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Worms wrote:

Here from your M4M queue o/

01:14:947 - single here why single note? no change for this
00:01:506 - you could change this into a double as you did the same in the kiai time section
00:04:622 - ^no added for this. pitch related.
00:07:739 - ^^
00:10:856 - ^^
00:02:577 (2577|3) - removeno removed for this and i'm using hitsound btw.
00:05:694 (5694|1) - remove^
00:08:811 (8811|0) - remove^
00:11:928 (11928|1) - remove ^
00:14:168 - single here
00:19:915 (19915|2) - remove
00:50:889 (50889|1) - remove
01:17:382 (77382|2) - remove
01:21:960 - single here
01:23:421 - single here, you did it as single every other time
01:27:934 - missing a note here
00:09:882 - you could do something like this: why change to LN? It's confuse to have 2LN but only one long sound.
00:13:437 (13437|3,13486|2,13535|1) - this section should be 1/6 much better if you stay at 1/8. It's little bit confused in 1/6.
00:42:609 (42609|3) - this LN should stop here and another should be added here until 00:42:609 (42609|3) - huh i don't get it
00:47:285 (47285|3) - LN stops here, add another LN and stop at 00:47:285 (47285|3) - ^
00:48:843 (48843|3) - LN stops here, add another LN and stop at 00:48:843 (48843|3) - ^
00:51:376 (51376|3,52934|1,54493|0,56051|2,57609|0,60531|3) - remove these? I'm just generally confused as to what these LNs map to :/ well i think you can hear long sound i this part so there's a LN on that part.
01:10:077 - move one of the notes down to 01:09:980 - instead of move, added one note.
01:16:311 - triple here pitch related. no added
01:22:544 - move one the notes down to 01:22:447 - instead of move, added one note.
01:28:778 - triple here pitch related. no added


I was gonna say something about the SVs, but I'm not an expert on them so all I will say is that they are pretty hard to read.wut but it's the best thing to do is to learn more about SV's (still learning btw)
Thanks for Mod Worms....I will mod your map ASAP! :)
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Metadata
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:25:856 Add a note here for consistency of drumbeats

01:01:311 (61311|1) - Move to |3| instead for pattern comfort-ability

[Hard]
00:06:863 (6863|2,6960|3) - Ctrl+H because on this part the patterns are all focused in one way which is right side. Consistency.

00:07:544 (7544|1,7642|2) - Ctrl+H ^^

00:27:609 (27609|3) - Move to |1| for better consistency and more excitement to play-ability

01:34:817 (94817|0) - End it here instead 01:40:467 the guitar pitch ended here

[Insane]
00:12:415 i somehow don't recommend having a SVs here.

00:35:596 (35596|2,35791|1) - Ctrl + H for better pattern consistency. It is better to make it alternate in le hand.

00:54:882 (54882|2) - Move to |4| for consistency as you will notice what u did here 00:56:441 (56441|3,56635|1,56635|0,56830|3,57025|1,57025|0) -

01:34:428 (94428|1,94525|2,94622|1,94720|2) - I would rather make these Ctrl+H instead for better hand coordinated pattern.

01:34:817 (94817|2) - End it here 01:40:467 the guitar pitch ended here

Nice map! Good luck! >w<)b
If not helpful you may not give this post Kudos~
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Hi~

Mania M4M from your queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[General]
  1. Is fine. Just you that if you apply the control + g you must fix the hitsound.

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:428 (4428|1,4622|3) - make control + g? looks better and somewhat balanced as this note 00:04:038 (4038|1) - and 00:05:207 (5207|3) - imo
  2. 00:17:480 (17480|2) - move column 3? is repeating 00:16:700 (16700|2,16700|3,17090|1,17090|0) - considering as 00:14:363 - and 00:15:921 -
  3. 00:20:207 (20207|2,20207|1) - It is better that the notes are in the column 0|3 for a finish in that part (for the cymbal)... same in 00:13:973 - I think is essential for mania...
  4. 00:23:713 (23713|2) - move column 3?
  5. 00:25:467 - I feel like missing a note for that drum..
  6. 00:32:674 (32674|1,32869|3) - control + g? is same column in 00:31:895 (31895|1,32285|1,32674|1) -
  7. 00:35:012 (35012|1,35402|1,35791|1) - same 1/1 and 00:36:765 (36765|3,36960|2,37155|3) - this is bit hard imo.. i like as: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6895650
  8. 00:47:480 (47480|2) - move column 1?
  9. 00:55:077 (55077|2,55467|3) - maybe make control + g for note 00:56:051 (56051|3) - the sound no is similar (Some sections are repeated and I think it is better to do a little different) imo
  10. 00:58:194 - ^
  11. 01:05:012 (65012|1) - move column 0 and 01:05:207 (65207|3,65402|1) - control +g? is better considering as 01:07:739 -
  12. 01:22:544 (82544|1,82739|2) - control + g and 01:22:934 (82934|1) - move column 2 looks better imo

[Hard]
  1. 00:25:077 (25077|3,25142|0,25207|2,25272|1) - It's better to make a ladder for 1/6.. for this LN 00:24:687 (24687|1) - as it was somewhat uncomfortable imo
  2. 00:35:791 - delete a note? considering as 00:29:557 -
  3. 00:40:272 - missing note?
  4. 01:34:817 (94817|1) - this LN should be in column 0 and note in column 1 It's better when it ends with cymbal
  5. 01:34:817 (94817|1) - LN ends in 01:41:246 -
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Etsu wrote:

Hi~

Mania M4M from your queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[General]
  1. Is fine. Just you that if you apply the control + g you must fix the hitsound.

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:428 (4428|1,4622|3) - make control + g? looks better and somewhat balanced as this note 00:04:038 (4038|1) - and 00:05:207 (5207|3) - imo
  2. 00:17:480 (17480|2) - move column 3? is repeating 00:16:700 (16700|2,16700|3,17090|1,17090|0) - considering as 00:14:363 - and 00:15:921 -
  3. 00:20:207 (20207|2,20207|1) - It is better that the notes are in the column 0|3 for a finish in that part (for the cymbal)... same in 00:13:973 - I think is essential for mania...
  4. 00:23:713 (23713|2) - move column 3?
  5. 00:25:467 - I feel like missing a note for that drum..
  6. 00:32:674 (32674|1,32869|3) - control + g? is same column in 00:31:895 (31895|1,32285|1,32674|1) -
  7. 00:35:012 (35012|1,35402|1,35791|1) - same 1/1 and 00:36:765 (36765|3,36960|2,37155|3) - this is bit hard imo.. i like as: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6895650
  8. 00:47:480 (47480|2) - move column 1? i don't use minijacks on that part.
  9. 00:55:077 (55077|2,55467|3) - maybe make control + g for note 00:56:051 (56051|3) - the sound no is similar (Some sections are repeated and I think it is better to do a little different) imo
  10. 00:58:194 - ^
  11. 01:05:012 (65012|1) - move column 0 and 01:05:207 (65207|3,65402|1) - control +g? is better considering as 01:07:739 -
  12. 01:22:544 (82544|1,82739|2) - control + g and 01:22:934 (82934|1) - move column 2 looks better imo

