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AIR
hi~

[Easy]
  1. 01:28:479 (1) - 我觉得这个条没必要有棱有角,类似前一部分的弧形怎样
  2. 03:07:990 (1,1,1) - 感觉好像有点乱,试试del nc, 03:08:722 (2) - add nc


[Shurelia's Normal]
  1. 00:24:821 (2) - how about use 1/2 to following the voice, like what you did before. 00:13:114 (2,3,4) -
  2. 03:10:185 (2) - nc please


[Delis' Hard]
  1. 00:09:455 (1) - please move to 264,157 to improve the stack
  2. 01:48:235 (2) - maybe move to 35,282 for equal distance


[Shad0w1and's Insane]
  1. 02:08:723 (3,5) - 5叠到3上怎样


[Collab Insane]
  1. 03:40:187 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps rearrangement for better flow, like this https://puu.sh/A8GKE/e4b0b6a169.jpg


[Countless]
  1. 00:43:479 (4) - 加nc吧,像前面一样
  2. 02:02:504 (2) - 试试ctrl+g,感觉这部分常用逆时针flow


也美丽
Shad0w1and

ArThasCD wrote:

Hello jonathanlfj :)


[General]

file size 31.7 MB lol



[shadow]

01:55:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - The shape could be improved as a better look pattern
03:09:453 (1) - the sound here is similar to 03:07:990 (1) - so you could make similar type of slider to it but not just a curved ones
03:13:843 (1) - the jump is too large. Although it matched the heavy sound well, it didn't match this difficulty. Maybe simply move it a bit closer would be fine :arrow: its fine cause the NC



美麗
AIR: no

http://puu.sh/A8HUb/22488c2b3c.zip
SyraxAxoJaxco
Okay, here's my M4M part~

General
Those grey CCs still look almost identical. I suggest that you darken the dark grey one to R90|G90|B80
Delis' Hard
00:18:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pink? It's supposed to be red here, right?
00:21:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Where's the orange?
01:08:723 (1,2,3) - Um, I think you don't need to NC this. There's no any difference in each combo (video-wise and mapping-wise) so...
01:09:455 (1,2,3) - The combocolor, imo it's kinda dull to give grey on this part. Maybe also change it to that light blue one?
In ^this case, maybe apply the dark blue again on 01:10:918 (1) - so you can apply the light blue on 01:21:894 (1,2,3) - .
03:05:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Umm, to avoid repetition, maybe use the pink one?

00:15:126 (5) - Move this to x309|y63 to balance the ds before and after the note.
00:17:138 (6) - But you can blanket this to x21|y168. Why with the untidiness? ^ ^'
With ^this, don't forget to also move 00:17:321 (7) - to x66|y98 to balance the ds again.
00:20:248 (5) - Almost correct. x266|y119 seems nicer if your target is to blanket this.
On 00:18:235 (1,2) - you used 1.4x ds while on 00:24:089 (1,2) - you used 1.3x ds. Can you make it consistent, please? Especially because 00:25:187 (2) - isn't associated with anything.
00:29:211 (7) - Almost correct. x396|y248 seems nicer if your target is to blanket this. Don't forget to move 00:29:760 (8) - too then.
00:31:955 (5) - Why with the ds imbalance? I suggest you move this to x453|y198
I really like 00:36:894 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern, but polish them to make them look better. Suggestions: 00:37:077 (2) - x307|y118, 00:37:260 (3) - x227|y143, 00:37:626 (1) - x318|y343, 00:37:809 (2) - x344|y263, 00:37:992 (3) - x262|y280
00:40:918 (7) - Woah, it's just too near with 00:41:650 (1) - . Mind moving 00:40:918 (7) - a bit to x243|y72 and 00:41:650 (1) - to x121|y136? ^ ^'
00:42:748 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - T.T Suggestion: 00:42:931 (2) - x225|y250, 00:43:114 (3) - x305|y226, 00:43:662 (2) - x225|y250
01:51:894 (1,2,3) - Okay, I get what you want to do here. But, 01:51:345 (6,2) - that untidy stack...ouch. Better move 01:51:894 (1) - to x415|y68 and 01:52:260 (2) - to x432|y216 for a win-win solution. XD
Shurelia's Normal
00:53:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess these CCs are unintentionally switched? ^ ^' (Don't forget to switch 00:59:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too then if you apply this)
02:25:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Orange? But this part's supposed to be pink, right?
03:43:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why don't these notes' CCs get customized as well? I hope it's just a coincidence. :3

