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Yasuda Rei - Let It Snow
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heyo
00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing?
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1)
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo
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00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing?
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1)
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo
call me back!!
Topic Starter
thank you for the mod!! :33Pentori wrote:
heyo
00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here well, i fixed it, but now it looks a bit odd, but maybe thats just me orz (pls take a look)
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing? ok
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding i think they're all right, because the spacing isnt too big and they are not really that long.. also, if i decrease their length, the only challenging part would be in the kiais, which will make jumps there look overdone, since they are the only one in the whole map.. so can i keep that if possible? ;;
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1) done
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo well, in this pattern 01:23:877 (5,6) - vocals 01:24:246 - are really strong and thats why theyre mapped.. here 02:42:934 - the vocals are not that strong at all, so i dont think i should emphasize them like i did in 01:24:246
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i also 04:00:271 (3) - made this from 1/1 to 3/2 because it fits the vocals better imo - tell me what you think
with 00:28:795 (4) - can u try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/v7IsH/a880a49492.jpg ?
the reason it looks odd is because this is the only instance you have a circle after the 3/4 slider
the reason it looks odd is because this is the only instance you have a circle after the 3/4 slider
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i dont mind checking this but u need to find me on irc :d
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edit: log
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00:42 Komore: hi kibb!! do you have some free time rn? 
00:46 Komore: w
00:46 Kibbleru: oh hey
00:49 Kibbleru: could add Rachel Rhodes to tags
00:49 Kibbleru: yasuda rei's english name
00:50 Kibbleru: 01:12:074 (3) - i think sliderpoint bugged out
00:51 Komore: u mean..?
00:52 Komore: oh i got it
00:52 Kibbleru: ya
00:52 Komore: lol
00:52 Komore: fixed and added her name in tags
00:55 Kibbleru: 02:16:746 (4,1) - overlapp ahh
00:56 Komore: fixdd
00:59 Kibbleru: 04:06:664 (2,5) - same i guess
01:00 Komore: ok, fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: 04:50:926 (6,3) - ^
01:01 Komore: aa
01:01 Komore: fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: ok thats good
01:01 Kibbleru: just update
01:02 Komore: updated
00:46 Komore: w
00:46 Kibbleru: oh hey
00:49 Kibbleru: could add Rachel Rhodes to tags
00:49 Kibbleru: yasuda rei's english name
00:50 Kibbleru: 01:12:074 (3) - i think sliderpoint bugged out
00:51 Komore: u mean..?
00:52 Komore: oh i got it
00:52 Kibbleru: ya
00:52 Komore: lol
00:52 Komore: fixed and added her name in tags
00:55 Kibbleru: 02:16:746 (4,1) - overlapp ahh
00:56 Komore: fixdd
00:59 Kibbleru: 04:06:664 (2,5) - same i guess
01:00 Komore: ok, fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: 04:50:926 (6,3) - ^
01:01 Komore: aa
01:01 Komore: fixed
01:01 Kibbleru: ok thats good
01:01 Kibbleru: just update
01:02 Komore: updated
wow, congrats!
Topic Starter
Hikan wrote:
gratz~
thanks :33Namki wrote:
wow, congrats!
Grats! 
Good job!
wajinshu wrote:
Good job!
wajinshu wrote:
Good job!