ? (Just like on the platter, it really is not necessary, it would be something forced and I do not want it to be like that, thank you.)

Cup
00:45:708 - add spinner to 00:50:929 - ? (Same comment, I would not like to add a spinner.)

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Couldn't find much. All difficulties look polished and well made. Well done!

Thanks for the mod, really helpful, and sorry for the late, mod incoming.

JBHyperion wrote:

Whoops I was supposed to check this a whileeeee agooooo

General

1. Agree with DavidEd that the offset is currently a little early. Somewhere between 520-525 sounds better (and remember to move 00:03:195 - timing point also) (Alright, done with previous mod.)

Cup

1. 00:29:382 (2,1) - Antiflow feels a bit weird to me leading into the kiai as it takes away some emphasis, I'd prefer if this faced right instead, with the antiflow in 00:29:714 (1,2) - for consistency with 00:31:040 (1,2) - (Well, I do not quite understand, but I hope I did the right thing.)

This is my only real suggestion, nothing else to comment on

Salad

1. 00:04:354 (4,1) - Feels to early to throw in a 1/2 dash here, and this sound is too weak anyway imo. This works better as a walkable spacing with 1/2 dashes saved for more intense parts later on. Same applies to similar such as 00:09:658 (4,1) - 00:12:145 (5,1) - (Understood, reduced distances.)
2. 00:05:515 (3,1) - Distance is quite far for a walkable spacing, suggest reducing this slightly (Reduced.)
3. 00:06:344 (3) - Droplet formation is kinda edgy and easy to miss, try making this a smoother curve (Shape changed.)
4. 00:08:167 (4,1) - Increased distance for a more clear dash (Distance increased.)
5. 00:16:123 (3,1) - Nice place to add dash imo, high pitch and quite strong (Slider moved to increase the distance.)
6. 00:24:741 (3,4) - 1/2 dash is ok here, but make it a normal flow please, the direction change after sharp jump is really difficult for new players (Pattern changed)
7. 00:41:316 (3,1) - Ambiguous spacing, I'd reduce this for a walk since it's not really strong enough for a dash imo (Sure, applied)
8. 00:41:648 (1,2,3) - ^ (Done here.)

Platter

1. 00:00:514 (1,2,1,2) - 1.60x DS between these would be more fair for the start of the map, especially with the little antiflow on those repeat sliders (Alright, done)
2. 00:07:007 (4,1,2,3) - Questionable antiflow considering how weak (1) is, Ctrl+H so that these are on the right for better flow (Seems better, thanks.)
3. 00:27:891 (2) - Making this horizontal for more movement would help the buildup into the kiai (Full or semi horizontal?)

Call me back once you have replied to these two and we can try pushing the set forwards.

Good luck! (:

Thanks for the improved mod, really helpful, waiting for Nely.

You requested a mod but it is already perfect to me. Requested mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]

1. 아주 NICE

[Cup]

1. 00:04:528 (2) - the distance with the previous slider maybe too close, try to use 1.39x for a better catch.
2. 00:09:832 (4) - with 1.74x distance maybe too far, try to make it closer.
3. 00:23:092 (1,2) - maybe this pattern is hard for new players?
4. 00:29:722 (1) - you make a finish on the slider head but the distance is too close.
5. 00:29:722 (1,2) - Nyan, the distance is too close compare to 00:30:385 (2,1,2) - this one despite having the same sound.
6. 00:31:048 (1,2) - Nyan
7. 00:36:352 (1,2) - Nyan too
8. 00:43:976 (2) - would be good if you can make the distance large a little bit, maybe at x:380.
9. 00:45:633 (1) - make it larger a little bit by using 1.48x distance.

[Salad]

1. 00:04:528 (1) - I can catch this without a dash, I don't know if you intentionally make like that.
2. 00:05:854 (1) - Nyan
3. 00:07:180 (1,2,3,4) - move on x:376?
4. 00:09:832 (1) - Nyan
5. 00:20:109 (3,1) - between this, I can catch without a dash, make it larger a little bit?
6. 00:41:324 (3) - try to make it larger because I can catch without a dash, try distance between 00:43:976 (3,1) - this.