00:09:455 (1) - Well, it's a nice slider if you can execute it more precisely. Suggestion: First white tick x314|y131, red tick x316|y88, second white tick x337|127, tail x381|y137. There, not the most perfect thing in the world but eh, I tried. XD
00:10:918 (3) - Same as ArThasCD's mod. But since I know what you're trying to achieve, maybe just move 00:10:918 (3) - to x512|y168 to minimize the damage. ^ ^'
00:23:723 (4,1) - Blanket issue. But hm, tricky tricky. I suggest you to move 00:22:626 (3) - tail to x96|y162, 00:23:723 (4) - to x29|y213, 00:24:089 (1) - head to x46|y298, first white tick to x83|y279, tail to x109|y246.
00:44:211 (8,1) - I get what you mean here. But, that tight space between 00:44:577 (1,2) - tho (o.o'). Move 00:44:211 (8) - to x247|y217 and 00:44:577 (1) - to x332|y220 to make them look better.
00:49:699 (5,6,1) - Blanket issue again. Suggestion: 00:49:699 (5,6,1) - head x325|y29, first white tick x346|y43, tail x361|y60, 00:50:065 (6) - x379|y106.
Dunno, I feel like 00:55:553 (6) - blanket is still kinda off. Maybe try to move 00:55:553 (6) - first white tick to x260|y184 and tail to x230|y148?
00:59:760 (2) - Minor thing, but x44|y323 please. XD
01:02:138 (1) - The same kinda-off feeling strikes again. Maybe try 01:02:138 (1) - head to x422|y148 and first white tick to x387|y125?
01:10:918 - Imo, you can't leave this beat unmapped. Try either putting another note on it or making 01:10:553 (6) - a 1/2 slider instead.
01:23:357 (3) - Blanket issue again. But eh, let's move 01:22:626 (1) - to x308|y200 and 01:22:992 (2) - to x227|y230 to make things go easier. XD
01:24:821 (6,1) - A g a i n. But, hm, let's just move 01:24:821 (6) - to x92|y246 so we can hinder from all the detail stuffs. ^ ^'
01:26:284 (3,4) - Almost, but not there yet. Move 01:26:284 (3) - tail to x244|y173.
01:27:382 (5,6) - Almost as well. But let's move 01:27:748 (6) - head to x462|y201, first white tick to x459|243, and tail to x438|y240.
01:30:675 (5,1) - Aiyeeehhhh. Let's just move the whole 01:31:406 (1) - to x202|y47 to save time.
01:34:333 (1) - Hmmm, my anal side told me to polish this. I'm sorry. XDD Suggestion: First white tick x318|y324, first red tick x292|y303, second red tick x256|y326, second white tick x226|y314, tail x194|y322
Easy
Honestly, I reeeeally can't find anything wrong here. I'm sorry but, congratulations (?) XDDD
jimmy55555
[Shadow]
01:06:894 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this part is confusing since the gaps are not the same. Could overlap like 01:09:089 (3,1) - when 1/2 gap comes.
01:24:821 (1) - ctrl + G? confusing with 01:24:272 (3,4) -
01:51:345 (3,1) - could rotate this (-50 degree) to fit with 01:50:796 (2) - -----it seems not to fit with 01:53:723 (2,3) - . Just some suggestions.
02:09:272 (5) - I think placing more right is better(form a line with 02:08:723 (3) - ).
02:27:198 (5) - overlap
03:00:307 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest not stack here and 03:01:770 (1,2) - stack. For 03:00:307 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe can have some triangle circular jump like what is done with this 03:22:258 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Because I think in this way, it is more fun and more clear to read.
03:15:856 (3) - should check this out. it has different distance with these 03:14:941 (5,1) -
03:47:319 (1) -Could place 03:47:319 (1) more lower right that can form two straight line with 03:46:039 (1,4,5,7) - and could use moon slider like collab and countess diff.

01:10:918 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - really like this

[Collab]

01:21:894 (1,2,3) - different gap with 01:22:260 (3,1) - but look almost the same with the space here. Could scale 01:21:894 (1,2,3) - imo.
01:24:272 (4) - I think you can emphasize this since this is a strong drum sound.(stack with 01:23:723 (2) - maybe?)
01:57:016 (1,2,3) - I think this is a problem. Could use 2 reverse sliders and the second one start at 01:57:382 - to match the rhythm here. If no change with the 2 reverse sliders here,could use 120 degree here (90 90 180 now).
02:08:906 - I somehow think no stream here is weird.
02:20:796 (1) - I just think this sound is not strong enough to break the flow here. Just some light suggestion.
02:28:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - could use stream and kick slider to fit with the HS here. stream match with the strong one and kick slider with the light one.
02:52:626 (1) - I think the SV here should not be that slow since the logic is the highest one 02:51:528 (1) - with smaller SV. I think just SV with 1.2 is OK.
02:56:284 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is a problem. This rhythm is not a combo with 3 beats its just normal 4 beats. Just like this part of Shadow1and's insane.
03:04:333 (1,2,3) - this is a problem. Same as I mentioned above could use 2 reverse sliders to match this rhythm.



