m4m as requested~
[General]
The HP of Rain diff is 5.7, though I don't know why it's this number, but isn't 5.5 or 6 better?
SYAHME's diffs are not hitsounded, don't be lazy.
Artist should be
M2U & NICODE feat. Guriri & Lucy.
Preview point should be at 00:43:507.
[SYAHME's Salad]
00:21:382 (6,1) - Actually you need a much larger ds to emphasize the finish.
00:28:319 (4,5) - same, no reason to use same distance here.
00:40:132 (3) - make it only a circle?
00:49:319 (3,1) - dash here instead of 00:49:038 (2,3).
00:49:319 (3) - I guess this note should be at 00:49:413?
00:54:382 (1,2,3,1) - A bit confusing here, few dashes are used in other parts but suddenly apeears an antiflow and 3 large dashes here, feeling a bit uncomfortable. My suggestion is reconsider 00:54:944 (2).
01:01:413 - since you make similar patterns before, add a note here?
Generally this diff has nice flows and patterns, but I think you can make more dashes and moves. In most parts it feels more like a Cup diff.
[SYAHME's Platter]
00:04:507 (6) - NC? imo you need to emphasize this by adding ds, while decreasing some ds in other parts.
00:07:507 (4) - NC too, and dash.
00:55:319 (3) - Not feeling good here, I prefer you split into two sliders and make sure at least a dash is used on 00:55:507.
01:04:132 (4,1) - similar, you should use a dash.
01:11:632 - make a unique circle here? The current pattern can't express the clap here.
01:20:257 (2) - ctrl+G and only make a HDash at 01:20:257 (2,3)?
01:22:600 (1) - Not going well with the flow, make it a horizontal slider and heading left. Also move to x:168 to make this easier.
01:26:069 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think it's a good flow, try to use curves like other patterns.
01:31:788 (11) - I can't see the meaning of its existence, you may delete this and make a 1/2 pattern here.
01:36:475 (1) - similar as above, horizontal
01:37:787 (7) - delete this too
01:38:632 (7) - make this a slider, extends it to 01:38:913, then delete this reverse 01:38:819 (1) and make a new 1/2 slider at
01:39:007.
01:43:132 (6) - A bit far away, x:88
01:51:006 (4) - 01:51:756 (8) - dashes
01:54:006 (4) - 01:54:756 (8) - dashes
02:02:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dashes suddenly abused here, reduce some
[Rain]
00:04:507 (1) - To emphasize this, what about moving 00:04:132 (2) to x:344?
00:08:632 (2) - similar, x:184
00:13:507 (1) - can't be moved more further but I wish this could be at x:512 XD
00:23:069 (4) - I don't think put drum on a slider tail is a nice choice. You may move this slider 1 beat later, or just make two circles and make a dash here.
00:26:069 (4) - same ^ 00:29:069 (2,3) - take this for reference.
00:36:757 (3) - I think this sudden whistle deserves HDash, you may make 00:35:819 (6,1) a normal dash and make a HDash at 00:36:569 (2,3).
00:40:319 - why no element here? I think you're following the vocal.
00:58:132 (3,1) - Not a clear dash, I think you can make it an HDash here.
01:04:132 (4,1) - also not clear, make this slider heading left instead.
01:13:132 (6,1) - dash is definitely needed, as you have larger spacing at 01:13:507 (1,2).
01:20:538 (6) - x:152 for artistic.
01:29:819 (5,1) - x:256 for more moving space.
01:56:257 (5,6,7) - I don't know but I wish you can get the spacing larger ;w;
02:06:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - to make this straight pattern a little different, add some reverses here?
the kiai part is excellently made, I love it
[Farewell]
00:03:382 (2) - x:240
00:15:944 (6) - This angle fits the flow better
00:21:569 (2,3) - I suggest HDash
00:24:757 (1,2) - way too large after HDash, I think move 2 to x:192 will be better
00:36:757 (3) - similar suggestion as in Rain diff, change or not depends on yourself
00:40:319 - also a note?
00:38:632 (4) - - seems that you use HDash in Rain and no HDash in Overdose?
00:44:069 (2) - to make the flow more clear, Increase the ds between 00:44:069 (2,3) a bit.
00:46:507 (1,2,3,4) - Sudden large jumps, cut down ds a bit.
01:04:507 (1,2,3,4) - edge jumps? cut down ds too
01:15:007 (1) - HDash?
01:20:069 (4) - easy to miss here, 01:20:069 (4,5) move to x:256
01:22:132 (4) - Not good to see only a 1/2 slider here, I may suggest some pattern like this
01:29:069 (2) - x:368, 01:29:444 (4) - x:80, all use 0.58x and you'll find better flow
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01:35:819 (8,1) - HDash? Current flow also feels a bit awkward
01:40:132 (4) - x:144
01:40:694 (2) - lean a bit, you can also consider HDash at 01:40:694 (2,3).
01:42:757 (3,4,5,6) - try move this to x:272 to increase two HDashes and a more confortable flow.
Other parts seems fine to me.
Nice map with clean and beautiful patterns. Good luck with this set~