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Ensi

Joined October 2015

Ensi 2017-03-25T09:32:17+00:00

PandaHero wrote:
Привет.

[_Ensi_'s Insane]
00:09:484 (5,6) - херово такое будет работать. Я бы вот так сделала. Да, это скучно, но зато соответствует музыке. А мне нрав.
00:10:234 (1,2) - бле, зачем оверлапить, когда можно передвинуть 2 слайдер на X:84 Y:91 и конец 6 слайдера с головами 1 и 2 образуют няшный треугольник. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7646847 Так то да :3
Если сделаешь это, погни как-нибудь 1 и 2, а то они совсем деревянные и некрасивые.
00:11:171 (6,7) - по-моему ты делаешь слишком много бланкетов .о. А почему бы и нет?
00:13:234 (1,3) - не стоит так делать, выглядит грязно. Лучше стакнуть с началом 00:13:234 (1) слайдера. Стакнул
00:14:734 (1,2) - вот этих тоже можно подальше друг от друга поставить, а то тут - 00:14:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6) куча мала получается. Ага
00:17:359 (4) - ctrl+g ему пропиши что ли Прописал
00:20:734 (7) - нк потерял Упс)
00:22:234 (1,2) - а почему спейсинг между 1/2 такой маленький? DS. Пофиксил.
00:23:545 (8,1) - ^ ^
00:22:796 (3,4) - вот тут тоже можно было побольше спейсинг сделать Угу
00:23:734 (1,2,3,4) - вот тут тоже можно было не мелочиться, ты ж не нормал маппаешь. Хорошо
00:26:546 (7,1) - вот тут неудобный угол, неприятно будет играть. Пофиксил
00:28:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - вот тут можно было и поаккуратнее сделать. Сделал
00:33:859 (5,1) - вот тут я с таким оверлапом не согласна, конец одного такта и начало следующего можно было и спейсануть. Просто держи в голове тот момент, что ты таким образом останавливаешь курсор игрока на одном месте, это работает, если соотносится с музыкой, а вот тут я чо-т даже не знаю. Пофиксил
00:35:921 (1) - имхо тут лучше две ноты сделать. Тоже так думаю
00:35:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - а вот в этой штуке разберись с углами, какие-то они у тебя рандомные. Пофиксил
00:37:234 (1,2,3) - будет работать лучше, если ты поставишь 2 ровно по середине между 1 и 3. Типа вот так. Ага
00:41:546 (9,1) - поосторожнее с углами, молодой человек. Вот тут тоже резко флоу ломаешь, надо помягче. Ну.. Я люблю пожёстче
00:43:796 (3,5) - опять в кучу лепишь ._. Сделай ему ctrl+<, ctrl+g, подвинь вправо и вниз. Вот так - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7646984. Ну, и следующий паттерн под это дело подстрой. Пофиксил
00:45:296 (3,4) - опять спейсинга пожалел, чо он такой маленький-то. Жадина прост
00:45:671 (4,5,6,7,8) - вот тут мне форма стрима не нравится, лучше делать стримы путём конвертирования слайдеров в стримы, в эдиторе есть такая фича, поищи. Я вообще то так и делаю. Я не на стольк новичок :с
00:46:984 (3,4,5) - такое по-моему тоже работать не будет + с музыкой не соотносится, лучше переставить их куда-нибудь в другое место, хотя бы вот так. Попробуем
00:47:734 (1,2) - вот этих челов потом перетащи куда-нибудь, если сделаешь это. ^
00:53:265 (5,6) - тут лучше стакнуть, как ты до этого делал Хорошо
00:54:765 (4,5) - ^ ^

Чо-т спейсинг в киае вообще не поменялся, хотя киай по идее должен быть чуть более интенсивным, чем остальные части. Меняется.. иногда
01:03:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - про форму стримов уже писала Я тоже написал с:
01:04:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - дико странный паттерн, хз как фиксить Не люблю шаблон. Пусть так останется
01:15:109 (2) - тут лучше стрим сделать Угу
01:17:734 (1,2,3,4) - плохие углы здесь ^
01:21:484 (3,4) - лучше два 1/2 слайдера сделать вместо ревёрса и ноты. ^
01:25:234 (1) - я просто не фанат того, чтобы стримы начинались с ревёрсов, поэтому советую заменить его на ноты. Тут уже кому как
01:29:734 (1) - хм, по-моему тут 1/2 слайдеры по музыке, не 1/4. Пофиксил
01:35:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - вообще спейсинговые стримы в инсах нежелательно делать. Пофиксил
01:38:734 (1,2,3,4) - этот стрим слишком близко к предыдущему. Пофиксил
01:39:015 (4,5,6) - слишком скромный спейсинг для таких битов, особенно после всего, что было. Там некуда его интенсивней делать

Спасибо за мод ))

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m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-03-26T22:38:35+00:00

~Хай Химе ДанДан

PandaHero wrote:
Привет.

General:

1. Гап между нормалом и изи слишком маленький (1.94* и 1.84*), а между хардом и нормалом слишком большой (3.51* и 1.94*), предлагаю апнуть нормал до 2 с чем-нибудь звёзд. Хорошо
2. Поставь какие-нибудь комбо-колоры красивые, сразу карта круче будет выглядеть. Сделаю !
3. Соурс какой-то странный, где мету брал? Исправлю. С ютуба брал
4. Либо отключите letterbox in breaks везде, либо везде включите. Хорошо
5. У byakuren.jpg какое-то разрешение странное, обрежь до 1280x900 Обрежу
6. Unused hitsounds: Как найду хитсаунды , которые будут меня на 100% устраивать, тогда удалю всё лишнее
normal-hitwhistle16.wav
normal-sliderslide16.wav
soft-hitclap3.wav
soft-hitwhistle3.wav
soft-sliderslide3.wav
6. Удали аудио-дорожку из видео, её там быть не должно. Хорошо
7. Хитсаунд с задержкой: Заменю
soft-hitnormal2.wav

[Pay4Shrine]
SV маловато для ласт диффы, я бы подняла Поднято с 1.40 до 1.60
00:23:734 (1) - этот фортовский хитсаунд мне совсем не нравится, не звучит он на этом треке. Вижу Марису/Алису леплю этот ХС

00:14:359 (1,2,3,4) - будет лучше, если ты поставишь 4 на такое же расстояние от 2, на каком находится 3 от 1. Типа вот так Хорошо
00:16:609 (2,3) - эта штука не работает как надо и читается совсем плохо. Рекомендую отодвинуть слайдер от ноты и прописать ему ctrl+g Пусть пока будет по-твоему
00:17:359 (2,3) - сейм. Или вообще на троечки их замени, будет лучше играться. Про троечки еще подумаю
00:17:734 (4) - нк, чтобы показать смену св. Ну, и просто потому что это начало нового такта. Хорошо
00:19:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - вот тут мне форма совсем не нравится, необоснованно острый угол вот здесь - 00:19:702 (6,7,8), сделай пожалуйста плавнее. Сделано
00:20:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:22:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - сделай его более округлым, плиз. Рекомендую юзать фичу под названием "конвертировать слайдер в стримы" (ctrl+shift+f), так можно легко делать крутые стримасы. А мне нравится этот стрим, к тому же играбельно
00:22:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - и вот тут бы чего поинтереснее придумать по форме, но думаю ты разберёшься.
00:24:484 (1,1) - а тут чего спейсинга пожалел? .о. Между такими штуками 00:23:734 (1,1,1,1) - его лучше примерно одинаковым делать.Думаю , что это не обязательно..ну пока что поставил
00:25:984 (9,10,11,12) - можно убрать ноту отсюда 00:26:264 (11) - , поставить туда кик-слайдер, вот сюда - 00:26:452 ноту, вот сюда - 00:26:546 кик-слайдер, и расставить как-нибудь по-интересному, мне кажется так будет структурно лучше, ибо ты подчеркнёщь один и тот же звук (вот этот - 00:25:984 (9)) кик-слайдерами. Не забывай о том, что кик-слайдер играется как одна нота, так что между ним и следующей нотой можно делать расстояние побольше. Интересная идея, но пока воздержусь от неё
00:27:484 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:015 (4,5) - тут можешь увеличить спейсинг, объяснила выше почему. Хорошо
00:31:609 (1) - а зачем тут нк? Noob maper move
00:31:233 - плохо понимаю ритм в этой части, вот на подобные звуки - 00:32:359 лучше не ставить конец слайдера, лучше дать игроку на них нажать.Кардинально изменил ритм этой секции
00:33:296 (3,4,5) - вот тут вокал вроде усиливается, а спейсинг наоборот, уменьшается. Не надо так делать.
00:34:046 (1,2,3,4) - плохие углы и неоднородный спейсинг в этом паттерне. Можешь квадратос туда влепить.
00:34:796 (4,1,2,3) - ну вот куда тут такой большой спейсинг, тут же нет ничего, никаких усилений, лучше куда-нибудь наверх этот триплет убери ._.
00:35:546 (4) - лучше две ноты сделать. Перед джамп секцией это не лучшая идея
00:39:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - неудобно играется, потому что ты тут резко ломаешь круговой флоу, самый простой способ фиксануть это перекинуть 5 слайдер вправо "5" ломает флоу потому , что 00:38:171 (4) - тоже ломает флоу
00:40:608 (2,1) - same shit, у меня рука заболела, когда я на это посмотрела, передвинь его хоть пониже, чтобы спейсинг был такой же, как вот здесь - 00:40:420 (1,2). А вообще, неплохо было бы и вместо этого слайдера сделать две ноты. Но джампики же имеют форму звезды..Я подумаю. Слайдер остается т.к вокал утихает
00:40:796 (1,3) - вот из-за таких оверлапов всегда плохое впечатление о карте складывается, не делай так, пожалуйста.
Хорошо
00:42:765 (2) - сдаётся мне эта нота лишняя, и стрим на самом деле начинается вот отсюда - 00:42:859 (3). а я думаю тут нет проблем
00:43:609 (1) - а зачем нк? Noob maper move
00:46:140 - вот тут ноту пропустил зря Разве там есть нота?
00:47:733 (1) - поверни его на 45 градусов против часовой стрелки, ему так пойдёт. Хорошо
00:48:296 (3,4) - ну зачем ты их оверлапишь? .о. Больше не буду ( но это не точно )
00:48:577 (4) - и имо тут лучше тоже стримчик Перед джампами не лучшая идея имо
00:51:296 (5) - если подвинешь её на X:274 Y:319, так эта нота будет лучше взаимодействовать со слайдером. Хорошо, спасибо за точность
00:51:859 (7,1) - вот тут тоже неудобный переход, я бы 1 пониже подвинула, в самый угол. Хорошо
00:52:234 (2) - этого чела тогда вправо подвинь. Хорошо
00:52:046 (1,2) - и вообще, я бы тут свапнула нк, на твоём месте Хорошо
00:53:545 (5,1) - вот такой спейсинг тут не работает. Пропиши ему ctrl+> и подвинь вправо, чтобы вот тут 00:53:358 (4,5,1) - треугольник получился (момстрата привет). Хорошо, но только подвинул налево ( Hello mr.monstrata)
00:55:796 (2,3) - ты только разогнался со спейсингом, как резко тормозишь вот здесь, так дела не делаются. Торможение оправдывается идущим после джампов стримом который "затухает"
00:56:265 (6,1) - а вот тут зачем стакнул? оОИсправлено
00:57:484 (1,2,3,4) - сделай один нормальный стрим, зачем тут ревёрс вообще. Реверс начинается вместе с вокалом. Make sense
00:58:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - слишком острый угол, сделай что-нибудь покруглее, пожалуйста. Он мне тоже не нравился
00:59:734 (1,2,3) - а вот тут наоборот слишком тупой, хотя это триггерит меня чуть поменьше Меня совсем не триггерит
01:04:046 (1) - поменяй ревёрс на три ноты что ли. Даю игроку время сфокусироваться на следующих джампах
01:16:046 (3) - ^
01:04:421 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - оооочень неудобные движения здесь привет HW (мб поменяю если что нибудь получше придумаю)
01:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - вот тут овермап, как по мне, нет тут звуков на этот стрим. Точнее есть, но они слишком слабенькие, не заслуживают стрима. не согласен 00:45:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - same shit
01:10:046 (1,1) - опять спейсинга пожалел Я буду с ним очень жесток
01:11:546 (3,1) - вот этот переход сложно читать, я бы не стала стакать 01:11:734 (1) с 01:11:359 (2). Хорошо
01:18:296 (4,5,6) - вот тут такая же история, сложно читать такие стаки. Хорошо
01:18:671 (6,2) - уже говорила про такие оверлапы. Хорошо
01:33:859 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ну вот зачем? Можно было вниз стрим увести. А ещё не делать его с таким неоправданно маленьким спейсингом вначале. Хотя я поняла твою задумку здесь, стоит сделать более плавное наращивание спейсинга в этом моменте, у тебя как-то слишком резко получилось. Ну если поняла задумку , то все хорошо. А с резкостью не согласен, экстра дифф как никак..
01:37:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - тут по музыке нет такого спейсанутого стрима же. Интенсивный финал, не?
01:37:421 (3) - и вот этой ноты там нет. есь жи
01:38:734 (1,1,1,1) - вот тут тоже овердан имо. No mercy
01:39:390 (2) - тут можно было повыёбываться со скоростью слайдера, но это так, необязательно. Длинный слайдер после спейс стрима заходит