[Countless]
00:34:333 (1,2,3,1,2) - the instrument sounds get smaller here but the DS gets larger.
01:32:321 (6) - I somehow will miss this note. It seems like this has different flow from the previous one.
02:16:955 (4) - stacked
02:38:722 - It's just my opinion. I don't like the HS here. It is noisy to me. Just simple sliderslide is OK to me.
03:04:331 (1,2,3) - problem Use the same as 03:02:136 (1,2) - .
02:58:843 (2,3,1) - I can't pass here... Just let you know.
03:24:636 (4) - break the flow here but no strong sound here. I think the solution here is to move 03:24:270 (2) - to the place of 03:23:722 (1) - , but it seems not fit well with 03:23:904 (2,1) - . Just some suggestion.


NICE SONG
leo16834
Hi~

  • Gereral


    Combo7 and Combo8 colors seems too similar ...?
  • Easy


    00:11:650 - How about use volume 5% on here?
    01:57:016 (1,2) - Swap NC?


  • Normal


    00:43:479 (6,7) - maybe put this one on straight
    01:10:918 - well~ I think need to add a circle on here
    02:00:309 (6,1) - blanket?
    02:53:600 (1,4) - try to avoid overlap on here
    03:24:087 (1,1) - Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats...?

  • Shad0w1and's Insane


    00:04:699 (2,1) - 好像没有叠好?
    00:39:089 (2,3) - 我不确定现在是不是可以接受点叠在折返点上 因为我之前被纠正这种摆法 或许可以在多问点意见 其他有相似的摆法就同这里
    01:07:260 (7,8) - 这里有点近 会不会有误判的可能呢?
    02:18:601 (2) - NC ?



  • Collab Insane


    02:10:187 (3,5) - seems not stack perfect?

  • Countless


    00:29:943 (1,2) - flow seems a little uncomfortable
    00:43:479 (4) - NC on here?
    02:20:614 (2,3) - a little far on here?







wow~ good map <3


好圖 :)
Shad0w1and

jimmy55555 wrote:

[Shadow]
01:06:894 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this part is confusing since the gaps are not the same. Could overlap like 01:09:089 (3,1) - when 1/2 gap comes. :arrow: it wont confused players at this speed
01:24:821 (1) - ctrl + G? confusing with 01:24:272 (3,4) - :arrow: ^
01:51:345 (3,1) - could rotate this (-50 degree) to fit with 01:50:796 (2) - -----it seems not to fit with 01:53:723 (2,3) - . Just some suggestions.
02:09:272 (5) - I think placing more right is better(form a line with 02:08:723 (3) - ). :arrow: its stacked on slider tail
02:27:198 (5) - overlap :arrow: ?
03:00:307 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest not stack here and 03:01:770 (1,2) - stack. For 03:00:307 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe can have some triangle circular jump like what is done with this 03:22:258 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Because I think in this way, it is more fun and more clear to read.
03:15:856 (3) - should check this out. it has different distance with these 03:14:941 (5,1) - :arrow: its fine
03:47:319 (1) -Could place 03:47:319 (1) more lower right that can form two straight line with 03:46:039 (1,4,5,7) - and could use moon slider like collab and countess diff. :arrow: pref current

01:10:918 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - really like this



NICE SONG

leo16834 wrote:

Hi~


  • Shad0w1and's Insane


    00:04:699 (2,1) - 好像没有叠好?
    00:39:089 (2,3) - 我不确定现在是不是可以接受点叠在折返点上 因为我之前被纠正这种摆法 或许可以在多问点意见 其他有相似的摆法就同这里 :arrow: 大於500ms ok
    01:07:260 (7,8) - 这里有点近 会不会有误判的可能呢? :arrow: 不會,故意的
    02:18:601 (2) - NC ?






