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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, September 20, 2017 at 11:26:53 PM

Artist: RADWIMPS
Title: Hikari
Tags: Light Human Bloom 人間開花 Ningen kaika short cut version haruto_aizawa monstrata ipas newipas appleeaterx milan- rizen kalibe sotarks sytarno irohas mugiwarasekai a q p w a_q_p_w kimi no na wa nawa 君の名は。 your name
BPM: 181
Filesize: 14945kb
Play Time: 02:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. apple's Insane (4.74 stars, 542 notes)
  2. Easy (1.52 stars, 151 notes)
  3. Extra (5.41 stars, 672 notes)
  4. Ipas' Expert (5.14 stars, 563 notes)
  5. Irohas' Insane (4.01 stars, 435 notes)
  6. Kalitarks' Insane (4.59 stars, 538 notes)
  7. Milan-'s Hard (3.5 stars, 440 notes)
  8. Monstrata's Sparkle (5.58 stars, 623 notes)
  9. Normal (2.09 stars, 250 notes)
  10. Rizen's Advanced (2.66 stars, 314 notes)


Download: RADWIMPS - Hikari
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Dedicated to Monstrata, Milan-, appleeaterx and Ipas
From Haruto,
❄ Hey Guys! ❄
Thanks for being an awesome BN team back then! (mid 2015 - mid 2016) You guys might think why does one of your names on the description is bolded and has a yellow name, except Milan- and Ipas. Because both of them are a former BN so its like an indicator that they are a BN alumni. And you might as well think why you guys have a different set of hitsounding as well. Its because i wanted to make this a special mapset for you guys to remember your togetherness back then. Im happy that i could gather you guys here in one mapset. This is kind of a late surprise but yea, the surprise is supposed to came at the end hehe. Please keep being together and being awesome you guys! no matter what happened, please stay together. And again, i wish you guys had a best life in your life. Live your life the fullest :3

Your big fans,
Haruto
#32nd Beatmap
❄ #4th Ranked ❄
Easy : Haruto
Normal : Haruto
Advanced : Rizen
Hard : Milan-
Light Insane : Irohas
Insane : Kalitarks
Insane : appleeaterx
Expert : Ipas
Extra: Old : Haruto
Extra : Haruto
Sparkle : Monstrata

-♪- Storyboard by Sytarno -♪-
WARNING
To those who make SBs, and want to use Sytarno's idea of the Star effect on this map SB.
PLEASE CREDIT HIS IDEAS ON YOUR WORK OR ON THE MAP'S SB THANK YOU. (The star effect was partially my idea as well and then Sytarno coded them and used it as his usual effect)

Thank You =w=/
Metadata
http://radwimps.jp/discography/album/
Credits
Big thanks to Monstrata for accepting my GD and also the mp3 edit!
ask his permission if you want to use it~

Timing Help by Bonsai and also Monstrata! Thank you a lot, guys!
Frequently Asked Question
Q : How can Monstrata do a GD here while he dont even do GDs?
A : Well, he actually do GDs tho! You just have to simply follow his GD reqs rules in his userpage! Go check it if you want to req one from him!11!!1!
Q : Do you still have any GD slot for this map?
A : Sorry i dont want to make this a big set. The current High diff Spread of 3 Insanes and 3 Extras are now "consistent" and cant be bothered anymore.
Expired!