Вывод: паттерны неудобные, спейсинг, эстетика, углы и прочие радости хромают. Чем смогла, тем помогла, надеюсь мои предложения тебе пригодятся. Ну прям всё плохо. Буду стараться больше!

На этом я заканчиваю свой мод, потому что я скончаюсь модить остальные диффы а вы скончаетесь это чекать
~Спасибо за мод

PandaHero

662 posts

Joined November 2011

PandaHero 2017-03-29T04:31:10+00:00

m3gB3g wrote:
Длинный слайдер после спейс стрима заходит

Так можно же ещё длиннее и быстрее, если ты понимаешь, о чём я :^)

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-03-29T17:24:00+00:00

PandaHero wrote:
m3gB3g wrote:
Длинный слайдер после спейс стрима заходит
Так можно же ещё длиннее и быстрее, если ты понимаешь, о чём я :^)

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-04-15T01:17:49+00:00

from ruski with love my friend

General

- The only diff I won't mod is Daoski's diff. Mainly because his map is intuitive and knows how to properly put objects, in addition to clean pattern. In addition to the fact that it is still WIP. Other diff are just bad if I be frank with you

-I will prioritize flow in my mods, and try to explain them until you can properly apply them.

Easy

- You used most of the mapping area (Roughly 92% of the editor). That's ok
-Rhythm is not consistent. For instance, 00:22:234 (1,2) - rhythm is not the same as the previous ones (00:19:234 (1,2,3) - and 00:20:734 (1,2,3) - ). This is an issue that you need to consider. Because for one, consistent rhythm is mandatory in Easy. Newbies WILL misread the slider start and slider end, and are supposed to click to something like 00:22:234 (1,2,1) - ?
-Flow is literally random. As a flow mapper, seeing an Easy without good flow is a bit frustrating. It beats the intuition of an Easy, sending a message to those who started osu that the game is mainly about moving the mouse to hit the circles. Flow is, as mentioned, moving mouse to follow the circle placement and slider. Flow in this diff (never mind, I'll mention all the other diff except Daoski's) are rather implemented poorly. Then again, it's just my opinion.

Onto the mod

00:13:234 (1,2,3,1,2) - as per mentioned in rhythm inconsistency, this is one of them. 00:13:234 (1,2,3) - is a slider circle circle, while as 00:14:734 (1,2) - is a slider repeat circle. This is an issue as the players still cannot comprehend how to play the game properly. And even on the higher diff, the rhythm should be as consistent as possible, following the beat. As a suggestion, make 00:14:734 (1,2) - the same as 00:13:234 (1,2,3) - as the players know the section is about sliders and circle introduction.

00:16:234 (1,2,3) - the slider body here did not even flow together. This is horrible both in terms of aesthetic and gameplay, as newbies are forced a rather uncomfortable flow. 00:16:984 (2) - should be changed into this so that it would be visually better than before and it will flow nicely.

00:22:234 (1,2) - this problem is the same as I had mention on 00:13:234 (1,2,3,1,2) - (rhythm inconsistency). Please do fix this as well.

00:24:859 (4,1) - Although the change of flow is not that bad, I still think it should follow the path(flow) that you had mapped. Check out these two screenshot. It would look appealing in both aesthetic and gameplay

-https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7828346
-http://puu.sh/vkxT4/e6a86bbf19.jpg

00:55:234 (1) - end the spinner on 00:56:734. It will give the players the recovery time after spinning

00:58:234 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g would work better rhythm-wise. Because on the middle of 00:59:356 (3) - is a big white tick that deserves a click

01:06:859 (1) - the reverse has a big white tick and deserves a click as well

01:12:484 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7828385

01:20:734 (1,1,1,1) - why each of the circles are NCed? does not make sense tbh

ok im ded. no more

kk kds thx ty thanks no homo

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-15T02:08:23+00:00

Winter Story wrote:
from ruski with love my friend ~hi

General

- The only diff I won't mod is Daoski's diff. Mainly because his map is intuitive and knows how to properly put objects, in addition to clean pattern. In addition to the fact that it is still WIP. Other diff are just bad if I be frank with you. Be frank with me in other diffs too pls, u can just update ur mod soon when u wish
-I will prioritize flow in my mods, and try to explain them until you can properly apply them.

Easy

- You used most of the mapping area (Roughly 92% of the editor). That's ok
-Rhythm is not consistent. For instance, 00:22:234 (1,2) - rhythm is not the same as the previous ones (00:19:234 (1,2,3) - and 00:20:734 (1,2,3) - ). This is an issue that you need to consider. Because for one, consistent rhythm is mandatory in Easy. Newbies WILL misread the slider start and slider end, and are supposed to click to something like 00:22:234 (1,2,1) - ? 00:22:234 (1,2) - these objects have other sound
-Flow is literally random. As a flow mapper, seeing an Easy without good flow is a bit frustrating. It beats the intuition of an Easy, sending a message to those who started osu that the game is mainly about moving the mouse to hit the circles. Flow is, as mentioned, moving mouse to follow the circle placement and slider. Flow in this diff (never mind, I'll mention all the other diff except Daoski's) are rather implemented poorly. Then again, it's just my opinion. k

Onto the mod

00:13:234 (1,2,3,1,2) - as per mentioned in rhythm inconsistency, this is one of them. 00:13:234 (1,2,3) - is a slider circle circle, while as 00:14:734 (1,2) - is a slider repeat circle. This is an issue as the players still cannot comprehend how to play the game properly. And even on the higher diff, the rhythm should be as consistent as possible, following the beat. As a suggestion, make 00:14:734 (1,2) - the same as 00:13:234 (1,2,3) - as the players know the section is about sliders and circle introduction. 00:14:734 (1) - about this object u are right

00:16:234 (1,2,3) - the slider body here did not even flow together. This is horrible both in terms of aesthetic and gameplay, as newbies are forced a rather uncomfortable flow. 00:16:984 (2) - should be changed into this so that it would be visually better than before and it will flow nicely. its fine

00:22:234 (1,2) - this problem is the same as I had mention on 00:13:234 (1,2,3,1,2) - (rhythm inconsistency). Please do fix this as well. ^

00:24:859 (4,1) - Although the change of flow is not that bad, I still think it should follow the path(flow) that you had mapped. Check out these two screenshot. It would look appealing in both aesthetic and gameplay

-https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7828346
-http://puu.sh/vkxT4/e6a86bbf19.jpg
I like my ver more, but thanks!
00:55:234 (1) - end the spinner on 00:56:734. It will give the players the recovery time after spinning
No, bcs spinner will become too short. Also spinner ending with beginning of new sound,also there lot of time for focus on next objects. So its fine.

00:58:234 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g would work better rhythm-wise. Because on the middle of 00:59:356 (3) - is a big white tick that deserves a click
I did it Deliberately. So see, Big White Tick is also meaning beginning of new flow, so reverse Fits perfectly for flow changing.

