CptSqBany wrote:

Modzik :v

00:01:744 (1) - nie wiem jak ty, ja tu slysze stream... :v zmien go na stream Zmienione
00:12:077 (1,2,3,4) - mało intuicyjne, grając pierwszy raz, nie da sie raczej tego dobrze rozczytać Zmienione i powinno być lepiej
00:24:077 (1,2) - ja tu słysze ciągły stream a nie taki z przerwami Masz rację, ale moim zdaniem stream tam nie pasuje i dlatego zrobiłem kickslidery na dwóch mocniejszych dźwiękach :v
00:26:744 (7) - New Combo, oraz zrób krótkie reverse slidery 1/8 bo muzyka wskazuje na 1/8, a slidery bo nikt nie bedzie chcial streamowac 1/8 Zmienione
00:28:077 (5) - on się powinien kończyć na czerwonym ticku, potem, na niebieskim kółko, a następnie na białym ten slider (6) Zmienione
00:51:410 (1,2,3,4) - tu jest 1/3 a nie 1/4, popraw Zmienione
00:53:410 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Zmienione
00:54:077 (5) - ^ Zmienione
01:10:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - ten part kompletnie przerób bo jest zupełnie nietrafny do muzyki. (np w taki sposób https://puu.sh/tcijK/f92f8be588.jpg . Ustaw na tych samych tickach co ja tu ci pokazuje na 1/12) Dzięki wielkie za pomoc z tym, od początku nie wiedziałem jak to zrobić ;w; Zmienione
01:22:744 - 01:27:910 - te streamy są 1/3, więc twoje 1/4 jest zupełnie nie do rytmu nie do muzyki, przerób je Zmienione
01:30:410 (5,6) - usuń (6) i (5) zamień na slider kończący się na białym ticku Zmienione
01:35:660 (8) - on powinien być na niebieskim ticku wcześniej, oraz (9) new combo Zmienione
01:37:660 (3) - on powinien się kończyć na niebieskim ticku wcześniej, potem dodaj na białym kółko, a slider (4) przesuń na czerwony i wydłuż na kolejny czerwony Zmienione
01:48:744 (9) - tu jest 1/3 a nie 1/4 Zmienione
01:53:410 (1,2,3,4) - mało intuicyjne, grając pierwszy raz, nie da sie raczej tego dobrze rozczytać Chyba teraz jest lepiej
02:16:744 (1,2,3,4) - tu jest 1/3 a nie 1/4, popraw Zmienione
02:18:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Zmienione
02:36:077 (1,2,3,4,5) - ten part kompletnie przerób bo jest zupełnie nietrafny do muzyki. (przerób podobnie jak w 01:10:744 - ) Zmienione
03:22:077 (9) - tu jest 1/3, i skróć go zeby pasował do muzyki Zmienione
03:32:077 (1,2,3,4,5) - ten part kompletnie przerób bo jest zupełnie nietrafny do muzyki. (przerób podobnie jak w 01:10:744 - ) Zmienione
03:54:744 - tu jest 1/3 ale w miare to pasuje, wiec zrób jak uważasz Lepiej żeby było pod 1/3 skoro tam jest dźwięk, zmienione
03:55:744 (4) - tu zmień na 1/3 Zmienione
03:56:744 (3) - ^ Zmienione
03:58:077 (3) - to zupełnie nie pasuje, lepiej jak zrobisz normalne jumpy z kolek lub sliderow Zmienione
03:58:744 (1,2,3) - 1/3 Zmienione
04:02:744 - może jakaś gwiazda a nie takie byle co Zmienione

Peuniak wrote:

Nie jest źle, ale oprócz błędów które napisał SqBany jest dużo błędów estetycznych, jakieś brzydkie overlapy itp., generalnie ja często podchodzę do map pedantycznie i jak mi się nie zgadza pattern to od razu to wytykam, to nie są jakieś okropne błędy (byłyby okropne gdybyś próbował rankować mapę). Mimo wszystko warto dbać o to żeby mapa była ładna dla oczu. No właśnie pewno w przyszłości będę się starał o rank dla niej, więc dziękuję za informację! Postaram się nad tym popracować w najbliższym czasie.

