It's updated, time for a recheck and complete mod:
General:
Sliderslide can be loud at times, consider silencing it our reducing the volume in general.
Easy:
00:36:952 (1,2,3,4) - I won't even ask for symmetry, just delete (2,3,4), and use rotated copies of (1) instead, so that the pattern is even.
01:26:790 (6,9) - Similar to above, make 9 a copy of 6.
02:05:500 (2) - Point this the other way so it doesn't overlap with (1)?
02:27:274 (9) - New combo
03:32:597 (4) - No need for a slider, just make this a circle starting at the same place. If you really want a slider, then make it 1/2 beat long instead. Also, new combo.
03:35:016 (1,2) - Make (2) the new combo instead of 1.
03:40:339 (6) - New combo
03:40:823 (7,9) - 1/4 beat is too short for these sliders, make it 1/2 instead
04:34:532 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try putting a pattern here instead of stacking.
Kissfly's Hard:
00:46:145- 00:59:694- Using patterns is good, but you have a tendency to repeat them for too long, which gets... repetitive. Try a different pattern halfway through or something.
01:11:307 (4,5,6) - - Pattern instead of a stack?
01:28:242 (1,1,1,1) - Too many new combos
01:31:145 (1) - Not new combo
01:34:532 (1) - ^
01:36:468 (1) - ^
01:38:403 (1) - ^
01:41:548 (5,6) - Spacing
01:46:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:30:661 (3,1) - ^
02:34:048-02:50:500- again, too many repeats of one pattern
02:50:500- 03:05:984- too many new combos, place them about half as often.
03:52:436-04:07:436- ^, but maybe 1/4th as often.
04:22:919- return slider velocity back to original here
04:30:661- and then to .5 again.
Lunatic:
00:09:855 (1,2,3) - Make these 1/2 beat long instead of 1/4.
00:11:790 (1,2,3) - ^
00:13:242 (4) - New combo
00:16:145-00:24:855- Don't use new combos so often, please.
00:25:339 (1) to 00:30:662 (1) - 1/2 beat long instead of 1/4th. Also, the last three don't need new combos.
00:46:629 (2,2,2) - Not sure if these are rankable, the start and end still overlap by a lot.
01:15:661-01:17:597- would be much more playable if this was a repeating slider instead.
02:19:532-02:24:371- again with the new combos...
02:34:048-02:50:621- not made for humans.
03:52:436-03:59:210- too many new combos
04:01:629 (5) - New combo here?
04:03:565- 04:07:436- guess what I'll point out here?
Stream at the end- at least it's not in 1/8th...
Lunatic could actually make a decent, rankable Insane if the long and impossible streams were cut out...
It looks better since I last checked it, and since the timing is corrected to be in 1/3rd, I can star this now! Just try and avoid using new combos every other circle, since it diminishes the uniqueness of new combos.
General:
Sliderslide can be loud at times, consider silencing it our reducing the volume in general.
Easy:
00:36:952 (1,2,3,4) - I won't even ask for symmetry, just delete (2,3,4), and use rotated copies of (1) instead, so that the pattern is even.
01:26:790 (6,9) - Similar to above, make 9 a copy of 6.
02:05:500 (2) - Point this the other way so it doesn't overlap with (1)?
02:27:274 (9) - New combo
03:32:597 (4) - No need for a slider, just make this a circle starting at the same place. If you really want a slider, then make it 1/2 beat long instead. Also, new combo.
03:35:016 (1,2) - Make (2) the new combo instead of 1.
03:40:339 (6) - New combo
03:40:823 (7,9) - 1/4 beat is too short for these sliders, make it 1/2 instead
04:34:532 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try putting a pattern here instead of stacking.
Kissfly's Hard:
00:46:145- 00:59:694- Using patterns is good, but you have a tendency to repeat them for too long, which gets... repetitive. Try a different pattern halfway through or something.
01:11:307 (4,5,6) - - Pattern instead of a stack?
01:28:242 (1,1,1,1) - Too many new combos
01:31:145 (1) - Not new combo
01:34:532 (1) - ^
01:36:468 (1) - ^
01:38:403 (1) - ^
01:41:548 (5,6) - Spacing
01:46:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:30:661 (3,1) - ^
02:34:048-02:50:500- again, too many repeats of one pattern
02:50:500- 03:05:984- too many new combos, place them about half as often.
03:52:436-04:07:436- ^, but maybe 1/4th as often.
04:22:919- return slider velocity back to original here
04:30:661- and then to .5 again.
Lunatic:
00:09:855 (1,2,3) - Make these 1/2 beat long instead of 1/4.
00:11:790 (1,2,3) - ^
00:13:242 (4) - New combo
00:16:145-00:24:855- Don't use new combos so often, please.
00:25:339 (1) to 00:30:662 (1) - 1/2 beat long instead of 1/4th. Also, the last three don't need new combos.
00:46:629 (2,2,2) - Not sure if these are rankable, the start and end still overlap by a lot.
01:15:661-01:17:597- would be much more playable if this was a repeating slider instead.
02:19:532-02:24:371- again with the new combos...
02:34:048-02:50:621- not made for humans.
03:52:436-03:59:210- too many new combos
04:01:629 (5) - New combo here?
04:03:565- 04:07:436- guess what I'll point out here?
Stream at the end- at least it's not in 1/8th...
Lunatic could actually make a decent, rankable Insane if the long and impossible streams were cut out...
It looks better since I last checked it, and since the timing is corrected to be in 1/3rd, I can star this now! Just try and avoid using new combos every other circle, since it diminishes the uniqueness of new combos.