OVERALLFound many critical errors and mistakes... Still have a lot of room to improve.
Artist:
Ryo Ohnuki ft. nomicoSong title:
Bad Apple!! (Graph Tech Remix)Please follow
THIS THREAD to change the artist and song title.
Volume 100% is too high for Normal sample sets, please use 70~85%.
Your beatmap is too long, try shortening it to about 4 minutes.
The mp3 of the map is not complete, the ending has been cut off. Please download a complete version and do a full submit again.
I've uploaded a suitable normal sample set for you, hope you'll like it.
But remember to choose custom hitsound 1 for all timing sections in order to use them.
[attachment=0:796c3]NormalSampleSet - Techno Songs.rar[/attachment:796c3]
[Easy]00:44:694 (5) - 1 grid to the right
00:45:661 (6) - Snap perfectly to the end of (5)
00:53:887 (3) - Uneven distance snap between (2) and (4)
01:02:113 - Not a good idea to start Kiai here
01:03:565 (6) - I hate this slider
01:05:984 (5) - ^
01:06:468 (6) - ^
01:15:177 (1) - Start at 01:15:661 instead
01:21:468 (7) - Don't overlap with (6)
01:25:339 (5) - Don't overlap with previous notes
02:11:790 (1,2,3) - At least make them curvy like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10767302:44:694 - Map and start spinner at 02:46:629
03:40:823 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10767403:42:758 (4) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10767503:44:694 (1,2) - Ugly
04:15:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - Avoid 1/2 notes please (Suggestion only)
04:17:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:19:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:21:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:34:532 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
[kissfly's Hard]01:02:113 - Not a good idea to start Kiai here
01:57:758 (1,2,3,4) - Snap all ends to perfectly ONE POINT
03:28:726 (1) - Ugly slider D:
03:32:597 (1) - Distance snap please, (5) and (1) are too close
04:32:597 (1) - Remove New Combo
04:34:532 (1) - ^
[Lunatic]You used more than 3 unique slider speeds in your map, which is unrankable
00:13:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - The vocal beat is 1/3 here, not 1/4, change in into a 1/3 stream
00:15:661 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NO COMBO SPAM please ;w; Apply new combo to every 4 notes please
00:46:629 (2) - This is unrankable, don't overlap the start and the end of the slider
00:48:565 (2) - ^
00:50:500 (2) - ^
01:02:113 - Not a good idea to start Kiai here
01:07:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's the point making these? They don't even match the vocal
01:15:661 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Are you kidding?
02:19:532 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Apply new combo to every 4 notes please
02:34:048 (11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - WTH is this
03:52:436 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Apply new combo to every 4 notes please
04:03:565 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
04:38:040 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - NO. SPINNER PLEASE.
No star for now, sorry.