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-chyba najbardziej rzuca mi się w oczy to, że spacing pomiędzy streamami 1/3 jest praktycznie taki sam jak między 1/4 np. spójrz sobie na ten part końcówki kiai i początku 1/3 streamów, które znowu wchodzi w 1/4 01:22:744 - 01:33:410 , ciężko takie coś przeczytać, albo zmniejsz trochę spacing 1/4 albo zwiększ 1/3 żeby gracz mógł wyraźnie przeczytać zmianę szybkości streama, (tutaj raczej zwiększyłbym spacing 1/3, dla 1/4 jest wystarczający), Myślałem że jak dam różne to będzie źle wyglądać, ale rzeczywiście masz rację ^^ zmienione

-parę takich setupowych niuansów, np. tutaj 01:34:744 (5,6,7) - te kółka to nadal powinny być 1/2 slidery tak samo jak 01:33:410 (1,2,3,4) , nie dość że mapa traci na dynamice (a muzyka nadal jest dynamiczna) to slidery o wiele bardziej odpowiadają tym dźwiękom gitary, Zmienione!
-takie overlapy jak np. 01:55:410 (3,5), 01:57:077 (8,1), 02:36:744 (6,1) - są straszne brzydkie i odbierają tej mapce walorów estetycznych, mapka może odpowiadać rytmowi ale będzie po prostu brzydka, często w mapach ovelapy są zawsze o takie same odległości, albo obiekty są w pełni zestackowane, np. tutaj zrobiłeś to dobrze 02:15:077 (11,13), Jak widać mi nie wyszło, bo w tamtych miejscach miały być overlapy Zmienione + postaram się poprawić więcej takich miejsc

-02:48:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - zaznacz sobie wszystkie te kółka, zobaczysz też trochę jak twój placing kółek w tym parcie jest praktycznie losowy, ani patterny jakoś sobie nie odpowiadają i są "z dupy", np. takie kółka 02:48:077 (1,5) - powinny być zestackowane (tłumaczę w punkcie wyżej), new combo tez jest wydaje się być całkiem losowe, jeden krótki part i parę kółek a już można wychwycić dużo błędów, Teraz nie powinno już być tak losowo, ułożenie obiektów się powtarza a nowe combo są na dużych białych tickach
03:15:410 (2,4,7) - kolejny przykład złego placingu, a dokładnie chodzi o 7 (ja w tym wypadku zamiast 7 skopiowałbym po prostu 2), takie rzeczy teoretycznie podczas gry nie są widoczne, ale ich spore nałożenie w czasie sprawia że gracz będzie traktował mapę jako kolejnego "unrankeda do ćwiczenia streamów", a nie mapkę z ciekawą strukturą, Również zmienione

-03:36:077 (1,2,3,4) - te slidery powinny być ctrl+c ctrl+v od 1, (widać że są różne, źle to wygląda), Poprawiłem tylko 3 i 4, gdyż te u góry tak miały być.

-jeszcze tak ogólnie to możesz coś tam pokombinować bardziej z timing pointami (volume i slider velocity), wolniejszy part = wolniejszy slider i cichsze hitsoundy (z głośnością praktycznie nic nie jest porobione oprócz ustawienia na 35%), Hitsoundy zostawie sobie na sam koniec, w ogóle ich nie ogarniam.

To pojedyncze rzeczy które wypisałem, można odnieść do całej mapy, błędów tego typu jest bardzo dużo, postaraj się samemu poszukać co jest nie tak (jeśli nie widzisz dobrze złych overlapów polecam ustawić sobie AR 6/5, wtedy będziesz w stanie łatwiej dostrzec pewnie rzeczy). Dzięki za radę! ^^

Generalnie jak na początkującego i tak props że stworzyłeś mapę która jest fun to play, to już jakieś osiągnięcie
Jeśli chcesz się bardziej rozwijać w mappingu to researchuj tyle ile możesz, osobiście polecam pordaniki pishifata na youtubie i ogrom threadów na fourm osu! o tym jak robić dobre patterny jeśli chodzi o jumpy/slidery/streamy itd. Poczytaj trochę a uwierz że twoje mapki nabiorą lepszych kształtów Pishiego oglądam prawie co tydzień i za każdym razem próbuję coś wynieść z jego filmów xD Za forum osu! jeszcze się nie zabrałem, ale wkrótce to z pewnością zrobię

Toehoe wrote:

General

1. Timing is off slightly, offset should be 1,395 Fixed!

Euphoria

1. 00:02:160 (7,8) - 2 notes at same time, delete one then fix spacing Lol, I didn't saw that. Fixed!
2. 01:26:632 (6,1) - Jump is really harsh, especially when you didn't have a jump here 01:24:633 (6,7) I'm not very sure about this. Sound on 01:24:744 (7) this slider isn't as strong as on 01:26:744 (1) this one ;w;
3. 01:43:410 (13,14,15) - 1/4 jump again, (13) should stay as part of the stream and then tone down the jump spacing But here I think it will be fine, fixed
4. 01:56:744 (6,7,8,9) - 02:49:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very hard jumps in the calmest parts of the song, I'd reconsider this 02:49:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - here I wanted to seperate the 1/1 and 1/2 sounds +I think they really well match this part, but sure, I can put these circles a little bit closer to each other. 01:56:744 (6,7,8,9) - here I won't change anything, vocal is as intense as here: 00:31:410 (7,8,9,10).
5. 03:58:077 (3,4,5,6) - If you're trying to accentuate the end of the song here, suddenly putting 4 full-screen jumps is a little bit overkill Sure, I'll put these circles a bit closer.