[Platter]

1. 00:12:153 (4,1) - it is kinda like hard to control maybe.
2. 00:16:131 (3,1) - it is anti-flow dash? maybe make it horizontal to the right or make it vertical.
3. 00:30:053 (2,3) - Nyan
4. 00:31:379 (2,3) - Nyan too
5. 00:35:357 (2,3) - Nyan Nyan
6. 00:36:020 (4,1) - Nyan Nyan too
7. 00:42:153 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe too large, try to make it closer a little bit.

[Nely's Rain]

1. 00:33:700 (1,2,3) - awkward to catch + weird pattern, try to make it neat or add some movements.
2. 00:38:341 (3,4) - reduce the distance a little bit, it feel like edge dash.

Good luck on ranked this.

SYAHME wrote:

You requested a mod but it is already perfect to me. Requested mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]

1. 아주 NICE

[Cup]

1. 00:04:528 (2) - the distance with the previous slider maybe too close, try to use 1.39x for a better catch. (I honestly do not see the big difference in moving the notes, I'll leave them as they are.)
2. 00:09:832 (4) - with 1.74x distance maybe too far, try to make it closer.(Ok, I reduced it to 1.60x.)
3. 00:23:092 (1,2) - maybe this pattern is hard for new players? (Difficult in what aspect? It is one of my basic patterns used on earlier maps, I want to keep it.)
4. 00:29:722 (1) - you make a finish on the slider head but the distance is too close. (I know it is very close, I prefer to see other opinions on it, since in previous notes with a dense sound I have used more distance.)
5. 00:29:722 (1,2) - Nyan, the distance is too close compare to 00:30:385 (2,1,2) - this one despite having the same sound.(JBH recommends that I do that to keep my patterns, likeness and variance, but I will look for more comments.)
6. 00:31:048 (1,2) - Nyan (I prefer to leave it like this, since it has great mobility, and I do not think it affects so much.)
7. 00:36:352 (1,2) - Nyan too (Same here.)
8. 00:43:976 (2) - would be good if you can make the distance large a little bit, maybe at x:380. (Sure, why not?)
9. 00:45:633 (1) - make it larger a little bit by using 1.48x distance. (I feel like this is great, I would not like to add more, thank you.)

[Salad]

1. 00:04:528 (1) - I can catch this without a dash, I don't know if you intentionally make like that. (JBH recommended I remove the dash I previously had, which is why I decided to move it as it was very early and the sounds were not as dense.)
2. 00:05:854 (1) - Nyan (Same here.)
3. 00:07:180 (1,2,3,4) - move on x:376? (It is not necessary to move them, they are appropriate with each distance.)
4. 00:09:832 (1) - Nyan (Same above, but why Nyan?)
5. 00:20:109 (3,1) - between this, I can catch without a dash, make it larger a little bit? (Yes, there is no dash, the sound is smaller compared to others...)
6. 00:41:324 (3) - try to make it larger because I can catch without a dash, try distance between 00:43:976 (3,1) - this. (Same above.)

[Platter]

1. 00:12:153 (4,1) - it is kinda like hard to control maybe.(Maybe it is, but I have not seen other comments about it, however I will ask for opinions, thank you.)
2. 00:16:131 (3,1) - it is anti-flow dash? maybe make it horizontal to the right or make it vertical. (I did it semi-horizontal, it's better imo.)
3. 00:30:053 (2,3) - Nyan (This time I prefer to retain their position.)
4. 00:31:379 (2,3) - Nyan too (Same too.)
5. 00:35:357 (2,3) - Nyan Nyan (Same above.)
6. 00:36:020 (4,1) - Nyan Nyan too (Saaaaaame.)
7. 00:42:153 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe too large, try to make it closer a little bit. (I feel like there are no more notes in the stream, so I'll leave it that way.)

Good luck on ranked this.

Thanks for the mod, was helpful.

Recheck time, no kudosu.

