This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, January 20, 2017 at 10:57:22 AM

Artist: Komichi Aya (CV:Taneda Risa)
Title: Koiiro Iris (nenpulse bootleg remix)
Source: ハロー！！きんいろモザイク
Tags: hello!! kin-iro mosaic character song 小路綾 shoji aya
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6646kb
Play Time: 05:13
Difficulties Available:

1. Extra (5.59 stars, 1358 notes)

Download: Komichi Aya (CV:Taneda Risa) - Koiiro Iris (nenpulse bootleg remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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non-remix ver. by Rizia

rank please

i will try!!!

Move the offset marker to the next blue tick, all of a sudden better acc (oh yeah and also ctrl+a all the notes )))
00:42:259 (1,2,3) - Emphasis on these notes could be better
02:25:009 (1,2,3) - ^
04:50:342 (1,2,3) - ^

Other than that the map's a bit too hard for me to judge properly sorry

MyNemis wrote:

Move the offset marker to the next blue tick, all of a sudden better acc (oh yeah and also ctrl+a all the notes )))
00:42:259 (1,2,3) - Emphasis on these notes could be better NC and faster SV for emphasis i think is enough
02:25:009 (1,2,3) - ^ above
04:50:342 (1,2,3) - ^ above

Other than that the map's a bit too hard for me to judge properly sorry

thank you!

Fun map!

Here are some things that I noticed,

03:15:759 (2) - Missing Hitclap
03:30:093 (2) - ^
04:10:426 (2) - ^

Good luck with rank

Ignite wrote:

Fun map!

Here are some things that I noticed,

03:15:759 (2) - Missing Hitclap
03:30:093 (2) - ^
04:10:426 (2) - ^

Good luck with rank

fixed, thank you!

nice

Hello!

M4M :3

[ General]

[ Extra]

Pretty fun map if I say so myself
Here are some things I've noticed
That's all I can really find. Good luck!

RagingKirby77 wrote:

Hello!

M4M :3

[ General]

1. The audio's bitrate is too high so you're gonna need to change that if want to get your map ranked . Here, I compressed the audio for you. fixed

[ Extra]

Pretty fun map if I say so myself
Here are some things I've noticed

1. 00:10:093 (1) - This slider should end on the red tick if i'm not mistaken fixed thats a slipup w h o o p s
2. 00:16:759 (2,3) - Maybe consider making the overlap of the sliders a bit smaller since the overlap of 00:14:093 (2,3) - is smaller compared to that i like how they overlap
3. 00:20:843 (1) - I think that the slider should end on the white tick and add a circle to the red tick i prefer having the circle on the tsu
4. 00:23:093 (1) - Are you sure you want to make this slider go slower instead of faster considering the sound being play on that part? fixed it does look better
5. 00:26:926 (3,4) - Move these so it won't overlap? i like how they look overlapped :/
6. 01:26:093 (1) - Maybe CTRL + G so it matches 01:26:759 (4) - fixed
7. 01:42:593 (1,2,3) - Could you make these jumps a bit more wider? fixed
8. 01:42:593 (1,2,3) - I think this would look better if you straightened it up i like how they look overlapped
9. 03:24:759 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps could also be made wider i prefer how the horizontal flow goes, makes them feel wider
10. 04:07:926 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
11. 04:35:093 (4) - Also move this so it won"t overlap? i like how they look overlapped

That's all I can really find. Good luck!

thank you!

Hi M4M i take the freedom to mdo it first if its ok..


I love the map and song good luck!

chucentry wrote:

Hi M4M i take the freedom to mdo it first if its ok..

Extra

00:02:134 (1) - finish

00:04:800 (1) - whistle

00:07:467 (1) - whistle

00:10:134 (1,2) - whistle

00:32:884 (2) - remvoe this. and add note here 00:33:050 - make tripple on 00:32:967 (3) - place

00:34:717 - add note here and remove 00:34:884 (4) -

00:35:300 - i think the slider 1/1 start here. Mean 00:35:467 (1) - bcuz strong sound are there

00:52:134 (3) - try to tail of it stack with 00:50:800 (5) -

01:16:634 (8) - maybe Ctrl + H in the same place ?

