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02:16:254 (2,3) - incorret blancket
00:16:500 (2,3,4) - m-maybe it'd better look like this......
00:37:156 (5,1) - blanket owo (im about this)
01:50:434 (1,2,3) - mb make this triangle more symmetric
02:14:041 (1,2) - imperfect blanket
02:16:254 (2,3,4) - ^ owo
03:02:730 (6,7,1) - not perfectly sure but ^ T_T
03:44:533 (1,2) - the second slider looks straight, unlike the first
04:31:746 (1,2) - ^
00:16:500 (2,3,4) - m-maybe it'd better look like this......
00:37:156 (5,1) - blanket owo (im about this)
01:50:434 (1,2,3) - mb make this triangle more symmetric
02:14:041 (1,2) - imperfect blanket
02:16:254 (2,3,4) - ^ owo
03:02:730 (6,7,1) - not perfectly sure but ^ T_T
03:44:533 (1,2) - the second slider looks straight, unlike the first
04:31:746 (1,2) - ^
Hey! M4m as we agreed.
Oh, you love stars, don't you? ☆~
[Snowy]
Repetitive, but very nice map. I like it~
Oh, you love stars, don't you? ☆~
General
Increase od for more pp? 
And maybe increase ar to 8.2?
Hitsounds are great ~
And maybe increase ar to 8.2?
Hitsounds are great ~
[Snowy]
00:16:500 (2) - and 00:17:484 (4) - make a blanket here?
00:20:434 (2) - ctrl+g and move it a little bit left?
00:21:664 (1,2) - I'm not a big fan of sliders that start on red tick, soI suggest you to add note here - 00:21:664 and start your first slider from here - 00:21:910 and second from here - 00:22:402. Also remove note from here - 00:22:648.
00:29:533 (1,2,3) - same here ^
00:41:336 (1) - ^
00:48:221 (2) - ^
00:49:205 (1,2) - ^
00:59:287 (1,2) - make blanket here?
01:13:795 (3) - and 01:15:025 (1) - blanket?
01:15:025 (1) - and 01:16:008 (3) - ^
01:16:500 (4,1) - too big spacing here imo.
01:22:402 (6) - move it to X:341 Y:151?
01:23:877 (5) - move it to X:338 Y:129, it will looks good. I recommend to move this sliders 01:23:877 (5,6) - together.
01:28:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this pattern a bit right? Near X:340
01:29:287 (2) - and 01:29:779 (4) - blanket?
01:32:484 (4) - move it to X:430 Y:277.
01:44:287 (8,1) - too big spacing again as for me.
02:08:631 (2) - make this slider more curve to point direction to next circle.
02:28:795 (3,4,1) - uncomfortable movements here.
02:44:287 (3) - and 02:45:025 (6) - blanket?
02:50:189 (4) - move it to X:163 Y:295 for the equal spacing between 02:49:943 (3,4) - and 02:49:451 (1,2) -
03:09:123 (1) - and 03:10:107 (3) - I think you really need blanket here o.o
03:12:566 (4,1) - ^
03:40:107 (5,6,1) - strange flow here, I would like to move this slder 03:40:598 (1) - to X:358 Y:215
03:43:672 (3) - whistle here sounds pretty strange, I would like to remove it from here.
04:32:730 (3) - ^
04:09:123 (3,4,5,6) - a little bit uncomfortable movements here.
04:39:123 (6,1) - you can improve this blanket ~_~
04:45:271 (6) - move this note to X:312 Y:63
00:20:434 (2) - ctrl+g and move it a little bit left?
00:21:664 (1,2) - I'm not a big fan of sliders that start on red tick, soI suggest you to add note here - 00:21:664 and start your first slider from here - 00:21:910 and second from here - 00:22:402. Also remove note from here - 00:22:648.
00:29:533 (1,2,3) - same here ^
00:41:336 (1) - ^
00:48:221 (2) - ^
00:49:205 (1,2) - ^
00:59:287 (1,2) - make blanket here?
01:13:795 (3) - and 01:15:025 (1) - blanket?
01:15:025 (1) - and 01:16:008 (3) - ^
01:16:500 (4,1) - too big spacing here imo.
01:22:402 (6) - move it to X:341 Y:151?
01:23:877 (5) - move it to X:338 Y:129, it will looks good. I recommend to move this sliders 01:23:877 (5,6) - together.
