Kitsune^2 - He Has No Mittens

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SaltKing wrote:

Hi, my part of M4M there~


[Pencil's Mittenless]
  1. 00:06:322 (2) - Place anchor on a middle fix
  2. Definitely add some sliders to the map, spam of singletaps isn't really that fun to play (you can see that on for example Crescendo) it was meant to be like quaver actually ‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
  3. 00:07:537 - 00:08:822 - Like in previous diff, you skipped some 1/4 sounds, which could be mapped to add some variety (I pointed only few of them) ^
    [*00:31:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think you made spacing there a bit too big (song is 210bpm after all) edited it slightly
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Peuniak
Hi, M4M :)

Timing is a little bit off, offset=2023 fits much more imo.

It's very hard to mod this, whole map looks just like a random object spam without any kind of concept, you have lots to work on.
(When I'll type [O] it means something like "this overlap looks bad and fix it", there are tons of them)
00:02:322 (3,6) - [O]
00:03:465 (9,2) - replace 2 with 9 rotated for 180 degrees, those 4 sliders in intro look very random, they do not refer to each other in any way
00:04:322 (3) - NC instead of 00:04:465 (1) (actually NCs in this map is some kind of catastrophe, just make NC on every 4th white tick (this higher one) and everything will be done correctly)
00:04:609 (3,6) - [O]
00:04:894 (5,1) - [O]
00:09:894 (4,1) - [O]
00:13:179 (9,3) - [O]
00:13:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why 5 isn't stacked with 1
00:16:037 (6,4) - [O] (sliderend with circle)
00:37:037 (2,5) - [O]
For now, you have a big lack of knowledge about aesthetics, object placement, concepts and literally everything. Please read more forums and research as much as you can.
I can't understand this jump spam, it's very boring. Also you started placing sliders at the beginning like 00:04:894 (4,1,2), but then you start spamming with circles without any slider, decide if you want more sliders or if you want a quaver-like map. Also there's not much to mod because jumps and streams are ok, and this map is just purely jumps and streams, no actual map.
00:05:751 (8,9,2) - those 2 circles look bad according to slider, I'd stack 8 with sliderend for sure
00:25:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why these jumps are so damn big without any changes in music, this feels very overmapped
00:31:465 (1,2,3) - you can definitely hear a one long sound instead of 3
Topic Starter
-Alcaida
[quote="Peuniak"]Hi, M4M :)

Timing is a little bit off, offset=2023 fits much more imo. Fixed

It's very hard to mod this, whole map looks just like a random object spam without any kind of concept, you have lots to work on.
(When I'll type [O] it means something like "this overlap looks bad and fix it", there are tons of them)
00:02:322 (3,6) - [O] Fixed
00:03:465 (9,2) - replace 2 with 9 rotated for 180 degrees, those 4 sliders in intro look very random, they do not refer to each other in any way
00:04:322 (3) - NC instead of 00:04:465 (1) (actually NCs in this map is some kind of catastrophe, just make NC on every 4th white tick (this higher one) and everything will be done correctly) Fixed
00:04:609 (3,6) - [O] Fixed
00:04:894 (5,1) - [O] what for
00:09:894 (4,1) - [O] Fixed
00:13:179 (9,3) - [O]Fixed
00:13:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why 5 isn't stacked with 1 Oops
00:16:037 (6,4) - [O] (sliderend with circle) Fixed
00:37:037 (2,5) - [O] Fixed
For now, you have a big lack of knowledge about aesthetics, object placement, concepts and literally everything. Please read more forums and research as much as you can.

Thank you!
Vanilla
smol m4m by noob


00:05:179 (5,2) - you mapped 5 as a slider with a reverse arrow, and 2 has the same sound, but its a normal slider
00:07:465 (3,4) - ^ if you map the sound once, pls always map it
00:08:751 (4,1) - 00:09:751 (3,4) - 00:10:894 (3,4) - 00:12:037 (3,4) - 00:14:322 (3,4) - 00:15:465 (3,4) - 00:16:608 (3,4) - 00:17:894 (4,1) - 00:18:894 (3,4) - 00:20:037 (3,4) - 00:21:179 (3,4) -00:24:894 (1,2) - 00:26:037 (1,2) - 00:26:751 (2,1) - 00:37:179 (3,4) - 00:38:322 (3,4) - 00:39:465 (3,4) - 00:40:751 (4,1) - 00:41:750 (3,4) - 00:42:893 (3,4) - 00:44:037 (3,4)
that will make the map way more playable, becouse less things to click, and well, clicking fast is tiring xd