[Hard]
  1. 00:25:077 (25077|3,25142|0,25207|2,25272|1) - It's better to make a ladder for 1/6.. for this LN 00:24:687 (24687|1) - as it was somewhat uncomfortable imo
  2. 00:35:791 - delete a note? considering as 00:29:557 -
  3. 00:40:272 - missing note? yes but i don't put a note for pitch.
  4. 01:34:817 (94817|1) - this LN should be in column 0 and note in column 1 It's better when it ends with cymbal
  5. 01:34:817 (94817|1) - LN ends in 01:41:246 - well no changing of LN limit for ending of the song.
Thanks for Mod Etsu....I will mod your map ASAP!
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Gravey- wrote:


Metadata
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:25:856 Add a note here for consistency of drumbeats

01:01:311 (61311|1) - Move to |3| instead for pattern comfort-ability

[Hard]
00:06:863 (6863|2,6960|3) - Ctrl+H because on this part the patterns are all focused in one way which is right side. Consistency. I think Ctrl + J not H XD

00:07:544 (7544|1,7642|2) - Ctrl+H ^^

00:27:609 (27609|3) - Move to |1| for better consistency and more excitement to play-ability

01:34:817 (94817|0) - End it here instead 01:40:467 the guitar pitch ended here well I was follow only one sound.

[Insane]
00:12:415 i somehow don't recommend having a SVs here. Well SV's for this diff is needed and I don't think any problem with this :)

00:35:596 (35596|2,35791|1) - Ctrl + H for better pattern consistency. It is better to make it alternate in le hand.

00:54:882 (54882|2) - Move to |4| for consistency as you will notice what u did here 00:56:441 (56441|3,56635|1,56635|0,56830|3,57025|1,57025|0) -

01:34:428 (94428|1,94525|2,94622|1,94720|2) - I would rather make these Ctrl+H instead for better hand coordinated pattern.

01:34:817 (94817|2) - End it here 01:40:467 the guitar pitch ended here As i said in Normal Diff

Nice map! Good luck! >w<)b
If not helpful you may not give this post Kudos~
Thanks for Mod Gravey- almost apply all your suggestions....Good luck to your map :)
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Hi, this is the mod that you asked for in Our Queue :D (Team Love Deluxe) https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/538223

So, Lets start with this thing xD

Columns: (1/2/3/4)

00:03:843 / 00:05:402 / 00:10:007 - Why did you put 2 notes there? is the same sound that you put long notes in the insane diff right? its pretty confusing to be honest, you should only put doubles on the drums (is the most audible sound)
00:06:376 - In this section at least is understandable that you are putting doubles in that sound, but in that case, you are missing one note on 00:07:544
00:24:687 - Delete the long note (replace it with a single note), that "silence" feels a lot more better without that long note
00:52:908 - Add a note in 1 (you are literally putting 2 notes to the same sound in less than a second after xD (00:57:415)
01:15:531 - 01:16:311 - That section should be a stream, something like this (not necessarily the same order) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6911602
01:10:077 / 01:14:557 / 01:16:311 / 01:22:544 / 01:28:778 / 01:33:454 - These should have 3 notes instead of 2 (because of cymbals) , i know it suppose to be an easier difficulty, but only having doubles in the most intense part of the song is kinda boring isnt it? :D (also, adding those triples doesnt make the map a lot more harder, its almost the same thing xD)

The rest of the diff is fine, pretty simple and fine :P
00:04:135 - Delete that note. its marking nothing, that is just an echo i think, also, if you still think is good then you didnt put a note in similar places like 00:05:694 for example.
00:03:843 / 00:06:376 / etc - I think there is no need to put 2 notes, the lns works fine for the piano, also, if you are putting notes for the hit hat and the piano(lns) separately, then dont do that xD, its just make the map have more density in the ln section than it should
00:03:648 - re arrange these notes like this, it feels a lot better and comfortable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909759
00:04:233 - re arrange the notes like this, it feels a bit more comfortable (considering that you deleted the note in 00:04:135)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909762
00:07:252 - Delete that note
00:06:473 - 00:07:350 Re arrange the notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909866
00:10:369 - Same, delete that note
00:09:882 - 00:10:467 - Re arrange the notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909910
00:11:441 - That long note have a higher pitch than this ln (00:10:856), you should put 00:10:856 in 3 and 00:11:441 in 4
00:10:856 - 00:12:220 Re arrange the notes like this, it feels a lot more comfortable xD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909952
That was a pretty long mod for an intro isnt it? xD
00:12:317 - People will hate that SV , maybe a bit faster speed will be better xD
00:13:973 - Maybe re arrange this section https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910035
00:20:402 - This part feels better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910010
00:35:012 - Move a note frome 2 to 1
00:35:791 - Delete a note, its not a snare, its just a kick so it should have only 2 notes
00:50:402 - The drums sounds too loud, they need necessarily 2 notes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910178
01:03:843 - I like the map from here, its fun UwU
01:09:493 - Seems that you forgot a note xD
01:27:122 - Delete that note
01:33:746 - Delete that note, there is no sound there
01:33:648 - Move 1 to 2
01:34:038 - 2 problems here, first, 01:34:233 and 01:34:330 should have 2 notes, second, its not good to only have 1 minijack in all the song, it feels weird, also, that minijack its not because of a sound, just the end of a jumptrill and jacks should be used only in sounds that require them. So that section should be re arrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910314
01:37:739 - That ln should not end there, the bass dissapear at 01:40:467


Well, i guess that is all for now, it was a fun mapset. Good Luck :D
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akuma123 wrote:

Hi, this is the mod that you asked for in Our Queue :D (Team Love Deluxe) https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/538223

So, Lets start with this thing xD

Columns: (1/2/3/4)

00:03:843 / 00:05:402 / 00:10:007 - Why did you put 2 notes there? is the same sound that you put long notes in the insane diff right? its pretty confusing to be honest, you should only put doubles on the drums (is the most audible sound) nice catch. removed one note.
00:06:376 - In this section at least is understandable that you are putting doubles in that sound, but in that case, you are missing one note on 00:07:544
00:24:687 - Delete the long note (replace it with a single note), that "silence" feels a lot more better without that long note
00:52:908 - Add a note in 1 (you are literally putting 2 notes to the same sound in less than a second after xD (00:57:415) I din''t put 2 notes in that area XD
01:15:531 - 01:16:311 - That section should be a stream, something like this (not necessarily the same order) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6911602
01:10:077 / 01:14:557 / 01:16:311 / 01:22:544 / 01:28:778 / 01:33:454 - These should have 3 notes instead of 2 (because of cymbals) , i know it suppose to be an easier difficulty, but only having doubles in the most intense part of the song is kinda boring isnt it? :D (also, adding those triples doesnt make the map a lot more harder, its almost the same thing xD)

