This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, October 31, 2017 at 12:41:22 PM

Artist: Touyama Nao & Hanazawa Kana
Title: Taisetsu no Tsukurikata (Asterisk remix)
Source: Nisekoi
Tags: Raku-sucks one-true-tsugumi animeme too-many-sliders tag-gore ShogunMoon
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8710kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Emperor's Time - 4Key (4.39 stars, 2387 notes)
2. Kami's Insane (5.18 stars, 874 notes)
3. Koi (5.31 stars, 861 notes)
4. Ky's Easy (1.77 stars, 292 notes)
5. Ly0's NM - 4Key (1.96 stars, 1015 notes)
6. No_S' HD - 4Key (3.5 stars, 2277 notes)
7. Shogun's Normal (2.07 stars, 379 notes)
8. Sya's EZ - 4Key (1.4 stars, 649 notes)

Download: Touyama Nao & Hanazawa Kana - Taisetsu no Tsukurikata (Asterisk remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload if the diff names don't match up with the shit up there ^

First map, maybe rank, probably not but I hope.
Not getting mods until all GDs are in
Standard
Easy by Kyle
Normal by ShogunMoon
Hard by Tarrasky
Insane by amb1d3x, Kami, Kujinn, Shiratoi

Hitsounds by ________



Mania
EZ by Sya
NM by Ly0
MX by No_sync
Time by Emperor of Time

Hitsounds by dudehacker

onodera best

SkinnyJommy wrote:

onodera best

That's a funny way of spelling tsugumi

hi from my mod queue

[General]
Vary volume and sampleset
Disable countdown and activate widescreen support
Add combo colours
Change the name of insane to extra

[Insane]
Honestly not too much to say.
Since you are still a beginner you need to improve yourself.
Just look at other people's map, who are experienced with mapping and try to learn how to use these patterns.
You can also watch some youtube videos explaining some mapping mechanics.

https://www.youtube.com/user/Pishifat

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

SkinnyJommy wrote:

onodera best

That's a funny way of spelling tsugumi

REPORTED

from q

very general mod INCOMING

your map is honestly pretty good. You are mostly consistent with spacing and timing, but work on aesthetics! your blanketing skills could use a little sharpening
00:47:028 (4,1,1,1) hi rrtyui
00:50:457 (4,5) look for areas like this to blanket better
i didnt see anything in here that was really standing out, you seem to be very ahead of the curve in terms of beginner knowledge on mapping
look for areas to improve flow and consistency
If you havent already, i suggest watching pishifats mapping guides and mapping commentaries, they can help you a lot
good luck with the map!
also, check AIMod (ctrl+shift+a)

FuruSatori wrote:

from q

very general mod INCOMING

your map is honestly pretty good. You are mostly consistent with spacing and timing, but work on aesthetics! your blanketing skills could use a little sharpening
00:47:028 (4,1,1,1) hi rrtyui
00:50:457 (4,5) look for areas like this to blanket better
i didnt see anything in here that was really standing out, you seem to be very ahead of the curve in terms of beginner knowledge on mapping
look for areas to improve flow and consistency
If you havent already, i suggest watching pishifats mapping guides and mapping commentaries, they can help you a lot
good luck with the map!
also, check AIMod (ctrl+shift+a)

Thanks for the mod, and thanks for linking those videos, I actually haven't watched them yet

Also you just taught me about the ctr shift a :O thx fam lmao

Azulae wrote:

hi from my mod queue

[General]
Vary volume and sampleset
Disable countdown and activate widescreen support
Add combo colours
Change the name of insane to extra

[Insane]
Honestly not too much to say.
Since you are still a beginner you need to improve yourself.
Just look at other people's map, who are experienced with mapping and try to learn how to use these patterns.
You can also watch some youtube videos explaining some mapping mechanics.

https://www.youtube.com/user/Pishifat

Will do, thanks for the insight!

hello~ NM as ur req)

[Insane]

00:11:542 (2,3) - fix the DS
00:13:085 (3,4) - increase DS, the distance between slider and note could be more big than note and note.
00:16:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical with x-axis,will looks more neat
00:19:257 (2,3) - so close, pls always take attention on that the DS fit the rhythm.
01:17:800 (3) - no sound here，this overmap feels so strange,remove it.
01:25:085 (4,1) - these too close, Usually we add a little distance to distinguish between the two bars.
01:58:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i dont think these fit the music, indeed i could clear here the vocal
at 01:58:514, the rest part just like the resonance of it.
02:09:314 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:13:257 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - dont think should stay here and keep circling
02:33:142 (3) - dont get the point why reverse slider here

