This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May 27, 2018 at 11:11:06 PM

Artist: Usa
Title: Jougen no Tsuki
Tags: 黒うさP feat. はな KurousaP feat. Hana Shurelia Shad0w1and Delis Trust Giralda apaffy captin1 waning moon KAITO V3 黒うさP Senbonzakura 千本桜 5th ANNIVERSARY BEST 妖艶和奏絵巻 一斗まる 倉内達矢 gram6design
BPM: 82
Filesize: 32563kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:

1. Collab Insane (4.4 stars, 659 notes)
2. Delis' Hard (3.32 stars, 537 notes)
3. Shad0w1and's Insane (4.27 stars, 547 notes)
4. Shurelia's Normal (2.13 stars, 445 notes)
5. Countless (4.85 stars, 717 notes)
6. Easy (1.47 stars, 265 notes)

Download: Usa - Jougen no Tsuki
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Collab Insane brought to you by:
Trust | Giralda | apaffy | captin1

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UwU

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好歌，要飞我送GD啊！可能会做挺久就是了。
=Mod=wip, finish later

有别人帮我做第二个insane了你要是能做个hard最好了

jonathanlfj wrote:

有别人帮我做第二个insane了你要是能做个hard最好了

准备4难度飞还是5难度？
5难度我挺想弄个3.6样子的 Hyper，你下面就要加adv和normal xc
4难度的话我控制3.2 Hard吧

3.2吧

哇，上弦

bump
so jona would push this soon enough :eyes:

@Giralda jougen when

@captin jougen now

ಠ_ಠ

it's finally happening holy

can you change my diff into "Shurelia's Normal" tho.

People tends to not know who made "Shu's xxx" is.


nvm diff is bad lol
gonna do something with it

i can check when you're ready

Hello jonathanlfj


[General]

file size 31.7 MB lol


[top diff]

00:02:504 (5) - I think the spacing is somewhat too large as a quite soft part. Also the similar part like 00:05:065 (4,5) - and 00:07:992 (3,4,5) - spacing there are comfortable. I think 00:02:504 (5) - should be decreased though
02:02:870 (3) - How about moving it to (112,56) to make 02:02:504 (2,3) - look nicer imo
02:05:796 (3) - I think you could make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10779942 would be better look
02:38:722 (1) - I think you could make a special slider shape here to emphasize the different sound here. Also it would be good to spotlight the low speed slider as a caution imo
03:25:185 (5) - How about NC here to highlight the different stream so it would distinct with 03:24:819 (1,2,3,4) -


[Collab Insane]

00:57:748 (5) - NC here for the new part ?
01:06:528 (4) - the NC is different from 00:54:455 (1) - and 00:56:284 (1) - . In this kiai time, the NCs are sometimes quite long, sometimes very short. I think you could add more NC to the long combo part so it would not look like inconsistent stuff though
01:09:089 (3) - I think the anti-jump here didn't fit the music so well since the beat could be emphasized by a larger jump. Moving it to (268,172) would play enjoyable as well.
01:57:748 (1) - should add finish to it as well


[shadow]

01:55:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - The shape could be improved as a better look pattern
03:09:453 (1) - the sound here is similar to 03:07:990 (1) - so you could make similar type of slider to it but not just a curved ones
03:13:843 (1) - the jump is too large. Although it matched the heavy sound well, it didn't match this difficulty. Maybe simply move it a bit closer would be fine


[H]

00:14:577 (4) - should add whistle to follow the guitar
01:46:772 (2) - should be completely stacked so it would not be confusing as the same overlap at 01:54:729 (4) -
02:47:502 (1,2,3) - Do the spacing need the kind of large ? They look common patterns in Insanes to me


[shurelia]

00:12:382 (1) - The spacing will confuse people because the spacing here shows 1/2 beat but it is actually 1/1. should move it further to avoid the confusion
02:25:552 (1,2) - I think they are too close so they look not good. Maybe make like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10780464
03:04:880 - the drum is strong so it probably need a circle to follow it
03:38:722 (3) - move it to (397,123) if you wanna make a pretty blanket with 03:37:990 (2) -


[Easy]

00:04:699 (2) - I think the shape looks not good >< something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10780524 looks better imo



美麗

hi~

[Easy]

1. 01:28:479 (1) - 我觉得这个条没必要有棱有角，类似前一部分的弧形怎样
2. 03:07:990 (1,1,1) - 感觉好像有点乱，试试del nc, 03:08:722 (2) - add nc

[Shurelia's Normal]

1. 00:24:821 (2) - how about use 1/2 to following the voice, like what you did before. 00:13:114 (2,3,4) -
2. 03:10:185 (2) - nc please

[Delis' Hard]

1. 00:09:455 (1) - please move to 264,157 to improve the stack
2. 01:48:235 (2) - maybe move to 35,282 for equal distance

[Shad0w1and's Insane]

1. 02:08:723 (3,5) - 5叠到3上怎样

[Collab Insane]

1. 03:40:187 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps rearrangement for better flow, like this https://puu.sh/A8GKE/e4b0b6a169.jpg

[Countless]

1. 00:43:479 (4) - 加nc吧，像前面一样
2. 02:02:504 (2) - 试试ctrl+g，感觉这部分常用逆时针flow

也美丽

ArThasCD wrote:

Hello jonathanlfj


[General]

file size 31.7 MB lol



[shadow]

01:55:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - The shape could be improved as a better look pattern
03:09:453 (1) - the sound here is similar to 03:07:990 (1) - so you could make similar type of slider to it but not just a curved ones
03:13:843 (1) - the jump is too large. Although it matched the heavy sound well, it didn't match this difficulty. Maybe simply move it a bit closer would be fine its fine cause the NC



美麗

AIR: no

http://puu.sh/A8HUb/22488c2b3c.zip