好圖 :)
http://puu.sh/A9gvZ/785d123e59.zip
captin1
did air's suggestion, no to jimmy, i think the clear 1/3 beat here makes this pattern/rhythm more fitting
apaffy

ArThasCD wrote:

[Collab Insane]
01:57:748 (1) - should add finish to it as well okay

jimmy55555 wrote:

[Collab]
01:57:016 (1,2,3) - I think this is a problem. Could use 2 reverse sliders and the second one start at 01:57:382 - to match the rhythm here. If no change with the 2 reverse sliders here,could use 120 degree here (90 90 180 now). But that change would actually represent the rhythm worse. The real issue here is that I mis-hitsounded the tick on 01:57:382 - the pattern itself is snare, snare, snare, snare, kick, kick. I've adjusted the hitsounding to reflect that, but two reverse sliders would be a worse change by incorrectly grouping the notes. I don't see a need to change the positioning of the sliders either; it plays fine and looks fine.
02:08:906 - I somehow think no stream here is weird. Why am I the only one who gets told to make a stream there? In any case, it would mess up the patterning I'm doing there and I frankly don't see why it's necessary.
02:20:796 (1) - I just think this sound is not strong enough to break the flow here. Just some light suggestion. I don't really agree, especially given the drum pattern there. Sorry.
02:28:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - could use stream and kick slider to fit with the HS here. stream match with the strong one and kick slider with the light one. I don't see what a stream would do what my pattern hasn't. I mapped it like that because I wanted to group those sounds like that. A stream, particularly if I kinked it at the parts where I changed the combo could represent it equally well, but I don't see why I need to change it for the sake of changing it when my part already represents it fine.
02:52:626 (1) - I think the SV here should not be that slow since the logic is the highest one 02:51:528 (1) - with smaller SV. I think just SV with 1.2 is OK. Honestly, I did the low SV just to fit the slider in there. I can see how that's potentially weird to players. Increased SV to 1.0x.
02:56:284 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is a problem. This rhythm is not a combo with 3 beats its just normal 4 beats. Just like this part of Shadow1and's insane. The grouping is based on the guitar. Perhaps my ears are fooling me, but given the pitch change between 02:56:467 - 02:56:650 - 02:56:833 - those ticks in each repetition there, I did not want to group them the way you are suggesting. I think you could make the case that my comboing could be different there, but I feel the way I represented the pattern in the music is valid.

leo16834 wrote:

  • Collab Insane

    02:10:187 (3,5) - seems not stack perfect? fixed
Shurelia

ArThasCD wrote:

[shurelia]

00:12:382 (1) - The spacing will confuse people because the spacing here shows 1/2 beat but it is actually 1/1. should move it further to avoid the confusion I'm gonna stack it instead since it'll cost a lots of space if i want to move it further to avoid confusion
02:25:552 (1,2) - I think they are too close so they look not good. Maybe make like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10780464 yes
03:04:880 - the drum is strong so it probably need a circle to follow it let's give it a try
03:38:722 (3) - move it to (397,123) if you wanna make a pretty blanket with 03:37:990 (2) - sure

AIR wrote:

[Shurelia's Normal]
  1. 00:24:821 (2) - how about use 1/2 to following the voice, like what you did before. 00:13:114 (2,3,4) - sure
  2. 03:10:185 (2) - nc please NC

SyraxAxoJaxco wrote:

Okay, here's my M4M part~



[notice][b]Shurelia's Normal

00:53:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess these CCs are unintentionally switched? ^ ^' (Don't forget to switch 00:59:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too then if you apply this)
02:25:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Orange? But this part's supposed to be pink, right?
03:43:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why don't these notes' CCs get customized as well? I hope it's just a coincidence. :3 idk if you are already noticed but, the thing about this map's CC or not. but basically the CC plays for this map are actually video based . That aside i do agree with the third point so i did something to it