I can see u used a lot of patterns, but some times they are not fit well.make sure use them in right time, dont forget u are mapping the music.
And the distance problem is that whole map kinda random, we decrease DS when music soft, increase when intense, and use 1 kind DS when it constant.
Add hitsound, learn and try, or u never imoprove.
keep working on ~

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hello~ NM as ur req)

[Insane]

00:11:542 (2,3) - fix the DS
00:13:085 (3,4) - increase DS, the distance between slider and note could be more big than note and note.
00:16:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical with x-axis,will looks more neat
00:19:257 (2,3) - so close, pls always take attention on that the DS fit the rhythm.
01:17:800 (3) - no sound here，this overmap feels so strange,remove it.
01:25:085 (4,1) - these too close, Usually we add a little distance to distinguish between the two bars.
01:58:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i dont think these fit the music, indeed i could clear here the vocal
at 01:58:514, the rest part just like the resonance of it.
02:09:314 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:13:257 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - dont think should stay here and keep circling
02:33:142 (3) - dont get the point why reverse slider here

I can see u used a lot of patterns, but some times they are not fit well.make sure use them in right time, dont forget u are mapping the music.
And the distance problem is that whole map kinda random, we decrease DS when music soft, increase when intense, and use 1 kind DS when it constant.
Add hitsound, learn and try, or u never imoprove.
keep working on ~

Thanks for the mod, updated the beatmap!

Hello NM From my modding queue post.

Insane
00:28:857 (5) - put this slider first of this 00:28:514 (4) - and make a blanket with them.
00:29:885 (4,5) - ^ same but not the blaket
00:32:628 (4,5) - ^
02:14:114 (3,4) - change this with something like...

02:33:142 (3) - change this for other thing like a long slider then a circle



Good map only try to do more repetitive if the song requires it ,only change the pattern and maintain the distance ,that's all See you!

Oh... and 02:44:971 (1) - this is so Beautiful!

WildCry wrote:

Hello NM From my modding queue post.

Insane
00:28:857 (5) - put this slider first of this 00:28:514 (4) - and make a blanket with them.
00:29:885 (4,5) - ^ same but not the blaket
00:32:628 (4,5) - ^
02:14:114 (3,4) - change this with something like...

02:33:142 (3) - change this for other thing like a long slider then a circle



Good map only try to do more repetitive if the song requires it ,only change the pattern and maintain the distance ,that's all See you!

Oh... and 02:44:971 (1) - this is so Beautiful!

Thank you for the mod ^-^ <3

Your first couple suggestions I didn't follow exactly to keep good flow, but nevertheless made changes.

Also the slider took so long to do because I suck at sliders

hello from my q /w/

nice song and for a new mapper this isnt all that bad really! ill give a general overview of stuff then get into things that dont fall under those categories.

general:

first use the AIMod to do some things that need to be done right away, like snapping objects.

second get some custom combo colors ! you can find them in song setup > colours. make them go with the background, since thats what theyre there for ^w^

next, a lot of ur sliders have some odd shapes. like this 00:01:771 (1) - could be easily fixed to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026322 just by moving the anchors around a little. it goes a long way just by making every slider look nice. thats what makes the map as a whole fun to play : )

i didnt notice this before but theres no kiai! you need to use kiai to show where the biggest and best parts of the song are. get to it by using the timing and control points box, and selecing the Style tab. since u have a lot of timing points already u might have to work around some of them to make your kiais on point.

also, volume with ur hitsounds (whenever u do them) is important too. lower and raising the volume when the song is louder/softer make the map have a more professional feel to it so i recommend it! (and also its needed for rank too)

another big thing i saw was a lot of unnecessary small/large spacing. like here 01:19:600 (4,5) - theres no real reason for it to be this big since the vocals nor the beats are big here
and with small spacing, most of all the beginning section of the map seems too close, because all of a sudden at the drop of the song, the jumps get super big and its very sudden. so rather make the big jumps smaller or space the beginning stuff out more to make it more predictable

ok now for the dif:

00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - 00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - 00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - having perfect stacking on any of these 4 slider things is sometimes confusing, so move them apart a little
00:21:657 (1) - dont make a new combo, and there are no beats here 00:22:000 (1) - so just but a single circle after the last repeat slider and make it be the (7) of that combo
00:40:171 (1,2,3,4) - maybe space these out more than the previous 1,2,3,4 jumps since the buildup is growing
00:41:542 (1,2,3,4) - here too
00:47:028 (1,2,3) - instead of just having these 3 sliders, have some notes after them like this and having them stack on the sliderends. it goes with the song and looks good too
00:56:457 - 00:57:142 - missing beats here, just simply putting a circle somewhere in the flow of the current setup will do
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - same thing here as before
01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - on this theres a 1/8 spam, so doing something like a 1/8th repeat slider would be better. so if u were to do this you'd have to remake the stream
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - thats some pretty high SV. i think 2.5, maybe 3 should be ok
01:17:200 (1,2) - cute
01:30:142 (4,5) - stacked weird, make them smoother
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can use the distance snap tool to make streams the same distance apart and you should use it on this and any stream u want to make.
01:33:400 (6,7,8) - theres no beats here for this so delete it and make the transition to the next slider smoother
01:37:942 (2) - what to heck is this slider
01:54:571 (1,1) - dont make these new combo, just go with the old combo
01:55:257 (1) - theres no roll here, just do a circle in stead and keep it going with the old combo
01:58:342 (1,1,1) - same thing here with what i said towards the beginning of the mod. also no new combos are needed
02:09:314 (1,1,1) - ^
02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here with what i said towards beginning of the mod with the 1/8th stream
02:34:000 (1,1) - this overlapping is a nono. makes it difficult to read and just not fun to play ;w;
02:36:742 (1,1) - ^
02:44:714 (7) - no beat on this
02:44:971 (1) - very pretty slider! but the ending could be moved outward a little to still end on the same tick and look symmectrical. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026438 < 3
03:09:657 - this part to 03:20:628 - here could easily be mapped. leaving it out seems kinda pointless to me at least
03:20:628 - also here to 03:23:371 - you can do more than just one slider ;w;
same for 03:23:371 - to 03:26:114 -
03:43:942 (5,6,7) - too high SV imo just like before ;w;
03:52:514 (1,1,1) - same thing here with the other 2 i mentioned before this.
03:53:542 - if ur gonna end it here, make this 03:53:542 (2) - just a circle. but what u really should do is map til the end. u still have a good 25ish seconds u can map.

dang this is a long mod. i hope u find it helpful /w/

cute boy wrote:

hello from my q /w/

nice song and for a new mapper this isnt all that bad really! ill give a general overview of stuff then get into things that dont fall under those categories.

general:

first use the AIMod to do some things that need to be done right away, like snapping objects.

second get some custom combo colors ! you can find them in song setup > colours. make them go with the background, since thats what theyre there for ^w^

next, a lot of ur sliders have some odd shapes. like this 00:01:771 (1) - could be easily fixed to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026322 just by moving the anchors around a little. it goes a long way just by making every slider look nice. thats what makes the map as a whole fun to play : )

i didnt notice this before but theres no kiai! you need to use kiai to show where the biggest and best parts of the song are. get to it by using the timing and control points box, and selecing the Style tab. since u have a lot of timing points already u might have to work around some of them to make your kiais on point.

also, volume with ur hitsounds (whenever u do them) is important too. lower and raising the volume when the song is louder/softer make the map have a more professional feel to it so i recommend it! (and also its needed for rank too)

another big thing i saw was a lot of unnecessary small/large spacing. like here 01:19:600 (4,5) - theres no real reason for it to be this big since the vocals nor the beats are big here
and with small spacing, most of all the beginning section of the map seems too close, because all of a sudden at the drop of the song, the jumps get super big and its very sudden. so rather make the big jumps smaller or space the beginning stuff out more to make it more predictable

ok now for the dif:

00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - 00:29:885 (1,2,1,2) - 00:31:257 (1,2,1,2) - having perfect stacking on any of these 4 slider things is sometimes confusing, so move them apart a little
00:21:657 (1) - dont make a new combo, and there are no beats here 00:22:000 (1) - so just but a single circle after the last repeat slider and make it be the (7) of that combo
00:40:171 (1,2,3,4) - maybe space these out more than the previous 1,2,3,4 jumps since the buildup is growing
00:41:542 (1,2,3,4) - here too
00:47:028 (1,2,3) - instead of just having these 3 sliders, have some notes after them like this and having them stack on the sliderends. it goes with the song and looks good too
00:56:457 - 00:57:142 - missing beats here, just simply putting a circle somewhere in the flow of the current setup will do
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - same thing here as before
01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - on this theres a 1/8 spam, so doing something like a 1/8th repeat slider would be better. so if u were to do this you'd have to remake the stream
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - thats some pretty high SV. i think 2.5, maybe 3 should be ok
01:17:200 (1,2) - cute
01:30:142 (4,5) - stacked weird, make them smoother
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can use the distance snap tool to make streams the same distance apart and you should use it on this and any stream u want to make.
01:33:400 (6,7,8) - theres no beats here for this so delete it and make the transition to the next slider smoother
01:37:942 (2) - what to heck is this slider
01:54:571 (1,1) - dont make these new combo, just go with the old combo
01:55:257 (1) - theres no roll here, just do a circle in stead and keep it going with the old combo
01:58:342 (1,1,1) - same thing here with what i said towards the beginning of the mod. also no new combos are needed
02:09:314 (1,1,1) - ^
02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here with what i said towards beginning of the mod with the 1/8th stream
02:34:000 (1,1) - this overlapping is a nono. makes it difficult to read and just not fun to play ;w;
02:36:742 (1,1) - ^
02:44:714 (7) - no beat on this
02:44:971 (1) - very pretty slider! but the ending could be moved outward a little to still end on the same tick and look symmectrical. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7026438 < 3
03:09:657 - this part to 03:20:628 - here could easily be mapped. leaving it out seems kinda pointless to me at least
03:20:628 - also here to 03:23:371 - you can do more than just one slider ;w;
same for 03:23:371 - to 03:26:114 -
03:43:942 (5,6,7) - too high SV imo just like before ;w;
03:52:514 (1,1,1) - same thing here with the other 2 i mentioned before this.
03:53:542 - if ur gonna end it here, make this 03:53:542 (2) - just a circle. but what u really should do is map til the end. u still have a good 25ish seconds u can map.

dang this is a long mod. i hope u find it helpful /w/

Hoyl that's an insightful mod!

Thanks for the input, really appreciated! Updated my beatmap with the changes recommended in your mod (not all however, some I could justify, although some things may be because I'm too lazy right now xd)

Wish I could return the favor with a mod but I suck at mapping fundamentals and concepts so I'll just do the next best thing and throw you a kudosu xp

Really nice and clear mod!

hello

Expert

00:00:400 (1,1) - I would try to fiddle with the first slider so that the curve blankets properly around the next slider. Giving a good first impression with maps as long as this will help you in the long run.
00:05:885 (1,1) - Visibility is pretty bad with the second slider coming in just as the last one fades out, I would try to end the first slider about 1/1 shorter and add a hitcircle in the 1/1 gap left behind so the player has a better opportunity to react.
00:11:028 (1) - Rotate this slider a little bit clockwise so it blankets around 00:10:342 (2,3,4) - a little better
00:42:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally I think these should be the same spacing as 00:43:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as there isn't really that buildup to warrant the spacing change. I would also try to improve the visual flow of the stream a little more.
00:52:342 (3,2,4,2) - These don't really need to be 1/4 sliders, they work better with the music as regular hitcircles.
01:01:771 (3,5) - ^
01:10:343 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream can be improved alot, both in terms of visual flow as well as spacing. For example, 01:11:200 (3,4,5) - Why are these spacings different?
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - Neat pattern, I like it
01:33:657 (1,3) - Whats up with these CUHRAYZEE repeat slider shapes?
02:43:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also really nice pattern.
03:32:114 (2) - Doesn't need to be a slider, inconsistent with your previous identical patterns

Honestly, there's a lot more I could talk about but I think I can summarize most of what i'm missing right here:

The map's biggest problem is the inconsistency and overcomplexified between slider design. There are tons of sliders that have 2 or more anchor points where all it accomplishes is making the entire map visually inconsistent and well, not very pretty to look at. I think 00:44:628 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is one of the biggest offenders of this kind of thing. Is there any reason sliders this short need to have that many curves? Another prime offender that I mentioned earlier were 01:33:657 (1,3) - which actually, now that I look at them closely, I'm fairly sure these are unrankable since the slider balls are vibrating back and forth for a fraction of a second.

Good luck.

nm from queue

fix sliderends and preview point

• 00:10:685 (4) - turn this like 15 degrees counterclockwise
  01:06:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - triples in this whole section aren't good imo, there's not any sounds for them
  01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - a 1/8 kickslider would fit the music a lot better
  01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is kinda ugly xd, give it a more aesthetic look
  02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, 1/8 kickslider, also that stream could look better
  02:33:142 (2,3) - these arent perfectly aligned on a straight line fix pls
  02:36:400 (4) - better blanket here
  03:01:600 (1,2,3) - this fits the voice way better imo

good map overall!