Q : Planning to rank this set?
A : Of course, why not. Monstrata and the others is on the map. It'll be useless to put this into the grave.
Accomplished! Yes i know there's one of my map that Monstrata is also in the set but that will be revived soon when i got a simple storyboarder.
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gl
08:54 *Haruto is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1160056 RADWIMPS - Hikari]
08:57 Kagetsu: had mouse buittons enabled for some strange reason
08:57 Haruto: k is there any problem?
08:58 Haruto: weird
08:58 Kagetsu: idk
08:59 Kagetsu: it's fine
08:59 Kagetsu: structurally-wise
08:59 Haruto: well i saw you miss some objects thats why i asked lol
08:59 Haruto: thank you~
08:59 Kagetsu: ya
08:59 Kagetsu: cuz i had mouse buttons enabled
09:00 Kagetsu: that means when i touch the tablet
09:00 Kagetsu: it counts as a click
09:00 Kagetsu: so that's why i failed i guess
09:00 Haruto: hm probably
09:01 Kagetsu: 01:13:973 - don't really agree with those jumps tho
09:01 Kagetsu: it's like
09:01 Kagetsu: too sudden
09:01 Kagetsu: also the whole previous section feels the same
09:01 Kagetsu: as the kiai
09:01 Kagetsu: spacing-wise
09:01 Kagetsu: but that's like saying
09:01 Kagetsu: remap it
09:01 Kagetsu: lol
09:01 Haruto: ah i see...
09:01 Haruto: lool
09:02 Kagetsu: also
09:02 Kagetsu: 01:15:951 (1,2) -
09:02 Kagetsu: shouldn' this have higher spacing
09:02 Kagetsu: than the previous snares?
09:02 Haruto: oh yea
09:02 Haruto: fixed
09:02 Kagetsu: i'd rather balance the previous jumps
09:02 Kagetsu: and add more spacing to these two
09:02 Haruto: alright, will do that
09:03 Kagetsu: ya
09:03 Kagetsu: the whole transition might play better that way
09:04 Kagetsu: also this one 00:35:731 (1) -
09:04 Kagetsu: felt kinda weird cuz it isn't consistent
09:04 Haruto: needs more emphasize?
09:04 Kagetsu: with previous patterns
09:04 Kagetsu: uh
09:04 Kagetsu: i mean
09:04 Kagetsu: you were doing sharp angles
09:04 Kagetsu: for these
09:05 Haruto: oh
09:05 Kagetsu: but idk... i guess it's kinda acceptable
09:05 Haruto: kinda fixed i guess with moving it like 10~20 pixels lol
09:05 Kagetsu: because that beat isn't that strong anyways
09:06 Kagetsu: ya
09:07 Kagetsu: the ending part is like a pain to play due those weird cymbals tho
09:07 Haruto: which
09:07 Haruto: the part that near to the last slider?
09:08 Kagetsu: aounrd here 02:01:445 -
09:08 Kagetsu: but it's fine
09:08 Kagetsu: it's just the music being weird
09:09 Haruto: hmm alright
09:09 Kagetsu: eh... the only thing i disagree is the calm part
09:09 Kagetsu: it feels overdone
09:09 Kagetsu: if youy compare this 01:32:764 (2,3,4,5,6) - with 00:19:742 (6,7,1,2,3) -
09:09 Haruto: ah
09:09 Haruto: yea
09:10 Kagetsu: the first one is much easier even when it's part of the kiai
09:10 Kagetsu: it just doesn't feel right
09:10 Haruto: okay, i reduced them
09:10 Kagetsu: you might want also decrease the note density
09:11 Haruto: the 1/4 beats
09:11 Kagetsu: using reverse arrows or something
09:11 Kagetsu: ya
09:11 Haruto: ya thats what im thinking
09:11 Haruto: okay
09:12 Kagetsu: 00:31:445 (5,6) - is this the only stack in the map?
09:12 Kagetsu: o wait 00:07:709 (3,4) -
09:12 Haruto: there is one on the intro
09:12 Haruto: ya
09:12 Kagetsu: idk
09:13 Kagetsu: ssuch low stack leniency doesn't really fit for the map concept i guess
09:13 Haruto: as you said, raising up the SL now lol
09:14 Kagetsu: xd
09:14 Kagetsu: good
09:14 Kagetsu: that's all i guess
09:14 Haruto: ok
09:14 Haruto: you can post in the thread if you want :d
09:15 Kagetsu: k
posted
Is this a christmas present? idk
Sorry my English feels rigid it's been so long tho haha

[Expert]
  1. 00:15:610 (1) - It doesn't sound good in my ears, somewhat skipping sound here 00:15:775 - and also this feels weird when I was trying (play) it out at the first time
  2. 00:33:089 (1) - Just personal preference tho, I found this shape kinda odd with the following pattern, change? Maybe like using normal curve looks good
  3. 00:38:365 (1,2) - Don't mind to use 3/4 too here? Similar vocals, and seems good to play since I found this kind vocals only appear there
  4. 01:18:587 (5,1) - I thought they were straight slider, the curve is too tiny they taste plain and looks plain too. I don't like if it's too curvy so I'd rather recommend to make them like 01:20:235 (6) - (Idk if it's already like 01:20:235 (6) - because of the angle makes them different)
  5. 01:26:499 (5,1) - Would place them further away, I feel less emphasis to (1) they are too close imo
posted
this song is so good. i'm down to mod the set when it's done~
posted

Ipas wrote:

Is this a christmas present? idk probably xd
Sorry my English feels rigid it's been so long tho haha Your English are fine, mine are bad lol

[Expert]
  1. 00:15:610 (1) - It doesn't sound good in my ears, somewhat skipping sound here 00:15:775 - and also this feels weird when I was trying (play) it out at the first time This is pretty fine in general, its like, an object that follows the guitar hold sound. And if there's a beat, I don't have to map that beat xP . Some maps that has some sound like this part mostly use this rhythm too.
  2. 00:33:089 (1) - Just personal preference tho, I found this shape kinda odd with the following pattern, change? Maybe like using normal curve looks good Hmm agrees, adjusted the edges a bit then.
  3. 00:38:365 (1,2) - Don't mind to use 3/4 too here? Similar vocals, and seems good to play since I found this kind vocals only appear there I think I followed the instrument more rather the vocal here, but might consider this later since I'm pretty fine with the current rhythm.
  4. 01:18:587 (5,1) - I thought they were straight slider, the curve is too tiny they taste plain and looks plain too. I don't like if it's too curvy so I'd rather recommend to make them like 01:20:235 (6) - (Idk if it's already like 01:20:235 (6) - because of the angle makes them different) Okay, adjusted the curve a bit then.
  5. 01:26:499 (5,1) - Would place them further away, I feel less emphasis to (1) they are too close imo Umm, this is intended to be a flowbreak instead an emphasize but the flowbreak works as an emphasize here, so no change for this :d.


Thanks Mate!

Logic Agent wrote:

this song is so good. i'm down to mod the set when it's done~

Thank you Logic! I'll poke you once the set and the SB has completed then :D
posted
Great song + map!

http://puu.sh/t8moZ/6c65199b30.jpg

GL with the set!
posted
http://puu.sh/t9OWa/36cae582bb.zip

4.72* - really not sure what happened with the timing and because of that hscopier wont work either xd
hope its not too copy paste-y, if i need to remove some 1/4 please tell me
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appleeaterx wrote:

http://puu.sh/t9OWa/36cae582bb.zip

4.72* - really not sure what happened with the timing and because of that hscopier wont work either xd
hope its not too copy paste-y, if i need to remove some 1/4 please tell me


Yea submitted already. Its because there's a timing change before you downloaded the newer version lol my bad didnt tell you before lul But its okay, i've fixed it and snapped every object in to the correct snapping.

Scarsnic wrote:

Great song + map!

http://puu.sh/t8moZ/6c65199b30.jpg

GL with the set!


Thank you for the testplay! Lets hope i can rank this in short time, just have to wait for current GDers right now lul.
posted
Mapset by the Monstrata gang ?
really
posted

Sotarks wrote:

Mapset by the Monstrata gang ?
really


cuz why not might change later soon lol (its to save up more space!1!!)
posted
Some passing comments on the storyboard (it's amazing btw!!)

01:03:587 - omg the comet effect is amazing <3 This was honestly what I was looking to do for my Nandemonaiya map, but I never figured out how to create that effect, and without it I just didnt feel like storyboarding, rip ;c
00:15:940 - The backgrounds are fine. I don't know if its possible with dimensions, but if it is possible, I think having the bg move a bit more would help. Right now its hard to see that the bg is actually moving cuz it's so slow. I think just increasing the movement by like 20 more pixels would be enough.
00:05:387 -00:15:940 - Between here, the screen did feel a bit empty, and I think you could have used this section to introduce the mapper/gd'er/storyboarder, and maybe included some metadata like Song: Hikari Artist: RADWIMPS etc...
00:15:940 - Here onward, The lyrics feel a bit slow. Like I can see the words, but they appear too late because looking at the code, it seems like you have the sprites appearing when the lyric is being sung, but there is some animation involved, so the lyric isn't fully shown until like 250 ms after the song lyric is sung. I would recommend moving all of the lyrics forward just like 250 ms or something.
01:10:345 - Probably just RNG, but there are a lot of comets in a single line here. Maybe shift some of them to the left of the screen? since theres an empty space there. If its possible anyways.

01:16:609 - Same idea here onwards. Make the sprites for the lyrics appear slightly earlier, so they'll end their animation and be fully visible when the lyric lands.
01:15:291 - Here to 01:16:609 - There's a small window where you could maybe do some transition effect similar to 00:15:280 - so it doesn't look like the screen suddenly fades to black.