01:06:859 (1) - the reverse has a big white tick and deserves a click as well ^

01:12:484 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7828385 ^

01:20:734 (1,1,1,1) - why each of the circles are NCed? does not make sense tbh no sense just madness (will fix soon)

ok im ded. no more

kk kds thx ty thanks no homo
k, u Wrote a lot, but in fact it's just water
no kd for now
if u will write mod to others diffs too i will give u kd for Endeavors
But no more water and show more Respect to other mappers pls.
P.S: I Admire Daoski mapping too

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2017-04-15T16:25:35+00:00

for dat boi m3gb3g

you said no restrictions so.... here you go ._.
My Guest Difficulty (5.31*) mapped in 2 day LUL
hitsounding is too hard since I don't know all the specific customs and the sets they belong to... so I'll leave hitsounding this beast to you

feel free to reject/remove this GD from the mapset if it doesn't fit your spread's needs... just let me know

plz find bg for me, i cant find any good ones

gl on dank

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-15T17:57:09+00:00

Daoski wrote:
for dat boi m3gb3g
you said no restrictions so.... here you go ._.
My Guest Difficulty (5.31*) mapped in 2 day LUL
hitsounding is too hard since I don't know all the specific customs and the sets they belong to... so I'll leave hitsounding this beast to you

feel free to reject/remove this GD from the mapset if it doesn't fit your spread's needs... just let me know

plz find bg for me, i cant find any good ones

gl on dank

Thanks m8 !

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2017-04-15T18:29:23+00:00

asked for normal mod u got 1

11:15 Daoski: just gonna say
11:15 Daoski: i think easy and normal star ratings are too close
11:16 Daoski: and are too similarly mapped since they mostly use 1/1 gaps anyway
11:16 Daoski: 00:39:859 (5,1) - and in normals changing the distance spacing is illegal
11:16 m3gB3g: u can mod this right now and take 2 kd from me u kno)
11:16 m3gB3g: its legal
11:16 Daoski: no
11:16 Daoski: its not
11:17 m3gB3g: why not?
11:17 Daoski: in NORMAL diff its definitely not legal
11:17 Daoski: u have to stay constant ds
11:17 Daoski: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
11:17 m3gB3g: nono i mean if u mod me is gonna be legal
11:17 Daoski: Spacing should be mostly consistent
11:17 m3gB3g: i just give u 2 kd and fix my mistakes
11:17 m3gB3g: so we have +2 fot map
11:17 Daoski: yea but i wont map the whole mapset
11:17 m3gB3g: for*
11:17 Daoski: i already gave u a star <3
11:18 m3gB3g: <3
11:18 Daoski: inb4
11:18 Daoski: daoski modding daoski diff
11:18 Daoski: :thinking:
11:18 Daoski: who is this guy
11:18 m3gB3g: just mod normal
11:18 m3gB3g: i saw like Gd mod main mapper and take kd from him
11:18 m3gB3g: i said is legal
11:18 m3gB3g: this*
11:18 m3gB3g: is
11:19 Daoski: ok
11:19 Daoski: your long sliders are pretty messy
11:19 Daoski: they just dont look aesthetic
11:20 Daoski: as well as your curved 1/1 sliders being different curves is very free handed and poor in an aesthetical sense
11:20 Daoski: but really just keep your normal constant disatnce spacing and we good
11:20 Daoski: thats the most important
11:20 Daoski: the others are just personal
11:21 m3gB3g: ok ill do this
11:21 Daoski: 00:49:234 (1) - the middle of this slider should be on the white tick here 00:50:734 -
11:21 m3gB3g: when u finish . Screen this dialog and put on forum. i'll give u kd
11:21 Daoski: yea
11:22 Daoski: im just making sure ur taking note of each change i suggest or highlight
11:22 m3gB3g: k lets make some mapping :^)
11:22 Daoski: the biggest issue with me on this
11:22 Daoski: is the concept that u map your hitcircles KINDA randomly
11:22 Daoski: 01:20:734 (1,2,3,4) - like this
11:23 Daoski: 01:13:234 (1,2,3,4) - and jumps that slowly curve but there are different parts in the map with the same kind of jumps but are different spacing/curvature
11:23 Daoski: and thats very poor aesthetical finish
11:23 Daoski: i think being constant is better especially for newer players to read and anticipate
11:23 Daoski: especially when some of your sliders dont imply the direction of the next hitcircle
11:24 Daoski: 01:12:484 (4,1) - like these two, but there are better examples in your diff
11:24 Daoski: 00:53:734 (1,2,3) - why not just make a proper square or triangle shape here, it looks better than staying constant with the line made here 00:52:984 (2,3,1) -
11:24 Daoski: stuff like that
11:25 Daoski: 00:46:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - another example of free-handed curvature
11:25 Daoski: its not gud man u gotta put more delicate care into ur normalz
11:25 Daoski: 00:49:234 (1) - btw if u are gonna do a shape like this, at least make it symmetrical relative to itself
11:26 Daoski: 01:06:859 (1,1) - why two consecutive new combos?
11:27 Daoski: 00:59:359 (3,4,5,1) - like here u can make it a perfect pentagon for the jumps with those circle/slider heads
11:27 Daoski: 01:01:234 (1,2) - and dont forget to properly blanket as well, for everything in your map u blanket
11:28 Daoski: 01:19:234 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this pattern choice doesnt fit the music in anyway, kinda just feels halfassed here
11:28 Daoski: i think thats it for now

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-15T18:56:31+00:00

Daoski wrote:
asked for normal mod u got 1
11:15 Daoski: just gonna say
11:15 Daoski: i think easy and normal star ratings are too close
11:16 Daoski: and are too similarly mapped since they mostly use 1/1 gaps anyway
11:16 Daoski: 00:39:859 (5,1) - and in normals changing the distance spacing is illegal
11:16 m3gB3g: u can mod this right now and take 2 kd from me u kno)
11:16 m3gB3g: its legal
11:16 Daoski: no
11:16 Daoski: its not
11:17 m3gB3g: why not?
11:17 Daoski: in NORMAL diff its definitely not legal
11:17 Daoski: u have to stay constant ds
11:17 Daoski: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
11:17 m3gB3g: nono i mean if u mod me is gonna be legal
11:17 Daoski: Spacing should be mostly consistent
11:17 m3gB3g: i just give u 2 kd and fix my mistakes
11:17 m3gB3g: so we have +2 fot map
11:17 Daoski: yea but i wont map the whole mapset
11:17 m3gB3g: for*
11:17 Daoski: i already gave u a star <3
11:18 m3gB3g: <3
11:18 Daoski: inb4
11:18 Daoski: daoski modding daoski diff
11:18 Daoski: :thinking:
11:18 Daoski: who is this guy
11:18 m3gB3g: just mod normal
11:18 m3gB3g: i saw like Gd mod main mapper and take kd from him
11:18 m3gB3g: i said is legal
11:18 m3gB3g: this*
11:18 m3gB3g: is
11:19 Daoski: ok
11:19 Daoski: your long sliders are pretty messy
11:19 Daoski: they just dont look aesthetic
11:20 Daoski: as well as your curved 1/1 sliders being different curves is very free handed and poor in an aesthetical sense
11:20 Daoski: but really just keep your normal constant disatnce spacing and we good
11:20 Daoski: thats the most important
11:20 Daoski: the others are just personal
11:21 m3gB3g: ok ill do this
11:21 Daoski: 00:49:234 (1) - the middle of this slider should be on the white tick here 00:50:734 -
11:21 m3gB3g: when u finish . Screen this dialog and put on forum. i'll give u kd
11:21 Daoski: yea
11:22 Daoski: im just making sure ur taking note of each change i suggest or highlight
11:22 m3gB3g: k lets make some mapping :^)
11:22 Daoski: the biggest issue with me on this
11:22 Daoski: is the concept that u map your hitcircles KINDA randomly
11:22 Daoski: 01:20:734 (1,2,3,4) - like this
11:23 Daoski: 01:13:234 (1,2,3,4) - and jumps that slowly curve but there are different parts in the map with the same kind of jumps but are different spacing/curvature
11:23 Daoski: and thats very poor aesthetical finish
11:23 Daoski: i think being constant is better especially for newer players to read and anticipate
11:23 Daoski: especially when some of your sliders dont imply the direction of the next hitcircle
11:24 Daoski: 01:12:484 (4,1) - like these two, but there are better examples in your diff
11:24 Daoski: 00:53:734 (1,2,3) - why not just make a proper square or triangle shape here, it looks better than staying constant with the line made here 00:52:984 (2,3,1) -
11:24 Daoski: stuff like that
11:25 Daoski: 00:46:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - another example of free-handed curvature
11:25 Daoski: its not gud man u gotta put more delicate care into ur normalz
11:25 Daoski: 00:49:234 (1) - btw if u are gonna do a shape like this, at least make it symmetrical relative to itself
11:26 Daoski: 01:06:859 (1,1) - why two consecutive new combos?
11:27 Daoski: 00:59:359 (3,4,5,1) - like here u can make it a perfect pentagon for the jumps with those circle/slider heads
11:27 Daoski: 01:01:234 (1,2) - and dont forget to properly blanket as well, for everything in your map u blanket
11:28 Daoski: 01:19:234 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this pattern choice doesnt fit the music in anyway, kinda just feels halfassed here
11:28 Daoski: i think thats it for now

totally rethink low diffs ty !