The rest of the diff is fine, pretty simple and fine :P
00:04:135 - Delete that note. its marking nothing, that is just an echo i think, also, if you still think is good then you didnt put a note in similar places like 00:05:694 for example.I think it's boring to have not note in that area (well i'm using hit-sound)
00:03:843 / 00:06:376 / etc - I think there is no need to put 2 notes, the lns works fine for the piano, also, if you are putting notes for the hit hat and the piano(lns) separately, then dont do that xD, its just make the map have more density in the ln section than it should
00:03:648 - re arrange these notes like this, it feels a lot better and comfortable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909759 consider this one because but there some note's not remove because of not deleting one note here 00:04:135 -
00:04:233 - re arrange the notes like this, it feels a bit more comfortable (considering that you deleted the note in 00:04:135)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909762not consider this.
00:07:252 - Delete that note why delete that note? (well i'm using hit-sound and it's boring to have no note in that area)
00:06:473 - 00:07:350 Re arrange the notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909866not consider this because of not delete the one note.
00:10:369 - Same, delete that note no delete. (well i'm using hit-sound and it's boring to have no note in that area)
00:09:882 - 00:10:467 - Re arrange the notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909910reconsider this area
00:11:441 - That long note have a higher pitch than this ln (00:10:856), you should put 00:10:856 in 3 and 00:11:441 in 4
00:10:856 - 00:12:220 Re arrange the notes like this, it feels a lot more comfortable xD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909952
That was a pretty long mod for an intro isnt it? xD well i like thiis kind of mod :)
00:12:317 - People will hate that SV , maybe a bit faster speed will be better xD reconsider this
00:13:973 - Maybe re arrange this section https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910035
00:20:402 - This part feels better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910010
00:35:012 - Move a note frome 2 to 1
00:35:791 - Delete a note, its not a snare, its just a kick so it should have only 2 notes
00:50:402 - The drums sounds too loud, they need necessarily 2 notes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910178
01:03:843 - I like the map from here, its fun UwU UwU
01:09:493 - Seems that you forgot a note xD consider this and some area in this part
01:27:122 - Delete that note
01:33:746 - Delete that note, there is no sound there
01:33:648 - Move 1 to 2
01:34:038 - 2 problems here, first, 01:34:233 and 01:34:330 should have 2 notes, second, its not good to only have 1 minijack in all the song, it feels weird, also, that minijack its not because of a sound, just the end of a jumptrill and jacks should be used only in sounds that require them. So that section should be re arrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910314
01:37:739 - That ln should not end there, the bass dissapear at 01:40:467 not following the bass except the 2LN


Well, i guess that is all for now, it was a fun mapset. Good Luck :D
I like your mod :) Thanks for mod akuma :)
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Hi m4m from your queue

General



Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds:
Other: -

Normal


00:01:895 (1895|0) - move to col 2 (col 1 2 3 4) and 00:02:090 (2090|0) - move to 1 for better flow
00:04:622 - this is kinda hard for play , how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6923185 making balance for two hands
00:06:181 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6923194 make comfortable to play because this 00:06:765 (6765|3,7155|3) - have a same pitch
00:35:012 (35012|1,35402|1,35791|1) - too heavy in right hand
00:49:622 (49622|1) - move to 3 for balance
01:15:337 (75337|3) - why not LN like this? 01:02:869 (62869|2) -
01:19:038 (79038|1,79233|0,79428|1,79817|1) - again too heavy for right hand
01:34:038 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6923211 this better imo

nothing much to say in another diff Good job.
that's all ny mod good luck with your map and the mod is Finished.
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[Hard]
00:15:337 (15337|2,15434|3,15531|1) - I would just recommend 432 than yours here, if you hear closely, the piano is rolling from high to low and not low-high then low.

00:17:674 (17674|1,17772|0,17869|2) - just use 123 here

00:18:454 (18454|2,18551|3,18648|1) - 432

00:20:791 (20791|2,20889|0,20986|3,21083|1,21181|2) - well I know that you want to make your stream "unique" but this is hard to read, just make it stair by move 00:20:889 (20889|0) - to 2 and 00:20:986 (20986|3) - to 1

00:21:570 (21570|2,21668|0,21765|1) - the piano is not sound like that according to the pitch, you can use 124 here

00:22:350 (22350|2,22447|3,22544|1,22739|2,23129|2,23226|3,23324|1,23518|2) - as you can see you make this pattern similar, but the sound is not "similar" suggest to change it to anything you like but don't keep that pattern

00:25:467 - http://puu.sh/t4EKv/59dc2a4ddc.jpg the ending on 12 give more impact to the snare than 23

00:36:765 (36765|2,37155|1) - you can move it to 1 and 4 or jack variety

00:50:402 (50402|3,50499|1,50596|2) - I wouldn't recommend 1/4 note after LN on Hard, it's difficult to read, make it 432

00:50:791 (50791|1) - you can move this to 4, the music calls for jack here

00:51:181 (51181|1,51278|0) - why trill? the music is not call for trill here, make it 123 instead

00:59:168 - why no LN here? I see you put LN even on low LN sound like in here 00:56:051 -

01:01:311 (61311|2,61376|0,61441|2,61506|0) - this is good choice on 1/6 with LN and 01:00:921 (60921|1,60986|2,61051|0,61116|1) - this is not, 23 12 is hard pattern even on 1/4 so how you can put it on 1/6? make 1313 trill here

01:04:428 (64428|3,64525|1,64622|2,64720|0,64817|1,64817|2) - this is hard, 4231 then 23 is obviously not easy to hit. You can move this 01:04:817 (64817|1,64817|2) - to 34 to make it more easier. And yes you will create jack with 01:05:012 (65012|3,65012|0) - but that's better then put it in 23 after 4231 stream

01:09:298 (69298|3) - move to 1

01:09:395 (69395|0) - move to 2, I've explained this before

01:10:077 (70077|0,70077|2) - it should be triple right?

01:10:661 (70661|1,70759|0,70856|3,70954|1,71051|2) - no man just no this, just make it 12343 or something easier to read

01:16:018 - I think you should add note here, and if you apply, make that part easier to read (13*note*42 34 is just not good)

01:21:570 (81570|1,81668|3,81765|1,81863|0,81960|2) - same here, just make it 43234

01:27:804 (87804|0,87869|3,87934|1) - you see that this is 1/6? because it's 1/6 you should make the pattern more easier both to read and to tap. Just make it 1234 instead

01:41:246 - looks like you unsnap something


[Normal]
00:05:012 (5012|2,5012|1) - 34

00:05:207 (5207|3) - 2, more easier to tap

00:25:467 (25467|3,25661|2,25856|2) - left hand doing nothing and right hand hold LN + jack. This is much better http://puu.sh/t4ELf/6c9b7d7856.jpg

00:49:233 (49233|1) - move to 4

00:49:428 (49428|0,49428|3) - 12

00:49:622 (49622|1) - move to 4, better pattern to tap and plus by moving this to 4 it's fit with 00:50:012 (50012|3) - which is also in 4. Based on the vocal which calls for jack there

01:28:973 (88973|2) - delete, not really a ghost note but give it a break here is better because 01:03:843 - to 01:28:778 - and 01:29:168 - to 01:34:817 - is two different part

good job on normal because you mostly avoid repetitive pattern rhythm on repetitive-able pattern song ^^ (idk if you know what I mean here but whatever)
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Ibrahim wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue

Normal


00:01:895 (1895|0) - move to col 2 (col 1 2 3 4) and 00:02:090 (2090|0) - move to 1 for better flow
00:04:622 - this is kinda hard for play , how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6923185 making balance for two hands
00:06:181 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6923194 make comfortable to play because this 00:06:765 (6765|3,7155|3) - have a same pitch
00:35:012 (35012|1,35402|1,35791|1) - too heavy in right hand okie. move some notes.
00:49:622 (49622|1) - move to 3 for balance
01:15:337 (75337|3) - why not LN like this? 01:02:869 (62869|2) -
01:19:038 (79038|1,79233|0,79428|1,79817|1) - again too heavy for right hand okie. move some notes.
01:34:038 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6923211 this better imo

nothing much to say in another diff Good job.
that's all ny mod good luck with your map and the mod is Finished.