Ahhh, I really love these kinds of storyboards. Simple but beautiful effects.
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Sorry for late response! ( however, i did talk to you a bit on pm ;) )

I'm really glad most of this sb turned out well; once again I was trying out new things and approaches, and I was going as fast as I could to get this sb completed because Haruto would've liked the map being ready for rank by the beginning of January (however, he didn't pressure me, I pressured myself) I'm honestly surprised you like the comet effect so much; I just made it on the spot because I felt it would suit the bg really well, but I can see where you're coming from with all the comments. I'm currently working on another storyboard, so if I find time, I'll implement the fixes. (it won't take long to fix anyways)
posted
lovely storyboard, super cute and fits nicely, i love it <3
posted
god that was so lame to map zzz
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75942
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.9

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari
TitleUnicode:光
Artist:RADWIMPS
ArtistUnicode:RADWIMPS
Creator:Haruto
Version:Kalitarks' Insane
Source:
Tags:Light Ningen kaika short cut version haruto_aizawa monstrata appleeaterx milan-
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

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OverallDifficulty:8.6
ApproachRate:9
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//Break Periods
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Everything is done now. Time for a Quick mod over difficulties in the map~

P.S : Hitsounding for Monstrata's , Ipas', apple's and Milan-'s diff is currently WIP.

Storyboard @Sytarno

Yep, it looks awesome like what i've always said to you. But, there are some things that i guess it could be reduced a bit. Probably the SB load at 01:03:422 - this part. It runs pretty laggy to me but dunno what others feels. And yeah, i guess its caused by the SB load (or probably my laptop's system or smth) Reducing the load would be nice but try asking someone if its not so laggy or its a bit laggy.

Rizen's Advanced

00:15:775 (4,1) - I guess you could move these to something around 130|132 so the overlapped stack won't be looked.
00:16:599 (3,4) - Pretty inconsistent spacing with the previous one but I think its not a big deal for an advanced diff.
00:28:966 - Maybe its possible to make this clickable how about remove (2) and make 00:28:472 (1) - a reverse slider? and then add a note in the 1/2. It will probably help i guess.
00:53:532 (3,4) - Blanket is off
01:02:104 (5) - Not NCing this one?
01:33:752 (4) - ^
01:34:576 (5,6,1) - Not-so-good square shape here :v /jk
01:37:708 (1) - Um, are you trying to follow the vocal here? I suppose the reverse should snap in 01:37:955 - instead on the 1/2 rhythm.
02:04:073 (4,1) - I do swap the NC here because 02:04:073 - this beat has more strong beat than 02:05:392 - cuz of its finish/cymbal sound there. 02:09:348 (1) - See here, you also NC it on the cymbal beat instead.
02:14:540 - No Spinner here?

Neat diff :3/
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Will get into everything tomorrow~
Someone should give me a kudosu on my mod post here thanks.
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hi i'm here

[General]
  1. Some diffs have preview point inconsistencies. I'm too lazy to list the right ones from the wrong ones, so here are all of them, and you can decide which need to be changed.
  2. soft-hitclap3.wav is unused
  3. Apparently a lot of SB files are going ununsed?
  4. Ending times are also inconsistent but don't really think that matters so...
  5. The OD, AR, and HP settings of your topdiffs are all kinda out of whack. Fix those somehow so there's a logical increase. You could also just switch Monstratas settings with Ipas, and Haruto's settings with Monstrata.


[Monstrata]
  1. Why are your maps easier to play with HR...
  2. 00:00:451 (2,3) - For some reason I like this rhythm more ctrl g'd, sounds nicer to me I guess? It's whatever though
  3. 01:08:038 (5) - Feel like this note could use more emphasis, but it'd mess up your pattern so
  4. 01:17:269 (4,5,1) - The emphasis here seems kinda off to me, I think an easy fix to keep all the stacking you have is just moving 01:17:928 (1) - farther away. Maybe around x32 y288. This also puts more emphasis on the second slider in the combo so that whole line in the song feels stronger.