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2017-04-16T07:54:33+00:00

diff update here

Hey m3g, found a bg and decided to hitsound my entire diff for you so there you go <3 and since the .txt doesn't work for you...

default sounds ftw >:)

Here's the whole mapset + my changes and finishes

Don't worry, I didn't touch or remove anything in the folder

wewlad

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-16T09:11:35+00:00

Daoski wrote:
diff update here
Hey m3g, found a bg and decided to hitsound my entire diff for you so there you go <3 and since the .txt doesn't work for you...

default sounds ftw >:)

Here's the whole mapset + my changes and finishes

Don't worry, I didn't touch or remove anything in the folder

wewlad

<3

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2017-04-16T15:44:54+00:00

m3gB3g wrote:
Daoski wrote:
diff update here
Hey m3g, found a bg and decided to hitsound my entire diff for you so there you go <3 and since the .txt doesn't work for you...

default sounds ftw >:)

Here's the whole mapset + my changes and finishes

Don't worry, I didn't touch or remove anything in the folder

wewlad
<3

omg another quick fix and made some changes to the ending

Mapset + latest map changes and fixed missing hitsounds

sorry, and thanks again

Ensi

198 posts

Joined October 2015

Ensi 2017-04-16T17:42:50+00:00

Привет.
[Hard]

00:23:734 (1,1,1,1) - Мб растянуть до красных?
01:29:734 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:38:734 (2) - Пофикси слайдер
01:04:421 (2) - ^
01:16:421 (2) - ^
01:19:984 (4) - ^
01:01:046 (1,2) - поменяй местами
01:13:046 (1,2) - ^
00:33:296 (4,6) - поставь цЫркуль между ними)
01:34:234 (1) - может как нить так? https://puu.sh/vmdpt.png

Удачи)

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-16T18:19:13+00:00

_Ensi_ wrote:
Привет. ~ёё
[Hard]
00:23:734 (1,1,1,1) - Мб растянуть до красных? Ой)
01:29:734 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:38:734 (2) - Пофикси слайдер Исправил все слайдеры
01:04:421 (2) - ^
01:16:421 (2) - ^
01:19:984 (4) - ^
01:01:046 (1,2) - поменяй местами окей
01:13:046 (1,2) - ^
00:33:296 (4,6) - поставь цЫркуль между ними) Не хочу расставить лишние триплы на хардике
01:34:234 (1) - может как нить так? https://puu.sh/vmdpt.png
понял, изменил

Удачи) Спасибки ~

A1caida

199 posts

Joined May 2016

A1caida 2017-04-17T12:22:23+00:00

Стоп

В "P A Y 4 S H R I N E" на слайдере 01:12:390 (5) - стоит хитсаунд "ОРА ОРА ОРА"????????
01:14:734 (3) - тоже странный хитсаунд

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-17T14:15:35+00:00

-Alcaida wrote:
Стоп

В "P A Y 4 S H R I N E" на слайдере 01:12:390 (5) - стоит хитсаунд "ОРА ОРА ОРА"???????? На видосе есть отсылка к жожо. Решил порофлить
01:14:734 (3) - тоже странный хитсаунд этот хс - за варудо Дио xD

A1caida

199 posts

Joined May 2016

A1caida 2017-04-17T14:40:48+00:00

m3gB3g wrote:
-Alcaida wrote:
Стоп

В "P A Y 4 S H R I N E" на слайдере 01:12:390 (5) - стоит хитсаунд "ОРА ОРА ОРА"???????? На видосе есть отсылка к жожо. Решил порофлить
01:14:734 (3) - тоже странный хитсаунд этот хс - за варудо Дио xD

Прикольно конечно), но номинаторам вряд ли это понравится
Может стоит убрать??(Или в описание добавить ссылку чтобы он менял хс'ы(Как тут https://osu.ppy.sh/s/524537(тут только правда мп3 меняется)))

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-04-17T15:06:06+00:00

Прикольно конечно), но номинаторам вряд ли это понравится
Может стоит убрать??(Или в описание добавить ссылку чтобы он менял хс'ы(Как тут https://osu.ppy.sh/s/524537(тут только правда мп3 меняется)))

этот хс стоит временно. В будущем либо уберу его или же сделаю его более аккуратным и оставлю

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2017-04-25T17:18:19+00:00

im very god modder pls from #modreqs

General

AiMod shows you have conflicting timing points in your P A Y 4 S H R I N E difficulty. Meaning the offset is different. >.>
Why is there six seconds of silence before the song? EDIT: I put this before I realised there was a video pls

Normal

Looks good, some clean patterns and consistency. Good introduction map for new players ^^

00:17:734 (3) - This note feels is alright, but it feels pretty bare. The vocals have quite a lot of emphasis, maybe replacing this with a long slider would better fit in this instance.

00:19:609 (2,3) - Blanketing is a little bit off, you can see at the bottom of slider three it's slightly further away from the circle than the rest of the slider.

00:21:484 (3,4) - Slider 4 curves over slider 3 in a way that isn't blanketed too. Using Ctrl+G on slider 3 we can use the approach circle to determine how the slider should be curved if you want to achieve a consistent blanket.

Blanket

Using this method we can then make the blanket look much cleaner in play.

00:25:984 (2,1) - The angle on which these sliders go to isn't consistent with the other ones. I would use the same angle here to achieve better consistency.

00:28:234 (1) - You used a spinner here, but at the part before you used sliders / notes. Kind of breaks consistency since the only difference here is just a lack of vocals. You mapped everything else before though so I think placing notes instead of spinner would be better here.

00:31:234 (1,2) - Consider blanketing these so it looks a bit better aesthetically.

00:32:734 (3) - The slider kind of glosses over some vocals here that I feel you should map. Even using 1/1 notes would be better. Imo it breaks rhythm having a random large slider here.

00:35:921 (2) - This is sudden and kind of comes out of nowhere. New players will be playing this since it's the lowest difficulty of your mapset and multiple reverses are something that will be difficult for them to grasp in general.

00:41:734 (2) - Some of the curves could be made cleaner in my opinion. What I mean by this is the part at which the curve is largest should be centralised.

Old Curve

New Curve

00:43:234 (1,1) - ^ (same idea structure as mentioned above with making them smoother / keeping the apex of the curve central)

00:49:234 (1,2) - This blanket q.q

00:50:734 (2,1) - This blanket also q.q

00:53:734 (1) - Moving this note to these co-ordinates will improve the cursor flow. This will be achieved because of the curvature on which you've put the sliders at. (X:460 Y:268)

00:59:359 (4,1) - Consider blanketing this purely for stylistic reasons. This isn't really too important so if it's not the style you were going for you can just ignore this

01:00:484 (2,3,1) - Kind of questionable the way you've done this. The slider flow is a bit allover for a normal and new players may be put off by the large amount of different turns on the screen as well as the high density of notes all of a sudden.

01:06:484 (2,3,1) - ^

01:12:484 (2,3,1) - ^ (you get the idea

)

01:25:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This part just follow the suggestions I put for 00:19:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) this section if you agree to the changes.

Hard

00:14:921 (2,1) - Questionable spacing here, it feels a lot shorter from the previous instances on this type of pattern, maybe increase it a little bit?

00:15:671 (2,3,1) - You can see this is like a triangle. I appreciate the new combo for the 1/1 but players may still be confused on whether this is a 1/1 or 1/2. Players are still learning when they play this difficulty so maybe giving it a more obvious space would make the player more prepared to hit this.

00:17:734 (1) - I would reshape this slider so the sliderend is stacked over 00:17:359 (4) because A E S T H E T I C :^)

00:24:109 (2,4) - Stack these sliderends for the same reason as above maybe?

00:28:234 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I am not too sure about this implementation of distance snap variation. The song isn't really changing so the slow-down isn't really warranted. If anything the spacing should get more intense here, not less. Just my opinion.

00:30:484 (1) - Not sure why this slider is silenced, kind of plays wierd in that way. Shouldn't it be louder for the guitar riff thing? XD

00:32:171 (4) - Curve this the other way for a better flow for the cursor in gameplay, or you could position 00:31:984 (3) above the sliderhead of slider 4 instead. Your call

00:33:296 (3,4) - Move the last anchor for slider 4 down a bit to make the blanket 'perfect'

00:35:171 (4) - I think better flow would be to place this note at (X:200 Y:300). The player may anticipate this position more from the pattern you've made with the previous slider/note combination.

00:35:359 (5,1) - Not sure if this stack is intended but in all honesty it's pretty ugly, I think you should change the position one of the sliders to remove it.

00:35:921 (1,2,3) - :thinking:

00:38:171 (4,1) - Maybe you could do a blanket here, I feel a lot of missed potential from the current slider. Maybe try something like this:

Blanket

00:45:296 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. I would keep this distance snapped for consistency.

00:50:171 (5,1) - Consider blanketing this for aesthetic reasons.

00:52:234 (1,2,3) - ^

01:00:109 (2,3) - Feels really odd starting slider 3 on a blue tick, considering no other notes so far have started like this it kind of doesn't fit with the music or the style you've chosen.

01:06:577 (2) - ^

01:12:109 (2,3) - ^ (you get the idea

)

01:13:609 (2) - I can see here you're trying to make the new rhythm. Using this is a good way to transition the player over to this style. I would use something like this for those above ^

01:34:234 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion about distance snapping as mentioned earlier in the mod.

Insane

00:11:171 (2,3) - Curve this slider more in order to achieve a more consistent blanket on your map. You've done something like this at this point: 00:08:171 (2,3)

00:16:609 (1,1) - Stack these so it works better with the repetition aspect of the song?

00:17:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Expand the slider so that it ends on the white tick because the vocal part doesn't end until there. Doing it like this means the stream part begins half a beat too early and will catch players off.

00:23:734 (1,1,1,1) - I think these end on the red tick rather than the blue, because on the blue they feel as if they've been cut off prematurely.

00:25:984 (5,6,7) - This is mapping to a different music type but before at 00:19:984 (5) you kept it strictly 1/2. I don't think it could be one or the other here ;-;

00:27:484 (5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing. I can't see any reasoning other than its just not distance snapped properly

00:30:390 (1) - Like in the hard, I would discourage silencing this slider for the reason that it feels odd for players since they won't be getting any effective feedback from the map.

00:33:390 (5,6) - This curve from the stream feels really odd to play, I would curve the notes before in the stream much more in order to achieve a better flow with the cursor into this slider from the stream.

Stream

00:40:234 (1,3) - I wouldn't stack these, purely for aesthetic reasons and consistency with how you've previous executed jumps and my opinion :^)

00:45:671 (4) - Move this a bit further away so the distance between notes looks more consistent and standardised.

00:49:984 (6) - Move this away from note 4 so that the distance between all of these (00:49:421 (3,4,5,6) ) are uniform and c o n s i s t e n t (I love this word)

00:54:484 (5) - Make this a 1/4 reverse slider so you have a pattern going with the slider you placed just before that reversed on the blue tick.