Weber wrote:

hello

Expert

00:00:400 (1,1) - I would try to fiddle with the first slider so that the curve blankets properly around the next slider. Giving a good first impression with maps as long as this will help you in the long run.
00:05:885 (1,1) - Visibility is pretty bad with the second slider coming in just as the last one fades out, I would try to end the first slider about 1/1 shorter and add a hitcircle in the 1/1 gap left behind so the player has a better opportunity to react.
00:11:028 (1) - Rotate this slider a little bit clockwise so it blankets around 00:10:342 (2,3,4) - a little better
00:42:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally I think these should be the same spacing as 00:43:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as there isn't really that buildup to warrant the spacing change. I would also try to improve the visual flow of the stream a little more.
00:52:342 (3,2,4,2) - These don't really need to be 1/4 sliders, they work better with the music as regular hitcircles.
01:01:771 (3,5) - ^
01:10:343 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream can be improved alot, both in terms of visual flow as well as spacing. For example, 01:11:200 (3,4,5) - Why are these spacings different?
01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:12:400 (3,4,5) - Neat pattern, I like it
01:33:657 (1,3) - Whats up with these CUHRAYZEE repeat slider shapes?
02:43:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also really nice pattern.
03:32:114 (2) - Doesn't need to be a slider, inconsistent with your previous identical patterns

Honestly, there's a lot more I could talk about but I think I can summarize most of what i'm missing right here:

The map's biggest problem is the inconsistency and overcomplexified between slider design. There are tons of sliders that have 2 or more anchor points where all it accomplishes is making the entire map visually inconsistent and well, not very pretty to look at. I think 00:44:628 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is one of the biggest offenders of this kind of thing. Is there any reason sliders this short need to have that many curves? Another prime offender that I mentioned earlier were 01:33:657 (1,3) - which actually, now that I look at them closely, I'm fairly sure these are unrankable since the slider balls are vibrating back and forth for a fraction of a second.

Good luck.

Cheers! thanks for the mod and indicating overlying problem with the map >.<

I'll work on the big problem, and for now the map has been updated with changes

Graffin wrote:

nm from queue

fix sliderends and preview point

• 00:10:685 (4) - turn this like 15 degrees counterclockwise
  01:06:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - triples in this whole section aren't good imo, there's not any sounds for them
  01:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - a 1/8 kickslider would fit the music a lot better
  01:32:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is kinda ugly xd, give it a more aesthetic look
  02:22:342 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, 1/8 kickslider, also that stream could look better
  02:33:142 (2,3) - these arent perfectly aligned on a straight line fix pls
  02:36:400 (4) - better blanket here
  03:01:600 (1,2,3) - this fits the voice way better imo

good map overall!

Thanks you very much for the mod! a lot of the changes sound better aligned with the music!

Cheers!

Q

[Expert]
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read and play
01:33:657 (1,3) - Hard to read reversearrow, looks unrankable, imo
01:48:571 (4,2) - stack
03:23:371 (1,2,3) - looks bad overlap
Gl

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Expert]
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read and play
01:33:657 (1,3) - Hard to read reversearrow, looks unrankable, imo
01:48:571 (4,2) - stack
03:23:371 (1,2,3) - looks bad overlap
Gl

Thanks for the mod! o/

from queue

General
no kiai part and preview point?
cancel countdown and widescreen support

Expert
00:11:371 (2) - nc should be here
01:02:800 (1,1) - cancel nc
00:47:714 (3,5) - use two lower sv here would be better
00:58:686 (3,5) - ^
01:59:028 (3,5) - ^
02:10:000 (3,5) - ^

that's all, btw i like the way u use 1/4 silders
gl

Neanmoins wrote:

from queue

General
no kiai part and preview point?
cancel countdown and widescreen support

Expert
00:11:371 (2) - nc should be here
01:02:800 (1,1) - cancel nc
00:47:714 (3,5) - use two lower sv here would be better
00:58:686 (3,5) - ^
01:59:028 (3,5) - ^
02:10:000 (3,5) - ^

that's all, btw i like the way u use 1/4 silders
gl

Thanks for the mod, updated!