[Haruto]
  1. 00:26:328 (6) - I think just a normal, not drum whistle sounds nice here. Up to you though
  2. 00:29:131 (1) - Is this meant to have a clap on it?
  3. 00:46:279 (1) - Kinda woulda liked to see this as a 1/1 slider as well, this section feels nice to play with a lot of 1/1 sliders, if you use more 1/2 rhythms in the next section.
  4. 00:56:829 (1) - Change this to a rhythm using 1/2 somehow? Like I mentioned earlier the small chance in intensity works well with the music. This is subjective though, and you don't have to change either of these lol.
  5. 01:13:312 (4,5,6) - Triple should go 01:13:148 (3) - here, not where you have it currently
  6. 01:24:686 (2,3,2,3) - The difference in emphasis between these two is pretty big, maybe you can do something like this? (ignore slider shape if you want)
  7. 01:39:027 (1) - Finish on head?
  8. 01:39:686 (4,1) - I would actually like it if you continued your finish on tail/ head pattern here as well tbh


[Ipas]
  1. 00:05:716 (3) - No emphasis on this note? You could try something like stacking it on the head of 00:06:376 (8) - and then ctrl + g 00:05:881 (4,5,6) -
  2. 00:22:536 (1,2) - I would like it more if this was angled a bit instead of straight beside each other
  3. 00:29:131 (1) - Same from Haruto's mod, this clap here seems strange to me. Might just be me though
  4. 00:41:828 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Any reason to not just make these all the same distance apart? I think it looks nicer tbh
  5. 00:42:983 (3,4) - That's a whole lot of emphasis on 4 which you didn't do 00:45:620 (3,4) - here. Maybe try this? I stacked 2 and 3 where appropriate and moved 4 and 5 how I saw fit
  6. 01:55:337 (2) - I get wanting variation in this part, but I don't think this is a good way of doing it. Maybe try this instead, however if you do this I would reccomend putting a few more of this rhythm throughout this outtro.
  7. 01:56:656 (2) - Same as above


[apple]
  1. 00:31:111 (4,5) - Not really a fan of such a huge jump here with such sharp movement, maybe something like this would work better?
  2. 00:34:409 (1,2) - Again, this part is very calm but the distance between these jumps is bigger than some of the ones in the Extras. This thought also applies to 00:34:409 (1,2) - and sort of applies to 00:20:557 (4,5) - but the flow here is nice so I think it should be ok.
  3. 01:03:258 (8) - What do you think about ctrl + h'ing this and stacking it's head on 01:02:103 (1) - ?
  4. 01:16:115 (1) - Silence slider end?
  5. 02:14:623 (1) - Silence spinner


[Sotarks/Kalibe]
  1. 00:04:919 (2,3,4,1) - Don't think you were trying to blanket this but I reccomend changing it to make it obvious it's not supposed to be one, right now it looks kinda meh imo
  2. 00:06:211 (2) - Is this stacked right? Can't tell
  3. 00:09:839 (2) - Maybe move this to x285 y82? Don't realliy like the whole "this circle is in the middle of a curved slider but it's not a blanket" thing, but I won't point them out anymore
  4. 00:09:344 (1,3) - blanket could be fixed
  5. 01:13:148 (6,7) - Shouldn't the triplet be here, and not on the next part? For vocals anyways
  6. 01:42:975 (1) - Dunno what went wrong but from here onwards the diff isn't hitsounded, so fix that.
  7. 01:56:326 (2,3,4,5) - Emphasis on these jumps is kinda messed up imo, just make 2 > 3 bigger mapbe and see if you can nerf 4 > 5 a bit?
  8. 02:01:436 (1,2) - Give more visual distance here? Looks kinda cramped
  9. 02:09:018 (4) - Remove nc?

    A lot of weird not blanket-y blanket stuff in this diff but I think that's just a style thing so whatever


[Irohas]
  1. I have nothing to say about this diff, I really really like it. AImod is picking up some unsnapped stuff so just double check that.


[Milan]
  1. 00:14:291 (4,1,2) - This kind of stack where the rhythm isn't consistent through the stack but the visuals are is pretty bad for a lowdiff, maybe just stack 1 > 2 and move 4 elsewhere.
  2. 02:01:766 (2,3,4) - Not sure how I feel about this, since it's just a single slider stacked on the head of a circle instead of a slider with a visible body to work with. Up to you to change if you think it should though.
  3. 02:02:425 (4,1,2) - Same point basically but, again with the stack visuals but different rhythm. Easy fix is to apply my last point.
  4. 02:03:414 (5,6) - This jumps is pretty enormous for the end of the song. I wouldn't reccomend putting a diffspike anywhere but in the kiai here, so nerf this somehow.