Thanks for mod Ibrahim.....I'll mod your map ASAP!

Raediaufar wrote:

[Hard]
00:15:337 (15337|2,15434|3,15531|1) - I would just recommend 432 than yours here, if you hear closely, the piano is rolling from high to low and not low-high then low.

00:17:674 (17674|1,17772|0,17869|2) - just use 123 here

00:18:454 (18454|2,18551|3,18648|1) - 432

00:20:791 (20791|2,20889|0,20986|3,21083|1,21181|2) - well I know that you want to make your stream "unique" but this is hard to read, just make it stair by move 00:20:889 (20889|0) - to 2 and 00:20:986 (20986|3) - to 1

00:21:570 (21570|2,21668|0,21765|1) - the piano is not sound like that according to the pitch, you can use 124 here

00:22:350 (22350|2,22447|3,22544|1,22739|2,23129|2,23226|3,23324|1,23518|2) - as you can see you make this pattern similar, but the sound is not "similar" suggest to change it to anything you like but don't keep that pattern

00:25:467 - http://puu.sh/t4EKv/59dc2a4ddc.jpg the ending on 12 give more impact to the snare than 23

00:36:765 (36765|2,37155|1) - you can move it to 1 and 4 or jack variety

00:50:402 (50402|3,50499|1,50596|2) - I wouldn't recommend 1/4 note after LN on Hard, it's difficult to read, make it 432

00:50:791 (50791|1) - you can move this to 4, the music calls for jack here

00:51:181 (51181|1,51278|0) - why trill? the music is not call for trill here, make it 123 instead

00:59:168 - why no LN here? I see you put LN even on low LN sound like in here 00:56:051 - as you can hear, 00:56:051 - this area has only 1 melody sound (even it's not exactly in the position of the sound) but 00:59:168 - 01:00:467 - this area has many melody sound. It's confuse to have only one LN with many melody sounds in that area.

01:01:311 (61311|2,61376|0,61441|2,61506|0) - this is good choice on 1/6 with LN and 01:00:921 (60921|1,60986|2,61051|0,61116|1) - this is not, 23 12 is hard pattern even on 1/4 so how you can put it on 1/6? make 1313 trill here

01:04:428 (64428|3,64525|1,64622|2,64720|0,64817|1,64817|2) - this is hard, 4231 then 23 is obviously not easy to hit. You can move this 01:04:817 (64817|1,64817|2) - to 34 to make it more easier. And yes you will create jack with 01:05:012 (65012|3,65012|0) - but that's better then put it in 23 after 4231 stream much better to remain it.

01:09:298 (69298|3) - move to 1

01:09:395 (69395|0) - move to 2, I've explained this before

01:10:077 (70077|0,70077|2) - it should be triple right? yes. cymbal sound..

01:10:661 (70661|1,70759|0,70856|3,70954|1,71051|2) - no man just no this, just make it 12343 or something easier to read

01:16:018 - I think you should add note here, and if you apply, make that part easier to read (13*note*42 34 is just not good) it's confuse to have 2 notes in that area specially in hit-sound. instead of adding notes changing some patterns to make part easier to read.

01:21:570 (81570|1,81668|3,81765|1,81863|0,81960|2) - same here, just make it 43234

01:27:804 (87804|0,87869|3,87934|1) - you see that this is 1/6? because it's 1/6 you should make the pattern more easier both to read and to tap. Just make it 1234 instead

01:41:246 - looks like you unsnap something it's intentional for ending. fix the LN end.


[Normal]
00:05:012 (5012|2,5012|1) - 34

00:05:207 (5207|3) - 2, more easier to tap

00:25:467 (25467|3,25661|2,25856|2) - left hand doing nothing and right hand hold LN + jack. This is much better http://puu.sh/t4ELf/6c9b7d7856.jpg

00:49:233 (49233|1) - move to 4

00:49:428 (49428|0,49428|3) - 12

00:49:622 (49622|1) - move to 4, better pattern to tap and plus by moving this to 4 it's fit with 00:50:012 (50012|3) - which is also in 4. Based on the vocal which calls for jack there i'm not based in vocal sound XD instead move to column 3

01:28:973 (88973|2) - delete, not really a ghost note but give it a break here is better because 01:03:843 - to 01:28:778 - and 01:29:168 - to 01:34:817 - is two different part

good job on normal because you mostly avoid repetitive pattern rhythm on repetitive-able pattern song ^^ (idk if you know what I mean here but whatever)
well I know what you mean in case of repetitive pattern....it's more acceptable in easy songs to use repetitive pattern.


Thanks for mod Raediaufar and goodluck to your mania/taiko map :)
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Wanna M4M >w<

|1|2|3|4|

00:24:687 - Would say to add a note at 1 since it is a drum + cymbal sound
00:32:480 (32480|2) - move to 1 and 00:32:674 (32674|2) - move to 3 to have better flow
00:41:051 (41051|1) - I think this ends at 00:41:635 -
00:42:609 (42609|2) - ends at 00:43:194 -
00:45:726 (45726|0) - ends at 00:46:311 -
00:47:285 (47285|3) - ends at 00:47:869 -
01:23:713 (83713|2,83908|3) - ctrl+j this
00:27:609 (27609|1) - move to 4 and 00:27:804 (27804|0) - move to 2. There's no need for a jack
wow nevermind there are many jacks LOL put that as a suggestion I guess
00:30:921 (30921|1) - move to 1 so that 2 and 3 won't be so clustered
00:35:986 (35986|2,36181|2,36181|3,36376|1,36570|0,36570|1,36765|0,36960|3,36960|2,37155|3) - I do not like this patterning. suggesting something like this?
ok so I found the same mistake as before.
00:39:493 (39493|0) - ends 00:40:077 -
00:41:051 (41051|3) - ends 00:41:635 -
00:42:609 (42609|3) - ends 00:43:194 -
00:44:168 (44168|0) - ends 00:44:752 -
00:45:726 (45726|0) - ends 00:46:311 -
00:47:285 (47285|3) - ends 00:47:869 -
00:48:843 (48843|3) - ends 00:49:428 -
00:42:707 (42707|0) - unless you are mapping guitar, delete this
you place some weird 1/4 trills at weird places. are you mapping guitar or drum lol. places like 00:45:726 (45726|2,45824|1,45921|2) - and 00:47:285 (47285|2,47382|0,47480|1) - ?
01:00:921 (60921|0,60986|2,61051|0,61116|2,61311|2,61376|0,61441|2,61506|0) - wot? this will be better
01:15:726 (75726|3) - move to 3 to prevent anchor at 4
01:34:817 (94817|3,94817|0) - why does it end inconsistently? nothing justifies that. both should be snapped to white line.
ok so I found the same mistake as before as before.
00:39:493 (39493|0) - ends 00:40:077 -
00:42:609 (42609|3) - ends 00:43:194 -
00:44:168 (44168|0) - ends 00:44:752 -
00:45:726 (45726|0) - ends 00:46:311 -
00:47:285 (47285|3) - why doesn't this have a split like 00:41:051 (41051|3,41441|0) - ? you could split this one.
00:48:843 (48843|3) - ends 00:49:428 -
01:34:817 (94817|1) - suggest moving this to 1 so the jumptrill can end nicer
01:34:817 (94817|2,94817|3) - again, nothing justifies this. both snapped to white line here.