00:58:234 (1) - Hello slider. You're getting invaded by the notestream army q.q

01:03:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hello 100 army. My accuracy went from 98% to 96% in 1 second. Nah but seriously this part is wierd because it's the only time you've done 1/4 slider jumps and it feels kind of jarring to play all of a sudden.

01:05:734 (3,4,1,2,1) - Ehh. I can't say much about how to improve this other than to remap the part because the notes while they work with the song are mapped too 'literal' so played will need to know exactly how the song works in order to hit these notes effectively.

01:15:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^

01:20:734 (1,1,1,1) - I see how you've used new combos to give player a warning about the 1/1 change, but I will still space the first two more apart so players can see even more of a difference here.

01:29:734 (1,1,1,1) - I see these are 1/2 like in my previous suggestion.

01:31:984 (5,6,7) - This is mapping to a different music type but before at 01:25:984 (5) you kept it strictly 1/2. I don't think it could be one or the other here ;-; (this looks familiar :^) )

01:34:984 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:15:109 (1,2,3,4,5)

01:38:171 (6,7,8) - Keep these strictly in the star pattern, I think the jump repetition works really well with how the song plays here and it also plays really nicely in game as well.

01:38:734 (1,2) - If you're adamant on keeping this, bring them a little closer together because in essence this is a 1/4 jump.

gary00737's Lunatic

_Ensi_'s Another

Daoski's Extra

00:15:859 (1) - Unrankable because it goes offscreen during testplay and gameplay.

P A Y 4 S H R I N E

00:08:725 (8) - This feels like this could have more emphasis here, I understand the pattern would change but I feel since it's the hardest diff we need more to diversify the map in relation to the music and have less predictable patterns.

00:11:537 (7,1) - Why's the spacing so close together here, anti-jump feels pretty awkward on the downbeat part of a song tbh

00:12:287 (3,4,5) - I would make this triangle equal all ways because they make more objective sense whilst giving the map a polished feel to it.

00:15:100 (1) - I don't feel this should have the same distance as 00:14:725 (1,2) because these two notes are heavily emphasised in relation to the song whilst the one I highlighted isn't landing on a part that has as much strength to it.

00:17:350 (2,3) - We stack?

00:19:975 (5,1) - There's a 1/2 spacing here, but the distance again is really short, the same as the 1/4 parts. Since it's NC it's a bit more readable but it could be made more distinct.

00:21:475 (5,1) - Same here, but it's even closer- some players might think the reverse goes straight into the stream when in reality there is a short pause.

00:25:225 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this overlap because for example notes 1 and 3 are so close on the timeline that you don't properly see slider 3 because it's over slider 1 for so long. You could try stacking the circle on the sliderends, which might work better.

00:26:725 (1,2,3,4) - ^

00:27:662 (2) - Nazi overlap :^)

00:28:693 (6,7,8,1) - Not a fan of the way this slider is curved and the direction it's facing. It kind of runs into all of the notes highlights and imo it looks messy like that. I would keep the flow and have it somewhere like this:

00:33:100 (1,1) - Stack maybe, would feels more fluid and players could pre-emptively know where the next jump note is easier.

00:41:912 (1,2) - Move note 1 down so it sits on the medium grid, and then place the other note I highlighted at (X:160 Y:96) I think this works nicer and creates a jump with better flow whilst being more difficult too.

00:43:225 (1,3) - Stack these properly

00:49:787 (5,6,1) - Spacing here is confusing. You're using different spacing for parts that are exactly the same, I would use either one of the other.

00:50:350 (1,3) - Nazi overlap. :^)

00:54:662 (1,2,3) - ^

00:56:818 (1) - Placing this above the previous note allows you to make the shape you've chosen for this slider more valid because the cursor will naturally be flowing from up rather than down. Current position feels too 'fragmented'

01:00:381 (5) - Not a big fan of this slider, if anything it should be at 01:00:662 because there is something distinct about the music, where it is now kind of feels like it's just skipping over beats for no reason.

01:07:225 (2,3) - Blanket these?

01:12:381 (5) - kys

01:12:100 (3,4) - Make these jumps because it would be more consistent with the previous notes.

01:13:975 (4,4) - Not a fan of these positions because of overlap again.

01:14:725 (4) - kys x2

01:16:412 (2) - Remove overlap :^)

01:19:693 (2) - This would feel better if the triplet was placed on the next blue tick rather than the one it's on right now, because the vocals are landing on the blue in the next one.

01:25:975 (5,1) - Same as before, as well as this one 01:27:475 (5,1)

01:29:725 (1,1,1,2) - Why are you not using those meme hitsounds you used before?

01:31:225 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before (just check above and apply it to the parts here bcs it's copy+pasted anyway :^))

01:38:725 (1,1,1,1) - :thinking:

I'll finish this mod later. It's up to you whether you give kudosu for this or not

EDIT: Finished insane

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2017-05-07T12:03:22+00:00

Daoski's Extra

00:15:859 (1) - Unrankable because it goes offscreen during testplay and gameplay.

it appears to be playable on a 4:3 resolution (specifically played in 800x600) and it appears to be playable, despite being "off-screen"

can you clarify this offscreen-ness a little more? because Im quite sure slider leniency lets it work just fine since the sliderhead is in the playfield

unless the slider shape is completely ambiguous which wasn't the case for me testing

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Icekalt 2017-05-11T00:03:27+00:00

I've done an Irc with gary

log

01:19 IceKalt: hey
01:19 gary00737: hello
01:19 IceKalt: want to do an irc about you diff in 
01:19 *IceKalt is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1275132 SOUND HOLIC - Psychedelic Onizakura Alliance]
01:19 IceKalt: in 10 mins?
01:19 gary00737: ok
01:27 gary00737: IRC @@? need go to the server?
01:27 gary00737: it is my fisrt time use irc
01:27 IceKalt: huh?
01:28 IceKalt: just an ingame chat mod lol
01:28 gary00737: ok XD
01:29 IceKalt: ill start now - put 00:08:546 (6) - a bit down so it wont overlap with00:09:484 (5) -  
01:30 IceKalt: 00:10:421 (2) - here you could make ablanket with 00:09:484 (5,6,7,8) - 
01:31 IceKalt: like  this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8055097
01:31 gary00737: ^ done
01:32 IceKalt: then you can turn your jump pattern after taht a bit to the LEFT
01:32 IceKalt: ups
01:32 IceKalt: left
01:32 IceKalt: so you can stack it under the (2)
01:32 IceKalt: 00:10:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
01:32 gary00737: ^ done
01:33 IceKalt: would make the jump between 00:12:109 (4,5) -  bigger than 00:12:484 (5,6) - because (5) is the strongest sound there^^
01:35 IceKalt: then i would overlap 00:13:234 (1,4) - 
01:36 IceKalt: and fix the blankets at 00:13:421 (2,3,4) - so that the distance between these blankets are equeal
01:36 IceKalt: equal*
01:36 gary00737: done
01:38 IceKalt: maybe move00:24:109 (2,2) - so that 00:23:546 (8,2) - can blanket 
01:39 IceKalt: would move 00:27:296 (4,1,2,3) - up because (4) isnt stronger than 00:26:734 (1,2,3) - so you should nerf the DS there
01:40 IceKalt: btu this isnt a very important one
01:40 IceKalt: but i thought you didnt change the DS in thouse 1/4 yet
01:40 IceKalt: so why now?
01:41 IceKalt: would use a consistent overlap here 00:32:359 (4,1) - and 00:32:546 (5,2) - 
01:42 gary00737: I was intentional
01:42 gary00737: 00:32:359 (4,1) -
01:42 gary00737: 00:32:359 (4,5,1,2) -
01:42 IceKalt: here too - would use same DS: 00:33:109 (2,3) - 00:34:609 (2,3) - 00:37:609 (2,3) - and 00:39:109 (2,3) - 
01:43 IceKalt: ah ok 
01:43 IceKalt: didnt saw that one
01:44 IceKalt: maybe overlap 00:35:546 (5,2) - 
01:44 IceKalt: this overlap is off 00:39:390 (3,5) - 
01:45 gary00737: ^ don't understand sorry -_-
01:46 IceKalt: move (5) more under (3)
01:46 IceKalt: it isnt exatly under it
01:46 IceKalt: why making 00:40:421 (2,4,6) - not a straight line like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8055180
01:47 gary00737: ^ done
01:48 IceKalt: you used for rythm here 00:43:609 (2,3) - normally sth like 00:39:109 (2,3) - 
01:49 IceKalt: the DS between 00:45:484 (4,5) - is not equal to  00:45:858 (6,7,8) -  - maybe change that ^^
01:49 IceKalt: and you could form a better blanket for  00:46:234 (1) -  with making it more round
01:49 IceKalt: curved*
01:50 IceKalt: dont know why you NC here 01:00:109 (1) - 
01:50 IceKalt:  or here 01:01:046 (1) - 
01:51 IceKalt: would NC 01:01:234 (2) - instead
01:51 IceKalt: 01:01:234 (2) - should defently a NC
01:52 IceKalt: is used here to for example 01:02:734 (1) - 
01:53 IceKalt: maybe place 01:10:984 (5,6,7) -  like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8055227
01:53 IceKalt: it flows a bit better
01:54 IceKalt: and you avoid the overlap at01:10:234 (1,6) - 
01:55 gary00737: ^ NICE :D
01:55 IceKalt: ^^
01:56 IceKalt: maybe put 01:23:546 (6) - a bit further away so it wont overlap with 01:22:609 (3,1) - 
01:57 IceKalt: use that here 01:30:109 (2,2) - what i told you earler at 00:24:109 (2,2) - 
01:58 IceKalt: would use the opposide of what you used here - so increasing the DS between jumps over tile more
01:58 IceKalt: time*
01:59 IceKalt: idk what you say about this - you sth in mid when you did this your way ^^
02:00 gary00737: @@ ,,
02:00 IceKalt: xD
02:00 IceKalt: so that was it from me~
02:00 IceKalt: should i post it in the mapthread?
02:01 IceKalt: well i hope it helped ^^
02:01 gary00737: yes
02:01 gary00737: it was helped :D
02:01 IceKalt: well the map is super fun to play
02:01 IceKalt: so i thoght about making it a bit better^^