Salad:

1. 00:20:109 (3,1) - Ambiguous distance here, if you want this to be a dash, increase it to something like 2.2x DS similar to 00:21:435 (3,1) -
2. 00:24:915 (2,1) - Weird to have no movement here in the kiai buildup, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8238137 instead for more movement
3. 00:31:711 (2,1) - Should really be a dash here for emphasis on the cymbal sound, try 2.2x DS again
4. 00:35:689 (2,1) - Again here, dash on both of 00:36:352 (1,2) - would be a nice way to emphasise the kiai end
5. 00:41:324 (3,1) - Dash spacing again

Nely's Rain

1. 00:33:700 (1,2,3) - Kind of an odd shape, looks a bit squashed and flow could definitely be improved. Try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8238177 - I put a 2.0x SV section on the head of (1) and moved (2) to the right a little, though this is just one option

That's everything. Checked the mp3 and outro length, ignoring the intro (522ms) the map ends at ~ 80.2% of the total mp3 length so there should be no need to cut it down or map it out, though if worst comes to worst you could opt to map a spinner ending at 00:50:937 - or such like. Would be nice to give Nely's diff some score differentiation but I won't force it if you don't want to.

Call me back!

JBHyperion wrote:

Recheck time, no kudosu.

Salad:

1. 00:20:109 (3,1) - Ambiguous distance here, if you want this to be a dash, increase it to something like 2.2x DS similar to 00:21:435 (3,1) - (I'm not sure adding a dash, and that sound is lower compared to the other, which is somewhat ambiguous, but I feel better as is.)
2. 00:24:915 (2,1) - Weird to have no movement here in the kiai buildup, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8238137 instead for more movement (Applied, more movement.)
3. 00:31:711 (2,1) - Should really be a dash here for emphasis on the cymbal sound, try 2.2x DS again (As I mentioned at the beginning, I feel that it is not necessary to force distances to create a dash, but I will take it into consideration.)
4. 00:35:689 (2,1) - Again here, dash on both of 00:36:352 (1,2) - would be a nice way to emphasise the kiai end (I think I can make an exception here, since the end of kiai should be denser.)
5. 00:41:324 (3,1) - Dash spacing again (Done.)

That's everything. Checked the mp3 and outro length, ignoring the intro (522ms) the map ends at ~ 80.2% of the total mp3 length so there should be no need to cut it down or map it out, though if worst comes to worst you could opt to map a spinner ending at 00:50:937 - or such like. Would be nice to give Nely's diff some score differentiation but I won't force it if you don't want to. (Well, for my part I feel that I would not like to add a spinner, it would be a bit forced and I do not like it, but I will comment with Nely about his diff.)

Call me back!

Thanks for the mod, really helpful as always, just waiting for Nely for her replies.

fixed all from kyuare's mod until hyperion's recheck

jusen move 00:36:352 (1) - to x:144 for me please thanks

I made you endure enough rechecks for now, so enjoy your hard-earned bubble

Bubbled~

I got called. Not modding much at all right now due to real life stuff, but this is the least I can do.

[Cup]

00:08:506 (1) - Maybe a slightly higher distance to emphasise the strength of this sound which you even emphasised yourself with a finish hitsound. x:228 works well.
00:16:462 (1) - Considering the significant pitch change to this, a higher distance both to and from it would be well fitting for emphasis on that. Try x:120.
00:18:451 (2,3) - Again, distance to 2 here feels very underwhelming because of the strength of that note. Try moving this section to x:96.
00:21:766 (1,2,3) - Two things here, once again, the distancing feels kinda underemphasised, but also, the movement has felt quite repetitive here, and this'd be a nice time for a quick direction change to try to make it feel less so. Try Ctrl+H on this section and move it to x:368.
00:28:396 (1) - For the higher pitch here, a slightly higher distance would be nice. Maybe try x:236.
00:44:307 (1) - Maybe move it a bit more to the left for more emphasis on this than the previous double, x:228 works well.

[Salad]

00:03:203 (1) - Try x:460 on here. It's a very minor change, but I think it's a nice slight adjustment for dash movement.
00:09:832 (1) - Slightly uncomfortable movement as it is now, try x:412 instead to make it slightly more comfortable.
00:23:092 (1,2) - Hmm, I think this section would be nice to move to the left, both because to it, the movement is slightly uncomfortable, and from it, the dash is a little too ambiguous. Try x:208 on this section.
00:29:722 (1,2,1,2) - Very repetitive movement here, maybe try a slight pattern change but with similar distances? Curving sliders and such could be a nice way to do this.
00:36:352 (1,2) - Not really a fan of having a dash to 1 and a dash to 2, I think just a dash to 2 would be nicer for a salad difficulty. Try x:84 on this section.
00:41:656 (1) - This one isn't very strong, probably best to avoid having a dash to this. Try x:368.