hi from nm


you got some really nice patterns here.. good luck

terratropic wrote:

hi from nm

Expert

-felt that there were many triples that were mapped to nothing so consider fixing those overmaps if you're aiming for rank
-as nice as those patterns look i dont think SV multipliers above 2.00 are allowed either so watch out for that too
00:02:457 (1) - sliderend should be on red tick not blue
00:03:828 (2,3,4) - i dont see what these are mapped to, 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate here
00:08:457 - missing note?
00:11:885 (3,4,5) - you could silence the sliderends of these throughout the map
00:10:600 (3) - i think its better off without this
00:17:114 (2) - again, i'm not sure if you really need these
00:18:485 (2) - see above
00:25:942 (2,4) - you could space these a tad bit apart from 00:25:771 (1,3)
00:38:457 (3) - i think it would be more consistent if you make this a 1/2 slider
00:54:742 - shorten this slider a bit so its 1/2
00:55:085 (4) - add a circle on top of 00:55:257 (1)
01:11:714 (1) - no kiai here?
01:03:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - i dont see the reason for these stacked triples.. i dont hear it in the song
01:17:200 (1,2) - nice touch there
01:30:571 (6) - feel that its too close to the previous note, maybe make 01:30:228 (5,6) into 1/2 sliders. https://puu.sh/tso3M/b88bf7ca96.jpg
01:39:485 (3,4) - too far apart imo, id just copy and flip 01:40:171 (5) and make a blanket out of it http://puu.sh/tsoDP/89ded38bfe.jpg
01:44:285 (3) - i'd ctrl-g this for better flow
02:07:257 (4) - again, sliderend should be on the red tick
02:13:771 (2) - see above
02:14:800 (1,2,3) - these should be individual circles to emphasize the kicks
02:23:028 (1) - again, no kiai?
02:32:628 (1) - slider should end on white tick if you want to add hitsound
02:33:142 (2,3) - again, i dont hear anything in the music with these notes, 1/2 beats sound more appropriate here
example

02:55:257 (2) - extend the slider to the blue tick
02:55:942 (1) - instead of a reverse slider it make more sense to have 4 1/1 notes kinda like this (i used 15° angles)
- then blanket 02:58:685 (1) with the previous slider https://puu.sh/tsl0V/fc7cbd19b3.jpg
03:02:971 (6) - not a fan of these type of reverse sliders, maybe just reverse once and add a 1/1 slider at 03:03:485
03:05:542 (2) - why not have one long slider here
03:06:914 - then put a spinner here
03:50:800 (1,2,3,4) - again, there should be individual circles covering the kicks here
03:53:200 (7) - this kickslider should be a circle instead

you got some really nice patterns here.. good luck

Cheers! thanks for the insightful mod, changes have been made and map has been updated!

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good luck

Agatsu wrote:

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• expert

1. change the volume, 100% is loud ;w;
2. 01:37:942 (2) - this slider is unrankable pls change shape
3. 01:44:628 (1) - ^
4. 01:45:314 (3) - ^
5. i recommend you to look at patterns in some ranked maps and maybe you could apply them to your map

good luck

TY for the mod! o/

[Expert]
TsugumiIsObvBestGirl.mp3 - Haven't been used. Don't forget about it.
p.s. Convert this to wav
00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - Put them on the same level, because it's hard to read that mapping with 1/4 sliders. Or just put them a bit higher.
00:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1) - Overlap
01:17:542 - Put here a 2x slider velocity point, and make a better heart. It won't be a huge difference in reading, but it will look more prettier. You can do much better than I did.
02:52:857 - This should be the end of this slider. You'll need some time listening this on 25% speed
03:38:800 (2) - You can put this higher, to make a stack with next combo slider. This way you can avoid weird overlapping going here.

Good luck !

bezbashn wrote:

[Expert]
TsugumiIsObvBestGirl.mp3 - Haven't been used. Don't forget about it.
p.s. Convert this to wav
00:17:542 (1,2,1,2) - Put them on the same level, because it's hard to read that mapping with 1/4 sliders. Or just put them a bit higher.
00:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1) - Overlap
01:17:542 - Put here a 2x slider velocity point, and make a better heart. It won't be a huge difference in reading, but it will look more prettier. You can do much better than I did.

i've tried like for 10 seconds

02:52:857 - This should be the end of this slider. You'll need some time listening this on 25% speed
03:38:800 (2) - You can put this higher, to make a stack with next combo slider. This way you can avoid weird overlapping going here.

Good luck !

o/ Thanks for the mod!~

also I didn't even know changing the file to wav would fix a problem like that

Hello mod from my queue~
Good luck!