Done-su :D good luck!
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Raveille wrote:

Wanna M4M >w<

|1|2|3|4|

00:24:687 - Would say to add a note at 1 since it is a drum + cymbal sound
00:32:480 (32480|2) - move to 1 and 00:32:674 (32674|2) - move to 3 to have better flow
00:41:051 (41051|1) - I think this ends at 00:41:635 -
00:42:609 (42609|2) - ends at 00:43:194 -
00:45:726 (45726|0) - ends at 00:46:311 -
00:47:285 (47285|3) - ends at 00:47:869 -
01:23:713 (83713|2,83908|3) - ctrl+j this
00:27:609 (27609|1) - move to 4 and 00:27:804 (27804|0) - move to 2. There's no need for a jack
wow nevermind there are many jacks LOL put that as a suggestion I guess
00:30:921 (30921|1) - move to 1 so that 2 and 3 won't be so clustered
00:35:986 (35986|2,36181|2,36181|3,36376|1,36570|0,36570|1,36765|0,36960|3,36960|2,37155|3) - I do not like this patterning. suggesting something like this?
ok so I found the same mistake as before.
00:39:493 (39493|0) - ends 00:40:077 -
00:41:051 (41051|3) - ends 00:41:635 -
00:42:609 (42609|3) - ends 00:43:194 -
00:44:168 (44168|0) - ends 00:44:752 -
00:45:726 (45726|0) - ends 00:46:311 -
00:47:285 (47285|3) - ends 00:47:869 -
00:48:843 (48843|3) - ends 00:49:428 -
00:42:707 (42707|0) - unless you are mapping guitar, delete this i was mapping drum as well not just guitar and it's boring to map only guitar sounds.
you place some weird 1/4 trills at weird places. are you mapping guitar or drum lol. places like 00:45:726 (45726|2,45824|1,45921|2) - and 00:47:285 (47285|2,47382|0,47480|1) - ? why not both? well as i said it's boring to map only the guitar sound.
01:00:921 (60921|0,60986|2,61051|0,61116|2,61311|2,61376|0,61441|2,61506|0) - wot? this will be better
01:15:726 (75726|3) - move to 3 to prevent anchor at 4
01:34:817 (94817|3,94817|0) - why does it end inconsistently? nothing justifies that. both should be snapped to white line. its intentional for ending of the song.
ok so I found the same mistake as before as before.
00:39:493 (39493|0) - ends 00:40:077 -
00:42:609 (42609|3) - ends 00:43:194 -
00:44:168 (44168|0) - ends 00:44:752 -
00:45:726 (45726|0) - ends 00:46:311 -
00:47:285 (47285|3) - why doesn't this have a split like 00:41:051 (41051|3,41441|0) - ? you could split this one.
00:48:843 (48843|3) - ends 00:49:428 -
01:34:817 (94817|1) - suggest moving this to 1 so the jumptrill can end nicer
01:34:817 (94817|2,94817|3) - again, nothing justifies this. both snapped to white line here.it's intentional for ending of the song.


Done-su :D good luck!
Thanks for mod Raveille. I will mod you map ASAP! :)
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m4m with my map

00:06:473 (6473|1) - delete this note, i think the sound that this note want to deliver already delivered from the LN 00:06:376 (6376|3) -
00:09:590 - Suggest to arrange like this since 00:09:980 (9980|2) - is not good which is "jacked" with the LN and i think the stair to connect it into the chords feel better than disconected pattern like you did and Upper LN to differeniate the chords like 00:07:155 (7155|1,7155|3,7350|3,7350|2,7544|2,7544|1) -
00:13:389 (13389|1,13389|0,13437|3,13486|2,13535|1,13583|3,13583|2,13583|0) - the SV is still bad, please fix it, i can't help since i'm not master at this
00:39:687 - I think it's should be one since it doesn't have sound like 00:39:298 - or 00:40:077 -
01:09:103 - i think it's should be 1 since the pattern are stair then 2 2 3 and i don't hear 2 note's instrument (drum) that played here so just consider make it 1
01:09:980 (69980|0) - delete this, it's different with 01:09:882 - which has little bell sound there
01:10:272 - i think it's should be 1, since i don't hear 2 note's instrument (drum) that played here
01:10:661 - i think it's should be 1 since the pattern are stair then 2 2 3 and i don't hear 2 note's instrument (drum) that played here so just consider make it 1
01:22:155 (82155|1,82155|0,82350|2,82447|3,82544|2,82544|1,82544|0) - i think this part are not pretty far with other pattern( i suggest make it normal, there's not any extra instrument or changes in song that make this part special ) and 01:22:544 (82544|2,82544|0,82544|1) - this ending note isn't look like 01:19:428 - which both has same ending thing, so just make them same, if you want to keep the ending note thing then you need to apply them to a part which usually end the vocal and then later on will start a new one( note : You do the end thing at normal diff, so suggest make it in insane too)
00:25:661 - (Green line at photo) I think there's many drum beat that you miss so that i suggest make it to LN and a note for the missed beat which actually that it should be noticed like its friend
00:28:389 (28389|3,28583|2) - suggest move it to 3 2 (see from left) since i notice that 00:28:389 (28389|3) - is start at a pitch like pitch at 00:27:999 (27999|2) - or 00:28:389 (28389|3) - move to 3 if you want just notice the beginning of the pitch
00:29:947 (29947|0,30142|1) - ^
00:34:622 (34622|2,34817|3) - ^
00:40:467 - add note so that the pattern is consistent with other (00:39:687 (39687|2,39882|3,40077|2,40077|1) - or 00:41:246 (41246|2,41441|3,41635|0,41635|2) - )
00:42:025 - ^
00:43:583 - ^
00:46:700 - ^
00:48:259 - ^
00:51:278 - add a note so they become rapid stair , you can know it by listen to the music
01:28:973 - add note :'3
00:15:531 - suggest make this 2 since this kind of sound are pretty alike 00:13:973 (13973|0,13973|1,14168|2,14363|3,14363|1) -
00:17:090 - ^
00:18:648 - ^
00:21:765 - ^
00:23:324 - ^
00:26:051 - Suggest make it thrill and i arrange the note a bit
00:29:947 (29947|0,29947|1,30142|1,30337|3,30337|2,30531|2,30726|0,30726|1,30921|0) - pretty weird that suddenly become jack hammer pattern
00:35:791 - sugget make it to 3, i feel the power of this drum are got more power than other 2 notes
00:44:460 - add note here, i think it's pretty same with 00:42:609 (42609|1,42707|0,42804|2) - since when i remove the middle note in the short stair that has low sound that likely the part that i point out first
00:49:622 - suggest it make it to 2 notes since the power of the vocal is like 00:49:428 - so just like as trampoline :'3 (don't forget to apply to other diff, especially insane diff)
01:03:648 - add a note at col 2 since here player will focus to the "jumping vocal" which is make it nice if you make them all chords