00:09:455 (1) - Well, it's a nice slider if you can execute it more precisely. Suggestion: First white tick x314|y131, red tick x316|y88, second white tick x337|127, tail x381|y137. There, not the most perfect thing in the world but eh, I tried. XD oooh, sure thanks
00:10:918 (3) - Same as ArThasCD's mod. But since I know what you're trying to achieve, maybe just move 00:10:918 (3) - to x512|y168 to minimize the damage. ^ ^' same reply then
00:23:723 (4,1) - Blanket issue. But hm, tricky tricky. I suggest you to move 00:22:626 (3) - tail to x96|y162, 00:23:723 (4) - to x29|y213, 00:24:089 (1) - head to x46|y298, first white tick to x83|y279, tail to x109|y246. yes
00:44:211 (8,1) - I get what you mean here. But, that tight space between 00:44:577 (1,2) - tho (o.o'). Move 00:44:211 (8) - to x247|y217 and 00:44:577 (1) - to x332|y220 to make them look better. there
00:49:699 (5,6,1) - Blanket issue again. Suggestion: 00:49:699 (5,6,1) - head x325|y29, first white tick x346|y43, tail x361|y60, 00:50:065 (6) - x379|y106.
Dunno, I feel like 00:55:553 (6) - blanket is still kinda off. Maybe try to move 00:55:553 (6) - first white tick to x260|y184 and tail to x230|y148?
00:59:760 (2) - Minor thing, but x44|y323 please. XD
01:02:138 (1) - The same kinda-off feeling strikes again. Maybe try 01:02:138 (1) - head to x422|y148 and first white tick to x387|y125?
01:10:918 - Imo, you can't leave this beat unmapped. Try either putting another note on it or making 01:10:553 (6) - a 1/2 slider instead. naaah, i don't want to forcing myself to slider-art spamming on this section.
01:23:357 (3) - Blanket issue again. But eh, let's move 01:22:626 (1) - to x308|y200 and 01:22:992 (2) - to x227|y230 to make things go easier. XD
01:24:821 (6,1) - A g a i n. But, hm, let's just move 01:24:821 (6) - to x92|y246 so we can hinder from all the detail stuffs. ^ ^'
01:26:284 (3,4) - Almost, but not there yet. Move 01:26:284 (3) - tail to x244|y173.
01:27:382 (5,6) - Almost as well. But let's move 01:27:748 (6) - head to x462|y201, first white tick to x459|243, and tail to x438|y240.
01:30:675 (5,1) - Aiyeeehhhh. Let's just move the whole 01:31:406 (1) - to x202|y47 to save time.
01:34:333 (1) - Hmmm, my anal side told me to polish this. I'm sorry. XDD Suggestion: First white tick x318|y324, first red tick x292|y303, second red tick x256|y326, second white tick x226|y314, tail x194|y322[ yes/notice]regarding blanket stuffs, i do check it and also applies your suggestions too , Thank you

leo16834 wrote:

[notice]
  • Normal


    00:43:479 (6,7) - maybe put this one on straight yes
    01:10:918 - well~ I think need to add a circle on here yes
    02:00:309 (6,1) - blanket? blanket
    02:53:600 (1,4) - try to avoid overlap on here it's a fine and readable overlap , so should be fine
    03:24:087 (1,1) - Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats...? changed the spinner into a slider

Thank you
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

ArThasCD wrote:

Hello jonathanlfj :)


[General]

file size 31.7 MB lol video quality xD


[top diff]

00:02:504 (5) - I think the spacing is somewhat too large as a quite soft part. Also the similar part like 00:05:065 (4,5) - and 00:07:992 (3,4,5) - spacing there are comfortable. I think 00:02:504 (5) - should be decreased though
02:02:870 (3) - How about moving it to (112,56) to make 02:02:504 (2,3) - look nicer imo that kills the stacking here, im ok with the asymmetrical look tbh
02:05:796 (3) - I think you could make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10779942 would be better look
02:38:722 (1) - I think you could make a special slider shape here to emphasize the different sound here. Also it would be good to spotlight the low speed slider as a caution imo
03:25:185 (5) - How about NC here to highlight the different stream so it would distinct with 03:24:819 (1,2,3,4) -


[Easy]

00:04:699 (2) - I think the shape looks not good >< something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10780524 looks better imo



美麗

AIR wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
  1. 01:28:479 (1) - 我觉得这个条没必要有棱有角,类似前一部分的弧形怎样
  2. 03:07:990 (1,1,1) - 感觉好像有点乱,试试del nc, 03:08:722 (2) - add nc 这里跟video


[Countless]
  1. 00:43:479 (4) - 加nc吧,像前面一样
  2. 02:02:504 (2) - 试试ctrl+g,感觉这部分常用逆时针flow 我觉得现在这样更好玩一些


也美丽

jimmy55555 wrote:

[Countless]

00:34:333 (1,2,3,1,2) - the instrument sounds get smaller here but the DS gets larger. the drums kick in so DS is increased

01:32:321 (6) - I somehow will miss this note. It seems like this has different flow from the previous one. this is because its stacked under the slider; its a gimmic i took from another map

02:16:955 (4) - stacked

02:38:722 - It's just my opinion. I don't like the HS here. It is noisy to me. Just simple sliderslide is OK to me. i love the whistle here ><

03:04:331 (1,2,3) - problem Use the same as 03:02:136 (1,2) - . i don't see a problem here, the drums are clearly different to the other ones earlier because this is during the chorus