00:13:179 (7) - a sound on red tick which is just completly ignored
00:22:608 (1,2) - sound on blue tick
00:23:179 (1,2) - ^
00:23:750 (1,2) - ^

00:25:464 (1,2) - ^
00:24:322 (1,2) - sound on blue tick between sliders

00:27:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - rofl
every circle on every second blue tick, starting at 00:27:393 (4) - (00:27:679 (8) - 00:27:965 (12) - 00:28:251 (16) - etc) is mapped to nothing. consider making circle before a slider

00:45:465 (1,2) - sound on blue tick again
00:46:036 (1,2) - ^
00:46:607 (1,2) - ^
00:47:322 (2,1) - ^
00:47:465 (1,2) - maybe space them out more? they are intense sounds
00:47:751 (1,2) - blue tick
00:48:322 (1,2) - ^
00:48:893 (1,2) - ^

00:49:179 (3,4,1) - you mapped this way different than here 00:44:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
unsnapped timing points broke the map
00:07:451 (4,5,6) - wtf xd, so random
00:23:451 (2,3,4,5) - same, the rest of the burst are spaced, and this is well, just in one place
00:26:308 (2) - if you keep making the player hit 5-stacks, then just keep doing that, its so random
00:46:308 (1) - ^
00:46:880 (2,3,4,5) - 3x above
00:47:737 (1,2,3,4) - mapped way different than at other parts with same sound
the whole map is well, confusing, but maybe that was your intention so idk
00:08:465 (9,10,11) - just no
00:22:608 (1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - what the actual fuck
00:27:751 (3) - ? something is missing after that slider
00:29:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pls dont
00:35:894 (1,2,3,1) - not even stacked properly
00:41:179 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont doooooo thaaaaaaaat
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/603999 my map
Topic Starter
-Alcaida

- Vanilla - wrote:

smol m4m by noob




unsnapped timing points broke the map
00:07:451 (4,5,6) - wtf xd, so random :thinking:
00:23:451 (2,3,4,5) - same, the rest of the burst are spaced, and this is well, just in one place ???
00:26:308 (2) - if you keep making the player hit 5-stacks, then just keep doing that, its so random Fixed
00:46:308 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:46:880 (2,3,4,5) - 3x above no.tnx
00:47:737 (1,2,3,4) - mapped way different than at other parts with same sound
the whole map is well, confusing, but maybe that was your intention so idk thinking about sliders
00:08:465 (9,10,11) - just no why?
00:22:608 (1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - what the actual fuck 2007's mapping
00:27:751 (3) - ? something is missing after that slider I did it on purpose
00:29:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pls dont why?
00:35:894 (1,2,3,1) - not even stacked properly Fixed
00:41:179 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont doooooo thaaaaaaaat why?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/603999 my map
I mod it tomorrow
Thanks!
PencilK

Peuniak wrote:

Hi, M4M :)

I can't understand this jump spam, it's very boring. Also you started placing sliders at the beginning like 00:04:894 (4,1,2), but then you start spamming with circles without any slider, decide if you want more sliders or if you want a quaver-like map. Also there's not much to mod because jumps and streams are ok, and this map is just purely jumps and streams, no actual map. after the slider honestly i decided to go for a quaver-ish style map, i think it came out well(?)
00:05:751 (8,9,2) - those 2 circles look bad according to slider, I'd stack 8 with sliderend for sure fix
00:25:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why these jumps are so damn big without any changes in music, this feels very overmapped fix
00:31:465 (1,2,3) - you can definitely hear a one long sound instead of 3 its to the drums
will put in updated diff with the 2nd mod~
PencilK