Continue Later :"3 Done :D
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Davin Fortune wrote:

m4m with my map

00:06:473 (6473|1) - delete this note, i think the sound that this note want to deliver already delivered from the LN 00:06:376 (6376|3) - i know that the sound have already delived by the LN but it's boring to have no note in that part (well LN streams)
00:09:590 - Suggest to arrange like this since 00:09:980 (9980|2) - is not good which is "jacked" with the LN and i think the stair to connect it into the chords feel better than disconected pattern like you did and Upper LN to differeniate the chords like 00:07:155 (7155|1,7155|3,7350|3,7350|2,7544|2,7544|1) - I'll consider this in terms of jacks but the LN still here because the LN follows the sounds in that part.
00:13:389 (13389|1,13389|0,13437|3,13486|2,13535|1,13583|3,13583|2,13583|0) - the SV is still bad, please fix it, i can't help since i'm not master at thisi guess I need to check again XD and change some notes and SV''s
00:39:687 - I think it's should be one since it doesn't have sound like 00:39:298 - or 00:40:077 -
01:09:103 - i think it's should be 1 since the pattern are stair then 2 2 3 and i don't hear 2 note's instrument (drum) that played here so just consider make it 1 no remove because of pitch sync.
01:09:980 (69980|0) - delete this, it's different with 01:09:882 - which has little bell sound there
01:10:272 - i think it's should be 1, since i don't hear 2 note's instrument (drum) that played here
01:10:661 - i think it's should be 1 since the pattern are stair then 2 2 3 and i don't hear 2 note's instrument (drum) that played here so just consider make it 1
01:22:155 (82155|1,82155|0,82350|2,82447|3,82544|2,82544|1,82544|0) - i think this part are not pretty far with other pattern( i suggest make it normal, there's not any extra instrument or changes in song that make this part special ) and 01:22:544 (82544|2,82544|0,82544|1) - this ending note isn't look like 01:19:428 - which both has same ending thing, so just make them same, if you want to keep the ending note thing then you need to apply them to a part which usually end the vocal and then later on will start a new one( note : You do the end thing at normal diff, so suggest make it in insane too)i think you never notice the cymbal sound. that's the reason why that note is 3...like this one 01:14:557 - 01:16:311 -
00:25:661 - (Green line at photo) I think there's many drum beat that you miss so that i suggest make it to LN and a note for the missed beat which actually that it should be noticed like its friend
00:28:389 (28389|3,28583|2) - suggest move it to 3 2 (see from left) since i notice that 00:28:389 (28389|3) - is start at a pitch like pitch at 00:27:999 (27999|2) - or 00:28:389 (28389|3) - move to 3 if you want just notice the beginning of the pitch
00:29:947 (29947|0,30142|1) - ^
00:34:622 (34622|2,34817|3) - ^
00:40:467 - add note so that the pattern is consistent with other (00:39:687 (39687|2,39882|3,40077|2,40077|1) - or 00:41:246 (41246|2,41441|3,41635|0,41635|2) - )
00:42:025 - ^
00:43:583 - ^
00:46:700 - ^
00:48:259 - ^
00:51:278 - add a note so they become rapid stair , you can know it by listen to the music
01:28:973 - add note :'3
00:15:531 - suggest make this 2 since this kind of sound are pretty alike 00:13:973 (13973|0,13973|1,14168|2,14363|3,14363|1) -
00:17:090 - ^
00:18:648 - ^
00:21:765 - ^
00:23:324 - ^I don't think that because 00:13:973 (13973|0,13973|1) - this one indicates the start of this part 00:15:142 - and this one is used soun in 2 notes that are not similar with 00:15:531 (15531|1) - this one.
00:26:051 - Suggest make it thrill and i arrange the note a bit i use that trill but some modders are not comfy with trill in this part...much better if you stay like that for consistency.
00:29:947 (29947|0,29947|1,30142|1,30337|3,30337|2,30531|2,30726|0,30726|1,30921|0) - pretty weird that suddenly become jack hammer pattern I don't think that's weird....
00:35:791 - sugget make it to 3, i feel the power of this drum are got more power than other 2 notes I don't think that because you can cleary hear the same sound of drum like this 00:36:181 (36181|0,36181|3,36570|1,36570|0,36960|3,36960|2) ....it's acceptable if the sound like this 00:35:402 (35402|2,35402|1,35402|3) -
00:44:460 - add note here, i think it's pretty same with 00:42:609 (42609|1,42707|0,42804|2) - since when i remove the middle note in the short stair that has low sound that likely the part that i point out first no and you can hear it at 25%playback rate....i din't hear any tiny sound like this 00:45:824 - 00:47:382 -
00:49:622 - suggest it make it to 2 notes since the power of the vocal is like 00:49:428 - so just like as trampoline :'3 (don't forget to apply to other diff, especially insane diff) I don't apply vocal sound in this map T_T
01:03:648 - add a note at col 2 since here player will focus to the "jumping vocal" which is make it nice if you make them all chords as i said, i din't apply vocal sound in this map :)



Continue Later :"3 Done :D
Thanks for Mod Davin....I'll mod your map ASAP :)
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Hi from your m4m queue :)

Normal
- 00:01:116 - how about use a LN end at 00:01:506 - to emphasize the 1/4 sound here? it would be nice
- 00:08:713 (8713|3) - somehow i feel much comfortable if you move this to col 2 and 00:08:908 (8908|2) - to 4 , what do you think?
- 00:10:272 (10272|3,10467|0,10467|1,10661|2) - CTRL+H?
- 00:27:999 (27999|2,28194|1,28389|2,28583|1) - how about CTRL+H this one? it would be better to start the trill pattern on different hand after 00:27:609 (27609|2,27804|3) -
- 00:29:557 (29557|1,29752|2,29947|1,30142|2) - CTRL+H? reason like before ^
- 01:34:038 (94038|0,94135|1,94233|2,94330|3,94428|0,94525|1,94622|2,94720|3) - for normal diff i will not recommend to use 1/4 pattern since it is really hard for novice player to play so, my suggestion > http://puu.sh/ucQkO/2a2db5ab9e.png (LN to cover the 1/4 drum roll)

