2016-12-21 16:23 celerih: It plays well
2016-12-21 16:23 celerih: there are just some things I think can be better
2016-12-21 16:23 celerih: Like this 01:16:998 (3) - 
2016-12-21 16:23 xChorse: I want to make it as fun as I can
2016-12-21 16:24 xChorse: since it's not gonna go for rank
2016-12-21 16:24 celerih: On this beat there is the strongest sound that can be heard for the duration of the streams
2016-12-21 16:24 celerih: buit it's not emphasizes
2016-12-21 16:24 xChorse: oh yeah
2016-12-21 16:24 celerih: that threw me off
2016-12-21 16:24 xChorse: 01:16:998 (3,5) - these should be kicksliders
2016-12-21 16:24 xChorse: imo
2016-12-21 16:24 celerih: that would work
2016-12-21 16:24 xChorse: gonna change it
2016-12-21 16:25 celerih: Also I'd ctrl-j these 01:23:619 (4,5) - 
2016-12-21 16:25 celerih: since that would play better
2016-12-21 16:25 celerih: and I'd also rotate them by like 5, but that's just how I like these
2016-12-21 16:26 xChorse: yeah gonna do that too
2016-12-21 16:26 xChorse: ctrl j but i dont wanna rotate it
2016-12-21 16:26 celerih: okay
2016-12-21 16:26 celerih: another thing is this 01:23:619 (4,5) - 
2016-12-21 16:26 celerih: nope
2016-12-21 16:27 xChorse: since i wanna keep all of these sliders the same
2016-12-21 16:27 celerih: 00:19:067 (6,7,8) - this
2016-12-21 16:27 celerih: putting the 8 a bit higher and more to the left would have the three notes be in more of a curve
2016-12-21 16:28 celerih: which I think would fit more with the slanted sliders
2016-12-21 16:28 xChorse: wanted same spacing here 00:19:274 (7,8,1) -
2016-12-21 16:28 xChorse: so made them spaced out evenly and in the same direction
2016-12-21 16:28 xChorse: works pretty nice imo
2016-12-21 16:28 xChorse: for aesthetics anyways
2016-12-21 16:29 celerih: both do work
2016-12-21 16:29 celerih: another thing is in the section, you follow the sharp synth-like sounds
2016-12-21 16:29 celerih: but not here 00:25:688 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-12-21 16:29 celerih: where you follow the bass
2016-12-21 16:30 celerih: I get why you switch what you're following here
2016-12-21 16:30 celerih: 00:26:515 (1) - 
2016-12-21 16:30 celerih: but not before it
2016-12-21 16:30 celerih: I think it should be kicksliders on 00:25:688 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-12-21 16:31 xChorse: the bass there sounds stronger imo
2016-12-21 16:31 xChorse: but i can change it
2016-12-21 16:31 celerih: It would be more consistent with what you were mapping before
2016-12-21 16:32 xChorse: yeah
2016-12-21 16:35 celerih: that's pretty much it
2016-12-21 16:35 celerih: I like a lot of the sliders, so that's always a good sign
2016-12-21 16:35 xChorse: haven't done this before
2016-12-21 16:36 xChorse: doing a collab with someone actually inspired me a lot

