The music is too cute!
Why did I skipped this one... And sorry for being late ;;w;;
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Overall]
- You might change HP on setting in Muzukashii to 5.5 to not let it too duplicated. Since currently HP5 is used in '3' difficulties. Muzukashii , Oni and Inner Oni
- On Kantan, 01:19:036 break time part. Maybe you should map this part at least with 4/1 pattern to make the note dense not too far away from Futsuu at this part. And even on the calmer part like 02:26:672 still have a note. So this part shouldn't be ignore hence. Yeah maybe youre right about the break, I did keep it very scarse though
- On Kantan again, the dominate vocal like 02:55:854 (3,4,5) - and many similar point - might consider to remove the finisher. 1/1 triplets finisher might be too hard for beginner. Welp, you're not the first one to say that, I'll ask around a bit more before I chance
- On Futsuu , Muzukashii , Oni and Inner Oni, 02:26:672 part is almost duplicated and not have any variance, I suggest to add more note on Oni and Inner Oni like follow more bg pitch to make a difference as it is Oni and Inner Oni. Such as 02:38:036 - 02:38:309 - 02:38:854 - 02:39:127 - 02:39:218 Oki yea I tried to improve the spread a bit here
- 01:53:127 - Too blank for every difficulty except Inner Oni. Maybe a spinner could help you to emphasize the flow of vocal. Or add some note here. No, I really like the quiet part before every chorus drop. To make the player spam spinners/sliders before them just unnecessarily steals focus in a much less significant spot
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Kantan]
00:10:309 - 00:21:218 - Might add a note here to follow the vocal 'zai zai zai' better. And it might create enjoyment while playing.
The resulting 4plets are too intense for Kantan imo01:16:581 - Spinner should end on 01:18:763 to fit to the trumpet sound precisely.
01:54:763 - Dominate pitch, add d here would be nice
02:25:309 - 8/1 is too boring here. Add k here to emphasize the pitch would be nice.
02:53:127 - Might delete this note, in other difficulty don't have a note here. (But it would be nice if you add a note here in Oni and Inner Oni)
03:16:581 - Might consider to make this one as spinner (and let it end on 03:18:490 -)since it's similar to 01:16:581
03:22:581 - Add a note here for the consistency of 03:21:490. And this will make 03:23:127 (53,54,55) become more dominate.
Rest good and applied[
Muzukashii]
00:12:490 - Change to k since it have a special pitch here.
Nope, doesn't sound special enough to me00:20:309 - I believe that this note isn't follow anything. Try to move to 00:20:399 to follow the vocal precisely.
The kats here are for the trumpet which keep the single upbeat rhythm going 01:48:490 (51,52,53,54) - Change to k k k d since it's resemble to 01:47:127 (46,47,48,49)
Oki[
Oni]
01:07:581 - Add k here would be nice, it resemble to 01:05:399
I'll think about it, I like my 2/1 breaks in 220 bpm Oni though.01:12:672 - Might add a note here since even Muzukashii have a note here.
Alrighty
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Inner Oni]
00:35:036 - 00:39:399 - Add a note here would be nice to follow the vocal better.
It's pretty awkward flow wise and not that significant next to the finisher sounds.00:36:036 - 00:36:127 - Add a note here to follow the drum sound.
Nah because they are 1/6 4plets if applied 'correctly'. It actually used to be so, but was dismissed fairly fast02:49:854 - and similar point like 02:50:945 - 02:52:036 - Should add a note here to follow the vocal and for the consistency of 02:49:490 (24,25) too.
According to above suggestion, you might want to remove a finisher on 02:49:763
I think the upbeat Finishers represent the vocals enough,
I'd like to keep the section as unique as the song is at this part and not do the same old doublet spam02:53:127 - Too blank for Inner Oni, please consider to add a note here.
Sure02:54:763 - Might change to d to make this vocal become dominate and for the ease while playing.
Oki03:05:851 - Delete this note to emphasize the vocal 03:05:672. And for the consistent on 03:06:673
Yeah thats good03:26:945 - Only my preference here, it might fit to d better imo.
YeppaYour Inner Oni can going harder than this since the music is 220 BPM. :3
Overall, a decent map! Good luck for ranking!