[Platter]

00:22:263 (2) - Maybe to show the increase in intensity in the music, have a dash between these ones to have some variance compared to previous sections. x:192 would be nice.
00:44:307 (1) - A HDash to this would be nice for the pitch change, try x:480 and making it a vertical slider, that plays really nice in my opinion.

Really nice platter.

[Rain]

00:08:175 (4) - Flow on this backforth feels a little off, try x:356 is good.
00:18:948 (6) - Moving this to the left makes the flow of the stream feel a lot better. x:244 would be really good.
00:24:252 (6) - Here, the flow of the stream could be nicer too, because currently there's a speedup followed by a slowdown which leads to weird play. Try x:56 on this.
00:45:468 (6) - Flow on this stream is also really bad due to the distance to 7 being shorter than distance to 6 despite the fact that should be a speedup for preparation for the HDash. Try moving this note to x:404, makes the flow on this stream a lot better.

Alright done. Call me back.

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

I got called. Not modding much at all right now due to real life stuff, but this is the least I can do.

[Cup]

00:08:506 (1) - Maybe a slightly higher distance to emphasise the strength of this sound which you even emphasised yourself with a finish hitsound. x:228 works well.
00:16:462 (1) - Considering the significant pitch change to this, a higher distance both to and from it would be well fitting for emphasis on that. Try x:120.
00:18:451 (2,3) - Again, distance to 2 here feels very underwhelming because of the strength of that note. Try moving this section to x:96.
00:21:766 (1,2,3) - Two things here, once again, the distancing feels kinda underemphasised, but also, the movement has felt quite repetitive here, and this'd be a nice time for a quick direction change to try to make it feel less so. Try Ctrl+H on this section and move it to x:368.
00:28:396 (1) - For the higher pitch here, a slightly higher distance would be nice. Maybe try x:236.
00:44:307 (1) - Maybe move it a bit more to the left for more emphasis on this than the previous double, x:228 works well.

(All suggestion were applied.)

[Salad]

00:03:203 (1) - Try x:460 on here. It's a very minor change, but I think it's a nice slight adjustment for dash movement.(Done)
00:09:832 (1) - Slightly uncomfortable movement as it is now, try x:412 instead to make it slightly more comfortable. (Done too.)
00:23:092 (1,2) - Hmm, I think this section would be nice to move to the left, both because to it, the movement is slightly uncomfortable, and from it, the dash is a little too ambiguous. Try x:208 on this section.(Moved)
00:29:722 (1,2,1,2) - Very repetitive movement here, maybe try a slight pattern change but with similar distances? Curving sliders and such could be a nice way to do this. (Well, I did something, but I'm not so satisfied, maybe ask for options, since none are coupled with the patterns.)
00:36:352 (1,2) - Not really a fan of having a dash to 1 and a dash to 2, I think just a dash to 2 would be nicer for a salad difficulty. Try x:84 on this section. (Dash removed.)
00:41:656 (1) - This one isn't very strong, probably best to avoid having a dash to this. Try x:368. (I do not want them to be so close, I decided to move them a bit of what was suggested.)

[Platter]

00:22:263 (2) - Maybe to show the increase in intensity in the music, have a dash between these ones to have some variance compared to previous sections. x:192 would be nice. (Sure.)
00:44:307 (1) - A HDash to this would be nice for the pitch change, try x:480 and making it a vertical slider, that plays really nice in my opinion. (Done, but slider made it semi-vertical.)

Really nice platter.

[Rain]

00:08:175 (4) - Flow on this backforth feels a little off, try x:356 is good. (I feel it's not a bad idea to cut back a little, done.)
00:18:948 (6) - Moving this to the left makes the flow of the stream feel a lot better. x:244 would be really good. (I feel very close, I feel that 254 would be better, in neutral term.)
00:24:252 (6) - Here, the flow of the stream could be nicer too, because currently there's a speedup followed by a slowdown which leads to weird play. Try x:56 on this. (Don't see a critical change, but sure.)
00:45:468 (6) - Flow on this stream is also really bad due to the distance to 7 being shorter than distance to 6 despite the fact that should be a speedup for preparation for the HDash. Try moving this note to x:404, makes the flow on this stream a lot better. (It looks like a ladder, but done.)

Mod replied with the consent of Xinely.


Alright done. Call me back.

Thanks for the mod, was really helpful, just waiting for Nely and go ahead, an JBH thanks for the first bubble.