2016-12-23 20:50 -Bumblebee-: Yo
2016-12-23 20:50 xChorse: Hey
2016-12-23 20:53 -Bumblebee-: 00:10:377 (2,4) - this part shoulda be kinda 00:12:033 (2,4) - this
2016-12-23 20:54 xChorse: hmmm
2016-12-23 20:54 -Bumblebee-: 00:16:067 - why no stream? :(
2016-12-23 20:54 xChorse: the second one is spaced more because of the sound on 00:12:446 -
2016-12-23 20:55 -Bumblebee-: I see
2016-12-23 20:55 -Bumblebee-: In that case, you can also emphasize it with a NC, but it's up to you :))
2016-12-23 20:55 xChorse: no stream because that part is focused on the synths since the other sounds are more quiet
2016-12-23 20:55 -Bumblebee-: 00:16:584 (1,2) - this blanket tho
2016-12-23 20:56 xChorse: a lot of blankets got messed up
2016-12-23 20:56 xChorse: when i changed stack leniency
2016-12-23 20:56 xChorse: gonna go through all of them later
2016-12-23 20:56 -Bumblebee-: Alright
2016-12-23 20:57 -Bumblebee-: Mmmm
2016-12-23 20:58 -Bumblebee-: 00:35:826 (6,7) - why it's not equal as 00:28:998 (6,7,8) - ?
2016-12-23 20:59 xChorse: there are unique sounds on these 00:29:101 -
2016-12-23 20:59 xChorse: but the other one has it only in 1 place so it doesn't really stand out
2016-12-23 20:59 xChorse: 00:35:722 -
2016-12-23 21:00 -Bumblebee-: Okay
2016-12-23 21:00 -Bumblebee-: 00:54:239 (2) - NC per slider velocity change
2016-12-23 21:00 xChorse: I wanted to put a burst on the 2nd one
2016-12-23 21:00 xChorse: but it felt really random in gameplay
2016-12-23 21:00 -Bumblebee-: 00:54:033 (1) - this NC spam isn't necessary here tbh
2016-12-23 21:00 xChorse: current just goes well
2016-12-23 21:00 xChorse: 00:54:033 (2) - accidental
2016-12-23 21:00 xChorse: removed
2016-12-23 21:01 -Bumblebee-: I'll try to do a gameplay later ^^
2016-12-23 21:01 -Bumblebee-: 00:55:481 (3) - same as before
2016-12-23 21:01 -Bumblebee-: 00:56:722 (2) - ^
2016-12-23 21:01 -Bumblebee-: Well
2016-12-23 21:01 -Bumblebee-: You can change them by yourself, don't you? :)
2016-12-23 21:01 xChorse: yeah
2016-12-23 21:02 -Bumblebee-: 00:59:619 (1,2) - fix this blanket either lol
2016-12-23 21:02 xChorse: this one is fine tho
2016-12-23 21:02 xChorse: i think
2016-12-23 21:02 -Bumblebee-: Well
2016-12-23 21:03 xChorse: oh nvm moved 00:59:619 (1) - tail higher
2016-12-23 21:03 -Bumblebee-: lol
2016-12-23 21:03 -Bumblebee-: 01:05:826 (5,6,7,8) - why this DS change on this stream?
2016-12-23 21:04 xChorse: volume increases
2016-12-23 21:04 -Bumblebee-: You should increase DS for each circle then
2016-12-23 21:04 -Bumblebee-: Not for the first and the second one only :)
2016-12-23 21:04 xChorse: plays bad as well
2016-12-23 21:05 xChorse: like this it's pretty consistent with the spacing in the section before
2016-12-23 21:05 -Bumblebee-: 01:07:481 (5,6,7,8) - 00:27:757 (8) - why? D:
2016-12-23 21:05 xChorse: like the spaced streams
2016-12-23 21:05 -Bumblebee-: would be better to keep it consistent imo
2016-12-23 21:06 xChorse: idk i just chose the same rhythm as the ranked one here xd
2016-12-23 21:06 -Bumblebee-: 01:32:308 (5,2) - fix this (just a pixel :P)
2016-12-23 21:06 xChorse: since it works well
2016-12-23 21:07 -Bumblebee-: Fort's map sucks imo
2016-12-23 21:07 -Bumblebee-: I don't like it too much
2016-12-23 21:07 xChorse: deetz diff
2016-12-23 21:07 xChorse: is so good imo
2016-12-23 21:07 -Bumblebee-: So please, don't do the same mistakes D:
2016-12-23 21:08 xChorse: the majority of people disagree :D
2016-12-23 21:08 xChorse: also I'm not really going for rank, just want to make the map as fun as possible and hope for loved someday
2016-12-23 21:08 -Bumblebee-: I'm the majority of people u.u
2016-12-23 21:08 -Bumblebee-: 01:45:964 (7) - NC
2016-12-23 21:09 xChorse: ok
2016-12-23 21:09 -Bumblebee-: 01:42:033 (5,6,7) - 01:02:308 (1,2,3) - NC 01:42:033 (5) - here too
2016-12-23 21:10 -Bumblebee-: the rest seems good imo
2016-12-23 21:10 -Bumblebee-: Jesus
2016-12-23 21:10 -Bumblebee-: Not the rest lol
2016-12-23 21:10 -Bumblebee-: The remaining
2016-12-23 21:10 xChorse: fk i should map with another skin
2016-12-23 21:10 -Bumblebee-: Ahahahaha
2016-12-23 21:10 xChorse: gameplay skin has 1 combo color xd
2016-12-23 21:11 -Bumblebee-: change it man
2016-12-23 21:11 -Bumblebee-: Alright then, upload it and I'll do a testplay for ya
2016-12-23 21:11 xChorse: sec fixing some blankets
2016-12-23 21:12 -Bumblebee-: Sure
2016-12-23 21:12 xChorse: ok updated
2016-12-23 21:14 -Bumblebee-: Damn, I suck
2016-12-23 21:15 -Bumblebee-: Funny map though
2016-12-23 21:15 xChorse: can't wait to make it 6* when at the hard part :^)
2016-12-23 21:15 -Bumblebee-: Lol
2016-12-23 21:15 -Bumblebee-: Good luck then ^^

• 
  I like the flow of the map as it is so I'm going to comment on visuals the most. I believe this map can have its aesthetics improved without changing the flow.

1. 00:14:101 (1,1) - Can blancket a bit better. Here and later where I write "blanket" it's just a lil' bit off.
2. 00:16:584 (1,2) - Those two are similar sound with differnt pitch, so you can make them look similar. I think you can make something more interesting and visually pleasing with those. Also blanket is a bit off. For example.
3. 00:29:619 (9) - This can have the same gap as 2 kicksliders before
4. 00:52:998 (1) - blanket
5. 00:56:308 (1) - Sharp angle looks out of place
6. 01:26:515 (2) - blanket
7. 01:33:964 (1) - blanket
8. 01:36:033 (1) - blanket
9. 02:18:860 (8) - place it as smth like that to emphasize the strong synth notes here?
10. 02:32:101 (7) - smth similar^ here
11. 03:46:791 (1) - It's the first and only time you use such spacing for that kind of place. I think you should keep it consistent with others, like 03:50:101 (1) 03:53:411 (1) and 03:55:067 (1) - etc