[Rizen]
  1. Unsnapped stuff in AImod
  2. 01:15:291 (1,2) - I think this would be nicer if you just made them flow into each other more naturally, by just flipping it and rearranging the other circles


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:982 (3) - NC
  2. 00:14:621 (3) - NC
  3. 00:15:940 (1) - NC
  4. 00:15:940 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Not a fan of the rhythms used here, what the rhythm is supposed to be following seems kinda lost to me and the density is weird. I reccomend finding one thing to follow and sticking with that one thing, as it's better in my opinion for newer players to follow one instrument instead of incorporating the entire song.
  5. 00:26:493 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like using 2/1 sliders here because the first slider ends on a powerful vocal while the second one starts on a powerful vocal. It just seems very messed up to me.
  6. 00:37:046 (1,2,1,2) - This is good, clear variation in rhythm as the song changes and follows a very prominent sound in the music. Try to do something like that earlier as well?
  7. 00:41:663 - Would really like this to be clickable, maybe make 00:41:004 (3) - a reverse and then a 3/2 slider after?
  8. 00:47:598 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is really good, I think if you used it more in this section and earlier the map would make a great deal more sense.
  9. 00:56:829 (4) - NC?
  10. 01:02:104 (4,5) - NC?

    Overall this diff needs a bit of work I think, but it shouldn't be too hard. The rhythms could be cleaned up and the NC structure could be better, it seems sporadic and inconsistent to me. You could probably self mod the rest of this with my ideas in mind, if you agree with them.


[Easy]
  1. 00:21:216 (1,2,3) - This rhythm kills your vocal following, if you want variation try to find something that sticks with the vocals better and doesn't mess up your rhythm.
  2. 00:36:387 (3) - Move this up some? Leads from the slider tail more naturally
  3. 01:06:060 (3,1,2) - Try this rhythm here? Works with the guitar as the vocals dissapear.
  4. 01:12:653 - Would like to see this made clickable somehow
  5. 01:18:917 (1,2,1) - Try this rhythm here? Follow vocals better
  6. 01:24:192 (1,2) - Ctrl + G this rhythm?
  7. 01:29:466 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl + g 01:29:466 (1,2) - this and then ctrl + g 01:31:115 (3,4) - this?
  8. 01:34:741 (3,4) - Another rhythm suggestion. Also nc 01:35:071 - here if you follow this.
  9. 01:40:345 - Don't like how this important sound is ignored for a slider reverse, would change this rhythm as well.
  10. 01:40:345 - NC and move down to make a triangle maybe?

    Rhythm is pretty important in a lowdiff, and it's much easier to be consistent in lowdiffs because you don't really have to worry about as much. Love your lowdiffs! They're fun to make if you get them right


@Haruto

Didn't wanna put this in General since you might have already read that and won't read it again, but there's a lot of Uninherited timing point conflicts throughout diffs. Make sure those get fixed.
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I've updated the sb; all of monstrata's comments have been implemented except for the adding of names/titles/beatmapper and such to the title scene.

I would've really liked to do this, but letter kerning was being a serious pain in the rear; I tried getting it to work for an hour nonstop and it still wasn't my desired outcome. Haha, it's also the reason why Storyboarder (or Kalamitous) happened to do Charon's collab names for me instead.

I've also reduced the amount of particles in the star trail by 25% based on Haruto's request; but all of the settings must stay the same in order to retain the original look of the star. The distance in time between each particle is a tick/48, so reducing it by 50% or even 25% would make the entire trail look kinda dotty. I tried to account for the lack of 25% of the trail's length by reducing the speed, and ultimately I reduced the frequency of the falling stars as well.

(However, it wasn't by much, but since Haruto's the only one who's had an issue so far with the trails, hopefully everyone else is doing fine loading them.)

P.S. not sure if haruto has updated the osb by the time I post this, but it sure will be soon.

EDIT : I just noticed the mod above, and it appears Haruto has been merging the sb folder instead of deleting it and re-downloading it, so the bgs, petal2, and glow should all be removed. However, it's my bad that there's an entire set of words not being used (it was my failed attempt at adding the "beatmap by : and storyboard by : " section LOL, forgot to remove :P )
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Hellow Haruto, coming to do the mod as requested!