02:58:843 (2,3,1) - I can't pass here... Just let you know.i tested this many times (with mouse only too), its tricky if you alternate but if you single tap its actually really easy

03:24:636 (4) - break the flow here but no strong sound here. I think the solution here is to move 03:24:270 (2) - to the place of 03:23:722 (1) - , but it seems not fit well with 03:23:904 (2,1) - . Just some suggestion. i think i know what you mean, i moved 03:24:270 (2) to 03:23:722 (1) to create a sharper angle to compensate

NICE SONG

leo16834 wrote:

Hi~

  • Gereral


    Combo7 and Combo8 colors seems too similar ...?
  • Easy


    00:11:650 - How about use volume 5% on here?
    01:57:016 (1,2) - Swap NC?


  • Countless


    00:29:943 (1,2) - flow seems a little uncomfortable i think this is pretty standard flow?
    00:43:479 (4) - NC on here?
    02:20:614 (2,3) - a little far on here? i think this is fine, not the biggest jump in the map either


wow~ good map <3


好圖 :)
No reply or quote = fixed as-is. Thanks for modding!
Giralda
Did everything from ArThasCD.

@Jimmy: The small gap in question is justified based on the brief pause between 01:22:260 to 01:22:626. There is nowhere else to really go other than to maintain the same position. Other than that, everything else looks fine to me.
ShirohaMyMommy
00:09:455 (1) - ok
00:14:577 (4) - idk the hs is copied from the top diff and theres no whistle on the top diff
00:15:126 (5) - yea sure
00:17:138 (6) - what its fine as is lol
00:18:235 (1,2) - why should i, it will look kinda worse
00:20:248 (5) - it looks perfect for me
00:29:211 (7) - nothing could happen to be a blanket so idk what u exactly meant lol
00:31:955 (5) - because i mapped the entire diff without ds? since the snapping is different i dont find it worth a fix
00:36:894 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i dont know what the point is anymore here lol it's perfect as is
00:40:918 (7) - ya
00:42:748 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why though
01:46:772 (2) - fixed
01:48:235 (2) - the jump seems to fit here better
01:51:894 (1,2,3) - id simply move the slider
02:47:502 (1,2,3) - considering the bpm and the snapping it looks fine

@SyraxAxoJaxco: i dont know about the combo color because i didn't touch anything (jonathanlfj did it for me) tried to adjust the combos to have the same colors as what the top diff has


thx :d
Garden
Shurelia's Normal:
00:48:601 - 01:58:845 - wonder why the vocals get ignored since they sound quite prior and your overall rhythm seems to be highly focused on vocal
01:01:406 (6,7) - for similar reason try replacing them with 1/4 reversed slider maybe?
01:37:992 (3,4,5,6) - here I would suggest you put 6 farther (sth like https://puu.sh/AggXy/b615285c5e.png) cuz the pattern is now too cramped at this approaching rate, might cause some unnecessary misread
01:42:748 (5) - one single circle seems enough to me
03:07:990 (1,2) - 03:09:453 (2,3) - as you're actively going for vocal consider adding whistle to 03:07:990 - 03:08:356 - 03:09:453 - 03:09:819 - for nicer feedback


Delis' Hard:
01:34:333 (1) - don't you think this 1 special sound deserves a weird shape rather than 01:33:235 (6) - ? like you did to 02:38:722 (1) -


Shad0w1and's Insane:
01:54:729 - as you're focusing on instruments for non-kiai section I would highly recommend you mapping the 1/8 drum here
02:31:771 (6) - consider putting the slider at somewhere around 130,0 , following same motion as 02:29:942 (1,2,3) - since two lines of vocal sound similar
02:49:331 (4) - tail should be snapped to 1/4
03:00:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - gradually increase the spacing of each group for the upgoing pitch?
03:26:282 (3,4) - could probably stack the tail of 4 to 03:24:819 (1) - so 03:25:551 (1,3) - won't overlap, should look neater visually


Collab Insane:
00:47:504 - weird it doesn't have a kiai here, kinda contradicts with rest of the difficulty
01:26:284 (3,5,8) - guess they should stack refering to 01:32:504 (6,8) - 01:37:992 (5,7,10) -
01:57:748 - 02:09:455 - 02:21:162 - 02:25:552 - etc. could add finish
02:46:406 (2,3) - maybe ctrl-g it'd be smoother to play
02:47:504 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd go with 1/3 snapping, first one is quite obvious while the rest two seem to be a bit ambiguous so you might want more opinions on this.
03:47:502 - maybe use gradually lower volume, as music is fading out the slider ticks become more obvious to hear