Everything here looks good to me now.

Qualified <3

Congrats

Set doesn't show up when you type "pokemon" bc the one in the tags has the accented é lol

if you want to quick fix you can just get a qat to dq/requalify since it's minor

Thanks all for the support, sure Sinnoh, will be fixed right now, If there is anything else that stands out, say it now or keep it quiet forever.

nah, set is good. just data stuff

ポケットモンスター エメラルド should be also removed from tags since it's in the source, but keep ポケモン

that said zirox wants to look at it

Actually, "pokémon" is correct as the original title has an accented e as well. It would be better to add both type of tag instead.

Yeah both are meant to be there, didn't mean to imply removing it.

also cup 00:16:462 (1,1) - 00:24:418 (1,1) - 00:40:827 (1,1) - are these ncs really needed

Thanks Sinnoh, NC's removed, and tags are updated, so we can try again.

Hello, no kds please!

Cup: 00:22:263 (2) - Could be spaced further because they look like previous 1/1 patterns when this is an actual 3/2 pattern
00:37:678 (1,1) - Also, these 2 spinners look kinda lazy actually. Hmm, would suggest replacing the first one for a slider, or just merge them into a single spinner.

Rest looks pretty solid.
Good luck~

All fixed Yuii, thank you very much.

Re:pairing

I said I wanted to take a look, sorry for taking so long. Still, better doing it now than after it's qualified. Popping over some concerns in Salad (ambiguous distances) and Platter (HDashes into antiflow), with some minor suggestions for the Rain.

[Cup]

1. 00:29:390 (2,1) - Rather underwhelming distance to mark the beginning of the Kiai. I'd try increasing the distance here, maybe by moving (1) to the right?
2. 00:37:678 (1,1) - I know there's a 3/2 distance between the spinner and the slider, but the timing to do this might be a bit to tight should players take the rightmost route in the spinner, which has the most bananas. Maybe moving 00:40:827 (1) - to the right and reworking 00:41:656 (2,3) - a bit (for example, making (2) horizontal and (3) vertical instead) could improve this.

[Salad]

1. 00:04:362 (4,1,2) - Kinda harsh movement for a Salad: (4,1) is walkable, although that's hard, meaning that players only need to hold the dash key for a tiny amount of time. You can't expect that kind of control of the dash at this level. Furthermore, this short dash is followed by an antiflow movement, which can be quite hard to catch for players should they overshoot the dash. I suggest moving (1) a bit to the right, to make the dash even clearer, and also moving the next few objects to reduce the distance (compared to the current distance) between (1,2), to add some leniency. And if you never intended this to be a dash, then you should reduce the distance instead.
2. 00:05:523 (3,1,2) - This pattern also suffers from a similar issue, with the addition of the dash being preceded by an antiflow movement between 00:05:523 (3,1) - . I'd suggest you move (1) to the right instead, making sure that the dash is clear enough, as suggested previously (or reduce the distance, if you never intended it to be a dash)
3. 00:09:666 (4,1) - This is totally walkable, which makes it inconsistent with the patterns mentioned above, as the sounds are the same.
4. 00:12:484 (2,3) - Kinda ambiguous distance here. I would reduce it, since having a dash to and from the slider feels a bit too much. You can do so by moving the sliderhead to x:160
5. 00:13:810 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The 1/2 distances between these objects are a bit ambiguous. They are large compared to 1/2 distances that are clearly walkable (e.g. 00:19:114 (1,2,3) - ), so they should be reduced to make it clear that they're intended to be walked.
6. 00:14:805 (3,1) - Do you intend this to be dashed? If so, you should try increasing the distance to make it clearer.
7. 00:20:109 (3,1) - If you intended this to be dashed, I'd try to make it a bit larger, as it feels a bit short compared to 00:18:451 (3,1) - and 00:21:435 (3,1) - . If you intended it to be walked, reduce the distance a bit.
8. 00:26:241 (4,5) - This distance feels a bit large for a walk, compared with other 1/2 walkable distances (e.g. 00:28:396 (1,2,3,4) - ), so I would make it shorter.
9. 00:24:418 (1,2) - I'd make the distance a bit larger (take 00:26:738 (5,1) - as reference) to make the dash clearer.
10. 00:31:711 (2,1) - Kinda underwhelming distance for an object that's emphasized with a finish. I'd try to make the distance larger.
11. 00:41:324 (3,1) - Ambiguous distance once again, if you intend this to be walked I'd reduce it a bit.
12. 00:43:976 (3,1) - This is also ambiguous to play, as players wouldn't expect a dash based on 00:41:324 (3,1) - , which are similar sounds but don't require a dash. If you intended this to be a dash, you could try making the distance larger by moving (1) to the left.