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~
Checking Easy and Euphoria as requested in your mod (that's what I understood you meant anyways >.<)

General

1. metadata seems legit enough, tho I'm not sure about dat title since in the official page it looks as if it's just part of the whole title or smth. Check that page and think for yourself what you want to use ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ This is acutally a novel adaptation of this song series, and this song was made to promote it ^^

Easy

1. while this is especially visually clearly more matured than the last map I checked, most of the stuff I said is still relevant. For example 00:19:394 (2,3) - should definitely be blanketed, like it's almost doing it already. There are other examples of this too, check carefully. Most of them are the "slightly off" kind of mistakes tho. Examples 00:37:394 (4,5) - 00:48:061 (1,2) - 01:14:728 (1,2) - 01:24:728 (2,1) - you get the point All fixed except 01:14:728 (1,2), because it was intended actually.
2. 00:23:394 (1) - You should arrange this so that the current sliderend of 1 is clickable since it's the most dominant sound there. I think this slider fits there, leaving unchanged. Same here 00:28:728 (4) - overall prioritize strong sounds to be clickable. But this fixed.
3. 00:33:061 - would add one circle here. Also thus move the sliders around this closer to each other so the spacing doesn't fuck up On this diff I'm mostly following vocal, so I won't place since there isn't any important vocal.
4. 00:55:061 (2,1,2) - spacing is stable but visual distance isn't. Fixerino Fixed a little~
5. 00:56:728 (2,3,4) - could triangle. Don't lose the blanket on 00:57:394 (3,4) - tho, also could blanket 00:58:061 (4,1) - I don't wanted trangle here, only blankets, leaving as it is.
6. 01:01:394 (1,2) - I don't remember how you had timed these earlier, but I suggest you make the first slider little longer so that it actually ends up on some more dominant sound. It will also play better since currently it can be confusing, especially for this level of player. I tried to follow vocal, thats why I mapped it like this. Changed it into one slider everywhere.
7. 01:03:394 (4,1) - could make this look better Fixed!
8. 01:07:728 - could add circle here, same way as 01:08:061 (2,3) - Like I said above, I try to follow the vocal. I placed the circle after the second sider because there is strong vocal, which doesn't occur after the first slider
9. 03:02:728 (3,4,1) - triangle fix, same 03:18:728 (2,1,2) - Fixed!
10. 04:04:394 - recommend adding circle to click on this strong sound and then make the spinner begin little later, it will still be long enough Fixed!
11. other than that mostly examples of the same things I said here. It began looking clearly more sloppy from like little over halfway, so while there were some fixes to do earlier too, especially go carefully through the later parts. I'll fix that part later, thanks~

