1. Easy (2.37 stars, 74 notes)
2. Hard (4.5 stars, 165 notes)
3. Normal (4.25 stars, 113 notes)
4. Nyquill's Dawn (4.81 stars, 212 notes)

jericho2442 wrote:

revived by request

Makar8000 wrote:

Here we go...

[General]
I think you should disable the countdown. Also, it's not needed, but I don't really like the combo colors lol

[Normal]
I think you should use a grid level of 3. To do this, go to View -> Grid Level -> 3. After that fix the spacing

Done00:33:025 (1,2,3) Spacing
Done[b][/b]00:34:871 (1,2,3) Spacing again
Done00:36:718 (1,2,3) ^
Done00:37:641 (4,5) ^
Done00:40:410 (1,2,3) ^
Done00:41:794 (5,1) ^
Done00:42:256 (1,2,3) ^
Done00:42:718 (3,4) ^
Done00:44:102 (6,1) ^
Done00:56:102 Remove new combo
Done00:58:871 Remove new combo
Done, but didn't change slider00:59:333 New Combo. Also, I don't really like look the slider here. I don't have a suggestion for it though.
Done01:03:025 Remove new combo
Done01:04:294 (2,3) Trippets should be used here instead of dotted eigth patterns. To do this change the snap Diviser to 1/3 and Doneadjust appropiatly. Don't forgot to change back to 1/4 after you are finished doing tripplets
Done01:04:871 New Combo
Done01:06:141 Remove New Combo and this should also be triplets.
Done01:06:718 New Combo
Done01:07:871 (2,3,4) This section should be in quater triplets:

Remember to fix the spacing afterwards
Done01:11:679 (3,4) Should be triplets
Done01:13:525 (2,3) ^
Done01:15:371 (2,3) ^
Done01:16:871 (6) A slider should not be needed here and be replaced with a single circle
Done01:24:718 (1,2,3) Spacing
Done01:26:564 (1,2,3) ^
Done01:28:871 New Combo
Done01:32:102 (1,2,3) Spacing
Done01:32:564 (3,4) ^
Done01:33:948 (1,2,3) ^
Done01:37:641 New Combo
Done01:42:718 (5,6,7,8) Spacing. Also I think you shouldn't make it straight (go up and down zigzag or something)
Ignored, the spinners good where it is.01:43:641 Move the spinner to 01:44:102-01:47:333

For the Hard difficulty that you will do in the future I would suggest mapping for the rest of the song.
You have a lot of straight patterns and I think this makes it kinda boring. You should change them up abit
Also I think you will need to add some more hit sounds.

NOTE: This mod was done before Selee suggested a new timing/offset so the timings of the notes I included in the mod may be off after changing the offset/bpm.

JBsparta117 wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Done01:07:871 (2,3,4) This section should be in quater triplets:

Makar8000 wrote:

Easy was updated... Time for a recheck.

[General]
DoneAs suggested before, I think you should use custom combo colors, add some hitsounds, and add some Kiai Time.

[Easy]
DoneGrid Level 3 for this too. Fix all the spacing afterwards.
Done00:33:487 (2,3) Spacing
Done00:35:333 (2,3) Spacing
Done00:46:871 (1) This note may be too close to the end of the spinner for an easy difficulty.
Done01:16:410 (3) Adjust this so its a straight movement from (2) to (4)
Done01:31:179 (1) Maybe too close to the end of spinner
DoneSuggestions are marked with a question mark at the end and are not really important changes:
Done01:32:564 Add a note here?
Done01:33:948 (1) Move to 01:33:487 and readjust spacing?
Done01:35:333 Map in this break?
Done01:41:333 (1) Move this so it is a straight movement from (4) to (2).

[Normal]
Done00:44:102 (6) Move so it's a straight movement from (5) to (1)
Done01:04:256 (3,4,1) Spacing
Done01:04:871 (1,2,3) Spacing
Done01:07:948 (1,2,3) Spacing
Done01:42:948 (6) Move left 1 on the grid
Done01:43:179 (7) Move left 1 on the grid
Done01:43:410 (8) Move left 1 on the grid

Annnd Star~

I will check Hard when it's finished but I won't recheck Easy/Normal again :p

JBsparta117 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-03-11 at 4:47:30 PM

Artist: Wave
Title: Dawn of East End (Innocent Treasures)
Source: Touhou
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3516kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.52 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 17 notes)
3. Normal (4.16 stars, 113 notes)

Download: Wave - Dawn of East End (Innocent Treasures)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first beatmap. Tell me if there's anything wrong with it and I'll fix it. Other than that, enjoy this beatmap!

JBsparta117 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-03-11 at 4:47:30 PM

Artist: Wave
Title: Dawn of East End (Innocent Treasures)
Source: Touhou
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3516kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.52 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 17 notes)
3. Normal (4.16 stars, 113 notes)

Download: Wave - Dawn of East End (Innocent Treasures)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
This is my first beatmap. Tell me if there's anything wrong with it and I'll fix it. Other than that, enjoy this beatmap!

JBsparta117 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-07-11 at 1:23:02 PM

Artist: Wave
Title: Dawn of East End (Innocent Treasures)
Source: Touhou
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3516kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.52 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4.85 stars, 26 notes)
3. Normal (4.16 stars, 113 notes)

Download: Wave - Dawn of East End (Innocent Treasures)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
This is my first beatmap. Tell me if there's anything wrong with it and I'll fix it. Other than that, enjoy this beatmap!

Makar8000 wrote:

Hard is done. Yay time to check it.