[Platter]

1. 00:03:700 (3,4,5) - Not clear whether you want to have these dashed or walked. Also, it's kinda weird that the distance to the downbeat at 00:04:528 - is smaller than the distance to the previous object.
2. 00:05:854 (1,2) - This distance is rather ambiguous, as in most cases it requires a tiny dash press, and it's followed by a dash in the other direction. I think it would be better if you make it walkable instead. I think that, in order to keep the HDash between 00:06:186 (2,3) -, you could move 00:04:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - to the left a bit (maybe x:224).
3. 00:12:153 (4,1,2,3,4) - To me this is a HDash followed by an antiflow movement, and therefore unrankable under the current RC. Maybe you can move (1) to the left, to stack it vertically with the following circle.
4. 00:16:131 (3,1) - ^Same. In this case, you could curve the slider so that the initial part is vertical or goes slightly to the left.
5. 00:25:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distances don't look that different (comparing (1,2) with (2,3) and (3,4) with (4,5)), so the pattern might be looked as walkable, which it is not. I suggest you move (2) and (4) closer to the previous slider a bit, making those distances ((1,2) and (3,4) more walkable, and the dashes ((2,3) and (4,5)) clearer.
6. 00:30:053 (2,3) - , 00:31:379 (2,3) -, 00:35:357 (2,3) - and 00:36:020 (4,1) - could all be considered antiflow movement following an HDash. Making the sliders more vertical and tweaking the ones following them should do it.
7. 00:33:202 (5,6,1) - I don't get why (5,6) is larger than (6,1). It should be the other way around, as (1) is the downbeat.

[Rain]

1. 00:00:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Aren't these a bit harsh considering this is the begining of the song? The way these streams are shaped require a slight antiflow movement (for (3,4,5)) or a more intense one (for (6,1,2)). Maybe starting with easier, normal flowing variants like 00:01:527 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be better.
2. 00:10:827 (4) - I'd move this slightly to the right, as to give some leniency. It might be hard to catch at times should players overshoot the 1/4 HDash.
3. 00:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - The distances between these objects feels a bit tight considering the antiflow movements involved. Maybe reducing the distance to ~x1.4, like other dashes, could make the pattern more comfortable to play.
4. 00:37:678 (1,2,3,4) - ^Similar stuff for these, for those that have larger distances, i.e. (1,2) and (3,4)
5. 00:39:004 (1,2) - The sound at (2) doesn't feel that strong to require this type of antiflow movement. I'd put it closer to (1).

changed everything on zirox's mod

ZiRoX wrote:

I said I wanted to take a look, sorry for taking so long. Still, better doing it now than after it's qualified. Popping over some concerns in Salad (ambiguous distances) and Platter (HDashes into antiflow), with some minor suggestions for the Rain.

[Cup]

1. 00:29:390 (2,1) - Rather underwhelming distance to mark the beginning of the Kiai. I'd try increasing the distance here, maybe by moving (1) to the right?(Sure, moved to the right to add more distance.)
2. 00:37:678 (1,1) - I know there's a 3/2 distance between the spinner and the slider, but the timing to do this might be a bit to tight should players take the rightmost route in the spinner, which has the most bananas. Maybe moving 00:40:827 (1) - to the right and reworking 00:41:656 (2,3) - a bit (for example, making (2) horizontal and (3) vertical instead) could improve this. (Changed, but i did something similar.)