- Vanilla - wrote:

smol m4m by noob


00:05:179 (5,2) - you mapped 5 as a slider with a reverse arrow, and 2 has the same sound, but its a normal slider fix
00:07:465 (3,4) - ^ if you map the sound once, pls always map it
00:08:751 (4,1) - 00:09:751 (3,4) - 00:10:894 (3,4) - 00:12:037 (3,4) - 00:14:322 (3,4) - 00:15:465 (3,4) - 00:16:608 (3,4) - 00:17:894 (4,1) - 00:18:894 (3,4) - 00:20:037 (3,4) - 00:21:179 (3,4) -00:24:894 (1,2) - 00:26:037 (1,2) - 00:26:751 (2,1) - 00:37:179 (3,4) - 00:38:322 (3,4) - 00:39:465 (3,4) - 00:40:751 (4,1) - 00:41:750 (3,4) - 00:42:893 (3,4) - 00:44:037 (3,4)
that will make the map way more playable, becouse less things to click, and well, clicking fast is tiring xd quaver style says "aw heaylll no"

00:13:179 (7) - a sound on red tick which is just completly ignored nah, mapping to the main melody. adding note there feels bad
00:22:608 (1,2) - sound on blue tick sound feels too soft to be mapped to, if i were mapping to the BG then sure
00:23:179 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:23:750 (1,2) - ^ ^

00:25:464 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:24:322 (1,2) - sound on blue tick between sliders hm, sounds good.

00:27:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - rofl
every circle on every second blue tick, starting at 00:27:393 (4) - (00:27:679 (8) - 00:27:965 (12) - 00:28:251 (16) - etc) is mapped to nothing. consider making circle before a slider mapped to the background sounds

00:45:465 (1,2) - sound on blue tick again ^
00:46:036 (1,2) - ^^
00:46:607 (1,2) - ^^
00:47:322 (2,1) - ^^
00:47:465 (1,2) - maybe space them out more? they are intense sounds its intense but when you play the pattern as a whole it *should* make sense in spacing terms
00:47:751 (1,2) - blue tick ^
00:48:322 (1,2) - ^^
00:48:893 (1,2) - ^^

00:49:179 (3,4,1) - you mapped this way different than here 00:44:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) i dont think i understand, whats wrong with it?
thank u for mod <3

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Skull-Knight

SaltKing wrote:

Hi, my part of M4M there~
[General]
  1. Delete source, according to ranking criteria album's name can't be in there. You can still add it to tags tho


[Skull-Knight's Normal]
  1. Change diff name to "SK's Normal" or "Skull's Normal"? Shorter diff names usually look better
  2. 00:03:181 (3,1) - Fix blanket fixed
  3. 00:05:466 (3,1) - On low diffs spacing between objects should be consistent since thay can confuse beginners, so fix it between them fixed
  4. 00:12:323 (2,3) - Fix blanket (you curved slider a bit too much) fixed
  5. 00:12:895 (3,2) - Ugly overlap, definitely do something with it fixed
  6. 00:19:181 (3,1) - Fix blanket (same as above) fixed
  7. 00:27:181 - I really recommend you to delete slider's speed change, since this is confusing for beginner too. If you don't want to do that, at least make it smaller (x0,6 should be totally better) I don't understand
  8. 00:30:609 (4) - Why are you making such a ugly curve when you can do it nicer? (you know, something like this fixed
  9. 00:39:181 (2) - Ctrl+H and move it back at its place? fixed
  10. 00:43:181 (3) - NC? fixed
  11. 00:43:752 (4,5) - Why you don't copy-pasted and rotated I don't understand00:43:181 (3) - this slider? Would lok way better
    fixed
  12. 00:48:323 (3,4,5) - Rhythm messed up here because you started sliders too late and they end on strong sound, when they should start on them. Delete 3 and fix spacing I did it on purpose
  13. 00:50:038 (1) - Make it symetrical fixed



All diffs (except the last one) have very old feeling. You know, they look similar to these made years ago, and now they aren't really that fun like then. I definitely recommend you to work with this. If you have no idea how to make that, just look at bunch of random maps. Even Normal diff can look more interesting, if you really want to :D

Good luck~
Thank you!
-NeBu-
Pencil's Mittenless:

00:04:179 (4) - overlap under 00:03:894 (2) - maybe? feels better
00:05:608 (7,8) - ctrl+g or something different, current state destory flow of map