Euphoria

1. 00:10:061 (3) - this slider should be 1/6 instead Fixed! EDIT: Unfixed, I listened closely to this and there aren't any 1/6 sounds.
2. 00:10:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - curve this as well since you have curved the rest as well and this doesn't really express anything in the music. (this section also contains 1/6 from 00:10:894 (3) - to 00:11:394 (1) - mess with it if you wanna go ham) Fixed the stream~ I won't mess with those 1/6 sounds, it's good as it is and it would be hard to read lol
3. 00:22:728 (5,6,7,1) - this plays pretty badly currently. Not only is longish jump like that, especially with increasing spacing, meh if it's as linear as here, you also force to stop when then linear movement is at it's highest velocity at 00:23:061 (7) - and then turn to 00:23:394 (1) - there is little gap tho so it doesn't fuck up that much, but this could still flow better Will think about it, currently I have no idea how to fix it
4. 00:24:394 - these gaps are pretty lame. short gaps like mapping 4 notes of 1/4 with kickslider of 3 1/4 is not too uncommon (see 00:25:394 (3,4,5,6) - for example lol), but I see no reason to have the whole beat unmapped Thanks for reminding, I wanted to place stream in that empty beat but I forgot
5. 00:26:728 (1) - change these sliders to 1/6 instead of 1/8, according to the music Fixed!
6. 00:28:394 (7) - nothing wrong with these but 1/6 here aswell if ya wanna map it somehow. Also NC 00:28:061 (5) - Added new combo but leaved it on 1/4 as it was.
7. 00:31:394 (7) - would NC. Also I kinda dislike how high the spacing is here compared to the intensity of the music. If you consider this intense enough then it is fine, but then you need the add spacing here and there to compensate it. For example the logically most intense places here, choruses, have lower spacing than these jumps you have in these sections. So yeah this applies to the other similar section as well, beginning from 01:54:728 - also 02:48:061 - but that section sounds more like break section than jump section. While I like that you've mapped it, I would tune it down a little as well. Added new combo. I placed on that section jumps beause i think chorus is rather streamy than jumpy, and they really well match this sections in my opinion. I'll consider placing them closer.
8. 00:45:394 (1,2,3,4) - i see no reason for this kind of patterning, tbh you could just add one circle at 00:45:894 - and the space em all out I don't really like overmapping, and on that red tick there isn't any sound, so yeah
9. 00:51:394 (2,3,4,5) - these are 1/3. all similar ones as well Someone must went wrong lol, fixed
10. 00:56:061 (1) - you had few of these iirc, these kind of long straightish sliders dont usually look too good if you dont combine em with other objects so that I agree with you, but I really don't know if I can do something with this
11. 01:11:394 (6) - I recommend adding one reversal more so it ends on the beat I'm not sure about this, but okay
12. 01:22:728 (1) - whole section is 1/3 wow (no wonder I got so bad acc here while playing >.<) Since it still says pending I'm sure I haven't fucked up these myself lol. Always check the correct timings/snappings with like 25% speed or smth (or 50% if you can't hear anything properly with 25%) when you aren't completely sure how the music goes
13. 01:30:811 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2) - somewhat ugly stream shape. Are you placing em by hand with distance snapping? That works at times too, at times you have to use it, but pretty often you can just do a slider, curve it as you want and then upperleft controls tab choose the compose and from there "convert slider to stream" or just CTRL+SHIFT+F for shortcut. Then you will have nice curves (who doesn't like nice curves ^^). Note that you'll still have to do carefully the parts where you combine 2 streams made with that tool so that the transition doesn't look retarded I used that tool with every stream, but here I was once changing distance and.. I don't really fixed the stream too much ^^ Fixed~ by hand, sorry
14. also the rest of the section from 01:32:061 - is 1/6 if you wanna do smth There are so many 1/6, so it would be a shame to ignore it and not place this lovely [strike]240 270bpm stream[/strike]. Fixed! oh my gosh this stream added 0,5* to star rating
15. 01:35:728 - would just use 1/2 slider here I prefer to leave it as it is
16. 01:37:894 - add circle here and then have 1/2 slider at 01:38:061 - so the pattern follows the music Fixed!
17. 01:44:061 - again somewhat lame for this difficulty, would add similar kicksliders to the gaps. You can still have the slowish sliders every other measure if you want, they actually work nicely as a "break" of sort. Tbh going forward since 01:46:728 (1) - actually has only what you've mapped you can just keep all the current ones if you want to keep the patterning same all the time ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I partly agree with you, but I prefer leave it as it is~
18. 01:50:394 (1) - weird patterning here. Not only do you not start the new stream on 1st tick of the next measure (the strongest here), you also NC the "wrong" tick. Consider changing. If you want to use this 12circles + one kickslider patterning, put the kickslider to the last beat of a measure Deleted kickslider and made a stream instead of it~
19. 02:09:394 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - not too good-looking stream. Also 02:09:728 (11,12,13) - should be 1/3 (consider using kickslider so it plays better) Oh my, how I could make this stream... Fixed! I won't add this 1/3 kickslider because 1/3 sounds there are really hard to notice een on 25%.
20. 02:36:728 (6) - add anohter tick to this slider as well I'm not sure about this, but okay
21. 02:58:061 - most intense part having lowest spacing :/ (also this sounds like 1/8 or smth gimme some 360bpm streams lul. Jokes aside it could be mapped with one kickslider, but then it would lose the intensity. I suggest just doing higher spaced 1/4 or not as high spacing but stream of 1/4 so that circles are 1/8 kicksliders, or smth. Up to you) Well, this sound is more like one long than many 1/4 sounds, so I think compressed stream really fits here.
22. 03:00:061 (4) - definitely use more streams during the solo section. It's more intense than the map now shows (like mostly kicksliders atm) Oh gosh, thank youu, these streams are awesomee
23. 03:20:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nice idea, tho the beginning spacing could be little higher imo. Also the shape looks little haphazard atm, make it more smooth. You could use similar increasing spacing stream at other places too where it fits the music (as in the music is increasing in volume, pitch or just smth that makes the intensity go up) Made it nicer and raised spacing on last circles, the spacing of first cirles is okay~
24. 03:42:644 (14,1) - not necessary angle here Fixed!
25. 03:54:728 - definitely map some 1/3 here, it's like the climax of the song and these current patterns are pretty lame for that I didn't thinked about this actually, will make this when I'll have an idea
26. 04:04:061 - would add the audible stream here so it keeps the pressure of the last pattern going until the end Nice idea, but like I said above, I don't really like overmapping
27. that's about it. Check the map for all those more overall problems I mentioned with some patterns since I usually didn't mention all of the similar places.

Good luck! Thanks~!