Hard
- 00:07:544 - should be double here for the melody sound
- 00:42:707 (42707|0) - can't really notice the sound here clearly , remove it? unlike 00:41:148 (41148|0) - this sound is clear to map it. also u did not map it 00:44:265 - too.
- 00:45:824 (45824|1) - same thing here if u agree ^
- 00:49:622 - double note here? it won't be hard to play so
- 00:52:350 (52350|0,52350|1) - inconsistent with 00:53:908 (53908|3) - u can either double/single note for both of them (i suggest single note since it is hard diff)
- 00:55:467 (55467|3,55467|2) - same thing here inconsistent with 00:57:025 (57025|0) -
- 01:01:116 (61116|1) - move to 1 and 01:01:506 (61506|1) - move to 3 could be easier to hit these 1/6 drum roll
- 01:03:648 - should be double note here too since u layer all drum+vocal with double here > 01:03:064 (63064|3,63064|0,63259|3,63259|1,63454|0,63454|2) -
- 01:04:817 (64817|2,64817|1) - single note should be fine here, also it doesn't really have any strong sound to represent here
- 01:23:518 (83518|2,83518|3) - same here ^ u may refer to your other similar part like 01:21:570 (81570|3,81668|2,81765|1,81863|2,81960|3) -
- 01:34:038 (94038|3,94038|2) - u can keep it simple by reducing a note here
- 01:34:817 (94817|0) - end at 01:41:246 - would be better


Insane
- 00:24:687 - triple for crash here?
- 00:50:791 - u can use double note here too since the sound is the same with 00:50:596 (50596|3,50596|1) -
- 01:04:428 (64428|3,64428|1,64817|3,64817|2) - i am unsure what sound u are catching with double note here, vocal+snare? if yes u can use double at -01:04:622 - here too to emphyasize the vocal sound here
if u agree on above then u may want to check this part till 01:29:168 - (example of double note placement > 01:05:207 - 01:05:986 - 01:06:765 - etc)

hope these help
good luck! ;)
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Critical_Star wrote:

Hi from your m4m queue :)

Normal
- 00:01:116 - how about use a LN end at 00:01:506 - to emphasize the 1/4 sound here? it would be nice
- 00:08:713 (8713|3) - somehow i feel much comfortable if you move this to col 2 and 00:08:908 (8908|2) - to 4 , what do you think? it's more comfortable in col 2. moved.
- 00:10:272 (10272|3,10467|0,10467|1,10661|2) - CTRL+H?
- 00:27:999 (27999|2,28194|1,28389|2,28583|1) - how about CTRL+H this one? it would be better to start the trill pattern on different hand after 00:27:609 (27609|2,27804|3) -
- 00:29:557 (29557|1,29752|2,29947|1,30142|2) - CTRL+H? reason like before ^
- 01:34:038 (94038|0,94135|1,94233|2,94330|3,94428|0,94525|1,94622|2,94720|3) - for normal diff i will not recommend to use 1/4 pattern since it is really hard for novice player to play so, my suggestion > http://puu.sh/ucQkO/2a2db5ab9e.png (LN to cover the 1/4 drum roll)

Hard
- 00:07:544 - should be double here for the melody sound
- 00:42:707 (42707|0) - can't really notice the sound here clearly , remove it? unlike 00:41:148 (41148|0) - this sound is clear to map it. also u did not map it 00:44:265 - too.
- 00:45:824 (45824|1) - same thing here if u agree ^
- 00:49:622 - double note here? it won't be hard to play so
- 00:52:350 (52350|0,52350|1) - inconsistent with 00:53:908 (53908|3) - u can either double/single note for both of them (i suggest single note since it is hard diff)
- 00:55:467 (55467|3,55467|2) - same thing here inconsistent with 00:57:025 (57025|0) -
- 01:01:116 (61116|1) - move to 1 and 01:01:506 (61506|1) - move to 3 could be easier to hit these 1/6 drum roll
- 01:03:648 - should be double note here too since u layer all drum+vocal with double here > 01:03:064 (63064|3,63064|0,63259|3,63259|1,63454|0,63454|2) -
- 01:04:817 (64817|2,64817|1) - single note should be fine here, also it doesn't really have any strong sound to represent here
- 01:23:518 (83518|2,83518|3) - same here ^ u may refer to your other similar part like 01:21:570 (81570|3,81668|2,81765|1,81863|2,81960|3) -
- 01:34:038 (94038|3,94038|2) - u can keep it simple by reducing a note here
- 01:34:817 (94817|0) - end at 01:41:246 - would be better It's intentional and i think it's fine to have that kind of note in ending.


Insane
- 00:24:687 - triple for crash here?
- 00:50:791 - u can use double note here too since the sound is the same with 00:50:596 (50596|3,50596|1) -
- 01:04:428 (64428|3,64428|1,64817|3,64817|2) - i am unsure what sound u are catching with double note here, vocal+snare? if yes u can use double at -01:04:622 - here too to emphyasize the vocal sound here i guess remove one note to emphasize what hit sound i use. (i din't use vocal sound in that part.
if u agree on above then u may want to check this part till 01:29:168 - (example of double note placement > 01:05:207 - 01:05:986 - 01:06:765 - etc)

hope these help
good luck! ;)
Thanks for mod Critical_Star...i will mod your map ASAP :)
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"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
• 00:01:116 - suggesting to add LN to 4 until 00:01:506 - since you mapped 1/4 notes on the hard difficulty, it would be good to map for the NM as well but on LN form.

• 00:25:467 (25467|3) - suggesting to change this LN to normal note as it will be too hard for the normal players to execute the current notes 00:25:467 (25467|2,25661|1,25856|0) - while holding the LN (almost similar compared to Hard's). Changing the LN and rearranging the pattern will make this part comfortable. You decide.

• 00:39:687 - until 00:48:648 - similar reason above, The LN along with the single notes will give a hard time for beginners. A solution for this is to delete all 1/2 red line single notes and let the 1/1 white line do the job for the percussion. Not to mention that the note density is similar to Hard's as well. This one of the highest spike of the map and I would recommend to nerf.

• 01:34:622 (94622|2,94720|3) - swap column the notes. More comfortable and will make a stair pattern going to the finishing notes.



[Hard]
• 00:13:973 - add note to 4 since strong sound along with the cymbals fits to be triple notes. Similar to 00:32:674 (32674|2,32674|3,32674|1) -

• 00:21:765 (21765|3) - move to 3 to be more comfortable and similar to 00:17:674 (17674|0,17772|1,17869|2) -

• 00:24:687 - similar as previous, add note for the strong sound cymba;s. Just like 00:32:674 (32674|2,32674|3,32674|1) -

• 00:38:908 - until 00:51:376 - the note density is similar to Insane's and almost similar pattern as well. I would recommend you to rearrange and nerf some notes for this difficulty to have variations.

• 01:09:687 - add note for the snare sound just like you are doing on other snare sounds.

• 01:34:817 (94817|0) - extend till 01:41:246 - as the strong synth ends there. Or if you are doing the same as Insane's, it should be ended at 01:41:051 - which I do not recommend as it feels off.




[Insane]
• 00:03:746 (3746|0) - move to 4 to make it more comfortable to hit and clearer to see.