Countless:
02:47:502 - same snapping concern as mentioned in collab insane
03:13:112 (6) - could add nc as a sign of switching rhythm
03:46:770 (2) - c0nsider moving to somewhere around 40, 260 to provide 03:46:953 (1) - 03:47:136 (2) - with same spacing emphasis
03:47:502 - same thing as mentioned in collab insane
Shad0w1and

Garden wrote:

Shad0w1and's Insane:
01:54:729 - as you're focusing on instruments for non-kiai section I would highly recommend you mapping the 1/8 drum here :arrow: 1/8太多了点,比如01:31:223 - 01:28:296 - 等等,所以我统一kiai之外无视1/8
02:31:771 (6) - consider putting the slider at somewhere around 130,0 , following same motion as 02:29:942 (1,2,3) - since two lines of vocal sound similar :arrow: i guess both will work
02:49:331 (4) - tail should be snapped to 1/4 :arrow: its still snapped to the 1/3 guitar
03:00:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - gradually increase the spacing of each group for the upgoing pitch?
03:26:282 (3,4) - could probably stack the tail of 4 to 03:24:819 (1) - so 03:25:551 (1,3) - won't overlap, should look neater visually :arrow: i pref the current patterns
http://puu.sh/AgOFf/101779d69c.zip
Log Off Now
07:33 *Shurelia is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1353171 KurousaP feat. Hana - Jougen no Tsuki [Shurelia's Normal]]
07:33 Shurelia: this
07:35 Log Off Now: ljf poggers
07:35 Shurelia: i'm working with high tier dudes at here
07:35 Shurelia: and this normal that i made in 2017
07:36 Shurelia: and i polished again recently
07:39 Log Off Now: 00:14:577 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - rhythm is kinda dense for how calm the song is
07:39 Shurelia: remove the 1/4s?
07:39 Log Off Now: 00:16:406 (3,4) - change this rhythm
07:39 Shurelia: actually now
07:39 Shurelia: no
07:40 Shurelia: into?
07:40 Shurelia: remove the 1/4s
07:40 Shurelia: into a circle?
07:40 Log Off Now: wat
07:40 Shurelia: ignore those
07:40 Log Off Now: 00:28:845 (5,6) - also side note
07:40 Shurelia: 00:16:406 (3,4) - talk about this
07:40 Shurelia: what should i do
07:40 Log Off Now: different rhythm used for same piece of muisic
07:41 Shurelia: oh shit
07:41 Log Off Now: i would reuse 00:28:845 (5,6) - this at 00:16:772 (4,5) -
07:41 Log Off Now: 00:16:406 (3) - change this so it lands on the white tick
07:41 Log Off Now: https://i.gyazo.com/d55bdaadfd6a0d80bf98f672df06cc7a.png so ur rhytm look liek this
07:42 Log Off Now: 00:31:955 (4,5) - ok defnitely dont recommend doing this in a normal
07:43 Log Off Now: 01:23:357 (3,4,5) - would change note placement here since its kinda misleading
07:44 Shurelia: a
07:44 Log Off Now: INDONESIAN INTERNET OMEGALUL
07:45 Log Off Now: anyway
07:45 Shurelia: if that's happen again , pls discord
07:45 Log Off Now: ok
07:45 Log Off Now: 01:23:357 (3,4,5) - this is misleading
07:45 Shurelia: no, it's just my wifi adaptor is being placed pretty afar from my laptop
07:45 Shurelia: lul
07:45 Log Off Now: (3) slider implies you're gonna hit 6 next
07:45 Shurelia: misleading?
07:45 Log Off Now: ya
07:45 Shurelia: gonna fix it then
07:45 Shurelia: ooh
07:45 Log Off Now: 01:34:333 (1) - damn this is a nice slider
07:46 Log Off Now: 01:38:540 (4,5) - still dont think this is good in a normal diff
07:46 Shurelia: whoa, thanks bae
07:46 Shurelia: too dense?
07:46 Log Off Now: way too d ense
07:46 Shurelia: gimme something
07:46 Log Off Now: altho
07:46 Log Off Now: actually
07:46 Log Off Now: actually nvm ignore me its fine
07:47 Shurelia: woke
07:47 Log Off Now: altho i wouldnt do it outside the kiai often
07:47 Log Off Now: cus thats the hardest rhythm you can do
07:48 Log Off Now: nice job on making the transition into the 3/4 section nice
07:48 Log Off Now: 02:29:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - not sure on this rhythm, ik its following vocals, but you do a similar thing here 02:36:162 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
07:49 Log Off Now: and both rhythms are basically the same but following different things
07:49 Log Off Now: so its an e m p h a s i s i s s u e
07:49 Log Off Now: 02:53:356 (6,1) - monkas
07:49 Log Off Now: 02:54:331 (2,3) - turn into slider pls
07:50 Shurelia: eeh
07:50 Shurelia: i can't just click it?
07:50 Log Off Now: i mean iguess you can
07:50 Log Off Now: but its super monkas for normal diff
07:50 Shurelia: then it's fine
07:50 Shurelia: unless you're going monkaGIGA
07:50 Shurelia: then i'll consider
07:51 Log Off Now: ` 03:27:197 (3,4) - change this rhythm since its the only time you use this pattern in this outro
07:51 Log Off Now: t y
07:51 Log Off Now: pretty good
07:52 Shurelia: into?
07:52 Log Off Now: idk
07:52 Log Off Now: whatever you did for the same part afterwards
07:52 Log Off Now: LOL
07:52 Log Off Now: i think you used a repeat slidere
07:53 Shurelia: removed 3 then
07:53 Shurelia: oh wait
07:53 Shurelia: actually
07:53 Shurelia: got a better idea
07:54 Shurelia: there
07:56 Shurelia: anything else btw
07:57 Log Off Now: not rly
07:57 Shurelia: ok you can post log
07:57 Shurelia: for kudos
07:58 Log Off Now: wot
07:58 Log Off Now: uh ok
Shurelia
appiled everything from garden's