01:28:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this pattern a bit right? Near X:340
01:29:287 (2) - and 01:29:779 (4) - blanket?
01:32:484 (4) - move it to X:430 Y:277.
01:44:287 (8,1) - too big spacing again as for me.
02:08:631 (2) - make this slider more curve to point direction to next circle.
02:28:795 (3,4,1) - uncomfortable movements here.
02:44:287 (3) - and 02:45:025 (6) - blanket?
02:50:189 (4) - move it to X:163 Y:295 for the equal spacing between 02:49:943 (3,4) - and 02:49:451 (1,2) -
03:09:123 (1) - and 03:10:107 (3) - I think you really need blanket here o.o
03:12:566 (4,1) - ^
03:40:107 (5,6,1) - strange flow here, I would like to move this slder 03:40:598 (1) - to X:358 Y:215
03:43:672 (3) - whistle here sounds pretty strange, I would like to remove it from here.
04:32:730 (3) - ^
04:09:123 (3,4,5,6) - a little bit uncomfortable movements here.
04:39:123 (6,1) - you can improve this blanket ~_~
04:45:271 (6) - move this note to X:312 Y:63
Repetitive, but very nice map. I like it~
beautiful song <3
hai~
[General]
[General]
- Your BG size 1365x768.
- Tags : Will Tamai Kenji 玉井健二 Asyu Tomoegawa Takahiro 巴川貴裕
- 01:37:771 - map vocal here.
- 01:01:377 (1) - why do you use here spinner, bcz 02:19:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - here you map note.
- 02:42:566 (4,1) - map it as 01:23:877 (5,6) - here.
- 02:56:090 (4) - ^
- 03:46:254 (1) - add finish? sounds cool .
- 04:01:746 (3) - lengthen it to 04:02:115 - .
- 04:06:172 (1,2) - 01:06:664 (6,7,1) - why are they different?
- 04:54:369 (5) - 04:55:844 (2) - 04:56:336 (3) - 04:56:582 (4) - add finish?
Topic Starter
fuck i lost my reply....
i fixed 90% of the stuff and btw remapped some parts, hope its better now
thanks you all!!
i fixed 90% of the stuff and btw remapped some parts, hope its better now
thanks you all!!
uhmm... ur using the normal-hitnormal sound for the soft hitclap so..
02:23:877 - on 1st and 3rd white tick u seem to use normal hitnormal as kick and 2 and 4 u use clap for snare.
but ur clap sounds exactly like the hitnormal so it just sounds like ur spamming claps LOL, either get a different sounding clap or a different sounding normal-hitnormal
02:23:877 - on 1st and 3rd white tick u seem to use normal hitnormal as kick and 2 and 4 u use clap for snare.
but ur clap sounds exactly like the hitnormal so it just sounds like ur spamming claps LOL, either get a different sounding clap or a different sounding normal-hitnormal
Topic Starter
okay, changed clap to smth else xdKibbleru wrote:
uhmm... ur using the normal-hitnormal sound for the soft hitclap so..
02:23:877 - on 1st and 3rd white tick u seem to use normal hitnormal as kick and 2 and 4 u use clap for snare.
but ur clap sounds exactly like the hitnormal so it just sounds like ur spamming claps LOL, either get a different sounding clap or a different sounding normal-hitnormal
thanks for check!!
pretty sure its 'Yasuda Rei' not 'Rei Yasuda'
try using this for ur normal-hitnormal https://kibbleru.s-ul.eu/QOyCLiCJ
try using this for ur normal-hitnormal https://kibbleru.s-ul.eu/QOyCLiCJ
From my M4M queue: my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/582957
[General]
Your mapset contains 2 mp3 files, which is unrankable.
You may consider adding more combo colors.
Why you choose this picture as your BG?
HP6. No need to set it such low.
00:16:500 (2,3,4) - For this pattern, a larger spacing should be placed between 3 and 4 instead of 2 and 3 for the loud drum on 4.
00:31:008 (4,5,6) - I think this jump should be smaller. At least it should be smaller than 00:31:500 (6,1) - .
00:32:238 (2,3) - This antijump may not be a nice idea since you placed a consistent spacing for those 1/2 drumbeats.