Reywateil

481 posts

Joined March 2017

Reywateil 2017-05-26T02:11:03+00:00

Extra Stage

IRC MOD

2017-05-26 03:59 stickAcc: мне вот это не дает покоя 00:35:537 (3,1) -
2017-05-26 04:00 stickAcc: вроде и окей, но вроде и больно
2017-05-26 04:00 m3gB3g: ща погодь досмотрю челика
2017-05-26 04:00 stickAcc: +я б на твоем месте не делал фулл оверлап
2017-05-26 04:00 stickAcc: аналогично 00:41:537 (3,1) -
2017-05-26 04:02 m3gB3g: да сойдут
2017-05-26 04:02 m3gB3g: логичные оверлапы под одни и те же звуки
2017-05-26 04:02 stickAcc: а вот еще
2017-05-26 04:03 stickAcc: 01:05:725 (1) - я б вот тут сделал что-то типа такого https://puu.sh/w1gYT/5997f0a42e.png
2017-05-26 04:04 m3gB3g: хмм
2017-05-26 04:04 m3gB3g: мб ты и прав..
2017-05-26 04:04 m3gB3g: хотя ..
2017-05-26 04:04 stickAcc: потому что там еще дальше слышно 2 тика стрима
2017-05-26 04:05 stickAcc: На вокале ты на слабый бит оставляешь конец слайдера
2017-05-26 04:05 m3gB3g: 01:06:287 (7) - да не ,звук стрима сливается с этим слайдером как раз синхронизируясь с вокалом
2017-05-26 04:05 stickAcc: А с сильного начинаешь слайдер перед тем реверсом
2017-05-26 04:06 stickAcc: Ну хз
2017-05-26 04:06 stickAcc: мое дело предложить
2017-05-26 04:06 m3gB3g: 01:06:568 - но меня теперь напрягает что тут пусто
2017-05-26 04:06 stickAcc: Ну ты еще у других поспрашивай
2017-05-26 04:06 m3gB3g: поэтому и говорю мб ты и прав
2017-05-26 04:07 stickAcc: Для меня как то больно видеть слайдеры, заканчивающиеся на белые тики
2017-05-26 04:08 m3gB3g: а я думаю такое мышление ограничивает маппера
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: А не думаешь ли, что в конце стримы как то слишком овермапнул?
2017-05-26 04:08 m3gB3g: не, они были еще жесче раньше :^)
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: Нет, я понимаю, что они могут и заканчиваться
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: но в давнном случае они как-то не очень
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: данном*
2017-05-26 04:09 m3gB3g: да нормааальна
2017-05-26 04:09 m3gB3g: :V
2017-05-26 04:09 stickAcc: :V
2017-05-26 04:18 m3gB3g: опоп
2017-05-26 04:18 m3gB3g: ща потестирую и выгружу
2017-05-26 04:18 m3gB3g: скажешь что думаешь
2017-05-26 04:21 m3gB3g: 01:06:568 (8) -
2017-05-26 04:21 m3gB3g: 01:18:568 (4) -
2017-05-26 04:21 m3gB3g: обнови и посмотри
2017-05-26 04:22 stickAcc: Мне кажется, или звук находится не на синем тике, а на красном? 01:06:568 (8) -
2017-05-26 04:23 m3gB3g: он с синего начинается
2017-05-26 04:23 m3gB3g: на красном он меняет интенсивность просто
2017-05-26 04:23 stickAcc: Ну не знаю даже что и сказать
2017-05-26 04:23 stickAcc: Я бы придерживался своего варианта, если бы он был один
2017-05-26 04:24 stickAcc: Да что не так с этим звуком...
2017-05-26 04:25 stickAcc: Такое ощущение, будто он вообще не на 1/4 тике
2017-05-26 04:25 m3gB3g: ага
2017-05-26 04:25 m3gB3g: эт сложная песня, много левых звуков :^)
2017-05-26 04:26 stickAcc: Да она вроде простая, но этот звук
2017-05-26 04:26 m3gB3g: елвис стайл надо врубить т.к он на синем
2017-05-26 04:26 stickAcc: элвис стайл = гвн
2017-05-26 04:26 m3gB3g: для полной передачи звука нужен кикслайдер на синем и второй слайдер на красном
2017-05-26 04:27 m3gB3g: но я думаю это сверх усложнит карту
2017-05-26 04:27 stickAcc: хммммм
2017-05-26 04:27 stickAcc: 1/8 предлагаешь?
2017-05-26 04:28 stickAcc: мде
2017-05-26 04:28 m3gB3g: да, эта песня по идее 1/8

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-05-26T07:59:20+00:00

stickAcc wrote:
Extra Stage
IRC MOD
2017-05-26 03:59 stickAcc: мне вот это не дает покоя 00:35:537 (3,1) -
2017-05-26 04:00 stickAcc: вроде и окей, но вроде и больно
2017-05-26 04:00 m3gB3g: ща погодь досмотрю челика
2017-05-26 04:00 stickAcc: +я б на твоем месте не делал фулл оверлап
2017-05-26 04:00 stickAcc: аналогично 00:41:537 (3,1) -
2017-05-26 04:02 m3gB3g: да сойдут
2017-05-26 04:02 m3gB3g: логичные оверлапы под одни и те же звуки
2017-05-26 04:02 stickAcc: а вот еще
2017-05-26 04:03 stickAcc: 01:05:725 (1) - я б вот тут сделал что-то типа такого https://puu.sh/w1gYT/5997f0a42e.png
2017-05-26 04:04 m3gB3g: хмм
2017-05-26 04:04 m3gB3g: мб ты и прав..
2017-05-26 04:04 m3gB3g: хотя ..
2017-05-26 04:04 stickAcc: потому что там еще дальше слышно 2 тика стрима
2017-05-26 04:05 stickAcc: На вокале ты на слабый бит оставляешь конец слайдера
2017-05-26 04:05 m3gB3g: 01:06:287 (7) - да не ,звук стрима сливается с этим слайдером как раз синхронизируясь с вокалом
2017-05-26 04:05 stickAcc: А с сильного начинаешь слайдер перед тем реверсом
2017-05-26 04:06 stickAcc: Ну хз
2017-05-26 04:06 stickAcc: мое дело предложить
2017-05-26 04:06 m3gB3g: 01:06:568 - но меня теперь напрягает что тут пусто
2017-05-26 04:06 stickAcc: Ну ты еще у других поспрашивай
2017-05-26 04:06 m3gB3g: поэтому и говорю мб ты и прав
2017-05-26 04:07 stickAcc: Для меня как то больно видеть слайдеры, заканчивающиеся на белые тики
2017-05-26 04:08 m3gB3g: а я думаю такое мышление ограничивает маппера
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: А не думаешь ли, что в конце стримы как то слишком овермапнул?
2017-05-26 04:08 m3gB3g: не, они были еще жесче раньше :^)
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: Нет, я понимаю, что они могут и заканчиваться
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: но в давнном случае они как-то не очень
2017-05-26 04:08 stickAcc: данном*
2017-05-26 04:09 m3gB3g: да нормааальна
2017-05-26 04:09 m3gB3g: :V
2017-05-26 04:09 stickAcc: :V
2017-05-26 04:18 m3gB3g: опоп
2017-05-26 04:18 m3gB3g: ща потестирую и выгружу
2017-05-26 04:18 m3gB3g: скажешь что думаешь
2017-05-26 04:21 m3gB3g: 01:06:568 (8) -
2017-05-26 04:21 m3gB3g: 01:18:568 (4) -
2017-05-26 04:21 m3gB3g: обнови и посмотри
2017-05-26 04:22 stickAcc: Мне кажется, или звук находится не на синем тике, а на красном? 01:06:568 (8) -
2017-05-26 04:23 m3gB3g: он с синего начинается
2017-05-26 04:23 m3gB3g: на красном он меняет интенсивность просто
2017-05-26 04:23 stickAcc: Ну не знаю даже что и сказать
2017-05-26 04:23 stickAcc: Я бы придерживался своего варианта, если бы он был один
2017-05-26 04:24 stickAcc: Да что не так с этим звуком...
2017-05-26 04:25 stickAcc: Такое ощущение, будто он вообще не на 1/4 тике
2017-05-26 04:25 m3gB3g: ага
2017-05-26 04:25 m3gB3g: эт сложная песня, много левых звуков :^)
2017-05-26 04:26 stickAcc: Да она вроде простая, но этот звук
2017-05-26 04:26 m3gB3g: елвис стайл надо врубить т.к он на синем
2017-05-26 04:26 stickAcc: элвис стайл = гвн
2017-05-26 04:26 m3gB3g: для полной передачи звука нужен кикслайдер на синем и второй слайдер на красном
2017-05-26 04:27 m3gB3g: но я думаю это сверх усложнит карту
2017-05-26 04:27 stickAcc: хммммм
2017-05-26 04:27 stickAcc: 1/8 предлагаешь?
2017-05-26 04:28 stickAcc: мде
2017-05-26 04:28 m3gB3g: да, эта песня по идее 1/8

спасибо за короткий но важный мод

Dinocrit

51 posts

Joined September 2014

Dinocrit 2017-05-26T13:58:05+00:00

MOD

Insane
00:18:390 (2) - Стрим начинается на пустом звуке. Убери эту ноту.
00:23:734 (1,1,1) - Звук раньше ноты
01:05:734 (3) - Слайдер нарушает флоу,из-за чего можно словить слайдербрейк
01:06:015 (4) - Думаю лучше разделить его на два слайдера,в угоду ритма
01:06:484 (1) - Звука нет,а нота есть. Лучше продлить слайдер до этого момента
01:23:734 (5) - Сделай этот слайдер волнистым(или еще каким-либо) чтобы визуально показать изменение скорости(для читабельности)

Hard
00:50:171 (5) - Конец слайдера не на тике из-за чего сбиваешься
01:00:577 (3) - Хитсаунд сбивает с ритма,сделай его тише как с остальными
01:40:140 (1) - Сделай хитсаунд тихим

На этом все.
P.S. Во многих сложностях нарушен флоу,но это личная придирка Удачи тебе.