[General]
-Why do you have Kiai Time during the breaks?
-This map sounds better with soft hitsounds (F6 -> Select all the timing points -> Audio Tab -> click on "Soft" and press OK
-Please set some custom combo colors

[Hard]
00:38:102 (5) - Add finish
00:38:333 - Add a note here?
00:39:948 - Add finish to the end of this slider
00:41:333 (1) - Remove finish
00:41:794 (2,3) - These notes are too close together :s
00:46:871 (5) - New Combo.
00:46:871 - Add a timing point here to use normal hitsounds so the finishes sound good with the song
00:59:333 (2) - Add a timing point at the start of this slider
01:01:641 (1,2) - Extend these sliders so it ends on the upbeat
01:21:025 (1,2) - soz I lol'd when I saw this spacing. Please fix :p
01:31:179 - Add a timing point here to use normal hitsounds so the finishes sound good with the song
01:41:102 (5) - Considering the way you did the notes on the parts like this earlier in the song, you should ether remove this or not stack them with the end of the slider.
01:42:025 (7) - ^
01:41:333 (6) - Re-place this note but use the Shift key to make it a perfect 90 degree angle
01:42:256 (1) - ^
01:47:794 (1,2,3) - Remove these xP
01:58:871 (1) - Remove this?
01:59:333 (7) - If the above is done make this a new combo
02:16:871 (1) - Don't start this spinner at the same spot in the time as (6). Also, end it at 02:20:564.
02:21:025 - Delete this timing point
02:21:141 - Move this to 02:20:564, and make the volume a lot softer.

Keyboard wrote:

Easy:
It's good but I feel like that it gets too repetitive with just clicking every beat.
Perhaps sliders can be used...?
Not much to say for this difficulty.

Normal
Spacing is slightly inconsistant, ie:
01:04:410 (3,4) - 4 should be 2-3 boxes closer.
01:08:410 (2,3) - These two beats are too close together.
01:09:256 (4,5) - Move 5 one box closer to 4.

I think the HP drain is too much, possibly can be moved to 5.

Hard
59:102 - I think a circle can be added here, or fused together with the previous one to become a slider.
01:18:256 (4) - Make it end 1:18:833
01:40:410 (4) - Make it end 1:40:987


Star-ed!
(this melody is stuck in my head, lol)

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

IMO<-My opinion

General

I can see you bg is 960x768 that mean is unrank you should change size bg is 1024x768 or 680x480 pleasse change this and don't forget full submitt

and Slider tick rate is 2 for all diff because i feeling fit this song IMO

Why time kiai all diff is diferent ? :/ pleasse do same all diff time kiai I like more time kiai is Normal so try same Easy and hard the time kiai's normal

Some Suggestions
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[easy]

Resnapp all note

Why hitsound is normal for this song ? The normal hitsound don't fit this song pleasse change soft hitsound that is most better
The Easy cannot 3 time break pleasse map this :/ because this is easy...
01:39:025 (4,1) - this jump right but Easy and Normal never make jump NEVER and stream too so that mean is incosiente spacing pleasse fix

pleasse remap only 3 break time
You don't need use Grid level 2 you can use 3 or 4 because this is better use spacing and better symentrical
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[Normal]

HP -2
AR -1
OR -1


I can see lot note and slider are unsnapped look good this http://puu.sh/48Md that why is unsnapped pleasse go to Timing and Resnapp all note and they will change better but somehere are blue tick but this is confuse to play try use only red tick or white tick is better play and if you feeling ryhthm

00:47:333 <- this is time kiai but why is break time? :/ pleasse remap this

ho also if you resnapp all note pleasse look all note and slider will change to blue tick if you see change red or white if you felling ryhthm and don't forget fix spacing too
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[Hard]

Resnapp all note

again 3 break time pleasse just remap and only 1 break time (if you need this)
Somehere hitsound normal not fit pleasse change soft hitsound IMo

01:09:948 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing
02:07:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - this make confuse play try New combo 02:08:102 (2) and Put new combo again at 02:09:025 (1)
02:11:794 (2,3,4,5) - Same above ^
02:15:487 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

That i like this hard because Hard can now make jump and stream (but not lot) well you will need more mod
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I hope you understand my poor english
Any questions? call me and STAR !
Good luck~~

DelMann2 wrote:

Hah, I remember playing this song in very very early version. I was random dude randomly included in random multiplayer game - you were hosting and threw this song on. I liked the song so much, that i stole your background pic and made my own version. Sorry, I hope you didnt have any © on it. Anyways nice improwement from that time to now.

Byakugan249 wrote:

remind me to mod this map because i might forget and move it to pending since all diffs r done.

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright now im gonna mod this



Easy:
00:38:102(7) - NC
00:42:025-00:43:410 - this part is empty. can u add notes here?
00:56:102(3) - end this till 00:56:564
01:10:410-01:16:064 - the sliders are overlapping itself. fix this
01:25:641(3) - end this till 01:26:102
01:28:410(5) - beginners wont expect this at all. move it below (4) so that the combo would look like a tetris block
01:33:025(3) - end this till 01:33:487
01:34:871(3) - ^ 01:35:333
01:40:410(3) - ^ 01:40:871

Normal:
Some notes r unsnapped in this diff. go to timing and resnap all notes
HP:4
AR:3
OD:3
01:15:371(2) - not a good spot because beginners/amateurs wont know where this circle is

Hard:
00:57:948(4) - part of the slider is off the screen
01:18:256(4) - end this till 01:18:718

Nyquill's Dawn:
im not hearing any hitsounds. please add some.
00:35:333(5) - NC
00:42:718(5) - ^
00:52:871(6) - ^
00:57:487(8) - ^
01:23:333(5) - ^
01:27:025(7) - ^
01:34:410(9) - ^
01:38:102(7) - ^
01:45:487(7) - ^
01:46:410(7) - ^
02:02:102(11) - ^

this is the best i can do. now look for other modders and theyll help u. GL