WHERE ARE THE MITTENS?:

00:19:880 (8) - I dont feel rhythm on this slider with the song
00:31:165 (1) - it should be slightly lower
00:46:880 (2,3,4,5,1) - they are wrongly placed where they stand, just remove them and place again

gl!
Topic Starter
-Alcaida

-NeBu- wrote:

WHERE ARE THE MITTENS?:

00:19:880 (8) - I dont feel rhythm on this slider with the song Fixed
00:31:165 (1) - it should be slightly lower Fixed
00:46:880 (2,3,4,5,1) - they are wrongly placed where they stand, just remove them and place again Fixed

gl!
Thanks!
polka
Hey! You were looking for m4ms in #modreqs! Would you like to do one in exchange or modding either https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329835 or t/375127 ?
Twiggles
FROM MY NM Q

  • 00:18:451 (4) - ugly overlap, maybe make 4 the same slider as 00:17:737 (2) - and stack it on there
  • 00:35:880 - point starts here, not the part before
  • 00:41:880 (6) - not stacked properly
  • 00:45:165 (4,5) - ugly touching
  • 00:47:594 (3,4) - ^^
  • 00:24:537 (2) - there is no sound here and this note is placed in such a weird place; it feels out of place with the rest of the song, i would just remove it
  • 00:29:465 (1) - maybe make this more of a sharper turn?
  • i think you should separate the steams into 4 notes per combo because you can hear it being in a 4/4 time (it also gets rid of the immensely high combo).
Topic Starter
-Alcaida
[quote="kookoo11"]FROM MY NM Q

  • 00:18:451 (4) - ugly overlap, maybe make 4 the same slider as 00:17:737 (2) - and stack it on there
Fixed
  • 00:35:880 - point starts here, not the part before
:thinking:
  • 00:41:880 (6) - not stacked properly
Fixed
  • 00:45:165 (4,5) - ugly touching
Fixed
  • 00:47:594 (3,4) - ^^
Fixed

Thanks!
PencilK

-NeBu- wrote:

Pencil's Mittenless:

00:04:179 (4) - overlap under 00:03:894 (2) - maybe? feels better nah, aesthetically i dont like it and i dont think the jump need to extend any further
00:05:608 (7,8) - ctrl+g or something different, current state destory flow of map fixed

gl!
thank you!
PencilK

kookoo11 wrote:

FROM MY NM Q

  • 00:24:537 (2) - there is no sound here and this note is placed in such a weird place; it feels out of place with the rest of the song, i would just remove it
ok
  • 00:29:465 (1) - maybe make this more of a sharper turn?
attempted to
  • i think you should separate the steams into 4 notes per combo because you can hear it being in a 4/4 time (it also gets rid of the immensely high combo).
nah, that stream section is to the background drums, its a 6* map anyways
thank you!

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241,45,46894,1,0,3:0:0:0:
238,66,46965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,87,47036,1,2,0:1:0:0:
234,108,47108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,129,47179,5,8,0:0:0:0:
445,54,47322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,224,47465,5,0,3:0:0:0:
295,200,47608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
11,139,47751,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,335,47894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,67,48037,1,0,3:0:0:0:
210,71,48108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,79,48179,1,2,0:1:0:0:
173,91,48251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,107,48322,5,8,0:0:0:0:
157,349,48465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,118,48608,1,0,3:0:0:0:
305,96,48679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,75,48750,1,2,0:1:0:0:
302,54,48822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,33,48893,5,8,0:0:0:0:
391,308,49037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,201,49179,1,0,3:0:0:0:
458,239,49322,1,2,0:1:0:0:
103,113,49465,5,8,0:0:0:0:
281,304,49608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,58,49751,1,0,3:0:0:0:
1,176,49894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,158,50037,5,8,0:0:0:0:
325,159,50108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,160,50179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
-Alcaida

PolkaMocha wrote:

Hey! You were looking for m4ms in #modreqs! Would you like to do one in exchange or modding either https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329835 or t/375127 ?
Sure!
I already write a mod
Dinocrit
Skull-Knight's Normal