[Salad]

1. 00:04:362 (4,1,2) - Kinda harsh movement for a Salad: (4,1) is walkable, although that's hard, meaning that players only need to hold the dash key for a tiny amount of time. You can't expect that kind of control of the dash at this level. Furthermore, this short dash is followed by an antiflow movement, which can be quite hard to catch for players should they overshoot the dash. I suggest moving (1) a bit to the right, to make the dash even clearer, and also moving the next few objects to reduce the distance (compared to the current distance) between (1,2), to add some leniency. And if you never intended this to be a dash, then you should reduce the distance instead. (JBH commented that it was not appropriate to add a dash between those notes, which is why I will reduce distances.)
2. 00:05:523 (3,1,2) - This pattern also suffers from a similar issue, with the addition of the dash being preceded by an antiflow movement between 00:05:523 (3,1) - . I'd suggest you move (1) to the right instead, making sure that the dash is clear enough, as suggested previously (or reduce the distance, if you never intended it to be a dash) (1 moved a bit to th right, seems better now.)
3. 00:09:666 (4,1) - This is totally walkable, which makes it inconsistent with the patterns mentioned above, as the sounds are the same. (I will not add a dash there either.)
4. 00:12:484 (2,3) - Kinda ambiguous distance here. I would reduce it, since having a dash to and from the slider feels a bit too much. You can do so by moving the sliderhead to x:160 (Moved.)
5. 00:13:810 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The 1/2 distances between these objects are a bit ambiguous. They are large compared to 1/2 distances that are clearly walkable (e.g. 00:19:114 (1,2,3) - ), so they should be reduced to make it clear that they're intended to be walked. (Distances reduced.)
6. 00:14:805 (3,1) - Do you intend this to be dashed? If so, you should try increasing the distance to make it clearer. (No, I did not want to add a dash between those notes.)
7. 00:20:109 (3,1) - If you intended this to be dashed, I'd try to make it a bit larger, as it feels a bit short compared to 00:18:451 (3,1) - and 00:21:435 (3,1) - . If you intended it to be walked, reduce the distance a bit. (I did not want to add a jump there, as compared to the other patterns their sound is not so prominent.)
8. 00:26:241 (4,5) - This distance feels a bit large for a walk, compared with other 1/2 walkable distances (e.g. 00:28:396 (1,2,3,4) - ), so I would make it shorter. (Distance reduced without losing a dash between (5,1).
9. 00:24:418 (1,2) - I'd make the distance a bit larger (take 00:26:738 (5,1) - as reference) to make the dash clearer. (Done.)
10. 00:31:711 (2,1) - Kinda underwhelming distance for an object that's emphasized with a finish. I'd try to make the distance larger.( Distance added.)
11. 00:41:324 (3,1) - Ambiguous distance once again, if you intend this to be walked I'd reduce it a bit.(Don't want to be walked, dash added.)
12. 00:43:976 (3,1) - This is also ambiguous to play, as players wouldn't expect a dash based on 00:41:324 (3,1) - , which are similar sounds but don't require a dash. If you intended this to be a dash, you could try making the distance larger by moving (1) to the left.(Dash added too.)

[Platter]

1. 00:03:700 (3,4,5) - Not clear whether you want to have these dashed or walked. Also, it's kinda weird that the distance to the downbeat at 00:04:528 - is smaller than the distance to the previous object.
2. 00:05:854 (1,2) - This distance is rather ambiguous, as in most cases it requires a tiny dash press, and it's followed by a dash in the other direction. I think it would be better if you make it walkable instead. I think that, in order to keep the HDash between 00:06:186 (2,3) -, you could move 00:04:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - to the left a bit (maybe x:224).
3. 00:12:153 (4,1,2,3,4) - To me this is a HDash followed by an antiflow movement, and therefore unrankable under the current RC. Maybe you can move (1) to the left, to stack it vertically with the following circle.
4. 00:16:131 (3,1) - ^Same. In this case, you could curve the slider so that the initial part is vertical or goes slightly to the left.
5. 00:25:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distances don't look that different (comparing (1,2) with (2,3) and (3,4) with (4,5)), so the pattern might be looked as walkable, which it is not. I suggest you move (2) and (4) closer to the previous slider a bit, making those distances ((1,2) and (3,4) more walkable, and the dashes ((2,3) and (4,5)) clearer.
6. 00:30:053 (2,3) - , 00:31:379 (2,3) -, 00:35:357 (2,3) - and 00:36:020 (4,1) - could all be considered antiflow movement following an HDash. Making the sliders more vertical and tweaking the ones following them should do it.
7. 00:33:202 (5,6,1) - I don't get why (5,6) is larger than (6,1). It should be the other way around, as (1) is the downbeat.
   (All suggestions were applied, thanks.)

Updated with Nely's changes.

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