01:11:090 (1,2) - This is anti-flowed ;w;
01:39:861 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This really needs to be nerf'ed (Too large jumps)
01:44:287 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same
02:18:959 (3,4,5,6) - 01:00:271 (3) - Should be kept with consistency.
02:50:680 (5,1) - Blanket should be here
03:08:631 (7,8,1) - A larger spacing should be between 8 and 1 than 7 and 8.
03:13:057 (1,2) - This flow is kinda weird.
03:16:992 (1,2) - Spacing here is too large.
04:00:271 (1) - Not recommend to follow the 1/6. Because it is vague, namely not clear enough. My suggestion is to follow the 1/3 instead.
05:14:533 (1,2) - Not a good idea to follow the vocals here. The melody has already faded out here.
I recommend to nerf some jumps in non-Kiai time.
Call me back when you want.
[General]
Your mapset contains 2 mp3 files, which is unrankable.
You may consider adding more combo colors.
Why you choose this picture as your BG?
HP6. No need to set it such low.
00:16:500 (2,3,4) - For this pattern, a larger spacing should be placed between 3 and 4 instead of 2 and 3 for the loud drum on 4.
00:31:008 (4,5,6) - I think this jump should be smaller. At least it should be smaller than 00:31:500 (6,1) - .
00:32:238 (2,3) - This antijump may not be a nice idea since you placed a consistent spacing for those 1/2 drumbeats.
01:11:090 (1,2) - This is anti-flowed ;w;
01:39:861 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This really needs to be nerf'ed (Too large jumps)
01:44:287 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same
02:18:959 (3,4,5,6) - 01:00:271 (3) - Should be kept with consistency.
02:50:680 (5,1) - Blanket should be here
03:08:631 (7,8,1) - A larger spacing should be between 8 and 1 than 7 and 8.
03:13:057 (1,2) - This flow is kinda weird.
03:16:992 (1,2) - Spacing here is too large.
04:00:271 (1) - Not recommend to follow the 1/6. Because it is vague, namely not clear enough. My suggestion is to follow the 1/3 instead.
05:14:533 (1,2) - Not a good idea to follow the vocals here. The melody has already faded out here.
I recommend to nerf some jumps in non-Kiai time.
Call me back when you want.
Topic Starter
Thanks you Kibb!
changed the artist, and added that hitsound as you told me
also did some improvements, changed some slider shapes and stuff like that.. hope its better now!
also fixed tags since i (idk why) put them in the source field orz
changed the artist, and added that hitsound as you told me
thanks!!Regraz wrote:
From my M4M queue: my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/582957
[General]
Your mapset contains 2 mp3 files, which is unrankable. oops, fixed xP
You may consider adding more combo colors. added!
Why you choose this picture as your BG? i think i fits very cool with the atmosphere of the song, so why not
HP6. No need to set it such low.
00:16:500 (2,3,4) - For this pattern, a larger spacing should be placed between 3 and 4 instead of 2 and 3 for the loud drum on 4. fixed
00:31:008 (4,5,6) - I think this jump should be smaller. At least it should be smaller than 00:31:500 (6,1) - . fixed
00:32:238 (2,3) - This antijump may not be a nice idea since you placed a consistent spacing for those 1/2 drumbeats. i actually like how it looks ;w; want to keep it if its not a big deal
01:11:090 (1,2) - This is anti-flowed ;w; fixed
01:39:861 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This really needs to be nerf'ed (Too large jumps) fixed
01:44:287 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same fixed
02:18:959 (3,4,5,6) - 01:00:271 (3) - Should be kept with consistency. fixed
02:50:680 (5,1) - Blanket should be here fixed
03:08:631 (7,8,1) - A larger spacing should be between 8 and 1 than 7 and 8. fixed
03:13:057 (1,2) - This flow is kinda weird.i think its okay o.o
03:16:992 (1,2) - Spacing here is too large. fixed
04:00:271 (1) - Not recommend to follow the 1/6. Because it is vague, namely not clear enough. My suggestion is to follow the 1/3 instead. fixed
05:14:533 (1,2) - Not a good idea to follow the vocals here. The melody has already faded out here. deleted
I recommend to nerf some jumps in non-Kiai time.
Call me back when you want.
also did some improvements, changed some slider shapes and stuff like that.. hope its better now!
also fixed tags since i (idk why) put them in the source field orz
Hmm so your song has no relation with the character in the BG? The character of the BG is from an anime called K. So you may consider changing one.