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:365 (2) - First of all, I would like to note this slider. Because you know, it's probably just me, but when I play this slider, it feels like there is a lack of fluid movements. I mean, when I play it, I do a very short break to go down, but it feels to... strong to me. So I got one solution to this, why not moving it like that: https://puu.sh/tt0rs/944e92c521.png - In the changes I've made, I move a bit higher the slider, but I still kept it down, to keep that "going down" movement, but without keeping the same strongness of the slider.
    Slider data: x: 256 y: 304
  2. 00:10:663 (1,1,1) - For those parts, I don't really understand why there is no circles on each 1/1 beats. I feel like there is a reason, probably to give some pause to the player, but to me, it kinda break the rhythm consistancy since the music here is still the same right? You can keep the long 2/1 sliders here, so it could give a small reading pause to the player, but I would suggest you to add some circles here: 00:11:653 - 00:12:972 -
    Moreover, on the next music part, so here: 00:15:940 - there is a slower (or cooler part than the beginning) and you still keep a good rhythm mapping, so why not doing this? o,o
  3. 00:31:770 (1) - Try to move a bit this slider, so we could see the sliderend like this, so it could give a better visibility on the sliderend, since it's kinda hide by the next slider! https://puu.sh/tt0ZM/733134c240.png
  4. 01:10:016 (2,1) - This pattern is good to me, but I kinda feel bothered by the little sliderborder that lap on the next slider. So, I can give you a way to change this if you mind! https://puu.sh/tt1bq/9a6f9c0388.png
    You can have a look at this. I think that is not bad, so why not moving it like that, so it can keep the blanket, and it don't walk on the next slider! :3
  5. 01:13:972 (1) - I know that there is already a good beat to end this spinner, but why not end it here: 01:16:115 - so it could give more time to the player to do the spinner, and it really marks a break!
  6. 01:25:510 (3,4) - I don't really like the shape you used here, but it's just a personal opinion! I think the way that it's overlaping a bit is not as good as you did previously. Why not trying to do a blanket instead? That could feel better in my opinion. After looking at it again, I noticed that you wanted to do a slider with the red anchor at the middle point. But since you didn't did that since the begining of the song, why not skipping it, and keeping a pattern consistancy? o/
  7. 02:14:458 (6) - I feel like this beat would be hard to click for some beginner since it's based on a 1/2 beat, after a small break. So, I have some suggestions to give, to fix that!
    1) https://puu.sh/tt1SC/0f995e62c8.png That is an 1/2 slider, that start on an 1/1 beat so it can be easier to click for players.
    2) https://puu.sh/tt1Xn/31cc6d7e68.png This one is a longer slider, that start on 1/1 beat, but end on the same 1/2 than previous, so it means that this beat: 02:14:293 - is not mapped.
    3) https://puu.sh/tt26o/7ee2e59c3c.png This one is kind of same as the number 2, but I stopped it on a 1/1 beat, and started the spinner on the 1/2 note that can be clickable too, but it's up to you!


[Rizen's]
  1. 00:48:587 (4) - Be careful about the HP bar! On the original skin, it's kinda walking on it o,o
  2. 01:01:444 (3,4,5,6) - That part feel weird to me with the sound mapping you did, I mean, on all the music you use a pattern that even map downbeats, and there, you avoided those two red downbeats. I also noticed that you made some breaks when the singer stops singing. Why not trying to do stuff like that, to keep rhythm consistancy? https://puu.sh/tt2Qt/74dc67ecf1.png
    Tell me what you think!
  3. 01:04:741 (1,2,3) - I think that this part could be re-arranged like that: https://puu.sh/tt34e/7d46d50d61.png so it could introduce the player to the next guitar sound mapping by increasing the difficulty step by step, no? We could mark the evolution of the difficulty with the small break, that could prepare the player, instead of keeping a calm 1/1 slider patterns, and then 1/2 sliders/circle, no?
  4. 01:10:016 (1,2,3) - That would be the same for this part, if you change the previous one obviously. But I don't say you have to! It's just could give a better 1/2 slider introduction in my opinion.
  5. 02:14:623 - Why not adding a spinner here at the end?


All the diffs in this mapset are amazing! I really like all the diffs! Keep doing such a good work -
Good luck for rank~ ♥

@Sotarks, don't forget to fix blankets @w@
posted
Hi, NM from my queue.