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-05-26T14:39:34+00:00

хай!

Dinocrit wrote:
MOD
Insane
00:18:390 (2) - Стрим начинается на пустом звуке. Убери эту ноту. упс
00:23:734 (1,1,1) - Звук раньше ноты по идее там нормально, но есть вероятность что у меня стоит неверный оффсет
01:05:734 (3) - Слайдер нарушает флоу,из-за чего можно словить слайдербрейк Хорошо, исправил
01:06:015 (4) - Думаю лучше разделить его на два слайдера,в угоду ритма окей
01:06:484 (1) - Звука нет,а нота есть. Лучше продлить слайдер до этого момента там на белом тике есть звук удара
01:23:734 (5) - Сделай этот слайдер волнистым(или еще каким-либо) чтобы визуально показать изменение скорости(для читабельности) хорошо

Hard
00:50:171 (5) - Конец слайдера не на тике из-за чего сбиваешься ой
01:00:577 (3) - Хитсаунд сбивает с ритма,сделай его тише как с остальными окей
01:40:140 (1) - Сделай хитсаунд тихим окей

На этом все.
P.S. Во многих сложностях нарушен флоу,но это личная придирка Удачи тебе.

Спасибо за полезный мод! Надеюсь со временем ты возьмешься и за остальные диффы

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-05-31T10:08:14+00:00

im not good at english
i use google tarnslate

return m4m xd

Normal
Please put NC regularly
00:23:734 (1,2,3,4) - simple flow better. same 01:29:734 (1,2,3,4) -
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/2df4c2313bd255b8562 ... 307d40.png

00:22:234 (4) - NC
00:30:390 - spin end?
00:35:734 (3,2) - bad overlap imo
00:43:234 (1,1) - plz consistent.
00:48:671 - and 00:45:671 - plz consistent.
01:07:421 - no sound here. This rhythm confuses players　imo.
01:07:234 - i think you should follow here. big sound.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/ddaf0225b513ef3329d ... 22c17d.png
01:39:859 - spin end?

ensi
N cs3
Adv cs4
H cs 3.5

hm.. change to cs3.8?

01:15:100 (2,3) -
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/0c164126e88bbab72bf ... 663611.png
01:39:193 - clickable?

Hard
00:30:484 (1) - start 00:30:390 - ?
00:43:421 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:45:484 - clickable?
01:04:234 - clickable better.
00:48:484 (3,4,5) -
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/321e7a4fa50313aa530 ... 9507f8.png
01:15:109 (3) - too long reverse...
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/c0eef8e4310b08cec7d ... a5b696.png

Insane
01:23:171 (2,3,4,5) - you can make stream

Lunatic
00:25:984 (1,2,3) - too close here. no good flow. little more spacing please.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/4317fa678989d42352f ... 73bc1e.png
00:27:484 (1,2,3) - same here
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/f79c5ce7f16dfaead59 ... e3e284.png
00:29:734 (1,2) - cange stream?

space
01:00:484 (4) - start 01:00:390 - ?
vocal follow better in this part.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/42ea77ca8592eeada09 ... 57ee6e.png
01:20:734 (1,2,3,4) - you can put NC.
01:36:202 - you can follow here sound.
i think 01:36:109 (5) - is not fun...
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/f505b6bbf3741646a02 ... a9c3c1.png
01:37:610 (5,5) - NC
01:38:734 (1,2,3,4) - same reason. no good rythm imo.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/45458309341e3411a43 ... dd2fc9.png

stream part good xD

Extra
01:22:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 　...looks bad. xd
01:36:193 (1,1) - remove nc

Daoski
00:59:359 (4,5) - remove stack? you kill flow.
01:17:734 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC... its not special part imo. xd
01:39:390 (1) - NC here because players confuse double. 00:30:390 (2) - same
01:27:109 (5) - nc here

good diff!!!!!!

i think need more mod.
gl

m3gB3g

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

m3gB3g 2017-05-31T18:10:47+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
im not good at english
i use google tarnslate

return m4m xd hI~

Normal
Please put NC regularly
00:23:734 (1,2,3,4) - simple flow better. same 01:29:734 (1,2,3,4) - hmm..i will think about this
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/2df4c2313bd255b8562 ... 307d40.png

00:22:234 (4) - NC FIXED
00:30:390 - spin end? FIXED
00:35:734 (3,2) - bad overlap imo FIXED
00:43:234 (1,1) - plz consistent. FIXED
00:48:671 - and 00:45:671 - plz consistent. FIXED i guess, but in this time i dont really understand what you mean
01:07:421 - no sound here. This rhythm confuses players　imo.KEEP,maybe you are right but i decided to make Normal diff more fun and this slider have impact with vocal, if i put object like your offered then impact from vocal will disappear
01:07:234 - i think you should follow here. big sound. ^
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/ddaf0225b513ef3329d ... 22c17d.png
01:39:859 - spin end? KEEP,bcs all diffs have end at one time. So its fine

Hard
00:30:484 (1) - start 00:30:390 - ? FIXED
00:43:421 (2,3) - ctrl+g FIXED
00:45:484 - clickable? KEEP
01:04:234 - clickable better. FIXED
00:48:484 (3,4,5) - KEEP
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/321e7a4fa50313aa530 ... 9507f8.png
01:15:109 (3) - too long reverse... FIXED, GOOD POINT
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/c0eef8e4310b08cec7d ... a5b696.png

Insane
01:23:171 (2,3,4,5) - you can make stream KEEP, bcs this will be contradict to diff concept

Extra
01:22:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 　...looks bad. xd its ok xD
01:36:193 (1,1) - remove nc FIXED

i think need more mod. agree
gl thanks!

ty for mod , was usefull

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

gary00737 2017-05-31T18:27:30+00:00

Lunatic
00:25:984 (1,2,3) - too close here. no good flow. little more spacing please.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/4317fa678989d42352f ... 73bc1e.png
00:27:484 (1,2,3) - same here
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/f79c5ce7f16dfaead59 ... e3e284.png
00:29:734 (1,2) - cange stream?

all hold , i think the ds is no problem ,

and i don't like stream so , XD

thank you for modding

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2017-06-01T01:04:07+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
Daoski
00:59:359 (4,5) - remove stack? you kill flow. fixed
01:17:734 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC... its not special part imo. xd fixed
01:39:390 (1) - NC here because players confuse double. 00:30:390 (2) - same fixed
01:27:109 (5) - nc here fixed

good diff!!!!!! lol ty

Ensi

198 posts

Joined October 2015

Ensi 2017-06-01T14:59:06+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
im not good at english
i use google tarnslate
ensi
N cs3 I do not see the point in this
01:15:100 (2,3) -
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/0c164126e88bbab72bf ... 663611.png -
What for?
01:39:193 - clickable? - Yes

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2017-06-01T15:20:19+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
space
01:00:484 (4) - start 01:00:390 - ? okay
vocal follow better in this part.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/42ea77ca8592eeada09 ... 57ee6e.png
01:20:734 (1,2,3,4) - you can put NC. put NC where?
01:36:202 - you can follow here sound. shortened sliders
i think 01:36:109 (5) - is not fun...
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/f505b6bbf3741646a02 ... a9c3c1.png this would be too strange because i dont have 1/4 notes like this anywhere else
01:37:610 (5,5) - NC Nah the sounds in the song are more consistent here than before so the prolonged combos are more justified here.
01:38:734 (1,2,3,4) - same reason. no good rythm imo.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/45458309341e3411a43 ... dd2fc9.png same as before

stream part good xD <3

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tokiko

215 posts

Joined June 2013

tokiko 2017-06-01T17:43:08+00:00

[General]

я заметил, что это есть практически во всех диффах и это не круто
нужно добавить точку в сурсе и удалить из тегов (Touhou IaMP) и оставить только одно слово Project
сделай комбоколорам одинаковую яркость
тебе нужен изик с ср меньше 1*

[Daoski's memed Shrine]

you can try reduce stack leniency a little and set ar to something like 9.2-9.3

00:09:480 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe stack it with 00:10:417 (2) - ?
00:15:386 (4,5,6) - reduce spacing here because it looks really close to slider
01:17:355 (4,6,7) - fix stack

also i personally don't like some stream jumps and sv in kiai seems a bit low

[Extra Stage]

бг страшный

00:07:230 (1) - можешь удалить красный шейп отсюда, он не так важен
00:07:980 (4,5,6,7) - этот квадрат кажется не таким ровным, но может это у меня с глазомером проблемы
00:14:355 (1,5) - смотри, здесь у тебя на этом звуке ноты, а дальше слайдеры. может лучше выбрать что-то одно?
00:19:980 (5) - этот слайдер мне не нравится. попробуй вместо кучи стрелок сделать вот так. к следующему это тоже относится
00:24:855 (2) - marisa.wav очень страшно звучит на этом слайдере, удали одну
00:25:980 (1,2,3) - вспоминая предложение выше. можешь там вот так сделать и карта сразу станет более логичной в плане ритма
00:30:011 (4,1) - пофикси стак
00:37:230 (1) - выделить бы это как-нибудь, а то предыдущие джампы получают больше спейсинга, чем какой-то даунбит
00:55:230 (1,2,1,2) - похоже на кривой хайтай, но не важно
01:06:198 (6,7) - неприятно выглядит. сделай тут одинаковый спейсинг, что ли
01:14:542 (2) - не хитсаунд, а скример какой-то. особенно если на паузу в этот момент поставить
01:15:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - этот стрим выглядит невыспавшимся
01:25:980 (5) - ну ты понял
01:29:730 (1,1,1,2) - забыл поставить marisa.wav, как в начале

мне показалось, что ты любишь спамить своим хлопком с Марисой в некоторых местах, доведи использование этого хитсаунда до логического конца что ли. а ещё есть много неаккуратных оверлапов, но мне лень о таком писать

[-Space-'s Another]

your bg looks to serious for such a cheer song imo

00:10:042 (2) - replace it with the kickslider to give better emphasize to 00:10:230 (1) - ?
00:12:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - inconsistent with 00:09:480 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - but who cares about it
00:30:292 (6,1) - stack it? spacing here looks like 1/2 and may confuse a lot of players for the first time
00:55:980 (5,8) - stack, please
01:39:386 - place a note here, start spinner at the white tick and end it 01:40:230 - here

[gary00737's Lunatic]

00:56:917 (2) - something like this would be better

some of your overlaps looks really scary to me but maybe it's your style so i didn't point it out

[Insane]

00:08:167 (2,3) - если это бланкет, то он довольно страшный. алсо не советую делать бланкеты с 1/4 слайдерами, как 00:08:730 (4,1) - тут. это очень плохо выглядит
00:10:417 (2,3) - либо стакни это, либо отодвинь двоечку куда-то в сторону, чтобы не было этого оверлапа
00:12:667 (5) - разогни его немного, а то страдающе выглядит
00:30:386 (1) - где-то видел дискуссию о том, что такое неранкабельно в наше время + мне кажется, что просто очень маленького св тут будет достаточно
00:43:792 (3,6) - фикс бланкет, все дела. ненавижу про это писать, поэтому просто перепроверь все бланкеты
01:23:355 (3,5) - симметрия конечно класс, но оверлап некрасивый
01:39:386 (1) - крышечка

кстати, почему ты используешь мариса.вав только в своей экстре?