Another question is, do you get your metadata confirmed? If so, please provide eligible sources.
My concern still lies in the 1/2 jumps here and there in this map, they are too large. Especially, for those in non-Kiai parts, they are even larger than Kiai ones.
Call me back when you really fix those issues.
Another question is, do you get your metadata confirmed? If so, please provide eligible sources.
My concern still lies in the 1/2 jumps here and there in this map, they are too large. Especially, for those in non-Kiai parts, they are even larger than Kiai ones.
Call me back when you really fix those issues.
Topic Starter
metadata is here http://www.yasudarei.net/disco/archive/?SECL-1599
changed the bg to smth neutral..
and about jumps, ive already nerfed them but seems like not enough ;w;
guess its better to catch you in-game, cuz i dont really see which are too big
changed the bg to smth neutral..
and about jumps, ive already nerfed them but seems like not enough ;w;
guess its better to catch you in-game, cuz i dont really see which are too big
#1
heyo
00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing?
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1)
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo
call me back!!
00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing?
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1)
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo
call me back!!
Topic Starter
thank you for the mod!! :33Pentori wrote:
heyo
00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here well, i fixed it, but now it looks a bit odd, but maybe thats just me orz (pls take a look)
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing? ok
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding i think they're all right, because the spacing isnt too big and they are not really that long.. also, if i decrease their length, the only challenging part would be in the kiais, which will make jumps there look overdone, since they are the only one in the whole map.. so can i keep that if possible? ;;
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1) done
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo well, in this pattern 01:23:877 (5,6) - vocals 01:24:246 - are really strong and thats why theyre mapped.. here 02:42:934 - the vocals are not that strong at all, so i dont think i should emphasize them like i did in 01:24:246
call me back!!
i also 04:00:271 (3) - made this from 1/1 to 3/2 because it fits the vocals better imo - tell me what you think
with 00:28:795 (4) - can u try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/v7IsH/a880a49492.jpg ?
the reason it looks odd is because this is the only instance you have a circle after the 3/4 slider
the reason it looks odd is because this is the only instance you have a circle after the 3/4 slider
#2
i dont mind checking this but u need to find me on irc :d
edit: log
edit: log
SPOILER
00:42 Komore: hi kibb!! do you have some free time rn? 
00:46 Komore: w
00:46 Kibbleru: oh hey
00:49 Kibbleru: could add Rachel Rhodes to tags
00:49 Kibbleru: yasuda rei's english name
00:50 Kibbleru: 01:12:074 (3) - i think sliderpoint bugged out
00:51 Komore: u mean..?
00:52 Komore: oh i got it
00:52 Kibbleru: ya
00:52 Komore: lol
00:52 Komore: fixed and added her name in tags
00:55 Kibbleru: 02:16:746 (4,1) - overlapp ahh
00:56 Komore: fixdd
00:59 Kibbleru: 04:06:664 (2,5) - same i guess
01:00 Komore: ok, fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: 04:50:926 (6,3) - ^
01:01 Komore: aa
01:01 Komore: fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: ok thats good
01:01 Kibbleru: just update
01:02 Komore: updated
00:46 Komore: w
00:46 Kibbleru: oh hey
00:49 Kibbleru: could add Rachel Rhodes to tags
00:49 Kibbleru: yasuda rei's english name
00:50 Kibbleru: 01:12:074 (3) - i think sliderpoint bugged out
00:51 Komore: u mean..?
00:52 Komore: oh i got it
00:52 Kibbleru: ya
00:52 Komore: lol
00:52 Komore: fixed and added her name in tags
00:55 Kibbleru: 02:16:746 (4,1) - overlapp ahh
00:56 Komore: fixdd
00:59 Kibbleru: 04:06:664 (2,5) - same i guess
01:00 Komore: ok, fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: 04:50:926 (6,3) - ^
01:01 Komore: aa
01:01 Komore: fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: ok thats good
01:01 Kibbleru: just update
01:02 Komore: updated
wow, congrats!
Topic Starter
Hikan wrote:
gratz~
thanks :33Namki wrote:
wow, congrats!
Grats!
Good job!
wajinshu wrote:
Good job!
wajinshu wrote:
Good job!