• 00:06:765 (6765|3) - remove, sudden triple key press while the sound 00:04:622 - is only double and way stronger. This is the only triple in the intro section.

• 00:13:389 - until 00:13:583 - there's a 1/3 hihat that can be heard in the music, would suggest to add notes for it but that would reduce the chords into doubles. Similar to 00:28:648 (28648|2,28713|1) -

• 00:24:687 - add note strong sound cymbals occured.

• 00:46:700 (46700|3) - remove, sudden triple when there is no additional sound, unlike 00:45:142 (45142|1,45142|3,45142|2) - where it has cymbals.

• 01:14:557 (74557|3) - You can change this to LN until 01:14:947 - for the bass guitar sound + the vocals.

• 01:28:194 - add note, same tom sound as 01:27:999 (87999|3,87999|2) - fits to be double.


[Overall]
Quite relaxing song, is this from VN? :^)
I hope the mod helps and Good luck~

Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and until next time~

Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334

~ END OF CONTRACT ~
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arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
• 00:01:116 - suggesting to add LN to 4 until 00:01:506 - since you mapped 1/4 notes on the hard difficulty, it would be good to map for the NM as well but on LN form. Critcal_Star already suggest this...(I just check his mod few minutes ago)

• 00:25:467 (25467|3) - suggesting to change this LN to normal note as it will be too hard for the normal players to execute the current notes 00:25:467 (25467|2,25661|1,25856|0) - while holding the LN (almost similar compared to Hard's). Changing the LN and rearranging the pattern will make this part comfortable. You decide. I guess i have to change this pattern and remove one LN

• 00:39:687 - until 00:48:648 - similar reason above, The LN along with the single notes will give a hard time for beginners. A solution for this is to delete all 1/2 red line single notes and let the 1/1 white line do the job for the percussion. Not to mention that the note density is similar to Hard's as well. This one of the highest spike of the map and I would recommend to nerf. Nice catch.

• 01:34:622 (94622|2,94720|3) - swap column the notes. More comfortable and will make a stair pattern going to the finishing notesAs Critical_Star said that stairs is not recommend to use in Normal diff so i change it to LN that Critical_Star's suggested..



[Hard]
• 00:13:973 - add note to 4 since strong sound along with the cymbals fits to be triple notes. Similar to 00:32:674 (32674|2,32674|3,32674|1) -

• 00:21:765 (21765|3) - move to 3 to be more comfortable and similar to 00:17:674 (17674|0,17772|1,17869|2) -

• 00:24:687 - similar as previous, add note for the strong sound cymba;s. Just like 00:32:674 (32674|2,32674|3,32674|1) -

• 00:38:908 - until 00:51:376 - the note density is similar to Insane's and almost similar pattern as well. I would recommend you to rearrange and nerf some notes for this difficulty to have variations. I guess i have to rearrange this part that have not similar pattern in Insane

• 01:09:687 - add note for the snare sound just like you are doing on other snare sounds.

• 01:34:817 (94817|0) - extend till 01:41:246 - as the strong synth ends there. Or if you are doing the same as Insane's, it should be ended at 01:41:051 - which I do not recommend as it feels off.It seems fine to me to have that kind of note. I just take the LN range.




[Insane]
• 00:03:746 (3746|0) - move to 4 to make it more comfortable to hit and clearer to see.

• 00:06:765 (6765|3) - remove, sudden triple key press while the sound 00:04:622 - is only double and way stronger. This is the only triple in the intro section.

• 00:13:389 - until 00:13:583 - there's a 1/3 hihat that can be heard in the music, would suggest to add notes for it but that would reduce the chords into doubles. Similar to 00:28:648 (28648|2,28713|1) - I know there's a hithat can be heard but i will stick to 1/2 and i was use SV on that part.

• 00:24:687 - add note strong sound cymbals occured.

• 00:46:700 (46700|3) - remove, sudden triple when there is no additional sound, unlike 00:45:142 (45142|1,45142|3,45142|2) - where it has cymbals.

• 01:14:557 (74557|3) - You can change this to LN until 01:14:947 - for the bass guitar sound + the vocals.

• 01:28:194 - add note, same tom sound as 01:27:999 (87999|3,87999|2) - fits to be double.


[Overall]
Quite relaxing song, is this from VN? :^)
I hope the mod helps and Good luck~

Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and until next time~

Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334

~ END OF CONTRACT ~
Yes it's VN and thanks for mod my map. I already vote to your modding thread. Until next time :)
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Hello from your queue :oops:
*columns:1|2|3|4
From 00:28:583 (28583|2) - to 00:28:583 (28583|2) - : It is more comfortable with this Picture
01:14:557 - : Remove 4 ?
00:20:207 - : Add to 1 because the sound is same as 00:24:687 -
00:38:324 - to 00:38:908 - : How about making this a bit easier
00:41:148 (41148|1) - : Remove
00:47:382 (47382|1) - : Remove
00:48:941 (48941|1) - : Remove
00:50:012 - : Don't know about this. I think remove the LNs and do this instead Click
Just to make it feels like a Normal. :)
00:25:467 - : Add to 2. It fits the sound.
00:44:947 - : Add to 2
From 01:04:428 - to 01:04:817 - : You should add a note at 01:04:622 -
Just like here 01:09:103 - to 01:09:493 - but remove 01:09:493 (69493|3) -
01:10:661 - : Remove a note
01:10:856 - : Add a note
01:11:051 - : Remove a note
And so on... like here:
01:16:895 -
01:21:570 -
01:23:129 -


Hope this helps :">
Goodluck
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Purrinya wrote:

Hello from your queue :oops:
*columns:1|2|3|4
From 00:28:583 (28583|2) - to 00:28:583 (28583|2) - : It is more comfortable with this Picturei think it's fine to not add new pattern in this part...
01:14:557 - : Remove 4 ?no, because it's load sound.
00:20:207 - : Add to 1 because the sound is same as 00:24:687 -
00:38:324 - to 00:38:908 - : How about making this a bit easierit's easier btw XD
00:41:148 (41148|1) - : Removei can hear hitsound in that part
00:47:382 (47382|1) - : Remove ^
00:48:941 (48941|1) - : Remove ^
00:50:012 - : Don't know about this. I think remove the LNs and do this instead Click
Just to make it feels like a Normal. it's fine to have LN (i canhear long sound) like that and it's Hard diff XD :)
00:25:467 - : Add to 2. It fits the sound. 2 notes are enough.
00:44:947 - : Add to 2 i don't think to add one note in that part and it's acceptable if it is loud.
From 01:04:428 - to 01:04:817 - : You should add a note at 01:04:622 -
Just like here 01:09:103 - to 01:09:493 - but remove 01:09:493 (69493|3) - oh i will consider this but 01:09:493 (69493|3) no remove for this instead of doing like pattern in 01:09:298 -
01:10:661 - : Remove a note
01:10:856 - : Add a note
01:11:051 - : Remove a noteno remove...to follow the pattern
And so on... like here:
01:16:895 -
01:21:570 -
01:23:129 -


Hope this helps :">
Goodluck
thanks for mod....i will mod your map ASAP :)
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