01:34:967 (3) - more distance with 01:34:634 (2) - http://puu.sh/tieqG/b448083fbc.jpg

01:37:634 (3) - move this to make a stack with 01:36:300 (6) -. I mean the tail of the slider with the head of 01:36:300 (6) -

03:41:634 (3) - what do you think about it? http://puu.sh/tieUF/60aa8fca6a.jpg

03:42:800 (5) - ctrl + G ??

04:00:300 (3) - ctrl + G

04:15:800 (2) - Ctrl + H in the same place

I love the map and song good luck!

late response, sorry, applied all!

Hello, returning m4m.
sorry for my shitty English ;-;

[General]

* wrong bg pls fix thx

* Adding custom combo color would be nice

* use this http://puu.sh/tsDMo/bc35216328.jpg as bg? rearranged to 1366*768

[Extra]

* maybe custom diff name?

* 00:22:967 - since this is a strong sound, how about ending spinner earlier ( 00:22:134 - or 00:22:800 - ) and putting a note here?
maybe sth like this? http://puu.sh/tsBmh/627578d9bc.jpg

* 00:25:800 (1) - 00:31:134 (1) - unnecessary NC

* 00:41:300 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
imo this kind of stream should change their flow/spacing at strong & noticable beat so that it's easily guessable when the note is placed at.
but you're doing it at 00:41:634 (1) - weak beat but keeping them at strong beats 00:41:466 (6) - 00:41:800 (3) -
(my suggestion) first, NC 00:41:466 (6) - 00:41:800 (3) - these then remove NC at 00:41:634 (1) -
then change the stream's direction/spacing at strong beats 00:41:467 - 00:41:800 - 00:42:134 -
maybe sth like this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIQYRNWDlew&feature=youtu.be
the main point is to curve at 00:41:467 - and 00:41:800 -

* 02:23:967 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 04:49:300 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same as above

* 00:42:134 (7) - maybe NC?

* 01:04:300 (3) - this is placed on a weak beat but having large spacing compared to 01:04:467 (4) - , while 01:04:467 (4) - is placed on a strong beat but having small spacing, therefore feels a bit awkward to play.
also 01:03:967 (2) - because of this slider, the strong beat at 01:04:134 - here is not clickable.
so how about having a circle 01:03:967 - here and slider 01:04:134 - here to make the strong beat clickable 01:04:134 -
http://puu.sh/tsCl7/27cddae8b9.jpg
and stacking the circle on the slider?
http://puu.sh/tsCnA/d7f581c6ae.jpg

* 01:09:300 (1,1) - unnecessary NC imo

* 01:13:300 (1,1) - 02:51:967 (1,1) - 02:55:967 (1,1) - ^

* 01:21:967 (1) - since there are 3 strong beats at 01:21:967 - 01:22:050 - 01:22:134 - , this 1/8 buzz slider doesn't represent this sound very well imo.
so how about this http://puu.sh/tsCCM/f14405bd1d.jpg
or this? http://puu.sh/tsCEf/aa8d43feff.jpg
or maybe even triple should work well also http://puu.sh/tsCFB/6c84049f1d.jpg

* 01:37:300 (2) - 01:37:634 (3) - ctrl+g or ctrl+j? since you have opposite going flow slider at 01:34:634 (2,3) -
maybe sth like this http://puu.sh/tsCOM/5a4ce89806.jpg

* 01:44:467 (1,1,1,1,1) - why nc spam here? imo they're unnecessary since there is no difference of rhythm with other streams.

* 03:27:134 (1,1,1,1,1) - 04:09:883 (1,1,1,1) - ^

* 02:13:800 (1) - remove NC?

* 04:33:800 (1) - 04:39:134 (1) - ^

* 03:16:634 (7) - just my suggestion, how about ctrl+h,g then moving like this? http://puu.sh/tsDdB/38c37e771f.jpg
cuz 03:16:467 (6,7,1) - this flow is kinda uncomfortable to hit cuz of its wide angle especially right after back & forth flow 03:16:300 (5,6,7) - .

* 03:55:467 (2,3,1) - could be confusing, imo moving 03:54:134 (1,2,3) - or 03:56:467 (1) - would be better.
http://puu.sh/tsDrv/d13495d441.jpg

* 04:35:134 (4) - imo making this into 2 circles would fit better with the melody.