Thanks garden and lon!

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287,66,206648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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apaffy
Applied everything from Garden's mod to my part. Thank you.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Garden wrote:

Collab Insane:
00:47:504 - weird it doesn't have a kiai here, kinda contradicts with rest of the difficulty
01:26:284 (3,5,8) - guess they should stack refering to 01:32:504 (6,8) - 01:37:992 (5,7,10) -
01:57:748 - 02:09:455 - 02:21:162 - 02:25:552 - etc. could add finish
02:46:406 (2,3) - maybe ctrl-g it'd be smoother to play
02:47:504 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd go with 1/3 snapping, first one is quite obvious while the rest two seem to be a bit ambiguous so you might want more opinions on this.
03:47:502 - maybe use gradually lower volume, as music is fading out the slider ticks become more obvious to hear
i helped the other collabers apply the fixes


Countless:
02:47:502 - same snapping concern as mentioned in collab insane made first 2 1/3 since its within +-10ms of that range, but the last one im leaning more towards 1/4 which I decided to use due to the drums forcing rhythm to go back to 1/4. Collab insane is different because it's strictly following guitarz
03:13:112 (6) - could add nc as a sign of switching rhythm
03:46:770 (2) - c0nsider moving to somewhere around 40, 260 to provide 03:46:953 (1) - 03:47:136 (2) - with same spacing emphasis
03:47:502 - same thing as mentioned in collab insane
No comment = fixed as is
Thanks for modding (and a lot of stars) :)
Garden
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Mafumafu
[General]

[Easy]
03:43:112 (1,1,1,1,1) - Feels it not necessary to NC every note since you dont have obvious SV changes here. Frequent NC could possibly confuses the player. Same for Normal. It is okay to do that in Hard and higher diffs though.

[Shurelia]
00:46:040 (5,1) - Better to put them further from each other.
02:53:356 (6,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is problematic under Normal difficulty. Due to low AR and DS, it is pretty hard to read the 1/3s here. This needs to be changed into some reverse sliders as Easy.
02:58:478 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1) - Though I could understand the pattern here to match the music, according to the Ranking Criteria (Guideline), this pattern is questionable because there are too many 1/4 in a row without giving the player a rest. This needs to be nerf'ed by adding some 1/2 breaks within this pattern.
03:42:380 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same here.

[Delis]
02:29:027 (5,6,7,8) - A little bit crowded
02:54:819 (4,5,6) - this rhthm change caught me off guard lol
03:07:990 (1,2) - 03:09:453 (3,1) - Should be kept consistent spcing imo.

[Shad0wland's Insane]
02:06:528 (1,2) - Should be larger as to spacing for it is actually a 1/2 gap.
02:59:209 (1,2,3) - Expect slightly larger visua lspacing between the sliderbodies.

[Collab Insane]
01:57:016 (1,2,3) - How about rotate 120 degrees instead of 90 here? Since you only have three sliders. 120 degree could also play as a hint for the 1/6 rhythm

[Countless]
01:09:089 (3) - thought it could be better if the tail of the slider could be tapped out so maybe considering changing this to a 7/8 slider+note
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