[apple's Insane]
  1. 00:29:791 (3,4) - I believe these two could use some more emphasis by either spacing them more or making them hitcircles.
  2. 01:26:664 (4,5,6,7) - Try moving those a lower to emphasize on this 01:27:159 (1) - strong downbeat


[Ippa's Insane]
  1. 00:31:770 (1) - Consider doing Ctrl + G on this, and then 00:32:100 (2) - this. You get better flow from the previous jump pattern in my opinion while still emphasizing on 00:32:100 (2) - this clap.
  2. 00:36:799 (7,9) - I would really recommend you to delete those notes. It feels overmapped and out of place.
  3. 00:41:828 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Personally I think aesthetic wise it could use some more work, but looks are subjective so it's up to you.
  4. 01:32:269 (7) - I don't understand why you spaced this so much, while the actual note that should be emphasized is 01:32:104 (6) - this one. It has a clap and a whistle and it pretty strong overall.
  5. 02:01:931 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern feels uncomfortable to play. Not only the flow (linear pattern and an abstract rhombus) but also the readability. Your map has been fairly easy to read so far but suddenly you overlay all these notes and make it hard to read. Also Maybe try a different pattern?


[Extra]
  1. 00:15:610 (1) - I thought this was a 1/4th slider the first time I played it and let go of it too early lol. It's a cool idea but idk if it works well.
  2. 01:36:389 (1) - For an Extra I don't think this 1/1 slider fits. There are lots of things going on in the background but it seems like it's ignoring too much.
    Also 01:36:719 - this beat is very strong so I suggest making it clickable, so consider breaking up that slider into a 1/2 and a hitcircle.
  3. 01:56:491 - Same reasoning for this, strong note, should be emphasized imo.


[Monstrata's Sparkle]
  1. 01:41:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like these could use a lot more spacing. The song feels very intense, but when I played it, it didn't seem to have any contrast with the rest of the patterns before and after it, nor enough spacing to emphasize on the intensity. 01:14:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing similar to this would be appropriate in my opinion.
  2. 01:45:282 (7,8,1) - If you make a circular motion to aim these, it flows well. But if you snap to each note it feels awkward to play because somewhat linear motion. I guess it depends on the player. I suggest doing Ctrl + > and Ctrl + H on 01:45:612 (1) - and then placing it on 01:44:623 (3) - for better flow.


That's all, good luck! ()
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As asked a small sugestion,

Easy
  1. 00:05:387 (2) - Nc? your nc on intro seems on per 1 big tick, kinda inconsistent there imo, unless you follow per 2 big tick like on vocal part here 00:15:940 (1) -
  2. 00:22:536 (2) - Nazi, but move to x:458 y:162 could be looks neater https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7161893
  3. 00:49:576 (3,1) - Weird movement, probably because (1) have a sudden unnatural downward placement. Maybe try like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7161904 will improve the gameplay
  4. 00:53:862 (2,1) - Likewise on lower diff avoid any weird overlapping as posible, on playing they looks bad
  5. 01:06:060 (3,1) - Swap nc? due to your measurement, the nc should be on (3) instead
  6. 01:10:016 (2,1,2) - The placement a bit too forced imo, also 01:10:016 (2) - touching the hp bar, maybe you can try a diffrent placement to avoid that?
  7. 01:20:895 (1,2) - Probably swap the nc? the vocal transition stronger on (2) imo
  8. 01:23:203 (1) - Why nc?
  9. 02:06:711 (1) - Why nc? it seems your nc measurement on outro kinda more than two big ticks, compared to the rest that one a bit not consistent
  10. 02:14:458 (6) - Irregular 1/2 beat, maybe add an nc there to distinguih it better? or replace with another 3/2 slider?


Normal
  1. In term of rhythm choice, I'm not sure why the kiai part plays easier than this part 00:15:940 -
  2. 00:35:232 - Probably missing circle there for the vocal, since you did that on 00:27:153 (2,3,4) - etc that sounds familiar
  3. 00:41:334 (4) - For aesthetic those red nodes looks bad imo, use a single red node I think will looks cooler https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7161978
  4. 01:15:291 (1,2) - Should be more readable, imo stacked under slider end not really fit this diff
  5. 02:13:799 (2,3,4) - Like above, same case also apply to that one. Should be more readable and placement kinda too forced imo


Rizen
  1. You need hitsound
  2. 00:04:760 (1,2) - I think those two could be replaced with two 1/2 slider like http://puu.sh/tCeEP/dbfdb1f6e2.jpg , I think it's a bit weird when 00:04:919 (2) - is on red tick instead white
  3. 00:22:865 (1,2) - 00:25:504 (1,2) - and 00:35:727 (1,2,3,4) - Swap nc? for consistency with previous two, don't they have the nc on the vocal instead? except this one 00:33:584 (1,2,3) -

Hope that still help a bit :p
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