That's all. sorry for very subjective mods, I hope this could help you much.
Very nice map, Good luck!

SLM wrote:

Hello, returning m4m.
sorry for my shitty English ;-;

[General]

* wrong bg pls fix thx

* Adding custom combo color would be nice

* use this http://puu.sh/tsDMo/bc35216328.jpg as bg? rearranged to 1366*768

[Extra]

* maybe custom diff name?

* 00:22:967 - since this is a strong sound, how about ending spinner earlier ( 00:22:134 - or 00:22:800 - ) and putting a note here?
maybe sth like this? http://puu.sh/tsBmh/627578d9bc.jpg

* 00:25:800 (1) - 00:31:134 (1) - unnecessary NC

* 00:41:300 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
imo this kind of stream should change their flow/spacing at strong & noticable beat so that it's easily guessable when the note is placed at.
but you're doing it at 00:41:634 (1) - weak beat but keeping them at strong beats 00:41:466 (6) - 00:41:800 (3) -
(my suggestion) first, NC 00:41:466 (6) - 00:41:800 (3) - these then remove NC at 00:41:634 (1) -
then change the stream's direction/spacing at strong beats 00:41:467 - 00:41:800 - 00:42:134 -
maybe sth like this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIQYRNWDlew&feature=youtu.be
the main point is to curve at 00:41:467 - and 00:41:800 -

* 02:23:967 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 04:49:300 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same as above

* 00:42:134 (7) - maybe NC?

* 01:04:300 (3) - this is placed on a weak beat but having large spacing compared to 01:04:467 (4) - , while 01:04:467 (4) - is placed on a strong beat but having small spacing, therefore feels a bit awkward to play.
also 01:03:967 (2) - because of this slider, the strong beat at 01:04:134 - here is not clickable.
so how about having a circle 01:03:967 - here and slider 01:04:134 - here to make the strong beat clickable 01:04:134 -
http://puu.sh/tsCl7/27cddae8b9.jpg
and stacking the circle on the slider?
http://puu.sh/tsCnA/d7f581c6ae.jpg

* 01:09:300 (1,1) - unnecessary NC imo

* 01:13:300 (1,1) - 02:51:967 (1,1) - 02:55:967 (1,1) - ^

* 01:21:967 (1) - since there are 3 strong beats at 01:21:967 - 01:22:050 - 01:22:134 - , this 1/8 buzz slider doesn't represent this sound very well imo.
so how about this http://puu.sh/tsCCM/f14405bd1d.jpg
or this? http://puu.sh/tsCEf/aa8d43feff.jpg
or maybe even triple should work well also http://puu.sh/tsCFB/6c84049f1d.jpg

* 01:37:300 (2) - 01:37:634 (3) - ctrl+g or ctrl+j? since you have opposite going flow slider at 01:34:634 (2,3) -
maybe sth like this http://puu.sh/tsCOM/5a4ce89806.jpg

* 01:44:467 (1,1,1,1,1) - why nc spam here? imo they're unnecessary since there is no difference of rhythm with other streams.

* 03:27:134 (1,1,1,1,1) - 04:09:883 (1,1,1,1) - ^

* 02:13:800 (1) - remove NC?

* 04:33:800 (1) - 04:39:134 (1) - ^

* 03:16:634 (7) - just my suggestion, how about ctrl+h,g then moving like this? http://puu.sh/tsDdB/38c37e771f.jpg
cuz 03:16:467 (6,7,1) - this flow is kinda uncomfortable to hit cuz of its wide angle especially right after back & forth flow 03:16:300 (5,6,7) - .

* 03:55:467 (2,3,1) - could be confusing, imo moving 03:54:134 (1,2,3) - or 03:56:467 (1) - would be better.
http://puu.sh/tsDrv/d13495d441.jpg

* 04:35:134 (4) - imo making this into 2 circles would fit better with the melody.


That's all. sorry for very subjective mods, I hope this could help you much.
Very nice map, Good luck!

thank you~!

I'm not sure if it's because you changes mp3s or something else, but the offset seems to be off by about +15ms ish

yeah i changed mp3's a while back, i can edit the post to say to redl

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