[Hard]

00:07:230 (1,2) - подвинь их дальше от 00:08:355 (3) -
00:09:292 (3,2) - стакнешь? и ещё во всех таких же моментах дальше страшные оверлапы, можешь это пофиксить, наверное. хотя эти оверлапы выглядят запланированными, поэтому можешь игнорить это предложение
00:30:386 (1) - уже писал о таком. энивей можешь оставить
00:31:980 (3,4) - не делай такие бланкеты, пожалуйста. лучше просто оставляй эти слайдеры прямыми
00:36:667 (3) - поставь его ровно напротив 00:36:292 (2) -
01:39:386 (1) - закончи слайдер на белом тике

[_Ensi_'s Advanced]

00:08:730 (1,2,3,4) - 00:18:480 (2,3,1) - and etc - сделай спейсинг одинаковым, а ещё лучше перепроверь всю диффу насчёт таких моментов
01:06:480 (9) - поставь нк что ли, а то нужно же как-то выделять подобное
01:26:730 (1,2) - такие вещи кажутся довольно неаккуратными
01:39:386 (2) - закончи его на белом тике

[Normal]

00:31:230 (1,3) - тут можно стак пофиксить, наверное
00:49:230 (1,2) - сделать бы тут как-то так
00:55:230 - поставь ноту, сдвинь спиннер на синий тик
01:35:730 (1) - этот спиннер убьёт любого новичка, ну да ладно. закончи его на белом тике

Ensi

198 posts

Joined October 2015

Ensi 2017-06-01T18:13:35+00:00

tokiko wrote:
[_Ensi_'s Advanced]
00:08:730 (1,2,3,4) - 00:18:480 (2,3,1) - and etc - сделай спейсинг одинаковым, а ещё лучше перепроверь всю диффу насчёт таких моментов - Поправил
01:06:480 (9) - поставь нк что ли, а то нужно же как-то выделять подобное - Угу
01:26:730 (1,2) - такие вещи кажутся довольно неаккуратными - Нормальные вещи
01:39:386 (2) - закончи его на белом тике - Весь мапсет заканчивается на этом.

ПАсиб за мод.

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Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2017-06-01T19:12:44+00:00

tokiko wrote:

[-Space-'s Another]

your bg looks to serious for such a cheer song imo i dont do cheerful
00:10:042 (2) - replace it with the kickslider to give better emphasize to 00:10:230 (1) - ? ehh the sound comes more at the beginning and its only a continuation at the end so the jump should be enough emphasis.
00:12:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - inconsistent with 00:09:480 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - but who cares about it here is more focused on the guitar riff
00:30:292 (6,1) - stack it? spacing here looks like 1/2 and may confuse a lot of players for the first time okay stacked
00:55:980 (5,8) - stack, please okay done again
01:39:386 - place a note here, start spinner at the white tick and end it 01:40:230 - here did the first part but not the second bcs spinner would be too short imo

Спасибо за мод! :^)

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m3gB3g

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m3gB3g 2017-06-01T22:06:35+00:00

tokiko wrote:
[General]
я заметил, что это есть практически во всех диффах и это не круто странно, у меня такие проблемы не отображаются
нужно добавить точку в сурсе и удалить из тегов (Touhou IaMP) и оставить только одно слово Project окей
сделай комбоколорам одинаковую яркость так они же слегка тускловаты..думаю и так сойдёт
тебе нужен изик с ср меньше 1* это не обязательно
[Extra Stage]

бг страшный как и мои диффы(мб изменю бг)
00:07:230 (1) - можешь удалить красный шейп отсюда, он не так важен FIXED
00:07:980 (4,5,6,7) - этот квадрат кажется не таким ровным, но может это у меня с глазомером проблемы хз, построен по дсу..
00:14:355 (1,5) - смотри, здесь у тебя на этом звуке ноты, а дальше слайдеры. может лучше выбрать что-то одно? хмм..эта логика нарушит мои запланированные паттерны которые играются хорошо и передают характер музыки на сносном уровне..так что я это оставлю
00:19:980 (5) - этот слайдер мне не нравится. попробуй вместо кучи стрелок сделать вот так. к следующему это тоже относится хорошо, скорее всего послушаюсь тебя . Позависаю над этим в редакторе чуть позже.
00:24:855 (2) - marisa.wav очень страшно звучит на этом слайдере, удали одну а по-моему неплохо так выделяет последнюю чуть расстянутую "сойе"
00:25:980 (1,2,3) - вспоминая предложение выше. можешь там вот так сделать и карта сразу станет более логичной в плане ритма да, отличный аргумент. Скорее всего буду ремапать часть с долгим реверсом
00:30:011 (4,1) - пофикси стак FIXED
00:37:230 (1) - выделить бы это как-нибудь, а то предыдущие джампы получают больше спейсинга, чем какой-то даунбит FIXED, постараюсь потом что нибудь придумать..
00:55:230 (1,2,1,2) - похоже на кривой хайтай, но не важно :^)
01:06:198 (6,7) - неприятно выглядит. сделай тут одинаковый спейсинг, что ли hmm maybe maybe but later
01:14:542 (2) - не хитсаунд, а скример какой-то. особенно если на паузу в этот момент поставить ZA WARUDO
01:15:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - этот стрим выглядит невыспавшимся я не панимать к чему ты
01:25:980 (5) - ну ты понял ага
01:29:730 (1,1,1,2) - забыл поставить marisa.wav, как в начале этот хс стоит когда в видео появляются Мариса/Алиса. В этом моменте их нет

мне показалось, что ты любишь спамить своим хлопком с Марисой в некоторых местах, доведи использование этого хитсаунда до логического конца что ли. а ещё есть много неаккуратных оверлапов, но мне лень о таком писать ок, повышу внимание на оверлапы
[Insane]
00:08:167 (2,3) - если это бланкет, то он довольно страшный. алсо не советую делать бланкеты с 1/4 слайдерами, как 00:08:730 (4,1) - тут. это очень плохо выглядит скорее всего ты прав, но этот паттерн играбелен и уже расставлен на этой части везде. Если что ремапну позже учитывая это..
00:10:417 (2,3) - либо стакни это, либо отодвинь двоечку куда-то в сторону, чтобы не было этого оверлапа FIXED
00:12:667 (5) - разогни его немного, а то страдающе выглядит FIXED
00:30:386 (1) - где-то видел дискуссию о том, что такое неранкабельно в наше время + мне кажется, что просто очень маленького св тут будет достаточно это было у новой карты вал0108, там скорее докапывались из за того что слайдер сначала медленный из за спама красных якорей а затем он резко ускоряется т.к вал0108 сделал не весь слайдер спамом красных якорей
00:43:792 (3,6) - фикс бланкет, все дела. ненавижу про это писать, поэтому просто перепроверь все бланкеты FIXED,просто до этого не замечал подобные кривые бланкеты..впредь буду внимательнее.
01:23:355 (3,5) - симметрия конечно класс, но оверлап некрасивый FIXED
01:39:386 (1) - крышечка я не панимать

кстати, почему ты используешь мариса.вав только в своей экстре? поставлю во всех своих диффах, только позже
[Hard]
00:07:230 (1,2) - подвинь их дальше от 00:08:355 (3) - FIXED
00:09:292 (3,2) - стакнешь? и ещё во всех таких же моментах дальше страшные оверлапы, можешь это пофиксить, наверное. хотя эти оверлапы выглядят запланированными, поэтому можешь игнорить это предложение да, если возьмусь фиксить один оверлап, то придется фиксить все в этом парте и в итоге изменить концепцию..
00:30:386 (1) - уже писал о таком. энивей можешь оставить к
00:31:980 (3,4) - не делай такие бланкеты, пожалуйста. лучше просто оставляй эти слайдеры прямыми FIXED
00:36:667 (3) - поставь его ровно напротив 00:36:292 (2) - FIXED
01:39:386 (1) - закончи слайдер на белом тике
конец карты на синих тиках в нашем мапсете

[Normal]
00:31:230 (1,3) - тут можно стак пофиксить, наверное FIXED
00:49:230 (1,2) - сделать бы тут как-то так FIXED, я как то по нубски попробовал исправить этот момент
00:55:230 - поставь ноту, сдвинь спиннер на синий тик FIXED
01:35:730 (1) - этот спиннер убьёт любого новичка, ну да ладно. закончи его на белом тике типа они не смогут быстро крутить ? там всегда конец а синем тике по всему мапсету. Поэтому без изменений

Спасибо за мод! ~ Заставит меня поднапрячься в некоторых местах и ремапать некоторые части в карте , а так же быть внимательнее к оверлапам

gary00737

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gary00737 2017-06-02T15:37:42+00:00

[gary00737's Lunatic]

00:56:917 (2) - something like this would be better

some of your overlaps looks really scary to me but maybe it's your style so i didn't point it out

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done

thank you

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