Ничего сказать не могу кроме хитсаундов,их иногда нет,там где они должны быть (концы слайдеров в основном)

Collab Hard

00:11:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - С таким патерном игрок 3* выпрыгнет в окно
00:12:308 (1) - Я думаю немного не правильно вести игрока на место ноты (7),патерн ведет вниз,слайдер должен продолжать патерн
00:16:880 (5) - Используй новое комбо
00:17:308 (6) - Я думаю игрок не среагирует на изменение направления
00:28:880 (4) - Передвинь слайдер выше,получится квадрат и стабильный спейсинг
00:46:308 (5) - Используй новое комбо
00:47:451 (9) - ^
00:50:023 (5) - Слайдер может сбить с толку,может стоит попробовать ноту? (Можно оставить и так конечно)
Topic Starter
-Alcaida

Dinocrit wrote:

Skull-Knight's Normal

Ничего сказать не могу кроме хитсаундов,их иногда нет,там где они должны быть (концы слайдеров в основном)

Collab Hard

00:11:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - С таким патерном игрок 3* выпрыгнет в окно Пофиксил
00:12:308 (1) - Я думаю немного не правильно вести игрока на место ноты (7),патерн ведет вниз,слайдер должен продолжать патерн Пофиксил
00:16:880 (5) - Используй новое комбо Мне кажется, что здесь оно не нужно
00:17:308 (6) - Я думаю игрок не среагирует на изменение направления Не заметил, пофиксил
00:28:880 (4) - Передвинь слайдер выше,получится квадрат и стабильный спейсинг Пофиксил
Спасибо!
polka
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Хай!

M4M:)
Skull-Knight's Normal
00:02:023 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Самая большая претензия - медленное начало и затем вдвое ускоряющаяся оставшаяся часть песни.
00:19:165 (3) - все реверс-слайдеры 3 белых тика, а этот 4. Новичков может сбить с толку.
00:20:308 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - тетрис, кроссворд, etc. Может кому и понравится, но я бы перемапал.
И последнее для этой диффы - припев (киаи) очень похож на следующий куплет. Слайдер, 2 ноты, слайдер, 2 ноты. Следовало бы разнообразить.

Collab Hard
00:03:737 (4,5,6,7) - у тебя карта 210 бпм. А теперь представь что новичок уровня харда пытается это судорожно прокликать. Больше 2х (максимум трех) нот в ряд не стоит ставить.
00:11:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ну, ты понял kappa. Дальше про них писать не буду.
00:12:308 (1,2) - разница в тик, а стоят очень рядом. Раздвинь немного.
00:15:165 (5,1,2) - оверлап. Конкретный. Обжалованию не подлежит.
00:22:880 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - в жизни не прочитает тот кто играет на 3*. Всё по музыке, но лучше перемапать. Попроси друга 300 пп это пройти.
00:45:737 (3,4) - полтика разница, а какое расстояние. Это хард, а не инсейн. Ну и дальше там так же. И опять же, ^
00:49:880 (4,5,6) - и там и там полтика, а расстояние разное. Не прочтет это никто с первого раза.

Insane
00:02:023 (1,2,3) - зажми посередине курсор. Profit! А если серьезно, Осу, как сказал товарищ ASPIRIN - это движение. Причем курсора.
00:02:023 (1,2,3) - 5,5* джампы на 4,6*. Как?! (Придвинь поближе к центру экрана)
P.S. А вообще, у тебя BIG BLACK 2.0? Почему такие быстрые слайдеры? Их же никто не пройдет. (рангом в 1к пп). Хотя... может и нормально, смотри сам. ИМХО - надо медленнее. Поступай как считаешь нужным :)
00:40:308 (5) - Спорный реверс-слайд, я бы убрал. (Ну и на его место что-то соответстующее ритму).
P.P.S. А почему без министримов? В некоторых местах бы зашли, хотя 210 бпм, да...

Насчет ласт дифф, 5,91* и уж тем более 6,95* - это не мой уровень, прыгать выше головы не буду, извини.


Однако, не плохо, но и не хорошо. Есть свой стиль... Но многим такая мапа может не понравиться по причине высокого бпм совместно с высокой скоростью слайдеров (инсейн). И всё же, удачи!
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